2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习----The Bear, the Dog and the Camping Night 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 　　The summer night was serene (宁静), with crickets singing and a gentle breeze rustling the trees around us. We had found the perfect camping spot, deep in the woods, far from the distractions of daily life. No Wi-Fi, no schedules-just our family, together. This was what camping was all about-unplugging, connecting, and making memories. 　　As the fire burned down, we crawled into our tent, the kids falling asleep almost instantly. Everything was perfect. 　　Until it wasn't. 　　In the middle of the night, I woke with a start (突然一惊), my heart pounding. Something was outside our tent. The sound was faint but persistent-soft footsteps, a shuffle here and there, followed by a pause. 　　I nudged my husband awake. Sighing, Dan reached for the flashlight and unzipped the tent. "Oh," he said softly. "It's just a dog." I scrambled out of the tent to take a look. A tan, short-haired dog stood at the edge of our campsite, pacing back and forth. His fur was dirty, and he looked underfed (营养不良的). 　　"Poor thing," I whispered. "He must be hungry." Dan grabbed some leftover hot dogs, offering one to the dog. To our surprise, the dog backed away, his eyes darting nervously toward the trees. 　　By now, the kids had woken up, and Tommy was beside himself with excitement. "A doggy!" he shouted, much too loud for the quiet night. 　　"Shh," I warned. "We don't want to scare him." 　　Sarah, our daughter, ever observant, tilted her head and said, "Something's wrong, Mom. Look, how scared he is." 　　She was right. The dog seemed torn between staying and fleeing, pacing anxiously, his tail tucked. Then we heard it-a heavy rustling coming from the trees behind us. The dog froze, his head snapping toward the sound, and a low growl rumbled from his throat (喉咙里发出低沉的咆哮声). His hair rose as he positioned himself between us and the forest. 　　注意：续写词数应为150左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。　　 Time slowed as a large bear emerged from the darkness. 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿_______ 　　We sat with the dog in the car, watching the bear leave. 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 一、文本分析 1. 角色 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 2. 视角 　　第＿＿＿人称 3. 时空线 　　On a serene summer night, our family camped deep in the woods, far from daily distractions---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- In the middle of the night, I woke with a start; something was outside the tent---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- Dan found it was a dirty, underfed tan dog; it backed away from food and paced anxiously, tail tucked---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- Sarah sensed something wrong, and we heard heavy rustling in the trees; the dog growled and positioned itself between us and the forest---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿---（续写）Time slowed as a large bear emerged from the darkness---（续写）We sat with the dog in the car, watching the bear leave 4. 细节问答 　　Where did the family camp?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　What woke me up in the middle of the night?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　What did the dog look like?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　How did the dog react to the hot dog?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　What did the dog do when it heard the rustling?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 5. 情节线 　　一家人在密林露营，夜半被持续声响惊醒→＿＿＿→只见瘦弱的黄褐色流浪狗，拒食、夹尾焦虑→＿＿＿→女儿Sarah察觉有异，狗竖起毛挡在我们与树林间→＿＿＿→我们听到树林沉重响动，狗低吼警觉→＿＿＿→（续写）一头大熊从黑暗中现身→（续写）我们与狗坐在车里，看着熊离开 6. 情感线 　　I: relaxed and content→＿＿＿＿＿＿→startled and worried→＿＿＿＿＿＿→alert and tense→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）；the dog: nervous and wary→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）；the children: excited and curious→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　英文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 8. 句式 　　宾语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　状语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　非谓语动词：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　并列句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　定语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 9. 本文主题 　　人与动物/警觉与守护类：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Time slowed as a large bear emerged from the darkness. 　　衔接句1——What did the dog and the family do when the bear appeared? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Paragraph 2: We sat with the dog in the car, watching the bear leave. 　　衔接句2——How did the night end, and what did the family feel about the dog? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：时间仿佛放慢，一头大熊从黑暗中现身。 　　→①＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→②＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→③＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿； 　　第二段：我们和狗坐在车里，看着熊离开。 　　→④＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑤＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑥＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿。 四. 段落续写 　　Time slowed as a large bear emerged from the darkness. 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿_______ 　　We sat with the dog in the car, watching the bear leave. 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1. 角色 　　I（叙事者/妈妈，负责安抚家人）；Dan（我的丈夫，冷静地查看并处理状况）；Tommy（年幼的儿子，兴奋好奇）；Sarah（细心的女儿，最先察觉不对劲）；the tan dog（瘦弱却警觉的流浪狗，守护一家人的"忠犬"）；a large bear（续写中出现的危险，被狗警示并驱离） 2. 视角 　　第一人称 3. 时空线 　　On a serene summer night, our family camped deep in the woods, far from daily distractions---In the middle of the night, I woke with a start; something was outside the tent---Dan found it was a dirty, underfed tan dog; it backed away from food and paced anxiously, tail tucked---Sarah sensed something wrong, and we heard heavy rustling in the trees; the dog growled and positioned itself between us and the forest---（续写）Time slowed as a large bear emerged from the darkness---（续写）We sat with the dog in the car, watching the bear leave 4. 细节问答 　　Where did the family camp?：Deep in the woods, far from the distractions of daily life. 　　What woke me up in the middle of the night?：A faint but persistent sound of soft footsteps outside the tent. 　　What did the dog look like?：Tan, short-haired, with dirty fur, and looked underfed. 　　How did the dog react to the hot dog?：It backed away, its eyes darting nervously toward the trees. 　　What did the dog do when it heard the rustling?：It froze, snapped its head toward the sound, growled, and positioned itself between us and the forest. 5. 情节线 　　一家人在密林露营，夜半被持续声响惊醒。只见瘦弱的黄褐色流浪狗，拒食、夹尾焦虑。女儿Sarah察觉有异，狗竖起毛挡在我们与树林间。我们听到树林沉重响动，狗低吼警觉。续写中，一头大熊从黑暗中现身；我们与狗坐在车里，看着熊离开，庆幸忠犬救下全家。 6. 情感线 　　I: relaxed and content→startled and worried→alert and tense→（续写）terrified yet grateful→（续写）relieved and thankful；the dog: nervous and wary→（续写）loyal and protective→（续写）peaceful and trusted；the children: excited and curious→（续写）frightened→（续写）safe and warm 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：一家人在密林露营，夜半被持续声响惊醒。瘦弱的黄褐色流浪狗拒食、夹尾焦虑，女儿Sarah察觉有异；狗竖起毛挡在我们与树林间。续写中，一头大熊从黑暗中现身，狗拼死守护，我们带狗钻进车里；看着熊离开，庆幸忠犬救下全家。 　　英文：On a serene summer night, our family camped deep in the woods but was startled awake by sounds outside the tent. A dirty, underfed tan dog refused food and paced anxiously, sensing danger. When we heard heavy rustling, the dog placed itself between us and the forest. In the continuation, a bear emerged; the dog guarded us fiercely, and we jumped into the car with it, grateful that the stray had saved us all. 8. 句式 　　宾语从句：I realized that the dog had saved our lives. 　　状语从句：As the bear approached, we held our breath. 　　非谓语动词：Seeing the bear, we froze in fear. 　　并列句：The dog barked, and the bear slowly backed away. 　　定语从句：The dog, which was brave and loyal, became our hero. 9. 本文主题 　　人与动物/警觉与守护类：有时最不起眼的生命却能凭警觉与忠诚守护我们；学会信任与感恩，困境中的人与动物之间会结成生死情谊。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Time slowed as a large bear emerged from the darkness. 　　衔接句1——What did the dog and the family do when the bear appeared? 　　The dog barked fiercely and stood its ground as the bear approached, while we grabbed the kids and backed toward the car. Paragraph 2: We sat with the dog in the car, watching the bear leave. 　　衔接句2——How did the night end, and what did the family feel about the dog? 　　The bear turned and left, and we held the trembling dog, overwhelmed with gratitude for its loyalty. 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：时间仿佛放慢，一头大熊从黑暗中现身。 　　→①大熊低吼着逼近，狗立刻挡在我们身前，毛发直竖、凶狠吠叫→②我拉过孩子、催促大家慢慢退向汽车，Dan护着车门→③狗毫不退缩，与大熊对峙，用气势把熊逼得止步不前； 　　第二段：我们和狗坐在车里，看着熊离开。 　　→④熊在原地逡巡片刻，终于转身没入森林→⑤车里的狗终于放下戒备，虚弱地趴下，孩子们紧紧抱着它→⑥我们心有余悸又满怀感恩，收留了这只流浪狗，明白正是它的警觉救了我们全家。 四. 段落续写 　　Time slowed as a large bear emerged from the darkness. It rose on its hind legs, letting out a low, rumbling growl. The dog did not flinch. With its hackles raised, it planted itself firmly before us and let out a furious, relentless bark. "Back to the car!" Dan hissed. I scooped up Sarah and grabbed Tommy, edging toward the vehicle as Dan shielded us. The bear took a heavy step forward, but the little dog stood its ground, snapping and snarling until the bear hesitated and paused its advance. 　　We sat with the dog in the car, watching the bear leave. After a long, tense moment, the bear snorted, turned, and lumbered back into the forest. Only then did the dog finally relax, slumping weakly against the seat, its tail beginning to wag. Tommy cradled it gently, whispering, "You saved us." We sat in silence, trembling and grateful, and I stroked the dusty fur, understanding at last that this stray had warned and protected us all night. We decided to take it home—our brave, loyal guardian. That summer night, a stranger in the woods became a member of our family. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $