Unit 2 writing学案 2026-2027学年沪教版七年级英语上册

七年级上册 U2 School life U2 writing学案 2026-2027学年沪教版七年级英语上册 班级 __________ 姓名 __________ 日期 __________ 课型：写作探究　教材：pp.28–29　建议课时：40分钟 本课要解决的问题 How can an email show what my school day is really like? 学完能做到：识别邮件结构；选择有用细节；按时间组织内容；检查并修改自己的邮件。 学习重点与难点：用具体活动和感受展开内容；避免只列时间或堆叠形容词。 一 先弄清给谁写 为什么写 4分钟 W1 Read Teen Life Magazine’s message on p.28. Who is the reader? __________________ What does the reader want to know? __________________________________________________________________ Which information belongs in this email? Tick the useful ideas. □ my daily routine □ my password □ a favourite lesson and why □ after-school life 二 从范文里借方法 6分钟 W2 Read Su Wen’s email. Write the four parts in order. Body Greeting Signature Closing ____________ → ____________ → ____________ → ____________ Find two time expressions that help the reader follow the day. ____________________________ and ____________________________ Find one activity and the reason or feeling that goes with it. Activity or moment Reason or feeling ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ W3 Which sentence helps a reader picture school life more clearly? Why? A. My school day is very, very nice. B. At the lunch break, I read a funny story with my friend. I choose ______ because ____________________________________________ 写作探究 像小编辑一样选择和修改 三 先把内容挑出来 6分钟 W4 Plan an email of about 80–100 words to Teen Life Magazine. Use true details. Choose three or four moments; include one reason or feeling. Part of my day What I usually do A useful detail or feeling Before school ________________ ________________________ At school ________________ ________________________ After school or in the evening ________________ ________________________ My most interesting detail: ___________________________________________ 词句帮助 start the day with … / during the break / after school / before bed I enjoy … because … / My favourite lesson is … / I usually … / Every …, I … 四 修改一段有问题的草稿 7分钟 W5 There are four errors in the following draft. Correct the verbs, the word order or the word form. I gets up at 6:50. I have usually breakfast at home. Classes starts at 8:00. After school, I play basketball with my friends. I enjoy it because it is interested. ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ W6 A writer says, “My day is busy.” Add one true detail to show what “busy” means. You may use your plan. ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 写之前再看一眼 读者能看懂时间顺序吗？有没有一个属于我自己的细节？ 写作探究 完成并改好自己的邮件 五 独立写一封邮件 12分钟 W7 Write about 80–100 words. Include the greeting, body, closing and signature. The greeting and sign-off do not count towards the word total. To: Teen Life Magazine Subject: My daily life ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 六 读者检查与作者修改 5分钟 W8 Exchange with your neighbour. Tick the checks and underline one detail you like. □ 邮件结构完整 □ 时间顺序清楚 □ 有具体活动和理由或感受 □ 一般现在时、频率表达基本正确 □ 大写、拼写和标点已检查 Reader’s question: __________________________________________________ One sentence I have improved: ________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 离堂检查 我这次改动最有用的地方是 ___________________________________ 写作探究参考答案 writing学案参考答案 W1 读者为Teen Life Magazine的编辑；内容是daily lives。除my password外，其余三项均可选。 W2 Greeting → Body → Closing → Signature。时间表达如at 7:20 a.m.、after school。活动与感受如：has a drama lesson / it is fun to learn how to put on a play。 W3 B，有具体时间、活动与同伴。W4按个人实际填写。 W5 四处修改：I gets→I get；I have usually→I usually have；Classes starts→Classes start；it is interested→it is interesting。 W6 示例：I have seven classes and practise the piano after school. 重点是用活动说明busy，不要求添加复杂词汇。 W7 参考邮件 Dear Teen Life Magazine, I am a Grade 7 student, and I want to tell you about my daily life. I usually get up at 6:40 and have breakfast at home. Classes start at 8:00. My favourite subject is geography because I like learning about different countries. During the morning break, I talk with my friends and walk around the playground. After school, I play badminton on Tuesdays and Thursdays. I usually read for fifteen minutes before bed. My days are busy, but I always have time to do something I enjoy. Yours sincerely, Chen Yu W8 修改与评价 看什么 具体标准 建议分值 内容 日常活动具体；至少一个理由或感受 4 组织 邮件结构完整；时间顺序清楚 3 语言 一般现在时、频率表达和基本书写准确 3 先指出一处有效细节，再提一个读者真正想问的问题。修改示例：I like PE. → I like PE because I can play team games with my friends. 不要求学生套用范文的作息或爱好。 第 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $