Unit 3 写作专项训练 2026-2027学年译林版九年级英语上册

译林版九年级英语（上册）Unit 3 Teenage problems 写作专项训练 写作任务 · 审题要点 · 写作框架 · 词汇短语 · 句式练习 · 高级句型 · 写作实战 班级：____________ 姓名：____________ 日期：____________ 一、写作任务（Writing Task） 青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种各样的烦恼。请你以 Millie 的名义，给学校心理老师 Mr Sigmund 写一封求助信，讲述你遇到的烦恼并寻求建议。 ● 烦恼：描述你遇到的两三个烦恼（如学习压力大、与父母沟通少、缺少朋友等）； ● 影响：说明这些烦恼给你带来的感受与影响； ● 请求：礼貌地向老师寻求建议，并表达期待。 要求：1) 110 词左右；2) 内容可适当发挥；3) 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 二、审题要点（Analyzing the Prompt） ● 人称（Person）：以第一人称 I 为主。 ● 时态（Tense）：描述现状用一般现在时；叙述具体事件可用一般过去时。 ● 文体（Genre）：应用文——求助信（a letter asking for help），语气礼貌、真诚。 ● 结构（Structure）：问候 → 陈述问题（分点）→ 请求建议 → 收尾署名。 ● 要点（Content）：烦恼（2–3 个）+ 影响 + 请求建议，三点齐全。 ● 语言（Language）：用 First / Second / Besides 使条理清晰；用 be under pressure / feel stressed / deal with；多用礼貌用语。 三、写作框架（Writing Framework） 采用“问题—影响—请求”的行文顺序，用连接词分层陈述。 段落 要点内容 常用句型 / 提示 开头段 问候，并说明“我有烦恼，需要你的帮助”。 How are you? I have some problems these days ... I really need your help. 主体段 用 First ... / Second ... 列出 2–3 个烦恼及影响。 First, I am under great pressure ... Second, I have few friends ... 结尾段 请求建议，表达期待，署名。 I don’t know how to deal with ... Could you give me some advice? I hope to hear from you soon. 四、词汇短语积累（Vocabulary） 1. 本单元课后重点词汇（含音标） 单词 音标 词性·释义 teenage /ˈtiːneɪdʒ/ adj. 青少年的 mad /mæd/ adj. 发疯的；生气的 perhaps /pəˈhæps/ adv. 或许，可能 choice /tʃɔɪs/ n. 选择 awake /əˈweɪk/ adj. 醒着的 hardly /ˈhɑːdli/ adv. 几乎不 imagine /ɪˈmædʒɪn/ v. 想象，设想 doubt /daʊt/ vt. 怀疑 worth /wɜːθ/ adj. 值得；值……钱 suggestion /səˈdʒestʃən/ n. 建议 strict /strɪkt/ adj. 严格的，严厉的 valuable /ˈvæljuəbl/ adj. 宝贵的；贵重的 friendship /ˈfrendʃɪp/ n. 友谊 method /ˈmeθəd/ n. 方法 solve /sɒlv/ vt. 解决；解答 youth /juːθ/ n. 青少年辅导员 pronunciation /prəˌnʌnsiˈeɪʃn/ n. 发音 mention /ˈmenʃn/ vt. 提及；说起 stress /stres/ n. 精神压力，紧张 progress /ˈprəʊɡres/ n. 进展，进步 2. 重点短语与搭配（课后 + 写作） 英文 中文 deal with 处理，对付 drive sb mad 使人受不了 stay up 熬夜 be strict with sb 对某人要求严格 stay out 待在户外；（晚上）不回家 work out 算出；解决 according to 根据 laugh at 嘲笑 go over 复习；回顾 ask sb for advice 向某人征求意见 communicate with sb 与某人沟通 be under great pressure 承受很大压力 3. 练一练：用所给词的适当形式填空。 1. It is not worth ____________ (worry) about things you cannot change. 2. My father is very ____________ (strict) with me. 3. Reading aloud is a good way to improve your ____________ (pronounce). 4. I have made great ____________ (progress) in English this term. 5. She gave me some useful ____________ (suggest) on my study. 4. 练一练：把下列句子译成英语。 1. 我最近压力很大。 → ________________________________________________________ 2. 我不知道该如何处理这些问题。 → ________________________________________________________ 3. 有时我因为太害羞而不敢和别人交谈。 → ________________________________________________________ 4. 你能给我一些建议吗？ → ________________________________________________________ 5. 多和父母沟通会对你有帮助。 → ________________________________________________________ 五、句式练习（核心句式） 先读一读“亮点句式”，再完成后面的填空练习。 1. I have some problems these days, and I really need your help. 我最近有些烦恼，真的很需要你的帮助。 2. First, I am under great pressure from my studies. 首先，我的学习压力很大。 3. My parents expect me to get high marks, so I have to study late every night. 父母期望我取得高分，所以我每晚都得学到很晚。 4. Sometimes I feel lonely because I am too shy to talk to others. 有时我因太害羞不敢与人交谈而感到孤独。 5. I do not know how to deal with these problems. 我不知道该如何处理这些问题。 6. Could you give me some advice? I hope to hear from you soon. 你能给我些建议吗？期待你的回信。 练一练：根据中文提示，完成句子（每空一词或一短语）。 1. 我最近遇到一些烦恼，很需要你的帮助。 → I have some ____________ these days, and I really ____________ your help. 2. 首先，我的学习压力很大。 → ____________, I am under great ____________ from my studies. 3. 有时我因为太害羞而不敢和别人说话。 → Sometimes I feel ____________ because I am too ____________ to talk to others. 4. 我不知道该如何处理这些问题。 → I do not know how to ____________ ____________ these problems. 5. 你能给我一些建议吗？ → Could you give me some ____________? 六、进阶高级句型练习（Advanced Patterns） 用以下结构升级你的句子，让作文更出彩。 1. 宾语从句：I don’t know what I should do. / I wonder if you can help me. 2. so ... that ...：I am so stressed that I can’t sleep well at night. 3. too ... to ...：I am too shy to talk to others. 4. It is + adj. + for sb + to do sth：It is helpful for us to communicate with our parents. 5. 状语从句（although）：Although I study hard, I still can’t get good grades. 6. 动名词作主语：Communicating with others can help you make friends. 练一练：按要求改写句子。 1. What should I do? I don’t know.（用宾语从句合并） → ________________________________________________________ 2. I am very stressed. I can’t sleep well at night.（用 so ... that ... 合并） → ________________________________________________________ 3. I am very shy. I can’t talk to others.（用 too ... to ... 合并） → ________________________________________________________ 4. Communicate with our parents. It is helpful for us.（用 It is + adj. + for sb + to do sth 改写） → ________________________________________________________ 5. I study hard. I still can’t get good grades.（用 although 合并） → ________________________________________________________ 七、写作实战（Writing） 小试牛刀：先补全下面的引导作文（每空一词或一短语），再用完整的句子写一封求助信。 ① 引导训练（填空） Dear Mr Sigmund, How are you? I have some ____________（烦恼）these days, and I really need your ____________（帮助）. First, I am under great ____________（压力）from my studies. My parents ____________（期望）me to get high marks, so I have to study late every night. I feel ____________（有压力的）all the time. Second, I have few friends at school. Sometimes I feel ____________（孤独的）because I am too ____________（害羞的）to talk to others. I do not know how to ____________ ____________（处理）these problems. Could you give me some ____________（建议）? I hope to ____________ ____________ ____________（收到你的信）soon. Yours, Millie ② 独立写作 要求：110 词左右，条理清晰，语气真诚，要点齐全。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案（Answer Key） （供教师使用，打印学生版时可删除本页） 四、词汇短语 · 词形填空 1. worrying 2. strict 3. pronunciation 4. progress 5. suggestions 四、词汇短语 · 汉译英 1. I am under great pressure these days. 2. I don’t know how to deal with these problems. 3. Sometimes I am too shy to talk to others. 4. Could you give me some advice? 5. Communicating more with your parents will help you. 五、句式练习 · 填空 1. problems ; need 2. First ; pressure 3. lonely ; shy 4. deal with 5. advice 六、进阶句型 · 改写 1. I don’t know what I should do. 2. I am so stressed that I can’t sleep well at night. 3. I am too shy to talk to others. 4. It is helpful for us to communicate with our parents. 5. Although I study hard, I still can’t get good grades. 七、写作实战 · 参考范文（约 110 词） Dear Mr Sigmund, How are you? I have some problems these days, and I really need your help. First, I am under such great pressure from my studies that I can hardly sleep well. Since my parents expect me to get high marks, I have to study late every night. It is this pressure that makes me feel tired and stressed all the time. Second, I have few friends at school. Because I am too shy to talk to others, I sometimes feel lonely. I really want to make more friends, but I don't know how. I wonder if you could give me some advice. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Millie 【高级句型】本范文综合运用：结果状语从句(so ... that ...)、原因状语从句(Since / Because)、强调句(It is ... that ...)、非谓语动词(to talk to others)、宾语从句(I wonder if ...)。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $