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译林版九年级英语(上册)Unit 5 Art world
写作专项训练
写作任务 · 审题要点 · 写作框架 · 词汇短语 · 句式练习 · 高级句型 · 写作实战
班级:____________ 姓名:____________ 日期:____________
一、写作任务(Writing Task)
艺术世界丰富多彩。请以 “My Favourite Art Form” 为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式。
● 形式:点明你最喜欢的艺术形式;
● 理由:说明你何时爱上它、为什么喜欢它;
● 感受:写出它带给你的影响与收获。
要求:1) 110 词左右;2) 内容可适当发挥;3) 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
二、审题要点(Analyzing the Prompt)
● 人称(Person):以第一人称 I 为主。
● 时态(Tense):谈现状用一般现在时;回忆往事用一般过去时。
● 文体(Genre):说明文(介绍类短文)。
● 结构(Structure):点题 → 说明理由 → 总结感受。
● 要点(Content):艺术形式 + 喜欢的原因 + 带给你的影响,三点齐全。
● 语言(Language):多用定语从句、时间/原因状语从句,适当使用宾语从句。
三、写作框架(Writing Framework)
段落
要点内容
常用句型 / 提示
开头段
点明你最喜欢的艺术形式。
My favourite art form is ..., which ... .
主体段
说明何时爱上它、为什么喜欢、它带给你什么。
When I was ..., I fell in love with ... . Because ..., I ... .
结尾段
总结艺术的意义,表达坚持的决心。
In my opinion, ... . I will ... .
四、词汇短语积累(Vocabulary)
1. 本单元课后重点词汇(含音标)
单词
音标
词性·释义
drama
/ˈdrɑːmə/
n. 戏剧;戏剧性事件
photography
/fəˈtɒɡrəfi/
n. 照相术,摄影
musical
/ˈmjuːzɪkl/
adj. 音乐的
talent
/ˈtælənt/
n. 天赋,才能
boundary
/ˈbaʊndri/
n. 边界,疆界
medal
/ˈmedl/
n. 奖牌,奖章
composer
/kəmˈpəʊzə(r)/
n. 作曲家
instrument
/ˈɪnstrəmənt/
n. 乐器;工具
musician
/mjuˈzɪʃn/
n. 音乐家
traditional
/trəˈdɪʃənl/
adj. 传统的
breath
/breθ/
n. 呼吸
concert
/ˈkɒnsət/
n. 音乐会
lasting
/ˈlɑːstɪŋ/
adj. 持久的
value
/ˈvæljuː/
n. 价值
common
/ˈkɒmən/
adj. 普通的,常见的
successfully
/səkˈsesfəli/
adv. 成功地
literature
/ˈlɪtrətʃə(r)/
n. 文学
encourage
/ɪnˈkʌrɪdʒ/
vt. 鼓励;劝告
highly
/ˈhaɪli/
adv. 高度地
gift
/ɡɪft/
n. 天赋,才能
2. 重点短语与搭配(课后 + 写作)
英文
中文
art form
艺术形式
be known/famous for
因……而著名
out of breath
上气不接下气
make up
编;编造
have a gift for
对……有天赋
be full of
充满
be proud of
为……骄傲
show great interest in
对……表现出浓厚兴趣
3. 练一练:用所给词的适当形式填空。
1. She became a famous ____________ (music) when she was young.
2. He ran so fast that he was out of ____________ (breathe).
3. Our teacher often ____________ (courage) us to work hard.
4. Chinese ____________ (tradition) music is very popular now.
5. The concert was a great ____________ (successful).
4. 练一练:把下列句子译成英语。
1. 我最喜欢的艺术形式是音乐。
→ ________________________________________________________
2. 我很小的时候,妈妈常常为我弹钢琴。
→ ________________________________________________________
3. 音乐就像一个一直陪伴在我身边的好朋友。
→ ________________________________________________________
4. 每当我弹吉他时,我就会忘记所有烦恼。
→ ________________________________________________________
5. 在我看来,音乐让我们的生活更加多彩。
→ ________________________________________________________
五、句式练习(核心句式)
1. My favourite art form is ..., which has been with me for years. 我最喜欢的艺术形式是……
2. When I was a little child, I fell in love with it. 我很小的时候就爱上了它。
3. It is music that makes me feel happy. 正是音乐让我感到快乐。
4. Whenever I play it, I forget all my worries. 每当我演奏它,就会忘记所有烦恼。
5. Music is like a good friend that is always by my side. 音乐就像一个一直陪伴在我身边的好朋友。
六、进阶高级句型练习(Advanced Patterns)
1. 定语从句:Music is an art form that makes people happy.
2. 时间状语从句:When I was a little child, I fell in love with music.
3. 非谓语动词:Being busy, I still keep my hobby.
4. 原因状语从句:Because music brings me happiness, I love it.
5. 宾语从句:I think that music makes life colourful.
练一练:按要求改写句子。
1. Music is an art form. It makes people happy.(用定语从句合并)
→ ________________________________________________________
2. I was a little child. I fell in love with music.(用 when 合并)
→ ________________________________________________________
3. Music brings me happiness. I love it.(用 because 合并)
→ ________________________________________________________
4. He is busy. He still keeps his hobby.(用非谓语动词改写)
→ ________________________________________________________
5. Music makes life colourful. I think.(用宾语从句合并)
→ ________________________________________________________
七、写作实战(Writing)
小试牛刀:先补全下面的引导作文(每空一词或一短语),再用完整的句子写一篇短文。
① 引导训练(填空)
My favourite art form is music, which ____________ (一直陪伴我) since I was a little child.
When I was young, my mother often ____________ (弹钢琴) for me, and the beautiful music made me feel peaceful. Now, being busy with my studies, I still ____________ (花) some time learning the guitar. It is not easy, but I enjoy the ____________ (过程). Whenever I play the guitar and sing along, I forget all my ____________ (烦恼). Because music can bring us happiness, it is like a good friend that is always ____________ (在我身边).
In my opinion, music makes our life more ____________ (多彩的). I will keep playing it and share my love of music with others.
② 独立写作
要求:110 词左右,要点齐全,适当运用高级句型。
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参考答案(Answer Key)
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四、词汇短语 · 词形填空
1. musician
2. breath
3. encourages
4. traditional
5. success
四、词汇短语 · 汉译英
1. My favourite art form is music.
2. When I was a little child, my mother often played the piano for me.
3. Music is like a good friend that is always by my side.
4. Whenever I play the guitar, I forget all my worries.
5. In my opinion, music makes our life more colourful.
六、进阶句型 · 改写
1. Music is an art form that makes people happy.
2. When I was a little child, I fell in love with music.
3. Because music brings me happiness, I love it.
4. Being busy, he still keeps his hobby.
5. I think that music makes life colourful.
七、写作实战 · 参考范文(约 110 词)
My favourite art form is music, which has been with me since I was a little child.
When I was young, my mother often played the piano for me, and the beautiful music made me feel peaceful. Now, being busy with my studies, I still spend some time learning the guitar. It is not easy, but I enjoy the process. Whenever I play the guitar and sing along, I forget all my worries. Because music can bring us happiness, it is like a good friend that is always by my side.
In my opinion, music makes our life more colourful. I will keep playing it and share my love of music with others.
【高级句型】定语从句(which / that)、时间状语从句(When / Whenever)、非谓语动词(being busy ...)、原因状语从句(Because ...)、宾语从句(In my opinion ...)
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