Unit 4 Life is beautiful 写作专项提优-【通成学典】2026-2027学年九年级上册英语拔尖特训(译林版·新教材)

拔尖持训· 英语（译林版）九年级上 写作专项提优 R图佳作赏析 品读范文，拆解核心技巧 青少年是国家和民族的希望，是建成社会主义现代化强国的未来栋梁。拥有一个有意义、有价 值的人生对青少年自己和整个民族都具有重要意义。某英文网站正在开展以“Live a more meaningful life'”为题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请根据写作提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 要点提示：1.简单谈谈有意义的生活的重要性。2.谈论如何创造有意义的生活。3.呼吁大家 创造有意义的生活。 [高分范文] 名师点评] Live a more meaningful life ①主题扣题：以“What should we do to live a Life is a gift.Everyone has a different life.What more meaningful life?”开篇，直接回应标题，立意 should we do to live a more meaningful life? 明确。 First,we should be caring and responsible. ②内容落地：从乐于助人、勤奋奉献、培养爱 When we see some people in need,we should offer our 好、重视健康四个维度展开，将抽象的“有意义的生 help.Seconde,we should be hard-working..We活”拆解为可践行的日常行动，用offer our help、 should use what we learn to make contributions to our make contributions to our country等具体行为，让 country°.Then●，we can have many hobbies to make奉献精神落地。 our life more meaningful and colourful.Last but not 围节奏紧凑：借助First、Second、Then和Last least,we should be healthy.At any time,we should but not least串联核心建议，用In my opinion引出 put our health first. 个人的补充观，点，段落间过渡自然。 In my opinion,we should face the ups and ④收尾质感：结尾以try our best to make it downs bravely in a meaningful life..In this way,we possible to have a better life收束，既呼应live a will never be afraid of any failure and won't give up more meaningful life的主题，又传递积极行动的态 easily. 度；中间补充的face the ups and downs、never be We will be happy to have such a more colourful afraid of any failure让“有意义”的内涵更丰富 and meaningful life..So we should try our best to不仅是美好与顺遂，更是面对挫折的坚韧，让文章立 make it possible to have a better life! 意更有深度。 的素材积累 储备金句，提升语言质感▲ [开头句] 1.I think my father has a very meaningful life. 2.If we look at life with a warm heart,we will find life is beautiful. 3.As we grow up,we must think of what we will do in our lives. 4.We all hope to live a meaningful life,but how can we do that? [中间句] 1.Whenever his friends or family need help,he is always ready to lend a hand. 2.When we help others or make progress,we can feel the beauty of life 3.Compared with usefulness,attention and praise from others is not that important. 4.My aunt knows how to live a great life. 72 Unit 4 Life is beautiful 结尾句 1.I think any life can have meaning if we make a difference in some way. 2.All in all,as long as we keep a positive attitude,life is always beautiful. 3.I am greatly influenced by my father.I have made up my mind to live my life just like him. 4.I imagine myself being just like her when I grow up. [名言警句] 1.Life is measured by thought and action,not by time. 生命（的价值）是用思想和行为来衡量的，而不是寿命的长短。 2.Only a life lived for others is a life worthwhile.只有为他人而活，生命才有价值。 3.From small beginnings come great things.伟大始于渺小。 ]写作演练 实战练笔，夯实写作功底▲ 英雄就在我们身边，这些“英雄”可能是我们的亲人、同学、朋友、老师…请介绍你心中的“小 人物，大英雄”。 要点：1.你心中的英雄是谁？2.描述令你印象深刻的一件事。3.这件事对你的影响。 要求：1.语句连贯，层次清晰，书写工整。2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。3.词数90左 右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数 [思路点拨]1.文体：记叙文。2.时态：一般现在时和一般过去时。3.人称：第一、三人称。 [写作提纲] A hero in my heart Beginning Body Ending Everybody has a hero Once she had a... But my mother... One night,when... My mother always sets a in their hearts. goal and manages to achieve it. [妙笔生花] A hero in my heart Everybody has a hero in their hearts. >“答案与解析”见D16 7312.A根据“The plant outside the house faced every season and many difficulties!”可知，这是爸爸在给儿子进 行解释。 13.C根据语境可知，屋内的植物不用面对气候变化，得 不到适当的光照，所以长不大。 14.A根据语境可知，此处表示这是关于“如何成为伟人” 这一问题的答案。 15.C要成为一个伟人，他一定已经经历无数次的失败， 历经许多困难的磨炼，并且克服那些困难。overcome those difficulties表示“克服那些困难”。 1.To the Chenghuang Miao area.2.Because of its sad face.3.In Yiwu,Zhejiang.4.A messy hairstyle. 5.Imperfection is valuable.(言之有理即可) 第3课时Grammar -,1.purpose 2.dentist 3.wives' 易错分析 wife的复数为wives,空格后有名词feelings,故须用 名词所有格 4.passages/paragraphs 5.satisfied 二、1.A2.D3.C 易错分析 在There be结构中，如果句子的主语是人，后面用 动词-ig形式：如果主语是需要被完成的事情，则用动词 不定式。 4.D 三、1.found2.loved3.Unlike4.wel5.useful 6.shoots 7.for 8.youth 9.why 10.but 长难句解读 原句：Just like bamboo stays straight even in strong winds,people think it represents courage and perseverance. 结构剖析：句中Just like bamboo stays straight even in strong winds为方式状语从句；think后接宾语从句it represents courage and perseverance,省略了引导词that。 翻译：就像竹子即使在狂风中也依然挺立，人们认为它 象征着勇气与坚韧不拔。 1.matches 2.History 3.celebrating 4.purpose 5.honour 6.centuries 7.pronunciation 8.represents 9.It makes people enjoy/love math. 第4课时Integration -,1.daughter 2.research 3.graduating 4.drop 1.to digitalize 2.encouraging 3.lend a hand 4.amazed 5.make up your mind 三、1.A 易错分析 be known to十人/群体，意为“为…所熟知”；be known for十原因/特点，意为“因…而出名”；be known as十身份/称号，意为“作为…而出名”。 2.C3.A4.B5.B6.A 四、1.A推理判断题。根据第四段中“Back in those days,the Mogao Caves were almost completely cut off from the world.Fan and her coworkers had to live in mud houses and drink salty water..”可知，樊锦诗在如此艰苦的 环境中工作，她是一个意志坚定的人。 2.A细节理解题。根据第三段中“Seeing Dunhuang for the first time was breathtaking.”可知，樊锦诗第一次见到 敦煌时觉得那是一个令人感到惊奇的地方。 3.C推理判断题。根据第六段中“An increasing number of tourists visiting Dunhuang might harm the caves, causing the murals inside to fade.”和第七段中“In the late 1980s,Fan stumbled upon computer technology by chance... forever..”可知，越来越多的游客来敦煌旅游，对实体洞窟的 威肋越来越大，促使樊锦诗为莫高窟建立数字数据库。 4.B细节理解题。根据最后一段的内容可知，樊锦诗觉 得她在敦煌的工作是她毕生的事业。 五、1.C2.A3.B4.E5.F 写作专项提优 One possible version: A hero in my heart Everybody has a hero in their hearts.My hero is my mother because she has been working hard all the time and never gives up. Once she had a difficult exam.To pass it,she must read four books.But my mother did not have so much time because she had to take care of me.One night,when I woke up suddenly at 2 o'clock,I found her staying up late to read her books.I was shocked by my mother. My mother always sets a goal and manages to achieve it.She is a hero in my heart and encourages me to work hard. 16Unit four, life is . beautiful热点素材for many . shanghai locals，a spring festival holiday is not complete without a trip to the shanghai area. After entering full human commercial building, you will feel a warm and lively atmosphere. Stores are decorated with lanterns in chinese nuts, selling fridge magnets, bag charms and horse themed plushes, the soda animal of this chinese new year. However, one popular product, the crying horse plushy, when viral for an unexpected reason, IT said. face this crying horse plushy first appeared in evo juja. Like other horse toys, IT is short legs, a golden belt in the words wishing you immediate wealth. But a soling mistake turned its smile into a thorough look. Surprisingly. many people like IT saying IT makes them feel less alone when things go wrong. There are also other imperfect products. Mobile bia from china art museum has a messy hairstyle inspired red by cheap tires painting. This trend shows that imperfection mirrors are real lives. We are all not perfect, and it's Normal to feel unhappy sometimes. IT also reminds us that being unique is . valuable in a competitive world, we should take a small risk in showing our creativity.