内容正文:
Unit 1 Happy Holiday
Section B(2a—3c) 教学设计
课 题
Gina's holiday story — Reading for Writing(Section B 2a—3c)
课 型
读写课(Reading & Writing)
课 时
第5课时(45分钟)
核心素养目标
语言能力
能完成 2a—2c 词汇练习,正确使用 sick, ancient, remind, take one’s breath away 等词与短语;能读懂 3a 故事并提取动作链;能仿照结构写出 5 句以上自己的假期故事。
学习能力
能借助 3b 五问搭建写作提纲;能依据互评检查点给同伴提出具体修改建议。
思维品质
能把零散动作整理为有时间顺序的活动链;能在写作中补充细节(见闻、美食、人物)使故事生动。
文化意识
了解苏格兰乡村风光与亲近自然的生活方式;体会“与家人分享惊喜”的假期情感价值。
教学重难点
教学难点:短文中一般过去时的一致使用与细节补充;互评建议的具体性与修改的落实。
教学重点:2b、2c 词汇的正确选用;3a 动作链的提取;假期故事的内容框架(时间+活动+感受+收获)。
语篇研读
【What】Part 1 词汇运用:2a 用给定词尽量多组短语(holiday, experience, scenery, station, camp, square);2b 选词填空六空(sick / ancient / easily / peace / breath / remind);2c 语篇填词(landscape / forget / especially / get together / ready);词汇竞猜游戏(如 This is a place where people can watch performances or shows—theatre)。Part 2 读写:3a 阅读 Gina 的假期故事 My Holiday in Scotland,写出她做的事情(took a train to Scotland / stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside / went to the forest / saw a deer / ran home and told her parents);3b 回答五个问题构思自己难忘的假期(When did it happen? / Where were you? / What did you do? / How did you feel? / What did you learn?);3c 依提纲成文并互评。
【Why】Gina 的故事示范"时间+活动链+感受+愿望"的假期叙事写法;3b 五问为写作提供完整内容框架;互评环节让写作回到真实交流,落实以评促写。
【How】词汇板块"组词→填空→竞猜"巩固语言基本功;写作板块按"读范文取结构→五问列提纲→成文→互评修改"推进,支架逐级撤除。
学情分析
学生经过前四课时已积累假期话题词汇与"地点+活动+感受"表达,具备写作素材;但把多个过去式动作连成短文时易出现时态不一致、缺乏细节的问题;互评时倾向只找拼写错误,需给出互评检查点(时态统一?有细节?结构完整?)。
教学过程
教学环节
教师活动
学生活动
Step 1
词汇复习
导入
(5’)
①出示假期场景图片,快闪复习本单元词汇;
②布置 2a:用 holiday, experience, scenery, station, camp, square 尽量多地组短语(如 summer holiday(s), go on holiday…)。
①看图快速说出假期词汇;
②独立完成 2a 词组联想并交流补充。
Step 2
Work on 2b—2c
词汇运用
(11’)
①出示词框(ancient, breath, remind, peace, sick, easily),布置独立完成 2b 选词填空:
1. I felt ________ after staying in the sun for too long.
2. The tour guide told us the ________ tower was over 1,000 years old.
3. Don’t spend too much on holiday shopping, or you might ________ go over budget.
4. When the night fell, the small town was finally at ________.
5. The mountain scenery was so beautiful that it took my ________ away!
6. Please ________ me to take my passport before I leave.
②出示词框(especially, ready, forget, landscape, get together),布置完成 2c 语篇填词;
③组织核对:2b—sick / ancient / easily / peace / breath / remind;2c—landscape / forget / especially / get together / ready;
④追问选择理由,点拨固定搭配(took my breath away;remind sb. to do sth.;get together with…)。
①独立完成 2b、2c;
②核对订正;
③说出选择理由并记录固定搭配。
Step 3
词汇竞猜
(5’)
①组织“词汇竞猜”:教师描述,学生抢猜单词或短语(例:This is a place where people can watch performances or shows—theatre);
②积分制评出优胜小组。
①听描述抢答猜词,答对得一分;
②为小组积分,互相加油。
Step 4
Work on 3a
读故事
提取信息
(8’)
①布置阅读 Gina 的故事 My Holiday in Scotland,在图下写出她做的事(Things that Gina did:took… / stayed… / went to… / saw… / ran home and…);
②组织核对:took a train to Scotland / stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside / went to the forest (to explore) / saw a deer / ran home and told her parents;
③带读五个动作短语并正音,提示故事的“结尾感受+愿望”写法(What a wonderful experience… I really hope I can go back again.)。
①默读故事,划出动作信息并完成填空;
②核对订正;
③跟读短语,体会结尾的写法。
Step 5
Work on 3b
五问构思
(7’)
①布置回忆自己难忘的假期经历,回答五个问题:1. When did it happen? 2. Where were you? 3. What did you do? 4. How did you feel? 5. What did you learn?;
②巡视点拨,帮助没有素材的学生从“一次郊游、一次家庭聚会”等小事入手。
①独立回答五问,形成写作提纲;
②同桌互说提纲,互相启发。
Step 6
Work on 3c
写作互评
(9’)
①布置成文:以“Last summer, I went to…”开头,用上提纲并加入细节(美景、美食、有趣的人);
②组织交换互评:查时态是否统一、细节是否具体、结构是否完整;
③点评典型问题并展示佳作。
①依提纲独立写作;
②同伴互评并提出具体建议;
③根据建议修改自己的故事。
板书设计
Gina's Holiday: took a train → stayed in a house → went to the forest → saw a deer → ran home and told her parents
写作支架: When → Where → What → How (feel) → What (learn)
开头: Last summer, I went to… 结尾: What a … experience! I hope I can…
作业设计
本课作业围绕假期故事的修改完善与拓展写作设计。
【基础·必做】①背诵 3a 故事中的五个动作短语;②依据互评意见修改 3c 短文并誊写工整。
【提升·选做】为假期故事配一幅插图(手绘或照片),参加班级展示。
【拓展·挑战】再写一次“家庭出游”经历(5—6 句),注意活动链与细节,下节课朗读交流。
巩固检测(当堂完成)
一、单项选择。
1. Please remind me ________ my passport before I leave. A. take B. to take C. taking
2. The mountain scenery was so beautiful that it ________. A. took my breath away B. took me breath away C. took away my breath of mine
二、根据汉语意思完成句子(每空一词)。
1. 上个秋天,我的家人乘火车去苏格兰度假。Last autumn, my family ________ a train ________ Scotland for a holiday.
2. 见到那只鹿时我多么惊讶啊!________ ________ I was to see the deer!
3. 我真希望自己还能再去一次。I really hope I ________ ________ back again.
巩固检测参考答案
一、1. B 2. A
二、1. took;to 2. How surprised 3. can go
教学反思
①词汇竞猜的词例选择是否覆盖本单元重点;②3b 构思环节给无素材学生的启发是否有效;③互评检查点是否被真正使用;④写作时间是否需要再延长 2—3 分钟。
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