Unit 1 单元话题写作讲义 2026-2027学年人教版英语九年级上册

新目标九上 · 单元话题写作精讲讲义 · Unit 1 The Changing World　·　Changes in My Life 新目标（Go for it!）九年级上　｜　建议用时 90 分钟　｜　教师版 　本讲的学习目标 　● 会用“过去怎么样 + 现在怎么样”的对比，说清生活中的变化。 　● 能用 used to do 和现在完成时，讲清“已经发生的变化”。 　● 会用 for example / as a result 这类连接词，把句子和句子、段和段接起来。 　● 会用一个例子或一个结果，把一句简单的话扩展成一段。 　● 会从金句素材库里挑句子，改成写自己的情况。 　● 能独立写出“三个变化 + 一个不变”的短文。 ■ 这份讲义怎么带（只出现在本版） 关卡 建议时长 第 1 关 · 审题定位 约 5 分钟 第 2 关 · 话题词块 约 10 分钟 第 3 关 · 句型升级 约 10 分钟 金句素材库 约 5 分钟 第 4 关 · 连接与扩展 约 12 分钟 第 5 关 · 结构拆解 约 6 分钟 第 6 关 · 半成品写作 约 8 分钟 第 7 关 · 独立成文（两道真题） 约 30 分钟 自评与讲评 约 5 分钟 　带法：每一步都先让学生自己动手，再对答案。第 6 关以后不要直接给范文，先让学生写完。 　用题说明：第 1 关是典型例题（How I Change，短文开头已给出，可当堂示范）；第 7 关两道真题分别取自 2024 贵州中考和 2025 河北中考，留给学生独立完成。动笔时统一按 100—120 词要求。 　第 1 关　·　审题定位 约 5 分钟 ■ 先读题目 　【典型例题】初中的学习生涯即将结束了。三年来，在你获取知识的同时，你的外貌、兴趣爱好、习惯……都有了一定的改变吧！请你以 How I Change 为题，写一篇短文，告诉我们你的变化。词数 80 左右。 　温馨提示：① 短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称；② 这些词汇也许对你有帮助：hobby, habit, used to, enjoy oneself；③ 短文开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。 　How I Change 　My life has changed a lot in the past three years. …… ■ 动笔前先填这张表 先想清楚 参考答案 ① 用第几人称写？ 第一人称 I（写自己的变化） ② 用什么时态写？ 写“三年前”用一般过去时或 used to do；写“现在”用一般现在时或现在完成时 ③ 分几段，每段写什么？ 3—4 段：外貌／兴趣爱好／习惯各写一处变化，最后用一句感受收尾 我打算写的三个方面是（外貌／兴趣爱好／习惯……）： ① ② ③ 　第 2 关　·　话题词块 约 10 分钟 下面是写“变化”类作文最常用的词块。写的时候随时翻回来看。 ◆ 组 1 · 开头怎么起（引出“变化”这个话题） 词块 释义 great changes have taken place 发生了巨大的变化 over the last few years 在过去几年里 Now that I am older, ... 现在长大了，…… My life is different from when I was in primary school. 我的生活和小学时不一样了。 Things have changed a lot in my hometown. 我家乡变化很大。 ◆ 组 2 · 过去怎么讲（写变化之前的样子） 词块 释义 used to do sth 过去常常做某事 there used to be ... 过去有…… be covered with sand 被沙子覆盖 live in a small flat 住在一个小公寓里 walk to school with my parents 和父母走路去上学 In the past, it was difficult to ... 过去，做……很难 ◆ 组 3 · 现在怎么讲（写变化之后的样子） 词块 释义 have moved to a much larger one 搬到了一个更大的 has just built a new hospital 刚建了一所新医院 take a bus every day 每天坐公交车 with the government's support 在政府的支持下 As a result, ... 结果，…… have become much richer and happier 变得富裕、快乐多了 ◆ 组 4 · 感受和“不变”怎么收尾 词块 释义 I am glad that ... 我很高兴…… get to see her every day 每天都能见到她 It's amazing how much we have achieved together. 我们一起取得了这么多，真了不起。 one thing has stayed the same 有一件事一直没变 the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family 家人之间分享的爱与幸福 be different from 与……不同 ■ 过关练 · 看中文，写出英文词块 1. 发生了巨大的变化　great changes have taken place 2. 过去常常做某事　used to do sth 3. 过去有……　there used to be 4. 被沙子覆盖　be covered with sand 5. 在政府的支持下　with the government's support 6. 结果，……　As a result 7. 与……不同　be different from 8. 有一件事一直没变　one thing has stayed the same 9. 我很高兴……　I am glad that ... 10. 搬到了一个更大的（房子／公寓）　have moved to a much larger one 11. 例如　for example 12. 而且／此外　What's more 13. 变得富裕、快乐多了　have become much richer and happier 14. 每天坐公交车　take a bus every day 　第 3 关　·　句型升级 约 10 分钟 同一个意思，写成九年级的句子，得分不一样。左边是简单句，右边是升级句。 ◆ 组 A · 开头句（点出“生活变了”） 简单句（七年级写法） 升级句（九年级写法） My life is different now. Now that I am older, my life is different from when I was in primary school. My hometown changes a lot. Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last ten years. ◆ 组 B · 中间句（把“过去”和“现在”摆在一起） 简单句（七年级写法） 升级句（九年级写法） I walked to school before. Now I take a bus. I used to walk to school with my parents, but now I take a bus every day. We had a small flat before. Now we have a big one. My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. The government built new roads. Life is better now. With the government's support, the village has built new roads. As a result, life has greatly improved. ◆ 组 C · 结尾句（先说变化很大，最后收一句感受或一件没变的事） 简单句（七年级写法） 升级句（九年级写法） I am happy to see my grandma. I am glad that I get to see her every day. My life is better now. I love my family. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same: the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family. ■ 改写练习 · 照右边的写法，把句子改一改 1. 用 used to ... but now ... 把两句合成一句：I was in primary school before. Now I am in junior high school. 　【答案】I used to be in primary school, but now I am in junior high school. 2. 用 Now that ... 开头改写：I am older now. My life is different. 　【答案】Now that I am older, my life is different. 3. 用 As a result 改写：I read English aloud every morning. My spoken English is much better now. 　【答案】I read English aloud every morning. As a result, my spoken English is much better now. 4. 用 What's more 把两句连起来：I have made great progress. I have become more confident. 　【答案】I have made great progress. What's more, I have become more confident. 5. 用 It's amazing how much ... 改写：We have achieved a lot together. I feel surprised. 　【答案】It's amazing how much we have achieved together. 6. 用 With ... 改写：My teacher kept encouraging me. I have become much more confident. 　【答案】With my teacher's encouragement, I have become much more confident. 　金句素材库 写作时挑着用 下面这些句子比课文里的更讲究一些。不用全背，挑两三句记住，写的时候把里面的内容换成你自己的情况就行。 金句 中文意思 Nothing has changed my life more than the new library in our school. 改变我生活的，没有一样比得上学校的新图书馆。 Looking back, I can hardly believe how much my hometown has changed. 回头看，我几乎不敢相信家乡的变化这么大。 My hometown has witnessed great changes over the past few years. 过去几年里，我的家乡见证了巨大的变化。 It is these small changes that have made me who I am today. 正是这些小小的变化，造就了今天的我。 What I treasure most is not what I have, but who I am with. 我最珍惜的不是我拥有什么，而是和谁在一起。 Never before have I felt so proud of my hometown. 我从未像现在这样为家乡感到自豪。 Not only has our school become bigger, but it has also become more beautiful. 我们学校不仅变大了，也变美了。 The more time I spend in the new library, the more I love reading. 在新图书馆待得越久，我就越爱读书。 Our old classroom was so small that we had to share desks; now each of us has a desk of our own. 过去的教室小得两个人合用一张桌子，现在我们一人一张。 My grandma used to fetch water from the well; now the tap is right in her kitchen. 奶奶过去要到井边打水，现在水龙头就在她厨房里。 The new road has brought great changes to our village. 新修的马路给我们村带来了巨大的变化。 These changes have made a big difference to the way we live. 这些变化大大改变了我们的生活方式。 Little by little, I have got used to the new life here. 我一点点习惯了这里的新生活。 　三个 used to 别写混：used to do 是“过去常常做”；be / get used to doing 是“习惯于做”；be used to do 是“被用来做”。 ■ 动手试试 · 挑 3 句，换成写你自己 　【参考改写】It is these small changes that have made me who I am today. → It is my teachers' help that has made me who I am today.　／ My grandma used to fetch water from the well; now the tap is right in her kitchen. → My father used to write letters by hand; now he sends messages on his phone. 　第 4 关　·　连接与扩展 约 12 分钟 前面备好了词和句，这一关解决两件事：把句子接起来，把一句话写长。 ■ A. 连接词：把句子串起来 ◆ 组 1 · 举例（把话说具体） 连接词 意思和用法 for example 例如（后面接一个完整的句子） such as 比如（后面接名词或短语） ◆ 组 2 · 补充（再来一句） 连接词 意思和用法 also 也 What's more 而且（放在句首，后面加逗号） Besides 此外 ◆ 组 3 · 转折／对比 连接词 意思和用法 but 但是 however 然而（放在句首，后面加逗号） while 而（表前后对比） ◆ 组 4 · 因果（说明结果） 连接词 意思和用法 because 因为 so 所以 As a result 结果（放在句首，后面加逗号） That's why 这就是为什么 ◆ 组 5 · 时间／顺序与总结 连接词 意思和用法 In the past 过去 These days 如今 now 现在 All in all 总的来说 ■ 过关练 · 从下面的词里选一个填空（每词只用一次） 　For example　|　What's more　|　However　|　As a result　|　In the past　|　These days　|　All in all　|　because 1. In the past, my family lived in a small flat. 2. These days, we have moved to a much larger one. 3. My school is bigger now. For example, we have a new library and a big playground. 4. I have made great progress. What's more, I have become more confident. 5. Life used to be hard. However, people are much happier now. 6. I practise speaking English every day. As a result, I can talk with my friends in English now. 7. I like my new school because the teachers are friendly. 8. All in all, my life has changed in many ways, but the love in my family never changes. ■ B. 内容扩展：把一句话写成一个段落 一个变化只写一句话，显得单薄。学会在句子后面补“例子、结果、感受”，一段就撑起来了。 方法 怎么做 示例 加例子 用 for example / such as 举一件具体的事 For example, we now have a new library. 说结果 用 so / As a result 说这件事带来的影响 As a result, we can read more comfortably. 加感受 用 I am glad that / It's amazing that 说自己的心情 I am glad that I get to read there every day. ◆ 对照看看（一句话 → 一段话） 短句：My school has changed. 扩写：My school has changed a lot. For example, we now have a new library and a big playground. As a result, we can read and play more comfortably. 短句：My home is bigger now. 扩写：My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. My grandma lives with us, and I am glad that I get to see her every day. ■ 扩写练习 · 把短句写长（用上例子／结果／感受） 1. My hometown has changed a lot.　（用 for example 举一个例子（新超市／新公园／新路）） 　【参考】My hometown has changed a lot. For example, a big new supermarket opened last year, so shopping is much easier now. 2. The way I study is different now.　（用 as a result 说一个结果） 　【参考】The way I study is different now. As a result, I have become more confident and made more progress. 3. I go to school in a different way.　（写“过去 → 现在”，再加一句感受） 　【参考】I used to walk to school with my parents, but now I take a bus every day. I am glad that I can talk with my friends on the bus. 4. My school is better than before.　（用 what's more 再补一条） 　【参考】My school is better than before. We have a new library. What's more, the playground is much bigger. 　第 5 关　·　结构拆解 约 8 分钟 ■ 这类作文的四段怎么排 段落 要写的内容 每一段内部的顺序 第 1—3 段 各写一个方面的变化 过去怎么样 → 现在怎么样 → 加例子／结果 → 一句话感受 最后一段 一句感受（或一件没变的事） 先说变化很多，再写一句自己的感受（或一件没变的事） 　可以写的方面：外貌、兴趣爱好、习惯、学校、家、学习方式、出行、环境、和家人相处的时间。 ■ 先把提纲填出来，再动笔 我要写的三个方面 过去（used to / 一般过去时） 现在（have done / 一般现在时） 例子或结果 变化 1 变化 2 变化 3 一句感受 —— —— 　第 6 关　·　半成品写作 约 8 分钟 ■ 把下面的句子补全（用第 2、3、4 关的词块和句型） 1. Now that I am older, my life is different from when I was in primary school. 　（现在长大了） 2. I used to walk to school, but now I take a bus every day. 　（走路去上学／每天坐公交车） 3. My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. 　（住在小公寓里／搬到了更大的） 4. With the government's support, our village has built many new roads. 　（在政府的支持下） 5. My school is bigger now. For example, we have a new library and a big playground. 　（例如） 6. The village built new roads. As a result, it is much easier to travel now. 　（结果） 7. the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family 　（家人之间分享的爱与幸福） 　第 7 关　·　独立成文 约 30 分钟 这一关不给提纲，两道题都来自近两年的中考真题，看看你能写成什么样。 ■ 动笔前扫一眼（写完自己回来对） □ 开头先点出“我的生活（或家乡）变了”。 □ 每一处变化都写清“过去 + 现在”。 □ 每处变化后面补一个例子或一个结果，不要只写一句。 □ 至少用 3 个连接词：For example / What's more / As a result / However / All in all。 □ 结尾收一句感受，或者写一件没变的事。 □ 词数写到 100—120 词。 　【真题 · 2024 贵州中考】成长的道路上，我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在开展主题为 The Change Made Me ...（改变让我……）的征文活动，请你积极投稿。 　要求：① 先把标题补全（The Change Made Me ______）；② 内容积极向上，不少于 80 词；③ 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 ■ 我的作文（一） 　【真题 · 2025 河北中考】初中三年，我们在成长中学会了坚持、感恩和自律。学校英语报以 Growth Makes Me Better 为主题征稿，请你结合自身经历，写一篇短文，讲述成长中让你变得更好的一件事。 　要求：内容完整，逻辑清晰，词数 80—100，杜绝抄袭套作。 ■ 我的作文（二） 　附录 A　·　参考范文与亮点标注 讲评时使用 下面这篇是课本 Unit 1 的范文，示范“三个方面的变化 + 一句收尾”的写法。第 1 关的 How I Change 和第 7 关的两道真题，结构都可以照搬。 ◆ 第一段 · 引入 + 变化一（学校） Now that I am older, my life is different from when I was in primary school. For example, my primary school was near my home, so I used to walk to school with my parents. Now my junior high school is farther from home. I take a bus every day with my friends. ◆ 第二段 · 变化二（家） My home has changed too. My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. My grandma lives with us now as well. She has her own room and her own TV set. I am glad that I get to see her every day. ◆ 第三段 · 变化三（学习方式） The way I study is also different. I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions. What's more, I enjoy studying with my friends. It's amazing how much we have achieved together. ◆ 第四段 · 一件没变的事 + 收尾 All in all, my life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same: the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family. 　自评表 · 写完自己勾一遍 写作前先看，写完后逐条勾 检查项 做到了吗 我写了三个方面的变化（外貌／兴趣爱好／习惯／学校／家等） □ 每个变化都写了“过去怎样”和“现在怎样” □ 每个变化至少加了一句例子或结果，把内容撑开 □ 我用上了 used to do 和现在完成时（have done） □ 我用上了第 2 关里至少 5 个词块 □ 我用上了第 3 关里至少 2 个升级句型 □ 我用了 For example / What's more / As a result 这类连接词（至少 3 个） □ 结尾写了感受或一件没变的事 □ 词数在 100—120 词之间，书写清楚 □ — — 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 新目标九上 · 单元话题写作精讲讲义 · Unit 1 The Changing World　·　Changes in My Life 新目标（Go for it!）九年级上　｜　建议用时 90 分钟　｜　学生版 　本讲的学习目标 　● 会用“过去怎么样 + 现在怎么样”的对比，说清生活中的变化。 　● 能用 used to do 和现在完成时，讲清“已经发生的变化”。 　● 会用 for example / as a result 这类连接词，把句子和句子、段和段接起来。 　● 会用一个例子或一个结果，把一句简单的话扩展成一段。 　● 会从金句素材库里挑句子，改成写自己的情况。 　● 能独立写出“三个变化 + 一个不变”的短文。 　第 1 关　·　审题定位 约 5 分钟 ■ 先读题目 　【典型例题】初中的学习生涯即将结束了。三年来，在你获取知识的同时，你的外貌、兴趣爱好、习惯……都有了一定的改变吧！请你以 How I Change 为题，写一篇短文，告诉我们你的变化。词数 80 左右。 　温馨提示：① 短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称；② 这些词汇也许对你有帮助：hobby, habit, used to, enjoy oneself；③ 短文开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。 　How I Change 　My life has changed a lot in the past three years. …… ■ 动笔前先填这张表 先想清楚 我的答案 ① 用第几人称写？ ② 用什么时态写？ ③ 分几段，每段写什么？ 我打算写的三个方面是（外貌／兴趣爱好／习惯……）： ① ② ③ 　第 2 关　·　话题词块 约 10 分钟 下面是写“变化”类作文最常用的词块。写的时候随时翻回来看。 ◆ 组 1 · 开头怎么起（引出“变化”这个话题） 词块 释义 great changes have taken place 发生了巨大的变化 over the last few years 在过去几年里 Now that I am older, ... 现在长大了，…… My life is different from when I was in primary school. 我的生活和小学时不一样了。 Things have changed a lot in my hometown. 我家乡变化很大。 ◆ 组 2 · 过去怎么讲（写变化之前的样子） 词块 释义 used to do sth 过去常常做某事 there used to be ... 过去有…… be covered with sand 被沙子覆盖 live in a small flat 住在一个小公寓里 walk to school with my parents 和父母走路去上学 In the past, it was difficult to ... 过去，做……很难 ◆ 组 3 · 现在怎么讲（写变化之后的样子） 词块 释义 have moved to a much larger one 搬到了一个更大的 has just built a new hospital 刚建了一所新医院 take a bus every day 每天坐公交车 with the government's support 在政府的支持下 As a result, ... 结果，…… have become much richer and happier 变得富裕、快乐多了 ◆ 组 4 · 感受和“不变”怎么收尾 词块 释义 I am glad that ... 我很高兴…… get to see her every day 每天都能见到她 It's amazing how much we have achieved together. 我们一起取得了这么多，真了不起。 one thing has stayed the same 有一件事一直没变 the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family 家人之间分享的爱与幸福 be different from 与……不同 ■ 过关练 · 看中文，写出英文词块 1. 发生了巨大的变化 2. 过去常常做某事 3. 过去有…… 4. 被沙子覆盖 5. 在政府的支持下 6. 结果，…… 7. 与……不同 8. 有一件事一直没变 9. 我很高兴…… 10. 搬到了一个更大的（房子／公寓） 11. 例如 12. 而且／此外 13. 变得富裕、快乐多了 14. 每天坐公交车 　第 3 关　·　句型升级 约 10 分钟 同一个意思，写成九年级的句子，得分不一样。左边是简单句，右边是升级句。 ◆ 组 A · 开头句（点出“生活变了”） 简单句（七年级写法） 升级句（九年级写法） My life is different now. Now that I am older, my life is different from when I was in primary school. My hometown changes a lot. Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last ten years. ◆ 组 B · 中间句（把“过去”和“现在”摆在一起） 简单句（七年级写法） 升级句（九年级写法） I walked to school before. Now I take a bus. I used to walk to school with my parents, but now I take a bus every day. We had a small flat before. Now we have a big one. My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. The government built new roads. Life is better now. With the government's support, the village has built new roads. As a result, life has greatly improved. ◆ 组 C · 结尾句（先说变化很大，最后收一句感受或一件没变的事） 简单句（七年级写法） 升级句（九年级写法） I am happy to see my grandma. I am glad that I get to see her every day. My life is better now. I love my family. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same: the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family. ■ 改写练习 · 照右边的写法，把句子改一改 1. 用 used to ... but now ... 把两句合成一句：I was in primary school before. Now I am in junior high school. 2. 用 Now that ... 开头改写：I am older now. My life is different. 3. 用 As a result 改写：I read English aloud every morning. My spoken English is much better now. 4. 用 What's more 把两句连起来：I have made great progress. I have become more confident. 5. 用 It's amazing how much ... 改写：We have achieved a lot together. I feel surprised. 6. 用 With ... 改写：My teacher kept encouraging me. I have become much more confident. 　金句素材库 写作时挑着用 下面这些句子比课文里的更讲究一些。不用全背，挑两三句记住，写的时候把里面的内容换成你自己的情况就行。 金句 中文意思 Nothing has changed my life more than the new library in our school. 改变我生活的，没有一样比得上学校的新图书馆。 Looking back, I can hardly believe how much my hometown has changed. 回头看，我几乎不敢相信家乡的变化这么大。 My hometown has witnessed great changes over the past few years. 过去几年里，我的家乡见证了巨大的变化。 It is these small changes that have made me who I am today. 正是这些小小的变化，造就了今天的我。 What I treasure most is not what I have, but who I am with. 我最珍惜的不是我拥有什么，而是和谁在一起。 Never before have I felt so proud of my hometown. 我从未像现在这样为家乡感到自豪。 Not only has our school become bigger, but it has also become more beautiful. 我们学校不仅变大了，也变美了。 The more time I spend in the new library, the more I love reading. 在新图书馆待得越久，我就越爱读书。 Our old classroom was so small that we had to share desks; now each of us has a desk of our own. 过去的教室小得两个人合用一张桌子，现在我们一人一张。 My grandma used to fetch water from the well; now the tap is right in her kitchen. 奶奶过去要到井边打水，现在水龙头就在她厨房里。 The new road has brought great changes to our village. 新修的马路给我们村带来了巨大的变化。 These changes have made a big difference to the way we live. 这些变化大大改变了我们的生活方式。 Little by little, I have got used to the new life here. 我一点点习惯了这里的新生活。 　三个 used to 别写混：used to do 是“过去常常做”；be / get used to doing 是“习惯于做”；be used to do 是“被用来做”。 ■ 动手试试 · 挑 3 句，换成写你自己 　第 4 关　·　连接与扩展 约 12 分钟 前面备好了词和句，这一关解决两件事：把句子接起来，把一句话写长。 ■ A. 连接词：把句子串起来 ◆ 组 1 · 举例（把话说具体） 连接词 意思和用法 for example 例如（后面接一个完整的句子） such as 比如（后面接名词或短语） ◆ 组 2 · 补充（再来一句） 连接词 意思和用法 also 也 What's more 而且（放在句首，后面加逗号） Besides 此外 ◆ 组 3 · 转折／对比 连接词 意思和用法 but 但是 however 然而（放在句首，后面加逗号） while 而（表前后对比） ◆ 组 4 · 因果（说明结果） 连接词 意思和用法 because 因为 so 所以 As a result 结果（放在句首，后面加逗号） That's why 这就是为什么 ◆ 组 5 · 时间／顺序与总结 连接词 意思和用法 In the past 过去 These days 如今 now 现在 All in all 总的来说 ■ 过关练 · 从下面的词里选一个填空（每词只用一次） 　For example　|　What's more　|　However　|　As a result　|　In the past　|　These days　|　All in all　|　because 1. __________, my family lived in a small flat. 2. __________, we have moved to a much larger one. 3. My school is bigger now. __________, we have a new library and a big playground. 4. I have made great progress. __________, I have become more confident. 5. Life used to be hard. __________, people are much happier now. 6. I practise speaking English every day. __________, I can talk with my friends in English now. 7. I like my new school __________ the teachers are friendly. 8. __________, my life has changed in many ways, but the love in my family never changes. ■ B. 内容扩展：把一句话写成一个段落 一个变化只写一句话，显得单薄。学会在句子后面补“例子、结果、感受”，一段就撑起来了。 方法 怎么做 示例 加例子 用 for example / such as 举一件具体的事 For example, we now have a new library. 说结果 用 so / As a result 说这件事带来的影响 As a result, we can read more comfortably. 加感受 用 I am glad that / It's amazing that 说自己的心情 I am glad that I get to read there every day. ◆ 对照看看（一句话 → 一段话） 短句：My school has changed. 扩写：My school has changed a lot. For example, we now have a new library and a big playground. As a result, we can read and play more comfortably. 短句：My home is bigger now. 扩写：My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. My grandma lives with us, and I am glad that I get to see her every day. ■ 扩写练习 · 把短句写长（用上例子／结果／感受） 1. My hometown has changed a lot.　（用 for example 举一个例子（新超市／新公园／新路）） 2. The way I study is different now.　（用 as a result 说一个结果） 3. I go to school in a different way.　（写“过去 → 现在”，再加一句感受） 4. My school is better than before.　（用 what's more 再补一条） 　第 5 关　·　结构拆解 约 8 分钟 ■ 这类作文的四段怎么排 段落 要写的内容 每一段内部的顺序 第 1—3 段 各写一个方面的变化 过去怎么样 → 现在怎么样 → 加例子／结果 → 一句话感受 最后一段 一句感受（或一件没变的事） 先说变化很多，再写一句自己的感受（或一件没变的事） 　可以写的方面：外貌、兴趣爱好、习惯、学校、家、学习方式、出行、环境、和家人相处的时间。 ■ 先把提纲填出来，再动笔 我要写的三个方面 过去（used to / 一般过去时） 现在（have done / 一般现在时） 例子或结果 变化 1 变化 2 变化 3 一句感受 —— —— 　第 6 关　·　半成品写作 约 8 分钟 ■ 把下面的句子补全（用第 2、3、4 关的词块和句型） 1. ______________________ , my life is different from when I was in primary school. 　（现在长大了） 2. I used to ____________ , but now I __________________________ . 　（走路去上学／每天坐公交车） 3. My family used to ________________________ , but now we __________________________________ . 　（住在小公寓里／搬到了更大的） 4. __________________________ , our village has built many new roads. 　（在政府的支持下） 5. My school is bigger now. ______________________ , we have a new library and a big playground. 　（例如） 6. The village built new roads. ______________________ , it is much easier to travel now. 　（结果） 7. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same: ________________________________________ . 　（家人之间分享的爱与幸福） 　第 7 关　·　独立成文 约 30 分钟 这一关不给提纲，两道题都来自近两年的中考真题，看看你能写成什么样。 ■ 动笔前扫一眼（写完自己回来对） □ 开头先点出“我的生活（或家乡）变了”。 □ 每一处变化都写清“过去 + 现在”。 □ 每处变化后面补一个例子或一个结果，不要只写一句。 □ 至少用 3 个连接词：For example / What's more / As a result / However / All in all。 □ 结尾收一句感受，或者写一件没变的事。 □ 词数写到 100—120 词。 　【真题 · 2024 贵州中考】成长的道路上，我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在开展主题为 The Change Made Me ...（改变让我……）的征文活动，请你积极投稿。 　要求：① 先把标题补全（The Change Made Me ______）；② 内容积极向上，不少于 80 词；③ 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 ■ 我的作文（一） 　【真题 · 2025 河北中考】初中三年，我们在成长中学会了坚持、感恩和自律。学校英语报以 Growth Makes Me Better 为主题征稿，请你结合自身经历，写一篇短文，讲述成长中让你变得更好的一件事。 　要求：内容完整，逻辑清晰，词数 80—100，杜绝抄袭套作。 ■ 我的作文（二） 　自评表 · 写完自己勾一遍 写作前先看，写完后逐条勾 检查项 做到了吗 我写了三个方面的变化（外貌／兴趣爱好／习惯／学校／家等） □ 每个变化都写了“过去怎样”和“现在怎样” □ 每个变化至少加了一句例子或结果，把内容撑开 □ 我用上了 used to do 和现在完成时（have done） □ 我用上了第 2 关里至少 5 个词块 □ 我用上了第 3 关里至少 2 个升级句型 □ 我用了 For example / What's more / As a result 这类连接词（至少 3 个） □ 结尾写了感受或一件没变的事 □ 词数在 100—120 词之间，书写清楚 □ — — 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $