Unit 5 Music speaks 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年英语译林版九年级上册

**基本信息** 以“音乐”主题为载体，构建“词汇-句型-篇章”三阶训练体系，融合功能表达与思维升级，系统提升英语写作能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|8类主题词汇、12组高频搭配、4类功能表达|分类整合语言素材，强化主题词汇精准运用|从基础词汇积累到功能意义表达，构建主题语言网络| |黄金句型库|12个基础句型、5组句型升级|通过基础-升级对比，掌握复杂句式构建技巧|从简单句到复合句，实现语言表达从基础到高级的进阶| |高分写作方法|1篇典例精析|提炼“审题-构思-表达”三步写作法，强调细节支撑与逻辑递进|以典例示范写作全流程，渗透结构搭建与理由深化思维| |阶梯训练|3级句子训练、1篇篇章训练|采用“汉译英-仿写-升级”阶梯式训练，实现从句子到篇章的能力迁移|从单句翻译到篇章创作，形成“词句-篇章-思维”的完整训练链|

Unit 5 Music speaks 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 音乐类型与风格 classical music 古典音乐 folk music 民间音乐 country music 乡村音乐 jazz 爵士乐 rock 摇滚乐 traditional Chinese music 中国传统音乐 pop music 流行音乐 light music 轻音乐 乐器相关名词 piano 钢琴 violin 小提琴 guitar 吉他 erhu 二胡 pipa 琵琶 guzheng 古筝 drums 鼓 keyboard 键盘 strings 弦乐器 flute 长笛 音乐家与创作者 composer 作曲家 musician 音乐家 singer 歌手 pianist 钢琴家 violinist 小提琴家 conductor 指挥家 音乐相关动词与短语 compose 作曲 perform 表演；演奏 play (an instrument) 演奏（乐器） listen to 听 be familiar with 通晓；熟悉 be known for 以……而闻名 earn respect 赢得尊重 make music 创作音乐 cross boundaries 跨越界限 2. 高频搭配 mix ... with ... 将……与……融合 build a bridge between 在……之间搭建桥梁 earn respect and success 赢得尊重和成功 be familiar with 通晓；熟悉 at a young age 在年轻的时候 have no instruments 没有乐器 make music with 用……创作音乐 the sounds of nature 自然之声 be known for 因……而闻名 all over the world 全世界 both Eastern and Western 东西方的 without boundaries 无界限的 3. 写作功能表达 描述音乐家与背景 ... is a world-famous composer. ……是一位世界著名的作曲家。 ... showed an interest in music when he/she was very young. ……在很小的时候就表现出对音乐的兴趣。 ... grew up near ... ……在……附近长大。 ... entered ... at the age of ... ……在……岁时进入…… 描述音乐风格与特点 His/Her music has a unique style. 他/她的音乐具有独特的风格。 ... uses the sounds of nature in his/her music. ……在他/她的音乐中运用自然之声。 ... mixes traditional Chinese and modern Western music. ……将中国传统音乐和现代西方音乐融合在一起。 The music makes me feel relaxed and happy. 这音乐让我感到放松和快乐。 表达感受与原因 I love this style because ... 我喜欢这种风格，因为…… This kind of music always makes me feel ... 这种音乐总是让我感到…… Listening to ... makes me ... 听……让我…… There is nothing more relaxing than ... 没有什么比……更让人放松的了。 表达音乐价值 Music is a piece of art that goes in the ears straight to the heart. 音乐是从耳朵直击心灵的艺术。 Music has the power to connect people from different cultures. 音乐有连接来自不同文化的人的力量。 Through music, we can understand different cultures better. 通过音乐，我们可以更好地了解不同的文化。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 My favourite music style is ... 我最喜欢的音乐风格是…… I would like to introduce a piece of music that has deeply moved me. 我想介绍一首深深打动我的音乐。 Music is a piece of art that goes in the ears straight to the heart. 音乐是从耳朵直击心灵的艺术。 Let me share with you my favourite style of music. 让我和你分享我最喜欢的音乐风格。 2. 主体句型 ... showed an interest in music when he was very young. ……在很小的时候就表现出对音乐的兴趣。 Since he had no musical instruments then, he made music with common objects. 由于当时没有乐器，他用普通的物品来创作音乐。 He uses the sounds of nature a lot in his music. 他在音乐中大量运用自然之声。 This piece of music uses both traditional Chinese instruments and Western ones. 这首音乐既使用了中国传统乐器，也使用了西方乐器。 The music is so beautiful that it makes me feel relaxed and happy. 这音乐如此优美，让我感到放松和快乐。 3. 结尾句型 I believe that music has no boundaries. 我相信音乐没有国界。 There is nothing more powerful and relaxing than music. 没有什么比音乐更有力量、更令人放松的了。 I hope more people can enjoy the beauty of this music. 我希望更多的人能欣赏这音乐的美。 Music truly speaks to our hearts and connects us all. 音乐真正地诉说着我们的心声，连接着我们所有人。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 He is a composer. 他是一位作曲家。 Tan Dun is a world-famous composer whose unique style has earned him great respect and success in the world of music. 谭盾是一位世界著名的作曲家，他独特的风格为他在音乐界赢得了巨大的尊重和成功。 He likes nature. 他喜欢自然。 He loved the sounds of the rushing water and the blowing wind because, to him, the best music came from nature. 他喜欢淙淙的水声和飒飒的风声，因为对他来说，最美妙的音乐来自大自然。 He uses nature sounds. 他运用自然之声。 As he likes the sounds of nature, Tan uses them a lot in his music, creating amazing pieces like Water Concerto. 因为喜欢自然界的声音，谭盾在音乐中大量运用这些声音，创作出像《水乐》这样令人惊叹的作品。 He mixes different styles. 他融合不同的风格。 Tan Dun builds a bridge between Eastern and Western styles of music, successfully bringing them together in his works. 谭盾在东西方音乐风格之间架起了一座桥梁，成功地将它们融合在他的作品中。 I like this music. 我喜欢这音乐。 I was deeply moved by the unique beauty of this music, which made me feel happy and excited. 我被这音乐独特的美深深打动，它让我感到快乐和兴奋。 四、高分写作方法 典例精析 你喜欢在空闲时间听音乐，请根据下列要求，用英语写一篇90个词左右的短文介绍你最喜欢的音乐和音乐人。 内容包括： 1. What music do you like best? Why? 2. Who is your favourite singer or musician? Why? 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括所有信息，并适当发挥。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 先明确三点：写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。 内容上，题目给出两个必须回答的问题：最喜欢的音乐类型及原因、最喜欢的歌手或音乐人及原因。时态上，描述当前的喜好用一般现在时，描述已故音乐人用一般过去时。结构上分三段：第一段引出自己喜欢的音乐类型并说明原因，第二段介绍最喜欢的歌手及其吸引自己的理由，第三段总结音乐在自己生活中的意义。 【例文欣赏】 My favourite music My favourite music is pop music. It is easy to understand and very popular with young people. Listening to it helps me make many friends who have the same interest. My favourite singer is Michael Jackson. He was known as the“King of Pop” and had amazing talent. His songs make me feel relaxed after a hard day’s study. They also improve my English.Besides, his songs have good meanings.They encourage me to face difficulties bravely. Music plays an important role in my life, and I enjoy listening to his songs very much. 【亮点解析】 开篇直点音乐类型并解释原因。 "My favourite music is pop music."直接回答问题一。随后用"easy to understand"和"very popular with young people"两个原因解释为什么喜欢流行音乐，简洁明了。"Listening to it helps me make many friends who have the same interest."补充了音乐带来的社交价值——结识同好，且"who have the same interest"作为定语从句修饰"friends"，句式有变化。 用具体细节支撑"为什么喜欢这位歌手"。 "was known as the 'King of Pop'"用被动语态交代他的地位和称号；"had amazing talent"概括才华。紧接着从三个层面展开：放松心情("make me feel relaxed after a hard day's study")、提升英语("improve my English")、精神激励("encourage me to face difficulties bravely")。三个理由从"缓解疲劳"到"语言学习"再到"精神力量"，由浅入深，层层递进。 时态运用准确。 描述Michael Jackson作为已故歌手用一般过去时（"was known""had"），描述他的歌曲对现在的影响用一般现在时（"make""improve""encourage"），时态转换清晰合理。 结尾总结音乐的价值。 "Music plays an important role in my life"收束全文，"enjoy listening to his songs very much"呼应标题"喜欢听音乐"，首尾完整。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 谭盾是一位世界著名的作曲家，他独特的风格为他在音乐界赢得了巨大的尊重和成功。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 他喜欢淙淙的水声和飒飒的风声，因为对他来说，最美妙的音乐来自大自然。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 由于当时没有乐器，他用普通的物品来创作音乐，比如石头和纸。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 谭盾在东西方音乐风格之间架起了一座桥梁，成功地将它们融合在一起。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 我被这音乐独特的美深深打动，它让我感到快乐和兴奋。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型1：... showed an interest in ... when ...（描述早期兴趣） 例句：Tan Dun showed an interest in music when he was very young. 谭盾在很小的时候就表现出对音乐的兴趣。 （1）莫扎特在很小的时候就表现出对音乐的兴趣。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我在五岁的时候表现出对弹钢琴的兴趣。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型2：Since ...，...（描述原因与结果） 例句：Since he had no musical instruments then, he made music with common objects like stones and paper. 由于当时没有乐器，他用普通的物品来创作音乐，比如石头和纸。 （1）由于他喜欢自然界的声音，他在音乐中大量运用这些声音。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）由于这首音乐非常优美，它一直是我最喜欢的作品之一。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型3：... uses ... a lot in his/her music.（描述音乐特点） 例句：As he likes the sounds of nature, Tan uses them a lot in his music. 因为喜欢自然界的声音，谭盾在音乐中大量运用这些声音。 （1）这位作曲家在他的音乐中大量运用中国传统乐器。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）这位音乐家在她的作品中大量运用乡村音乐的元素。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型4：This piece of music makes me feel ...（描述聆听感受） 例句：Listening to this piece of music makes me feel relaxed and happy. 听这首音乐让我感到放松和快乐。 （1）听古典音乐让我感到平静和专注。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）听《茉莉花》这首歌让我想起大自然的朴素之美。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型5：There is nothing more ... than ...（表达最高评价） 例句：There is nothing more relaxing than listening to classical music. 没有什么比听古典音乐更让人放松的了。 （1）没有什么比音乐更有力量的了。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）没有什么比传统民间音乐更美的了。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：He is a composer. 他是一位作曲家。 升级句：Tan Dun is a world-famous composer whose unique style has earned him great respect and success in the world of music. 谭盾是一位世界著名的作曲家，他独特的风格为他在音乐界赢得了巨大的尊重和成功。 1. 基础句：He likes nature. 他喜欢自然。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：He uses nature sounds. 他运用自然之声。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：He mixes different styles. 他融合不同的风格。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：I like classical music. 我喜欢古典音乐。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：This music makes me feel good. 这首音乐让我感觉很好。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：Music is important. 音乐很重要。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“Music in My Life”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下问题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 1. What is your favorite type of music? 2. How does this music influence your daily life? 3. Why do you think music is important to everyone? 要求：1.短文需包含所有问题要点，并适当发挥； 2.词数100左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. Tan Dun is a world-famous composer whose unique style has earned him great respect and success in the world of music. 2. He loved the sounds of the rushing water and the blowing wind because, to him, the best music came from nature. 3. Since he had no musical instruments then, he made music with common objects like stones and paper. 4. Tan Dun builds a bridge between Eastern and Western styles of music, successfully bringing them together. 5. I was deeply moved by the unique beauty of this music, which made me feel happy and excited. Level 2 句型仿写 句型1 （1）Mozart showed an interest in music when he was very young. （2）I showed an interest in playing the piano when I was five years old. 句型2 （1）Since he likes the sounds of nature, he uses them a lot in his music. （2）Since this piece of music is very beautiful, it has been one of my favourite works. 句型3 （1）This composer uses traditional Chinese instruments a lot in his music. （2）This musician uses country music elements a lot in her works. 句型4 （1）Listening to classical music makes me feel calm and focused. （2）Listening to the song “Jasmine Flower” reminds me of the simple beauty of nature. 句型5 （1）There is nothing more powerful than music. （2）There is nothing more beautiful than traditional folk music. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：He loved the sounds of the rushing water and the blowing wind because, to him, the best music came from nature. 他喜欢淙淙的水声和飒飒的风声，因为对他来说，最美妙的音乐来自大自然。 2. 升级句：As he likes the sounds of nature, Tan uses them a lot in his music, creating amazing pieces like Water Concerto. 因为喜欢自然界的声音，谭盾在音乐中大量运用这些声音，创作出像《水乐》这样令人惊叹的作品。 3. 升级句：Tan Dun builds a bridge between Eastern and Western styles of music, successfully bringing them together in his works. 谭盾在东西方音乐风格之间架起了一座桥梁，成功地将它们融合在他的作品中。 4. 升级句：I love classical music because it is relaxing and can help me feel less stressed after a long day of study. 我喜欢古典音乐，因为它让人放松，能帮助我在一天漫长的学习后减轻压力。 5. 升级句：This piece of music is so beautiful and meaningful that it always makes me feel relaxed and happy every time I listen to it. 这首音乐如此优美且富有意义，每次听都让我感到放松和快乐。 6. 升级句：Music is a piece of art that goes in the ears straight to the heart. It has the power to connect people from different cultures. 音乐是从耳朵直击心灵的艺术。它有连接来自不同文化的人的力量。 篇章训练（参考范文） Music in My Life My favorite type of music is soft folk music. Every time I feel tired I put on some folk songs and let the gentle melodies calm me down. It helps me relax and clear my mind. Folk music also brings me closer to my grandma. She used to sing old folk songs to me when I was little, so listening to them makes me think of those warm days. I believe music is important to everyone because it’s a great way to express our feelings. It can cheer us up when we’re sad. Music truly makes our life more wonderful. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $