Unit7 写作专项训练 2026-2027学年译林版英语八年级上册

译林版八年级英语（上册）Unit 7 The natural world 写作专项训练 写作任务 · 审题要点 · 写作框架 · 词汇短语 · 句式练习 · 高级句型 · 写作实战 班级：____________ 姓名：____________ 日期：____________ 一、写作任务（Writing Task） 大自然是人类共同的家园。请以 “Protecting Nature” 为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈保护大自然的重要性。 ● 意义：说明大自然为我们提供了什么； ● 问题：指出大自然正面临的问题； ● 呼吁：提出保护大自然的建议并呼吁。 要求：1) 110 词左右；2) 内容可适当发挥；3) 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 二、审题要点（Analyzing the Prompt） ● 人称（Person）：以第一人称 we / I 为主。 ● 时态（Tense）：谈现状与建议用一般现在时。 ● 文体（Genre）：说明文（倡议类短文）。 ● 结构（Structure）：点题 → 说明意义与问题 → 提出建议、发出呼吁。 ● 要点（Content）：意义 + 问题 + 呼吁，三点齐全。 ● 语言（Language）：多用条件状语从句与非谓语动词，适当使用 only 倒装与宾语从句。 三、写作框架（Writing Framework） 段落 要点内容 常用句型 / 提示 开头段 说明大自然是我们的家园及其重要性。 Nature is our common home, which ... 主体段 指出大自然面临的问题与原因。 However, ... . Because of ..., ... . If we ..., ... 结尾段 提出建议并发出呼吁。 Facing ..., we should ... . Only by ... can we ... 四、词汇短语积累（Vocabulary） 1. 本单元课后重点词汇（含音标） 单词 音标 词性·释义 nature /ˈneɪtʃə(r)/ n. 大自然 ecosystem /ˈiːkəʊsɪstəm/ n. 生态系统 rainfall /ˈreɪnfɔːl/ n. 降雨量 wetland /ˈwetlənd/ n. 湿地 include /ɪnˈkluːd/ vt. 包括 heat /hiːt/ n. 热；热量 pond /pɒnd/ n. 池塘 crop /krɒp/ n. 庄稼，作物 prevent /prɪˈvent/ vt. 防止，阻止 growth /ɡrəʊθ/ n. 生长，发育 coral /ˈkɒrəl/ n. 珊瑚 penguin /ˈpeŋɡwɪn/ n. 企鹅 soil /sɔɪl/ n. 土壤 oxygen /ˈɒksɪdʒən/ n. 氧气 carbon dioxide /ˈkɑːbən daɪˈɒksaɪd/ n. 二氧化碳 climate /ˈklaɪmət/ n. 气候 provide /prəˈvaɪd/ vt. 提供 pollute /pəˈluːt/ vt. 污染 2. 重点短语与搭配（课后 + 写作） 英文 中文 get rid of 清除；摆脱 divide ... into ... 把……分成…… take in 吸收 provide ... with ... 为……提供…… be made up of 由……组成 depend on 依靠 play a role in 在……中起作用 cut down 砍倒 3. 练一练：用所给词的适当形式填空。 1. Water is very important for the ____________ (grow) of plants. 2. Trees can provide us with ____________ (oxygen). 3. We should try to ____________ (prevent) pollution. 4. The wetlands ____________ (include) many kinds of animals. 5. Air ____________ (pollute) is bad for our health. 4. 练一练：把下列句子译成英语。 1. 大自然是我们共同的家园。 → ________________________________________________________ 2. 树木为我们提供清新的空气。 → ________________________________________________________ 3. 我们应该保护湿地和森林。 → ________________________________________________________ 4. 如果我们不保护环境，地球将会变得越来越糟。 → ________________________________________________________ 5. 只有保护好大自然，我们才能有美好的未来。 → ________________________________________________________ 五、句式练习（核心句式） 1. Nature is our common home, which provides us with air, water and food. 大自然是我们的共同家园，它为我们提供空气、水和食物。 2. However, nature is now facing serious problems. 然而，大自然现在面临严重的问题。 3. If we don’t take action, we will lose our beautiful home. 如果我们不采取行动，就会失去美丽的家园。 4. Facing serious problems, we should protect wetlands, forests and oceans. 面对严重的问题，我们应保护湿地、森林和海洋。 5. Only by protecting nature can we have a bright future. 只有保护大自然，我们才能有美好的未来。 六、进阶高级句型练习（Advanced Patterns） 1. 定语从句：Nature is something that we should protect. 2. 条件状语从句：If we protect nature, nature will protect us. 3. 宾语从句：I think that everyone should play a role in protecting nature. 4. 非谓语动词：Facing serious pollution, we must take action. 5. 倒装句：Only by protecting nature can we have a bright future. 练一练：按要求改写句子。 1. Nature is something. We should protect it.（用定语从句合并） → ________________________________________________________ 2. We protect nature. Nature will protect us.（用 if 合并） → ________________________________________________________ 3. Everyone should play a role in protecting nature. I think.（用宾语从句合并） → ________________________________________________________ 4. We must take action. We face serious pollution.（用非谓语动词改写） → ________________________________________________________ 5. We can have a bright future. We protect nature.（用 only 倒装改写） → ________________________________________________________ 七、写作实战（Writing） 小试牛刀：先补全下面的引导作文（每空一词或一短语），再用完整的句子写一篇短文。 ① 引导训练（填空） Nature is our common home, which provides us with air, water and food. However, nature is now facing serious problems. Because of pollution and cutting down trees, the environment is getting worse. If we don’t take ____________ (行动), we will lose our beautiful home. Therefore, it is everyone’s ____________ (责任) to protect nature. Facing serious problems, we should protect wetlands, forests and oceans. Only by protecting nature can we have a bright future. I believe that a green world is waiting for us. ② 独立写作 要求：110 词左右，要点齐全，适当运用高级句型。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案（Answer Key） （供教师使用，打印学生版时可删除本页） 四、词汇短语 · 词形填空 1. growth 2. oxygen 3. prevent 4. include 5. pollution 四、词汇短语 · 汉译英 1. Nature is our common home. 2. Trees provide us with fresh air. 3. We should protect wetlands and forests. 4. If we don’t protect the environment, the earth will get worse and worse. 5. Only by protecting nature can we have a bright future. 六、进阶句型 · 改写 1. Nature is something that we should protect. 2. If we protect nature, nature will protect us. 3. I think that everyone should play a role in protecting nature. 4. Facing serious pollution, we must take action. 5. Only by protecting nature can we have a bright future. 七、写作实战 · 参考范文（约 110 词） Nature is our common home, which provides us with air, water and food. However, nature is now facing serious problems. Because of pollution and cutting down trees, the environment is getting worse. If we don’t take action, we will lose our beautiful home. Therefore, it is everyone’s duty to protect nature. Facing serious problems, we should protect wetlands, forests and oceans. Only by protecting nature can we have a bright future. I believe that a green world is waiting for us. 【高级句型】定语从句(which)、原因状语(because of ...)、条件状语从句(If ...)、非谓语动词(Facing ...)、倒装句(Only by ... can we ...)、宾语从句(I believe that ...) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $