2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习---赤脚者 导学案

　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Summers in Arizona are extremely hot, with temperatures often over 115 degrees Fahrenheit. The pavement becomes dangerously hot, making it a painful time for the homeless. 　　One day, John Linton was waiting at a stoplight when his attention was caught by a barefoot man. The man, David, was unsteadily crossing the street. With every step, the burning ground made him cry in pain. John's heart sank as he watched David quickly run to a small pool to cool his burning feet. Without hesitation, John immediately made a U-turn and found David sitting by the pool. John introduced himself and asked, "You haven't any shoes! Can I help?" David explained in a weak voice that he had been homeless for nearly two years and his shoes had worn out. 　　John asked David to wait for him while he drove to a nearby store. He returned shortly with a new pair of shoes, socks, shorts and a shirt. Thankfully, David was still there. After changing into his new clothes and shoes, the two shared a meal and a warm conversation. 　　While most people find the heat challenging for even a short time, enduring it without shelter is unimaginable. John's simple act of kindness showed David that he was not invisible. This small gesture, which took only a few minutes and a few dollars, made a lasting difference to a man who had felt forgotten. David felt deeply grateful for this unexpected encounter. 　　注意：续写词数应为150左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。　　 　 Before saying goodbye, John left his phone number to David. 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　Several months later, John received a call from David. 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 一、文本分析 1. 角色 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 2. 视角 　　第＿＿＿人称 3. 时空线 　　Summers in Arizona are extremely hot, and the hot pavement makes it painful for the homeless---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- One day, John noticed a barefoot man named David crossing the street in pain and running to a pool to cool his feet; John made a U-turn to help---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- John bought David new shoes, socks, shorts and a shirt; they shared a meal and warm conversation---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- John's small act of kindness showed David he was not invisible, and David felt deeply grateful---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿---（续写）Before saying goodbye, John left his phone number to David---（续写）Several months later, John received a call from David 4. 细节问答 　　Why is summer painful for the homeless in Arizona?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　What did John notice one day at a stoplight?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　Why was David walking barefoot?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　What did John buy for David?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　What did John's act of kindness show David?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 5. 情节线 　　亚利桑那酷暑，人行道烫得危险，对流浪汉尤为难熬→＿＿＿→John见赤脚的David疼得奔向水池，毫不犹豫掉头，为他买来鞋袜衣裤，共进一餐温暖交谈→＿＿＿→这份小善意让David明白自己并非隐形，满怀感激→＿＿＿→（续写）临别时John留下电话→（续写）几个月后David打来电话，他重拾信心、找到工作与住所，专程致谢 6. 情感线 　　John: moved and compassionate→＿＿＿＿＿＿→warm and fulfilled→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）；David: pained and forgotten→＿＿＿＿＿＿→grateful and hopeful→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　英文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 8. 句式 　　宾语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　状语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　非谓语动词：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　并列句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　定语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 9. 本文主题 　　善良与互助类：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Before saying goodbye, John left his phone number to David. 　　衔接句1——What did David do with the phone number, and what happened? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Paragraph 2: Several months later, John received a call from David. 　　衔接句2——What did David tell John, and how did they feel? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：临别前，John把自己的电话号码留给了David。 　　→①＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→②＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→③＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿； 　　第二段：几个月后，John接到了David的电话。 　　→④＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑤＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑥＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿。 四. 段落续写 　　Before saying goodbye, John left his phone number to David. 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　Several months later, John received a call from David. 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1. 角色 　　John Linton（善良的路人，看到赤脚的流浪汉便毫不犹豫地出手相助、给予衣鞋并留下电话）；David（流落街头近两年的无家可归者，鞋子磨坏、在酷暑中痛苦挣扎，因John的善意而重燃希望）；（无其他主要角色） 2. 视角 　　第三人称 3. 时空线 　　Summers in Arizona are extremely hot, and the hot pavement makes it painful for the homeless---One day, John noticed a barefoot man named David crossing the street in pain and running to a pool to cool his feet; John made a U-turn to help---John bought David new shoes, socks, shorts and a shirt; they shared a meal and warm conversation---John's small act of kindness showed David he was not invisible, and David felt deeply grateful---（续写）Before saying goodbye, John left his phone number to David---（续写）Several months later, John received a call from David 4. 细节问答 　　Why is summer painful for the homeless in Arizona?：The temperatures often exceed 115 degrees, and the pavement becomes dangerously hot. 　　What did John notice one day at a stoplight?：A barefoot man named David crossing the street in pain. 　　Why was David walking barefoot?：He had been homeless for nearly two years and his shoes had worn out. 　　What did John buy for David?：A new pair of shoes, socks, shorts and a shirt. 　　What did John's act of kindness show David?：That he was not invisible and not forgotten. 5. 情节线 　　亚利桑那酷暑，人行道烫得危险，对流浪汉尤为难熬。John见赤脚的David疼得奔向水池，毫不犹豫掉头，为他买来鞋袜衣裤，共进一餐温暖交谈。这份小善意让David明白自己并非隐形，满怀感激。续写中，临别时John留下电话；几个月后David打来电话，他重拾信心、找到工作与住所，专程致谢，John为小小举动改变一生而感动。 6. 情感线 　　John: moved and compassionate→warm and fulfilled→（续写）surprised and joyful→（续写）proud and moved；David: pained and forgotten→grateful and hopeful→（续写）better and appreciative 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：亚利桑那酷暑，人行道烫得危险，对流浪汉尤为难熬。John见赤脚的David疼得奔向水池，毫不犹豫掉头，为他买来鞋袜衣裤，共进一餐温暖交谈。这份小善意让David明白自己并非隐形，满怀感激。续写中，临别时John留下电话；几个月后David打来电话，他重拾信心、找到工作与住所，专程致谢，John为小小举动改变一生而感动。 　　英文：Summers in Arizona are scorching, and barefoot David struggled in pain on the hot pavement. Seeing him, John made a U-turn without hesitation, bought him shoes, socks, shorts and a shirt, and they shared a meal and warm talk. This small kindness showed David he was not invisible, filling him with gratitude. In the continuation, John left his number; months later David called, having found a job and a home, and John was moved that a small act had changed a life. 8. 句式 　　宾语从句：David realized that he was not forgotten. 　　状语从句：When he saw David, John stopped at once. 　　非谓语动词：Seeing his pain, John decided to help. 　　并列句：He bought the shoes, and he drove back quickly. 　　定语从句：The kindness, which was small, changed a life. 9. 本文主题 　　善良与互助类：一份小小的、不求回报的善意，能让被遗忘的人重拾尊严与希望，并产生持久而深远的影响。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Before saying goodbye, John left his phone number to David. 　　衔接句1——What did David do with the phone number, and what happened? 　　David gratefully kept the number, and months later he used it to call John with good news. Paragraph 2: Several months later, John received a call from David. 　　衔接句2——What did David tell John, and how did they feel? 　　David told John he had found a job and a home, and thanked him warmly; John was deeply moved. 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：临别前，John把自己的电话号码留给了David。 　　→①David接过号码，眼里闪着泪光，再三道谢，说这是许久以来第一次有人真心在乎他→②John叮嘱他有困难随时可以打来，还握了握他的手→③David郑重收起号码，望着John离去的背影，心中重新燃起希望； 　　第二段：几个月后，John接到了David的电话。 　　→④电话那头David的声音难掩激动，说他找到了工作、租到了小屋→⑤他说是那天的一双鞋和那句"你并不隐形"让他重新振作，专程来道谢→⑥John听完既惊喜又感动，明白小小善意真的能改变一个人的人生。 四. 段落续写 　　Before saying goodbye, John left his phone number to David. David's eyes glistened as he carefully folded the slip of paper. "For the first time in a long while, someone truly cares," he said, his voice thick with emotion. John smiled and patted his shoulder. "You can call me anytime," he said. David nodded, clutching the number as if it were a treasure. Watching John drive away, he felt a faint warmth stirring in his chest—a flicker of hope he had almost forgotten. 　　Several months later, John received a call from David. His voice trembled with excitement. "John, I found a job! I even rent a small room now," David said. He told John how that pair of shoes and the kind words had rekindled his courage, helping him believe in himself again. Listening, John felt a lump in his throat. "I'm so proud of you, David," he said. As he hung up, John realized that a few minutes and a few dollars, given with a sincere heart, could truly turn a forgotten man's life around—and that was the most rewarding thing of all. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $