奔跑江城，分享感动——武汉专版2027届高三英语一轮分享信复习讲义

奔跑江城，分享感动 ——武汉专版高三一轮分享信复习讲义 一、考情透视与备考策略 （一）什么是分享信 分享信是向朋友讲述一次经历、一个作品或一段感受的应用文，核心是“记叙+感悟”。2024年真题向英国朋友Chris分享公园美术课的作品和感想。这类作文要叙事清晰、感悟真实，不能写成流水账。 （二）高考考情 2024年新高考全国Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷考查分享信：向英国朋友Chris分享一次公园美术课的作品内容和感想。分享信是近年新出现的体裁，与“经历叙述+个人感悟”结合紧密，需重点准备。 （三）评分标准（第五档13—15分） ① 覆盖所有内容要点 ② 应用较多语法结构和词汇 ③ 小错误为使用复杂结构所致 ④ 衔接紧凑 ⑤ 完全达到写作目的 （四）考查重点与失分点 【考查重点】叙事有细节、感悟有深度、时态正确（记叙过去时、感悟现在时）。 【失分重灾区】写成流水账没感悟；感悟喊口号（I learned a lot. 到底学到啥没说）；记叙和感悟时态搞混；细节太少显得空洞。 二、分享信写作四步法 Step 1 审题 圈出分享的对象、经历类型、要点数量。分享信以一般过去时记叙经历，一般现在时表达感悟，别混。 Step 2 构思（三段式） 开头：引出分享的话题/经历 → 主体：记叙经历（时间地点人物事件+细节）→ 结尾：感悟/收获 + 询问对方经历 Step 3 行文 记叙用过去时，加感官细节（看到什么、听到什么、感受到什么）；感悟用主语从句、强调句提升档次。 Step 4 检查（四查） 查叙事是否有细节→查感悟是否具体→查时态是否正确→查字数（70—100） 三、核心词块库（30个·基础版+升级版） （一）开头段：引出分享话题 【基础版·5个】 1. I'd like to share with you... 我想和你分享…… 2. I'm writing to tell you about... 我写信告诉你…… 3. I had an unforgettable experience yesterday. 昨天我有一次难忘的经历。 4. I can't wait to tell you... 我迫不及待想告诉你…… 5. You asked me about... and here is my story. 你问起……，这是我的经历。 【升级版·5个】 6. I couldn't wait to tell you about... 我迫不及待想告诉你…… 7. I'm still buzzing from... 我还因为……兴奋不已 8. What an experience it was! 多么难忘的经历啊！ 9. I thought you might enjoy hearing about... 我想你可能会喜欢听…… 10. It turned out to be... 结果是…… （二）主体段：记叙经历+细节 【基础版·5个】 11. Last week/Yesterday, I... 上周/昨天，我…… 12. When I arrived,... 当我到达时，…… 13. What impressed me most was... 给我印象最深的是…… 14. We spent... doing... 我们花了……做…… 15. It was amazing to see... 看到……太令人惊叹了 【升级版·5个】 16. What struck me most was that... 最让我触动的是…… 17. As I..., I couldn't help but... 当我……时，我忍不住…… 18. Surrounded by..., I felt... 被……环绕，我感到…… 19. Never had I... before this experience. 我以前从未…… 20. The atmosphere was... 气氛是…… （三）结尾段：感悟+互动 【基础版·5个】 21. I learned that... 我学到了…… 22. This experience taught me... 这次经历让我懂得…… 23. Have you ever had a similar experience? 你有过类似经历吗？ 24. I hope you can try it someday. 希望你有一天能试试。 25. Looking forward to hearing your story. 期待听到你的故事。 【升级版·5个】 26. It dawned on me that... 我突然意识到…… 27. This experience has not only... but also... 这次经历不仅……还…… 28. I came to realize that... 我逐渐意识到…… 29. Have you ever had a moment when...? 你有没有过……的时刻？ 30. I would highly recommend... to anyone who... 我强烈推荐……给那些……的人 （四）易错警示 ① 记叙用一般过去时，感悟用一般现在时，别混； ② 感悟要具体，别只写I learned a lot； ③ 细节描写用感官词（see/hear/feel），别干巴巴叙述； ④ It dawned on me that后接陈述语气，不用虚拟； ⑤ Never had I...是部分倒装，助动词had提前。 四、核心句型库（10个·通用例句+迁移+仿写） 句型1：I couldn't wait to tell you about...（迫不及待·开头） 【通用】I couldn't wait to tell you about the school trip we had last week. 我迫不及待想告诉你我们上周的学校旅行。 【迁移】I couldn't wait to tell you about the Wuhan Marathon I ran last Sunday—it turned out to be the most memorable experience of this year. 我迫不及待想告诉你我上周日跑的武汉马拉松——结果是今年最难忘的经历。 [仿写] I couldn't wait ______ (tell) you about the concert I attended last night. 句型2：What struck me most was that...（主语从句·感受） 【通用】What struck me most was the kindness of the local people. 最让我触动的是当地人的善良。 【迁移】What struck me most was the cheers from thousands of spectators along the Yangtze River Bridge, which pushed me to keep going when my legs were tired. 最让我触动的是长江大桥边数千名观众的欢呼，在我双腿疲惫时激励我继续前进。 [仿写] What ______ (strike) me most was the beauty of the East Lake at sunrise. 句型3：As I..., I couldn't help but...（时间状语+情不自禁·细节） 【通用】As I walked through the forest, I couldn't help but admire the tall trees. 当我走过森林时，我忍不住欣赏高大的树木。 【迁移】As I ran through the Yellow Crane Tower scenic area, I couldn't help but smile at the sound of traditional Wuhan music playing along the route. 当我跑过黄鹤楼景区时，听到沿途播放的武汉传统音乐，我忍不住笑了。 [仿写] As I ______ (walk) along the river, I couldn't help but take photos of the sunset. 句型4：Never had I... before this experience.（倒装·前所未有） 【通用】Never had I seen such a beautiful sunset before this trip. 这次旅行之前我从未见过如此美丽的日落。 【迁移】Never had I witnessed such energy and unity before—the whole city seemed to come alive with runners, volunteers, and cheering crowds. 我以前从未见过如此的活力和团结——整座城市似乎因为跑者、志愿者和欢呼的人群而活跃起来。 [仿写] Never ______ (have) I tasted such delicious food before this trip. 句型5：It dawned on me that...（突然意识到·感悟） 【通用】It dawned on me that happiness comes from simple things. 我突然意识到幸福来自简单的事物。 【迁移】It dawned on me that running a marathon is not about speed—it's about the journey, the people you meet, and the city that embraces you. 我突然意识到跑马拉松无关速度——而关乎旅程、你遇到的人，以及拥抱你的这座城市。 [仿写] It ______ (dawn) on me that the most important thing is to enjoy the process. 句型6：This experience has not only... but also...（并列·收获） 【通用】This experience has not only improved my English but also made me more confident. 这次经历不仅提高了我的英语，还让我更自信。 【迁移】This experience has not only made me physically stronger but also deepened my love for Wuhan, a city where ancient landmarks and modern energy coexist. 这次经历不仅让我身体更强壮，还加深了我对武汉的爱——一座古老地标与现代活力共存的城市。 [仿写] This experience has not only ______ (broad) my horizons but also made me more independent. 句型7：Surrounded by..., I felt...（过去分词作状语·感受） 【通用】Surrounded by beautiful mountains, I felt completely at peace. 被美丽的群山环绕，我感到非常平静。 【迁移】Surrounded by thousands of runners from all over the world, I felt a sense of belonging that I had never experienced before. 被来自世界各地的3万名跑者环绕，我感到一种从未体验过的归属感。 [仿写] ______ (surround) by cheering crowds, I felt a surge of energy. 句型8：It was not until... that I realized...（强调句·感悟时机） 【通用】It was not until I reached the top that I realized how beautiful the view was. 直到到达山顶我才意识到景色有多美。 【迁移】It was not until I crossed the finish line at Hankou Riverside Park that I realized what I had achieved—42.195 kilometers through the heart of Wuhan. 直到我冲过汉口江滩的终点线，我才意识到自己完成了什么——穿越武汉中心的42.195公里。 [仿写] It was not until I ______ (reach) the end that I realized how far I had come. 句型9：Have you ever had a moment when...?（反问·互动结尾） 【通用】Have you ever had a moment when you felt truly alive? 你有没有过感到真正活着的时刻？ 【迁移】Have you ever had a moment when the crowd's cheers and the city's beauty made everything else disappear? 你有没有过这样的时刻：人群的欢呼和城市的美让其他一切都消失了？ [仿写] Have you ever had a moment when you ______ (feel) truly proud of yourself? 句型10：I would highly recommend... to anyone who...（推荐·结尾） 【通用】I would highly recommend this book to anyone who loves history. 我强烈推荐这本书给喜欢历史的人。 【迁移】I would highly recommend the Wuhan Marathon to anyone who loves running and wants to experience a city that never gives up. 我强烈推荐武汉马拉松给那些热爱跑步、想体验一座永不言弃的城市的人。 [仿写] I would highly recommend ______ (visit) Wuhan to anyone who loves food and history. 五、小试牛刀·词句迁移训练 （一）词块填空 1. I couldn't wait ______ (tell) you about the race I ran last weekend. 2. What ______ (strike) me most was the enthusiasm of the volunteers. 3. As I ______ (run) through the park, I couldn't help but admire the scenery. 4. Never ______ (have) I seen such a large crowd before. 5. It ______ (dawn) on me that the journey matters more than the result. 6. This experience has not only ______ (make) me stronger but also more confident. 7. ______ (surround) by supporters, I felt a surge of energy. 8. It was not until I ______ (cross) the finish line that I realized what I had done. 9. I would highly recommend ______ (try) this experience to everyone. 10. Have you ever had a moment when you ______ (feel) truly alive? （二）句型仿写（武汉情境） 1. 用I couldn't wait to tell you about...开头：我迫不及待想告诉你我上周日跑的武汉马拉松。 2. 用What struck me most was that...写感受：最让我触动的是长江大桥边观众的欢呼。 3. 用It dawned on me that...写感悟：我突然意识到跑马拉松无关速度，而关乎旅程。 4. 用Never had I...写经历：我以前从未见过如此的活力和团结。 5. 用I would highly recommend...写结尾：我强烈推荐武汉马拉松给热爱跑步的人。 （三）单句翻译 1. 当我跑过黄鹤楼景区时，听到传统音乐我忍不住笑了。（As I..., I couldn't help but...） 2. 被三万名跑者环绕，我感到一种从未体验过的归属感。（Surrounded by...） 3. 直到冲过终点线我才意识到自己完成了42公里。（It was not until...that...） 4. 这次经历不仅让我身体更强壮，还加深了我对武汉的爱。（not only...but also...） 5. 你有没有过这样的时刻：人群的欢呼让一切疲惫都消失了？（Have you ever had a moment when...?） 六、实战写作·分层训练 任务A（中等层·模板导写）分享武汉马拉松经历 【题目】 假定你是李华，上周日你参加了武汉马拉松。请给你的英国朋友Chris写邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：①比赛过程 ②印象最深的部分 ③你的感悟。词数80左右。 【审题】体裁：分享信；人称：第一人称为主；时态：记叙用过去时、感悟用现在时；要点：过程→最深印象→感悟→询问对方 【填空模板·直接套用】 Dear ______, I couldn't wait to tell you about ______. It turned out to be ______. During the race, I ______. What struck me most was that ______. As I ______, I couldn't help but ______. It dawned on me that ______. This experience has not only ______ but also ______. Have you ever had a similar experience? Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文（中上版11—12分）】 Dear Chris, I couldn't wait to tell you about the Wuhan Marathon I ran last Sunday. It turned out to be the most unforgettable experience of this year. During the race, I ran past the Yellow Crane Tower and the Yangtze River Bridge. What struck me most was the cheers from thousands of spectators along the route. As I ran across the bridge, I couldn't help but smile at the beautiful view of the river. It dawned on me that running is not about speed but about never giving up. This experience has not only made me stronger but also taught me the importance of persistence. Have you ever run a marathon? Yours, Li Hua 任务B（高层·范文赏析与创新）分享武汉渡江节观赛经历 【题目】 假定你是李华，上周你和同学去长江边观看了武汉国际渡江节。请给你的英国朋友Chris写邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：①活动场景 ②印象最深的细节 ③你的感悟。词数80左右。 【审题】要点：场景描写→细节→感悟；高分策略：分词开头+主语从句表感受+倒装说前所未有+强调句说感悟时机 【参考范文（高级版13—14分）】 Dear Chris, I couldn't wait to tell you about the Wuhan International Yangtze River Crossing Festival I watched last Saturday—it turned out to be a truly eye-opening experience. Surrounded by thousands of cheering spectators on the riverbank, we watched as swimmers from all over the world dived into the Yangtze River. What struck me most was the determination on their faces as they battled the current—some were young, some were old, but none of them gave up. Never had I witnessed such a display of courage and unity in my life. It was not until the last swimmer reached the finish line that I realized what this event truly means: it celebrates the human spirit's ability to conquer nature. This experience has not only deepened my understanding of Wuhan's river culture but also inspired me to face my own challenges bravely. Have you ever watched an event that moved you this much? Yours, Li Hua 【亮点提炼·可迁移】 ① I couldn't wait to tell you about...it turned out to be...开头有感染力；② Surrounded by...过去分词作状语表场景；③ What struck me most was that...主语从句表感受；④ Never had I witnessed...倒装表前所未有；⑤ It was not until...that I realized...强调句说感悟时机；⑥ not only...but also...并列说收获。 任务C（巩固练习）分享武汉过早文化体验 【题目】 假定你是李华，上周你带交换生Peter体验了武汉“过早”文化。请给你的英国朋友Chris写邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：①去了哪里吃了什么 ②Peter的反应 ③你的感悟。词数80左右。 【参考范文】 Dear Chris, I couldn't wait to tell you about the morning I spent showing Peter around Hubu Alley for Wuhan's famous “guo zao” (breakfast) culture. We tried regan mian (hot dry noodles), doupi, and mianwo. What struck me most was Peter's reaction—he was initially confused by the mix of flavors, but after the first bite of hot dry noodles, his eyes lit up. As he wiped the sauce from his chin, he couldn't help but say it was the best breakfast he'd ever had. It dawned on me that food is the best way to share culture. This experience has not only brought us closer but also made me proud of our city's culinary heritage. You have to try it when you visit! Yours, Li Hua 【当堂写作】 中等层：用任务A填空模板完成一篇；高层：参考任务B亮点提炼，至少用3个高级表达完成一篇。80词左右。 七、答案与解析 （一）句型仿写答案 句型1【答案】to tell 【解析】can't wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事 句型2【答案】struck 【解析】What struck me most was that...中strike用过去式 句型3【答案】walked 【解析】As引导时间状语从句，叙述过去用过去式 句型4【答案】had 【解析】Never had I...部分倒装，助动词had提前 句型5【答案】dawned 【解析】It dawned on me that...用过去式 句型6【答案】broadened 【解析】has后接过去分词构成现在完成时 句型7【答案】Surrounded 【解析】过去分词作状语，表被动 句型8【答案】reached 【解析】It was not until...that...中用过去式 句型9【答案】felt 【解析】Have you ever had a moment when...中when从句用过去式 句型10【答案】visiting 【解析】recommend doing sth. 推荐做某事 （二）词块填空答案 1.【答案】to tell 【解析】can't wait to do sth. 2.【答案】struck 【解析】What struck me most was that...用过去式 3.【答案】ran 【解析】As引导时间状语从句，过去时 4.【答案】had 【解析】Never had I...部分倒装 5.【答案】dawned 【解析】It dawned on me that...用过去式 6.【答案】made 【解析】has后接过去分词 7.【答案】Surrounded 【解析】过去分词作状语 8.【答案】crossed 【解析】It was not until...that...用过去式 9.【答案】trying 【解析】recommend doing sth. 10.【答案】felt 【解析】when引导定语从句，过去时 （三）句型仿写参考答案 1. I couldn't wait to tell you about the Wuhan Marathon I ran last Sunday. 2. What struck me most was the cheers from spectators along the Yangtze River Bridge. 3. It dawned on me that running a marathon is not about speed but about the journey. 4. Never had I witnessed such energy and unity before. 5. I would highly recommend the Wuhan Marathon to anyone who loves running. （四）单句翻译参考答案 1. As I ran through the Yellow Crane Tower scenic area, I couldn't help but smile at the sound of traditional music. 2. Surrounded by thousands of runners, I felt a sense of belonging I had never experienced before. 3. It was not until I crossed the finish line that I realized I had completed 42 kilometers. 4. This experience has not only made me physically stronger but also deepened my love for Wuhan. 5. Have you ever had a moment when the crowd's cheers made all the tiredness disappear? —— 全文完 —— 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $