Unit 4 写作专项训练 2026-2027学年译林版八年级英语上册

译林版八年级英语(上册)Unit 4 Hands-on fun 写作专项训练 写作任务 审题要点 写作框架 词汇短语 句式练习 高级句型 写作实战 班级: 姓名: 日期: 一、写作任务(Writing Task) 自己动手,其乐无穷。请以 “My DIY Experience” 为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍一次你动手实践的经历。 事情:介绍你做的是什么; 过程:描述做的时候遇到的困难与解决办法; 收获:写出你从中的收获或感悟。 要求:1) 110 词左右;2) 内容可适当发挥;3) 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 二、审题要点(Analyzing the Prompt) 人称(Person):以第一人称 I 为主。 时态(Tense):叙述经过用一般过去时。 文体(Genre):记叙文(叙事类)。 结构(Structure):点题 叙述过程 收获感悟。 要点(Content):事件 + 过程 + 收获,三点齐全。 语言(Language):多用时间/让步状语从句与非谓语动词,适当使用强调句与宾语从句。 三、写作框架(Writing Framework) 段落 要点内容 常用句型 / 提示 开头段 点明你做的是什么,有什么感受。 Last weekend, I tried to , which 主体段 描述做事的过程与遇到的困难。 While I was , I . Although , I didn’t give up. Trying , I finally 结尾段 写出你的收获或感悟。 From this experience, I have learned that . It is that 四、词汇短语积累(Vocabulary) 1. 本单元课后重点词汇(含音标) 单词 音标 词性 释义 DIY / di a wa / n. 自己动手 handyman / h ndim n/ n. 手巧的人 crazy / kre zi/ adj. 狂热的;迷恋的 mistake /m ste k/ n. 错误 pipe /pa p/ n. 管道,管子 glue / lu / n. 胶,胶水 tape /te p/ n. 胶带 fold /f ld/ vt. 折叠 complete /k m pli t/ adj. 完成的;全部的 instead / n sted/ adv. 反而 mess /mes/ n. 杂乱,不整洁 lamp /l mp/ n. 灯 impossible / m p s bl/ adj. 不可能的 nearly / n li/ adv. 几乎,差不多 power cut / pa k t/ n. 断电,停电 unlucky / n l ki/ adj. 不幸的,不顺利的 course /k s/ n. 课程 everywhere / evriwe (r)/ adv. 到处 2. 重点短语与搭配(课后 + 写作) 英文 中文 be crazy about 热衷于 in a mess 乱七八糟 fill with 使……充满…… catch one's eye 引起某人注意 instead of 代替 put up 张贴;搭建 try out 尝试 make a mistake 犯错误 3. 练一练:用所给词的适当形式填空。 1. My brother is (crazy) about DIY. 2. The room is in a (mess). 3. It is (possible) for me to finish it alone, so I asked for help. 4. The (unlucky) boy broke the lamp again. 5. The little girl (fold) the paper into a bird. 4. 练一练:把下列句子译成英语。 1. 我弟弟热衷于自己动手做东西。 2. 房间里乱七八糟。 3. 我自己做了一个书架。 4. 尽管我失败了,但我没有放弃。 5. 通过自己动手,我学到了很多。 五、句式练习(核心句式) 1. Last weekend, I tried to make a bookshelf by myself. 上周末,我试着自己做了一个书架。 2. While I was working on it, I made several mistakes. 做的时候,我犯了好几个错误。 3. Although it was difficult, I didn’t give up. 尽管很难,我没有放弃。 4. Trying again and again, I finally finished it. 一遍遍地尝试,我终于完成了它。 5. It is DIY that brings me great fun. 正是自己动手给我带来了极大的乐趣。 六、进阶高级句型练习(Advanced Patterns) 1. 时间状语从句:While I was making the model, I made a mistake. 2. 让步状语从句:Although it was difficult, I didn’t give up. 3. 非谓语动词:Trying again and again, I finally finished it. 4. 宾语从句:I found that DIY was not so easy. 5. 强调句:It is DIY that brings me great fun. 练一练:按要求改写句子。 1. I was making the model. I made a mistake.(用 while 合并) 2. It was difficult. I didn’t give up.(用 although 合并) 3. I tried again and again. I finally finished it.(用非谓语动词改写) 4. DIY brings me great fun.(用强调句改写) 5. DIY was not so easy. I found.(用宾语从句合并) 七、写作实战(Writing) 小试牛刀:先补全下面的引导作文(每空一词或一短语),再用完整的句子写一篇短文。 ① 引导训练(填空) Last weekend, I tried to make a bookshelf by myself, which turned out to be great (乐趣). While I was (做) it, I made several mistakes. Although it was much more difficult than I had expected, I didn’t (放弃). Trying again and again, I finally (完成) it. It is DIY that brings me great fun and a strong sense of (成就感). From this experience, I have learned that we should be brave enough to try new things. ② 独立写作 要求:110 词左右,要点齐全,适当运用高级句型。 参考答案(Answer Key) (供教师使用,打印学生版时可删除本页) 四、词汇短语 词形填空 1. crazy 2. mess 3. impossible 4. unlucky 5. folded 四、词汇短语 汉译英 1. My brother is crazy about DIY. 2. The room is in a mess. 3. I made a bookshelf by myself. 4. Although I failed, I didn’t give up. 5. By doing things myself, I have learned a lot. 六、进阶句型 改写 1. While I was making the model, I made a mistake. 2. Although it was difficult, I didn’t give up. 3. Trying again and again, I finally finished it. 4. It is DIY that brings me great fun. 5. I found that DIY was not so easy. 七、写作实战 参考范文(约 110 词) Last weekend, I tried to make a bookshelf by myself, which turned out to be great fun. While I was working on it, I made several mistakes. Although it was much more difficult than I had expected, I didn’t give up. Trying again and again, I finally finished it. It is DIY that brings me great fun and a strong sense of achievement. From this experience, I have learned that we should be brave enough to try new things. What’s more, I believe that practice makes perfect. 【高级句型】定语从句(which)、时间状语从句(While )、让步状语从句(Although )、非谓语动词(Trying )、强调句(It is that )、宾语从句(I found that ) 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $