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Starter Unit1-3 高分重点作文范文 2026-2027学年新人教七年级英语上册
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话题一:向新同学问好(Starter Unit 1)
【题目要求】假设你是Li Ming,是一名七年级新生。开学第一天早上,你在校门口遇到一位新同学。请你用英语写一段话,向对方问好并介绍自己。
【写作要点】
1. 先用英语向对方问好;
2. 说出自己的名字,并把名字拼写出来;
3. 说一句欢迎对方、愿意做朋友的话。
【参考范文】(60词左右)
Good morning! I am Li Ming, and I am a new student here. Nice to meet you! Let me spell my name: L-I-M-I-N-G. I am in Class One. Everyone here is nice and friendly. Welcome to our school! Let us greet each other and start a good conversation. I am happy to be your friend.
【亮点词句】Nice to meet you!(很高兴见到你!);spell one's name(拼写某人的名字);start a conversation(开始交谈)
【评分要点】要点齐全,问候与自我介绍清楚(4分);问候语与拼写表达正确(3分);单词拼写、大小写与标点正确(2分);卷面整洁、书写规范(1分)
【写作点拨】greet 是动词,后直接接人,如 greet each other(互相问候);everyone 作主语时谓语用单数,如 Everyone is nice;拼写名字用 spell my name。
话题二:我的书包(Starter Unit 2)
【题目要求】假设你是Li Ming。请你用英语写一段话,介绍一下你的书包和里面的东西。
【写作要点】
1. 说明你的书包是什么颜色的;
2. 写一写书包里有哪些东西,各是什么颜色,注意用名词复数;
3. 说一句你喜欢自己书包的话。
【参考范文】(60词左右)
This is my schoolbag. It is blue, and I like it very much. What is in it? Let me show you. A bottle is in it, and it is orange. Two erasers are in it, and they are white. Three keys are in it, and they are yellow. I have many things in my schoolbag, and they are all my good friends.
【亮点词句】What is in it?(里面有什么?);two erasers / three keys(名词复数);like ... very much(非常喜欢……)
【评分要点】要点齐全,物品与颜色表达正确(4分);名词单复数与介词使用正确(3分);单词拼写与标点正确(2分);卷面整洁、书写规范(1分)
【写作点拨】名词复数在词尾加-s,如 erasers、keys;颜色作表语时前面不加冠词,如 It is blue,不说 It is a blue;表示“书包里有什么”用 What is in it?。
话题三:我家的农场(Starter Unit 3)
【题目要求】假设你是Li Ming。请你用英语写一段话,介绍一下你家的农场里有什么。
【写作要点】
1. 说明农场里有什么动物;
2. 用英语数一数动物的数量;
3. 说一句农场里还有什么、你喜欢农场的话。
【参考范文】(60词左右)
My grandpa has a farm, and it is fun. Two geese are in the yard, and they are white. Five rabbits are on the farm, and they are cute. I count them: one, two, three, four, five, six, seven! “How many geese do we have?” Grandpa asks. “Two!” I answer. What else is on the farm? Many carrots. I want another carrot for dinner. I like the farm, and I want to go there again.
【亮点词句】count them(数一数它们);How many ... do we have?(我们有多少……?);What else?(还有什么?);another carrot(另一根胡萝卜)
【评分要点】要点齐全,动物与数量表达正确(4分);How many 句型与名词复数使用正确(3分);单词拼写与标点正确(2分);卷面整洁、书写规范(1分)
【写作点拨】How many 后接名词复数,如 How many geese do we have?;goose 的复数是不规则的 geese,不说 gooses;rabbit 的复数是 rabbits;another 后跟单数名词,如 another carrot;else 常放在 what 等疑问词后面,如 What else?。
话题四:我家的院子(Starter Unit 3)
【题目要求】假设你是Li Ming。请你用英语写一段话,介绍一下你家的院子。
【写作要点】
1. 说明你的院子在哪里、是什么样子的;
2. 写一写院子里有什么,包括胡萝卜和鹅;
3. 说一句你在院子里玩得很开心的话。
【参考范文】(60词左右)
I have a small yard behind my house. It is clean and nice. Two geese are in the yard, and they are white. My mother grows carrots there, and we have many carrots in autumn. After school, I count the carrots and draw circles on the ground with my friends. It is great fun in the yard!
【亮点词句】in the yard(在院子里);two geese(复数不规则变化);It is great fun.(非常有趣)
【评分要点】要点齐全,院子与物品描写清楚(4分);名词复数与介词使用正确(3分);单词拼写与标点正确(2分);卷面整洁、书写规范(1分)
【写作点拨】goose 的复数是不规则的 geese,不说 gooses;表示“在院子里”用 in the yard;说某事有趣用 It is fun,不说 It fun。
话题五:我的房间(综合:Starter Unit 1–Unit 3)
【题目要求】假设你是Li Ming。请你用英语写一段话,介绍一下你的房间。
【写作要点】
1. 说明房间里的东西放在哪里(用 in、on、under);
2. 写一写房间里东西的颜色;
3. 说一句你喜欢房间、和朋友在这里玩得很开心的话。
【基础版参考范文】(60词左右)
This is my room. It is small, but it is clean and nice. My books are on the desk, and my pen is in my pencil box. A bottle is on the desk, and it is orange. My schoolbag is under the desk, and my keys are in it. A bell is on the desk. We learn a new unit today. I like my room very much.
【提升版参考范文】(80词左右)
Look at my room! It is small, but it is clean and tidy. My books are on the desk, and they are new. My bottle is next to my schoolbag, and it is orange. My keys are in the pencil box. My schoolbag is under the desk. “What colour are the rulers?” My friend asks. “They are green,” I answer. We have a good conversation in my room. Everyone likes my room, and it is great fun to play here.
【亮点词句】in / on / under(位置介词);What colour are ...?(……是什么颜色?);have a good conversation(进行一次愉快的交谈);It is great fun.(非常有趣)
【评分要点】要点齐全,物品位置与颜色表达正确(4分);介词 in/on/under 与名词复数使用正确(3分);单词拼写与标点正确(2分);卷面整洁、书写规范(1分)
【写作点拨】表示位置用介词 in(在……里)、on(在……上)、under(在……下),如 Some books are in/on/under the box;颜色作表语时前面不加冠词,如 It is orange,不说 It is an orange;复数名词前用 What colour are ...?,如 What colour are the rulers?。
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