Unit 3 Section Ⅴ Writing(Word学生用书)-【学霸笔记·同步精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册(人教版)
2026-10-14
|
8页
|
5人阅读
|
0人下载
教辅
摘要:
该高中英语导学案聚焦应用文写作(健康报告)与读后续写微场景训练,通过文体特征解析、基本框架梳理(开头/主体/结尾)及佳句积累导入,结合填空式写作步骤(合理布局、遣词造句等)和微场景情境练习,搭建从知识输入到技能输出的学习支架。
资料以结构化写作框架和情境化训练为特色,提供“问题-解决-建议”逻辑链及微场景填空练习,助力学生提升语言表达准确性(语言能力),培养逻辑思维与情境分析能力(思维品质),同时通过答案对照引导自主学习策略(学习能力),有效提升书面表达与续写技能。
内容正文:
Section Ⅴ Writing
写作一 应用文写作——健康报告
本单元的写作任务是写一篇健康报告,使用恰当的描述性语言,准确地表达出自己或他人过去及现在的健康状况。
一、文体特征
健康报告是对个人或他人的健康状况、生活习惯、身体状态及健康计划所做的简明扼要的书面介绍。语言应当简洁准确,重点突出,条理清晰。
二、基本框架
部分
内容
要点
开头
过去的不良状况
缺乏运动、饮食不健康、生活习惯不好
主体
转折点与改变
觉醒的原因、改变的决心、采取的行动
结尾
现在的状况与承诺
健康成果、积极变化、未来目标
一、简述自己或他人的健康状况
1.I once got into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks and didn’t take exercise regularly.
我曾经养成了吃很多垃圾食品和零食的习惯,并且不经常锻炼。
2.I put on so much weight that I found it very difficult to climb stairs.
我的体重增加了很多,以至于我发现爬楼梯都很困难。
3.Nowadays, being overweight is a worry for teenagers, so our school plans to set up a swimming club.
现在,超重是青少年的烦恼,所以我们学校计划成立一个游泳俱乐部。
二、介绍保持健康的方法
1.I will keep on exercising and have a healthy lifestyle.
我会坚持锻炼,保持健康的生活方式。
2.If you want to keep fit, joining the swimming club may be a good choice.
如果你想保持健康,加入游泳俱乐部可能是个不错的选择。
3.In order to have a good state of mind, I suggest that you run for 15 minutes every morning.
为了有一个良好的心态,我建议你每天早上跑步15分钟。
三、鼓励养成锻炼的习惯
1.No matter how cold it is, you should insist on running every morning.
不管天气多冷,你都应该坚持每天早晨跑步。
2.Even if you feel tired after a long day of study, you should still spend at least 30 minutes exercising.
即使在学习了一整天之后你感到疲惫,你也应该至少花30分钟锻炼。
3.However busy your schedule becomes, remember that regular exercise is crucial and necessary for your health.
无论日程安排多么繁忙,请记住规律运动对健康至关重要且不可或缺。
假定你是李华。过去,由于一些不健康的生活习惯,你的身体出现了一些问题。之后,你改变了生活方式,现在又恢复了健康。请你根据这段经历写一篇短文,内容包括:
(1)过去不健康的生活习惯:经常熬夜,很少锻炼;
(2)导致的问题:肥胖,易生病;
(3)解决办法:保持均衡饮食,积极锻炼,早睡早起;
(4)给其他同学的建议。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
一、合理布局,精心谋篇
二、遣词造句,规范得体
1.过去我经常熬夜,并且很少进行体育锻炼。
In the past, I often .
2.我变得太胖了,并且经常生病。
I .
3.我下定决心改变不健康的生活方式。
I change my unhealthy lifestyle.
4.我不仅开始保持均衡饮食,还积极参加各种体育活动。
Not only did I begin to keep a balanced diet,
.
5.我养成了早睡早起的习惯。
I going to bed early and getting up early.
6.两个月过去了,我恢复了健康。
, I regained my health.
7.我建议你们尽快改掉不健康的生活习惯。没有什么比健康更重要。
I suggest you . Nothing is more important than health.
三、恰当衔接,自然过渡
1.用因果关系连接句1和句2。
2.用because将句7合并升级为原因状语从句。
四、认真誊写,赏心悦目
写作二 读后续写——微场景训练
词汇
佳句
情感描写
①determination n.决心;决定
②determine v.决定;确定
③fall apart破裂;破碎;崩溃
④lose heart丧失信心;泄气
⑤give up放弃;投降
⑥positive adj.积极的;正面的;乐观的;肯定的
⑦stressed adj.感到有压力的
⑧curiosity n.好奇心
1.Losing two important players was a big challenge,but Lang Ping did not lose heart.(情感描写)
损失两大主力队员是个巨大的挑战,但是郎平没有气馁。
2.By being positive about myself and my body, I became both happier and healthier.(情感描写)
通过积极看待自我和自己的身体,我变得更加快乐、也更加健康了。
3.Gleb wiped the sweat from his face.(动作描写)
格莱布擦去了脸上的汗水。
动作描写
①track vt.& vi.追踪;跟踪
②work out锻炼;计算出;解决
③sweat vt.使出汗;出汗弄湿 vi.出汗;流汗 n.汗水,出汗
④make it获得成功;准时到达
⑤pretend to do sth假装做某事
⑥compete vi.竞争;对抗
微场景一 一个不爱运动的学生决定开始健身,面对困难,结果……
Starting my fitness journey, I 1. (对……感到压力很大)my poor physical condition.My body 2. (似乎要崩溃) after just ten minutes of exercise.I almost 3. (想放弃) when I couldn’t complete simple workouts.My coach 4. (告诉我不要灰心) and stay positive.5. (有坚定的决心), I decided to continue.My curiosity about getting healthier kept me going, and I 6. (决心改变) my lifestyle step by step.
微场景二 一个学生准备参加校运会,在训练过程中遇到挫折,结果……
Preparing for the school sports meeting, I started to 1. (每天锻炼) and 2. (追踪自己的进步) carefully.During training, 3. (汗水布满了我的脸) as I tried to 4. (与速度更快的队友竞争).Sometimes I would 5. (假装自信) when I felt discouraged inside.The coach encouraged me not to focus only on whether I could 6. (进入决赛), but to enjoy the process of improvement and stay committed to my goals.
答案
Section Ⅴ Writing
写作一
【演练佳作•写美文】
写作步骤
二、1.stayed up late and took little physical exercise
2.became too fat and often fell ill
3.made up my mind to
4.but I also took an active part in various sports activities
5.developed/formed the habit of
6.With two months passing
7.get out of your unhealthy living habits as soon as possible
三、1.In the past, I often stayed up late and took little physical exercise. As a result, I became too fat and often fell ill.
2.I suggest you get out of your unhealthy living habits as soon as possible, because nothing is more important than health.
四、
In the past, I often stayed up late and took little physical exercise. As a result, I became too fat and often fell ill.
Later I made up my mind to change my unhealthy lifestyle. Not only did I begin to keep a balanced diet, but I also took an active part in various sports activities. What’s more, I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early. With two months passing, I regained my health.
I suggest you get out of your unhealthy living habits as soon as possible, because nothing is more important than health.
写作二
【语料运用•练续写】
微场景一
1.felt stressed about
2.seemed to fall apart
3.wanted to give up
4.told me not to lose heart
5.With strong determination
6.determined to change
微场景二
1.work out every day
2.track my progress
3.sweat covered my face
4.compete with faster teammates
5.pretend to be confident
6.make it to the finals
5 / 5
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
$
相关资源
示范课
由于学科网是一个信息分享及获取的平台,不确保部分用户上传资料的 来源及知识产权归属。如您发现相关资料侵犯您的合法权益,请联系学科网,我们核实后将及时进行处理。