Unit 5 Wild animals 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年译林版英语八年级上册

**基本信息** 以“词汇-句型-篇章”三阶训练体系为核心，系统整合写作素材、功能表达与高分方法，助力学生构建野生动物主题写作逻辑链。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|15类主题词汇+16个高频搭配|分类梳理动物描述、保护行动等功能词汇，建立主题词块网络|从基础词汇到搭配应用，实现语言知识的情境化关联| |黄金句型库|4类基础句型+5组升级示例|通过“基础句-升级句”对比，教授因果链构建、情感表达等技巧|从简单描述到逻辑拓展，形成句型应用的能力进阶| |高分写作方法|1篇典例精析|提炼“审题-构思-表达”三步法，强调情感先行、条理清晰的写作策略|以真实投稿情境为载体，实现方法与实战的深度结合| |阶梯训练|3级句子训练+1篇篇章写作|采用“汉译英-仿写-升级”阶梯式训练，培养从句子到篇章的连贯表达能力|从语言要素到语篇构建，形成写作能力的系统化提升|

Unit 5 Wild animals 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 动物名称 panda 大熊猫 dolphin 海豚 eagle 雕 fox 狐狸 shark 鲨鱼 wolf 狼 zebra 斑马 whale 鲸 polar bear 北极熊 blue whale 蓝鲸 Indian rhino 印度犀牛 tiger 老虎 lion 狮子 bear 熊 snake 蛇 动物特征与习性 wild 野生的 tiny 极小的 fat 胖的 thin 瘦的 cute 可爱的 friendly 友好的 strong 强壮的 fast 快速的 heavy 重的 in the wild 在野外 live on 以吃……为生 hunt 猎杀 weigh 有……重 grow 生长 survive 生存 保护相关词汇 protect 保护 protection 保护 nature reserve 自然保护区 government 政府 action 行动 effort 努力 increase 增加 drop 降低 reason 理由；原因 illness 疾病 pollution 污染 disaster 灾害 in danger 处于危险中 at risk 有危险 take action 采取行动 thanks to 多亏；由于 2. 高频搭配 in the wild 在野外 live on 以吃……为生 as a result 因此 take action 采取行动 thanks to 多亏；由于 in danger 处于危险中 at risk 有危险 even if 即使；尽管 round-the-clock care 全天候照料 lead to 导致 provide...with... 为……提供…… hunt for 猎取；搜寻 lose one’s home 失去家园 fall in number 数量下降 nature reserve 自然保护区 make laws 制定法律 3. 写作功能表达 描述动物基本信息 I am a ... 我是一只…… I live in ... 我生活在…… I eat ... 我吃…… I am ... kg in weight. 我有……公斤重。 描述生存困境 We face some serious problems. 我们面临一些严重的问题。 It is difficult for us to have babies. 我们很难繁殖后代。 The bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. 竹林正变得越来越小。 Our number is dropping. 我们的数量正在下降。 描述保护行动 The government has taken action. 政府已经采取了行动。 There are laws to protect us. 有法律保护我们。 Scientists are working hard to help us. 科学家正在努力帮助我们。 We need your help. 我们需要你们的帮助。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 I am writing to ask for your help to protect ... 我写信是为了请求你们帮助保护…… I would like to tell you something about ... 我想告诉你一些关于……的事情。 ... are very popular all over the world. ……在全世界都很受欢迎。 Let me introduce ... to you. 让我向你介绍一下…… 2. 主体句型 Giant pandas mainly live on bamboo. 大熊猫主要以竹子为食。 The bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. 竹林正变得越来越小。 As a result, pandas may not have a place to live or enough food to eat. 因此，大熊猫可能没有地方住，也没有足够的食物吃。 Thanks to the efforts of the government, the number of pandas is increasing. 由于政府的努力，大熊猫的数量正在增加。 It is difficult for giant pandas to have babies. 大熊猫很难繁殖后代。 3. 结尾句型 Please help us, or there may be none of us left in the future. 请帮助我们，否则将来可能没有我们了。 We believe things will get better and better. 我们相信情况会越来越好。 I hope you can join us to protect wild animals. 我希望你能加入我们保护野生动物。 Thank you for reading my letter. 感谢你阅读我的信。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 Pandas eat bamboo. 熊猫吃竹子。 Giant pandas mainly live on bamboo, but the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. 大熊猫主要以竹子为食，但是竹林正变得越来越小。 Pandas are in danger. 熊猫处于危险中。 Giant pandas face serious problems. It is difficult for them to have babies, and they may not have enough food to eat. 大熊猫面临严重的问题。它们很难繁殖后代，可能没有足够的食物吃。 The government helps pandas. 政府帮助熊猫。 The government has taken action to protect giant pandas. There are laws and more nature reserves for them. 政府已经采取行动保护大熊猫。有法律和更多的自然保护区为它们提供保护。 The number of pandas is growing. 熊猫数量在增长。 Thanks to all the efforts, the number of giant pandas is increasing. 由于所有这些努力，大熊猫的数量正在增加。 Pandas are cute. 熊猫很可爱。 Giant pandas are very cute and popular all over the world, but they still need our protection. 大熊猫非常可爱，在全世界都很受欢迎，但它们仍然需要我们的保护。 四、高分写作方法 典例精析 每年的3月3日是世界野生动植物日(World Wildlife Day)，你校为此开展了一场“如何保护野生动物”的讲座(lecture)，你从中认识到保护野生动物的重要性。请你结合以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文向校报投稿，谈谈中学生应该怎么做。 内容提示： 1.介绍讲座主题； 2.你的收获：野生动物现状；产生原因； 3.你的建议：不购买野生动物制品；宣传保护野生动物。 要求： 1.内容可以适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅； 2.不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名； 3.词数80—100，作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Last Monday was World Wildlife Day. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 先明确三点：写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。 内容上，题目给出三个必须涵盖的板块：讲座主题、收获（现状与原因）、建议（两个具体行动）。时态上，描述讲座内容和野生动物现状用一般现在时或一般过去时。结构上分三段：第一段引出讲座主题，第二段写讲座带来的收获（现状和原因），第三段写中学生的具体行动建议。 【例文欣赏】 Last Monday was World Wildlife Day. Our school held a wonderful lecture about how to protect wild animals. The teacher showed us many animals in the lecture. We were shocked to learn that many animals are in danger. For example, some people cut down forests, so animals lose their homes. Others hunt animals for money. This really harms our environment. As middle school students, we can do a lot. First, we should never buy things made of wild animals. Also, we can tell our family and friends to protect wildlife. Let’s work together to keep these lovely animals safe and make our world more beautiful! 【亮点解析】 开篇承接已给开头，引出讲座主题。 “Last Monday was World Wildlife Day.”已给开头点明了日期背景，接着“Our school held a wonderful lecture about how to protect wild animals.”交代了讲座主题“how to protect wild animals”，直接回应了提示一。 用“感受+事实”呈现收获，条理清晰。 “We were shocked to learn that many animals are in danger.”先写情感反应——shocked，再写事实——many animals are in danger。情感先行让读者感受到问题的严重性，事实紧随其后让文章有依据。“For example”引出的两个原因——“cut down forests, so animals lose their homes”和“hunt animals for money”——用“so”体现了因果关系，用“Others”与“some people”形成对比，结构清晰。 因果链完整，逻辑性强。 “some people cut down forests, so animals lose their homes. Others hunt animals for money. This really harms our environment.”从“砍伐森林”到“失去家园”，从“非法捕猎”到“危害环境”，每一个行为都有对应的后果，让读者清楚地看到问题的根源和影响。 建议部分用“First...Also...”串联，简短明确。 两条建议直接对应“中学生能做什么”——不买野生动物制品、向家人朋友宣传保护。“First”和“Also”让建议条理分明，语句简洁，符合短文投稿的篇幅要求。 结尾用“Let's”发起号召，热情有力。 “Let's work together to keep these lovely animals safe and make our world more beautiful!”用祈使句发起集体行动号召，“work together”“keep...safe”“make our world more beautiful”三个动词短语层层推进，从行动到目标再到愿景，收束全文的同时呼应了“保护野生动物”的主题，情感积极向上。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 大熊猫主要以竹子为食，但是竹林正变得越来越小。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 大熊猫很难繁殖后代，而且很容易生病和死亡。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 因此，大熊猫可能没有地方住，也没有足够的食物吃。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 政府已经采取行动保护大熊猫，有法律和更多的自然保护区为它们提供保护。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 由于所有这些努力，大熊猫的数量正在增加。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型1：... mainly live on ...（描述食物） 例句：Giant pandas mainly live on bamboo. 大熊猫主要以竹子为食。 （1）北极熊主要以肉类为食。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）蓝鲸主要以小鱼和虾为食。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型2：... is/are becoming smaller and smaller.（描述变化趋势） 例句：The bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. 竹林正变得越来越小。 （1）大熊猫的栖息地正变得越来越小。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）北极的冰盖正变得越来越薄。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型3：It is difficult for ... to ...（描述困难） 例句：It is difficult for giant pandas to have babies. 大熊猫很难繁殖后代。 （1）野生动物在野外很难找到足够的食物。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）由于污染，蓝鲸很难活得长久和健康。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型4：As a result，...（描述结果） 例句：As a result, pandas may not have a place to live or enough food to eat. 因此，大熊猫可能没有地方住，也没有足够的食物吃。 （1）因此，许多动物正在失去家园。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）因此，有些动物可能在未来完全消失。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型5：Thanks to ...，...（描述原因与结果） 例句：Thanks to all the efforts, the number of giant pandas is increasing. 由于所有这些努力，大熊猫的数量正在增加。 （1）由于政府的努力，野生动物的数量正在增加。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）由于科学家的工作，我们对动物有了更多了解。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：Pandas eat bamboo. 熊猫吃竹子。 升级句：Giant pandas mainly live on bamboo, but the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. 大熊猫主要以竹子为食，但是竹林正变得越来越小。 1. 基础句：Pandas are in danger. 熊猫处于危险中。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：The government helps pandas. 政府帮助熊猫。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：The number of pandas is growing. 熊猫数量在增长。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：Pandas are cute. 熊猫很可爱。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：We need to protect animals. 我们需要保护动物。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：Pandas have problems. 熊猫有问题。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“保护野生动物”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下问题，以“Protect Wild Animals”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 1. Why are wild animals in danger? 2. What can we do to protect them? 3. How do you feel about protecting wild animals? 要求：1.短文需包含所有问题要点，并适当发挥; 2.词数100左右。 Protect Wild Animals ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. Giant pandas mainly live on bamboo, but the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. 2. It is difficult for giant pandas to have babies, and they may get sick and die easily. 3. As a result, pandas may not have a place to live or enough food to eat. 4. The government has taken action to protect giant pandas. There are laws and more nature reserves for them. 5. Thanks to all the efforts, the number of giant pandas is increasing. Level 2 句型仿写 句型1 （1）Polar bears mainly live on meat. （2）Blue whales mainly live on small fish and shrimp. 句型2 （1）The living places of giant pandas are becoming smaller and smaller. （2）The ice in the Arctic is becoming thinner and thinner. 句型3 （1）It is difficult for wild animals to find enough food in the wild. （2）It is difficult for blue whales to live long and healthy lives because of pollution. 句型4 （1）As a result, many animals are losing their homes. （2）As a result, some animals may completely disappear in the future. 句型5 （1）Thanks to the efforts of the government, the number of wild animals is increasing. （2）Thanks to the work of scientists, we know more about animals. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：Giant pandas face serious problems in the wild. It is difficult for them to have babies, and they may not have enough food to eat as the bamboo forests are becoming smaller. 大熊猫在野外面临严重的问题。它们很难繁殖后代，而且因为竹林在变小，它们可能没有足够的食物吃。 2. 升级句：The government has taken action to protect giant pandas. There are now laws to protect them and more nature reserves for them to live in. 政府已经采取行动保护大熊猫。现在有法律保护它们，也有更多的自然保护区供它们生活。 3. 升级句：Thanks to all the efforts of the government and scientists, the number of giant pandas is increasing, but they still need our protection. 由于政府和科学家的所有努力，大熊猫的数量正在增加，但它们仍然需要我们的保护。 4. 升级句：Giant pandas are very cute and popular all over the world, but they still face serious problems in the wild and need our help. 大熊猫非常可爱，在全世界都很受欢迎，但它们在野外仍然面临严重的问题，需要我们的帮助。 5. 升级句：We need to protect wild animals because they are our friends and they also have their own families and feelings. 我们需要保护野生动物，因为它们是我们的朋友，它们也有自己的家庭和情感。 6. 升级句：Giant pandas face serious problems such as losing their homes and not having enough food to eat because of human activities. 由于人类活动，大熊猫面临失去家园和没有足够食物等严重问题。 篇章训练（参考范文） Protect Wild Animals Nowadays, many wild animals are in great danger. People cut down forests to build houses and farms, taking away their living areas. Some people even hunt wild animals for their fur, bones or meat, which makes their numbers drop quickly. We can do many things to protect wildlife. First, we should follow the laws against hunting wild animals. Second, we can donate money to animal protection groups. Also, we can avoid buying products made from wild animals. I feel it’s everyone’s duty to protect wild animals. They are our natural friends and keep nature balanced. Let’s take action to build a better world for all wildlife. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $