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Unit 3 My School 作文范文专项
阅读下面的写作题目,参考要点完成短文。每篇含基础范文、高分范文和词句积累,请背诵并模仿使用。
Passage 1 My School
【写作要点】
1. 介绍学校的整体外观和位置
2. 描述校园里的主要建筑和场地
3. 表达对学校的感情
【基础范文】
My school is really big and nice. There are three tall buildings in it. Our classroom building is in the middle. Behind it, there is a wide sports field. We run and play games there after class. A clean dining hall stands beside the field. The food there smells and tastes delicious. We also have a small library with many storybooks. I really love my school. It is truly a good place to study and make new friends.
【高分范文】
My school is a modern and beautiful place with tall buildings around a large sports field. Our bright classroom sits on the second floor of the teaching block. Across from the field lies a clean dining hall where the food always tastes delicious. Every day, we read books in the quiet library and do exercises on the green field. I love my school very much, and I feel truly lucky to study here.
【词句积累】
高频短语:tall buildings stand around; in the middle of; across from; next to; feel lucky to do sth.
加分句型:There are three tall buildings in it. / A dining hall is next to the field. / It is a good place to study and make friends.
Passage 2 My Classroom
【写作要点】
1. 描述教室的位置和大小
2. 介绍教室内的设施和布置
3. 表达对教室的喜爱
【基础范文】
My classroom sits on the second floor. The room is big, bright and clean. At the front of the room, we have a smart whiteboard, and we read and write on it every day. Bookcases by the window hold many interesting storybooks and picture books. Our desks are brown and new. The walls are white. I like my classroom very much. It is tidy and warm every single school day.
【高分范文】
My classroom is a bright and tidy room on the second floor. At the front of the room, we have a smart whiteboard, and we read and write on it every day. Tall bookcases by the window are full of interesting storybooks and picture books. Our brown desks are clean and new. The walls are white with beautiful pictures. I feel so happy and proud to study in such a nice classroom every day.
【词句积累】
高频短语:on the second floor; on the front wall; by the window; be full of; feel happy to do sth.
加分句型:We have a smart whiteboard at the front. / Bookcases by the window hold storybooks. / It is bright and tidy every day.
Passage 3 My Best Friend at School
【写作要点】
1. 介绍朋友的姓名和外貌
2. 描述你们一起做的事情
3. 表达友谊的珍贵
【基础范文】
My best friend at school is Lucy. She is tall, kind and always wears a warm smile. We sit next to each other in class. We read books together in the library after class. During the break, we run to the sports field and play games with other classmates. She often shares her snacks and books with me. I am really lucky to have such a good friend at school. We help each other with lessons every day.
【高分范文】
My best friend at school is Lucy, a kind and tall girl with a warm smile. We sit next to each other and help each other with lessons every day. After class, we read books in the quiet library and play ball games on the field together. She often shares her snacks and favourite books with me. I feel so lucky to have such a good friend, and I hope we will stay friends forever.
【词句积累】
高频短语:sit next to each other; help each other with sth.; after class; share sth. with sb.; feel lucky to do sth.
加分句型:We sit next to each other in class. / She shares her snacks with me. / I am lucky to have her as my friend.
Passage 4 Our School Library
【写作要点】
1. 描述图书馆的位置和环境
2. 介绍图书馆里的活动
3. 表达对图书馆的感情
【基础范文】
Our school library is a quiet, clean room. It is next to the teachers' office. Bookcases along the walls hold many kinds of books, like storybooks and science books. After class, lots of students come here to read quietly. The librarians are very friendly. They always help us find the books we need. I like reading in the library very much. It is truly my favourite place at school. I go there every day.
【高分范文】
Our school library is a quiet, clean room next to the teachers' office. Bookcases along the walls hold storybooks, science books and picture books. After class, lots of students come here to read quietly at the wooden desks. The friendly librarians always help us find whatever we need. I like reading in this quiet room, and it has truly become my favourite place in the whole school. I go there every break time.
【词句积累】
高频短语:next to; line the walls; many kinds of; after class; help sb. find sth.
加分句型:It is next to the teachers' office. / They hold many kinds of books. / It is my favourite place at school.
Passage 5 My Favourite Teacher
【写作要点】
1. 介绍老师的任教学科和外貌
2. 描述老师如何帮助学生
3. 表达对老师的尊敬和感谢
【基础范文】
My favourite teacher is Miss Wang. She teaches us English. She is tall, young and always wears a kind smile. Her classes are very interesting and full of fun games and songs. She often helps us after class. When we have difficult questions, she answers them patiently and clearly. She also reads interesting English stories to us. We all like her very much. She is really a great and kind teacher.
【高分范文】
My favourite teacher is Miss Wang, our English teacher. She is a tall and young lady with a kind and warm smile. Her classes are always interesting and full of fun games and songs. After class, she patiently helps us with difficult questions and grammar. She even reads English stories aloud to us. We all respect and love her very much, and we are lucky to have her as our teacher.
【词句积累】
高频短语:teach us English; after class; help sb. with sth.; have questions; be full of fun
加分句型:She often helps us after class. / When we have questions, she answers them patiently. / She is a great teacher.
Passage 6 Our School Sports Field
【写作要点】
1. 描述操场的位置和大小
2. 描述学生在操场上的活动
3. 表达对操场的喜爱
【基础范文】
Our school has a big and beautiful sports field. It is behind the classroom building. Every morning, we do exercises together on the green grass. At break time, we run, play games and play basketball there. Some students jump and run with their friends. The teachers stand nearby and watch us with big smiles. The sports field is our favourite place after class. We always have a lot of fun there.
【高分范文】
Our school has a large sports field behind the classroom building. Every morning, we do exercises together on the soft green grass. At break time, we run, play games and play basketball with our classmates. Some students jump rope or simply walk around. The teachers stand nearby and watch us with warm smiles. The sports field is our favourite place to have fun and enjoy the fresh air after class.
【词句积累】
高频短语:behind the building; do exercises; at break time; play basketball; have fun
加分句型:Every morning, we do exercises on it. / We run and play games there. / The field is our favourite place after class.
Passage 7 The School Dining Hall
【写作要点】
1. 描述餐厅的位置和环境
2. 介绍餐厅里的食物和氛围
3. 表达对餐厅的感受
【基础范文】
Our school dining hall is a large and clean room. It sits beside the sports field. The food there smells and tastes really delicious. We eat rice, vegetables and fresh fruit every day. The kind workers keep the tables and floor clean. We sit with our friends, eat together and chat happily during lunch. The dining hall is a wonderful place to rest and share food. I like it very much.
【高分范文】
Our school dining hall is a large and bright room next to the sports field. The dishes there smell and taste really delicious, with rice, vegetables and fresh fruit every day. The kind workers keep the tables and floor clean and shiny. We sit with our good friends, eat together and chat happily during lunch. The dining hall is a wonderful place to rest, share food and enjoy our break time.
【词句积累】
高频短语:next to; taste delicious; keep the floor clean; eat and chat; a wonderful place to do sth.
加分句型:The dishes taste really delicious. / We eat and chat with friends at lunch. / I like the dining hall.
Passage 8 Our School Garden
【写作要点】
1. 描述花园的位置和景色
2. 介绍学生在花园里的活动
3. 表达对花园的喜爱
【基础范文】
Our school has a small but beautiful garden. It is behind the teachers' office. There are green trees and colourful flowers in it. Birds sing happily in the tall trees. At break time, we sit on the wooden benches and chat with friends. Some of us read books under the big trees. The air smells sweet of flowers. The garden is quiet and pretty. I really enjoy spending time there with my friends.
【高分范文】
Our school has a small but beautiful garden behind the teachers' office. Green trees and colourful flowers grow everywhere, and birds sing happily in the branches. At break time, we sit on the wooden benches, chat with friends and read books under the tall trees. The air smells sweet and fresh. The garden is quiet and pretty, and I really love to spend my short break time there with friends.
【词句积累】
高频短语:behind the office; green trees and flowers; at break time; sit on the benches; under the trees
加分句型:There are green trees and beautiful flowers in it. / We sit on the benches and chat. / The garden is quiet and pretty.
Passage 9 My Future School
【写作要点】
1. 想象未来学校的样子
2. 描述未来教室和设施的变化
3. 表达对未来学校的期待
【基础范文】
In the future, my school will change a lot. The campus will be big, bright and modern. There will also be a large indoor sports field and a new library. Classrooms will have smart screens, and we will read on small tablets. The dining hall will serve delicious food from many different places. Little robots will clean the hallways for us. I hope my dream school will be amazing and beautiful. I really cannot wait to see it come true soon.
【高分范文】
In the future, my school will change a lot. The campus will be an amazing modern place. Tall buildings will rise around a large indoor sports field. Classrooms will have smart screens, and we will read and study on tablets. The dining hall will serve delicious food from different places, and little robots will clean the hallways. I hope my future school will be big, bright and beautiful. I really cannot wait to see it come true.
【词句积累】
高频短语:in the future; change a lot; there will be; cannot wait to do sth.; hope + 宾语从句
加分句型:It will be big and modern. / There will be a large sports field. / I cannot wait to see it.
Passage 10 Welcome to Our School
【写作要点】
1. 欢迎来访并介绍学校位置
2. 介绍校园主要场所和活动
3. 邀请对方一起体验校园生活
【基础范文】
Welcome to our school! It is a big, nice and modern place. When you enter the gate, a tall classroom building stands in the middle of the yard. Behind it lies a large sports field where we do exercises and play games every day. Across from the field is a clean dining hall. The dishes there are delicious. We also have a quiet library full of interesting books. Come and visit us soon!
【高分范文】
Welcome to our school! When you step through the gate, a tall classroom building stands in the middle of the yard. Behind it lies a large sports field where we do exercises and play games every day. Across from the field is a clean dining hall with delicious food. We also have a quiet library full of interesting storybooks. You will love it here very much. Come and visit us soon!
【词句积累】
高频短语:welcome to; in the middle of; behind it; next to; come and visit us
加分句型:When you step through the gate, a tall building stands. / We play games there. / Come and visit us soon!
参考答案
Passage 1 My School
基础范文:My school is really big and nice. There are three tall buildings in it. Our classroom building is in the middle. Behind it, there is a wide sports field. We run and play games there after class. A clean dining hall stands beside the field. The food there smells and tastes delicious. We also have a small library with many storybooks. I really love my school. It is truly a good place to study and make new friends.
高分范文:My school is a modern and beautiful place with tall buildings around a large sports field. Our bright classroom sits on the second floor of the teaching block. Across from the field lies a clean dining hall where the food always tastes delicious. Every day, we read books in the quiet library and do exercises on the green field. I love my school very much, and I feel truly lucky to study here.
Passage 2 My Classroom
基础范文:My classroom sits on the second floor. The room is big, bright and clean. At the front of the room, we have a smart whiteboard, and we read and write on it every day. Bookcases by the window hold many interesting storybooks and picture books. Our desks are brown and new. The walls are white. I like my classroom very much. It is tidy and warm every single school day.
高分范文:My classroom is a bright and tidy room on the second floor. At the front of the room, we have a smart whiteboard, and we read and write on it every day. Tall bookcases by the window are full of interesting storybooks and picture books. Our brown desks are clean and new. The walls are white with beautiful pictures. I feel so happy and proud to study in such a nice classroom every day.
Passage 3 My Best Friend at School
基础范文:My best friend at school is Lucy. She is tall, kind and always wears a warm smile. We sit next to each other in class. We read books together in the library after class. During the break, we run to the sports field and play games with other classmates. She often shares her snacks and books with me. I am really lucky to have such a good friend at school. We help each other with lessons every day.
高分范文:My best friend at school is Lucy, a kind and tall girl with a warm smile. We sit next to each other and help each other with lessons every day. After class, we read books in the quiet library and play ball games on the field together. She often shares her snacks and favourite books with me. I feel so lucky to have such a good friend, and I hope we will stay friends forever.
Passage 4 Our School Library
基础范文:Our school library is a quiet, clean room. It is next to the teachers' office. Bookcases along the walls hold many kinds of books, like storybooks and science books. After class, lots of students come here to read quietly. The librarians are very friendly. They always help us find the books we need. I like reading in the library very much. It is truly my favourite place at school. I go there every day.
高分范文:Our school library is a quiet, clean room next to the teachers' office. Bookcases along the walls hold storybooks, science books and picture books. After class, lots of students come here to read quietly at the wooden desks. The friendly librarians always help us find whatever we need. I like reading in this quiet room, and it has truly become my favourite place in the whole school. I go there every break time.
Passage 5 My Favourite Teacher
基础范文:My favourite teacher is Miss Wang. She teaches us English. She is tall, young and always wears a kind smile. Her classes are very interesting and full of fun games and songs. She often helps us after class. When we have difficult questions, she answers them patiently and clearly. She also reads interesting English stories to us. We all like her very much. She is really a great and kind teacher.
高分范文:My favourite teacher is Miss Wang, our English teacher. She is a tall and young lady with a kind and warm smile. Her classes are always interesting and full of fun games and songs. After class, she patiently helps us with difficult questions and grammar. She even reads English stories aloud to us. We all respect and love her very much, and we are lucky to have her as our teacher.
Passage 6 Our School Sports Field
基础范文:Our school has a big and beautiful sports field. It is behind the classroom building. Every morning, we do exercises together on the green grass. At break time, we run, play games and play basketball there. Some students jump and run with their friends. The teachers stand nearby and watch us with big smiles. The sports field is our favourite place after class. We always have a lot of fun there.
高分范文:Our school has a large sports field behind the classroom building. Every morning, we do exercises together on the soft green grass. At break time, we run, play games and play basketball with our classmates. Some students jump rope or simply walk around. The teachers stand nearby and watch us with warm smiles. The sports field is our favourite place to have fun and enjoy the fresh air after class.
Passage 7 The School Dining Hall
基础范文:Our school dining hall is a large and clean room. It sits beside the sports field. The food there smells and tastes really delicious. We eat rice, vegetables and fresh fruit every day. The kind workers keep the tables and floor clean. We sit with our friends, eat together and chat happily during lunch. The dining hall is a wonderful place to rest and share food. I like it very much.
高分范文:Our school dining hall is a large and bright room next to the sports field. The dishes there smell and taste really delicious, with rice, vegetables and fresh fruit every day. The kind workers keep the tables and floor clean and shiny. We sit with our good friends, eat together and chat happily during lunch. The dining hall is a wonderful place to rest, share food and enjoy our break time.
Passage 8 Our School Garden
基础范文:Our school has a small but beautiful garden. It is behind the teachers' office. There are green trees and colourful flowers in it. Birds sing happily in the tall trees. At break time, we sit on the wooden benches and chat with friends. Some of us read books under the big trees. The air smells sweet of flowers. The garden is quiet and pretty. I really enjoy spending time there with my friends.
高分范文:Our school has a small but beautiful garden behind the teachers' office. Green trees and colourful flowers grow everywhere, and birds sing happily in the branches. At break time, we sit on the wooden benches, chat with friends and read books under the tall trees. The air smells sweet and fresh. The garden is quiet and pretty, and I really love to spend my short break time there with friends.
Passage 9 My Future School
基础范文:In the future, my school will change a lot. The campus will be big, bright and modern. There will also be a large indoor sports field and a new library. Classrooms will have smart screens, and we will read on small tablets. The dining hall will serve delicious food from many different places. Little robots will clean the hallways for us. I hope my dream school will be amazing and beautiful. I really cannot wait to see it come true soon.
高分范文:In the future, my school will change a lot. The campus will be an amazing modern place. Tall buildings will rise around a large indoor sports field. Classrooms will have smart screens, and we will read and study on tablets. The dining hall will serve delicious food from different places, and little robots will clean the hallways. I hope my future school will be big, bright and beautiful. I really cannot wait to see it come true.
Passage 10 Welcome to Our School
基础范文:Welcome to our school! It is a big, nice and modern place. When you enter the gate, a tall classroom building stands in the middle of the yard. Behind it lies a large sports field where we do exercises and play games every day. Across from the field is a clean dining hall. The dishes there are delicious. We also have a quiet library full of interesting books. Come and visit us soon!
高分范文:Welcome to our school! When you step through the gate, a tall classroom building stands in the middle of the yard. Behind it lies a large sports field where we do exercises and play games every day. Across from the field is a clean dining hall with delicious food. We also have a quiet library full of interesting storybooks. You will love it here very much. Come and visit us soon!
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