专题02 高考英语小作文讲义（下）2027年高考英语一轮复习

高考英语写作·解析分册（0213) 第一篇·小作文写作思路讲义（下）·练习与句式库（解析版） 答案与解析随练随附 本册目录 第四部分半独立练习（老师带着走一遍·六种体裁各练一道） 第五部分独立练习（自己走完全程·六种体裁各练一道） 第六部分升级句式库（从说得对到说得漂亮) 第七部分考场口诀（背下来，五步不走偏） 高分词汇替换表（基础表达→高三/雅思级） 1 第四部分半独立练习（老师带着走一遍·六种体裁各练一道） 这一部分老师不替你写，但陪你走完五步。每题先口头回答五个问题，再把框架草稿填好，最后才动 笔。答案放在题头批注里（点开题头【即可看），含范文A基础版、B高分版和逐句讲解一一做完再看， 别偷看。 【练习一·书信：建议信】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友To最近因备考压力大而失眠。请你给他回一 封邮件，内容包括：1.表示理解与鼓励：2.提出两条缓解建议；3.表达祝愿。注意：词数100左右(100 120词)；可适当增加细节。 【动笔前先回答这五个问题（口答即可） 口体裁是什么？格式骨架长什么样？（邮件=书信类） 口时态用什么？语气是正式还是轻松？(Tom是朋友，可轻松但仍要正式落款) 口要点编号：①②③分别是什么？有没有隐含要点（回信先回应对方）？ 口要点②的两条建议，各加什么W才具体？（不能只说relax more)) 口100-120词怎么分？开头几句、正文几句、结尾几句？ 【框架草稿（先填中文，再译英文·目标100-120词) 开头（要点①，理解+鼓励）： 正文建议一（要点②-，加What+Why): 正文建议二（要点②-2，加What+Why): 结尾（要点③，祝愿）： 关键提醒：给朋友写信语气可轻松，但书信格式(Dear Tom,/Yours,LiHua)一样不能省；建议要 具体，relax more太虚，换成take a warm shower before bed之类。 【练习二·通知：社团招新】假定你是校英语俱乐部负责人李华。俱乐部拟招新，请你以学生会的名义写 一则通知，内容包括：1.招新目的：2.活动时间地点：3.报名方式。注意：词数100左右(100-120 词)；可适当增加细节。 【动笔前先回答这五个问题（口答即可） 口体裁是什么？格式骨架长什么样？(NOTICE标题+Student Union落款，无称呼无Yours) 口时态用什么？（通知讲「将要发生」一全将来时） 口要点编号：①②③分别是什么？隐含要点（招新目的自带）算哪条？ 口要点③报名方式，加什么W才具体？（不能只说sign up) 口100-120词怎么分？ 2 1框架草稿（先填中文，再译英文·目标100-120词） 标题：NOTICE(居中全大写) 正文目的+时间地点（要点①②）： 正文报名方式（要点③，加What+Where): 落款：Student Union 关键提醒：通知全篇将来时，写了We held就露馅；报名方式要给出具体渠道，如sign up with your class monitor. 【练习三·演讲稿：坚持】假定你是李华，你校将举办以「The Power of Perseverance」为主题的英语演 讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1.坚持的意义：2.你的相关经历：3.发出倡议。注意：词数100 左右(100-120词)；可适当增加细节。 「动笔前先回答这五个问题（口答即可） 口体裁是什么？格式骨架长什么样？(Boys and girls称呼+Let's号召+Thank you) 口时态用什么？（讲道理用现在时，讲经历用过去时） 口要点编号：①②③分别是什么？隐含要点（开场点题、结尾号召）算哪条？ 口要点②经历，加什么W才具体？（不能只说I kept trying) 口100-120词怎么分？ 1框架草稿（先填中文，再译英文·目标100-120词) 开头（称呼+开场点题）： 正文意义（要点①，加Why): 正文经历（要点②，加What+When,过去时）： 结尾（号召Let's..+Thank you): 关键提醒：演讲稿开头必须有称呼、结尾必须有号召与Thank you:经历用过去时，道理用现在 时，别混。 【练习四·报道：校运动会】假定你是校英文报记者李华。上周五你校举办了第40届校运动会。请你写 一篇英文报道，内容包括：1.活动时间与地点：2.精彩瞬间：3.师生反响。注意：词数100左右(100- 120词)；可适当增加细节。 【动笔前先回答这五个问题（口答即可） 口体裁是什么？格式骨架长什么样？（简短标题+正文，全过去时，无落款） 口时态用什么？（报道「已发生」→全过去时） 3 口要点编号：①②③分别是什么？隐含要点（标题、5W1H)算哪条？ 口要点②精彩瞬间，加什么W才具体？（不能只说exciting) ▣100-120词怎么分？ 1框架草稿（先填中文，再译英文·目标100-120词) 标题（简短醒目）： 正文何时何地（要点①，过去时）： 正文精彩瞬间（要点②，加What+How): 正文反响（要点③）： 关键提醒：报道全篇过去时，写了is held就错；标题要短，如A Successful Sports Meeting。 【练习五·日记：校园劳动实践】假定你是李华。上周五你班参加了学校组织的「劳动实践课」(Lb Practice Course),到学校农场劳动了一天。请你写一篇英文日记，内容包括：1.劳动经过；2.你的收获 与感受。注意：1.词数100左右（100-120词)：2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 动笔前先回答这五个问题（口答即可） 口体裁是什么？格式骨架长什么样？（日记=日期天气行+第一人称正文，无称呼无落款） 口时态用什么？（记「已经发生」→全过去时：收获感悟可用现在时） 口要点编号：①②分别是什么？隐含要点（日期天气行、开头总起）算哪条？ 口要点①劳动经过，加什么W才具体？（不能只说we worked hard) 口100-120词怎么分？ 【框架草稿（先填中文，再译英文·目标100-120词） 日期天气行（右上角）：Friday (Sunny Cloudy /Rainy) 正文经过（要点①，加What+How,过去时）： 正文收获感受（要点②，加Wy): 关键提醒：日记全篇过去时，写了we will就露馅；日期天气行别漏；人称从头到尾都是I/we。 【练习六·投稿/短文：我的偶像】假定你是李华，你校英文报「My Role Model」栏目正在征稿。请你 用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你心目中的一位榜样，内容包括：1.他/她是谁及主要事迹；2.对你的影响。 注意：1.词数100左右(100-120词)；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 1动笔前先回答这五个问题（口答即可） 口体裁是什么？格式骨架长什么样？（投稿短文=简短标题+正文，无称呼无落款） 口时态用什么？（事迹用过去现在时结合，影响用现在时） 4 口要点编号：①②分别是什么？隐含要点（标题、开头点题）算哪条？ 口要点①事迹，加什么W才具体？（不能只说he is great,要有具体事例） 口100-120词怎么分？ 1框架草稿（先填中文，再译英文·目标100-120词） 标题（简短醒目）： 正文事迹（要点①，加What+When): 正文影响（要点②，加Why): 关键提醒：投稿短文无称呼无落款，要有简短标题；事迹要具体事例支撑，空喊great/kind拿不 到内容分。 参考答案与解析 【练习一·书信：建议信】详细答案 体裁：书信/邮件。格式骨架：Dear Tom,→开头目的句一正文（每要点1段）→结尾客套→Yours,, Li Hua. 时态语气：回信谈「现在的状态」用一般现在时；To是朋友可略轻松，但落款仍要正式，不用过度口 语。 要点编号：①表示理解与鼓励（书信自带开头目的句可兼）②两条缓解建议③表达祝愿。隐含要点： 回信先回应对方(I am sorry to learn.)。 1范文A·基础版（约87词） Dear Tom, I am sorry to learn that you can't sleep well because of the coming exam.Don't worry too much,for I believe you can handle it.Here are two suggestions for you.First,listen to some soft music before going to bed,and it will help you relax.Second,take a short walk after dinner every day,which can make you a little tired and help you fall asleep.I hope you will feel better soon and do well in the exam. Yours, LiHua 1范文B·高分版（约117词） Dear Tom. I was sorry to learn that stress from the coming exam has been keeping you awake at night.I completely understand,for exams can be overwhelming to anyone Here are two practical suggestions.To begin with,it is highly recommended that you listen to some soft music or take a warm shower before bed,both of which help your body relax.Besides,a short walk after dinner will not only clear your mind but also improve the quality of your sleep. 5 Above all,don't push yourself too hard,for a good rest is part of good preparation.I sincerely hope my suggestions will work and wish you every success in the exam. Yours, LiHua 逐句讲解(B版)： ·Dear Tom,:称呼，书信格式分。 ·I was sorry to learn that.:开头先回应对方（隐含要点）；was sorry to learn比I am sorry to hear更书面， has been keeping you awake用现在完成进行时写出「持续失眠」。 ,I completely understand.:表达理解与鼓励（要点①），for exams can be overwhelming to anyone用从句 补原因。 ·Here are two practical suggestions.:过渡句，自然引出两条建议。 ,To begin with,.it is highly recommended that..:：建议一（要点②-l),，it is recommended that引导虚拟语气 升级；both of which help your body relax用非限制定语从句补「好处」。 ·Besides,a short walk after dinner will not only.:建议二（要点②-2），not only.but also并列升级；the quality of your sleep收得更专业。 ·Above all,.don't push yourself too hard.:心态补充，a good rest is part of good preparation金句收束。 ,I sincerely hope..:表达祝愿（要点③），wish you every success in the exam得体。 ·Yours,./Li Hua:落款，格式分。 【练习二·通知：社团招新】详细答案 体裁：通知Notice。格式：NOTICE标题（居中全大写）一正文一Student Union落款：无称呼、无 Yourso 时态语气：全篇一般将来时（招新「将要发生」）；客观正式。 要点编号：①招新目的（自带）②活动时间地点③报名方式。隐含：落款Student Union。 I范文A·基础版（约81词） NOTICE The English Club will recruit new members.To help you improve your English,we will hold a welcome meeting in the school hall from 4:00 to 5:00 p.m.next Monday.At the meeting,you can enjoy English movies,play interesting games and practise spoken English with new friends,which will surely help you improve your English.If you are interested in English,please sign up with your class monitor before this Friday.Everyone is welcome to join us! Student Union 1范文B·高分版（约106词） 6 NOTICE To enrich students'after-school life,the English Club is now recruiting new members. A welcome meeting will be held in the school hall from 4:00 to 5:00 p.m.next Monday,when you can enjoy wonderful English movies,play interesting games and practise spoken English with like-minded friends.A variety of activities are also on the schedule,ranging from English debates to movie nights. Those who are interested are expected to sign up with your class monitor before this Friday.The club offers a golden opportunity to improve your English,so don't hesitate to join us,and we are looking forward to your arrival! Student Union 逐句讲解(B版)： NOTICE:标题，全大写居中，通知格式分。 ,To enrich students'after-school life.:招新目的（要点①），不定式目的状语开头；is now recruiting用现 在进行时表「近期安排」。 ·A welcome meeting will be held.:时间地点（要点②），will be held将来时被动；wMen定语从句带出见 面会内容。 ·A variety of activities…:活动内容补充，ranging from..to.结构升级。 Those who are interested:报名方式（要点③），expected to sign up with your class monitor给出具体渠 道。 The club offers a golden opportunity:结尾号召，golden opportunity增强吸引力。 Student Union:落款。 【练习三·演讲稿：坚持】详细答案 体裁：演讲稿。格式：Boys and girls称呼→开场点题→观点展开→号召(Let's)+Thank you。. 时态语气：道理用现在时，经历用过去时：亲切有感染力，多用we。 要点编号：①坚持意义②我的经历③倡议。隐含：开场点题、结尾号召+致谢。 1范文A·基础版（约87词） Boys and girls, It is my honour to talk about perseverance.As we all know,perseverance is very important to us,because nothing great can be achieved without hard work.I still remember when I first learned to swim.I failed many times,but I did not give up.After practising every day for a month,I could swim well at last.From this experience,I learned that we should never give up easily.Let's keep trying and success will come to us!Thank you. Li Hua 1范文B·高分版（约117词） Boys and girls, 7 It is a great honour to stand here and share my understanding of perseverance.As we all know,perseverance is the key to success,which helps us go through hard times and finally reach our goals. I still remember when I first learned to swim.I failed again and again and even wanted to give up,but my mother kept encouraging me.Thanks to her support,I practised every weekend for a whole month and could swim at last. It was my persistence that led me to that moment of success. Let's hold on to our dreams and keep persevering,because where there is a will,there is a way!Thank you. Li Hua 逐句讲解(B版)： Boys and girls,:称呼，演讲稿格式分。 ·It is a great honour to stand here,:开场点题（隐含要点）。 As we all know,perseverance is the key to success.:坚持的意义（要点①），which从句补作用、reach our goals写出目的。 ,I still remember when I first learned to swim:个人经历引入（要点②，过去时）。 ·I failed again and again.:经历细节（想放弃+母亲鼓励），故事有起伏。 ·Thanks to her support,I practised:结果推进，Thanks to表原因、时间状语具体。 ·It was my persistence that led me:强调句点题，把经历扣回主题。 ,Let's hold on to our dreams..:号召（要点③），谚语where the1 re is a will,there is a way收尾+Thank you 致谢。 【练习四·报道：校运动会】详细答案 体裁：报道。格式：简短标题一正文(5W1H),全过去时，无落款。 时态语气：全篇一般过去时：客观叙述。 要点编号：①时间地点②精彩瞬间③师生反响。隐含：标题、5V1H要素。 I范文A·基础版（约81词） A Successful Sports Meeting Last Friday,our school held the 40th Sports Meeting on the playground.All the students and teachers took an active part in it.The most exciting moment was the 4x100m relay race,in which the players tried their best and the students cheered loudly.Besides,the high jump and the long jump were also wonderful.Everyone felt happy and excited.The meeting not only helped us keep healthy but also made our school life colorful. Li Hua 1范文B·高分版（约106词） A Successful Sports Meeting 8 Last Friday witnessed the 40th Sports Meeting of our school,which was held on the playground from 8:00 a.m.to 5:00 p.m.All the students and teachers gathered together to enjoy this big day The most exciting moment was the 4x100m relay,where players united as one and the whole stadium erupted with cheers.Besides,the high jump and the long jump also drew loud applause,and the athletes'perseverance moved every one present Highly praised by both teachers and students,the event not only built up our bodies but also strengthened our friendship.It was truly a day to remember. Li Hua 逐句讲解(B版)： :A Successful Sports Meeting:标题，简短醒目，报道格式分。 Last Friday witnessed:时间地点（要点①），witnessed拟人+which从句交代时间地点。 ·All the students and teachers gathered.:参与面，为精彩瞬间作铺垫。 ,The most exciting moment was.:精彩瞬间（要点②），where定语从句写接力场面。 Besides,the high jump and the long jump..:补充项目+运动员精神，让「瞬间」更丰富。 Highly praised by both teachers and students:师生反响（要点③），not only.but also升级。 It was truly a day to remember.:结尾升华收束。 【练习五·日记：校园劳动实践】详细答案 体裁：日记Diay。格式：右上角日期天气行（如Friday,Sunny)→第一人称正文：无称呼、无落款。 时态语气：记「已发生」的事，正文以一般过去时为主；结尾的收获感悟可用一般现在时点题。 要点编号：①劳动经过（加What+How)②收获与感受（加Wy)。隐含要点：日期天气行、开头总 起一句。 1范文A·基础版（约87词） Friday,Sunny Last Friday,our class went to the school farm to take part in the Labor Practice Course.We worked there for a whole day In the morning,we planted vegetables and watered the young trees.After that,some students picked apples and others cleaned the farm.Although we were tired,we felt very happy. From the activity,I learned that labor can bring us joy and confidence.I also understood that we should value food and respect the farmers'hard work.What a meaningful day! 1范文B·高分版（约116词） Friday,Sunny Last Friday witnessed our class's Labor Practice Course on the school farm,where we spent a whole day working with our hands Hardly had we arrived when we were divided into small groups.Some of us planted vegetables and watered the young trees,while others picked ripe apples and cleaned the farm.Tired as we were,none of us complained,and laughter filled the fields from morning to afternoon Never before had I realized that labor could be so rewarding.Not only did we gain practical skills,but we also learned to value every grain of food and respect the farmers'hard work.It was indeed a meaningful day that I will always treasure. 逐句讲解(B版)： ·Friday,Suny:日期天气行，日记格式分（写在右上角）。 .Last Friday witnessed our class's.:开头总起（交代事件与地点），witnessed拟人+where从句。 ·Hardly had we arrived when.:进入劳动经过（要点①），Hardly.when倒装写出「一到就分组开工」。 ·Sone.while others.:分工具体，while对比两类劳动，动词planting/watering/picking/cleaning各就 各位。 ·Tired as we were:让步倒装写劳动状态：laughter filled the fields用画面补气氛（隐含要点：有细节才生 动)。 Never before had I realized.:收获感悟（要点②），Never倒装引出内心变化。 Not only did we gain.but also:双重收获升级，扣回「珍惜粮食、尊重劳动」。 ·It was indeed a meaningful day.:总结收尾，呼应主题。 【练习六·投稿/短文：我的偶像】详细答案 体裁：投稿/短文。格式：简短标题→开头点题引入→正文介绍；无称呼、无落款。 时态语气：人物基本情况用一般现在时，具体事迹用过去时，谈影响用现在时：像和朋友分享，亲切自 然。 要点编号：①他/她是谁及主要事迹（加What+When)②对你的影响（加Why)。隐含要点：简短标 题、开头点题。 1范文A·基础版（约100词） The Person I Admire Most When it comes to the person I admire most,my father comes to my mind first. My father is an ordinary worker,but he is great in my eyes.Last year,when our neighbor lost his job and felt very sad,my father not only lent him money but also helped him find a new job.Besides,my father always encourages me to face difficulties bravely and often helps me with my study. Influenced by him,I have learned to be kind and helpful.I hope I can become a person like him one day. 10 1范文B·高分版（约115词） The Person I Admire Most When it comes to the person I admire most,my father instantly springs to my mind.An ordinary worker as he is,he shines in my eyes. I still remember last year,when our neighbor lost his job and sank into deep anxiety.My father not only offered him timely financial support but also hunted for a new job for him,and he never mentioned these favors afterwards. It is my father who has taught me that kindness is a choice.Influenced by him,I have grown into a warm-hearted boy who is always willing to lend a hand.I do hope I can become someone like him one day. 逐句讲解(B版)： ,The Person I Admire Most:标题，简短醒目，投稿格式分。 When it comes to…springs to my mind:开头点题引入（隐含要点），when it comes to引出话题。 ·An ordinary worker as he is.:倒装让步，先抑后扬，立住人物形象。 ·I still remember last year,.when..:事迹引入（要点①），when定语从句讲故事。 .My father not only.but also..:具体帮助，动词升级(offered/hunted for);never mentioned these favors 用细节让形象更立体。 ·It is my father who has taught me.:影响（要点②），强调句点题。 ·nfluenced by him,I have grown into.:影响落到自己身上，前后呼应。 ·I do hope I can become someone like him.:结尾愿望，回扣标题。 第五部分独立练习（自己走完全程·六种体裁各练一道） 这一部分完全靠自己：定体裁、拆要点、搭框架、扩句、终检，五步一步不落写在下面。答案同样在 题头批注里（点开【查看），含AB范文与逐句讲解。写完对照，看自己卡在五步里的哪一步。 【练习一·书信：申请信】假定你是李华，你校暑期国际夏令营招募志愿者。请你写一封申请信，内容包 括：1.申请意愿：2.个人优势：3.表达期待。注意：词数100左右(100-120词)：可适当增加细节。 1自己按五步走，把结果写在下面 ①体裁： 格式： 时态： 语气： ②要点编号： ③框架与字数分配（开头20+正文70+结尾20)： ④逐句扩写（先写干句，再加W): ⑤终检：格式要点语气字数时态 11 关键提醒：申请信是「求机会」，语气要比感谢信更谦恭；优势要具体（如fluent English,outgoing personality),别写I am good at everything。 【练习二·通知：艺术节】假定你是校学生会主席李华。学校将于下月举办校园艺术节（Art Festival)。 请你写一则通知，内容包括：1.艺术节目的；2.时间与地点：3.报名与要求。注意：词数100左右(100- 120词)；可适当增加细节。 】自己按五步走，把结果写在下面 ①体裁： 格式： 时态： 语气： ②要点编号： ③框架与字数分配： ④逐句扩写： ⑤终检：格式 要点 语气字数时态 关键提醒：通知全将来时；报名要求要具体渠道，如sign up with your class monitor before next Friday。 【练习三·演讲稿：网络与学习】假定你是李华，你校将举办以「Internet一A Good Helper in Study」 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1.网络的学习价值：2.合理使用建议：3.发出倡 议。注意：词数100左右(100-120词)；可适当增加细节。 自己按五步走，把结果写在下面 ①体裁： 格式： 时态： 语气： ②要点编号： ③框架与字数分配： ④逐句扩写： ⑤终检：格式 要点语气字数时态 关键提醒：演讲稿开头称呼+结尾号召+Thank you三件套缺一不可；建议用we should拉近距 离。 【练习四·报道：图书捐赠】假定你是校英文报记者李华。上周六你校举办了「爱心捐书」(B0ok Donation)活动。请你写一篇英文报道，内容包括：1.活动时间与地点；2.捐赠情况，3.活动意义。注 意：词数100左右(100-120词)：可适当增加细节。 自己按五步走，把结果写在下面 ①体裁： 格式： 时态： 语气： ②要点编号： 12 ③框架与字数分配： ④逐句扩写： ⑤终检：格式要点 语气字数时态 关键提醒：报道全过去时；意义段用not only..but also升级，如not only helped others but also cultivated our kindness 【练习五·日记：一次难忘的比赛】假定你是李华。上周六你参加了学校英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请 你写一篇英文日记，内容包括：1.比赛经过；2.你的感受与反思。注意：1.词数100左右(100-120 词)：2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 【自己按五步走，把结果写在下面 ①体裁： 格式： 时态： 语气： ②要点编号： ③框架与字数分配（日期天气行+总起+经过+感受)： ④逐句扩写（先写干句，再加W): ⑤终检：格式要点语气一字数时态 关键提醒：日记全过去时；日期天气行别漏；感受段可用What impressed me most../Never had I e迎ected..倒装升级。 【练习六·投稿/短文：光盘行动】假定你是李华，你校英文报「Save Food,.Save the World.」栏目正在 征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.珍惜粮食的意义，2.你的做法与建议。注意：1.词数 100左右(100-120词)：2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 【自己按五步走，把结果写在下面 ①体裁： 格式： 时态： 语气： ②要点编号： ③框架与字数分配（标题+引入+意义+做法）： ④逐句扩写（先写干句，再加W): ⑤终检：格式要点 语气字数时态 关键提醒：投稿短文无称呼无落款，要加简短标题；建议段用It is highly recommended that./ Only in this way can we.升级。 参考答案与解析 【练习一·书信：申请信】详细答案 13 体裁：书信/申请信。格式：Dear Sir/Madam,→申请目的→个人优势→期待→Yours,Li Hua。 时态语气：申请用一般现在时，期待用将来时：谦恭正式（比感谢信更客气）。 要点编号：①申请意愿②个人优势③表达期待。隐含：开头目的句。 I范文A·基础版（约86词） Dear Sir/Madam. I am writing to apply for the position of a volunteer for the summer camp.I think I am the right person for the job. First,I can speak English very well and have no difficulty talking with foreign friends.Second,I am outgoing and always ready to help others.Besides,I have organized many school activities before.If you give me the chance,I will spare no effort to do the job well.I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, LiHua 1范文B·高分版（约107词） Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for the position of a volunteer for the upcoming summer camp. I believe I am well qualified for this role.To begin with,I have a good command of English and can communicate with foreign guests with ease,which is essential for the voluntary work.Besides,being outgoing and responsible,I have rich experience in organizing school activities and am always ready to offer a helping hand. I would appreciate it if you could give me this precious chance,and I promise to devote myself wholeheartedly to the work.I am looking forward to your favourable reply. Yours, LiHua 逐句讲解(B版)： ·Dear Sir/Madam,:称呼（未知收信人用此），书信格式分。 I am writing to apply for.:开头目的句（要点①），apply for the position of表达正式。 ·I believe I am well qualified.:过渡句，先给整体印象。 ,To begin with,I have a good command of English.:优势一（要点②），have a good command of升级 speak well;which从句补「为什么对工作有用」。 Besides,being outgoing and responsible..:优势二、三，现在分词短语作状语。 ,I would appreciate it if you could.:表达期待（要点③），would appreciate it if虚拟语气更礼貌。 ·I promise to devote myself wholeheartedly.:承诺负责，增强说服力。 ·Yors,/Li Hua:落款，格式分。 【练习二·通知：艺术节】详细答案 14 体裁：通知。格式：NOTICE标题+Student Union落款，无称呼无Yours:全将来时。 时态语气：全篇一般将来时：客观正式。 要点编号：①艺术节目②时间地点③报名与要求。隐含：落款Student Union。 1范文A·基础版（约84词） NOTICE Our school will hold an Art Festival next month.The purpose of the festival is to enrich our school life and show our talents.It will be held in the school hall from 2:00 to 5:00 p.m.on the first day.There will be many wonderful performances,such as singing,dancing and short plays.If you want to take part in the festival,please sign up with your class monitor before next Friday.We are looking forward to your active participation! Student Union 1范文B·高分版（约100词） NOTICE To enrich students'artistic life,the School Art Festival will be held in the school hall next month Various performances,including singing,dancing,short plays,musical instrument shows and fashion shows,will be staged from 2:00 to 5:00 p.m.on the opening day.What's more,there will be a painting exhibition and a handcraft show,where you can appreciate the creativity of your schoolmates. Those who are interested are expected to sign up with your class monitor before next Friday.This festival is a wonderful stage to display your talents,so don't miss the chance to shine! Student Union 逐句讲解(B版)： NOTICE:标题，全大写居中，通知格式分。 .To enrich students'artistic1ife.:目的+活动（要点①②），不定式目的状语开头；will be held将来被 动。 ·Various performances,.including:活动内容，including具体列举节目。 What's more,.there will be.:补充展览类活动，where从句写现场看点。 ,Those who are interested are expected to.:报名与要求（要点③），给出具体渠道。 ·This festival is a wonderful stage:结尾号召，回扣「秀出才艺」。 Student Union:落款。 【练习三·演讲稿：网络与学习】详细答案 体裁：演讲稿。格式：Boys and girls称呼→开场点题一观点→号召(Let's)+Thank you。 时态语气：讲价值用现在时，倡议用将来时：亲切有感染力。 15 要点编号：①网络价值②合理使用建议③倡议。隐含：开场点题、结尾号召+致谢。 1范文A·基础版（约91词） Boys and girls. It is my honour to talk about the Internet.The Internet is very useful for our study.We can use it to search for useful information,watch English videos and communicate with our teachers.However,if we spend too much time on it,our study will be affected.So it is necessary for us to make a plan and follow it.Only when we use the Internet properly can it become a good helper in our study.Let's make good use of the Internet!Thank you. Li Hua 1范文B·高分版（约116词） Boys and girls, It is a great honour to share my views on how the Internet serves as a good helper in our study. Undoubtedly,the Internet gives us instant access to vast knowledge,which helps us solve difficult problems in minutes and keeps us informed of the latest news around the world.However,every coin has two sides.If we are addicted to online games or meaningless browsing,it will do great harm to our study and health. Therefore,we should use it wisely-set a time limit and stick to it,and turn to online resources only when necessary.Let's make the best of the Internet and become efficient learners!Thank you. Li Hua 逐句讲解(B版)： ,Boys and girls,:称呼，演讲稿格式分。 ·It is a great honour to share.:开场点题（隐含要点）。 ·Undoubtedly,the Internet gives us.:网络价值（要点①），which从句+keeps us informed升级。 However,.every coin has two sides.:转折句引出问题。 If we are addicted to.:反面提醒，把「过度使用」的危害写具体。 Therefore,we should use it wisely.:合理使用建议（要点②），set a time limit具体可操作。 ,Let's make the best of the Internet.:倡议（要点③）+Thank you致谢。 【练习四·报道：图书捐赠】详细答案 体裁：报道。格式：简短标题→正文(5W1H),全过去时，无落款。 时态语气：全篇一般过去时：客观叙述。 要点编号：①时间地点②捐赠情况③活动意义。隐含：标题、5W1H。 1范文A·基础版（约80词） Book Donation 16 Last Saturday,our school held a book donation activity on the playground.Many students and teachers took an active part in it.Everyone brought some favourite books,such as storybooks and reference books.In the end,we collected over two thousand books.These books will be sent to the children in poor areas.Everyone felt happy to help others.The activity taught us the importance of sharing.We hope more students will join us next time. Li Hua I范文B·高分版（约101词） Book Donation Last Saturday witnessed a meaningful book donation activity on our school playground,which attracted active participation from both students and teachers. Over 2,000 books,ranging from storybooks to reference books,were collected in just two hours.The books, carrying warm wishes from every donor,will be sent to children in poor areas,where they are expected to light up more young minds. Highly praised by all,the activity not only helped others in need but also cultivated our kindness and sense of sharing.It reminded us that a small act of giving can make a big difference. LiHua 逐句讲解(B版)： ·Book Donation:标题，简短醒目。 ,Last Saturday witnessed..:时间地点（要点①），witnessed拟人；which从句写参与面。 ·Over2,000 books,.ranging from:捐赠情况（要点②)，anging from..to.写具体；in just two hours显 热情。 The books,carrying warm wishes..:书籍去向+意义，where从句展望。 Highly praised by all.:话动意义（要点③），not only.but also升级。 ·It reminded us that:结尾升华，金句收束。 【练习五·日记：一次难忘的比赛】详细答案 体裁：日记Diy。格式：日期天气行→正文（总起→经过→感受与反思），第一人称：无称呼、 无落款。 时态语气：经过全用一般过去时：结尾的反思可用一般现在时/现在完成时；人称始终I。 要点编号：①比赛经过(What+How,可写赛前准备与赛中表现)②感受与反思(Why)。隐含：日期 天气行。 1范文A·基础版（约96词） Saturday,Sunny 17 Last Saturday,I took part in the English speech contest of our school and won the first prize.I will never forget this day. Before the contest,I practised my speech again and again in front of the mirror.When my turn came,I was very nervous,but I took a deep breath and began to speak.To my joy,my speech went on smoothly and the audience clapped warmly I felt very happy and proud.From this experience,I learned that hard work pays off.I will keep working hard in the future. 1范文B·高分版（约114词） Saturday,Sunny Last Saturday witnessed the English speech contest of our school,in which I finally won the first prize-an experience I will treasure forever. To be honest,I had butterflies in my stomach when my turn came.However,taking a deep breath,I stepped onto the stage and delivered my speech with confidence,which drew warm applause from the audience.What impressed me most was that all my efforts finally paid off. Never had I felt so proud of myself.The contest not only built up my courage but also taught me that success belongs to those who never give up.I will spare no effort to improve myself in the future. 逐句讲解(B版)： ·Saturday,Suy:日期天气行，日记格式分（写在右上角）。 ,Last Saturday witnessed.:总起（事件+结果），witnessed拟人+in which从句。 ,To be honest,.I had butterflies in my stomach.:赛前紧张（要点①），had butterflies in my stomach地道习 语写心理。 ·However,taking a deep breath.:赛中表现，分词作状语+which从句写现场反响。 .What impressed me most was that.:自我评价，主语从句升级，点出「努力值得」。 Never had I felt so proud.:感受（要点②），Never倒装。 ·The contest not only built up.but also taught me.:反思升华，not only倒装+主题句。 ·I will spare no effort to improve myself.:以未来打算收尾，积极向上。 【练习六·投稿/短文：光盘行动】详细答案 体裁：投稿/短文。格式：简短标题一引入一意义一做法：无称呼、无落款。 时态语气：讲道理、讲做法用一般现在时：第一人称w/I结合，亲切而有号召力。 要点编号：①珍惜粮食的意义(Why)②你的做法与建议(What)。隐含：简短标题、开头引入。 I范文A·基础版（约96词） Clear Your Plate.Save the World 18 As we all know,food is the basic need of human beings,but too much food is wasted every day It is very important for us to value food,because many people in the world are still hungry.To support the"Clean Your Plate"activity,I will order proper amounts of food in the canteen and eat up what I take.I will also advise my family and friends to do the same.Only in this way can we save food and help others. Let's take action from today on! 1范文B·高分版（约119词） Clear Your Plate,Save the World As the saying goes,every grain of rice is the fruit of hard work.Sadly,a large amount of food ends up in the rubbish bin every day while millions of people around the world are still suffering from hunger. It is high time that we took action to save food.Personally,I always order proper amounts in the canteen and eat up what I take.Besides,I have volunteered to design posters to call on my schoolmates to join the activity.It is also advisable for us to remind our family not to over-order in restaurants. Let's act now.Only when everyone treasures food can we build a better world for all. 逐句讲解(B版)： ·Clear Your Plate,Save the World:标题，动宾对仗、点明主题，投稿格式分。 ·As the saying goes,every grain of rice.:引入（隐含要点），谚语开头切「珍惜粮食」。 ·Sadly,.a large amount of food.while.:反面对比（浪费vs饥饿），制造紧迫感。 ·It is high time that we took action.:意义过渡（要点①），It is high time that+过去式虚拟语气升级。 ·Personally,I always order proper amounts:做法一（要点②），eat up what I take回扣「光盘」。 ,Besides,.I have volunteered to design posters:做法二，用具体行动支撑观点。 .It is also advisable for us to remind:做法三（建议他人），It is advisable for sb.todo结构升级。 ,Let's act now.Only when everyone treasures food can we.:号召收尾，Only倒装回扣标题。 第六部分升级句式库（从说得对到说得漂亮） 前提：只有要点齐全、语法正确之后，才轮到升级句式。基础没打牢就堆长句，是考场大忌。 分工：本部分管「换句式」（简单句→复合句/倒装/从句）；文末的「高分词汇替换表」管「换 词汇」。两者配合，一篇小作文放3一4处亮点足矣。 一、基础句→高分句对照（挑3~4组背熟就够用，按序号记） D I want you to come.-I would be delighted if you could come. 想请人来→用would be delighted if显礼貌 2 Please tell me.-I would appreciate it if you could inform me. 请告知一appreciate it if升级客套 19 3I think it is good.I am fully convinced that it is of great benefit. 我认为好→be convinced that+of great benefit 4 You should do more exercise.-It is highly recommended that you do more exercise. 你应该→It is recommended that客观建议 5It is very important.It plays a vital role in our daily life 很重要→play a vital role in升级 6I hope you can help me.-I would be grateful if you could give me a hand. 希望帮忙→be grateful if+give a hand 7 Thank you for your help.-I would like to express my sincere gratitude for your help 感谢→express my sincere gratitude正式 8 I am sorry for being late.I am writing to express my sincere apology for my delay. 道歉→express my sincere apology正式 二、三大句位（只背「位置句」，按序号记，不要背整篇） 位置一：开头目的句(3选1，按功能换动词) ①I am writing to invite you to.写信邀请你 ②I am writing to offer you some suggestions on.写信就…给建议 ③I am writing to apply for the position of.写信申请…职位 公式：I am writing to+动词原形(invite/suggest/appy/ask/thank/apologize) 位置二：正文亮点句（挑1~2处放进去即可） ①.，which will help you experience Chinese culture firsthand.非限制定语从句补「好处」 ②Not only can it broaden our horizons,but it also builds up our character..倒装+递进 ③Only by keeping a balanced diet can we stay energetic.Only开头部分倒装 ④We have prepared a variety of activities so that everyone can take part.so that目的状语从句 位置三：结尾期待句(3选1) ①I would appreciate it if you could accept our invitation..如蒙接受，不胜感激 ②I would be grateful if you could take my suggestions into consideration.如采纳建议，感激 ③Let's take action now and make a difference together!号召行动（演讲稿用） 第七部分考场口诀（背下来，五步不走偏） 把前面七部分压成几行口诀。进考场前默念一遍，比临时抱佛脚管用。 一、总口决（五步顺序） 20 定体裁二拆点，三搭框架四扩句，五步终检再交卷。 顺序颠倒全白练，先看体裁再下笔。 二、体裁四字诀 书信：Dear落款Yours在，开头目的结尾盼。 通知：NOTICE无称呼，全篇将来时莫改。 演讲：称呼号召Thank you,一头一尾不能丢。 报道：短标题全过去，5W1H写仔细。 通知：NOTICE无称呼，全篇将来时莫改。 演讲：称呼号召Thank you,一头一尾不能丢。 报道：短标题全过去，5W1H写仔细。 日记：日期天气抬头带，人称I来过去时。 通知：NOTICE无称呼，全篇将来时莫改。 演讲：称呼号召Thank you,一头一尾不能丢。 报道：短标题全过去，5W1H写仔细。 通知：NOTICE无称呼，全篇将来时莫改。 演讲：称呼号召Thank you,一头一尾不能丢。 报道：短标题全过去，5W1H写仔细。 投稿：短文标题加一个，不写Dear不落款。 通知：NOTICE无称呼，全篇将来时莫改。 演讲：称呼号召Thank you,一头一尾不能丢。 报道：短标题全过去，5W1H写仔细。 三、扩句口诀 干句只有三五词，加W才长得开。 Whe何时Where何地，What细节Why何意。 挑一两个最自然，句句撑开词数来。 四、升级口诀 换句式看三大位，开头目的正文亮，结尾期待收得漂亮。 换词汇查替换表，invite变extend,good变benefit。 三处亮点已足够，堆砌长句反受伤。 五、终检五连问口诀 21 格式对不对？要点全不全？语气搭不搭？ 字数够不够？时态人称乱没乱？ 五问各扫一眼，三十秒救回分。 不是创作，是「按点扩写」 先看得见→再撑得开→后说得漂亮 ③搭框架 ①定体裁 ②拆要点 ④扩句 ⑤终检 1分钟 30秒 因 30秒 因 回 5分钟 1分钟 三段式·分100- 认体裁套格式 划要点·编号1123 加4w:把话说具体 格式要点·语气 120词 ●卡点③：写得出但全是简单句→第五部分「升级句式库」+文末「高分词汇替换表」解决 分工：本部分管「换句式」 (简单句→复合句/倒装/从句)：文末的「高分词汇替换表」管 「换词汇」 (imi论→extend a cordial initation.)。两件事分开练：先把句式写复杂，再把里面的词换成 高级的。 位置 基础表达（别再写） 高分表达（高三/雅思级） 开头·目的 I am writing to invite you to... I am writing to extend a cordial invitation to you to.… 开头·目的 I want you to come to... Your presence would be a great honour for us. 开头·目的 I am sorry to hear that... I was sorry to learn that... 开头·目的 I am glad to tell you that... It is my great pleasure to inform you that... 正文·展开 There will be many activities A wide range of activities have been arranged, 1'anging fr'om.to.… 正文·展开 You can experience Chinese culture. ...offers you a golden opportunity to immerse yourself in authentic Chinese culture. 正文·展开 The hall can hold 300 students. ...which can accommodate roughly 300 students. 正文·展开 It is good for our health. ...is fundamental to our well-being. 正文·展开 I suggest you do... I strongly recommend(that)you.../It is highly advisable that... 正文·展开 so that you can. enabling you to.../thus allowing you to... 正文·展开 We should eat more vegetables. We should consume more vegetables rather than junk food. 正文·展开 every day on a daily basis 正文·展开 It is very important. It is essential/vital/indispensable. 正文·展开 It helps us stay healthy. It enables us to stay energetic and focused. 结尾·收束 I hope you can come. I would highly appreciate it if you could accept our invitation. 结尾·收束 Please write back soon I am looking forward to your early reply. 结尾·收束 I hope my advice helps I sincerely hope my advice will prove beneficial to you. 结尾·收束 Let's do it together. Only by doing so can we enjoy..(部分倒装) 22 连接词 First To begin with /First and foremost 连接词 Besides /Also Furthermore Additionally 连接词 What's more More importantly 连接词 Last Last but not least 连接词 But Nevertheless/However 高分词汇替换表（基础表达→高三/雅思级） 背法：左列是「看到就要警觉」的初中级用法，右列是替换目标。本表只管「换词」，句式升级看 第五部分「升级句式库」。不用全背一一挑8~10组写得顺的练熟，考场上见到对应场景就往上换， 一篇里出现3~4处高级表达即可，堆太多反而显得生硬。 一先看得见，再撑得开，后说得漂亮一 23