Unit 4 Hands-on fun 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年英语译林版八年级上册

**基本信息** 聚焦手工制作主题，构建“素材-句型-方法-训练”四维写作体系，通过阶梯式训练提升语言表达与逻辑思维能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|主题词汇3类+搭配13组+功能表达3类|分类整合手工制作相关词汇、短语及过程/感受描述功能句，夯实语言基础|从核心词汇到功能表达，形成“词-短语-句”的语言要素积累链| |黄金句型库|基础句型12句+升级示例5组|提供开头/主体/结尾句型模板，通过“基础句-升级句”对比教学，提升表达丰富度|遵循“简单句-复合句-拓展句”的句型进阶逻辑，强化句式多样性| |高分写作方法|1篇典例精析|提炼“审题-结构-过程-感受”四步写作法，解析步骤连贯词与细节描写技巧|以真题题型为载体，示范“要点覆盖-逻辑串联-亮点提升”的写作思路| |阶梯训练|句子训练3级（15题）+篇章训练1篇|通过汉译英、句型仿写、句子升级及篇章写作，实现“句-篇”能力递进|从基础表达准确性到篇章逻辑完整性，构建分层训练体系|

Unit 4 Hands-on fun 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 手工制作相关名词 DIY 自己动手 tool 工具 glue 胶水 tape 胶带 scissors 剪刀 brush 刷子；画笔 paint 油漆；绘画颜料 board 板 shelf 架子 lamp 灯 rose 玫瑰（花） paper 纸 glove 手套 button 纽扣；按钮 thread 线 dye 染料；染液 pattern 图案；模式 product 产品 instruction 说明 动词与短语 fold 折叠 cut 剪；切 glue 粘贴 tape 用胶带粘贴 twist 使扭曲 tie 系；拴 untie 解开 paint 给……上油漆 repair 修理 mix 混合 reduce 减少 fill 充满 hit 打；撞击 complete 完成 make a mess 使混乱 fill ... with 使……充满 catch one’s eye 注意 be crazy about 热衷于 have a go / give it a try试一试 描述感受的形容词 crazy 狂热的；迷恋的 impossible 不可能的 possible 可能的 patient 有耐心的 impatient 不耐烦的 complete 完成；结束 unlucky 不幸的；不顺利的 proud 自豪的 happy 快乐的 pleased 高兴的 2. 高频搭配 be crazy about 热衷于 make a mistake 犯错误 make a mess 弄得乱七八糟 catch one’s eye 引起某人注意 fill ... with 使……充满 put in 安装 put up 张贴；挂起 know one’s way around 对……非常熟悉 had better do sth 最好做某事 should do sth 应该做某事 take a course 上课 come as no surprise 不足为奇 give it a try 试一试 3. 写作功能表达 描述制作过程 First, ... 首先…… Next, ... 接下来…… Then, ... 然后…… Finally, ... 最后…… You should ... 你应该…… You’d better ... 你最好…… Don’t forget to ... 别忘了…… 描述制作失误 I made a mistake. 我犯了一个错误。 The room was in a mess. 房间乱七八糟。 It was difficult at first. 一开始很难。 描述成品与感受 I was proud of my work. 我为我的作品感到自豪。 DIY is a good way to have fun and save money. DIY是玩得开心和省钱的好方法。 Making things by hand brings me great joy. 手工制作带给我巨大的快乐。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 I am crazy about DIY. 我热衷于DIY。 DIY is very popular among young people. DIY在年轻人中很受欢迎。 Let me tell you about my DIY experience. 让我告诉你我的DIY经历。 Making things by hand is great fun. 手工制作很有趣。 2. 主体句型 I made a mistake and the whole house had a power cut. 我犯了一个错误，整个屋子都断电了。 The room was in a mess with books all over the bed. 房间乱七八糟，书堆满了床。 You’d better have a shelf for your books. 你最好有一个书架来放书。 First, twist a piece of cloth and tie it with thread. 首先，扭曲一块布并用线把它扎起来。 Then dye the material and let it dry. 然后给材料染色，让它晾干。 3. 结尾句型 I was proud of my work. 我为我的作品感到自豪。 DIY is a good way to have fun and save money. DIY是玩得开心和省钱的好方法。 I plan to take a course in DIY so I can do better in the future. 我计划上DIY课程，这样我将来能做得更好。 Now no DIY job seems impossible to me. 现在没有什么DIY工作对我来说是不可能的。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 I made a mistake. 我犯了一个错误。 I made a mistake, and my whole house had a power cut. 我犯了一个错误，整个屋子都断电了。 The room was messy. 房间很乱。 The room was in a complete mess with blue paint everywhere. 房间里一团糟，到处都是蓝色油漆。 I made a shelf. 我做了一个书架。 I got some boards and soon made a shelf for my books. 我拿了一些板子，很快就为我的书做了一个书架。 I wanted to paint my room. 我想粉刷我的房间。 I decided to paint my bedroom blue because it is my favourite colour. 我决定把我的卧室刷成蓝色，因为那是我最喜欢的颜色。 DIY is fun. DIY很有趣。 DIY is a good way to have fun and save money. DIY是玩得开心和省钱的好方法。 四、高分写作方法 典例精析 假设你是李华，上周你们班开展了一次DIY手工活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍这次活动。 提示： 1. 活动时间：上周六下午； 2. 活动内容：用废旧材料制作手工艺品； 3. 你的作品：用旧T恤制作了一个环保袋； 4. 你的感受：有趣、有意义，学会了废物利用。 注意： 1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 先明确三点：写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。 内容上，题目给出四个必须涵盖的要点：活动时间、活动内容、你的作品、你的感受。时态上，描述过去的活动用一般过去时。结构上分三段：第一段交代活动的时间和内容，第二段详述自己的作品制作过程，第三段表达感受和收获。 【例文欣赏】 Last Saturday afternoon, our class had a DIY activity. Our teacher asked us to make handicrafts from old materials. I brought an old T-shirt from home. First, I cut off the sleeves. Then I sewed its bottom and decorated it with colourful buttons. To my surprise, it became a beautiful and useful shopping bag! This activity was really fun and meaningful. I learned some practical skills and understood    recycling’s importance. We should reuse old things instead of throwing them away. I hope we can have more activities like this in the future. 【亮点解析】 开篇一句话涵盖时间、事件、内容三个信息。 “Last Saturday afternoon, our class had a DIY activity.”交代时间和事件。“Our teacher asked us to make handicrafts from old materials.”交代活动内容——用废旧材料制作手工艺品。两句开门见山，覆盖两个要点，不拖泥带水。 制作过程用“First...Then...”串联，步骤清晰。 “I brought an old T-shirt from home. First, I cut off the sleeves. Then I sewed its bottom and decorated it with colourful buttons.”从“带来旧T恤”到“剪袖子”再到“缝底部、装饰纽扣”，三个步骤用“First...Then...”连贯起来，读者能清晰地跟随制作流程。“cut off”和“sewed”两个动词准确描述了裁剪和缝纫两个关键动作，具体可感。 结尾用“To my surprise”引出惊喜结果。 在描述完制作步骤后，用“To my surprise”引出成品——“a beautiful and useful shopping bag”。“beautiful”形容外观，“useful”强调功能，两个形容词准确概括了环保袋的特点。“surprise”也暗示了作者并未预料到旧T恤能变成这样实用的物品，增添了叙述的趣味性。 感受从“快乐”到“意义”再到“呼吁”，层次丰富。 “fun and meaningful”先总括感受；“learned some practical skills”“understood recycling's importance”具体说明收获了什么；“We should reuse old things instead of throwing them away.”从个人收获延伸到呼吁大家废物利用，由己及人；“I hope we can have more activities like this in the future.”表达对未来的期待，结尾既总结了收获又有行动倡议，完整自然。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 我热衷于DIY，但我有时会犯错误。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 有一次，我犯了一个错误，整个屋子都断电了。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 房间乱七八糟，书堆满了床。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 我做了一个书架，现在我的房间看起来很棒。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. DIY是玩得开心和省钱的好方法。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型1：I am crazy about ...（描述热衷） 例句：I am crazy about DIY. 我热衷于DIY。 （1）我的表哥热衷于做手工。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）他热衷于修理家里的东西。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型2：I made a mistake and ...（描述错误及后果） 例句：I made a mistake and my whole house had a power cut. 我犯了一个错误，整个屋子都断电了。 （1）我犯了一个错误，房间里到处都是水。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我犯了一个错误，整个厨房一团糟。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型3：The room was in a mess.（描述混乱） 例句：The room was in a mess with books all over the bed. 房间乱七八糟，书堆满了床。 （1）房间一团糟，到处都是油漆。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我的书桌乱七八糟，到处都是纸和笔。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型4：You’d better ...（提出建议） 例句：You’d better have a shelf for your books. 你最好有一个书架来放书。 （1）你最好先仔细阅读说明。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）你最好在开始前把所有材料准备好。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型5：... is a good way to ...（描述方式） 例句：DIY is a good way to have fun and save money. DIY是玩得开心和省钱的好方法。 （1）做手工是放松的好方法。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）学习一项新技能是让时间过得有趣的好方法。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：I made a mistake. 我犯了一个错误。 升级句：I made a mistake, and my whole house had a power cut. 我犯了一个错误，整个屋子都断电了。 1. 基础句：The room was messy. 房间很乱。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：I made a shelf. 我做了一个书架。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：I wanted to paint my room. 我想粉刷我的房间。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：DIY is fun. DIY很有趣。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：I like DIY. 我喜欢DIY。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：I made a floor lamp. 我做了一盏落地灯。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“DIY Fun”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下问题，以“My Favourite DIY Activity”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 1. What is your favourite DIY activity? 2. How do you do this activity step by step? 3. Why do you like this activity? 要求：1. 短文需包含所有问题要点，并适当发挥；2. 词数100左右。 My Favourite DIY Activity ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. I am crazy about DIY, but I sometimes make mistakes. 2. Once, I made a mistake and my whole house had a power cut. 3. The room was in a mess with books all over the bed. 4. I made a shelf and now my room looks great. 5. DIY is a good way to have fun and save money. Level 2 句型仿写 句型1 （1）My cousin is crazy about making things by hand. （2）He is crazy about repairing things around the house. 句型2 （1）I made a mistake and the room was filled with water. （2）I made a mistake and the whole kitchen was in a mess. 句型3 （1）The room was in a mess with paint everywhere. （2）My desk was in a mess with paper and pens all over it. 句型4 （1）You’d better read the instructions carefully first. （2）You’d better get all the materials ready before you start. 句型5 （1）Making things by hand is a good way to relax. （2）Learning a new skill is a good way to have fun with your time. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：The room was in a complete mess with blue paint everywhere—even on my shelf. 房间一团糟，到处都是蓝色油漆——甚至我的书架上都有。 2. 升级句：I got some boards and soon made a shelf for my books. Now my room looks great and it is easy for me to find my books. 我拿了一些板子，很快就为我的书做了一个书架。现在我的房间看起来很棒，我很容易找到我的书。 3. 升级句：I decided to paint my bedroom blue because it is my favourite colour. I almost finished when my cat came in and knocked over the paint. 我决定把我的卧室刷成蓝色，因为那是我最喜欢的颜色。我快完成时，我的猫进来了，打翻了油漆。 4. 升级句：DIY is a good way to have fun and save money, and now no DIY job seems impossible to me. DIY是玩得开心和省钱的好方法，现在没有什么DIY工作对我来说是不可能的。 5. 升级句：I am crazy about DIY and I love to make or repair things around my house by myself. 我热衷于DIY，我喜欢自己制作或修理家里的东西。 6. 升级句：A floor lamp I made caught my eye and it looked so cool. I was surprised to know that I made it myself! 我自己做的一盏落地灯引起了我的注意，看起来太酷了。我很惊讶是我自己做的！ 篇章训练（参考范文） My Favourite DIY Activity My favourite DIY activity is making paper lanterns. First, I prepare a piece of red paper, a pair of scissors and some glue. Then I fold the paper in half and cut some small lines along the folded side, but not all the way through. Next, I unfold the paper and roll it into a cylinder, sticking the sides together with glue. Finally, I add a handle at the top and put a small candle inside. I love this activity because it allows me to create something beautiful with my own hands. It also teaches me to be patient and careful while doing things. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $