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Unit 1 The Changing World
初三上
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写作话题·Write about changes in your life since primary school(写小学至今自身的生活变化)
Unit 1 The Changing World
写作在务Write about changes in your life since primary school(写小学至今自身的生活变
化)
、审题
目文体
个人经历描述文(非书信,直接叙述)
②话题
描述自己从小学到初三这段时间在生活、学习、性格等方面的变化
③人称
以第一人称I/we为主
4时态
,描述过去(小学时):一般过去时
>描述现在(初中/目前):一般现在时
>对比变化时可用“used to..but now..”
5要点
,开头点明主题:小学至今变化很大
>列出2~3个方面的具体变化(如学习习惯、日常生活、性格爱好)
,每个变化简单说明前后对比
,结尾总结感受(如变得更独立、更努力等)
6字数
80~100词
二、文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
总起,说明小学以来生活发生了许多变化
段落
内容要点
中间
分2~3条具体写变化(每一条包含过去与现在的对比)
结尾
表达对变化的感受或对未来期待
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词primary school小学;change变化;used to过去常常
词now/nowadays现在;diffe rent不同的;independent独立的
词study学习;studying habits学习习惯
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
used to be do...but now...
过去..但现在.……
2
in the past
在过去
3
at present these days
目前
4
get up early
早起
5
do homework by oneself
独立做作业
6
take care of oneself
照顾自己
7
be more active /outgoing
更活跃/外向
8
spend time on/doing
花时间在…
基础造句
I used to play a lot after school,but now I have to finish my homework first.
2 In primary school,my parents helped me with my lessons.Now I study on my own.
3My life has changed a lot.I can take care of myself better now.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
gradually
逐渐地
2
become more responsible
变得更负责任
3
develop good habits
养成好习惯
4
be independent
独立的
序号
单词
释义
5
under pressure
有压力
6
make progress
取得进步
加分句型
对比句型
I used to...,but now I...
In the past,I seldom did...However,these days I often...
原因+结果
Because I grow older,I begin to understand the importance of study.
This change makes me more confident and independent.
评价句式
It is a good change because it helps me grow up.
I am happy with these changes.They make me a better person.
结尾升华句
All these changes show that I am no longer a little child.
I believe I will keep improving and become a stronger person.
五、
写作模板
Changes in My Life
My life has changed a lot since primary school.
First,my study habits are different.I used to
but now I
This helps me
Second,I become more independent.In primary school,I
Now I
Third,my hobbies also change.I used to,but these days I
because
These changes make me grow up.I am proud of myself and will try to be better.
六、作文仿写
题目
Write about changes in your life since primary school(写小学至今自身的生话变化)
请写一篇短文,描述你从小学至今的变化。
范文
Changes in My Life
My life has changed a lot since I was in primary school.
First,my study habits are very different.I used to need my parents'help with homework,but
now I do it by myself.This helps me understand my lessons better.Second,I become more
independent.In the past,my mother woke me up every morning.Now I get up early and
make my own bed.Third,my hobbies also change.I used to watch TV a lot,but these days I
spend more time on reading and sports because they are good for my health.
These changes make me grow up and become a responsible teenager.I am happy about
them.
(约100词)
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1
关于学习与独立性的变化
约96词
Dear Tom,
Since primary school,I have changed a lot.Let me share some key changes with you.
1 Study habits:In primary school,I needed my parents'help with homework.Now I can
finish it by myself and even make a study plan.
2 Independence:I used to be afraid of being alone.Now I can take care of myself,like
cooking simple meals or going to school alone.
3 Responsibility:I have learned to help with housework.I clean my room and wash dishes
every week.
These changes make me feel more confident.I believe you will also grow a lot as you get
older.
Yours,
Li Ming
拓展范文2
关于兴趣爱好与性格的变化
约98词
Dear Lucy,
Life changes a lot from primary school to now.Here are my biggest changes.
1Hobbies:I used to spend hours playing video games.Now I prefer reading books and
playing basketball.They make me healthier and smarter.
2 Personality:I was shy and quiet in primary school.Now I am more outgoing.I enjoy making
friends and joining group activities.
3 Time management:I used to waste time.Now I make a timetable and stick to it.I finish
homework first,then play.
Growing up is amazing.I hope you will also enjoy your changes!
Yours,
Zhang Wei