Unit8 写作专项训练 2026-2027学年译林版英语八年级上册

译林版八年级英语（上册）Unit 8 Safe and sound 写作专项训练 写作任务 · 审题要点 · 写作框架 · 词汇短语 · 句式练习 · 高级句型 · 写作实战 班级：____________ 姓名：____________ 日期：____________ 一、写作任务（Writing Task） 安全无小事。请以 “How to Keep Safe” 为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何保护自己、注意安全。 ● 意识：说明安全的重要性； ● 做法：介绍遇到危险时的正确做法； ● 呼吁：呼吁大家注意安全。 要求：1) 110 词左右；2) 内容可适当发挥；3) 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 二、审题要点（Analyzing the Prompt） ● 人称（Person）：以第一人称 we / I 为主。 ● 时态（Tense）：谈建议用一般现在时。 ● 文体（Genre）：说明文（建议类短文）。 ● 结构（Structure）：点题 → 分点介绍做法 → 发出呼吁。 ● 要点（Content）：安全重要性 + 正确做法 + 呼吁，三点齐全。 ● 语言（Language）：多用条件/时间状语从句与非谓语动词，适当使用 only 倒装与宾语从句。 三、写作框架（Writing Framework） 段落 要点内容 常用句型 / 提示 开头段 点明安全最重要，需要保护自己。 Safety is the most important thing ... , so ... 主体段 分点介绍遇到危险时的正确做法。 When ..., ... . If ..., ... . Besides, ... 结尾段 呼吁大家注意安全。 Only by following the rules can we ... . I hope that ... 四、词汇短语积累（Vocabulary） 1. 本单元课后重点词汇（含音标） 单词 音标 词性·释义 safety /ˈseɪfti/ n. 安全 safe /seɪf/ adj. 安全的 warn /wɔːn/ vt. 警告 flood /flʌd/ n. 洪水 earthquake /ˈɜːθkweɪk/ n. 地震 storm /stɔːm/ n. 暴风雨 danger /ˈdeɪndʒə(r)/ n. 危险 escape /ɪˈskeɪp/ v. 逃脱 rescue /ˈreskjuː/ vt. 营救 guard /ɡɑːd/ vt. 守卫 emergency /ɪˈmɜːdʒənsi/ n. 紧急情况 prevent /prɪˈvent/ vt. 防止，阻止 careless /ˈkeələs/ adj. 粗心的 accident /ˈæksɪdənt/ n. 事故 calm /kɑːm/ adj. 镇静的 rule /ruːl/ n. 规则 advice /ədˈvaɪs/ n. 建议 protect /prəˈtekt/ vt. 保护 2. 重点短语与搭配（课后 + 写作） 英文 中文 keep away from 远离 guard against 防范，提防 in danger 处于危险中 first aid 急救 take care 当心 stay calm 保持镇静 run out of 用完 pay attention to 注意 3. 练一练：用所给词的适当形式填空。 1. ____________ (safe) is the most important thing in our life. 2. We should stay ____________ (calm) when we are in danger. 3. Students must follow the traffic ____________ (rule). 4. It is ____________ (care) of you to leave the door open. 5. We should try to ____________ (prevention) accidents. 4. 练一练：把下列句子译成英语。 1. 安全是最重要的。 → ________________________________________________________ 2. 我们应该远离危险。 → ________________________________________________________ 3. 遇到危险时，要保持镇静。 → ________________________________________________________ 4. 如果发生地震，请迅速躲到桌子下面。 → ________________________________________________________ 5. 只有遵守规则，我们才能保证安全。 → ________________________________________________________ 五、句式练习（核心句式） 1. Safety is the most important thing in our life. 安全是我们生活中最重要的事。 2. We should stay away from danger. 我们应该远离危险。 3. When an earthquake happens, we must stay calm. 地震发生时，我们必须保持镇静。 4. If a fire breaks out, we should call 119 at once. 如果发生火灾，我们应立即拨打119。 5. Only by following the rules can we keep safe. 只有遵守规则，我们才能保证安全。 六、进阶高级句型练习（Advanced Patterns） 1. 条件状语从句：If a fire breaks out, call 119 at once. 2. 时间状语从句：When an earthquake happens, stay calm. 3. 宾语从句：I think that we should learn some safety knowledge. 4. 非谓语动词：Facing danger, we must stay calm. 5. 倒装句：Only by following the rules can we keep safe. 练一练：按要求改写句子。 1. A fire breaks out. Call 119 at once.（用 if 合并） → ________________________________________________________ 2. An earthquake happens. Stay calm.（用 when 合并） → ________________________________________________________ 3. We should learn some safety knowledge. I think.（用宾语从句合并） → ________________________________________________________ 4. We must stay calm. We face danger.（用非谓语动词改写） → ________________________________________________________ 5. We can keep safe. We follow the rules.（用 only 倒装改写） → ________________________________________________________ 七、写作实战（Writing） 小试牛刀：先补全下面的引导作文（每空一词或一短语），再用完整的句子写一篇短文。 ① 引导训练（填空） Safety is the most important thing in our life, so we should always keep ourselves ____________ (安全). First, we should stay away from danger. When an earthquake happens, we must stay ____________ (镇静) and hide under a strong desk. If a fire breaks out, we should call 119 at once. Besides, it is necessary to learn some safety ____________ (知识), such as first aid. Facing danger, we must not be too ____________ (粗心的). Only by following the rules can we keep safe. I hope that everyone will pay more attention to safety. ② 独立写作 要求：110 词左右，要点齐全，适当运用高级句型。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案（Answer Key） （供教师使用，打印学生版时可删除本页） 四、词汇短语 · 词形填空 1. Safety 2. calm 3. rules 4. careless 5. prevent 四、词汇短语 · 汉译英 1. Safety is the most important thing. 2. We should stay away from danger. 3. We should stay calm when we are in danger. 4. If an earthquake happens, hide under a desk quickly. 5. Only by following the rules can we keep safe. 六、进阶句型 · 改写 1. If a fire breaks out, call 119 at once. 2. When an earthquake happens, stay calm. 3. I think that we should learn some safety knowledge. 4. Facing danger, we must stay calm. 5. Only by following the rules can we keep safe. 七、写作实战 · 参考范文（约 110 词） Safety is the most important thing in our life, so we should always keep ourselves safe. First, we should stay away from danger. When an earthquake happens, we must stay calm and hide under a strong desk. If a fire breaks out, we should call 119 at once. Besides, it is necessary to learn some safety knowledge, such as first aid. Facing danger, we must not be too careless. Only by following the rules can we keep safe. I hope that everyone will pay more attention to safety. 【高级句型】时间状语从句(When ...)、条件状语从句(If ...)、非谓语动词(Facing ...)、倒装句(Only by ... can we ...)、宾语从句(I think that / I hope that) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $