Unit 6 Beyond Earth（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材人教版九年级上册

Unit 6 Beyond Earth 单元同步写作讲义 本单元教材写作情境为“介绍自己的太空梦想”,属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“宇宙探索”这一主题群,涉及子主题“地球与宇宙探秘”。围绕这一话题，本单元对应的写作话题为探讨个人太空梦想或中国航天事业。既可以从个人视角描绘对太空生活、星际旅行的憧憬，也可以从国家视角介绍中国在载人航天、探月等领域的突破与规划。描写个人梦想可围绕“梦想是什么、为何有此梦想、梦想实现的意义”展开；介绍我国航天成就可围绕“我国对太空的探索与成就，太空探索的困难和挑战，太空探索的影响、意义及未来”展开。写自己的太空梦想时，可用一般现在时和一般将来时；写我国对太空的探索与成就时，可用一般过去时和现在完成时，描述太空探索的困难和挑战、影响、意义及未来时，可用一般现在时和一般将来时。是九年级重点语法（被动语态）结合热点的高频写作题型。 【词汇积累】 词汇积累 1 / 20 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ① space n. 太空；宇宙 ② astronaut n. 航天员，宇航员 ③ rocket n. 火箭 ④ spacecraft n. 宇宙飞船 ⑤ launch v. & n. 发射 ⑥ exploration n. 探索 ⑦ universe n. 浩瀚宇宙 ⑧ station n. 空间站 ⑨ lunar adj. 月球的 ⑩ mission n. 航天任务 ⑪ carrier n. 运载器 ⑫ parachute n. 降落伞 ⑬ commercial adj. 商业的 ⑭ breakthrough n. 突破 ⑮ dream n. & v. 梦想；追梦 ⑯ courage n. 勇气 ⑰ develop v. 发展，研发 ⑱ unknown adj. 未知的 ⑲ talent n. 人才 ⑳ weightless adj. 失重的 短语积累 ① space exploration 太空探索 ② manned spaceship 载人飞船 ③ satellite launch center 卫星发射中心 ④ Long March rocket 长征系列火箭 ⑤ manned lunar landing 载人登月 ⑥ commercial space travel 商业太空旅行 ⑦ pass strict physical exams 通过严苛体检 ⑧ carry starry dreams 怀揣星辰梦想 ⑨ break through difficulties 克服重重难关 ⑩ build our own space station 自主建造空间站 ⑪ the Kármán Line 卡门线（太空边界） ⑫ return to Earth safely 安全返回地球 ⑬ make great breakthroughs 取得重大突破 ⑭ carry out space missions 执行航天任务 ⑮ push aerospace industry forward 推动航天产业发展 【句式积累】 开头句 ① I have dreamed of floating in space ever since I watched the rocket launch on TV. 自从在电视上观看火箭发射，我就一直梦想着能在太空失重漂浮。 ② China’s space program has achieved unbelievable progress in the past decades. 数十年间，中国航天事业取得了令人难以置信的发展。 ③ Have you ever imagined taking a trip to the moon and walking on its surface? 你是否想象过前往月球旅行，在月表漫步？ ④ I feel extremely proud of all the great achievements our space industry has made. 我为我国航天产业取得的所有辉煌成就倍感自豪。 ⑤ Today I will share my space dream as well as China’s space plans with you. 今天我将和大家分享我的太空梦想，以及中国的航天发展规划。 中间句 ① Shenzhou-23 carried three astronauts to space in 2026, including the first Hong Kong astronaut Li Jiaying. 2026 年神舟二十三号搭载三名航天员升空，其中包含首位香港航天员李嘉颖。 ② One astronaut will stay on the space station for a whole year to study space’s influence on human bodies. 一名航天员将驻留空间站一整年，研究太空环境对人体产生的影响。 ③ The Long March 2F rocket, nicknamed "Divine Arrow", keeps a perfect 100% success launch record. 昵称 “神箭” 的长征二号 F 火箭，保持着百分百圆满成功的发射纪录。 ④ China plans to finish manned lunar landing and deep moon exploration before the year 2030. 中国计划在 2030 年前完成载人登月，开展深度月球探测工作。 ⑤ Many famous people have booked seats on our country’s first commercial spaceflight. 众多知名人士已经预订了我国首次商业太空飞行的船票。 ⑥ To become an astronaut, people need long hard training and pass strict physical examinations. 想要成为航天员，需要长期艰苦训练，并且通过严格的体检。 ⑦ Every rocket launch carries all Chinese people’s wishes of exploring the endless stars. 每一次火箭升空，都承载着全体中国人探索无尽星辰的美好心愿。 ⑧ China’s space industry welcomes talents from every region of the country, showing great inclusiveness. 中国航天事业吸纳全国各地的优秀人才，拥有极强的包容性。 ⑨ After crossing the Kármán Line, the spacecraft will float in real space and come back with parachutes. 飞船飞越卡门线后进入真正的太空，之后依靠降落伞返回地球。 ⑩ My dream is to be an aerospace scientist and help our country unlock the secrets of the universe. 我的梦想是成为一名航天科学家，助力祖国解开宇宙深藏的奥秘。 结尾句 ① This wonderful space dream pushes me to study hard and face all difficulties bravely. 这份美好的太空梦想激励我刻苦学习，勇敢面对一切困难。 ② All space breakthroughs tell us that we can realize any dream as long as we keep trying. 所有航天突破都告诉我们：只要坚持不懈，任何梦想都能实现。 ③ I’m sure China will go deeper into space and finish more amazing space tasks in the future. 我坚信未来中国将迈向更深的太空，完成更多震撼的航天任务。 ④ As teenagers, we should hold starry dreams and prepare ourselves to join space exploration one day. 身为青少年，我们应当心怀星辰理想，做好准备未来投身太空探索事业。 ⑤ The universe is boundless and full of mysteries, and our journey to the stars has just started. 宇宙浩瀚无边、藏满奥秘，人类奔赴星辰的旅程才刚刚拉开序幕。 【名言积累】 1.Stars can’t shine without darkness.无黑暗,星星亦难闪耀。 2.To reach the stars,you have to reach beyond the clouds first.欲摘星辰,必先越过云层。 万能写作模板 段落 功能定位 写作要点 核心语法 & 重点句型（含被动语态） 参考英文句子 第一段开头点题 引出主题，开篇总起 简单写出太空的魅力；点明太空探索是人类长久追寻的梦想，快速切入话题 一般现在时主系表 Space is full of magic. Space exploration has always been the dream of human beings. It helps us know more about the universe. 第二段主体段（得分核心） 文章主体，大量使用被动语态 1. 太空探索的意义2. 未来将会被实现的太空科技（will be done 一般将来时被动）3. 我的太空梦想与个人探索计划 一般现在时 + 一般将来时被动 will be done核心被动句型：✅ …will be done✅ …will be invented / built / used✅ …will be sent into space Space exploration pushes science forward. More new space technology will be invented in the future. New space stations will be built. More astronauts will be sent into deep space. My dream is to be an astronaut. I will study hard to make my dream come true. 第三段结尾升华 总结 + 升华主旨 总结太空探索的价值；表达对航天未来的期待；抒发个人理想、奋进态度 一般现在时、一般将来时 I believe space exploration will keep moving forward. I will keep trying for my dream. We should keep exploring the unknown world bravely. （Unit 6 Section B 3c） 审题指导 1. 文体：说明文 2. 人称:第一人称 3. 时态:以一般将来时为主 教材写作品读 My Space Dream:Solar Energy for Earth My space dream is ①that one day a satellite will be built in space to collect the sun’s energy and send it to Earth.②It seems that this project could help us solve energy problems on Earth in an amazing way. First,scientists could ③do research on solar power in space,where sunlight is much stronger.④In that case,they might develop new ways to make clean energy for everyone. Second,once the satellite is built,it could send power to Earth all the time,even at night or on rainy days. This would mean cheaper and more reliable electricity for homes and schools. Third,I often look at the night sky and ⑤wonder whether one day this energy could help us reach farther into space.It seems that such a project would encourage more countries to work together for a greener future. I believe humans can achieve great things. I hope it will happen during my lifetime. 教材原句 ①【Section B 3a】My space dream is that one day a research station will be built on the moon. （表语从句和一般将来时的被动语态） ②【Section B 1b】It seems likely that one day we may reach the stars as people once dreamt.（It seems that…似乎……） ③【Section A 4b】This project will require students to do research on space exploration.（do research on 做……研究） ④【Section A 3a】In that case,a new home for us human beings will be needed.（in that case那样的 话） ⑤【Section B 1b】Since the beginning of human history,people have looked up at the stars and wondered what they were like.（wonder引导的宾语从句） 请以“My Space Dream:Searching for Life in the Solar System”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文。要求：语句通顺,逻辑清晰,可适当发挥。内容需包含： ①说明你为何对“在太阳系中寻找生命”最感兴趣； ②分点阐述这一探索可能带来的意义或影响； ③表达你对未来的期待。 【基础版】 My Space Dream:Searching for Life. .in the Solar System Searching for life in the solar system interests me the most of all the ideas of space exploration. It could change our views of ourselves and the universe. First,finding even tiny living things on Mars would show that Earth is not the only home for life. This discovery could inspire scientists to study life in difficult environments. Second,technology will also be used to improve life on Earth.Finally,this search would bring countries together. Working together in space could teach us to solve problems peacefully and protect our own planet. I dream of a day when we find answers to the ancient question:Are we alone?Whether the answer is yes or no,the journey itself will make people wiser. 【提升版】 My Space Dream:Searching for Life. .in the Solar System Among all the ideas of space exploration,searching for life in the solar system interests me the most. I believe it could change how we see ourselves and the universe. First,we may set foot on Mars and find even tiny living things there.It would show that Earth is not the only home for life. This discovery could inspire scientists to study how life survives in difficult environments. Second,technology developed for this search will also be used to improve life on Earth.For example,more and better tools might help us find new resources.Finally,this search would bring countries together. It could teach us to solve problems peacefully and protect our own planet better. I dream of a day when we find answers to the ancient question:Are we alone?No matter what the answer is,the journey itself will make people wiser. 对比维度 基础版 提升版 考点说明 核心句子 1 Searching for life in the solar system interests me the most of all the ideas of space exploration. It could change our views of ourselves and the universe. Among all the ideas of space exploration, searching for life in the solar system interests me the most. I believe it could change how we see ourselves and the universe. Among all…置于句首，调整语序避免头重脚轻；how we see ourselves宾语从句替换名词短语our views；增加 I believe，强化个人观点，丰富开篇表达 核心句子 2 This discovery could inspire scientists to study life in difficult environments. This discovery could inspire scientists to study how life survives in difficult environments. 宾语从句how life survives，补充 “生命如何存活”，表意更具体，增加文章深度；把简单名词拓展成从句，句式升级 核心句子 3 technology will also be used to improve life on Earth. technology developed for this search will also be used to improve life on Earth. For example, more and better tools might help us find new resources. will be used 一般将来时被动语态（本单元核心语法）；过去分词developed for this search作后置定语修饰 technology；增加举例拓展，论据更充实 逻辑过渡词 First / Second / Finally（基础序数词） First / Second / Finally + For example（举例过渡） 增加举例标识For example，丰富段落内部逻辑，不只是简单罗列，论证更饱满 结尾观点句 Whether the answer is yes or no, the journey itself will make people wiser. No matter what the answer is, the journey itself will make people wiser. No matter what引导让步状语从句，替换基础的 whether 句型，属于九年级高分复合句型 词汇 views of ourselves; difficult environments see ourselves; survives; set foot on; better set foot on踏上，地道书面短语；better副词修饰动词，用词更精准，词汇表达升级 句式特点 以简单句为主，句式单一 长短句结合，宾语从句、后置定语、让步状语从句多种复合句并用 初中英语作文提分关键：长短句结合，避免通篇简单句，提升文采 优点 要点齐全，句子简短，词汇简单，书写难度低，出错率小 运用多个九年级高分句型，衔接自然，细节丰富，文章层次感强，适合冲刺高分作文 提升版在保留原意基础上，做句式升级，不改变写作核心要点 不足 句式单调，缺少细节拓展，行文平淡，很难拿到高分 复合句较多，需要关注从句语序；长句书写要注意标点，容易出现笔误 写作训练中，要提醒学生注意复合句结构，规范书写 1．人因梦想而伟大，又因梦想而成长。假如你的梦想是当一名宇航员，请你根据以下表格提示，以“My Space Dream”为题写一篇英语短文。 My Space Dream When I was a little child make model planesvisit space museums watch cartoons about space From now on read more books about spacedo enough exercise study hard … 参考词汇：be curious about对……感到好奇 要求：1. 文中须包括所给要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 3. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Space Dream Everyone may have a dream. My dream is to be an astronaut. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Space Dream Everyone may have a dream. My dream is to be an astronaut. When I was a little child, I was curious about space. I was fond of making model planes and used to visit space museums with my parents. I also enjoyed watching cartoons about space, which brought me great fun. However, to be an astronaut is not easy. From now on, I will read more books about space science. I should do enough exercise to build myself up. It’s necessary for me to study hard and gain more knowledge. Being creative is important as well. In short, I will do what I can to make my dream come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”以及“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，回忆童年时期与太空梦想相关的经历； 第二步、阐述实现梦想的现实难度，进而列出未来努力计划； 第三步、书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①fond of喜欢 ②from now on从现在开始 ③come true实现 [高分句型] I also enjoyed watching cartoons about space, which brought me great fun. (which引导非限制性定语从句) 2．2022年4月16日，神舟十三号载人飞船返回舱在东风着陆场成功着陆后，三位航天员顺利出舱。作为两次登上太空，并在太空给大家进行授课的女航天员王亚平受到了不少学生的喜爱。你作为校园广播台的一名英语播报员，打算向全校介绍这名女航天员。 请根据以下信息，写一篇广播稿。词数不少于80个。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 1. 1980年1月出生于山东，毕业于北京大学（Beijing University）。 2. 从小就对天空感兴趣；经过一年的学习后，1998年首次驾驶飞机飞上蓝天； 3. 曾驾驶飞机去汶川救援，并于2010年成为航天员； 4. 2018年与其他航天员一起被授予“时代楷模”的称号。 5. 她工作努力，有毅力，不怕困难。 参考词汇：astronaut航天员；Model of the Times时代楷模；perseverant有毅力的 As a female astronaut who entered space twice, Wang Yaping ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 As a female astronaut who entered space twice, Wang Yaping was born in Shandong in January 1980 and graduated from Beijing University. She became interested in the sky when she was young. After a year of training, she flew a plane for the first time in 1998. She once flew to Wenchuan for rescue and became an astronaut in 2010. In 2018, she was awarded the title “Model of the Times” with other astronauts. She is hard-working, persevering and never afraid of difficulties. We should learn from her and try our best to realize our dreams. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇讲稿。 ② 时态：以一般过去时为主，叙述人物生平与经历；最后一段可用一般现在时总结人物品质。 ③ 提示：按时间顺序整合信息，结尾呼吁学习精神。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开头已给出，直接接续王亚平的基本信息（出生、毕业）。 第二步：按时间顺序描述她的经历（兴趣起源、飞行训练、救援、成为航天员、获奖）。 第三步：总结她的品质，并发出号召（学习她的精神）。 [亮点词汇] ① become interested in 对……感兴趣 ② be never afraid of 不怕…… ③ learn from 向……学习 [高分句型] ① She became interested in the sky when she was young.（时间状语从句） ② She once flew to Wenchuan for rescue and became an astronaut in 2010.（and连接并列谓语） 3．假设你是中国宇航员李华，正在中国太空站执行任务。联合国教科文组织邀请你与全球青少年视频连线，介绍你在太空站中一天的工作与生活，并分享你的感受。请你结合以下提示，写一篇英文发言稿。词数80词左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 4. 提示词语： experiment实验 Dear young friends, I am Li Hua, an astronaut from China. I am so glad to meet all of you here today. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【答案】例文 Dear young friends, I am Li Hua, an astronaut from China. I am so glad to meet all of you here today. Let me share my daily life on the space station. In the morning, I exercise with special machines to stay healthy. Eating in space is interesting! Our food comes in special bags, and we need to hold them tightly to avoid floating away. Sleeping here is fun, too. I sleep in a sleeping bag tied to the wall! During work hours, I do experiments and sometimes go for spacewalks. It feels like flying! After work, I read books or talk with my family through video calls. Though I miss the Earth, the view of stars outside is amazing. My life here is busy but meaningful. I feel proud to be part of this journey. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示信息写作，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示信息介绍在太空站的一天； 第三步，分享感受。 [亮点词汇] ①stay healthy保持健康 ②avoid doing sth.避免做某事 ③talk with和……交谈 [高分句型] ①Though I miss the Earth, the view of stars outside is amazing. (though引导的让步状语从句) 4．假定你是李华，你校英语报正在开展 “Big Dreams” 为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面表格中信息用英语写一篇短文投稿。(表格中所给信息仅供参考，考生可另写自己的dream job.) My dream job an astronaut … When I started to be interested at the age of 4 … What I do build model rockets, read books about astronauts, … … How my parents help me take me to science museums, … … My hope fly a rocket to the moon, … … 注意： (1) 短文须包括表格中所有要点，可适当增加细节； (2) 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； (3) 词数：80词左右(开头已给出，仅供参考，不计入总词数)。 I am Li Hua, a 14-year-old boy with a big dream. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 I am Li Hua, a 14-year-old boy with a big dream. I’m interested in space, and my dream job is to become an astronaut. My love for space started when I was just four years old. One day, my parents took me to watch a show in a science museum. I was deeply impressed by the exciting scenes at the show. From that day on, I started to dream of traveling to space. In my free time, I spend much time building model rockets and reading books about astronauts. I also watch shows about space with my friends. To help me, my parents often take me to different science museums. That makes me feel happier and work harder. I hope one day I will be able to fly a rocket to the moon. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 (考生可另写自己的dream job) [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出介绍自己的梦想； 第二步，具体阐述有这个梦想开始的时间，原因和如何为其实现而努力； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②take...to...带……到…… ③from that day on从那一天起 ④be able to能 [高分句型] ①My love for space started when I was just four years old. (when引导时间状语从句) ②I’m interested in space, and my dream job is to become an astronaut. (动词不定式作表语) 5．2023年9月21日下午，“天宫课堂”第四课开讲，神舟十六号宇航员们生动介绍了空间站梦天实验舱（Mengtian Lab Module）工作生活场景，并进行了太空科普授课。假如你是李华，你校英文报社开展了主题为“A Letter to Astronauts”的征文活动，请你根据下面图示信息，结合你对太空探索的看法，向校报投稿。 写作要求： 1.文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80-100（开头已给出，不计入总次数）。 Dear astronauts, How is everything going in space? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】范文： Dear astronauts, How is everything going in space? I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from Tongling. As one of your biggest fans, I’m writing to thank you for your wonderful class inside the Mengtian Lab Module on September 21, 2023. I’ve been interested in space since I was a little child. Thanks to the class, I’ve not only learned a lot about the Mengtian Lab Module, but also got some scientific information. I am so proud of our country’s achievements in space exploration that I decide to be an astronaut like you. I know it is difficult and will make lots of efforts, but I will try my best to make my dream come true. I believe one day I can also do something for our country like you! Wish you a successful mission and a comfortable journey! Sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，跟对方问候，介绍自己并指明写信的目的； 第二步，介绍自己在这次太空授课中的收获； 第三步，最后介绍自己的梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②Thanks to多亏 ③not only…but also不仅……而且 ④be proud of为……感到骄傲 ⑤try my best to do sth.尽我最大的努力 ⑥come true实现 [高分句型] ①I’ve been interested in space since I was a little child.（since引导的时间状语从句） ②I am so proud of our country’s achievements in space exploration that I decide to be an astronaut like you.（so…that引导的结果状语从句） ③I believe one day I can also do something for our country like you!（省略that的宾语从句） 6．你校为提高学生学习航天科技的兴趣，准备开展“少年宇航体验营”的活动。假如你是校报记者，请你根据以下的表格内容提示写一篇文章，向大家介绍这个活动，使同学们能够更好地了解它。 目的 让同学们更好地了解太空和宇航员。 内容 1.学习一些基本的太空科学知识； 2.与知名中国航天员对话； 3.学习如何穿宇航服，如何乘坐宇宙飞船，以及如何在没有重力的太空中生存。 对象和要求 1.所有全校学生； 2.要求参加者身体健康，身高（height）1.4米至1.8米之间。 要求： 1.内容须包括表格中的提示，可适当发挥； 2.词数80—120个，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Our school is going to start an activity called “Young Astronaut Training Camp”. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Our school is going to start an activity called “Young Astronaut Training Camp”. The purpose of this activity is to let students have a better understanding of space and astronauts. Through this activity, you can learn some basic space science knowledge. You can also talk with famous Chinese astronauts. Most importantly, you can learn how to wear spacesuits, how to ride spaceships, and how to survive in space without gravity. All students in the school can participate, but the participants are required to be healthy and between 1.4 meters and 1.8 meters tall. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍学校“少年宇航体验营”的活动。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明学校要举办“少年宇航体验营”的活动。； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“目的，内容、对象和要求”几个方面重点介绍。 [亮点词汇] ①have a better understanding of对……有了更好的了解 ②talk with与……交谈 ③Most importantly最重要的是 [高分句型] ①Most importantly, you can learn how to wear spacesuits, how to ride spaceships, and how to survive in space without gravity. （疑问词+不定式结构） ②All students in the school can participate, but the participants are required to be healthy and between 1.4 meters and 1.8 meters tall.（并列句） 7．最近你们学校开展了以“我的梦想”为主题的征文活动。请根据下面的提示，以“My dream”为主题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的梦想。要求：70词左石，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 梦想 做一名宇航员 (astronaut) 原因 1.  对太空的一切很感兴趣: 2.  想知道没有重力 (gravity) 的时候怎么生存 最想去的星球 月球 最想做的事 漫步月球；拍照 为实现梦想会做的努力 1.  多读有关太空的书； 2.  至少补充2点 My dream Hello, everyone! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I think as long as I work hard, I’ll realize my dream one day. 【答案】范文： My dream Hello, everyone! My dream is to be an astronaut. Why? Because I’m interested in everything in space. And I want to know how people live when there is no gravity. The planet I’d like to go to best is the Moon. If I get to the Moon one day, I’ll walk on it. I’ll also take many photos of it. In order to make my dream come true, I will read a lot of books about space and watch many films about space. I will also do exercises every day to keep healthy because I know it’s easier to get weak in space. I think as long as I work hard. I’ll realize my dream one day. 【详解】题干解读：题目要求以“My dream”为主题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的梦想；要求包含表格中所有的提示，并进行适当发挥。 写作指导：本文以一般将来时态为主，采用第一人称口吻。可采用4段落格式，第一段：开门见山，直接描述自己的梦想以及有这个梦想的原因；第二段：介绍最想去的星球和最想做的事；第三段：介绍为实现这个梦想，我该如何去做；第四段：总结全文，只要努力，梦想就会实现。 8．假如你是李华，你的梦想是登上太空。请你以“My Trip To Space”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，向校报投稿。 写作要点： 1. 你的太空梦想是什么； 2. 想象中太空的美丽景色； 3. 你在太空想做的事情； 4. 你的感悟与未来计划。 写作要求： 1. 词数100左右，误差不超过10词； 2. 包含全部写作要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实校名、人名。 My Trip To Space My biggest dream is to travel into space one day._______________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Trip To Space My biggest dream is to travel into space one day. I really want to explore the mysterious universe. If I fly into space, I will enjoy the amazing sights first. I can see our blue Earth and countless bright stars around it. It must be wonderful. I plan to take photos and do some simple space experiments there. I also hope to experience the fun of weightlessness floating freely in the spaceship. Space exploration is great. To make my dream come true, I will study all subjects hard and do sports every day. I believe my dream will come true in the future. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般将来时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：自身太空梦想；太空美丽景致；太空打算做的事；内心感悟与圆梦计划 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：不透露真实个人、学校信息，词数100左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明自己最大的梦想是遨游太空 主体段：分层描写太空绝美景色，再写自己在太空想要完成的事情 结尾段：抒发对太空探索的感悟，写明为圆梦付出的努力与未来规划 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：太空梦想 梦想表达：My biggest dream is to travel into space one day./I really want to explore the mysterious universe./I hope to fly to space and explore the universe.等 要点二：想象中的太空景色 景色描写：enjoy the amazing sights/blue Earth/countless bright stars/silent mysterious universe/shining planets等 要点三：在太空想做的事 行为：take photos/do some simple space experiments/experience the fun of weightlessness floating freely in the spaceship/look closely at the Earth/record my journey等 要点四：感悟与未来计划 感悟：Space exploration is great./Space exploration is meaningful and amazing.等 计划：study all subjects hard/do sports every day/keep doing daily exercise/learn space-related knowledge等 2 / 20 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 6 Beyond Earth 单元同步写作讲义 本单元教材写作情境为“介绍自己的太空梦想”,属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“宇宙探索”这一主题群,涉及子主题“地球与宇宙探秘”。围绕这一话题，本单元对应的写作话题为探讨个人太空梦想或中国航天事业。既可以从个人视角描绘对太空生活、星际旅行的憧憬，也可以从国家视角介绍中国在载人航天、探月等领域的突破与规划。描写个人梦想可围绕“梦想是什么、为何有此梦想、梦想实现的意义”展开；介绍我国航天成就可围绕“我国对太空的探索与成就，太空探索的困难和挑战，太空探索的影响、意义及未来”展开。写自己的太空梦想时，可用一般现在时和一般将来时；写我国对太空的探索与成就时，可用一般过去时和现在完成时，描述太空探索的困难和挑战、影响、意义及未来时，可用一般现在时和一般将来时。是九年级重点语法（被动语态）结合热点的高频写作题型。 【词汇积累】 词汇积累 1 / 14 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ① space n. 太空；宇宙 ② astronaut n. 航天员，宇航员 ③ rocket n. 火箭 ④ spacecraft n. 宇宙飞船 ⑤ launch v. & n. 发射 ⑥ exploration n. 探索 ⑦ universe n. 浩瀚宇宙 ⑧ station n. 空间站 ⑨ lunar adj. 月球的 ⑩ mission n. 航天任务 ⑪ carrier n. 运载器 ⑫ parachute n. 降落伞 ⑬ commercial adj. 商业的 ⑭ breakthrough n. 突破 ⑮ dream n. & v. 梦想；追梦 ⑯ courage n. 勇气 ⑰ develop v. 发展，研发 ⑱ unknown adj. 未知的 ⑲ talent n. 人才 ⑳ weightless adj. 失重的 短语积累 ① space exploration 太空探索 ② manned spaceship 载人飞船 ③ satellite launch center 卫星发射中心 ④ Long March rocket 长征系列火箭 ⑤ manned lunar landing 载人登月 ⑥ commercial space travel 商业太空旅行 ⑦ pass strict physical exams 通过严苛体检 ⑧ carry starry dreams 怀揣星辰梦想 ⑨ break through difficulties 克服重重难关 ⑩ build our own space station 自主建造空间站 ⑪ the Kármán Line 卡门线（太空边界） ⑫ return to Earth safely 安全返回地球 ⑬ make great breakthroughs 取得重大突破 ⑭ carry out space missions 执行航天任务 ⑮ push aerospace industry forward 推动航天产业发展 【句式积累】 开头句 ① I have dreamed of floating in space ever since I watched the rocket launch on TV. 自从在电视上观看火箭发射，我就一直梦想着能在太空失重漂浮。 ② China’s space program has achieved unbelievable progress in the past decades. 数十年间，中国航天事业取得了令人难以置信的发展。 ③ Have you ever imagined taking a trip to the moon and walking on its surface? 你是否想象过前往月球旅行，在月表漫步？ ④ I feel extremely proud of all the great achievements our space industry has made. 我为我国航天产业取得的所有辉煌成就倍感自豪。 ⑤ Today I will share my space dream as well as China’s space plans with you. 今天我将和大家分享我的太空梦想，以及中国的航天发展规划。 中间句 ① Shenzhou-23 carried three astronauts to space in 2026, including the first Hong Kong astronaut Li Jiaying. 2026 年神舟二十三号搭载三名航天员升空，其中包含首位香港航天员李嘉颖。 ② One astronaut will stay on the space station for a whole year to study space’s influence on human bodies. 一名航天员将驻留空间站一整年，研究太空环境对人体产生的影响。 ③ The Long March 2F rocket, nicknamed "Divine Arrow", keeps a perfect 100% success launch record. 昵称 “神箭” 的长征二号 F 火箭，保持着百分百圆满成功的发射纪录。 ④ China plans to finish manned lunar landing and deep moon exploration before the year 2030. 中国计划在 2030 年前完成载人登月，开展深度月球探测工作。 ⑤ Many famous people have booked seats on our country’s first commercial spaceflight. 众多知名人士已经预订了我国首次商业太空飞行的船票。 ⑥ To become an astronaut, people need long hard training and pass strict physical examinations. 想要成为航天员，需要长期艰苦训练，并且通过严格的体检。 ⑦ Every rocket launch carries all Chinese people’s wishes of exploring the endless stars. 每一次火箭升空，都承载着全体中国人探索无尽星辰的美好心愿。 ⑧ China’s space industry welcomes talents from every region of the country, showing great inclusiveness. 中国航天事业吸纳全国各地的优秀人才，拥有极强的包容性。 ⑨ After crossing the Kármán Line, the spacecraft will float in real space and come back with parachutes. 飞船飞越卡门线后进入真正的太空，之后依靠降落伞返回地球。 ⑩ My dream is to be an aerospace scientist and help our country unlock the secrets of the universe. 我的梦想是成为一名航天科学家，助力祖国解开宇宙深藏的奥秘。 结尾句 ① This wonderful space dream pushes me to study hard and face all difficulties bravely. 这份美好的太空梦想激励我刻苦学习，勇敢面对一切困难。 ② All space breakthroughs tell us that we can realize any dream as long as we keep trying. 所有航天突破都告诉我们：只要坚持不懈，任何梦想都能实现。 ③ I’m sure China will go deeper into space and finish more amazing space tasks in the future. 我坚信未来中国将迈向更深的太空，完成更多震撼的航天任务。 ④ As teenagers, we should hold starry dreams and prepare ourselves to join space exploration one day. 身为青少年，我们应当心怀星辰理想，做好准备未来投身太空探索事业。 ⑤ The universe is boundless and full of mysteries, and our journey to the stars has just started. 宇宙浩瀚无边、藏满奥秘，人类奔赴星辰的旅程才刚刚拉开序幕。 【名言积累】 1.Stars can’t shine without darkness.无黑暗,星星亦难闪耀。 2.To reach the stars,you have to reach beyond the clouds first.欲摘星辰,必先越过云层。 万能写作模板 段落 功能定位 写作要点 核心语法 & 重点句型（含被动语态） 参考英文句子 第一段开头点题 引出主题，开篇总起 简单写出太空的魅力；点明太空探索是人类长久追寻的梦想，快速切入话题 一般现在时主系表 Space is full of magic. Space exploration has always been the dream of human beings. It helps us know more about the universe. 第二段主体段（得分核心） 文章主体，大量使用被动语态 1. 太空探索的意义2. 未来将会被实现的太空科技（will be done 一般将来时被动）3. 我的太空梦想与个人探索计划 一般现在时 + 一般将来时被动 will be done核心被动句型：✅ …will be done✅ …will be invented / built / used✅ …will be sent into space Space exploration pushes science forward. More new space technology will be invented in the future. New space stations will be built. More astronauts will be sent into deep space. My dream is to be an astronaut. I will study hard to make my dream come true. 第三段结尾升华 总结 + 升华主旨 总结太空探索的价值；表达对航天未来的期待；抒发个人理想、奋进态度 一般现在时、一般将来时 I believe space exploration will keep moving forward. I will keep trying for my dream. We should keep exploring the unknown world bravely. （Unit 6 Section B 3c） 审题指导 1. 文体：说明文 2. 人称:第一人称 3. 时态:以一般将来时为主 教材写作品读 My Space Dream:Solar Energy for Earth My space dream is ①that one day a satellite will be built in space to collect the sun’s energy and send it to Earth.②It seems that this project could help us solve energy problems on Earth in an amazing way. First,scientists could ③do research on solar power in space,where sunlight is much stronger.④In that case,they might develop new ways to make clean energy for everyone. Second,once the satellite is built,it could send power to Earth all the time,even at night or on rainy days. This would mean cheaper and more reliable electricity for homes and schools. Third,I often look at the night sky and ⑤wonder whether one day this energy could help us reach farther into space.It seems that such a project would encourage more countries to work together for a greener future. I believe humans can achieve great things. I hope it will happen during my lifetime. 教材原句 ①【Section B 3a】My space dream is that one day a research station will be built on the moon. （表语从句和一般将来时的被动语态） ②【Section B 1b】It seems likely that one day we may reach the stars as people once dreamt.（It seems that…似乎……） ③【Section A 4b】This project will require students to do research on space exploration.（do research on 做……研究） ④【Section A 3a】In that case,a new home for us human beings will be needed.（in that case那样的 话） ⑤【Section B 1b】Since the beginning of human history,people have looked up at the stars and wondered what they were like.（wonder引导的宾语从句） 请以“My Space Dream:Searching for Life in the Solar System”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文。要求：语句通顺,逻辑清晰,可适当发挥。内容需包含： ①说明你为何对“在太阳系中寻找生命”最感兴趣； ②分点阐述这一探索可能带来的意义或影响； ③表达你对未来的期待。 【基础版】 My Space Dream:Searching for Life. .in the Solar System Searching for life in the solar system interests me the most of all the ideas of space exploration. It could change our views of ourselves and the universe. First,finding even tiny living things on Mars would show that Earth is not the only home for life. This discovery could inspire scientists to study life in difficult environments. Second,technology will also be used to improve life on Earth.Finally,this search would bring countries together. Working together in space could teach us to solve problems peacefully and protect our own planet. I dream of a day when we find answers to the ancient question:Are we alone?Whether the answer is yes or no,the journey itself will make people wiser. 【提升版】 My Space Dream:Searching for Life. .in the Solar System Among all the ideas of space exploration,searching for life in the solar system interests me the most. I believe it could change how we see ourselves and the universe. First,we may set foot on Mars and find even tiny living things there.It would show that Earth is not the only home for life. This discovery could inspire scientists to study how life survives in difficult environments. Second,technology developed for this search will also be used to improve life on Earth.For example,more and better tools might help us find new resources.Finally,this search would bring countries together. It could teach us to solve problems peacefully and protect our own planet better. I dream of a day when we find answers to the ancient question:Are we alone?No matter what the answer is,the journey itself will make people wiser. 对比维度 基础版 提升版 考点说明 核心句子 1 Searching for life in the solar system interests me the most of all the ideas of space exploration. It could change our views of ourselves and the universe. Among all the ideas of space exploration, searching for life in the solar system interests me the most. I believe it could change how we see ourselves and the universe. Among all…置于句首，调整语序避免头重脚轻；how we see ourselves宾语从句替换名词短语our views；增加 I believe，强化个人观点，丰富开篇表达 核心句子 2 This discovery could inspire scientists to study life in difficult environments. This discovery could inspire scientists to study how life survives in difficult environments. 宾语从句how life survives，补充 “生命如何存活”，表意更具体，增加文章深度；把简单名词拓展成从句，句式升级 核心句子 3 technology will also be used to improve life on Earth. technology developed for this search will also be used to improve life on Earth. For example, more and better tools might help us find new resources. will be used 一般将来时被动语态（本单元核心语法）；过去分词developed for this search作后置定语修饰 technology；增加举例拓展，论据更充实 逻辑过渡词 First / Second / Finally（基础序数词） First / Second / Finally + For example（举例过渡） 增加举例标识For example，丰富段落内部逻辑，不只是简单罗列，论证更饱满 结尾观点句 Whether the answer is yes or no, the journey itself will make people wiser. No matter what the answer is, the journey itself will make people wiser. No matter what引导让步状语从句，替换基础的 whether 句型，属于九年级高分复合句型 词汇 views of ourselves; difficult environments see ourselves; survives; set foot on; better set foot on踏上，地道书面短语；better副词修饰动词，用词更精准，词汇表达升级 句式特点 以简单句为主，句式单一 长短句结合，宾语从句、后置定语、让步状语从句多种复合句并用 初中英语作文提分关键：长短句结合，避免通篇简单句，提升文采 优点 要点齐全，句子简短，词汇简单，书写难度低，出错率小 运用多个九年级高分句型，衔接自然，细节丰富，文章层次感强，适合冲刺高分作文 提升版在保留原意基础上，做句式升级，不改变写作核心要点 不足 句式单调，缺少细节拓展，行文平淡，很难拿到高分 复合句较多，需要关注从句语序；长句书写要注意标点，容易出现笔误 写作训练中，要提醒学生注意复合句结构，规范书写 1．人因梦想而伟大，又因梦想而成长。假如你的梦想是当一名宇航员，请你根据以下表格提示，以“My Space Dream”为题写一篇英语短文。 My Space Dream When I was a little child make model planesvisit space museums watch cartoons about space From now on read more books about spacedo enough exercise study hard … 参考词汇：be curious about对……感到好奇 要求：1. 文中须包括所给要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 3. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Space Dream Everyone may have a dream. My dream is to be an astronaut. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．2022年4月16日，神舟十三号载人飞船返回舱在东风着陆场成功着陆后，三位航天员顺利出舱。作为两次登上太空，并在太空给大家进行授课的女航天员王亚平受到了不少学生的喜爱。你作为校园广播台的一名英语播报员，打算向全校介绍这名女航天员。 请根据以下信息，写一篇广播稿。词数不少于80个。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 1. 1980年1月出生于山东，毕业于北京大学（Beijing University）。 2. 从小就对天空感兴趣；经过一年的学习后，1998年首次驾驶飞机飞上蓝天； 3. 曾驾驶飞机去汶川救援，并于2010年成为航天员； 4. 2018年与其他航天员一起被授予“时代楷模”的称号。 5. 她工作努力，有毅力，不怕困难。 参考词汇：astronaut航天员；Model of the Times时代楷模；perseverant有毅力的 As a female astronaut who entered space twice, Wang Yaping ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假设你是中国宇航员李华，正在中国太空站执行任务。联合国教科文组织邀请你与全球青少年视频连线，介绍你在太空站中一天的工作与生活，并分享你的感受。请你结合以下提示，写一篇英文发言稿。词数80词左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 4. 提示词语： experiment实验 Dear young friends, I am Li Hua, an astronaut from China. I am so glad to meet all of you here today. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 4．假定你是李华，你校英语报正在开展 “Big Dreams” 为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面表格中信息用英语写一篇短文投稿。(表格中所给信息仅供参考，考生可另写自己的dream job.) My dream job an astronaut … When I started to be interested at the age of 4 … What I do build model rockets, read books about astronauts, … … How my parents help me take me to science museums, … … My hope fly a rocket to the moon, … … 注意： (1) 短文须包括表格中所有要点，可适当增加细节； (2) 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； (3) 词数：80词左右(开头已给出，仅供参考，不计入总词数)。 I am Li Hua, a 14-year-old boy with a big dream. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．2023年9月21日下午，“天宫课堂”第四课开讲，神舟十六号宇航员们生动介绍了空间站梦天实验舱（Mengtian Lab Module）工作生活场景，并进行了太空科普授课。假如你是李华，你校英文报社开展了主题为“A Letter to Astronauts”的征文活动，请你根据下面图示信息，结合你对太空探索的看法，向校报投稿。 写作要求： 1.文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80-100（开头已给出，不计入总次数）。 Dear astronauts, How is everything going in space? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua 6．你校为提高学生学习航天科技的兴趣，准备开展“少年宇航体验营”的活动。假如你是校报记者，请你根据以下的表格内容提示写一篇文章，向大家介绍这个活动，使同学们能够更好地了解它。 目的 让同学们更好地了解太空和宇航员。 内容 1.学习一些基本的太空科学知识； 2.与知名中国航天员对话； 3.学习如何穿宇航服，如何乘坐宇宙飞船，以及如何在没有重力的太空中生存。 对象和要求 1.所有全校学生； 2.要求参加者身体健康，身高（height）1.4米至1.8米之间。 要求： 1.内容须包括表格中的提示，可适当发挥； 2.词数80—120个，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Our school is going to start an activity called “Young Astronaut Training Camp”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．最近你们学校开展了以“我的梦想”为主题的征文活动。请根据下面的提示，以“My dream”为主题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的梦想。要求：70词左石，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 梦想 做一名宇航员 (astronaut) 原因 1.  对太空的一切很感兴趣: 2.  想知道没有重力 (gravity) 的时候怎么生存 最想去的星球 月球 最想做的事 漫步月球；拍照 为实现梦想会做的努力 1.  多读有关太空的书； 2.  至少补充2点 My dream Hello, everyone! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I think as long as I work hard, I’ll realize my dream one day. 8．假如你是李华，你的梦想是登上太空。请你以“My Trip To Space”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，向校报投稿。 写作要点： 1. 你的太空梦想是什么； 2. 想象中太空的美丽景色； 3. 你在太空想做的事情； 4. 你的感悟与未来计划。 写作要求： 1. 词数100左右，误差不超过10词； 2. 包含全部写作要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实校名、人名。 My Trip To Space My biggest dream is to travel into space one day._______________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 / 14 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $