考前押题06 写作2大常考话题（期中专项训练）高二英语上学期沪外版

学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 考前押题06写作2大常考话题 话题图谱·导航总览 话题1观点类（难点） 话题2建议类（常考点） 话题精练·靶向突破 解题技巧 高中英语书面表达（写作）极简做题技巧 一、完整做题步骤(4步) 1.审题划关键词 圈出：文体（书信/投稿/议论文/图表作文）、人称、时态、要点数量、词数要求(120-150/150词以 上)。 漏写要点直接扣分：不要看错题目要求，比如是建议信还是观点类投稿。 2.列简易提纲（草稿写中文要点） 把题目给到的全部要点逐条列出来，再加1·2句过渡/结尾句。 不要直接动笔写完整英文，避免写到一半跑题。 3.动笔成文 要点全部覆盖：句子长短结合，简单句+复合句穿插：注意分段：书信一般3段，议论文3~4段。 4.通读检查纠错（必做） 重点查：时态、人称、单复数、主谓一致、拼写、标点、连词，词数是否达标。 话题1观点类共7篇 Passage 1 (25-26高二上·上海彭浦中学.期中) 根据班级最近出现的一些现象，你的班主任王老师打算近期召开一次主题班会，围绕“How to use mobile phones properly'”或者“How to balance work and study''两个主题中的一个开展主题班会。假设你是李华，写 一篇建议信，要求如下： 1/9 西学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 1.简述你知晓的班级现象。 2你选择哪个班会主题，并陈述选择该主题的至少2个理由。 Passage 2 (25-26高二上·上海同济第一附中.期中) 假设你是明启中学高二学生吴磊。在学校里，你经常看到一些同学非常忙碌。他们不仅要在学业上全力以 赴，还积极投身于各种各样的课外活动，如社团、竞赛和学生会工作。这种忙碌在带来充实感的同时，也 常常使他们感到压力倍增。请你针对这一现象向校报投稿，你的投稿须包括： 1、简要描述这一现象： 2、你认为如何才能平衡好学业与课外活动之间的关系？请谈谈你的观点。 Passage 3 (25-26高二上·上海浦东新区·期中) 当前，不少青少年沉迷于网络直播(webcast),并热衷于在直播间(live studio)购买偶像或明星推荐的产品。 请你针对这一现象，谈谈你的观点。内容包括： 1.简要描述此现象。 2针对这一现象，陈述你的观点并给出建议。 2/9 西学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Passage 4 (25-26高二上·上海控江中学.期中) 随着国内二手交易平台(resale platform)和社交媒体的普及，近年来出现了学生在各类网络平台上交易学 习笔记的现象。请写一篇作文，谈谈你对此现象的看法。 Passage 5 (25-26高二上·上海行知实验中学.期中) 假设你们学校有两种学习安排：一是学校为学生安排解答困惑或补习知识遗漏点，二是鼓励学生自己学习 解决困难。你会选择哪一种学习方式？请结合实际情况，举例并说明你选择的理由。 Passage 6 (25-26高二上·上海顾村中学·期中) 有人认为，媒体应该更多地报道好消息和正能量故事(Media should cover more good news and inspirational stories),也有人认为不尽如此。对此，你怎么看？请你写一篇文章，你的文章必须包含以下内容： (1)你的观点： (2)你的理由。 319 西学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Passage 7 (25-26高二上上海市民办文绮中学期中) 随着教材改革，学校的相关课程也将做出调整，备选的英语选修课(selective course)有“戏剧欣赏”(Drama Appreciation)、“英语辩论”(English Debate))以及“英语播客制作”(Podcast Production)。请你选出最希望 参与的课程，并详细说明你选择它的原因。 话题2建议类共7篇 Passage 1 (25-26高二上·上海嘉定一中、晋元高级中学期中) 假设你是明启中学的学生李华。学校计划组织一次秋游活动，提出三个备选方案，去上海野生动物园 (Shanghai Wildlife Park)、上海科技馆(Shanghai Science and Technology Museum)和“行走上海(City Walk)”, 现正在征求同学们的意见，你很感兴趣，决定写邮件给负责的王老师，表达你的看法。请根据以下要求写 封电子邮件。 1.你建议去哪个地方（三选一）： 2说明你选择的理由（可从活动内容、学习价值、趣味性等方面进行表述）。 4/9 西学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Passage 2 (25-26高二上·上海大同中学.期中) 假如你是明启中学的李华。英语教研组计划为学生开设选修课，请你给教学处写一封信提出建议。建议需 包括以下内容： 1.选修课名称： 2选修课内容； 3.你的理由或原因。 Passage 3 (25-26高二上·上海曹杨第二中学·期中) 近期，为提升城市生活品质，我市政府正在广泛征集市民建议。作为上海市民之一，请你从交通出行、公 共空间、便民设施、文化遗产、市民素养、沪语传承、环境卫生等方面中，任选其一，写一封英文建议信。 内容须包括： 1)现状分析： 2)具体建议： 3)效果展望。 Passage 4 (25-26高二上·上海复旦附中·期中) 你是吴磊。你的好友李明因前段时间参加数学竞赛落下了英语学习。目前，他感觉自己在知识储备和听说 5/9 函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 读写能力方面落后于班中同学，近期两次考试也均未能及格。父母建议他立刻报周末班补习英语，李明还 在犹豫不决。给李明写一封邮件，谈谈你对他是否需要参加周末补习班的看法并给他的英语学习提些建议。 Passage 5 (24-25高二上·上海浦东新区·期中) 假设你是启明中学高二学生王磊，刚刚收到你的好朋友李华的邮件。信中提到他和家人计划在即将到来的 公共假期来上海旅游，但他对于自驾游还是使用公共交通犹豫不决，现征求你的建议。请你回复邮件，内 容需包括： 1.你的建议；2.你建议的理由。 Passage 6 (25-26高二上·上海松江一中.期中) 假设你是明启中学的学生，你们学校开展了一项关于“高中生每周参与家务小时数”的调查，了解学生们 参与家务的现状，以下饼图为调查结果。对此，请你写一篇文章，谈谈自己的看法。你的文章须包括： 1.简单描述图表： 2.分析造成图表所反映现象的原因； 3总结并简述建议。 6/9 函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 5小时以上.5% 3-5小时.18% 从不参与，32% 1-2小N时.45% Passage 7 (25-26高二上·上海海事大学附属北蔡高级中学·期中) 我校即将举办读书节，请你介绍你最喜欢的一本书并阐明理由。 素养拓展·创新思辨 素养解读 要求写作有关家庭陪伴机器人。 719 函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 【新素材·家庭陪伴机器人】 随着人工智能技术的发展，越来越多的家庭开始关注“家庭陪伴机器人”(companion robots),它可以陪 伴老人或孩子，但也会带来一些问题。某英文报社正在就此话题开展征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内 容包括： 1.你对使用家庭陪伴机器人的态度； 2.说明你的理由（至少两点）： 3.你的建议或展望。 素养解读 要求写作有关劳动教育周 【新素材·劳动教育周】 假设你是明启中学学生李华，学生会正在策划“劳动教育周”活动，现张贴告示如下，向全体学生征求意 见。请你给学生会写一封信，内容包括： 1.你的选择（方案A还是方案B): 2.说明选择理由（若选择方案B,请明确替换哪一项活动并说明理由）。 8/9 学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 NOTICE Labor Education Week-We Want Your Ideas! The Student Union is planning a Labor Education Week.We need your help to decide what activities to include. Current Activities: Community Garden Volunteering Growing flowers for a local hospital Campus Repair Workshop Learning to fix simple fumiture and bicycles Creative Upcycling Contest Turning unwanted items into useful or artistic products Possible New Activity: "A Day in a Job"Shadowing Spending a day observing a family member's or local worker's profession Tell us your choice: Option A:Keep all three current activities(do not add the new one). Option B:Replace one current activity with the new shadowing experience. Student Union Mingqi High School April 6,2026 919 考前押题06写作2大常考话题 话题1观点类（难点） 话题2建议类（常考点） 高中英语书面表达（写作）极简做题技巧 一、完整做题步骤（4步） 1.审题划关键词 圈出：文体（书信/投稿/议论文/图表作文）、人称、时态、要点数量、词数要求（120‑150/150词以上）。 漏写要点直接扣分；不要看错题目要求，比如是建议信还是观点类投稿。 2.列简易提纲（草稿写中文要点） 把题目给到的全部要点逐条列出来，再加1‑2句过渡/结尾句。 不要直接动笔写完整英文，避免写到一半跑题。 3.动笔成文 要点全部覆盖；句子长短结合，简单句+复合句穿插；注意分段：书信一般3段，议论文3‑4段。 4.通读检查纠错（必做） 重点查：时态、人称、单复数、主谓一致、拼写、标点、连词，词数是否达标。 话题1观点类共7篇 Passage 1 （25‑26高二上·上海彭浦中学·期中） 根据班级最近出现的一些现象，你的班主任王老师打算近期召开一次主题班会，围绕“How to use mobile phones properly”或者“How to balance work and study”两个主题中的一个开展主题班会。假设你是李华，写一篇建议信，要求如下： 1.简述你知晓的班级现象。 2.你选择哪个班会主题，并陈述选择该主题的至少2个理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mr.Wang, I’m Li Hua.I’m writing to give my suggestion on the theme of our upcoming class meeting. Recently,many classmates have been glued to mobile phones during breaks,and some even sneak a look at them in class,which has affected their study efficiency and concentration.Thus,I strongly recommend the theme“How to use mobile phones properly”. For one thing,it can help us realize the negative impacts of improper phone use on our academic performance.For another,a heated discussion can guide us to make practical rules,like banning phones in class and using them only for searching study materials after class. I hope my suggestion will be of some help. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给班主任王老师写一封信，就选择“How to use mobile phones properly”或“How to balance work and study”作为班会主题给出自己的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 沉迷于：be glued to→be addicted to 意识到：realize→recognize/be aware of 禁止：ban→prohibit 偷偷看一看：sneak a look→slip a look 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For one thing,it can help us realize the negative impacts of improper phone use on our academic performance. 拓展句：For one thing,it can help us realize the negative impacts that improper phone use has made on our academic performance. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Recently,many classmates have been glued to mobile phones during breaks,and some even sneak a look at them in class,which has affected their study efficiency and concentration.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】 For another,a heated discussion can guide us to make practical rules,like banning phones in class and using them only for searching study materials after class.（运用了动名词banning、using和searching作宾语） Passage 2 （25‑26高二上·上海同济第一附中·期中） 假设你是明启中学高二学生吴磊。在学校里，你经常看到一些同学非常忙碌。他们不仅要在学业上全力以赴，还积极投身于各种各样的课外活动，如社团、竞赛和学生会工作。这种忙碌在带来充实感的同时，也常常使他们感到压力倍增。请你针对这一现象向校报投稿，你的投稿须包括： 1、简要描述这一现象； 2、你认为如何才能平衡好学业与课外活动之间的关系?请谈谈你的观点。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 As a Senior Two student at Mingqi High School,I often see many peers leading extremely busy lives.They spare no effort to excel in academic courses,attending lectures,finishing assignments and preparing for exams.Meanwhile,they actively participate in various extracurricular activities,such as club events,academic competitions and student union work.While this busyness brings a sense of fulfillment,it often leaves them overwhelmed with stress. To balance academics and extracurriculars effectively,first,we should prioritize tasks based on importance and urgency.Academic learning should be the top priority,so we can allocate fixed time for homework and review,and arrange extracurricular activities in spare time.Second,it’s wise to choose 1-2 extracurricular activities that align with our interests and strengths instead of joining too many.This allows us to fully engage without spreading ourselves too thin.Finally,learning to manage time efficiently,such as using fragmented time for memorization,can also help reduce pressure. By striking a proper balance,we can enjoy both academic progress and the benefits of extracurricular activities,leading a fulfilling and healthy school life. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生针对一些同学不仅要在学业上全力以赴，还投身于各种各样的课外活动，从而感到压力倍增的现象给校报投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：participate in→get involved in 各种各样的：various→a variety of 压力：stress→pressure 重要性：importance→significance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As a Senior Two student at Mingqi High School,I often see many peers leading extremely busy lives. 拓展句：As a Senior Two student at Mingqi High School,I often see many peers who lead extremely busy lives. 【点睛】【高分句型1】While this busyness brings a sense of fulfillment,it often leaves them overwhelmed with stress.（运用了while引导的让步状语从句） 【高分句型2】By striking a proper balance,we can enjoy both academic progress and the benefits of extracurricular activities,leading a fulfilling and healthy school life.（运用了动名词作宾语和现在分词作状语） Passage 3 （25‑26高二上·上海浦东新区·期中） 当前，不少青少年沉迷于网络直播(webcast)，并热衷于在直播间（live studio）购买偶像或明星推荐的产品。请你针对这一现象，谈谈你的观点。内容包括： 1.简要描述此现象。 2.针对这一现象，陈述你的观点并给出建议。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Nowadays,an increasing number of teenagers are addicted to webcasts.They are enthusiastic about buying products recommended by their idols or stars in the live studios.This phenomenon is rather worrying. In my opinion,such behavior may lead to impulsive consumption,causing financial burden to teenagers and their families.Also,it distracts them from their studies.To address this,teenagers should enhance self-control and rationally view live-streaming shopping.Parents and schools should also guide them to form correct consumption concepts and focus more on their studies and personal growth. 【导语】这是一篇开放性作文。当前，不少青少年沉迷于网络直播(webcast)，并热衷于在直播间（live studio）购买偶像或明星推荐的产品。请考生针对这一现象，谈谈自己的观点。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 上瘾的：addicted→obsessed 热情的：enthusiastic→passionate 冲动的：impulsive→rash 导致：lead to→result in 2.句式拓展： 原句：They are enthusiastic about buying products recommended by their idols or stars in the live studios. 拓展句：They show great enthusiasm for buying products which are recommended by their idols or stars in the live studios. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In my opinion,such behavior may lead to impulsive consumption,causing financial burden to teenagers and their families.（运用现在分词短语作结果状语） 【高分句型3】To address this,teenagers should enhance self-control and rationally view live-streaming shopping.（使用了不定式作目的状语） Passage 4 （25‑26高二上·上海控江中学·期中） 随着国内二手交易平台（resale platform）和社交媒体的普及，近年来出现了学生在各类网络平台上交易学习笔记的现象。请写一篇作文，谈谈你对此现象的看法。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: The Rise of Online Note-Trading Among Students In recent years,the popularity of domestic resale platforms and social media has given rise to a new trend:students trading study notes on various online platforms.While this phenomenon reflects the creative use of digital resources,it also raises ethical and practical concerns that demand careful consideration. Undoubtedly,note-trading can benefit both buyers and sellers.Diligent students earn extra income by sharing well-organized materials,while strugglers gain access to high-quality references.However,this practice may undermine academic integrity if students rely solely on purchased notes without engaging in independent learning.Some might even resell plagiarized or inaccurate content,misleading others. Schools should guide students to use such platforms responsibly.For instance,traded notes could serve as supplements rather than substitutes for personal effort.Unless proper regulations are implemented,the misuse of these platforms could ultimately harm students’long-term development. In conclusion,though online note-trading is an inevitable outcome of the digital age,its sustainability depends on how we balance convenience with academic honesty. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求考生针对近年来学生在各类网络平台上交易学习笔记的现象，写文章发表个人的看法，应描述现象，论述看法，并提供支撑理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 趋势：trend→tendency 使用：use→utilization/employment 削弱：undermine→erode 依靠：rely on→depend on/count on 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Undoubtedly,note-trading can benefit both buyers and sellers. 拓展句：There is no doubt that note-trading can benefit both buyers and sellers. 【点睛】[高分句型1]While this phenomenon reflects the creative use of digital resources,it also raises ethical and practical concerns that demand careful consideration.(运用了While引导让步状语从句、that引导限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]In conclusion,though online note-trading is an inevitable outcome of the digital age,its sustainability depends on how we balance convenience with academic honesty.(运用了though引导让步状语从句、how引导宾语从句) Passage 5 （25‑26高二上·上海行知实验中学·期中） 假设你们学校有两种学习安排：一是学校为学生安排解答困惑或补习知识遗漏点，二是鼓励学生自己学习解决困难。你会选择哪一种学习方式？请结合实际情况，举例并说明你选择的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 In our school,there are two learning arrangements:one is that the school arranges teachers to answer students’questions or make up for knowledge gaps,and the other is to encourage students to learn and solve problems independently.I prefer the latter. Last semester,when I faced difficulties in physics,I didn’t immediately ask for teachers’help.Instead,I reviewed my notes,searched for relevant materials online,and tried to figure out the problems by myself.This self-learning process not only helped me understand the concepts better but also improved my ability to solve problems independently. In conclusion,choosing to learn and solve problems independently can cultivate our self-study skills and critical thinking,which are essential for our future development. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生就学校提供的两种学习安排做出选择，并结合实际情况举例说明选择的理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 鼓励：encourage→motivate 解答：figure out→work out 提高：improve→promote/boost 解决问题：solve problems→tackle challenges 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：This self-learning process not only helped me understand the concepts better but also improved my ability to solve problems independently. 拓展句：Not only did this self-learning process help me understand the concepts better but also it improved my ability to solve problems independently. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Last semester,when I faced difficulties in physics,I didn’t immediately ask for teachers’help.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】In conclusion,choosing to learn and solve problems independently can cultivate our self-study skills and critical thinking,which are essential for our future development.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 6 （25‑26高二上·上海顾村中学·期中） 有人认为，媒体应该更多地报道好消息和正能量故事（Media should cover more good news and inspirational stories），也有人认为不尽如此。对此，你怎么看？请你写一篇文章，你的文章必须包含以下内容： (1)你的观点； (2)你的理由。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Balance in Media Coverage:Good News and Beyond In my view,media should strike a balance between covering good news and presenting other types of information rather than focusing solely on inspirational stories. Good news and positive stories are indeed valuable.They lift people’s spirits,spread kindness,and remind us of humanity’s goodness,which is especially important in challenging times.For example,reports on volunteers helping those in need or ordinary people achieving extraordinary goals can inspire social solidarity. However,overemphasizing positive news may lead to a distorted view of reality.Media also has a responsibility to inform the public about social issues,potential risks,and negative events.Such reports urge society to address problems like environmental pollution or social injustice,promoting progress. In conclusion,a balanced media coverage—combining uplifting stories with honest accounts of real-world issues—enables people to stay positive while remaining informed and responsible citizens. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生围绕“媒体是否应该更多报道好消息和正能量故事”这一话题发表观点，并阐述理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 关注：focus on→concentrate on 激发：inspire→motivate 解决：address→solve 总之：in conclusion→to sum up 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For example,reports on volunteers helping those in need or ordinary people achieving extraordinary goals can inspire social solidarity. 拓展句：For example,reports on volunteers who help those in need or ordinary people who achieve extraordinary goals can inspire social solidarity. 【点睛】【高分句型1】They lift people’s spirits,spread kindness,and remind us of humanity’s goodness,which is especially important in challenging times.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】In conclusion,a balanced media coverage—combining uplifting stories with honest accounts of real-world issues—enables people to stay positive while remaining informed and responsible citizens.（运用了非谓语动词动词短语作插入语以及while引导时间状语从句的省略结构。） Passage 7 （25‑26高二上·上海市民办文绮中学·期中） 随着教材改革，学校的相关课程也将做出调整，备选的英语选修课(selective course)有“戏剧欣赏”(Drama Appreciation)、“英语辩论”(English Debate)以及“英语播客制作”(Podcast Production)。请你选出最希望参与的课程，并详细说明你选择它的原因。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Among the three selective courses,I am most eager to participate in“Podcast Production”. The primary reason is that it combines my love for English and new media.In today's digital age,podcasts have become a popular medium for information and entertainment.By learning podcast production,I can not only improve my English skills,such as speaking,listening,and writing,but also gain hands-on experience in the field of media production. Another factor is that it can enhance my creativity.Creating a podcast involves various aspects like planning the content,choosing the right music,and editing the audio.This process allows me to express my ideas in a unique way and explore different themes. Finally,the skills learned from“Podcast Production”can be beneficial for my future.Whether for academic research,professional development,or personal interest,the ability to produce high-quality podcasts will be a valuable asset.It can also open up new opportunities for communication and sharing with a wider audience. 【导语】这是一篇开放性作文。学校的相关课程也将做出调整，备选的英语选修课(selective course)有“戏剧欣赏”(Drama Appreciation)、“英语辩论”(English Debate)以及“英语播客制作”(Podcast Production)。请考生选出最希望参与的课程，并详细说明你选择它的原因 【详解】1.词汇积累： 渴望的：eager→keen 主要的：primary→principal 提高，增强：enhance→boost 有益的：beneficial→advantageous 2.句式拓展： 简单句变复合句 原句：Finally,the skills learned from“Podcast Production”can be beneficial for my future. 拓展句：Finally,the skills that are learned from“Podcast Production”can be beneficial for my future.. 【点睛】【高分句型1】By learning podcast production,I can not only improve my English skills,such as speaking,listening,and writing,but also gain hands-on experience in the field of media production.（运用了“not only...but also...”结构） 【高分句型2】The primary reason is that it combines my love for English and new media.（运用了that引导的表语从句） 话题2建议类共7篇 Passage 1 （25‑26高二上·上海嘉定一中、晋元高级中学·期中） 假设你是明启中学的学生李华。学校计划组织一次秋游活动，提出三个备选方案，去上海野生动物园(Shanghai Wildlife Park)、上海科技馆(Shanghai Science and Technology Museum)和“行走上海(City Walk)”，现正在征求同学们的意见，你很感兴趣，决定写邮件给负责的王老师，表达你的看法。请根据以下要求写一封电子邮件。 1.你建议去哪个地方（三选一）； 2.说明你选择的理由（可从活动内容、学习价值、趣味性等方面进行表述）。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mr.Wang, I’m Li Hua,a student from Mingqi Middle School.Knowing that our school is asking for ideas about the autumn trip,I’m writing to suggest going to Shanghai Science and Technology Museum. There are several reasons for my choice.First,the museum is full of amazing exhibitions about space,robots,biology and modern technology.We can not only watch interesting shows but also do some small experiments by ourselves.Besides,compared with the other two choices,this trip is more educational.We can learn useful science knowledge that we can’t get from textbooks.What’s more,it’s suitable for all students and easy for teachers to organize.We can enjoy the fun of exploration while gaining knowledge. I believe this trip will be both interesting and meaningful.I hope you will consider my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给负责的王老师，说明对于秋游活动的选择以及理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 选择：choice→option 充满：be full of→be filled with 适合：be suitable for→be fit for 考虑：consider→take...into account 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：I believe this trip will be both interesting and meaningful. 拓展句：I hold the belief that this trip will be both interesting and meaningful. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We can learn useful science knowledge that we can’t get from textbooks.（运用了that引导定语从句） 【高分句型2】I believe this trip will be both interesting and meaningful.（运用了省略that的宾语从句） Passage 2 （25‑26高二上·上海大同中学·期中） 假如你是明启中学的李华。英语教研组计划为学生开设选修课，请你给教学处写一封信提出建议。建议需包括以下内容： 1.选修课名称； 2.选修课内容； 3.你的理由或原因。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Sir or Madam, I’m Li Hua,a student from Mingqi High School.I’m writing to offer a sincere suggestion concerning the English optional courses that our school’s English teaching and research group intends to launch for us students. I suggest a course named English Poetry Reading&Creation.In this course,we can read classic English poems by famous poets,appreciate their beautiful language and deep meanings,and try writing our own short poems under the teacher’s guidance.This course can not only improve our literary appreciation ability but also deepen our love for English and inspire our creativity. I sincerely hope my suggestion will be carefully considered.I believe this course can enrich our after-class English study and help us gain more fun and harvest in the process of exploring English literature. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以明启中学李华的身份，向教学处建议开设英语选修课，说明课程名称、内容及理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 关于：concerning→ regarding 打算：intend→plan/schedule 提高：improve→boost 激发：inspire→stimulate 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：This course can not only improve our literary appreciation ability but also deepen our love for English and inspire our creativity. 拓展句：Not only can this course improve our literary appreciation ability but also it can deepen our love for English and inspire our creativity. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to offer a sincere suggestion concerning the English optional courses that our school’s English teaching and research group intends to launch for us students.(运用了that引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】I sincerely hope my suggestion will be carefully considered.(运用了省略了连接词that的宾语从句) Passage 3 （25‑26高二上·上海曹杨第二中学·期中） 近期，为提升城市生活品质，我市政府正在广泛征集市民建议。作为上海市民之一，请你从交通出行、公共空间、便民设施、文化遗产、市民素养、沪语传承、环境卫生等方面中，任选其一，写一封英文建议信。内容须包括： 1)现状分析； 2)具体建议； 3)效果展望。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Sample 1: Dear Shanghai Municipal Government, I am writing to advocate for the creation of more“pocket parks”within our dense urban neighborhoods.As Shanghai continues to grow vertically,accessible green spaces for relaxation and community interaction are becoming increasingly scarce,affecting residents’mental and physical well-being. My proposal is to systematically identify and transform underutilized plots of land—such as vacant lots,redundant roundabouts,or gaps between buildings—into small,beautifully landscaped pocket parks.These mini-oases should feature seating,shade,and simple greenery,providing a crucial“green respite”for the public. The envisioned outcome is a city where no resident is more than a ten-minute walk from a peaceful retreat.These pockets of nature would significantly enhance the urban microclimate,foster a stronger sense of community,and offer invaluable spaces for daily respite,making our city not just taller,but also healthier and more harmonious. Yours sincerely, A concerned citizenSample 2 Dear Shanghai Municipal Government, This letter proposes a city-wide initiative to optimize the provision of public seating.A walkable city is a livable city,yet currently,there is a notable lack of benches for elderly citizens,pregnant women,and tired pedestrians to rest,particularly along bustling shopping streets and in residential areas. I recommend launching a“Restful Shanghai”program to install more durable,comfortable,and aesthetically pleasing benches at regular intervals on key sidewalks.Furthermore,we could encourage a“Sitting-Out Front”culture for shops and cafes,where businesses are encouraged to provide seating for the general public,not just paying customers. Widespread and thoughtful public seating would transform the pedestrian experience.It would promote walkability,support the well-being of our most vulnerable residents,and create more opportunities for social interaction,ultimately fostering a more inclusive and caring urban environment for all. Yours faithfully, A concerned citizenSample 3 Dear Shanghai Municipal Government, I am writing to suggest an innovative approach to preserving our city’s rich architectural heritage:the creation of a comprehensive digital archive for Shanghai’s historical buildings.While physical preservation is paramount,these structures remain vulnerable to the passage of time,natural disasters,or urban development. My specific proposal is to employ advanced technologies like 3D laser scanning and drone photography to create detailed digital twins of all designated historical buildings.This archive would include high-resolution images,architectural blueprints,and historical data,all accessible to the public through an online platform. This initiative would immortalize our heritage in a dynamic,accessible format.It would serve as an invaluable educational resource for future generations,a tool for virtual tourism,and a crucial backup to guide authentic restoration efforts if needed,ensuring that the soul of old Shanghai is never lost. Yours sincerely, A concerned citizenSample 4 Dear Shanghai Municipal Government, To enhance urban civility and public safety,I propose a city-wide campaign to promote the“Stand on the Right,Walk on the Left”etiquette on all escalators,particularly within metro stations.The current mixed usage causes unnecessary congestion,delays for those in a hurry,and potential safety hazards. A clear,consistent public service campaign is needed.This should involve prominent signage at the head of all major escalators,announcements in metro stations,and engaging social media content to educate citizens on the efficiency and safety benefits of this simple rule. Widespread adoption of this practice would lead to a smoother,faster,and more predictable flow of pedestrian traffic.It would significantly reduce commute times and frustration during peak hours,projecting an image of Shanghai as a city that is not only modern but also orderly and considerate. Yours faithfully, A concerned citizenSample 5 Dear Shanghai Municipal Government, I am writing to express my concern regarding the gradual decline of the Shanghai dialect and to propose a measure for its revitalization.As Mandarin remains dominant,many young Shanghainese are losing their connection to this vital part of our local culture and identity. To counter this,I suggest a gentle introduction of the Shanghainese dialect in public services.A practical first step would be to add a Shanghainese language option in the automated inquiry systems of public transport,major museums,and community hotlines.This would not replace Mandarin but offer a complementary choice. This initiative would signal the official value placed on our local language,fostering a sense of cultural pride.It would provide daily exposure and practical utility for the dialect,helping to keep it a living,breathing part of our city’s soundscape and ensuring it is passed down to future generations. Yours sincerely, A concerned citizen 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生从交通出行、公共空间、便民设施、文化遗产、市民素养、沪语传承、环境卫生等方面中，任选其一，给市政府写一封建议信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 影响：affect→impact 多余的：redundant→superfluous 至关重要的：crucial→critical 培养：foster→cultivate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：These mini-oases should feature seating,shade,and simple greenery,providing a crucial“green respite”for the public. 拓展句：These mini-oases should feature seating,shade,and simple greenery,which will provide a crucial“green respite”for the public. 【点睛】[高分句型1]As Shanghai continues to grow vertically,accessible green spaces for relaxation and community interaction are becoming increasingly scarce,affecting residents’mental and physical well-being.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分词作状语) [高分句型2]The envisioned outcome is a city where no resident is more than a ten-minute walk from a peaceful retreat.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句) Passage 4 （25‑26高二上·上海复旦附中·期中） 你是吴磊。你的好友李明因前段时间参加数学竞赛落下了英语学习。目前，他感觉自己在知识储备和听说读写能力方面落后于班中同学，近期两次考试也均未能及格。父母建议他立刻报周末班补习英语，李明还在犹豫不决。给李明写一封邮件，谈谈你对他是否需要参加周末补习班的看法并给他的英语学习提些建议。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Li Ming, I’m sorry to hear you’ve fallen behind in English after the math competition.I know you’re hesitant about weekend English classes.In my view,enrolling could be a good choice.As you missed some lessons,the weekend classes can help you make up for the knowledge gap and enhance your skills. Nevertheless,just attending classes isn’t sufficient.You must also exert extra effort in your daily study.For instance,listening to English podcasts or watching English movies in your spare time can improve your listening and speaking.Reading English books and writing diaries are also beneficial for your reading and writing. Moreover,practice speaking English with classmates or teachers as often as possible.This will build your confidence and enhance your oral expression. I’m convinced that with your hard work and the assistance of the weekend classes,you’ll soon improve your English and catch up with your classmates. Best regards, Wu Lei 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友李明写邮件，谈谈对他是否需要参加周末补习班的看法并给他的英语学习提些建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 落后：fall behind→lag behind 比赛：competition→contest 犹豫不决的：hesitant→tentative 有益的：beneficial→advantageous 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Reading English books and writing diaries are also beneficial for your reading and writing. 拓展句：Reading English books and writing diaries,which are effective ways to practice,are also beneficial for your reading and writing. 【点睛】[高分句型1]In my view,enrolling could be a good choice.(运用了动名词作主语) [高分句型2]I’m convinced that with your hard work and the assistance of the weekend classes,you’ll soon improve your English and catch up with your classmates.(运用了连接词that引导的宾语从句) Passage 5 （24‑25高二上·上海浦东新区·期中） 假设你是启明中学高二学生王磊，刚刚收到你的好朋友李华的邮件。信中提到他和家人计划在即将到来的公共假期来上海旅游，但他对于自驾游还是使用公共交通犹豫不决，现征求你的建议。请你回复邮件，内容需包括： 1.你的建议；2.你建议的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Li Hua, I am so glad to hear that your family has planned a visit to Shanghai during the next public holiday!Welcome!Since you are hesitant about traveling by car or using public transportation,I am writing to give you some advice. In my opinion,compared with using public transportations,driving a car here is a good choice,On one hand,traffic rules in Shanghai are not friendly at all to cars from other cities.You might be politely refused by a policeman when entering the inner-ring areas if you drive a car.On the other hand,the public transportation in Shanghai can meet all your needs.Boasting the longest underground railways in the world,the metro service is bound to provide you with a satisfactory travel experience.Besides,it is economical and convenient to take the city buses to tour around. Hopefully,you can have a good time in Shanghai. Yours, Wang Lei 【导语】本文是一篇应用文。你的好朋友李华给你发来邮件，信中提到他和家人计划在即将到来的公共假期来上海旅游，但他对于自驾游还是使用公共交通犹豫不决，现征求你的建议。要求考生就此进行回复。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→delighted 建议：advice→suggestions 在我看来：in my opinion→as far as I am concerned 满足：meet→satisfy 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Boasting the longest underground railways in the world,the metro service is bound to provide you with a satisfactory travel experience. 拓展句：Boasting the longest underground railways in the world,the metro service is bound to provide you with a satisfactory travel experience which can give you an unforgettable memory. 【点睛】【高分句型1】You might be politely refused by a policeman when entering the inner-ring areas if you drive a car.(运用了when引导的状语从句的省略和if引导的状语从句) 【高分句型2】Boasting the longest underground railways in the world,the metro service is bound to provide you with a satisfactory travel experience.(运用了非谓语动词作状语) Passage 6 （25‑26高二上·上海松江一中·期中） 假设你是明启中学的学生，你们学校开展了一项关于“高中生每周参与家务小时数”的调查，了解学生们参与家务的现状，以下饼图为调查结果。对此，请你写一篇文章，谈谈自己的看法。你的文章须包括： 1.简单描述图表； 2.分析造成图表所反映现象的原因； 3.总结并简述建议。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】It can be seen from the pie chart that high school students differ greatly in the amount of time they spend on housework each week.Surprisingly,nearly one-third of the students never help at home,whereas the majority,about 45%,devote only one to two hours.About 18%participate for three to five hours,and a mere 5%do over five hours of housework per week. There are several reasons behind this situation.Heavy academic pressure leaves many students with little time or energy.Some parents might underestimate the benefits of doing chores,thus failing to encourage their children to help out.Besides,many teenagers simply lack the motivation. In my opinion,housework should be viewed as a valuable opportunity to learn responsibility and independence.Schools and families should work together to guide students in balancing schoolwork and household duties. 【导语】这是一篇图表作文。你们学校开展了一项关于“高中生每周参与家务小时数”的调查，了解学生们参与家务的现状，以下饼图为调查结果。对此，请考生写一篇文章，谈谈自己的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 不同：differ→vary 机会：opportunity→chance 低估：underestimate→undervalue 动力：motivation→drive 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：It can be seen from the pie chart that high school students differ greatly in the amount of time they spend on housework each week. 拓展句：As can be seen from the pie chart,high school students have great differences in the time they spend on housework every week. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It can be seen from the pie chart that high school students differ greatly in the amount of time they spend on housework each week.（运用that引导的主语从句，自然引出对图表内容的描述） 【高分句型2】Some parents might underestimate the benefits of doing chores,thus failing to encourage their children to help out.（通过现在分词作结果状语） Passage 7 （25‑26高二上・上海海事大学附属北蔡高级中学・期中） 我校即将举办读书节，请你介绍你最喜欢的一本书并阐明理由。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 My Favorite Book:The Little Prince Our school’s Reading Festival is approaching,and I’d like to share my favorite book:The Little Prince by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry. This seemingly simple tale about a little prince traveling through space is deeply meaningful to me for several reasons.First,its beautiful language and charming illustrations make it an enjoyable read.Second,it explores profound themes like friendship,love,responsibility,and the loss of innocence in a way that feels gentle yet powerful.The encounters with the fox and the rose are especially touching.Third,the story serves as a powerful allegory,criticizing the superficial values and materialism often found in the adult world.It reminds me to cherish imagination,empathy,and the truly important things in life. The Little Prince is more than just a children’s book;it’s a timeless treasure offering wisdom for readers of all ages.I highly recommend it to everyone during this festival! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生介绍你最喜欢的一本书并阐明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 临近：approach→around the corner 令人愉快的：enjoyable→pleasant 方式：way→method 重要的：important→essential 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：Our school’s Reading Festival is approaching,and I’d like to share my favorite book:The Little Prince by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry. 拓展句：Since our school’s Reading Festival is approaching,I’d like to share my favorite book:The Little Prince by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry. 【点睛】【高分句型1】This seemingly simple tale about a little prince traveling through space is deeply meaningful to me for several reasons.（运用了现在分词作定语） 【高分句型2】Second,it explores profound themes like friendship,love,responsibility,and the loss of innocence in a way that feels gentle yet powerful.（运用了that引导定语从句） 要求写作有关家庭陪伴机器人。 【新素材·家庭陪伴机器人】 随着人工智能技术的发展，越来越多的家庭开始关注“家庭陪伴机器人”（companion robots），它可以陪伴老人或孩子，但也会带来一些问题。某英文报社正在就此话题开展征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1．你对使用家庭陪伴机器人的态度； 2．说明你的理由（至少两点）； 3．你的建议或展望。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: My View on Companion Robots With the rapid development of artificial intelligence,companion robots are becoming increasingly popular in modern families.They can take care of the elderly and play with children,which brings great convenience to busy parents. Personally,I hold a positive attitude towards this trend,but I believe we should use them wisely.On one hand,these robots can provide timely help and companionship,especially for those who live alone.On the other hand,relying too much on robots may lead to a lack of real human interaction,which is harmful to emotional development. In my opinion,robots should be seen as assistants rather than replacements for family members.We should spend more quality time with our loved ones to keep our relationships warm and strong. 【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生围绕“家庭陪伴机器人”话题为英文报社投稿，明确个人对其使用的态度，阐述至少两点理由，并给出合理建议与未来展望。 【详解】1.词汇积累 快速的：rapid→swift 流行的：popular→prevalent 依赖：rely on→depend on 替代：replacement→substitute 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：With the rapid development of artificial intelligence,companion robots are becoming increasingly popular in modern families. 拓展句：As artificial intelligence develops rapidly,companion robots are becoming increasingly popular in modern families. 【点睛】【高分句型1】They can take care of the elderly and play with children,which brings great convenience to busy parents.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】On the other hand,relying too much on robots may lead to a lack of real human interaction,which is harmful to emotional development.（运用了动名词短语作主语以及which引导的非限制性定语从句） 要求写作有关劳动教育周 【新素材·劳动教育周】 假设你是明启中学学生李华，学生会正在策划“劳动教育周”活动，现张贴告示如下，向全体学生征求意见。请你给学生会写一封信，内容包括： 1．你的选择（方案A还是方案B）； 2．说明选择理由（若选择方案B，请明确替换哪一项活动并说明理由）。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Student Union, I am Li Hua from Mingqi High School.Learning that you are collecting opinions on the Labor Education Week,I would like to choose Option B. I suggest replacing Growing flowers for a local hospital with the new activity“A Day in a Job”Shadowing.The current three activities are meaningful,but the shadowing experience can bring us practical career awareness,which is rarely covered in classes.By observing a real profession,we can understand the value of different jobs,develop a respectful attitude toward labor,and prepare better for our future life. Community Garden Volunteering and Creative Upcycling Contest can fully develop our hands-on skills.Adding the job-shadowing activity will make the whole education more comprehensive.I believe this change will make the week more inspiring and beneficial. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学生会正在策划“劳动教育周”活动，现张贴告示向全体学生征求意见。要求考生以李华的名义给学生会写一封信，表明自己的选择，并说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 选择：choose→select/opt for 建议：suggest→propose 不同的：different→diverse 培养：develop→cultivate 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：The current three activities are meaningful,but the shadowing experience can bring us practical career awareness,which is rarely covered in classes. 拓展句：Meaningful as the current three activities are,the shadowing experience can bring us practical career awareness,which is rarely covered in classes. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you are collecting opinions on the Labor Education Week,I would like to choose Option B.（运用了现在分词learning作状语和that引导宾语从句） 【高分句型2】The current three activities are meaningful,but the shadowing experience can bring us practical career awareness ,which is rarely covered in classes.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句） 2 / 26 1 / 26 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $