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2026 春沪教版五四制七年级英语下册单元作文练习纸
Unit 1 Music 单元话题写作
一、写作任务
The school radio station is calling on students to recommend songs for next week's playlist. Write an online message to the radio station. Recommend a song, tell the listeners why you like it, and say what you hope. (80-100 words)
学校广播站正在向同学们征集下周播放列表的歌曲。请写一条在线消息,向广播站推荐一首歌,说明你喜欢它的理由,并表达你的期望。词数 80-100 词。
二、审题要点
◆(1)主题:向学校广播站推荐一首歌并说明推荐理由
◆(2)文体:推荐类在线消息(含称呼、推荐理由、互动结语)
◆(3)时态:一般现在时为主,可辅以现在完成时、过去进行时
◆(4)要点:①点明推荐目的;②介绍歌名、风格或歌手;③从旋律、歌词、主题等角度说明理由;④表达期望与互动结语
◆(5)亮点提示:并列连词 both ... and ... / not only ... but also ...;最高级 one of the greatest songs;常用表达 What's more / I'm sure ... / Every time ...
三、写作框架
开头
点明推荐目的(I would like to recommend a song to you)
说明歌曲信息(The song I want to recommend is ...)
正文
介绍歌曲地位(It is one of the most famous folk songs in China)
推荐理由(It not only has a sweet melody but also has simple lyrics)
听歌感受(Every time I hear it, I want to sing along)
结尾
表达期望(I am sure the audience will enjoy this song)
互动结语(I hope I can hear it on the radio next week. What do you think of it?)
四、词汇 / 短语积累
【核心词汇】
1. 音乐music
2. 歌曲song
3. 旋律melody
4. 歌词lyrics
5. 主题theme
6. 风格style
7. 音乐家musician
8. 作曲家composer
9. 合唱团chorus
10. 推荐recommend
11. 表演;演出performance
12. 听众;观众audience
13. 流行的popular
14. 强劲的;有力的powerful
15. 令人放松的relaxing
16. 精力充沛的energetic
17. 精神焕发的refreshed
18. 有压力的stressed
19. 著名的famous
20. 播放列表playlist
21. 歌喉;嗓音voice
22. 精神spirit
23. 运动员athlete
24. 音乐会concert
25. 自信confidence
26. 勇气courage
27. 独唱solo
28. 爵士乐jazz
29. 古典的classical
30. 民间的folk
【核心短语】
1. 推荐一首歌recommend a song
2. 有史以来最伟大的歌曲之一one of the greatest songs of all time
3. 强劲的旋律a strong melody
4. 有力的歌词powerful lyrics
5. 跟着一起唱sing along
6. 而且;另外What's more
7. 展示团队精神show team spirit
8. 鼓励运动员encourage the athletes
9. 学校广播站the school radio station
10. 下周的播放列表next week's playlist
11. 听音乐listen to music
12. 让我感到放松make me relaxed
13. 保持精力充沛keep me energetic
14. 我最喜欢的音乐my favourite music
15. 帮助我轻松入睡help me go to sleep easily
16. 音乐的力量the power of music
17. 流行音乐pop music
18. 古典音乐classical music
19. 摇滚乐rock music
20. 获得自信gain confidence
21. 发现自己的声音find my voice
22. 独自演唱sing solo
五、句式练习
第一段(开头):点明推荐目的与歌曲信息
我想向你们推荐一首歌。(核心词:would like to, recommend a song)
I would like to recommend a song to you.
我想推荐的歌是《茉莉花》。(核心词:the song I want to recommend, Jasmine Flower)
The song I want to recommend is Jasmine Flower.
它是中国最著名的民歌之一。(核心词:one of the most famous, folk songs)
It is one of the most famous folk songs in China.
第二段(中间):说明推荐理由
这首歌有优美的旋律和简单的歌词。(核心词:sweet melody, simple lyrics)
This song has a sweet melody and simple lyrics.
它不仅让我放松,还带给我快乐。(核心词:not only ... but also ..., relaxed, joy)
It not only makes me relaxed but also brings me joy.
每次听到它,我都想跟着一起唱。(核心词:every time, sing along)
Every time I hear it, I want to sing along.
它经常在体育赛事中播放,用来展示团队精神。(核心词:sports events, show team spirit)
It is often played in sports events to show team spirit.
我和同学们都喜欢这首歌。(核心词:both ... and ..., like this song)
Both my classmates and I like this song.
第三段(结尾):表达期望与互动
我相信听众会喜欢这首歌。(核心词:be sure, audience, enjoy)
I am sure the audience will enjoy this song.
我希望下周能在广播里听到它。(核心词:hope, on the radio, next week)
I hope I can hear it on the radio next week.
你觉得这首歌怎么样?(核心词:What do you think of)
What do you think of this song?
六、进阶高分句型专练
(一)并列连词 both ... and ... both ... and ...
句型公式:both + A + and + B(连接两个并列的主语、宾语或表语)
注意:连接两个主语时,谓语动词用复数形式;both ... and ... 表示两者都包括在内
◆我和同学们都喜欢这首歌。(核心词:both ... and ..., like the song)
Both my classmates and I like the song.
◆这首歌既有优美的旋律又有动人的歌词。(核心词:both ... and ..., melody, lyrics)
The song has both a sweet melody and moving lyrics.
(二)并列连词 not only ... but also ... not only ... but also ...
句型公式:not only + A + but also + B(连接两个并列成分,语意重点在后者)
注意:连接两个主语时,谓语动词通常与靠近的主语 B 保持一致,即就近原则
◆这首歌不仅让我放松,还带给我快乐。(核心词:not only ... but also ..., relaxed, joy)
This song not only makes me relaxed but also brings me joy.
◆他不仅是歌手,也是一位作曲家。(核心词:not only ... but also ..., singer, composer)
He is not only a singer but also a composer.
(三)并列连词连接谓语与宾语 coordinators
句型公式:主语 + both + 动词 + and + 动词;主语 + 动词 + both + 宾语 + and + 宾语
注意:同一主语的两个动作或两个宾语用 both ... and ... 或 and 连接,前后形式要一致
◆她既能唱歌又能跳舞。(核心词:both ... and ..., sing, dance)
She can both sing and dance.
◆这首歌给了我力量和快乐。(核心词:both ... and ..., power, joy)
The song gives me both power and joy.
(四)平行结构(parallel structure) parallel structure
句型公式:用 and / both ... and ... / not only ... but also ... 连接两个或以上长度、语法形式相似的词、短语或分句
注意:平行结构要求并列成分形式一致,可使句子结构整齐、表达简洁有力
◆我们听了音乐,也分享了彼此的故事。(核心词:and, listen to music, share our stories)
We listened to music and shared our stories.
◆这首歌既流行又时尚。(核心词:both ... and ..., popular, fashionable)
This song is both popular and fashionable.
七、写作
An Online Message: A Song I Recommend
Hi Lu Yao,
Thanks for your post. I would like to recommend a song for next week's playlist — Jasmine Flower. It is one of the most beautiful folk songs in China. Its melody is sweet and its lyrics are simple, so it is easy to sing along.
It not only makes me relaxed but also brings me joy. Both my classmates and I love it. I hope our audience will enjoy it too. What do you think of it?
Li Hua
【中文翻译】
你好,Lu Yao:
谢谢你的帖子。我想为下周的播放列表推荐一首歌——《茉莉花》。它是中国最优美的民歌之一。它的旋律优美,歌词简单,因此很容易跟着一起唱。
它不仅让我放松,还带给我快乐。我和同学们都喜欢它。我希望我们的听众也会喜欢它。你觉得它怎么样?
Li Hua
【总体分析】
①体裁:推荐类在线消息——含称呼 Hi Lu Yao、推荐理由与互动结语 What do you think of it?,格式完整
②语法:并列连词 both ... and ...;not only ... but also ...;连接并列主语时注意主谓一致
③结构:点明推荐目的(开头)→ 介绍歌曲并说明理由(中间)→ 表达期望并互动(结尾)
【亮点词汇】
one of the most beautiful folk songs(最优美的民歌之一)/ a sweet melody(优美的旋律)/ simple lyrics(简单的歌词)/ sing along(跟着一起唱)/ bring me joy(带给我快乐)
【高分句型】
I would like to recommend a song for next week's playlist.(开篇点明推荐目的)
It is one of the most beautiful folk songs in China.(最高级表达,突出歌曲地位)
It not only makes me relaxed but also brings me joy.(not only ... but also ... 并列结构)
What do you think of it?(互动结语,礼貌征求对方意见)
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2026 春沪教版五四制七年级英语下册单元作文练习纸
Unit 1 Music 单元话题写作
一、写作任务
The school radio station is calling on students to recommend songs for next week's playlist. Write an online message to the radio station. Recommend a song, tell the listeners why you like it, and say what you hope. (80-100 words)
学校广播站正在向同学们征集下周播放列表的歌曲。请写一条在线消息,向广播站推荐一首歌,说明你喜欢它的理由,并表达你的期望。词数 80-100 词。
二、审题要点
◆(1)主题:
◆(2)文体:
◆(3)时态:
◆(4)要点:
◆(5)亮点提示:
三、写作框架
开头
点明推荐目的(I would like to recommend a song to you)
说明歌曲信息(The song I want to recommend is ...)
正文
介绍歌曲地位(It is one of the most famous folk songs in China)
推荐理由(It not only has a sweet melody but also has simple lyrics)
听歌感受(Every time I hear it, I want to sing along)
结尾
表达期望(I am sure the audience will enjoy this song)
互动结语(I hope I can hear it on the radio next week. What do you think of it?)
四、词汇 / 短语积累
【核心词汇】
1. 音乐 2. 歌曲 3. 旋律
4. 歌词 5. 主题 6. 风格
7. 音乐家 8. 作曲家 9. 合唱团
10. 推荐 11. 表演;演出 12. 听众;观众
13. 流行的 14. 令人放松的 15. 精力充沛的
16. 精神焕发的 17. 有压力的 18. 著名的
19. 播放列表 20. 歌喉;嗓音 21. 精神
22. 运动员 23. 音乐会 24. 自信
25. 勇气 26. 独唱 27. 爵士乐
28. 古典的 29. 民间的
30. 强劲的;有力的
【核心短语】
1. 推荐一首歌 2. 强劲的旋律
3. 有力的歌词 4. 跟着一起唱
5. 而且;另外 6. 展示团队精神
7. 鼓励运动员 8. 学校广播站
9. 下周的播放列表 10. 听音乐
11. 让我感到放松 12. 保持精力充沛
13. 我最喜欢的音乐 14. 帮助我轻松入睡
15. 音乐的力量 16. 流行音乐
17. 古典音乐 18. 摇滚乐
19. 获得自信 20. 发现自己的声音
21. 独自演唱
22. 有史以来最伟大的歌曲之一
五、句式练习
第一段(开头):点明推荐目的与歌曲信息
我想向你们推荐一首歌。(核心词:would like to, recommend a song)
________________________________________________________________________________
我想推荐的歌是《茉莉花》。(核心词:the song I want to recommend, Jasmine Flower)
________________________________________________________________________________
它是中国最著名的民歌之一。(核心词:one of the most famous, folk songs)
________________________________________________________________________________
第二段(中间):说明推荐理由
这首歌有优美的旋律和简单的歌词。(核心词:sweet melody, simple lyrics)
________________________________________________________________________________
它不仅让我放松,还带给我快乐。(核心词:not only ... but also ..., relaxed, joy)
________________________________________________________________________________
每次听到它,我都想跟着一起唱。(核心词:every time, sing along)
________________________________________________________________________________
它经常在体育赛事中播放,用来展示团队精神。(核心词:sports events, show team spirit)
________________________________________________________________________________
我和同学们都喜欢这首歌。(核心词:both ... and ..., like this song)
________________________________________________________________________________
第三段(结尾):表达期望与互动
我相信听众会喜欢这首歌。(核心词:be sure, audience, enjoy)
________________________________________________________________________________
我希望下周能在广播里听到它。(核心词:hope, on the radio, next week)
________________________________________________________________________________
你觉得这首歌怎么样?(核心词:What do you think of)
________________________________________________________________________________
六、进阶高分句型专练
(一)并列连词 both ... and ... both ... and ...
句型公式:both + A + and + B(连接两个并列的主语、宾语或表语)
注意:连接两个主语时,谓语动词用复数形式;both ... and ... 表示两者都包括在内
◆我和同学们都喜欢这首歌。(核心词:both ... and ..., like the song)
________________________________________________________________________________
◆这首歌既有优美的旋律又有动人的歌词。(核心词:both ... and ..., melody, lyrics)
________________________________________________________________________________
(二)并列连词 not only ... but also ... not only ... but also ...
句型公式:not only + A + but also + B(连接两个并列成分,语意重点在后者)
注意:连接两个主语时,谓语动词通常与靠近的主语 B 保持一致,即就近原则
◆这首歌不仅让我放松,还带给我快乐。(核心词:not only ... but also ..., relaxed, joy)
________________________________________________________________________________
◆他不仅是歌手,也是一位作曲家。(核心词:not only ... but also ..., singer, composer)
________________________________________________________________________________
(三)并列连词连接谓语与宾语 coordinators
句型公式:主语 + both + 动词 + and + 动词;主语 + 动词 + both + 宾语 + and + 宾语
注意:同一主语的两个动作或两个宾语用 both ... and ... 或 and 连接,前后形式要一致
◆她既能唱歌又能跳舞。(核心词:both ... and ..., sing, dance)
________________________________________________________________________________
◆这首歌给了我力量和快乐。(核心词:both ... and ..., power, joy)
________________________________________________________________________________
(四)平行结构(parallel structure) parallel structure
句型公式:用 and / both ... and ... / not only ... but also ... 连接两个或以上长度、语法形式相似的词、短语或分句
注意:平行结构要求并列成分形式一致,可使句子结构整齐、表达简洁有力
◆我们听了音乐,也分享了彼此的故事。(核心词:and, listen to music, share our stories)
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◆这首歌既流行又时尚。(核心词:both ... and ..., popular, fashionable)
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七、写作
An Online Message: A Song I Recommend
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