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2026-2027学年七年级英语上学期考点大通关(人教版2024)
Unit 6 A Day in the Life单元书面表达专练
1.参考范文:
My name is Zhou Xiaoting. I’m a school reporter. Today I want to tell you about my classmate Mike’s day.
Mike usually gets up at 6:45 in the morning. He has breakfast at about 7:00. Then he goes to school at 7:50. School begins at 8:00 and finishes at about 4:00 in the afternoon. Sometimes he plays basketball after school. In the evening, he does his homework and goes to bed at 9:30.
Mike has a busy but happy day!
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(英语报道),时态以一般现在时为主介绍日常作息,符合英文报道写作规范。
明确要点:①介绍Mike早上的作息(起床、吃早饭、上学);②介绍Mike白天的安排(上课、回家、打篮球);③介绍Mike晚上的安排(做作业、睡觉);
确定人称:以第一人称交代记者身份(I’m Zhou Xiaoting),以第三人称(He/Mike)介绍Mike的一天;
注意事项:满足词数要求(不少于60词),不得出现真实个人信息。
[第二步:构思布局]
采用三段式结构
开头段:交代记者身份及报道主题。
主体段:按照时间顺序,分点依次介绍早、中、晚三个时段的作息安排,逻辑清晰。
结尾段:总结Mike的一天。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:早上作息
时间与动作:gets up at 6:45 in the morning/has breakfast at about 7:00/goes to school at 7:50/get up early/have a quick breakfast/go to school by bike等。
要点二:白天安排
上课与课外活动:School begins at 8:00 and finishes at about 4:00 in the afternoon/plays basketball after school/start classes/be over/have lessons/play sports with friends/take part in after-school activities等。
要点三:晚上作息
晚间活动:does his homework and goes to bed at 9:30/do homework/read books for a while/go to sleep early/stay up late等。
要点四:整体评价
概括总结:a busy but happy day/What a meaningful day he has!/a healthy and colorful life等。
2.参考范文:
My School Day
I have a busy school day. I get up at 6:30 a.m. I go to school at 7:20. I have six classes every day at school.
After school, I play sports with my friends. When I get home, I do my homework first. I want to make good use of my time. I go to bed at 9:30 p.m.
My school day is busy but happy.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文(介绍校园日常生活),一般现在时
明确要点:题目My School Day;起床、上学时间;在校上课情况;放学后活动;如何用好自己的时间
确定人称:第一人称I
注意事项:词数不少于60词;语句通顺;不写真实姓名学校,七年级难度
[第二步:构思布局]
顺叙结构(按时间顺序)
开头:总述我的校园日很忙碌
主体:按时间线写起床上学、在校课堂、放学后的活动, 谈合理利用时间。
结尾:总结感受
[第三步:要点展开]
总起+起床上学:I have a busy school day./Every weekday I follow my regular daily plan. I get up at 6:30 a.m./I usually do some short morning exercises after getting up. I go to school at 7:20./I walk to school and enjoy the fresh morning air.等
在校上课情况:I have six classes every day at school./I listen carefully and take notes in each class.等
放学后活动:After school, I play sports with my friends./Playing ball games helps me relax after long‑time study. When I get home, I do my homework first./I try my best to finish school tasks before doing other things.等
用好时间以及结尾:I want to make good use of my time./I never waste time on useless short‑video games. I go to bed at 9:30 p.m./Enough sleep keeps me energetic for the next day. My school day is busy but happy./I enjoy my meaningful school life.等
3.例文
Dear Jane,
Thank you for writing to me. I want to tell you something about my life. I usually get up at six o’clock, and then I have breakfast. I go to school at half past seven. My school finishes at five o’clock in the afternoon. Then I play volleyball with my classmates after school. I go home at six o’clock in the afternoon. After dinner, I do my homework at seven o’clock. I go to bed at ten o’clock. Look! I have a healthy life, and I’m always happy.
Please write to me soon.
Zhang Mei
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:书信体介绍文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:按时间顺序描述日常活动(起床、上学、放学活动、回家、作业、睡觉)
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:邮件格式完整(称呼、正文、结束语),不得透露真实姓名(已用Zhang Mei)
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:感谢来信,总起介绍日常生活
主体段:按时间顺序依次描述各时段活动
结尾段:总结生活状态,期待回信
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:时间顺序表达
起床时间:get up at six o’clock/get up at 6:00 a.m./wake up at six等
上学时间:go to school at half past seven/leave for school at 7:30等
放学活动:play volleyball with my classmates/play sports等
回家时间:go home at six o’clock/arrive home/get back home等
作业时间:do my homework at seven o’clock/start doing homework/study at night等
睡觉时间:go to bed at ten o’clock/go to sleep at 10:00 p.m./get ready for bed等
要点二:生活状态总结
健康生活:have a healthy life/live a healthy life/keep a good routine等
心情描述:always happy/feel great/enjoy every day/find life meaningful等
4.参考范文:
Let me tell you about my school day.
I get up at half past six. Then I have breakfast at seven and go to school. We have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. I like English best. After school, I often play basketball. I get home at five. After dinner, I do my homework first. At ten, I go to bed.
I enjoy my school day!
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文(介绍上学日),以一般现在时为主
明确要点:介绍自己上学日一天的作息,包含起床、三餐上学、课程、喜爱科目、课后活动、晚间安排以及个人感受
确定人称:第一人称I
注意事项:按照时间顺序写作,语句通顺,词数符合要求
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:开门见山,引出话题,介绍要讲述自己的上学日
主体段:依照时间先后,依次描述全天作息安排
结尾段:总结感受,抒发对上学日的喜爱
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:早起与上学安排
早晨活动:get up at half past six/have breakfast at seven/go to school/get dressed/brush teeth等
要点二:在校学习安排
学校事务:four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon/like English best/listen to teachers carefully/play with my classmates等
要点三:放学后与晚间安排
其他安排:play basketball after school/get home at half past five/do homework/go to bed/watch TV/talk about school life with my parents等
要点四:结尾感想
感受:enjoy my school day/is colourful/take pride in my school等
5.参考范文:
My Uncle’s Routine
My uncle is a farmer. He lives in a small village. He gets up very early at 5:00 every morning. He has breakfast at 5:30. He goes to work in the fields at 6:00. He has lunch at 12:00. He gets home at 6:00 in the evening. He has dinner at 6:30. After dinner, he watches TV or talks with his family. He goes to bed at 9:30. He works very hard every day. I think farmers are very important. They grow food for us. I respect my uncle and all farmers.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文(介绍人物日常作息),全文介绍日常习惯,主要使用一般现在时
明确要点:①介绍叔叔身份与居住地点;②按照时间顺序写出叔叔一天的作息安排;③抒发自己的感悟,表达对农民的尊重
确定人称:第三人称(he)为主,文末使用第一人称(I)表达想法
注意事项:行文按照时间先后顺序,条理清晰;语句简洁,适合人物介绍类短文,逻辑连贯
[第二步:构思布局]
一段式结构:
开头段:总起,介绍叔叔的职业以及居住地点,引出下文
主体段:按照时间顺序,依次介绍叔叔一天从早到晚的作息安排
结尾段:表达个人观点,点明农民的重要性,抒发对叔叔和所有农民的敬意
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:基础信息介绍
a farmer/a small village/hard-working/kind and honest/a quiet small village with green trees around/look strong/always wears a smile
要点二:一天作息(时间线索)
get up at 5:00/have breakfast/go to work in the fields/have lunch/get home/have dinner/watch TV or talk with his family/go to bed/work very hard/wash his face/put on his working clothes/take some drinking water/look after crops/take a short rest/finish the farm work/share interesting stories/prepare for a new day
要点三:个人感悟与情感升华
very important/grow food for us/respect/play an important role/provide food for people/make a living by working in fields/look up to/learn from/stick to hard work/create a better life
6.参考范文:
Dear Bill,
How are you? I’d like to share my daily routine with you.
I usually get up at 6: 00 in the morning. At 6:15, I start to run in the park and do exercise for half an hour. At 6:45, I come back to take a shower and brush my teeth. Then I have my breakfast at 7:00. I go to school on foot at 7:15. About 30 minutes later, I get to my school. My classes begin at 8:00. I have lunch at 11:50 and then I have a break. My classes finish at 5:30 p.m. Around 6:00 p.m., I get home. From 6:30 p.m. to 9:30 p.m., I eat dinner and do my homework, and then watch TV for a while. I go to bed at 9:30 p.m.
I have a busy but happy day. What about you?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Liu Jun
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:电子邮件,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:按照表格时间顺序,完整介绍刘军一天的日常活动
确定人称:第一人称(I)
注意事项:控制词数,不得透露真实信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:礼貌引入,告知想要分享自己的日常生活
主体段:按照时间先后顺序,依次描述早间、在校、晚间各项活动
结尾段:向笔友提问,期待对方分享,自然收尾
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:开篇引入话题
分享:I’d like to share my daily routine with you./glad to tell you something about my daily life./share my busy but regular daily schedule with you等
要点二:描述各项活动
日常安排:get up at/start to run in the park/do exercise for half an hour/come back to take a shower and brush my teeth/have my breakfast/go to school on foot/About 30 minutes later/get to my school/ classes begin/have lunch/have a break/classes finish/get home/From 6:30 p.m. to 9:30 p.m./eat dinner and do my homework, and then watch TV for a while./go to bed/go running to keep healthy/go to school on foot/Lessons start at/School ends at/enjoy watching TV/every day等
要点三:邮件结尾互动
反问:have a busy but happy day/What about you?/tell me what your daily life is like?/How is your everyday life?/look forward to your reply等
7.参考范文:
My daily routine
I’m Wang Qian. I’d like to talk about my daily life.
I get up at 6:30 a.m. Then I brush my teeth and wash my face at 6:45 a.m. I have breakfast at 7:00 a.m. and go to school at 7:30 a.m. to start my day well.
In the evening, I do my homework at 6:30 p.m. From 8:00 p.m. to 9:00 p.m., I play tennis or listen to music. They help me relax. I take a shower at 9:30 p.m. and go to bed at 10:00 p.m. I have a busy but happy day.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性记叙文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:一日作息(各个时间、日常活动)
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,概括日常生活主题(题目已给出开头)
主体段:按时间顺序介绍全天作息活动
结尾段:总结感受,升华主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:晨间作息
时间选择:6:30a.m./6:45a.m./7:00a.m./7:30a.m.等
动作描述:get up/brush teeth and wash face/have breakfast/go to school等
作用效果:start my day well/keep healthy/make me energetic等
要点二:晚间作息
时间选择:6:30p.m./8:00p.m.–9:00p.m./9:30p.m./10:00p.m.等
动作描述:do homework/play tennis or listen to music/take a shower/go to bed等
作用效果:help me relax/finish my school work/have a good sleep等
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2026-2027学年七年级英语上学期考点大通关(人教版2024)
Unit 6 A Day in the Life单元书面表达专练
一、单元总主题(课标定位)
1.主题:Daily routines(日常作息 / 一天的生活) 归属新课标主题范畴:人与自我 → 生活与学习,子主题:时间管理、自我管理,养成健康规律的生活习惯
2.单元驱动问题:
What time do you do your daily activities? 你几点做日常活动?
How can we manage our time well? 我们如何管理好自己的时间?
二、教材写作任务(Section B 单元写作原题)
1.核心写作任务:Write about your school day. 写短文介绍你的上学日
2.写作本质:按时间顺序,用一般现在时描述习惯性日常活动
3.单元衍生作文考题(考试高频)
My School Day(教材原题,最重要)我的上学日
My Day / My Daily Routine 我的一天 / 我的日常生活
My Busy but Happy Day 忙碌却快乐的一天
My Mother’s / Father’s Day(拓展:描写他人作息,考察三单)
邮件写作:给笔友写邮件介绍你的上学日(中考常考应用文)
三、写作核心语言要素(作文必考点)
1. 时态:一般现在时(描述习惯性、经常性动作)
写自己:主语 I,动词原形
写别人(he/she):动词第三人称单数(作文高频扣分点)
2. 频度副词(加分词汇,放在实义动词前)
always 总是;usually 通常;often 经常;sometimes 有时;never 从不
3. 时间表达(单元重点语法)
顺读法:six thirty 6:30
逆读法:a quarter past seven(7:15);a quarter to eight(7:45)
介词:at + 具体时刻;in + morning/afternoon/evening
4. 核心话题短语(作文必用)
get up 起床;brush teeth 刷牙;take a shower 洗淋浴;get dressed 穿衣服 have breakfast/lunch/dinner 吃早 / 午 / 晚饭;go to school 去上学 have classes 上课;do homework 做作业;play sports 做运动;go to bed 上床睡觉
四、作文标准篇章结构(时间线索,三段式)
1.词数要求:不少于60 词
2.段落分布
第一段:开头引入(1–2 句)
介绍自己,引出主题:Tell readers you will talk about your school day. 例:I’m Li Hua. I have a busy school day. Let me tell you about it.
第二段:主体(文章主体,按时间顺序)
早晨:起床 → 洗漱 → 早餐 → 上学
在校:上午课程、午饭、下午课程
放学后:回家、运动、写作业
晚上:晚餐、阅读、睡觉
写作逻辑:时间先后顺序,用 then, after that 衔接句子,让文章连贯。
第三段:结尾评价(升华主题,1 句)
对一天简单评价,体现单元育人立意:busy but happy / I have a healthy life.
五、写作评分要点(阅卷踩分点)
1.时态统一:一般现在时,三单变形无误
2.时间表达准确,介词 at/in 使用正确
3.顺序清晰,使用连接词(then, after that)
4.覆盖主要日常活动,可少量合理发挥
5.词数达标,无真实校名、人名
六、作文审题注意事项(易错点)
1.不要写成某一天的过去事件,不能用过去式;本单元写习惯性日常,只用一般现在时。
2.题目如果是 My School Day:要写上学日,不要大量写周末活动。
3.描写他人(妈妈 / 朋友):所有谓语动词必须变三单,是本单元作文最大丢分点。
七、范文
My School Day
I’m Li Hua. I have a busy school day. I usually get up at six thirty. Then I brush my teeth and have breakfast. I go to school at seven fifteen. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. After school, I often play sports with my classmates. When I get home, I always do my homework first. I go to bed at nine o’clock. My day is busy but happy. I have a healthy life
8、 作文专练
1.假设你是校园小记者Zhou Xiaoting,你采访了同班同学Mike。请根据以下信息写一篇不少于60词的英文报道,介绍Mike的一天。
提示:
1. Mike通常早上6:45起床
2. 7:00左右吃早饭,然后7:50去上学
3. 上午8:00开始上课,下午4:00左右回家
4. 有时放学后打篮球
5. 晚上做作业,9:30上床睡觉
注意:
1. 内容完整,包含所有提示信息;
2. 使用一般现在时,注意第三人称单数变化;
3. 书写规范,词数不少于60词。
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2.请以My School Day为题写短文,介绍你的校园日常生活。
要点:
1. 起床、上学时间;
2. 在校上课情况;
3. 放学后的活动;
4. 简单说说怎样用好自己的时间。
要求:词数不少于60词;语句通顺;不写真实姓名学校。
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3.假如你是张梅,你的笔友Jane想了解你的日常生活。请根据下列提示,给她发一封字数不少60的邮件,告诉她有关你的情况。
张梅的日常
6:00 a.m.
起床
7:30 a.m.
去上学
5:00 p.m.
和同学一起打排球
6:00 p.m.
回到家
7:00 p.m.
写作业
10:00 p.m.
睡觉
Dear Jane,
Thank you for writing to me. _____________________________________________________
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Please write to me soon.
Zhang Mei
4.学校英语报正在举行以 “My Day” 为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据下面的提示,写一篇 60 词左右的英语短文,介绍你一天的作息安排。
提示:1. 早晨:几点起床、吃早餐、去上学;2. 白天:上课情况、喜欢的科目、课后活动;3. 晚上:做作业、睡觉时间及你的感受。
要求:使用一般现在时,语句通顺,语法正确,可适当发挥;文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
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5.假设你选择采访你的一位亲戚或朋友,了解他/她的日常工作。请根据以下提示,写一篇短文介绍他/她的日常作息。
内容提示:
1. 他/她的职业是什么?
2. 他/她每天几点起床、吃早餐、上班/开始工作;
3. 他/她午饭时间、下班时间、晚餐时间;
4. 他/她下班后做什么,几点睡觉;
5. 你对这份职业的看法。
要求:1. 不少于60词;2. 语句通顺,书写规范;3. 不得出现真实姓名、校名。
My _______’s Routine
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6.假如你是刘军,你的笔友比尔想了解你的日常生活。请你根据下表信息给他写一封电子邮件,说明你的日常安排。
My Daily Routine
Time
Activities
6:00 a.m.
get up
6:15 a.m.
run
6:45 a.m.
brush teeth; take a shower
7:00 a.m.
have breakfast at home
7:15 a.m.
go to school on foot
7:45 a.m.
get to school
8:00 a.m.
classes begin
11:50 a.m.
have lunch at school
5:30 p.m.
classes finish
6:00 p.m.
get home
6:30-9:30 p.m.
eat dinner; do homework; watch TV
9:30 p.m.
go to bed
写作要求:
(1)短文应包含所有要点,可以适当发挥;
(2)词数:60词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
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7.你平常是如何规划学习、玩耍和休息时间的呢?假如你是王倩,你班英语老师要求以“My daily routine”为题写一篇英语作文,请你根据以下提示,描述你的日常生活并完成这篇作文。
My daily routine
6:30 a.m.
6:45 a.m.
7:00 a.m.
7:30 a.m.
6:30 p.m.
8:00 p.m.–9:00 p.m.
9:30 p.m.
10:00 p.m.
起床
刷牙洗脸
吃早餐
去上学
写作业
打网球或者听音乐
洗澡
睡觉
要求:
1. 包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 不少于60词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My daily routine
I’m Wang Qian. I’d like to talk about my daily life.___________________________________
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