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2026 春鲁教版五四制六年级英语下册单元作文练习纸
Unit 6 Eat Well 单元话题写作
一、写作任务
Write a post about your eating habits. Say what good and bad eating habits you have, and give some advice on how to improve them. (60-80 words)
请写一篇短文介绍你的饮食习惯:说明你有哪些好习惯和坏习惯,并就如何改进给出建议。词数 60-80 词。
二、审题要点
◆(1)主题:我的饮食习惯——好习惯与坏习惯以及改进建议
◆(2)文体:说明文(现状 + 改进建议;含主题句、分条事实与总结)
◆(3)时态:一般现在时(描述饮食习惯);should 提出建议
◆(4)要点:①主题句点明要谈饮食习惯;②列举自己的好习惯;③列举自己的坏习惯及原因;④给出改进建议;⑤总结健康饮食的意义
◆(5)亮点提示:可数与不可数名词(vegetables / fruit / water / sugar);too much / too many;should / should not 提建议;for example / however 连接
三、写作框架
开头
主题句点明要谈饮食习惯(I have some good eating habits, but I also have some bad ones)
正文
列举好习惯(I eat three meals a day and I have them on time; I eat a lot of vegetables)
列举坏习惯及原因(However, I drink too many soft drinks because they taste good; they have a lot of sugar)
给出改进建议(In future, I should drink more water and eat more fruit)
结尾
总结健康饮食的意义(Healthy eating means eating healthy food and having good eating habits)
四、词汇 / 短语积累
【核心词汇】
1. 西瓜watermelon
2. 卷心菜cabbage
3. 羊肉mutton
4. 曲奇饼cookie
5. 洋葱;葱头onion
6. 饺子dumpling
7. 豆bean
8. 炸薯条chip
9. 粥;麦片粥porridge
10. 有……味道;尝;味道taste
11. 一道菜;盘子dish
12. 选择choice
13. 一餐;一餐所吃的食物meal
14. 猪肉pork
15. 草莓strawberry
16. 菜单menu
17. 提供;服务serve
18. 账单;钞票bill
19. 反而;代替instead
20. 梨pear
21. 糖sugar
22. 改进;改善improve
23. 习惯habit
24. 盐salt
25. 脂肪;肥胖的fat
26. 体重;重量weight
27. 汉堡包hamburger
28. 造成;导致cause
29. 心脏;中心heart
30. 均衡的;平衡的balanced
【核心短语】
1. 炸鱼薯条fish and chips
2. 软饮料(不含酒精)soft drink
3. 快餐fast food
4. 太多too much
5. 太多(可数)too many
6. 毕竟;终归after all
7. 增加体重;长胖put on weight
8. 心脏问题heart problems
9. 对……有好处be good for
10. 对……有害be bad for
11. 一日三餐three meals a day
12. 准时on time
13. 许多a lot of
14. 代替;而不是instead of
15. ……怎么样?how about
16. (与……)相配go with
17. 一杯a cup of
18. 做健康均衡的饭菜make healthy balanced meals
19. 在周末at weekends
20. 今后in future
21. 健康的饮食习惯healthy eating habits
五、句式练习
第一段(开头):主题句
我有一些好的饮食习惯,但也有一些坏习惯。(核心词:good eating habits, bad ones)
I have some good eating habits, but I also have some bad ones.
我一日三餐都很规律。(核心词:three meals a day, on time)
I eat three meals a day and I have them on time.
第二段(中间):好习惯与坏习惯
我吃很多蔬菜和水果。(核心词:a lot of, vegetables and fruit)
I eat a lot of vegetables and fruit.
然而,我喝太多软饮料了。(核心词:however, too many soft drinks)
However, I drink too many soft drinks.
它们含有很多糖,对我的健康不好。(核心词:a lot of sugar, be bad for)
They have a lot of sugar and they are bad for me.
我喝水不够多。(核心词:not, drink enough water)
I do not drink enough water.
快餐含有太多盐和脂肪。(核心词:fast food, too much salt and fat)
Fast food has too much salt and fat.
第三段(结尾):改进建议与总结
今后我应该多喝水、多吃水果。(核心词:in future, should drink more water)
In future, I should drink more water and eat more fruit.
健康的饮食意味着吃健康的食物。(核心词:healthy eating, mean)
Healthy eating means eating healthy food.
毕竟,一天一个苹果,医生远离我。(核心词:after all, an apple a day)
After all, an apple a day keeps the doctor away.
六、进阶高分句型专练
(一)可数名词 countable nouns
句型公式:可数名词有单复数;复数一般加 -s / -es(以 ch、sh、s、x 结尾加 -es);辅音字母 + y 变 y 为 i 再加 -es
注意:可数名词前可用 a / an 或 many / a few 修饰;常见可数食物名词:bean、chip、cookie、dumpling、egg、noodle、strawberry、vegetable
◆我早饭吃了两个鸡蛋和一些饺子。(核心词:two eggs, some dumplings)
I had two eggs and some dumplings for breakfast.
◆我喜欢草莓,每天都吃几个。(核心词:strawberries, a few)
I like strawberries and I eat a few every day.
(二)不可数名词 uncountable nouns
句型公式:不可数名词没有复数形式,不能直接用 a / an 或数字修饰;可用 some / much / a cup of / a kilo of 等
注意:常见不可数食物名词:beef、bread、meat、milk、mutton、pork、rice、sugar、tofu;常用 some / much / a lot of 修饰
◆我早饭通常吃面包、喝牛奶。(核心词:some bread and milk)
I usually have some bread and milk for breakfast.
◆我每天喝两杯水。(核心词:two cups of water)
I drink two cups of water every day.
(三)既可数又不可数的名词 countable and uncountable nouns
句型公式:同一名词在不同语境中可数或不可数,含义往往不同(chicken 鸡肉 / 小鸡;fish 鱼肉 / 鱼)
注意:cabbage、cake、chicken、drink、fish、food、fruit、salad、sweet、tea 等既可数又不可数,需根据语境判断
◆我们晚饭吃鸡肉和米饭。(核心词:chicken and rice)
We have chicken and rice for dinner.
◆我们家的院子里养着三只小鸡。(核心词:three chickens, in the garden)
We keep three chickens in our garden.
(四)选择疑问句 alternative questions
句型公式:Would you like A or B? — 主语 + would like A / B.;What + 名词 + would you like, A or B? — ..., please.
注意:选择疑问句用 or 连接两个选项,回答时选择其中一个,不用 yes 或 no
◆你想喝果汁还是咖啡?——我想喝一杯茶。(核心词:juice or coffee, a cup of tea)
Would you like juice or coffee? I would like a cup of tea.
◆你吃饭时想配米饭还是面条?——面条。(核心词:rice or noodles, noodles)
Which would you like with your meal, rice or noodles? Noodles, please.
七、写作
My Eating Habits
I have some good eating habits, but I also have some bad ones. I eat three meals a day and I have them on time.
I eat a lot of vegetables and fruit. However, I drink too many soft drinks because they taste good. They have a lot of sugar and they are bad for me.
In future, I should drink more water and eat more fruit. After all, an apple a day keeps the doctor away!
【中文翻译】
我有一些好的饮食习惯,但也有一些坏习惯。我一日三餐都很规律。
我吃很多蔬菜和水果。然而,我喝太多软饮料了,因为它们味道很好。它们含有很多糖,对我的健康不好。
今后我应该多喝水、多吃水果。毕竟,一天一个苹果,医生远离我!
【总体分析】
①体裁:说明文(现状 + 改进建议)——先点明饮食习惯,再分述好习惯与坏习惯,最后给出建议并总结
②语法:可数与不可数名词(vegetables / fruit / water / sugar);too many / too much;should 提出建议
③结构:主题句(开头)→ 好习惯与坏习惯(中间)→ 改进建议与总结(结尾)
【亮点词汇】
eating habits(饮食习惯)/ too many soft drinks(太多软饮料)/ be bad for(对……有害)/ in future(今后)/ keep the doctor away(让医生远离)
【高分句型】
I have some good eating habits, but I also have some bad ones.(主题句总起点明好习惯与坏习惯)
However, I drink too many soft drinks because they taste good.(however 转折,because 说明原因)
They have a lot of sugar and they are bad for me.(说明坏习惯的危害)
After all, an apple a day keeps the doctor away!(引用谚语收尾,点明健康饮食的意义)
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2026 春鲁教版五四制六年级英语下册单元作文练习纸
Unit 6 Eat Well 单元话题写作
一、写作任务
Write a post about your eating habits. Say what good and bad eating habits you have, and give some advice on how to improve them. (60-80 words)
请写一篇短文介绍你的饮食习惯:说明你有哪些好习惯和坏习惯,并就如何改进给出建议。词数 60-80 词。
二、审题要点
◆(1)主题:
◆(2)文体:
◆(3)时态:
◆(4)要点:
◆(5)亮点提示:
三、写作框架
开头
主题句点明要谈饮食习惯(I have some good eating habits, but I also have some bad ones)
正文
列举好习惯(I eat three meals a day and I have them on time; I eat a lot of vegetables)
列举坏习惯及原因(However, I drink too many soft drinks because they taste good; they have a lot of sugar)
给出改进建议(In future, I should drink more water and eat more fruit)
结尾
总结健康饮食的意义(Healthy eating means eating healthy food and having good eating habits)
四、词汇 / 短语积累
【核心词汇】
1. 西瓜 2. 卷心菜 3. 羊肉
4. 曲奇饼 5. 洋葱;葱头 6. 饺子
7. 豆 8. 炸薯条 9. 粥;麦片粥
10. 一道菜;盘子 11. 选择 12. 猪肉
13. 草莓 14. 菜单 15. 提供;服务
16. 账单;钞票 17. 反而;代替 18. 梨
19. 糖 20. 改进;改善 21. 习惯
22. 盐 23. 脂肪;肥胖的 24. 体重;重量
25. 汉堡包 26. 造成;导致 27. 心脏;中心
28. 有……味道;尝;味道 29. 一餐;一餐所吃的食物
30. 均衡的;平衡的
【核心短语】
1. 炸鱼薯条 2. 软饮料(不含酒精)
3. 快餐 4. 太多
5. 太多(可数) 6. 毕竟;终归
7. 增加体重;长胖 8. 心脏问题
9. 对……有好处 10. 对……有害
11. 一日三餐 12. 准时
13. 许多 14. 代替;而不是
15. ……怎么样? 16. (与……)相配
17. 一杯 18. 做健康均衡的饭菜
19. 在周末 20. 今后
21. 健康的饮食习惯
五、句式练习
第一段(开头):主题句
我有一些好的饮食习惯,但也有一些坏习惯。(核心词:good eating habits, bad ones)
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我一日三餐都很规律。(核心词:three meals a day, on time)
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第二段(中间):好习惯与坏习惯
我吃很多蔬菜和水果。(核心词:a lot of, vegetables and fruit)
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然而,我喝太多软饮料了。(核心词:however, too many soft drinks)
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它们含有很多糖,对我的健康不好。(核心词:a lot of sugar, be bad for)
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我喝水不够多。(核心词:not, drink enough water)
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快餐含有太多盐和脂肪。(核心词:fast food, too much salt and fat)
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第三段(结尾):改进建议与总结
今后我应该多喝水、多吃水果。(核心词:in future, should drink more water)
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健康的饮食意味着吃健康的食物。(核心词:healthy eating, mean)
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毕竟,一天一个苹果,医生远离我。(核心词:after all, an apple a day)
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六、进阶高分句型专练
(一)可数名词 countable nouns
句型公式:可数名词有单复数;复数一般加 -s / -es(以 ch、sh、s、x 结尾加 -es);辅音字母 + y 变 y 为 i 再加 -es
注意:可数名词前可用 a / an 或 many / a few 修饰;常见可数食物名词:bean、chip、cookie、dumpling、egg、noodle、strawberry、vegetable
◆我早饭吃了两个鸡蛋和一些饺子。(核心词:two eggs, some dumplings)
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◆我喜欢草莓,每天都吃几个。(核心词:strawberries, a few)
________________________________________________________________________________
(二)不可数名词 uncountable nouns
句型公式:不可数名词没有复数形式,不能直接用 a / an 或数字修饰;可用 some / much / a cup of / a kilo of 等
注意:常见不可数食物名词:beef、bread、meat、milk、mutton、pork、rice、sugar、tofu;常用 some / much / a lot of 修饰
◆我早饭通常吃面包、喝牛奶。(核心词:some bread and milk)
________________________________________________________________________________
◆我每天喝两杯水。(核心词:two cups of water)
________________________________________________________________________________
(三)既可数又不可数的名词 countable and uncountable nouns
句型公式:同一名词在不同语境中可数或不可数,含义往往不同(chicken 鸡肉 / 小鸡;fish 鱼肉 / 鱼)
注意:cabbage、cake、chicken、drink、fish、food、fruit、salad、sweet、tea 等既可数又不可数,需根据语境判断
◆我们晚饭吃鸡肉和米饭。(核心词:chicken and rice)
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◆我们家的院子里养着三只小鸡。(核心词:three chickens, in the garden)
________________________________________________________________________________
(四)选择疑问句 alternative questions
句型公式:Would you like A or B? — 主语 + would like A / B.;What + 名词 + would you like, A or B? — ..., please.
注意:选择疑问句用 or 连接两个选项,回答时选择其中一个,不用 yes 或 no
◆你想喝果汁还是咖啡?——我想喝一杯茶。(核心词:juice or coffee, a cup of tea)
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◆你吃饭时想配米饭还是面条?——面条。(核心词:rice or noodles, noodles)
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七、写作
My Eating Habits
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