Unit 1 Music 单元话题（音乐）写作满分范文15篇-2025-2026学年七年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（沪教版五四制）

2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 1 Music 单元话题（音乐）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．李华想要参加学校的音乐明星(music star)评选活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下信息，写一封推荐信介绍自己。 Age 15 Favorite musician Lang Lang Hobby sing and play music well, listen to music, have around 200 CDs Activity (活动) Wednesday: sing in the school music club weekends: play the piano and violin 注意：(1)须包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥； (2)文章句子通顺，语意连贯，语法规范； (3)词数60个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Sir, My name is Li Hua. Music is my life. I hope I can be a music star in our school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version Dear Sir, My name is Li Hua. Music is my life. I hope I can be a music star in our school. I’m 15 years old. I love music very much, and my favorite musician is Lang Lang. I have many hobbies which are related to music. I can sing and play music well. I also like listening to music and I have around 200 CDs. On Wednesday, I sing in the school music club. At weekends, I play the piano and violin.   Music is my life. I believe I’m qualified to be a music star. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；   ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的信息，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。      [写作步骤]      第一步：介绍自己的身份，表明目的；      第二步：介绍个人基本信息、最喜欢的音乐家、音乐的相关爱好及参加的音乐活动；   第三步：书写结语，再次表达参选意愿。      [亮点词汇]   ①be related to和……相关 ②listen to music听音乐 ③be qualified to有资格做 [高分句型]      ①I have many hobbies which are related to music.（which引导的定语从句）   ②I believe I’m qualified to be a music star.（省略that的宾语从句） 2．假如你是李明，你的三个好朋友分别喜欢不同的音乐。请根据以下表格中的提示内容，写一篇英语短文，介绍你们各自喜欢的音乐及理由。 Who Favourite music Reason (原因) Peter pop music make people relaxed, ... Linda classical music sound beautiful, ... Tim rock music make people excited, … I 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于50词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming. Different people may like different music. My friends and I enjoy different types of music. Peter loves pop music because it makes him feel relaxed. Linda prefers classical music, she thinks it sounds beautiful and elegant. Tim is a fan of rock music; its energy excites him. As for me, I like folk music. Its stories and melodies connect me to different cultures.     Though our tastes vary, music always brings us joy! What kind of music do you like best? Can you tell me about it? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：根据要点写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接给出的开头，引出话题； 第二步：分别介绍Peter、Linda、Tim和“我”喜欢的音乐种类及原因； 第三步：书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①a fan of是……粉丝 ②as for me对我来说 [高分句型] ①Peter loves pop music because it makes him feel relaxed. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②Linda prefers classical music, she thinks it sounds beautiful and elegant. (省略that的宾语从句) ③Though our tastes vary, music always brings us joy! (though引导的让步状语从句) 3．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文。) 音乐，如同无形的画笔，在心灵的画布上勾勒出情感的轮廓。在欢愉时，音乐如阳光洒满心田；在忧伤时，它又如温柔的夜风。它不仅是耳朵的盛宴，更是心灵的慰藉，陪伴我们走过人生的每一个季节，在寂静中回响，在喧嚣中沉淀。请你谈谈你最喜欢的音乐种类，以及你喜欢它的原因。 文章需要包含以下内容： 1. What kind of music do you like best? 2. Why do you like it? （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Among all kinds of music, I like pop music best. Its lively rhythms and meaningful lyrics always make me happy. For example, when I listen to songs about friendship, I feel warm inside. There are two reasons why I love it. First, pop music is easy to sing along with, so I can enjoy it anywhere. Second, it helps me relax after studying. When I feel tired, soft pop songs calm me down like a gentle friend. Pop music colors my life with joy and comfort. This is why it’s my favorite! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据要点进行写作，注意条理清晰，语法正确，可以适当补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍最喜欢的音乐类型是流行音乐； 第二步，介绍喜欢流行音乐的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of各种各样的 ②calm me down让我平静下来 ③color my life为生活添彩 [高分句型] When I feel tired, soft pop songs calm me down like a gentle friend. (when引导时间状语从句) 4．Write in at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite music (or song)” (以“我最爱的音乐（或歌）”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggested questions: 1. What music type is your favourite music/song? 2. Why do you like it? (At least two reasons.) 3. What’s your feeling when you are listening to it? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                              My Favourite Music My favourite music is pop music. I like it because it is relaxing and meaningful. First, the melodies are cheerful, and they make me feel happy. Second, the lyrics often tell stories that I can relate to. When I listen to it, I feel relaxed and happy. It helps me forget my worries and enjoy the moment. Pop music is my favourite because it brings joy to my life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述自己最喜欢的音乐或歌曲； ②时态：以一般现在时为主； ③提示：题目给出了三个要点，必须写出所给内容，可以适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的音乐或歌曲的类型； 第二步，说明喜欢它的原因（至少两个）； 第三步，描述听音乐时的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①relaxing令人放松的 ②meaningful有意义的 ③cheerful愉快的 [高分句型] When I listen to it, I feel relaxed and happy. （时间状语从句） 5．学校广播站号召同学们推荐下周播放的歌曲。请你根据以下提示，给广播站写一封推荐信，推荐你最喜欢的一首歌。字数要求：80词左右，开头部分已给，不计入总词数。 Use the following points as reference (以下问题仅供参考)： (1)Which song would you like to recommend? (2)Why do you like it? (3)How did you feel when you first heard the song? I would like to recommend a song _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I would like to recommend a song called “Count on Me” by Bruno Mars. It has a cheerful melody and heartwarming lyrics about friendship and support. I love this song because it reminds me that true friends are always there for each other, no matter what happens. When I first heard it, I was feeling lonely, but the song instantly made me smile and think of my best friend. I believe playing this song will spread positive energy and encourage everyone to cherish their friendships. I’m sure everybody will enjoy this song. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示信息写作，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，推荐的歌曲及歌曲主要唱的是什么； 第二步，根据提示信息讲述喜欢这首歌的原因； 第三步，讲述你第一次听这首歌时的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①each other彼此 ②no matter无论 ③think of想到 [高分句型] ①I love this song because it reminds me that true friends are always there for each other, no matter what happens. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②When I first heard it, I was feeling lonely, but the song instantly made me smile and think of my best friend. (when引导的时间状语从句) 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．音乐是一杯清茶，沁人心脾；音乐是一缕阳光，暖人心魂。某英文论坛以“音乐和我”为主题向大家征帖，作为一个音乐迷的你看到了也跃跃欲试。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，分享音乐给你带来了什么，并向大家推荐你最喜欢的歌曲。 要求： 1.内容须包含提示中的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺； 3. 词数80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I have been a music fan since I was a little girl. Over the years, music has brought so many beautiful things into my life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I have been a music fan since I was a little girl. Over the years, music has brought so many beautiful things into my life. Music gives me energy. When I’m tired or stressed, a piece of lively music can make me refreshed and full of power. My favorite song is “You Raise Me Up” by Westlife. I like it because its lyrics are touching and the melody is beautiful. The singer’s voice is also very charming. It always makes me feel warm and encouraged whenever I listen to it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，作者讲述了自己对音乐的热爱。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③主题：作者分享了音乐在其生活中的重要性以及最喜欢的歌曲。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇表明自己是音乐迷以及音乐给自己带来美好。 第二步，阐述音乐能给自己带来能量。 第三步，介绍最喜欢的歌曲及喜欢的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①refresh使恢复精力 ②touching动人的 ③charming迷人的 ④encouraged受到鼓舞的 [高分句型] ①I have been a music fan since I was a little girl.（since引导的时间状语从句） ②When I’m tired or stressed, a piece of lively music can make me refreshed and full of power.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③I like it because its lyrics are touching and the melody is beautiful.（because引导的原因状语从句） 7．假如你是李华，你们学校英文杂志社正在举办以“我最喜欢的音乐”为主题的征文活动，请根据提示介绍你最喜欢的音乐进行投稿。 内容包括： (1) 你最喜欢的音乐类型； (2) 你喜欢这种音乐的原因：如音乐带给你的感受，对你的帮助和影响等； (3) 你想要和谁分享这种音乐以及原因。 参考词汇：乡村音乐：country music；流行音乐：pop music；摇滚音乐：rock-and-roll；古典音乐：classical music；说唱音乐：hip-hop 注意： 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hello! I’m Li Hua, and I’m excited to share my thoughts on my favorite kind of music. I really love pop music. It’s the type I listen to most often. I like pop music because it always makes me feel happy and energetic. The upbeat rhythms and catchy melodies can instantly lift my mood. When I’m feeling down, it always helps me to feel more cheerful and relaxed. Pop music also helps me concentrate when I’m studying. I often put on my headphones and listen while doing homework. I especially want to share this music with my friends. We often sing along to the songs and even try to learn the dances. It’s fun to have something we all enjoy and that brings us together. I believe sharing music creates great memories. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要向介绍自己最喜欢的音乐类型； 第二步，阐述喜欢这种音乐的原因； 第三步，谈谈自己想要和谁分享这种音乐以及原因。 [亮点词汇] ①thoughts 想法 ②energetic 精力充沛的 ③concentrate 集中 [高分句型] ①I like pop music because it always makes me feel happy and energetic. (原因状语从句) ②I believe sharing music creates great memories. (宾语从句；动名词作主语) 8．音乐将世间万事万物带进了美好的时空。每每听着音乐，就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。音乐有着无穷魅力！音乐是世界上最美的语言！请你以“Music Makes Me ______”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求：1.请补全标题； 2.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息； 3.词数 80—100词。 Music Makes Me ______ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Music Makes Me Happy I like music very much. It gives me energy when I’m tired and it makes me happy when I’m sad. Every time I listen to music, I forget all my worries and unhappiness. It has endless charm and is the most beautiful language in the world. When I feel sad or stressed, music always helps me feel better. It makes me happy and brings joy to my life. I love music because it has the power to change my mood and make everything seem brighter. Music is the most beautiful language. Enjoy the music you like, and enjoy yourself! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：本文主要是介绍自己对音乐的感受，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍音乐如何使自己开心； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①listen to music听音乐 ②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①It gives me energy when I’m tired and it makes me happy when I’m sad. (时间状语从句) ②I love music because it has the power to change my mood and make everything seem brighter. (原因状语从句) 9．音乐在我们的生活中起着十分重要的作用。请根据以下提示，以“The Role of Music”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容提示： 1. 音乐可以让我们放松身心，帮助我们缓解压力。 2. 音乐可以振奋并鼓舞人心。 3. 音乐可以抚慰我们的心灵，帮助我们走出困境。 4. 音乐可以…… 要求： 1. 中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。 3. 字数80-100。 The Role of Music _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Role of Music Music plays an important role in our lives. First, it can make us feel completely relaxed and help reduce our pressure at work or in our lives. Second, music can cheer us up whenever we are in trouble or feel sad. What’s more, music has a comforting effect when we are worried and helps us step out of difficulty. In addition, music can be of great help in learning different cultures. In a word, music is part of our lives. We can live a happier life with music. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“音乐在我们生活中起着重要作用”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述音乐的作用。 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在某方面起重要作用 ②make sb. do sth.使某人做某事 ③cheer sb. up使某人振作 [高分句型] What’s more, music has a comforting effect when we are worried and helps us step out of difficulty. (when引导时间状语从句) 10．The school radio station is collecting music pieces for different occasions. Choose one occasion and recommend a song for it. Write a short passage in at least 60 words about your choice and reasons for recommendation.（学校广播站正在为校园生活中的不同场景征集歌曲，请选择其中一个场景为它推荐一首歌曲，并阐述你推荐的理由。写一篇不少于60个词的短文。） 注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。 School occasions (校园场景) Lunchtime A 30-minute break between classes The School Sports Meeting The Charity Sale English Festival Chinese Traditional Culture Festival ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： For the School Sports Meeting, I recommend the song Eye of the Tiger by Survivor. This song is known for its powerful melody, which perfectly matches the energetic atmosphere of a sports event. The lyrics, which encourage determination, will inspire athletes to try their best towards victory. Additionally, the rhythm will keep the audience excited throughout the competition. I believe that playing this song during the School Sports Meeting will create an unforgettable experience for everyone. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时、一般将来时； ③提示：选择校园生活中的一个场景，推荐一首歌曲，并说明推荐理由。 [写作步骤] 第一步：选择一个校园场景，如校运动会，并确定一首适合该场景的歌曲。 第二步：阐述推荐理由，说明为什么这首歌曲适合该场景，可以从歌曲的旋律、歌词、氛围等方面进行分析。 第三步：总结推荐的理由，并呼吁大家在该场景中播放或欣赏这首歌曲。 [亮点词汇] ①is known for因……而出名 ②try their best尽最大努力 ③Additionally此外 [高分句型] ①This song is known for its powerful melody, which perfectly matches the energetic atmosphere of a sports event.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②I believe that playing this song during the School Sports Meeting will create an unforgettable experience for everyone.（宾语从句，动名词短语作主语） 能力综合实践5篇 11．假如你叫Li Hua，是一名中学生，喜欢收听音乐节目Music Show，特别是英文歌曲。请你用英语给节目主持人写一封信。 1.谈谈自己喜欢的一种音乐类型：pop, country, rock…… 2.喜欢英文歌曲的原因：触动人心，缓解压力…… 3.倾听英文歌曲的收获：促进英语学习，了解国外文化…… 要求： 1.包含以上所有内容，可适当发挥。 2.100词以上，不要出现真实的姓名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Dear host, I’m Li Hua, a middle school student. I love your Music Show, especially English songs. Pop music is my favorite because it is lively and easy to sing along with. I enjoy English songs for two reasons. Firstly, their touching lyrics can move my heart. Secondly, listening to them helps me relax after studying. What’s more, English songs bring me many benefits. They not only improve my English listening skills but also let me learn about foreign cultures. Could you please play more pop songs? Thank you for bringing us so much wonderful music. I hope your program will be better and better. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：以听众身份给电台主持人写信，需包含喜爱的音乐类型、喜欢原因及收获，并做适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：写信件开头，自我介绍并表达对节目的喜爱，明确最喜欢的音乐类型； 第二步：分两点说明喜欢英文歌曲的原因； 第三步：说明收获，最后提出请求并礼貌结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①lively活泼的 ②touching动人的 ③benefits好处 [高分句型] ①Pop music is my favorite because it is lively and easy to sing along with.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） ②They not only improve my English listening skills but also let me learn about foreign cultures.（运用了not only...but also...并列结构） 12．假设你是Harry，搭档是Harry的曾祖母，请围绕“过去与现在听音乐的方式差异”对话。要求：①提及盒式磁带(cassette tapes)、盒式磁带播放机(cassette players)和智能手机(smartphones)；②至少使用 1 句课文中的惊讶表达。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Harry: Great-grandma, when you were young, how did you listen to music? I’ve never heard of the way you used to listen before! Great-grandma: Oh, dear Harry! We used to listen to music with cassette tapes. We put a cassette tape into a cassette player, and then music would play. Almost everyone had a cassette player at that time. Harry: That can’t be true! It’s so different from now. I have tons of songs on my smartphone, and I can listen to music anytime and anywhere I want. Great-grandma: Wow, technology has changed so much! I never thought phones could be used to listen to music with so many songs stored in them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇小作文，为一段关于听音乐方式变化的对话； ②时态：主要使用一般过去时和一般现在时对比； ③提示：需提及盒式磁带、盒式播放器、智能手机，并使用至少一句课文中的惊讶表达（如“That can’t be true!”），语言自然，体现代际差异与科技发展。 [写作步骤] 第一步，Harry询问曾祖母年轻时听音乐的方式，并表达惊讶（从未听说过）； 第二步，曾祖母描述过去使用盒式磁带和播放器的方式及普及情况； 第三步，Harry用惊讶表达回应（That can’t be true!），并对比现在用智能手机听音乐的便利； 第四步，曾祖母感叹科技变化之大，表达对手机存储海量歌曲的惊奇。 [亮点词汇] ①listen to music听音乐 ②cassette tapes盒式磁带 ③cassette player盒式磁带播放机 ④tons of songs大量的歌曲 [高分句型] ①We used to listen to music with cassette tapes. (used to do表示过去习惯) ②I can listen to music anytime and anywhere I want. (anytime and anywhere作状语，I want作定语从句修饰) ③I never thought phones could be used to listen to music with so many songs stored in them. (thought后接宾语从句，with复合结构作伴随状语) 13．自从有了人类生活，音乐随之诞生。研究表明，音乐能够表达不同的情感，对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们往往用不同的音乐来调节心情。请你根据下表提示内容，写一篇英语短文，描述在不同的心情下，不同的音乐带给你的不同的影响。 听音乐前的情绪状态 适用音乐 听音乐后的心境 压力大，过分焦虑 流行音乐 放松 兴奋过度 乡村音乐 平静 困倦、疲惫 摇滚音乐 振奋 孤独、悲伤 （……） （……） 参考词汇：effect影响   stressed有压力的   sleepy 困倦的 流行音乐 pop music   乡村音乐 country music 要求： 1.内容必须包括上表中的要点； 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息； 3.要求90词左右(开头已经写好，不计入总词数)。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Research shows that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So I usually listen to different kinds of music to change my moods. When I feel stressed, I often listen to pop music to make myself relaxed. Sometimes when I enjoy playing computer games and feel too excited, I usually listen to country music to let myself calm down. And when I feel tired and sleepy, I often listen to rock music so that I can feel excited again. When I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to soft music because it always cheers me up. It makes me happy again. Music is so wonderful that I love it very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先表明音乐对人情绪的影响，介绍自己听不同种类的音乐，引出下文； 第二步，具体介绍自己在不同情绪状态下听的音乐风格，以及听音乐后的心境； 第三步，书写结束语，表达对音乐的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ①listen to 听 ②different kinds of 不同种类的 ③calm down 冷静下来 ④so that 以便 ⑤feel lonely 感到孤独 ⑥cheer up使……振奋 [高分句型] ①And when I feel tired and sleepy, I often listen to rock music so that I can feel excited again. (when引导的时间状语从句和so that引导的目的状语从句) ②When I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to soft music because it always cheers me up. (when引导的时间状语从句和because引导的原因状语从句) 14．音乐是一种奇妙的语言，时刻抚慰着人们的心灵。它不仅能帮助我们集中注意力、增强记忆力，还能有效缓解焦虑压力，并提升积极情绪。请你写一篇英语短文，谈谈音乐在你生活中的重要性。 内容包括： ·the importance of music in your life ·your own story of how music helped you 要求： 1.词数不少于60词； 2.不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3.请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Music plays a very important part in my life. It not only helps with my learning and exercise but also makes me relax when I’m stressed out. Never will I forget the experience I had last term. I joined the school speech competition. Waiting behind the curtains, I was so nervous that my hands shook. Then, a classmate played a piece of soft music to calm me down. It worked. My nervousness disappeared, and I became confident again. In the end, I won the first prize. Through the unforgettable experience, I realized how powerful music is. It gives me strength and comfort, and also brings me joy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、介绍音乐的重要性； 第二步、结合自己的经历，介绍音乐是如何帮助自己的； 第三步、书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①play a very important part in…在……中扮演重要角色 ②stressed out压力过大 ③a piece of一首 ④in the end最后 [高分句型] ①It not only helps with my learning and exercise but also makes me relax when I’m stressed out.(when引导时间状语从句) 15．假设你是李华，你收到国外笔友Eric的来信，他对音乐很感兴趣，并分享了他在英国喜欢的乐队。请你给他写一封回信，介绍自己最喜欢的音乐类型、喜欢的理由，以及音乐带给你的独特体验。 写作要求：1. 说明喜欢的音乐风格或类型 (如流行pop music、摇滚rock music、民谣folk music或古典classical music…)； 2. 结合歌词、旋律或歌手故事，解释喜欢的原因； 3. 描述音乐如何陪伴你学习、放松或面对挑战。 注意：1. 词数80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 Dear Eric, I was so excited to receive your letter! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing your thoughts! Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Eric,   I was so excited to receive your letter! I’m glad to hear about your interest in music. My favorite music type is pop music. I love Taylor Swift’s songs because her lyrics tell inspiring stories, and the melodies are catchy. For example, her song “Shake It Off” tells us to stay positive when facing difficulties. This always gives me courage. Music also plays a big role in my life. When I study, listening to soft music helps me concentrate. At night, soft pop songs relax my mind after a busy day. Music is like a friend that never leaves me! Looking forward to hearing your thoughts!   Best wishes,   Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出“我”喜欢的音乐风格； 第二步，具体阐述喜欢的原因及音乐是如何陪伴自己的； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be glad to do sth很高兴做某事 ②for example例如 ③look forward to doing sth期待做某事 [高分句型] ①I love Taylor Swift’s songs because her lyrics tell inspiring stories, and the melodies are catchy. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②When I study, listening to soft music helps me concentrate. (when引导的时间状语从句) 16 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 21 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 1 Music 单元话题（音乐）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．李华想要参加学校的音乐明星(music star)评选活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下信息，写一封推荐信介绍自己。 Age 15 Favorite musician Lang Lang Hobby sing and play music well, listen to music, have around 200 CDs Activity (活动) Wednesday: sing in the school music club weekends: play the piano and violin 注意：(1)须包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥； (2)文章句子通顺，语意连贯，语法规范； (3)词数60个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Sir, My name is Li Hua. Music is my life. I hope I can be a music star in our school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．假如你是李明，你的三个好朋友分别喜欢不同的音乐。请根据以下表格中的提示内容，写一篇英语短文，介绍你们各自喜欢的音乐及理由。 Who Favourite music Reason (原因) Peter pop music make people relaxed, ... Linda classical music sound beautiful, ... Tim rock music make people excited, … I 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于50词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文。) 音乐，如同无形的画笔，在心灵的画布上勾勒出情感的轮廓。在欢愉时，音乐如阳光洒满心田；在忧伤时，它又如温柔的夜风。它不仅是耳朵的盛宴，更是心灵的慰藉，陪伴我们走过人生的每一个季节，在寂静中回响，在喧嚣中沉淀。请你谈谈你最喜欢的音乐种类，以及你喜欢它的原因。 文章需要包含以下内容： 1. What kind of music do you like best? 2. Why do you like it? （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Write in at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite music (or song)” (以“我最爱的音乐（或歌）”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggested questions: 1. What music type is your favourite music/song? 2. Why do you like it? (At least two reasons.) 3. What’s your feeling when you are listening to it? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．学校广播站号召同学们推荐下周播放的歌曲。请你根据以下提示，给广播站写一封推荐信，推荐你最喜欢的一首歌。字数要求：80词左右，开头部分已给，不计入总词数。 Use the following points as reference (以下问题仅供参考)： (1)Which song would you like to recommend? (2)Why do you like it? (3)How did you feel when you first heard the song? I would like to recommend a song _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．音乐是一杯清茶，沁人心脾；音乐是一缕阳光，暖人心魂。某英文论坛以“音乐和我”为主题向大家征帖，作为一个音乐迷的你看到了也跃跃欲试。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，分享音乐给你带来了什么，并向大家推荐你最喜欢的歌曲。 要求： 1.内容须包含提示中的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺； 3. 词数80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I have been a music fan since I was a little girl. Over the years, music has brought so many beautiful things into my life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是李华，你们学校英文杂志社正在举办以“我最喜欢的音乐”为主题的征文活动，请根据提示介绍你最喜欢的音乐进行投稿。 内容包括： (1) 你最喜欢的音乐类型； (2) 你喜欢这种音乐的原因：如音乐带给你的感受，对你的帮助和影响等； (3) 你想要和谁分享这种音乐以及原因。 参考词汇：乡村音乐：country music；流行音乐：pop music；摇滚音乐：rock-and-roll；古典音乐：classical music；说唱音乐：hip-hop 注意： 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．音乐将世间万事万物带进了美好的时空。每每听着音乐，就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。音乐有着无穷魅力！音乐是世界上最美的语言！请你以“Music Makes Me ______”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求：1.请补全标题； 2.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息； 3.词数 80—100词。 Music Makes Me ______ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．音乐在我们的生活中起着十分重要的作用。请根据以下提示，以“The Role of Music”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容提示： 1. 音乐可以让我们放松身心，帮助我们缓解压力。 2. 音乐可以振奋并鼓舞人心。 3. 音乐可以抚慰我们的心灵，帮助我们走出困境。 4. 音乐可以…… 要求： 1. 中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。 3. 字数80-100。 The Role of Music _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．The school radio station is collecting music pieces for different occasions. Choose one occasion and recommend a song for it. Write a short passage in at least 60 words about your choice and reasons for recommendation.（学校广播站正在为校园生活中的不同场景征集歌曲，请选择其中一个场景为它推荐一首歌曲，并阐述你推荐的理由。写一篇不少于60个词的短文。） 注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。 School occasions (校园场景) Lunchtime A 30-minute break between classes The School Sports Meeting The Charity Sale English Festival Chinese Traditional Culture Festival ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．假如你叫Li Hua，是一名中学生，喜欢收听音乐节目Music Show，特别是英文歌曲。请你用英语给节目主持人写一封信。 1.谈谈自己喜欢的一种音乐类型：pop, country, rock…… 2.喜欢英文歌曲的原因：触动人心，缓解压力…… 3.倾听英文歌曲的收获：促进英语学习，了解国外文化…… 要求： 1.包含以上所有内容，可适当发挥。 2.100词以上，不要出现真实的姓名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．假设你是Harry，搭档是Harry的曾祖母，请围绕“过去与现在听音乐的方式差异”对话。要求：①提及盒式磁带(cassette tapes)、盒式磁带播放机(cassette players)和智能手机(smartphones)；②至少使用 1 句课文中的惊讶表达。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．自从有了人类生活，音乐随之诞生。研究表明，音乐能够表达不同的情感，对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们往往用不同的音乐来调节心情。请你根据下表提示内容，写一篇英语短文，描述在不同的心情下，不同的音乐带给你的不同的影响。 听音乐前的情绪状态 适用音乐 听音乐后的心境 压力大，过分焦虑 流行音乐 放松 兴奋过度 乡村音乐 平静 困倦、疲惫 摇滚音乐 振奋 孤独、悲伤 （……） （……） 参考词汇：effect影响   stressed有压力的   sleepy 困倦的 流行音乐 pop music   乡村音乐 country music 要求： 1.内容必须包括上表中的要点； 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息； 3.要求90词左右(开头已经写好，不计入总词数)。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．音乐是一种奇妙的语言，时刻抚慰着人们的心灵。它不仅能帮助我们集中注意力、增强记忆力，还能有效缓解焦虑压力，并提升积极情绪。请你写一篇英语短文，谈谈音乐在你生活中的重要性。 内容包括： ·the importance of music in your life ·your own story of how music helped you 要求： 1.词数不少于60词； 2.不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3.请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．假设你是李华，你收到国外笔友Eric的来信，他对音乐很感兴趣，并分享了他在英国喜欢的乐队。请你给他写一封回信，介绍自己最喜欢的音乐类型、喜欢的理由，以及音乐带给你的独特体验。 写作要求：1. 说明喜欢的音乐风格或类型 (如流行pop music、摇滚rock music、民谣folk music或古典classical music…)； 2. 结合歌词、旋律或歌手故事，解释喜欢的原因； 3. 描述音乐如何陪伴你学习、放松或面对挑战。 注意：1. 词数80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 Dear Eric, I was so excited to receive your letter! 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