Unit 6 A Day in the Life单元书面表达专练-2026-2027学年七年级英语上学期考点大通关(人教版)

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2026-2027学年七年级英语上学期考点大通关(人教版2024) Unit 6 A Day in the Life单元书面表达专练 1.参考范文: My name is Zhou Xiaoting. I’m a school reporter. Today I want to tell you about my classmate Mike’s day. Mike usually gets up at 6:45 in the morning. He has breakfast at about 7:00. Then he goes to school at 7:50. School begins at 8:00 and finishes at about 4:00 in the afternoon. Sometimes he plays basketball after school. In the evening, he does his homework and goes to bed at 9:30. Mike has a busy but happy day! 【详解】[第一步:审题立意] 确定文体:应用文(英语报道),时态以一般现在时为主介绍日常作息,符合英文报道写作规范。 明确要点:①介绍Mike早上的作息(起床、吃早饭、上学);②介绍Mike白天的安排(上课、回家、打篮球);③介绍Mike晚上的安排(做作业、睡觉); 确定人称:以第一人称交代记者身份(I’m Zhou Xiaoting),以第三人称(He/Mike)介绍Mike的一天; 注意事项:满足词数要求(不少于60词),不得出现真实个人信息。 [第二步:构思布局] 采用三段式结构 开头段:交代记者身份及报道主题。 主体段:按照时间顺序,分点依次介绍早、中、晚三个时段的作息安排,逻辑清晰。 结尾段:总结Mike的一天。 [第三步:要点展开] 要点一:早上作息 时间与动作:gets up at 6:45 in the morning/has breakfast at about 7:00/goes to school at 7:50/get up early/have a quick breakfast/go to school by bike等。 要点二:白天安排 上课与课外活动:School begins at 8:00 and finishes at about 4:00 in the afternoon/plays basketball after school/start classes/be over/have lessons/play sports with friends/take part in after-school activities等。 要点三:晚上作息 晚间活动:does his homework and goes to bed at 9:30/do homework/read books for a while/go to sleep early/stay up late等。 要点四:整体评价 概括总结:a busy but happy day/What a meaningful day he has!/a healthy and colorful life等。 2.参考范文: My School Day I have a busy school day. I get up at 6:30 a.m. I go to school at 7:20. I have six classes every day at school. After school, I play sports with my friends. When I get home, I do my homework first. I want to make good use of my time. I go to bed at 9:30 p.m. My school day is busy but happy. 【详解】[第一步:审题立意] 确定文体:记叙文(介绍校园日常生活),一般现在时   明确要点:题目My School Day;起床、上学时间;在校上课情况;放学后活动;如何用好自己的时间 确定人称:第一人称I 注意事项:词数不少于60词;语句通顺;不写真实姓名学校,七年级难度 [第二步:构思布局] 顺叙结构(按时间顺序) 开头:总述我的校园日很忙碌 主体:按时间线写起床上学、在校课堂、放学后的活动, 谈合理利用时间。 结尾:总结感受 [第三步:要点展开] 总起+起床上学:I have a busy school day./Every weekday I follow my regular daily plan. I get up at 6:30 a.m./I usually do some short morning exercises after getting up. I go to school at 7:20./I walk to school and enjoy the fresh morning air.等 在校上课情况:I have six classes every day at school./I listen carefully and take notes in each class.等 放学后活动:After school, I play sports with my friends./Playing ball games helps me relax after long‑time study. When I get home, I do my homework first./I try my best to finish school tasks before doing other things.等 用好时间以及结尾:I want to make good use of my time./I never waste time on useless short‑video games. I go to bed at 9:30 p.m./Enough sleep keeps me energetic for the next day. My school day is busy but happy./I enjoy my meaningful school life.等 3.例文 Dear Jane, Thank you for writing to me. I want to tell you something about my life. I usually get up at six o’clock, and then I have breakfast. I go to school at half past seven. My school finishes at five o’clock in the afternoon. Then I play volleyball with my classmates after school. I go home at six o’clock in the afternoon. After dinner, I do my homework at seven o’clock. I go to bed at ten o’clock. Look! I have a healthy life, and I’m always happy. Please write to me soon. Zhang Mei 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步:审题立意] 确定文体:书信体介绍文,用一般现在时为主 明确要点:按时间顺序描述日常活动(起床、上学、放学活动、回家、作业、睡觉) 确定人称:第一人称(I/my) 注意事项:邮件格式完整(称呼、正文、结束语),不得透露真实姓名(已用Zhang Mei) [第二步:构思布局] 三段式结构: 开头段:感谢来信,总起介绍日常生活 主体段:按时间顺序依次描述各时段活动 结尾段:总结生活状态,期待回信 [第三步:要点展开] 要点一:时间顺序表达 起床时间:get up at six o’clock/get up at 6:00 a.m./wake up at six等 上学时间:go to school at half past seven/leave for school at 7:30等 放学活动:play volleyball with my classmates/play sports等 回家时间:go home at six o’clock/arrive home/get back home等 作业时间:do my homework at seven o’clock/start doing homework/study at night等 睡觉时间:go to bed at ten o’clock/go to sleep at 10:00 p.m./get ready for bed等 要点二:生活状态总结 健康生活:have a healthy life/live a healthy life/keep a good routine等 心情描述:always happy/feel great/enjoy every day/find life meaningful等 4.参考范文: Let me tell you about my school day. I get up at half past six. Then I have breakfast at seven and go to school. We have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. I like English best. After school, I often play basketball. I get home at five. After dinner, I do my homework first. At ten, I go to bed. I enjoy my school day! 【详解】[第一步:审题立意] 确定文体:记叙文(介绍上学日),以一般现在时为主 明确要点:介绍自己上学日一天的作息,包含起床、三餐上学、课程、喜爱科目、课后活动、晚间安排以及个人感受 确定人称:第一人称I 注意事项:按照时间顺序写作,语句通顺,词数符合要求 [第二步:构思布局] 三段式结构: 开头段:开门见山,引出话题,介绍要讲述自己的上学日 主体段:依照时间先后,依次描述全天作息安排 结尾段:总结感受,抒发对上学日的喜爱 [第三步:要点展开] 要点一:早起与上学安排 早晨活动:get up at half past six/have breakfast at seven/go to school/get dressed/brush teeth等 要点二:在校学习安排 学校事务:four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon/like English best/listen to teachers carefully/play with my classmates等 要点三:放学后与晚间安排 其他安排:play basketball after school/get home at half past five/do homework/go to bed/watch TV/talk about school life with my parents等 要点四:结尾感想 感受:enjoy my school day/is colourful/take pride in my school等 5.参考范文: My Uncle’s Routine My uncle is a farmer. He lives in a small village. He gets up very early at 5:00 every morning. He has breakfast at 5:30. He goes to work in the fields at 6:00. He has lunch at 12:00. He gets home at 6:00 in the evening. He has dinner at 6:30. After dinner, he watches TV or talks with his family. He goes to bed at 9:30. He works very hard every day. I think farmers are very important. They grow food for us. I respect my uncle and all farmers. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步:审题立意] 确定文体:记叙文(介绍人物日常作息),全文介绍日常习惯,主要使用一般现在时 明确要点:①介绍叔叔身份与居住地点;②按照时间顺序写出叔叔一天的作息安排;③抒发自己的感悟,表达对农民的尊重 确定人称:第三人称(he)为主,文末使用第一人称(I)表达想法 注意事项:行文按照时间先后顺序,条理清晰;语句简洁,适合人物介绍类短文,逻辑连贯 [第二步:构思布局] 一段式结构: 开头段:总起,介绍叔叔的职业以及居住地点,引出下文 主体段:按照时间顺序,依次介绍叔叔一天从早到晚的作息安排 结尾段:表达个人观点,点明农民的重要性,抒发对叔叔和所有农民的敬意 [第三步:要点展开] 要点一:基础信息介绍 a farmer/a small village/hard-working/kind and honest/a quiet small village with green trees around/look strong/always wears a smile 要点二:一天作息(时间线索) get up at 5:00/have breakfast/go to work in the fields/have lunch/get home/have dinner/watch TV or talk with his family/go to bed/work very hard/wash his face/put on his working clothes/take some drinking water/look after crops/take a short rest/finish the farm work/share interesting stories/prepare for a new day 要点三:个人感悟与情感升华 very important/grow food for us/respect/play an important role/provide food for people/make a living by working in fields/look up to/learn from/stick to hard work/create a better life 6.参考范文: Dear Bill, How are you? I’d like to share my daily routine with you. I usually get up at 6: 00 in the morning. At 6:15, I start to run in the park and do exercise for half an hour. At 6:45, I come back to take a shower and brush my teeth. Then I have my breakfast at 7:00. I go to school on foot at 7:15. About 30 minutes later, I get to my school. My classes begin at 8:00. I have lunch at 11:50 and then I have a break. My classes finish at 5:30 p.m. Around 6:00 p.m., I get home. From 6:30 p.m. to 9:30 p.m., I eat dinner and do my homework, and then watch TV for a while. I go to bed at 9:30 p.m. I have a busy but happy day. What about you? Best wishes! Yours, Liu Jun 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步:审题立意]   确定文体:电子邮件,以一般现在时为主 明确要点:按照表格时间顺序,完整介绍刘军一天的日常活动 确定人称:第一人称(I) 注意事项:控制词数,不得透露真实信息 [第二步:构思布局]   三段式结构: 开头段:礼貌引入,告知想要分享自己的日常生活 主体段:按照时间先后顺序,依次描述早间、在校、晚间各项活动 结尾段:向笔友提问,期待对方分享,自然收尾 [第三步:要点展开]   要点一:开篇引入话题 分享:I’d like to share my daily routine with you./glad to tell you something about my daily life./share my busy but regular daily schedule with you等 要点二:描述各项活动 日常安排:get up at/start to run in the park/do exercise for half an hour/come back to take a shower and brush my teeth/have my breakfast/go to school on foot/About 30 minutes later/get to my school/ classes begin/have lunch/have a break/classes finish/get home/From 6:30 p.m. to 9:30 p.m./eat dinner and do my homework, and then watch TV for a while./go to bed/go running to keep healthy/go to school on foot/Lessons start at/School ends at/enjoy watching TV/every day等 要点三:邮件结尾互动 反问:have a busy but happy day/What about you?/tell me what your daily life is like?/How is your everyday life?/look forward to your reply等 7.参考范文: My daily routine I’m Wang Qian. I’d like to talk about my daily life. I get up at 6:30 a.m. Then I brush my teeth and wash my face at 6:45 a.m. I have breakfast at 7:00 a.m. and go to school at 7:30 a.m. to start my day well. In the evening, I do my homework at 6:30 p.m. From 8:00 p.m. to 9:00 p.m., I play tennis or listen to music. They help me relax. I take a shower at 9:30 p.m. and go to bed at 10:00 p.m. I have a busy but happy day. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步:审题立意] 确定文体:介绍性记叙文,以一般现在时为主 明确要点:一日作息(各个时间、日常活动) 确定人称:第一人称(I/my) 注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步:构思布局] 三段式结构: 开头段:总起句,概括日常生活主题(题目已给出开头) 主体段:按时间顺序介绍全天作息活动 结尾段:总结感受,升华主题 [第三步:要点展开] 要点一:晨间作息 时间选择:6:30a.m./6:45a.m./7:00a.m./7:30a.m.等 动作描述:get up/brush teeth and wash face/have breakfast/go to school等 作用效果:start my day well/keep healthy/make me energetic等 要点二:晚间作息 时间选择:6:30p.m./8:00p.m.–9:00p.m./9:30p.m./10:00p.m.等 动作描述:do homework/play tennis or listen to music/take a shower/go to bed等 作用效果:help me relax/finish my school work/have a good sleep等 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $ 2026-2027学年七年级英语上学期考点大通关(人教版2024) Unit 6 A Day in the Life单元书面表达专练 一、单元总主题(课标定位) 1.主题:Daily routines(日常作息 / 一天的生活) 归属新课标主题范畴:人与自我 → 生活与学习,子主题:时间管理、自我管理,养成健康规律的生活习惯 2.单元驱动问题: What time do you do your daily activities? 你几点做日常活动? How can we manage our time well? 我们如何管理好自己的时间? 二、教材写作任务(Section B 单元写作原题) 1.核心写作任务:Write about your school day. 写短文介绍你的上学日 2.写作本质:按时间顺序,用一般现在时描述习惯性日常活动 3.单元衍生作文考题(考试高频) My School Day(教材原题,最重要)我的上学日 My Day / My Daily Routine 我的一天 / 我的日常生活 My Busy but Happy Day 忙碌却快乐的一天 My Mother’s / Father’s Day(拓展:描写他人作息,考察三单) 邮件写作:给笔友写邮件介绍你的上学日(中考常考应用文) 三、写作核心语言要素(作文必考点) 1. 时态:一般现在时(描述习惯性、经常性动作) 写自己:主语 I,动词原形 写别人(he/she):动词第三人称单数(作文高频扣分点) 2. 频度副词(加分词汇,放在实义动词前) always 总是;usually 通常;often 经常;sometimes 有时;never 从不 3. 时间表达(单元重点语法) 顺读法:six thirty 6:30 逆读法:a quarter past seven(7:15);a quarter to eight(7:45) 介词:at + 具体时刻;in + morning/afternoon/evening 4. 核心话题短语(作文必用) get up 起床;brush teeth 刷牙;take a shower 洗淋浴;get dressed 穿衣服 have breakfast/lunch/dinner 吃早 / 午 / 晚饭;go to school 去上学 have classes 上课;do homework 做作业;play sports 做运动;go to bed 上床睡觉 四、作文标准篇章结构(时间线索,三段式) 1.词数要求:不少于60 词 2.段落分布 第一段:开头引入(1–2 句) 介绍自己,引出主题:Tell readers you will talk about your school day. 例:I’m Li Hua. I have a busy school day. Let me tell you about it. 第二段:主体(文章主体,按时间顺序) 早晨:起床 → 洗漱 → 早餐 → 上学 在校:上午课程、午饭、下午课程 放学后:回家、运动、写作业 晚上:晚餐、阅读、睡觉 写作逻辑:时间先后顺序,用 then, after that 衔接句子,让文章连贯。 第三段:结尾评价(升华主题,1 句) 对一天简单评价,体现单元育人立意:busy but happy / I have a healthy life. 五、写作评分要点(阅卷踩分点) 1.时态统一:一般现在时,三单变形无误 2.时间表达准确,介词 at/in 使用正确 3.顺序清晰,使用连接词(then, after that) 4.覆盖主要日常活动,可少量合理发挥 5.词数达标,无真实校名、人名 六、作文审题注意事项(易错点) 1.不要写成某一天的过去事件,不能用过去式;本单元写习惯性日常,只用一般现在时。 2.题目如果是 My School Day:要写上学日,不要大量写周末活动。 3.描写他人(妈妈 / 朋友):所有谓语动词必须变三单,是本单元作文最大丢分点。 七、范文 My School Day I’m Li Hua. I have a busy school day. I usually get up at six thirty. Then I brush my teeth and have breakfast. I go to school at seven fifteen. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. After school, I often play sports with my classmates. When I get home, I always do my homework first. I go to bed at nine o’clock. My day is busy but happy. I have a healthy life 8、 作文专练 1.假设你是校园小记者Zhou Xiaoting,你采访了同班同学Mike。请根据以下信息写一篇不少于60词的英文报道,介绍Mike的一天。 提示: 1. Mike通常早上6:45起床 2. 7:00左右吃早饭,然后7:50去上学 3. 上午8:00开始上课,下午4:00左右回家 4. 有时放学后打篮球 5. 晚上做作业,9:30上床睡觉 注意: 1. 内容完整,包含所有提示信息; 2. 使用一般现在时,注意第三人称单数变化; 3. 书写规范,词数不少于60词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.请以My School Day为题写短文,介绍你的校园日常生活。 要点: 1. 起床、上学时间; 2. 在校上课情况; 3. 放学后的活动; 4. 简单说说怎样用好自己的时间。 要求:词数不少于60词;语句通顺;不写真实姓名学校。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.假如你是张梅,你的笔友Jane想了解你的日常生活。请根据下列提示,给她发一封字数不少60的邮件,告诉她有关你的情况。 张梅的日常 6:00 a.m. 起床 7:30 a.m. 去上学 5:00 p.m. 和同学一起打排球 6:00 p.m. 回到家 7:00 p.m. 写作业 10:00 p.m. 睡觉 Dear Jane, Thank you for writing to me. _____________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please write to me soon. Zhang Mei 4.学校英语报正在举行以 “My Day” 为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据下面的提示,写一篇 60 词左右的英语短文,介绍你一天的作息安排。 提示:1. 早晨:几点起床、吃早餐、去上学;2. 白天:上课情况、喜欢的科目、课后活动;3. 晚上:做作业、睡觉时间及你的感受。 要求:使用一般现在时,语句通顺,语法正确,可适当发挥;文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.假设你选择采访你的一位亲戚或朋友,了解他/她的日常工作。请根据以下提示,写一篇短文介绍他/她的日常作息。 内容提示: 1. 他/她的职业是什么? 2. 他/她每天几点起床、吃早餐、上班/开始工作; 3. 他/她午饭时间、下班时间、晚餐时间; 4. 他/她下班后做什么,几点睡觉; 5. 你对这份职业的看法。 要求:1. 不少于60词;2. 语句通顺,书写规范;3. 不得出现真实姓名、校名。 My _______’s Routine ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.假如你是刘军,你的笔友比尔想了解你的日常生活。请你根据下表信息给他写一封电子邮件,说明你的日常安排。 My Daily Routine Time Activities 6:00 a.m. get up 6:15 a.m. run 6:45 a.m. brush teeth; take a shower 7:00 a.m. have breakfast at home 7:15 a.m. go to school on foot 7:45 a.m. get to school 8:00 a.m. classes begin 11:50 a.m. have lunch at school 5:30 p.m. classes finish 6:00 p.m. get home 6:30-9:30 p.m. eat dinner; do homework; watch TV 9:30 p.m. go to bed 写作要求: (1)短文应包含所有要点,可以适当发挥; (2)词数:60词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; (3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.你平常是如何规划学习、玩耍和休息时间的呢?假如你是王倩,你班英语老师要求以“My daily routine”为题写一篇英语作文,请你根据以下提示,描述你的日常生活并完成这篇作文。 My daily routine 6:30 a.m. 6:45 a.m. 7:00 a.m. 7:30 a.m. 6:30 p.m. 8:00 p.m.–9:00 p.m. 9:30 p.m. 10:00 p.m. 起床 刷牙洗脸 吃早餐 去上学 写作业 打网球或者听音乐 洗澡 睡觉 要求: 1. 包含所给信息,可适当发挥; 2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范; 3. 不少于60词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 My daily routine I’m Wang Qian. 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