Unit 6 第四课时 Section 3 Writing（同步课件）英语沪教版2024七年级上册

Unit 6 Section 3 Writing 2024年牛津版 英语（七年级上） Travelling around Asia 1 课堂教学目的 1 2 新课导入 3 Content 课堂活动 5 课堂训练 6 课堂小结 4 课堂重难点 2 课堂教学目的 1 2 课堂重难点 文化意识 课堂重难点 思维品质 课堂教学目的 重点：运用本单元所学知识和所给范文写一篇旅游指南，并通过自评和互评修改文章。 难点：用目标语言输出。体会文章的写作技巧。 通过说过渡到写，有效提高学生的语言能力和学习能力。 通过写作训练复习本单元的词汇及句型，并提升热爱家乡的意识。 1.了解旅游指南的写作思路，列出写作要点。 2.仿照范文写一篇旅游指南。 3.通过自评和互评，改进初稿的结构、内容和语言。 学会推广自己家乡，热爱自己家乡。提升学生的自我荣誉感 3 I like travelling, I find a travel agency(旅行社),I want they give me some advice. Using the structure like this:” if you go to Beijing, you should visit……” Look and say If you travel to Beijing, you should visit Tian'anmen Square and see soldiers raising the Chinese national flag 新课导入 3 If you travel to Beijing, you should visit the Palace Museum and see many ancient buildings and learn about the history of China If you travel to Guangzhou, you should visit Guangzhou Tower and taste Guangzhou special food. Guangzhou special food many temples the Bangkok National Museum If you visit Thailand, you can enjoy many beautiful temples. At the Bangkok National Museum you can learn about the traditional culture in Thailand Pattaya fruit, seafood Pattaya If you travel to Thailand, you should visit Pattaya and taste local fruits and sea food. How to make a good travel guide? Think and discuss! where is it? what is it? see what to do? play buy/eat/drink 课堂活动 4 Writing a travel guide "Travel China 24/7" website wants your travel guides! We want local people to write travel guides for different cities and towns in China. Please send us your travel guides with travel tips for your city or town! 1 Sun Hui drew a mind map before she wrote a travel guide. Complete the mind map with the phrases below, and then read the guide to see if you were right. historic sites things to do try local food beautiful landscape things to see A local's guide to Hangzhou Welcome to my hometown—Hangzhou. It is a city with a long history, amazing views and delicious food. There are a lot of things to see and do here. West Lake is a must-see spot in Hangzhou. The lake is to the west of the old city centre. It is on the UNESCO World Heritage List because of its long history and beautiful landscape. If you go there, you will see the mountains and parks around the lake. There ore also many historic sites, such as the Yuewang Temple. It was built in memory of the famous general Yue Fei. Hangzhou is famous for its local food. You should try some traditional Zhejiang dishes like Xiaoshan chicken. If you come to Hangzhou. I am sure you will love this beautiful city at first sight. things to see things to do historic sites beautiful landscape try local food 欢迎来到…… 一个有着……的城市 可看和可做的事情 一个必去的景点 在……的西面（不接壤） 因为 悠久的历史 美丽的风景 为了纪念 因……而著名 本地食品 传统菜式 第一眼 根据中文意思写出下列短语。 welcome to … a city with … at first sight a must-see spot to the west of because of long history beautiful landscape in memory of be famous for local food traditional dishes things to see and do A local's guide to Hangzhou Welcome to my hometown—Hangzhou. It is a city with a long history, amazing views and delicious food. There are a lot of things to see and do here. West Lake is a must-see spot in Hangzhou. The lake is to the west of the old city centre. It is on the UNESCO World Heritage List because of its long history and beautiful landscape. If you go there, you will see the mountains and parks around the lake. There ore also many historic sites, such as the Yuewang Temple. It was built in memory of the famous general Yue Fei. Hangzhou is famous for its local food. You should try some traditional Zhejiang dishes like Xiaoshan chicken. If you come to Hangzhou. I am sure you will love this beautiful city at first sight. Beginning Body Ending A brief introduction to my hometown Things to see and do in my hometown My wish 话题分析 本单元是描述自己的家乡及旅游景点写一个旅游指南，运用目标单词和短语及句式介绍家乡的名胜。通过学习范文，模仿文章结构，结合关键词来完成话题写作。 1.目标语言：条件状语从句，关于旅游方面的单词和短语。 2.文章结构可以从这几个方面着手写： a.家乡总的介绍。 b.家乡好看的景色和能做到的事情。（特色景点，特色娱乐，特 色美食等） c.愿望。（欢迎大家光临） 3.通过写作训练复习本单元的词汇及句型，并提升热爱家乡的意识. Step 1 Plan Think about your city or town. List different things (e.g. tourist spots, local food) to include in the article. Use the mind map in Exercise 1 to help you organize the information. 2 Now write a travel guide for your city or town. How to write a travel to your hometown? You can think about the following questions before writing. Where is my hometown? What kind of place is it? What is the most famous tourist spot? Where is it and how can tourists go there? What is special about it? What can tourists see there? What can tourists do there? What’s my hope/my wish? Think about the questions above and complete the mind map. A travel guide to my hometown Ending Where is my hometown? What kind of place is it? Things to see Things to do My hope / My wish beautiful landscape historic sites What is special about it? try local food/ go shopping/… Body Beginning Step 2 Write Write your travel guide. 根据以下要点提示，制作关于广州的旅游手册。 简介 位于中国南部 ，被为“花城”，也以美食而著名。 景 点 及 推 荐 原 因 北京路（Beijing Road） 有很多大型商店，可以购物 永庆坊（Shangxiajiu Road） 欣赏古老建筑，品尝传统美食 广州塔（the Canton Tower） 世界上最高的电视塔之一。 你的其他旅游建议及期望？ 广州是一个有着悠久历史和美丽风景的现代化城市。 广州位于中国的南部。 广州因为它的鲜花和美食而著名。 广州塔是世界上最高的电视塔之一，是个必去的景点。 Guangzhou is a modern city with a long history and beautiful landscape. Guangzhou is in the south of China. Guangzhou is famous for beautiful flowers and delicious food. The Canton Tower is a must-see spot because it is one of the highest TV towers in the world. 广州有许多著名的景点，如北京路、永庆坊和广州塔。 北京路有很多大型的商店。 如果你想品尝当地美食，你就会喜欢永庆坊。 如果你参观永庆坊，你还可以看到许多古老的建筑。 There are many tourist spots in Guangzhou, such as Beijing Road, Yongqing Fang and the Canton Tower. There are a lot of / lots of large shops in Beijing Road. If you want to try traditional local food, you’ll like Yongqing Fang. If you visit Yongqing Fang, you can also see many old buildings. A travel guide to Guangzhou Welcome to my hometown—Guangzhou. It is in the south of China. It is a modern city with a long history and beautiful landscape. It is famous for beautiful flowers and delicious food. There are many famous tourist spots in Guangzhou, such as Beijing Road, Yongqing Fang and the Canton Tower. If you like shopping, you can go to Beijing Road. There are a lot of large shops there. If you want to try traditional local food, you’ll like Yongqing Fang. If you visit Yongqing Fang, you can also see many old buildings. The Canton Tower is a must-see spot because it is one of the highest TV towers in the world. There are many things to see and do in Guangzhou. I hope you have a good time and I’m sure you will love it at first sight. l introduced __________________ in the city / town. 口 I focused on a clear topic in each paragraph. 口 l used the words and expressions l learnt in this unit. 口 l used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. 口 Step 3 Check and revise Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it. 课堂小结 5 1.运用目标单词和短语描述自己的家乡及旅游景点； 2.通过学习范文，模仿文章结构，结合关键词来完成话题写作； 3.根据要点提示完成广州旅游手册的写作； 4.学会结合自评表对自己的作文进行评价，并通过范文学习对自己的作文进行修改润色； 5.通过写作训练复习本单元的词汇及句型，并提升热爱家乡的意识。 欢迎来到…… 一个有着……的城市 可看和可做的事情 一个必去的景点 在……的西面（不接壤） 因为 悠久的历史 美丽的风景 为了纪念 因……而著名 本地食品 传统菜式 第一眼 根据中文意思写出下列短语。 welcome to … a city with … at first sight a must-see spot to the west of because of long history beautiful landscape in memory of be famous for local food traditional dishes things to see and do 课堂训练 6 1. 这是我的旅游指南，其中包含我所在城市的旅行提示。 Here is my travel guide with travel ⁠ for my city. 2. 因为它悠久的历史和美丽的风景，西湖在联合国教科文组织名单上。 West Lake is on the UNESCO World Heritage its long history and ⁠. tips　 List because of　 beautiful landscape　 3. 我们国家有许多历史遗迹，例如长城，布达拉宫和天坛。 There are many in our country， ⁠ the Great Wall， the Potala Palace and the Temple of Heaven. 4. 建立岳王庙是为了纪念著名的将军岳飞。 The Yuewang Temple was built ⁠ the famous ⁠Yue Fei. historic sites　 such as in memory of　 general　 5.我确定你会第一眼爱上这座美丽的城市。 I’m sure you will fall in love with this beautiful city_____________. at first sight　 你的德国朋友Alex下周就要来深圳，请你写篇文章，向他介绍深圳的自然风光、人文景点、购物中心和饮食文化，可适当发挥。80词左右。 内容提示： 1.很多漂亮的主题公园（theme park)，人们喜欢在这些主题公园里休闲； 2.有漂亮的海滩，很多人喜欢去海里游泳； 3.逛街的地方很多，大家都喜欢来深圳购物； 4.还有很多美味的食物。 5.你至少补充一点。 Shenzhen is a beautiful modern city in the south of China. It’s comfortable to live here. It is called “a garden city” because there are many different kinds of theme parks. People like to relax in these parks. If you want to enjoy the seaside and go swimming in the sea, come to Shenzhen. There are long beautiful beaches and clean water. And Shenzhen has many large shops. Here, you can buy things from all over the world. After shopping, you can enjoy different kinds of delicious food, too. At night, you can go to the Citizen Square to enjoy the electric light show. What a magical night you can have! Shenzhen is a good place for you to come. Thank you！ 29 $$