Unit6 writing学案2026-2027学年沪教版七年级英语上册

2026—2027学年 七年级英语上册 Unit 6 Unit 6 写作探究课学案 Writing a travel guide 班级 __________ 姓名 __________ 日期 __________ 教材对应：第92—93页。建议用时：40分钟。先独立思考，再与同桌核对。 本课任务 给第一次到访的同龄人写一篇90—110词的城市或小镇旅行指南，帮助对方作出选择。 重难点 每段围绕一个中心；用地点特色、可做的活动和理由替代空泛赞美；根据读者需要取舍信息。 一 拆开范文看安排 5分钟 1. Read A local’s guide to Hangzhou on p. 92. Write the paragraph number beside each job. ____ Introduce a main tourist spot with supporting details. ____ Welcome the reader and introduce the city. ____ End with an invitation or a warm comment. ____ Suggest some local food. 2. In paragraph 2, underline one detail about location and circle one thing a visitor can see. Why are these more useful than “West Lake is nice”? ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 二 把空话改成有用的话 6分钟 3. Compare the two sentences. Which one helps a visitor make a plan? Explain. A. West Lake is very good and very beautiful. B. If you go to West Lake, you can see mountains, parks and historic sites. I choose ____ because ________________________________________________. 4. Improve the short paragraph below. Replace two vague expressions and move the food sentence to a more suitable paragraph. West Lake is a nice place. It has many things. You should try Xiaoshan chicken. You can see the Yuewang Temple near the lake. Your new two-sentence paragraph about the lake: ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ The food sentence belongs in the paragraph about _________________________. 可选词语：beautiful landscape；historic sites；be famous for；in memory of。先核对事实，再选词，不为“高级”而堆词。 三 先替读者选材料 5分钟 5. Your reader is an exchange student who likes quiet walks and local food. Write about your city or town. If you need material, use the Hangzhou guide on p. 92. Planning question My notes Which city or town? ________________________________________ Which place suits this reader? Why? ________________________________________ Two things to see or do there ① __________________ ② __________________ One food suggestion ________________________________________ One detail I need to check or leave out ________________________________________ 内容边界 不编开放时间、票价或交通路线。没有可靠资料的细节可不写，或提醒读者出发前核对。 四 完成第一稿 15分钟 6. Write 90–110 words. Include a title, a short introduction, a place with useful details, a food suggestion and an ending. Use at least one if-sentence naturally. Title: _________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 句式备用：Welcome to ... / It is famous for ... / If you enjoy ..., you can ... / You should try ... 需要时选用，不必逐句套写。 五 请读者提出一个真问题 7分钟 7. Exchange drafts. Read as a visitor, then complete the feedback. 先谈内容是否有用，再查语言。 Reader check My evidence or suggestion I can find a suitable place to visit. Place: _________________________________ I know two things to see or do. ① ________________ ② ________________ Each paragraph has one clear focus. A sentence to move, if any: ______________ I still want to ask one question. ______________________________________ 8. Revise the weakest part of your draft in 40–60 words. Add a useful detail, explain a reason or remove an unsupported claim. Do more than correct spelling. The problem I am fixing: ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 语言核查 □地名首字母大写 □if从句动词准确 □can / should后用原形 □句末有合适标点。 六 写作后的小结 2分钟 9. Which change makes your guide more useful to the reader? Before revision, _______________________________________________________. After revision, ________________________________________________________. 课后整理 将修改后的段落放回原稿，形成清晰的完整指南；配一张有说明的自绘小地图为选做任务。 参考答案与写作评价 一 1. 2、1、4、3。2. 位置：to the west of the old city centre；可见景物：mountains and parks / historic sites such as the Yuewang Temple。具体信息帮助游客判断位置和游览内容，“nice”只表达笼统态度。 二 3. B，说明能看到什么。4. 示例：West Lake is a good place to enjoy beautiful landscape and historic sites. You can see the mountains and parks around the lake and visit the Yuewang Temple. 食物句移入local food段。可保留一个评价词，但必须有具体细节支撑。 三 5. 开放作答。杭州示例：Hangzhou；West Lake，适合步行观景；see mountains and parks / visit historic sites；Xiaoshan chicken；需要核实的开放时间或具体路线。对“安静”的描述应谨慎，不能保证知名景点任何时段都安静。 四 6. 参考习作（约100词）： A local’s guide to Hangzhou Welcome to Hangzhou, a city with a long history and beautiful views. There is plenty to enjoy here. If you like walking, you can visit West Lake. It is to the west of the old city centre. You can enjoy the mountains and parks around it. You can also visit historic sites such as the Yuewang Temple and learn about Yue Fei. For a taste of local life, you should try Xiaoshan chicken. It is a traditional Zhejiang dish. Choose a few places and take your time. I hope you enjoy your visit to Hangzhou! 五至六 7—9. 按实际初稿作答。有效修改应回应读者问题，例如把“many things”换成可见景物，把食品信息移到食品段，或删去未经查证的票价。只写“I corrected some mistakes”不够具体。 评价建议 共10分 内容4分：城市、景点、两项具体信息、食品建议各1分；组织2分：段落中心清楚、顺序合理各1分；语言2分：基本准确且if句自然；读者意识与修改2分：照顾读者兴趣1分，作出一处有效内容修改1分。不因用了范文之外的表达扣分。 教学提示 首稿允许少量语言错误，先解决“写什么、对谁有用”。同伴反馈只提出一个最值得解决的问题，避免把修改变成纠错清单。学生若选自己的城市，应对具体事实负责；资料不足时选教材杭州材料即可。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $