专题10 书面表达热点预测满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材，Units 1-3）（期中真题汇编，上海专用）九年级英语上学期

专题10 书面表达热点预测满分范文15篇 （紧贴新教材，Units 1-3） 一、U1单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 1．成长的道路上从无坦途，困境与麻烦是我们共同的人生课题。但你是否曾想过，这些看似棘手的“麻烦”，也能成为助力我们蜕变、成长的特殊“朋友”?我校公众号现面向全体同学征集以“Trouble is a friend”为题的英文作品，期待你结合自身现状，分享你化烦恼为动力的智慧与感悟。内容要点如下： 1. What teenage problems do you have? 2. What are the causes of these problems? 3. How can you solve the problems? 注意： 1. 要点齐全，可适当拓展; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 词数100左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Trouble is a friend Life is never a smooth journey. Sometimes troubles may appear on our journey of growth. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 2．假设你是校英文杂志Teenagers的专栏编辑Amy，请根据收到的信件，用英文进行回复。Dear Amy, I am a Grade 9 student. I have worked really hard since the beginning of the term. However, I still got low marks in my English exams. This makes me feel down. What can I do? Best wishes Sad Xiaoxiao 1.内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。 2.词数90词左右(已给出的文章开头和结尾，不计入总词数)。 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Dear Xiaoxiao, Thank you for your letter. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes Amy 二、U2单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 3．沐光而行，我们在知识的暖阳里汲取力量；向阳而生，我们在青春的赛道上奋力奔跑。假如你是李华，将参加学校英语社团举行的主题为“沐光·成长”的征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。 提示： 1. 你的职业规划是什么？ 2. 图中哪一位对你影响最深？ 3. 他/她具有什么精神品质？ 4. 你将如何实现自己的职业理想？ 注意： 1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中请勿提及真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。 Different people have different dreams. As for me, I would like to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 4．Nowadays, many teenagers ignore rural cultural jobs. Please write an article about why rural cultural jobs are worthwhile. Your writing must include the following points: 1. One rural cultural job you admire; 2. Main duties and necessary requirements of this job; 3. Reasons why this job has great social value; 4. Your small actions to learn related culture now. Requirements: At least 100 words, logical structure, no real personal information, correct grammar and spelling. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三、U3单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 5．你的英国笔友Jack要来参加周末野外研学旅行，来信询问出行建议。请你写一封回信给出建议，词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。    提示： 1. 穿着建议：舒适的运动服和运动鞋，方便行走攀爬 2. 颜色建议：穿红色、黄色等亮色，在森林里显眼、安全、适合拍照;避免白色，容易脏 3. 表达期待 Dear Jack, I’m glad to hear that you’re going on the weekend field trip with us! Regarding your questions, here is some advice for you.______________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________      I hope these suggestions are helpful. I am looking forward to seeing you. Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 6．城市漫步 (citywalk)这一新型旅游方式已经在年轻人当中悄然流行起来。假如你是李华，你想在下周的英语课堂上跟同学们分享一些在城市漫步时需要注意的事项，请你根据下面的提示写一篇英语发言稿。 要求： 1.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.须包含所有要点提示，可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯。 Hello, everyone! The citywalk has become popular among the young. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、U1单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 7．随着社会的快节奏发展，压力已成为一个普遍的社会问题，学生也面临各种各样的压力。全国心理健康日到来之际，为了促进学生快乐学习，健康成长，幸福生活，我校校报开展以Less Stress, Better Life为题的征文比赛。请根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，阐述中学生压力大的原因并且提出恰当的减压方法。 要求： (1) 短文必须包含提示中所有要点，可适当发挥； (2) 100词左右，标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数； (3) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Reasons for the stress: ·have lots of schoolwork and exams ·don’t know how to get along with others ·… Ways to lower stress: ·do sports ·listen to relaxing music ·… Less Stress, Better Life Nowadays, stress has become a common problem in society. We teenagers also have a lot of stress while growing up. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 8．Tom是一名九年级学生，曾经成绩优异、活泼开朗。但自从有了手机后，他渐渐沉迷其中，每天打游戏到深夜，作业拖拉，上课打瞌睡。这严重影响了他的学业和健康，于是，他在校园论坛上发了一个帖子： “I know I have a problem. I spend 5-6 hours on my phone every day. My grades are falling, my eyes hurt and I feel lonely. Please tell me what to do.——— Tom” 作为他的校友，请你写一封英文回信，给他提出具体建议。 get close to nature, reduce stress take up a hobby, learn new skills …… 注意：     1.词数为80左右。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 5.提示的建议必须全部用上，并且需要适当的发挥。 Dear Tom I’m sorry to hear about your problem. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to seeing you better. Yours, [Your Name] 五、U2单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 9．毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，选择下表中一个职业或自行确定另一个职业写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。 内容要点 参考词汇 What do you want to be when you grow up? a teacher a scientist Why do you want to be a(n)...? • be good at communicating • work with children • be interested in science • invent new products How are you going to do that? • get a good education • learn how to teach children • study science hard • do scientific research Where are you going to work? • ... • ... When are you going to start? • ... • ... 注意：(1)文中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用； (2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； (3)词数80～100。 My dream job _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 10．假设你是李华，你校正在开展“多彩未来”职业规划主题活动，现向学生广泛征集信息。请你根据以下调查问卷，给活动负责人Mr. Black写一封邮件，谈谈自己的理想职业及理由，并阐述职业规划。 My Dream Job1. What do you want to be in the future? □A doctor.□A teacher.□Others ____________ 2. Why do you choose that? 3. How will you achieve your dream? 4. What colour can represent you? 注意： （1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （2）词数：90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Black, I’m Li Hua from Grade Nine and I’m writing to talk about my dream job. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 六、U3单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 11．研学旅行是课堂的延伸，能够把书本知识和实践结合起来。假如你是李华，你校精心拟定了两个研学旅行备选方案，现面向全体同学公开征集意见。请你结合自己的想法，从下面的两个方案中任选其一并说明理由，用英语写一篇短文发送到学校网站。 Plan A: Visit Ancient City Wall Plan B: Farm & Hands-on Activity ★Walk on the ancient city wall and enjoy the view of Xi’an; ★Watch short cultural shows about Shaanxi’s history and traditional culture; ★... ★Feed animals, grow vegetables and pick fruits; ★Make handcrafts (cookies and bread, leaf paintings and handmade soap); ★... 要求：1．短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，可适当发挥； 2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整、规范； 3．短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4．词数：不少于70（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。 I’m glad that our school has provided us with two great study-trip plans. Between Plan A and Plan B, I prefer __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 12．Write at least 80 words on the topic “Travel is never a matter of money but of courage”. (以“Travel is never a matter of money but of courage”为题，写一篇不少于80个单词的短文，标点符号不占格) Suggested questions: (1) Do you agree with this idea? Why? (2) What is your most unforgettable travel experience? (3) What did you learn from travelling? Try to use Wh- words followed by infinitives, such as what to see and how to get around. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 1 13．假设你是李华，你校正在开展以“职面未来”为主题的征文活动，现向全体同学征集职业规划文稿。请你根据调查问卷的内容写一篇短文进行投稿，介绍自己的未来职业及理由，并阐述职业规划。 注意： （1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （2）80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Your Future Job 1. What do you want to be in the future? □ A doctor  □ A teacher  □ A scientist □ An artist  □ An IT engineer  □ Others ________ 2. Why do you choose that? _________________________________________________________________ 3. What’s your plan for the future job? _________________________________________________________________ My Future Job ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 14．在当今社会，很多中学生都是家里的宝贝，受到全家人的宠爱，独立生活能力相对较差。但对中学生来说，独立生活能力非常重要，对此你有何看法？请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法，并说说你在培养独立生活能力方面的打算。 写作要点： (1) Your opinion about being independent. (2) Your advice about developing students’ independence. (3) Your plan for developing your ability to live independently. 要求： （1）应包括以上所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； （2）不得出现真实的人名和地名； （3）词数不少于80。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 15．世界上最美的相遇，是遇见一个更优秀的自己。外出旅行等都能让我们开阔视野，增长见识，变得更加优秀。你记得最难忘的一次旅行吗？请你以“Traveling helps me meet a better self”为题，根据下列写作要点并结合自身的经历，用英语写一篇短文，分享自己的进步、经历和未来计划。 写作要点： 1. What is your most unforgettable trip? 2. What happened during the trip? 3. What do you learn from the trip? 4. What will you do in the future? 要求： 1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息； 3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Traveling Helps Me Meet a Better Self Traveling is like a mirror that helps me discover new parts of myself. Among all my trips, the most unforgettable one was my visit to... _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题10 书面表达热点预测满分范文15篇 （紧贴新教材，Units 1-3） 一、U1单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 【答案】范文 Trouble is a friend Life is never a smooth journey. Sometimes troubles may appear on our journey of growth. As a teenager, I am faced with heavy study pressure. I often feel stressed after finishing endless school tasks at school every day. There are many daily tests around me. They take up most spare time, leaving me little space for my own interests such as reading and sports. To change the situation, I decide to make good time plans. This helps me balance study and hobbies little by little. From my experience, trouble can be my friend. It pushes me to think bravely and become a better self step by step on my growing journey. Passage 2 【答案】范文 Dear Xiaoxiao, Thank you for your letter. I can understand how upset you are after your exam. Don’t worry. It’s common for Grade 9 students to meet such problems. First, find out where your mistakes lie. You can mark your wrong questions and review them regularly. Second, develop good learning habits. Listening to English materials and reading passages every day will help you a lot. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Keep practising and you will make progress little by little. Hope my advice can help you. Best wishes Amy 二、U2单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 【答案】One possible version: Different people have different dreams. As for me, I would like to be a writer— recording touching stories and sharing true feelings. Anne Frank, a German girl, who wrote The Diary of a Young Girl is my hero. Though she and her family lived a hard life in the 1940s because of the war, she kept writing to express hope and courage. Her optimism and persistence light up my path. To make this dream come true, I’ll read more books to enrich my mind and write daily diaries to practice my skills. I will never give up no matter what difficulty I meet. Guided by her spirit, I’ll keep moving forward to become an excellent writer. Passage 2 【答案】例文 Valuable Rural Cultural Jobs Among all rural cultural jobs, I admire village folk architects most. They protect disappearing traditional village houses and carry forward local culture. Their main work is repairing broken ancient buildings and redesigning houses without losing folk features. They must master wooden construction skills and know local customs. They also need to be patient and communicate well with elderly villagers. This job is valuable because old village houses carry hundreds of years of history. Without these architects, many precious buildings will be destroyed. To learn related culture, I visit old villages to draw sketches every holiday and read books on rural architecture. I will keep learning to be a cultural guardian. 三、U3单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 【答案】例文： Dear Jack, I’m glad to hear that you’re going on the weekend field trip with us! Regarding your questions, here is some advice for you. First, since we will do a lot of walking and climbing in the wild, comfortable sports clothes and a pair of sneakers are the best choice. They will make you feel relaxed and easy to move around. Second, for colours, I suggest you wear bright colours like red or yellow. This way, you can stand out in the green forest, which is safer and great for taking photos. Avoid wearing white, as it might get dirty easily. I hope these suggestions are helpful. I am looking forward to seeing you. Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 【答案】 例文     Hello, everyone! The citywalk has become popular among the young. Today, I’d like to share some tips on what to notice during a citywalk.     First, it is necessary to plan a route before you start. Second, you’d better wear comfortable clothes and shoes because you will walk for a long time. Third, remember to take a bag so that you can carry some water and other things.     Besides, there are some things we shouldn't do. Please don’t throw rubbish everywhere to protect the environment. Also, never eat unclean food, or you may get sick. Most importantly, don’t break traffic rules. Safety always comes first.     I hope you can have a good time on your citywalk! Thank you. 四、U1单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 【答案】 范文：                                                                           Less Stress, Better Life      Nowadays, stress has become a common problem in society. We teenagers also have a lot of stress while growing up. Where does the stress come from? First, we have lots of schoolwork and exams. Second, some of us don’t know how to get along with others. Besides, parents expect too much of us.      However, there are many ways to lower stress. Doing sports is a good way to relax our bodies and minds. Also, listening to relaxing music can help us calm down when we are nervous. What’s more, it’s helpful to share our worries with parents or teachers. They can give us some useful advice.      In a word, less stress makes a better life. We should learn to face stress bravely and smile at our life. Passage 2 【答案】 Dear Tom,     I’m sorry to hear about your problem. Here is some advice for you.     First, you should get close to nature on weekends. Walking in the park can help you reduce stress and feel relaxed. Second, why not take up a hobby? You can learn new skills like painting or playing sports instead of playing games. Also, try to limit your phone time. It can help you save more time for your schoolwork and make your grades better. I believe you can change soon and become active again.     I’m looking forward to seeing you better. Yours, [Your Name] 五、U2单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 【答案】例文 My dream job    Everyone has a dream job. As for me, I dream of being a scientist. I have always been deeply interested in science. I want to invent new products to improve people’s lives.     In order to achieve my dream, I must take action right now. First, I’m going to study science very hard. Second, I plan to do scientific research. Most importantly, I’ll read as many books as possible.     After I graduate from university, I am going to work in Beijing, where I can communicate with more experts. I firmly believe my dream will come true if I work hard. Passage 2 【答案】 例文 Dear Mr. Black, I’m Li Hua from Grade Nine and I’m writing to talk about my dream job. I want to be a doctor in the future. I choose this job because I want to help sick people and save their lives. Also, doctors are always respected by others. To achieve my dream, I will study hard to get into a good medical university. Besides, I plan to read more books about medicine to get more knowledge. I think white can represent myself. White means purity and kindness, which are important qualities for a doctor. I believe my dream will come true one day. Yours, Li Hua 六、U3单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 【答案】One possible version: I’m glad that our school has provided us with two great study-trip plans. Between Plan A and Plan B, I prefer Plan B. First, we can get close to nature. We will feed animals, grow vegetables and pick fresh fruits there. It is really relaxing to stay on a farm. Second, we can make different handcrafts, such as cookies and bread, leaf paintings and handmade soap. These fun activities help us learn useful life skills and bring us a lot of joy. Also, working with our own hands makes us feel happy. In my opinion, Plan B is meaningful. It not only enriches our knowledge about nature and farming but also improves our practical abilities. I hope we can have a great time. Passage 2 【答案】范文                                                                         Travel is never a matter of money but of courage I quite agree that travel is never a matter of money but of courage. Many people say they have no time or money, but in fact they just don’t have enough courage to start. Last winter, I joined a school trip to Guizhou. Before we set off, we discussed what to see and how to get around. During the trip, I learned what to do when we got lost and how to ask local people for help. Travelling taught me how to face the unknown bravely. Now I know the best way to learn is to go and see the world with my own eyes. Passage 1 【答案】例文 My Future Job Different students have different dream jobs. Encouraged by my mother, I dream of becoming a doctor like her. Though Mum is very busy, she always tries to look after patients. She says she’s happy when she helps patients. To achieve my goal, I’ve made plans. First, I’ll make an effort to enter a medical university. Second, I’ll learn more medical knowledge by reading. Besides, I decide to do volunteer work in hospitals to improve my skills. As long as I work hard, I believe I can become a good doctor in the future. Passage 2 【答案】例文： Nowadays, many parents do not ask their children to do anything except study. So, some students have poor ability to live independently. However, doing things independently is important. Firstly, they should have a chance to do things by themselves. Secondly, it is important for them to learn to make their own decisions. And parents should trust and encourage their children to develop their sense of responsibility. I plan to develop my ability by doing the housework, such as cleaning the house, washing my own clothes and helping my mother with cooking. I believe I will become independent soon. Passage 3 【答案】例文 Traveling Helps Me Meet a Better Self Traveling is like a mirror that helps me discover new parts of myself. Among all my trips, the most unforgettable one was my visit to Mount X with my family last summer. The climb was challenging. At first, I felt tired and wanted to give up. But my parents encouraged me to keep going. Step by step, I reached the top. How amazing the view was! I felt proud of myself. From this trip, I learned that perseverance leads to success. I also realized that I am stronger than I thought. In the future, I’ll take more trips to explore nature and challenge myself. I believe traveling will help me meet a better self. / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题10 书面表达热点预测满分范文15篇 （紧贴新教材，Units 1-3） 一、U1单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 1．成长的道路上从无坦途，困境与麻烦是我们共同的人生课题。但你是否曾想过，这些看似棘手的“麻烦”，也能成为助力我们蜕变、成长的特殊“朋友”?我校公众号现面向全体同学征集以“Trouble is a friend”为题的英文作品，期待你结合自身现状，分享你化烦恼为动力的智慧与感悟。内容要点如下： 1. What teenage problems do you have? 2. What are the causes of these problems? 3. How can you solve the problems? 注意： 1. 要点齐全，可适当拓展; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 词数100左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Trouble is a friend Life is never a smooth journey. Sometimes troubles may appear on our journey of growth. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Trouble is a friend Life is never a smooth journey. Sometimes troubles may appear on our journey of growth. As a teenager, I am faced with heavy study pressure. I often feel stressed after finishing endless school tasks at school every day. There are many daily tests around me. They take up most spare time, leaving me little space for my own interests such as reading and sports. To change the situation, I decide to make good time plans. This helps me balance study and hobbies little by little. From my experience, trouble can be my friend. It pushes me to think bravely and become a better self step by step on my growing journey. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文（分享感悟类书面表达），以一般现在时为主 明确要点：自身青少年烦恼/烦恼产生的原因/解决烦恼的方法 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数100左右，开头已给出不计入词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：已给出，总起引出成长路上会遇到麻烦 主体段：分别写出自己的青少年问题、分析成因、写出解决对策 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题，点明麻烦也是朋友 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：自身青少年烦恼 烦恼选择：heavy study pressure/poor sleep/time conflict between study and hobbies等 情绪感受：feel stressed/feel upset/feel tired等 要点二：烦恼产生的原因 原因选择：many daily tests/expectations from parents/poor time‑management等 带来影响：take up most spare time/make me nervous/stop me from doing what I like等 要点三：解决烦恼的方法 对策选择：make good time plans/talk with parents or teachers/do sports to relax等 作用效果：balance study and hobbies/lessen my pressure/help me make progress等 Passage 2 2．假设你是校英文杂志Teenagers的专栏编辑Amy，请根据收到的信件，用英文进行回复。Dear Amy, I am a Grade 9 student. I have worked really hard since the beginning of the term. However, I still got low marks in my English exams. This makes me feel down. What can I do? Best wishes Sad Xiaoxiao 1.内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。 2.词数90词左右(已给出的文章开头和结尾，不计入总词数)。 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Dear Xiaoxiao, Thank you for your letter. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes Amy 【答案】范文 Dear Xiaoxiao, Thank you for your letter. I can understand how upset you are after your exam. Don’t worry. It’s common for Grade 9 students to meet such problems. First, find out where your mistakes lie. You can mark your wrong questions and review them regularly. Second, develop good learning habits. Listening to English materials and reading passages every day will help you a lot. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Keep practising and you will make progress little by little. Hope my advice can help you. Best wishes Amy 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：建议类书信回复，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：共情安抚对方低落情绪、针对性给出可落地的英语学习建议、传递鼓励态度 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）和第二人称（you/your）结合 注意事项：不得透露真实校名、人名等个人身份信息，词数控制在90词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接来信，共情对方的低落心情，安抚情绪 主体段：分点给出具体可操作的英语学习建议，补充对应的理由说明 结尾段：表达美好祝愿，呼应开篇的鼓励态度 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：情绪安抚 共情表达：understand how upset you are/how down you feel/understand your disappointment/know it must be frustrating等 安抚内容：It’s common for Grade 9 students to meet such problems/It’s not unusual to get low marks sometimes/One bad exam doesn’t mean you are not hard-working等 要点二：学习建议 第一条建议：find out where your mistakes lie/go over your exam paper carefully/check your weak points等 配套行动：mark your wrong questions and review them regularly/write down mistakes in a notebook/go over them every weekend等 第二条建议：develop good learning habits/build useful daily learning routines/form steady learning habits等 具体做法：listen to English materials and read passages every day/keep an English diary/practise speaking aloud for 10 minutes daily等 补充鼓励：Don’t be afraid of making mistakes/Keep practising and you will make progress little by little/Every small effort will finally pay off等 二、U2单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 3．沐光而行，我们在知识的暖阳里汲取力量；向阳而生，我们在青春的赛道上奋力奔跑。假如你是李华，将参加学校英语社团举行的主题为“沐光·成长”的征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。 提示： 1. 你的职业规划是什么？ 2. 图中哪一位对你影响最深？ 3. 他/她具有什么精神品质？ 4. 你将如何实现自己的职业理想？ 注意： 1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中请勿提及真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。 Different people have different dreams. As for me, I would like to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Different people have different dreams. As for me, I would like to be a writer— recording touching stories and sharing true feelings. Anne Frank, a German girl, who wrote The Diary of a Young Girl is my hero. Though she and her family lived a hard life in the 1940s because of the war, she kept writing to express hope and courage. Her optimism and persistence light up my path. To make this dream come true, I’ll read more books to enrich my mind and write daily diaries to practice my skills. I will never give up no matter what difficulty I meet. Guided by her spirit, I’ll keep moving forward to become an excellent writer. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，一般现在时与一般过去时相结合 明确要点：职业规划、从图中选择榜样人物、榜样精神品质、实现理想的行动规划 确定人称：第一人称（I/my），第三人称（she/her） 注意事项：勿提及真实姓名、校名、地名等信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点题，说明自己的职业规划 主体段：介绍榜样人物故事，分析其精神品质 结尾段：写实现理想的具体计划，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：职业规划 职业选择：writer/heart surgeon/engineer等 要点二：榜样人物及精神品质 人物选择（从图中选择）：Anne Frank/Spud Webb/Tan Dun等 人物事迹：kept writing to express hope and courage/Spud Webb never gave up though he was short/Tan Dun uses music to tell stories等 精神品质：optimism and persistence/never giving up/kindness等 要点三：实现理想的行动规划 具体行动：read more books/learn from teachers/keep working hard等 Passage 2 4．Nowadays, many teenagers ignore rural cultural jobs. Please write an article about why rural cultural jobs are worthwhile. Your writing must include the following points: 1. One rural cultural job you admire; 2. Main duties and necessary requirements of this job; 3. Reasons why this job has great social value; 4. Your small actions to learn related culture now. Requirements: At least 100 words, logical structure, no real personal information, correct grammar and spelling. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Valuable Rural Cultural Jobs Among all rural cultural jobs, I admire village folk architects most. They protect disappearing traditional village houses and carry forward local culture. Their main work is repairing broken ancient buildings and redesigning houses without losing folk features. They must master wooden construction skills and know local customs. They also need to be patient and communicate well with elderly villagers. This job is valuable because old village houses carry hundreds of years of history. Without these architects, many precious buildings will be destroyed. To learn related culture, I visit old villages to draw sketches every holiday and read books on rural architecture. I will keep learning to be a cultural guardian. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，时态以一般现在时为主。 明确要点：1. 一种你敬佩的乡村文化工作；2. 该工作的主要职责和要求；3. 该工作具有巨大社会价值的原因；4. 你现在为学习相关文化所采取的小行动 确定人称：第一人称（I）。 注意事项：词数至少100词；不得出现真实信息；逻辑结构清晰。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：点明敬佩的职业并简要说明。 主体段：阐述主要职责，必要要求和社会价值。 结尾段：描述学习行动，并表达未来决心。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：敬佩的工作 工作选择：Among all rural cultural jobs, I admire village folk architects most./They protect disappearing traditional village houses and carry forward local culture./village folk architect/folk artist/craftsman/village cultural heritage protector/traditional opera performer/folk story collector/The job I admire most is.../...is a job that really touches my heart.   要点二：职责、要求和社会价值 职责：Their main work is repairing broken ancient buildings and redesigning houses without losing folk features./collect and record folk stories or songs/teach traditional skills to young people/organize cultural activities in villages 要求：They must master wooden construction skills and know local customs./They also need to be patient and communicate well with elderly villagers./love folk culture deeply 社会价值：This job is valuable because old village houses carry hundreds of years of history./Without these architects, many precious buildings will be destroyed./protect disappearing traditions/pass down wisdom to future generations/keep village identity alive/educate young people about their roots/This job is valuable because.../It plays an important role in.../...is extremely meaningful for... 要点三：学习行动与决心 总结：To learn related culture, I visit old villages to draw sketches every holiday and read books on rural architecture./I will keep learning to be a cultural guardian./learn traditional skills in my free time /join cultural volunteer activities/I believe that every small action counts. 三、U3单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 5．你的英国笔友Jack要来参加周末野外研学旅行，来信询问出行建议。请你写一封回信给出建议，词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。    提示： 1. 穿着建议：舒适的运动服和运动鞋，方便行走攀爬 2. 颜色建议：穿红色、黄色等亮色，在森林里显眼、安全、适合拍照;避免白色，容易脏 3. 表达期待 Dear Jack, I’m glad to hear that you’re going on the weekend field trip with us! Regarding your questions, here is some advice for you.______________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________      I hope these suggestions are helpful. I am looking forward to seeing you. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Jack, I’m glad to hear that you’re going on the weekend field trip with us! Regarding your questions, here is some advice for you. First, since we will do a lot of walking and climbing in the wild, comfortable sports clothes and a pair of sneakers are the best choice. They will make you feel relaxed and easy to move around. Second, for colours, I suggest you wear bright colours like red or yellow. This way, you can stand out in the green forest, which is safer and great for taking photos. Avoid wearing white, as it might get dirty easily. I hope these suggestions are helpful. I am looking forward to seeing you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：书信 (建议类应用文)，时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：穿着建议 (舒适运动服、运动鞋，方便行走攀爬)；颜色建议 (红、黄亮色，醒目安全适合拍照；避免白色，容易脏)；表达期待 确定人称：第二人称 (you) 注意事项：词数80左右；开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数   [第二步：构思布局]   开头段：题目已给出，回信引出出行建议 主体段：分点列出野外研学多条建议 (服装、颜色) 结尾段：表达期待 [第三步：要点展开]   要点一：穿着建议 Comfortable sports clothes and a pair of sneakers are the best choice./They will make you feel relaxed and easy to move around./For shoes, I suggest you wear comfortable sports shoes or a pair of sneakers./They will make you feel relaxed and easy to move around.等 要点二：颜色建议 I suggest you wear bright colours like red or yellow./This way, you can stand out in the green forest, which is safer and great for taking photos./Avoid wearing white, as it might get dirty easily./Don’t choose light grey clothes./They will look terrible once they touch mud or wet leaves.等 要点三：表达期待 I hope these suggestions are helpful./I am looking forward to seeing you./How much I expect the coming trip!/We can explore the forest and take lots of nice photos./I believe we will create wonderful memories./I have been looking forward to meeting you on this trip./It will be fantastic to enjoy nature with you./I’m convinced that we will have an unforgettable day.等 Passage 2 6．城市漫步 (citywalk)这一新型旅游方式已经在年轻人当中悄然流行起来。假如你是李华，你想在下周的英语课堂上跟同学们分享一些在城市漫步时需要注意的事项，请你根据下面的提示写一篇英语发言稿。 要求： 1.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.须包含所有要点提示，可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯。 Hello, everyone! The citywalk has become popular among the young. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文     Hello, everyone! The citywalk has become popular among the young. Today, I’d like to share some tips on what to notice during a citywalk.     First, it is necessary to plan a route before you start. Second, you’d better wear comfortable clothes and shoes because you will walk for a long time. Third, remember to take a bag so that you can carry some water and other things.     Besides, there are some things we shouldn't do. Please don’t throw rubbish everywhere to protect the environment. Also, never eat unclean food, or you may get sick. Most importantly, don’t break traffic rules. Safety always comes first.     I hope you can have a good time on your citywalk! Thank you. 【详解】写作步骤   [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：发言稿，介绍城市漫步（city‑walk）的注意事项，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：需要做的事（规划路线、穿舒适衣物鞋子、带包）；不能做的事（不乱扔垃圾、不吃不干净食物、不违反交通规则），可适当补充环保、安全等内容 确定人称：第二人称/第一人称，发言稿格式，开头已给出，结尾要有祝愿 注意事项：行文连贯，词数100左右，包含全部提示要点   [第二步：构思布局]   三层式结构： 第一层：开篇引入，点明主题，引出城市漫步的相关注意事项 第二层：分两部分阐述，先说应当做的事项，再讲禁止做的行为，补充简单理由 第三层：表达祝愿，收尾结束发言稿 [第三步：要点展开]   要点一：应当做的事项   核心词汇：plan a route/wear comfortable clothes and shoes/take a bag/prepare well/comfortable shoes/bring necessary things/get ready等 要点二：禁止做的事项   核心词汇：throw rubbish everywhere/eat unclean food/break traffic rules/keep clean/follow traffic rules/protect the environment/keep safe 等 要点三：结尾祝愿   核心词汇：have a good time/enjoy yourselves/have great fun/stay safe等 四、U1单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 7．随着社会的快节奏发展，压力已成为一个普遍的社会问题，学生也面临各种各样的压力。全国心理健康日到来之际，为了促进学生快乐学习，健康成长，幸福生活，我校校报开展以Less Stress, Better Life为题的征文比赛。请根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，阐述中学生压力大的原因并且提出恰当的减压方法。 要求： (1) 短文必须包含提示中所有要点，可适当发挥； (2) 100词左右，标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数； (3) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Reasons for the stress: ·have lots of schoolwork and exams ·don’t know how to get along with others ·… Ways to lower stress: ·do sports ·listen to relaxing music ·… Less Stress, Better Life Nowadays, stress has become a common problem in society. We teenagers also have a lot of stress while growing up. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 范文：                                                                           Less Stress, Better Life      Nowadays, stress has become a common problem in society. We teenagers also have a lot of stress while growing up. Where does the stress come from? First, we have lots of schoolwork and exams. Second, some of us don’t know how to get along with others. Besides, parents expect too much of us.      However, there are many ways to lower stress. Doing sports is a good way to relax our bodies and minds. Also, listening to relaxing music can help us calm down when we are nervous. What’s more, it’s helpful to share our worries with parents or teachers. They can give us some useful advice.      In a word, less stress makes a better life. We should learn to face stress bravely and smile at our life. 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，全文以一般现在时为主 明确要点：阐述中学生压力产生的原因；给出缓解压力的方法；适当升华主题 确定人称：第一人称 (we/our) 注意事项：需包含提示中所有要点，并适当发挥；词数100左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；文中不得出现真实人名和校名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：题干已经给出开头，点明压力是普遍社会问题，在此基础上介绍压力的来源 主体段：介绍缓解压力的办法 结尾段：总结全文，呼吁勇敢面对压力，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：压力产生的原因 lots of schoolwork and exams/don’t know how to get along with others/much homework and tests/have trouble communicating with classmates/parents expect too much of us/much high hope from parents等 要点二：缓解压力的方法 do sports/take exercise/play ball games/listen to relaxing music/enjoy light music/share worries with parents or teachers/talk about troubles with family and teachers等 要点三：结尾升华 face stress bravely/deal with stress in a right way/smile at our life/have a positive attitude towards life等 Passage 2 8．Tom是一名九年级学生，曾经成绩优异、活泼开朗。但自从有了手机后，他渐渐沉迷其中，每天打游戏到深夜，作业拖拉，上课打瞌睡。这严重影响了他的学业和健康，于是，他在校园论坛上发了一个帖子： “I know I have a problem. I spend 5-6 hours on my phone every day. My grades are falling, my eyes hurt and I feel lonely. Please tell me what to do.——— Tom” 作为他的校友，请你写一封英文回信，给他提出具体建议。 get close to nature, reduce stress take up a hobby, learn new skills …… 注意：     1.词数为80左右。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 5.提示的建议必须全部用上，并且需要适当的发挥。 Dear Tom I’m sorry to hear about your problem. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to seeing you better. Yours, [Your Name] 【答案】 Dear Tom,     I’m sorry to hear about your problem. Here is some advice for you.     First, you should get close to nature on weekends. Walking in the park can help you reduce stress and feel relaxed. Second, why not take up a hobby? You can learn new skills like painting or playing sports instead of playing games. Also, try to limit your phone time. It can help you save more time for your schoolwork and make your grades better. I believe you can change soon and become active again.     I’m looking forward to seeing you better. Yours, [Your Name] 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：书信，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：针对沉迷手机给出建议 确定人称：第一人称（I）、第二人称（you） 注意事项：文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出问题，准备给出建议 主体段：针对沉迷手机给出建议 结尾段：表达鼓励与期待 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：亲近自然，缓解压力 建议介绍：get close to nature/go hiking/enjoy fresh air等 建议作用：reduce stress/calm your mind/keep clear-minded等 要点二：培养爱好，学习新技能 建议介绍：take up a hobby/try new activities/play sports等 建议作用：learn new skills/enjoy spare time/make new friends等 要点三：控制手机时长 建议介绍：limit your phone time/stop staying up/put down your phone等 建议作用：save more time/improve your studies/get back your energy等 五、U2单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 9．毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，选择下表中一个职业或自行确定另一个职业写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。 内容要点 参考词汇 What do you want to be when you grow up? a teacher a scientist Why do you want to be a(n)...? • be good at communicating • work with children • be interested in science • invent new products How are you going to do that? • get a good education • learn how to teach children • study science hard • do scientific research Where are you going to work? • ... • ... When are you going to start? • ... • ... 注意：(1)文中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用； (2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； (3)词数80～100。 My dream job _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My dream job    Everyone has a dream job. As for me, I dream of being a scientist. I have always been deeply interested in science. I want to invent new products to improve people’s lives.     In order to achieve my dream, I must take action right now. First, I’m going to study science very hard. Second, I plan to do scientific research. Most importantly, I’ll read as many books as possible.     After I graduate from university, I am going to work in Beijing, where I can communicate with more experts. I firmly believe my dream will come true if I work hard. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（征文） 明确要点：长大后想成为什么职业、为什么选择这个职业、打算如何实现、计划在哪里工作、何时开始行动 确定人称：第一人称 (I) 注意事项：包含表格全部要点，可适当发挥；文中不能出现真实人名、校名；词数80～100；标题My dream job [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出话题，点明理想职业是科学家，说明选择的原因 主体段：介绍为实现梦想将要付出的行动 结尾段：说明工作地点，表达对梦想能够实现的信心 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：开篇点明理想职业与原因 表达 1：Everyone has a dream job./All people have their own dream jobs. 表达 2：As for me, I dream of being a scientist./For me, my dream job is to be a scientist. 表达 3：I have always been deeply interested in science./Science has always attracted me a lot. 表达 4：I want to invent new products to improve people’s lives./I hope to create new things to make people’s lives better. 要点二：实现梦想的做法 表达 1：In order to achieve my dream, I must take action right now./I have to start working hard to make my dream come true. 表达 2：First, I’m going to study science very hard./First of all, I will put much effort into science study. 表达 3：Second, I plan to do scientific research./Besides, I will take part in scientific studies. 表达 4：Most importantly, I’ll read as many books as possible./What matters most is that I will read lots of books. 要点三：工作地点与结尾感悟 表达 1：After I graduate from university, I am going to work in Beijing, where I can communicate with more experts./I will work in Beijing after college so that I can talk with more experts. 表达 2：I firmly believe my dream will come true if I work hard./I’m sure I can realize my dream through hard work. Passage 2 10．假设你是李华，你校正在开展“多彩未来”职业规划主题活动，现向学生广泛征集信息。请你根据以下调查问卷，给活动负责人Mr. Black写一封邮件，谈谈自己的理想职业及理由，并阐述职业规划。 My Dream Job1. What do you want to be in the future? □A doctor.□A teacher.□Others ____________ 2. Why do you choose that? 3. How will you achieve your dream? 4. What colour can represent you? 注意： （1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （2）词数：90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Black, I’m Li Hua from Grade Nine and I’m writing to talk about my dream job. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 例文 Dear Mr. Black, I’m Li Hua from Grade Nine and I’m writing to talk about my dream job. I want to be a doctor in the future. I choose this job because I want to help sick people and save their lives. Also, doctors are always respected by others. To achieve my dream, I will study hard to get into a good medical university. Besides, I plan to read more books about medicine to get more knowledge. I think white can represent myself. White means purity and kindness, which are important qualities for a doctor. I believe my dream will come true one day. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：电子邮件，以一般现在时和一般将来时为主 明确要点：理想职业是什么、选择该职业的理由、如何实现梦想以及代表自己的颜色 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出话题 主体段：分别介绍理想职业是什么、选择该职业的理由、如何实现梦想以及代表自己的颜色 结尾段：表达愿望，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：理想职业是什么 a doctor/in the future/become/one day 要点二：选择该职业的理由 choose this job/because/want/help sick people/save their lives/respect//busy/look after patients/feel happy 要点三：如何实现梦想 achieve my dream/study hard/get into a good medical university/plan/read more books about medicine/get more knowledge/goal/make a great effort/win a place/learn lots of knowledge about medicine/do some volunteer work in hospitals/improve my skills 要点四：代表自己的颜色 white/represent/mean/purity/kindness/important qualities 六、U3单元话题热点预测 Passage 1 11．研学旅行是课堂的延伸，能够把书本知识和实践结合起来。假如你是李华，你校精心拟定了两个研学旅行备选方案，现面向全体同学公开征集意见。请你结合自己的想法，从下面的两个方案中任选其一并说明理由，用英语写一篇短文发送到学校网站。 Plan A: Visit Ancient City Wall Plan B: Farm & Hands-on Activity ★Walk on the ancient city wall and enjoy the view of Xi’an; ★Watch short cultural shows about Shaanxi’s history and traditional culture; ★... ★Feed animals, grow vegetables and pick fruits; ★Make handcrafts (cookies and bread, leaf paintings and handmade soap); ★... 要求：1．短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，可适当发挥； 2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整、规范； 3．短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4．词数：不少于70（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。 I’m glad that our school has provided us with two great study-trip plans. Between Plan A and Plan B, I prefer __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: I’m glad that our school has provided us with two great study-trip plans. Between Plan A and Plan B, I prefer Plan B. First, we can get close to nature. We will feed animals, grow vegetables and pick fresh fruits there. It is really relaxing to stay on a farm. Second, we can make different handcrafts, such as cookies and bread, leaf paintings and handmade soap. These fun activities help us learn useful life skills and bring us a lot of joy. Also, working with our own hands makes us feel happy. In my opinion, Plan B is meaningful. It not only enriches our knowledge about nature and farming but also improves our practical abilities. I hope we can have a great time. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：意见说明类说明文，以一般现在时和一般将来时为主 明确要点：从两个研学方案中二选一、说明选择理由、覆盖方案给出的全部指定活动内容 确定人称：第一人称（I/we/my/our） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、校名和地名，词数不少于70，开头已给出不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接题目给出的开篇句，直接点明自己选择的研学方案 主体段：分点说明选择该方案的核心理由，逐一覆盖方案里的指定活动内容，补充细节让逻辑更连贯 结尾段：总结方案的意义，表达对研学活动的期待 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：方案选择与核心理由 方案选择：Plan B/Plan A 开篇表态：I prefer Plan B/I would like to choose Plan A 理由方向：get close to nature/learn about local history/experience traditional culture/practice life skills等 要点二：活动内容展开 对应Plan B活动：feed animals, grow vegetables and pick fresh fruits/watch farm animals grow/learn about different kinds of crops/taste fresh seasonal fruits等 手工活动：make different handcrafts, such as cookies and bread, leaf paintings and handmade soap/learn to mix dough by ourselves/collect fallen leaves to make paintings/create our own special soap等 活动价值：learn useful life skills and bring us a lot of joy/improve our practical abilities/get away from busy study/create sweet memories with classmates等 对应Plan A活动：walk on the ancient city wall and enjoy the view of Xi’an/Watch short cultural shows about Shaanxi’s history and traditional culture等 活动价值：learn more about local history/feel the beauty of ancient architecture/get closer to traditional culture等 要点三：结尾总结 总结句：Plan B is meaningful/This trip will be an unforgettable experience等 升华表达：It not only enriches our knowledge about nature and farming but also improves our practical abilities/It helps us connect textbook knowledge with real life, and learn things we can’t get in class等 收尾期待：I hope we can have a great time/I am looking forward to this wonderful study trip等 Passage 2 12．Write at least 80 words on the topic “Travel is never a matter of money but of courage”. (以“Travel is never a matter of money but of courage”为题，写一篇不少于80个单词的短文，标点符号不占格) Suggested questions: (1) Do you agree with this idea? Why? (2) What is your most unforgettable travel experience? (3) What did you learn from travelling? Try to use Wh- words followed by infinitives, such as what to see and how to get around. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文                                                                         Travel is never a matter of money but of courage I quite agree that travel is never a matter of money but of courage. Many people say they have no time or money, but in fact they just don’t have enough courage to start. Last winter, I joined a school trip to Guizhou. Before we set off, we discussed what to see and how to get around. During the trip, I learned what to do when we got lost and how to ask local people for help. Travelling taught me how to face the unknown bravely. Now I know the best way to learn is to go and see the world with my own eyes. 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文，文章说理部分以一般现在时为主，叙述旅游经历部分用一般过去时 明确要点：是否同意观点并说明理由；最难忘的旅行经历；旅行中的收获 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：覆盖所有问题要点，词数不少于80；必须用到“特殊疑问词+不定式”结构 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：明确表态，同意“旅行不在于钱而在于勇气”这一观点 主体段：讲述自己去贵州研学的难忘旅行经历，嵌入Wh-词+不定式结构 结尾段：总结旅行收获，升华主题 第三步：要点展开 要点一：观点表态 agree that travel is never a matter of money but of courage/agree with the idea lack courage to start/disagree that travel is never a matter of money but of courage等 要点二： 旅行经历 旅游地点：Guizhou/Beijing/Shanghai等 旅游性质：a school trip/a family trip/a trip with my friends等 具体事件：discussed what to see and how to get around/learned what to do when we got lost/how to ask local people for help/where to visit/how to plan the route/what to prepare for bad weather等 要点三：旅行收获 taught me how to face the unknown bravely/deal with unexpected problems bravely/experience the world in person等   Passage 1 13．假设你是李华，你校正在开展以“职面未来”为主题的征文活动，现向全体同学征集职业规划文稿。请你根据调查问卷的内容写一篇短文进行投稿，介绍自己的未来职业及理由，并阐述职业规划。 注意： （1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （2）80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Your Future Job 1. What do you want to be in the future? □ A doctor  □ A teacher  □ A scientist □ An artist  □ An IT engineer  □ Others ________ 2. Why do you choose that? _________________________________________________________________ 3. What’s your plan for the future job? _________________________________________________________________ My Future Job ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Future Job Different students have different dream jobs. Encouraged by my mother, I dream of becoming a doctor like her. Though Mum is very busy, she always tries to look after patients. She says she’s happy when she helps patients. To achieve my goal, I’ve made plans. First, I’ll make an effort to enter a medical university. Second, I’ll learn more medical knowledge by reading. Besides, I decide to do volunteer work in hospitals to improve my skills. As long as I work hard, I believe I can become a good doctor in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：征文记叙文，以一般将来时、一般现在时为主 明确要点： ① 未来想从事的职业；② 选择该职业的理由；③ 实现目标的职业规划 确定人称：第一人称 (I) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、学校；全文80词左右，给定开头不计入词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接题目给出的开头句，点明自己未来理想职业 主体段：分两层，第一层阐述选择这份职业的理由；第二层写职业规划 结尾段：升华主旨，表达为梦想坚持、努力的决心 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：未来职业 职业选择：a doctor/a teacher/a scientist/an artist/an IT engineer/a nurse/a dancer/a singer/a worker/a cleaner/a driver/a writer/a cook/a pilot等 要点二：选择该职业的理由 榜样影响：Encouraged by my mother, I dream of becoming a doctor like her./My mother is a great doctor, so I hope to follow in her footsteps./Watching my mother help patients every day makes me want to be a doctor.等 职业价值：look after patients/she’s happy when she helps patients/she feels happy when patients get better/bring hope to patients等 要点三：未来职业规划 升学目标：make an effort to enter a medical university/study hard at all subjects/listen to teachers carefully/go to a top university等 知识积累： learn more medical knowledge by reading/improve my skills/read related books/learn professional knowledge/watch learning videos/collect useful information等 实践锻炼：do volunteer work in hospitals/take part in practice activities/get working experience/help people in need/take part in after-school activities等 Passage 2 14．在当今社会，很多中学生都是家里的宝贝，受到全家人的宠爱，独立生活能力相对较差。但对中学生来说，独立生活能力非常重要，对此你有何看法？请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法，并说说你在培养独立生活能力方面的打算。 写作要点： (1) Your opinion about being independent. (2) Your advice about developing students’ independence. (3) Your plan for developing your ability to live independently. 要求： （1）应包括以上所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； （2）不得出现真实的人名和地名； （3）词数不少于80。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Nowadays, many parents do not ask their children to do anything except study. So, some students have poor ability to live independently. However, doing things independently is important. Firstly, they should have a chance to do things by themselves. Secondly, it is important for them to learn to make their own decisions. And parents should trust and encourage their children to develop their sense of responsibility. I plan to develop my ability by doing the housework, such as cleaning the house, washing my own clothes and helping my mother with cooking. I believe I will become independent soon. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：阐述你对中学生培养独立生活能力的看法；提出培养学生独立性的建议；谈谈你培养自身独立生活能力的计划 确定人称：以第一人称I为主，谈及普遍情况时使用第三人称 注意事项：词数不少于80（开头不计入总词数）；需覆盖所有要点，可适当发挥；不得出现真实人名、地名，保证行文逻辑连贯、条理清晰 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段：引出话题，表明对独立自主的看法 第二段：提出培养独立性的建议 第三段：阐述自己的计划和决心 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：看法 现状描述：parents do not ask their children to do anything except study/some students have poor ability to live independently等 观点表达：doing things independently is important/doing things independently is necessary for growing up等 具体说明：Nowadays, many parents do not ask their children to do anything except study. So, some students have poor ability to live independently. However, doing things independently is important. 要点二：建议 建议一：have a chance to do things by themselves/let children try new tasks等 建议二：learn to make their own decisions/learn to solve problems alone等 建议三：parents should trust and encourage children/develop their sense of responsibility等 具体说明：Firstly, they should have a chance to do things by themselves. Secondly, it is important for them to learn to make their own decisions. And parents should trust and encourage their children to develop their sense of responsibility. 要点三：计划 具体行动：do the housework/clean the house/wash my own clothes/help with cooking/make my own bed/go shopping alone等 决心表达：I believe I will become independent soon/I will keep improving等 具体说明：I plan to develop my ability by doing the housework, such as cleaning the house, washing my own clothes and helping my mother with cooking. I believe I will become independent soon. Passage 3 15．世界上最美的相遇，是遇见一个更优秀的自己。外出旅行等都能让我们开阔视野，增长见识，变得更加优秀。你记得最难忘的一次旅行吗？请你以“Traveling helps me meet a better self”为题，根据下列写作要点并结合自身的经历，用英语写一篇短文，分享自己的进步、经历和未来计划。 写作要点： 1. What is your most unforgettable trip? 2. What happened during the trip? 3. What do you learn from the trip? 4. What will you do in the future? 要求： 1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息； 3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Traveling Helps Me Meet a Better Self Traveling is like a mirror that helps me discover new parts of myself. Among all my trips, the most unforgettable one was my visit to... _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Traveling Helps Me Meet a Better Self Traveling is like a mirror that helps me discover new parts of myself. Among all my trips, the most unforgettable one was my visit to Mount X with my family last summer. The climb was challenging. At first, I felt tired and wanted to give up. But my parents encouraged me to keep going. Step by step, I reached the top. How amazing the view was! I felt proud of myself. From this trip, I learned that perseverance leads to success. I also realized that I am stronger than I thought. In the future, I’ll take more trips to explore nature and challenge myself. I believe traveling will help me meet a better self. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题并引出难忘的爬山之旅； 第二步，描述登山过程及登顶后的感受； 第三步，总结旅行带来的成长感悟； 第四步，展望未来旅行，呼应主题。 [亮点词汇] ①challenging有挑战的 ②give up放弃 ③step by step逐步地 [高分句型] ①From this trip, I learned that perseverance leads to success. (that引导的宾语从句) ②How amazing the view was! (how引导的感叹句) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $