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新译林版八年级上册 Unit 1 Friendship
书面表达素材积累(优秀短语30个 & 句型15个 & 高分范文5篇)
单元主题:Friendship 友谊
写作任务:介绍朋友;描述朋友外貌、性格、爱好;谈谈你对友谊的理解;如何维系友谊
一、优秀短语30个(按写作场景分类,标注写作星级)
【外貌描写 8个】
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1. be tall and slim 又高又苗条
2. have short / long hair 留短/长发
3. wear glasses 戴眼镜
4. have a smile on one’s face 脸上带着微笑
5. look friendly 看起来友好
6. big bright eyes 明亮的大眼睛
7. of medium height 中等身高
8. good-looking 好看的
【性格品质 10个(作文高分核心)】
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9. be kind to sb. 对某人友善
10. be ready to help others 乐于助人
11. have a good sense of humour 有幽默感
12. keep secrets 保守秘密
13. be honest 诚实的
14. never tell lies 从不撒谎
15. be patient 有耐心的
16. be generous 大方的
17. be polite 有礼貌的
18. share joy and worries 分享快乐与烦恼
【爱好与日常 6个】
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19. like doing sth. 喜欢做某事
20. be good at / do well in 擅长于
21. take part in after-school activities 参加课外活动
22. spend time doing sth. 花时间做某事
23. listen to music 听音乐
24. play ball games 进行球类运动
【友谊观点、结尾升华 6个(加分短语)】
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25. make friends with sb. 和某人交朋友
26. a true friend 一位真正的朋友
27. be important to sb. 对某人很重要
28. stay with sb. 和某人相伴
29. help sb. in need 在需要时帮助某人
30. cherish friendship 珍惜友谊
二、高分句型15个(基础句→进阶句,可直接背诵套用)
【基础句型(保底得分,简单句)】
1. I have a good friend. His / Her name is …
我有一个好朋友,他/她名叫……
2. He/She is … years old. He/She is from …
他/她……岁,来自……
3. He/She has … and wears …
他/她有着……,戴着……
4. He/She likes … and he/she is good at …
他/她喜欢……,并且擅长……
5. He/She is always ready to help me when I have problems.
当我遇到难题时,他/她总是乐于帮助我。
【进阶句型(提升档次,推荐优先背诵)】
6. He/She has a good sense of humour and often makes me laugh.
他/她很有幽默感,经常逗我笑。
7. A true friend can keep secrets for me and never tell lies.
真正的朋友会为我保守秘密,从不撒谎。
8. He/She is kind to everyone around him/her.
他/她对身边每一个人都很友善。
9. We often share our joy and worries with each other.
我们经常互相分享喜悦和烦恼。
10. When I feel sad, he/she always stays with me.
当我难过的时候,他/她一直陪伴我。
【升华句型(结尾高分句,适合放在文末)】
11. Friendship plays an important role in our life.
友谊在我们生活中扮演重要角色。
12. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难见真情。(谚语,阅卷加分)
13. I hope our friendship will last forever.
我希望我们的友谊长存。
14. I feel lucky to have such a good friend.
拥有这样一位好朋友,我感到很幸运。
15. We should cherish our friendship.
我们应当珍惜我们的友谊。
三、高分范文5篇(难度梯度:基础2篇 + 提升2篇 + 升华观点1篇)
►范文1【基础版|介绍我的好朋友(80词左右)】
My Best Friend
I have a best friend. Her name is Millie. She is 12 years old. She is tall and slim. She has long hair and big bright eyes. She wears glasses.
Millie is kind and honest. She has a good sense of humour. She is always ready to help others. She likes reading and she is good at English.
We often share our joy and worries. I feel lucky to have her. I hope our friendship will last forever.
►范文2【基础版|我的好朋友Tom(75词左右)】
My Best Friend
Tom is my best friend. He is twelve. He is of medium height. He has short black hair. He looks friendly.
Tom is generous and polite. He never tells lies. He loves playing basketball. He is good at it. When I am in trouble, he always helps me.
We often take part in after-school activities together. A friend in need is a friend indeed. I cherish our friendship very much.
►范文3【提升版|介绍好友(90词左右,适合冲高分)】
My Best Friend
I’m lucky to have a good friend called Amy. She is 12 years old. She has a smile on her face all the time. She has big bright eyes and long hair.
Amy has a good sense of humour. She often tells funny stories and makes me laugh. She is honest and can keep secrets for me. She is good at drawing. In her free time, she enjoys listening to music.
We share joy and worries with each other. When I feel sad, she stays with me. I hope our friendship will last forever.
►范文4【提升版|What is a good friend?(95词,半观点类)】
What is a good friend?
Everyone needs friends. A good friend is important to us.
I think a good friend should be kind and honest. He or she never tells lies and can keep secrets. A good friend is ready to help you when you are in need. My best friend is Simon. He is tall. He likes playing football. We often spend time together after school.
We share our feelings. A friend in need is a friend indeed. We should cherish our friendship.
►范文5【拔高观点版|Friendship(100词,期末/单元测试压轴)】
Friendship
Friendship is very important in our life. No one can live alone without friends.
What is a true friend? A true friend is kind and patient. He or she can keep secrets and share joy and worries with you. When you meet problems, he or she will give you a hand. My best friend is Lily. She looks friendly and has a good sense of humour. She likes reading.
We often take part in after-school activities together. A friend in need is a friend indeed. I feel lucky to have her. I hope our friendship will last forever.
【写作小贴士】
1. 词数控制:70–100词,七年级单元写作标准;
2. 人称:介绍朋友多用一般现在时;主谓一致注意三单;
3. 加分技巧:文末可以直接使用谚语 A friend in need is a friend indeed;
4. 易错提醒:be good at + doing;spend … doing;keep secrets(secret可复数)
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