Unit1 写作专项训练 2026-2027学年译林版英语八年级上册

译林版八年级英语（上册）Unit 1 Friendship 写作专项训练 写作任务 · 审题要点 · 写作框架 · 词汇短语 · 句式练习 · 高级句型 · 写作实战 班级：____________ 姓名：____________ 日期：____________ 一、写作任务（Writing Task） 朋友是我们成长路上的宝贵财富。请以 “My Best Friend” 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最好的朋友。 ● 人物：介绍你最好的朋友及其品质； ● 事例：用一件具体的事说明他/她的好； ● 感受：写出这段友谊对你的意义。 要求：1) 110 词左右；2) 内容可适当发挥；3) 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 二、审题要点（Analyzing the Prompt） ● 人称（Person）：以第一人称 I 为主，介绍朋友用 he / she。 ● 时态（Tense）：谈现状用一般现在时，叙述往事用一般过去时。 ● 文体（Genre）：记叙文（写人叙事）。 ● 结构（Structure）：点题 → 举例 → 感受。 ● 要点（Content）：朋友 + 品质/事例 + 友谊的意义，三点齐全。 ● 语言（Language）：多用定语从句、原因状语从句，适当使用强调句与宾语从句。 三、写作框架（Writing Framework） 段落 要点内容 常用句型 / 提示 开头段 点明谁是你最好的朋友。 The best friend I have is ..., who ... 主体段 用一件具体的事说明他/她的好。 He is ... . For example, ... . Whenever ..., he ... 结尾段 写出这段友谊对你的意义。 I think that ... . I am lucky to ... 四、词汇短语积累（Vocabulary） 1. 本单元课后重点词汇（含音标） 单词 音标 词性·释义 friendship /ˈfrendʃɪp/ n. 友谊 honest /ˈɒnɪst/ adj. 诚实的 cheerful /ˈtʃɪəfl/ adj. 快乐的，高兴的 humorous /ˈhjuːmərəs/ adj. 幽默的 trustworthy /ˈtrʌstwɜːði/ adj. 值得信赖的 thoughtful /ˈθɔːtfl/ adj. 体贴的 patient /ˈpeɪʃnt/ adj. 有耐心的 brave /breɪv/ adj. 勇敢的 teenager /ˈtiːneɪdʒə(r)/ n. 青少年 badminton /ˈbædmɪntən/ n. 羽毛球运动 joke /dʒəʊk/ n. 笑话，玩笑 nearby /ˈnɪəbaɪ/ adv. 在附近 secret /ˈsiːkrət/ n. 秘密 feeling /ˈfiːlɪŋ/ n. 情感；感觉 trust /trʌst/ n. 信任 ponytail /ˈpəʊniteɪl/ n. 马尾辫 danger /ˈdeɪndʒə(r)/ n. 危险 person /ˈpɜːsn/ n. 人，个人 2. 重点短语与搭配（课后 + 写作） 英文 中文 get along with sb 与某人和睦相处 keep secrets 保守秘密 cheer up 使振作起来 be ready to help others 乐于助人 share ... with ... 与……分享…… look forward to 期待 make friends with 与……交朋友 be loyal to 对……忠诚 3. 练一练：用所给词的适当形式填空。 1. ____________ (friend) is very important in our life. 2. My best friend Tom is a ____________ (humour) boy. 3. My teacher is very ____________ (patience) with us. 4. We should always be ____________ (honesty) to our friends. 5. She is a ____________ (thought) girl who always cares about others. 4. 练一练：把下列句子译成英语。 1. 我最好的朋友是一个诚实又幽默的男孩。 → ________________________________________________________ 2. 每当我遇到困难，他都会伸出援手。 → ________________________________________________________ 3. 我们总是互相保守秘密。 → ________________________________________________________ 4. 我认为真正的朋友会与你同甘共苦。 → ________________________________________________________ 5. 正是他的善良让他如此受欢迎。 → ________________________________________________________ 五、句式练习（核心句式） 1. The best friend I have is ..., who is always ready to help others. 我最好的朋友是…… 2. He is not only honest but also humorous. 他既诚实又幽默。 3. Whenever I am in trouble, he gives me a hand. 每当我有困难，他都会帮我。 4. It is his kindness that makes him popular. 正是他的善良让他受欢迎。 5. I think that a true friend shares both joys and sorrows. 我认为真正的朋友会同甘共苦。 六、进阶高级句型练习（Advanced Patterns） 1. 定语从句：He is a friend who is always ready to help others. 2. 宾语从句：I think that a true friend shares both joys and sorrows. 3. 原因状语从句：Because he is honest, everyone trusts him. 4. 时间状语从句：Whenever I am in trouble, he gives me a hand. 5. 强调句：It is his kindness that makes him popular. 练一练：按要求改写句子。 1. He is a friend. He is always ready to help others.（用定语从句合并） → ________________________________________________________ 2. He is honest. Everyone trusts him.（用 because 合并） → ________________________________________________________ 3. I am in trouble. He gives me a hand.（用 whenever 合并） → ________________________________________________________ 4. His kindness makes him popular.（用强调句改写） → ________________________________________________________ 5. A true friend shares both joys and sorrows. I think.（用宾语从句合并） → ________________________________________________________ 七、写作实战（Writing） 小试牛刀：先补全下面的引导作文（每空一词或一短语），再用完整的句子写一篇短文。 ① 引导训练（填空） The best friend I have is Tom, who is always ____________ (乐于助人). He is not only ____________ (诚实的) but also humorous. He often tells jokes and makes us laugh. Whenever I am in ____________ (麻烦), he always ____________ (伸出援手). It is his kindness that ____________ (使……受欢迎) him. What’s more, ____________ (因为) he is trustworthy, we always keep secrets for each other. I think that a true friend is someone who ____________ (分享) both joys and sorrows. I am lucky to have a friend like him. ② 独立写作 要求：110 词左右，要点齐全，适当运用高级句型。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案（Answer Key） （供教师使用，打印学生版时可删除本页） 四、词汇短语 · 词形填空 1. Friendship 2. humorous 3. patient 4. honest 5. thoughtful 四、词汇短语 · 汉译英 1. My best friend is an honest and humorous boy. 2. Whenever I am in trouble, he gives me a hand. 3. We always keep secrets for each other. 4. I think that a true friend shares both joys and sorrows. 5. It is his kindness that makes him so popular. 六、进阶句型 · 改写 1. He is a friend who is always ready to help others. 2. Because he is honest, everyone trusts him. 3. Whenever I am in trouble, he gives me a hand. 4. It is his kindness that makes him popular. 5. I think that a true friend shares both joys and sorrows. 七、写作实战 · 参考范文（约 110 词） The best friend I have is Tom, who is always ready to help others. He is not only honest but also humorous. He often tells jokes and makes us laugh. Whenever I am in trouble, he always gives me a hand. It is his kindness that makes him popular. What’s more, because he is trustworthy, we always keep secrets for each other. I think that a true friend is someone who shares both joys and sorrows. I am lucky to have such a good friend. 【高级句型】定语从句(who)、not only ... but also ...、时间状语从句(Whenever)、强调句(It is ... that ...)、原因状语从句(because ...)、宾语从句(I think that ...) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $