Unit 9 Travel Around（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材鲁教版五四制九年级全一册

Unit 9 Travel Around单元同步写作讲义 本单元属于“人与社会”范畴。主题为Travel Around（旅行），围绕旅行、名胜古迹、历史文化、人文景观、中外文化交流展开，介绍文化遗产、名胜与地域文化，（社会文化、历史、人文、旅游）。 写作主要包含两个维度： 1.介绍旅游景点；2. 介绍自己的一次旅游经历。 单元话题 名胜与旅游 写作维度 介绍旅游景点 开头：第一段（总起）：点明景点名称、地理位置、整体地位/称号。 第二段（分述）：介绍景点历史、规模、建筑特色。 第三段（总结）：介绍文化意义，它能帮助人们了解中国传统文化。  介绍自己的一次旅游经历。 第一段：交代旅行时间，简单介绍景点背景。 第二段：描写游玩过程、所见所做。 第三段：写本次旅行收获、感受。 词汇积累 1. be located in / lie/sit in 位于 2. be known as 作为……而出名 3. date back to 追溯到 4. enjoy great fame 享有盛誉 5. couldn’t help doing 忍不住做…… 6. gain a deeper understanding of 对……有更深的理解 7. traditional Chinese culture 中国传统文化 8. an unforgettable trip 一次难忘的旅行 句式积累 景点介绍说明文 总起：位置+地位+名气 … is located in … It is known as a famous cultural site and enjoys great fame around the world. 分述：历史+结构+特色 Its history can date back to … It has special buildings and unique styles. It is famous for its long history and traditional culture. 总结：价值+意义 It is a great cultural treasure. Visitors can learn a lot about traditional Chinese culture here. 旅行经历 第一段【交代时间+景点简介】 Last …, I visited … It lies in … and is famous for its beautiful sights and rich culture. 第二段【游览过程：所见+所做+所思】 When I was there, I saw many ancient buildings and beautiful views. I also learned about local history and stories. I couldn’t help feeling amazed at our traditional culture. 第三段【收获+感悟+结尾】 This unforgettable trip helped me gain a deeper understanding of Chinese traditional culture. I really enjoyed the trip and hope to visit it again. 佳句仿写 1. 课本原句：Qufu is a small city located in the southwest of Shandong Province. 仿写：平遥是一座位于山西省中部的古城。 _______________________________________ 2. 课本原句：Its history can date back to more than 2,000 years ago. 仿写：这处著名景点的历史可以追溯到数千年前。 _______________________________________ 3.课本 原句：It enjoys great fame as a world cultural heritage site. 仿写：它作为中国最珍贵的古代瑰宝之一而享有盛誉。 _______________________________________ 4. 课本原句：I’d like to share my wonderful trip to Suzhou with you. 仿写：我想和你分享我游览一处古迹的难忘旅程。 _______________________________________ 5. 课本原句：While travelling, I couldn’t help thinking about ancient poems. 仿写：当我在那里游览时，我被它悠久的历史和优美的景色深深打动。 _______________________________________ 6. 课本原句：This trip helped me gain a deeper understanding of traditional Chinese culture. 仿写：这次美好的经历让我更加了解中国的传统文化。 _______________________________________ 典例 旅行是我们生活中的一部分，它不但能使我们放松，而且能够开阔我们的视野，让我们学到很多。请以“My Trip to ________”为题，根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你某一次的旅行经历。 My Trip to ________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时为主 明确要点：旅行的地点、旅行期间的具体经历、旅行的感受与收获 确定人称：第一人称（I/my/we） 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；题目已给出，需补全地点；语言通顺，内容完整 谋篇布局 三段式结构： 开头段：总起，说明旅行对生活的重要性，引出自己的旅行经历 主体段：按时间顺序描述旅行经历（参观公园、农场采摘、湖边野餐） 结尾段：总结感受与收获，表达期待下一次旅行  范文 My Trip to Yunnan Travelling is an essential part of life. It not only helps us relax but also broadens our horizons. Last summer, I had the opportunity to visit Yunnan with my family. During the trip, we visited a beautiful park filled with colourful flowers. We took plenty of photos to capture the lovely scenery. We also went to a nearby farm where we picked fresh fruit and learned about farming. We enjoyed a delicious picnic by the lake, savoring the fruit we picked. The day was filled with fun and learning. The beautiful scenery and fun activities made our time together truly memorable. This trip taught me the importance of taking time to enjoy life and explore new places. I can’t wait to plan our next adventure. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇 1. essential adj. 极其重要的（替换important） 2. broaden v. 拓宽；扩大 broaden our horizons 开阔眼界 3. capture v. 捕捉；拍摄（文中指拍下美景，替换take） 4. savor v. 尽情品尝；品味 5. memorable adj. 难忘的（替换unforgettable） 高分句型 1.It not only helps us relax but also broadens our horizons. 它不仅帮助我们放松，还能开阔我们的眼界。  not only...but also... 不但……而且…… 2. We also went to a nearby farm where we picked fresh fruit and learned about farming. 我们还去了附近的农场，在那里采摘新鲜水果，了解农事。 定语从句 where 引导，修饰地点 3.The beautiful scenery and fun activities made our time together truly memorable. 美丽的景色和有趣的活动让我们共度的时光十分难忘。  make + 宾语 + 形容词 使……怎么样 （一） 泰山是中国最著名的山脉之一，每年吸引成千上万的游客前来观光。请根据以下表格内容提示，写一篇英语短文介绍泰山。 位置 山东泰安市 特色 五岳之首, 主峰玉皇顶海拔约1545米；核心四大奇观为旭日东升、云海玉盘、晚霞夕照、黄河金带 价值 历史文化底蕴深厚，世界自然与文化双重遗产 注意： 1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含上述全部要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称； 3. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Mount Tai, located in Taian of Shandong Province, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 文旅不仅是参观风景，更是通过亲身实践，深入体验一个地方的历史、传统与生活方式。为此，你校英语角以“My Cultural Tour”为题开展征文活动。请你选择一次印象深刻的文旅经历，写一篇英语文章，分享你的见闻与感受，并谈谈本次文旅的意义。 My Cultural Tour The meaning of the tour:… 注意：(1)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 (2)词数：80-100.所给开头与结尾不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone. I’m glad to share my cultural tour with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信说他计划来中国进行一次文化之旅，但他不知道该选择哪个城市。请你给他写一封回信，推荐一个你认为最值得一游的中国城市，并说明理由。 提示： 城市名称及位置； 推荐的理由（历史、文化、美食、景点等方面）； 给出旅行建议（最佳时间、交通等）。 要求： 包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 不要出现真实校名和姓名； 不少于100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I’m thrilled to hear that you’re planning a cultural trip to China. After thinking carefully, I would strongly recommend you to visit Xi’an. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your visit! Yours, Li Hua （四） 假如你是来自甘肃临夏州的九年级学生李华，寒假打算和父母去北京度假。请你给笔友赵晴写一封电子邮件，礼貌地询问关于北京的名胜(places of interest)、交通、饮食、天气等方面的信息。 要求：1.语义连贯，层次清晰，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名； 3.80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Zhao Qing, How is it going? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’d like to thank you for helping me so much! I’m looking forward to your reply. Li Hua （五） 最近，你校针对九年级学生做了一项调查，旨在了解该年龄层学生在旅行中最看重的要素，下图是统计结果。请根据图表信息用英语写一篇短文，内容包括： 1.描述调查结果； 2.你的选择及理由。 写作要求： 1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 2.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词语：scenery  n.风景；local  adj.当地的 What do you think is the most important thing during a trip? Our school did a survey among Grade 9 students, and here are the results. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 假如你是天津中学生李华，你的英国笔友Kevin对天津的著名景观和休闲生活非常感兴趣。根据你搜集的以下信息，用英语给他回复一封邮件，介绍这两个景观及喜闻乐见的休闲活动，并表达你的想法。 （1） the Tianjin Eye was completed in 2008; takes you 120 metres above the Haihe River; see beautiful sights; … （2） the Huangyaguan Great Wall has a history of over 1,400 years; climb the Great Wall; get close to nature; … （3）popular activities in Tianjin… （4）what you think of Tianjin… 要求： （1）词数：80 ~ 100 个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Kevin, I’m glad to receive your email and know you’re interested in famous places and popular activities in Tianjin. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua （七） 假设校报正在征集学生旅行故事，请你以 A memorable trip 为题投稿，写一次课外真实感的海边沙滩旅行，避开课本爱丁堡原文，灵活变换句首，使用本课核心词汇memorable/shortened version/sand。 写作要求： 内容要点：旅行地点与同行人、沙滩游玩经历、观看小型精简露天舞台剧、旅途内心感受；灵活变换句首，必须使用本课核心词汇 memorable、sand、shortened version； 时态规范、语句通顺，逻辑清晰； 词数 80–100； 禁止填写真实校名、姓名。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 近日某英文公众号正在做关于《走遍中国》系列的推送，现就“我最喜欢的旅游景点”这一话题收集素材。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示，以My favorite tourist attraction为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿给该公众号。 写作提示：1. The name and the location of it. 2. The character (scenery/culture/history) of it. 3. What do you think of it? 写作要求：1）文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3）词数100左右。 My favorite tourist attraction ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 9 Travel Around单元同步写作讲义 本单元属于“人与社会”范畴。主题为Travel Around（旅行），围绕旅行、名胜古迹、历史文化、人文景观、中外文化交流展开，介绍文化遗产、名胜与地域文化，（社会文化、历史、人文、旅游）。 写作主要包含两个维度： 1.介绍旅游景点；2. 介绍自己的一次旅游经历。 单元话题 名胜与旅游 写作维度 介绍旅游景点 开头：第一段（总起）：点明景点名称、地理位置、整体地位/称号。 第二段（分述）：介绍景点历史、规模、建筑特色。 第三段（总结）：介绍文化意义，它能帮助人们了解中国传统文化。  介绍自己的一次旅游经历。 第一段：交代旅行时间，简单介绍景点背景。 第二段：描写游玩过程、所见所做。 第三段：写本次旅行收获、感受。 词汇积累 1. be located in / lie/sit in 位于 2. be known as 作为……而出名 3. date back to 追溯到 4. enjoy great fame 享有盛誉 5. couldn’t help doing 忍不住做…… 6. gain a deeper understanding of 对……有更深的理解 7. traditional Chinese culture 中国传统文化 8. an unforgettable trip 一次难忘的旅行 句式积累 景点介绍说明文 总起：位置+地位+名气 … is located in … It is known as a famous cultural site and enjoys great fame around the world. 分述：历史+结构+特色 Its history can date back to … It has special buildings and unique styles. It is famous for its long history and traditional culture. 总结：价值+意义 It is a great cultural treasure. Visitors can learn a lot about traditional Chinese culture here. 旅行经历 第一段【交代时间+景点简介】 Last …, I visited … It lies in … and is famous for its beautiful sights and rich culture. 第二段【游览过程：所见+所做+所思】 When I was there, I saw many ancient buildings and beautiful views. I also learned about local history and stories. I couldn’t help feeling amazed at our traditional culture. 第三段【收获+感悟+结尾】 This unforgettable trip helped me gain a deeper understanding of Chinese traditional culture. I really enjoyed the trip and hope to visit it again. 佳句仿写 1. 课本原句：Qufu is a small city located in the southwest of Shandong Province. 仿写：平遥是一座位于山西省中部的古城。 _______________________________________ 2. 课本原句：Its history can date back to more than 2,000 years ago. 仿写：这处著名景点的历史可以追溯到数千年前。 _______________________________________ 3.课本 原句：It enjoys great fame as a world cultural heritage site. 仿写：它作为中国最珍贵的古代瑰宝之一而享有盛誉。 _______________________________________ 4. 课本原句：I’d like to share my wonderful trip to Suzhou with you. 仿写：我想和你分享我游览一处古迹的难忘旅程。 _______________________________________ 5. 课本原句：While travelling, I couldn’t help thinking about ancient poems. 仿写：当我在那里游览时，我被它悠久的历史和优美的景色深深打动。 _______________________________________ 6. 课本原句：This trip helped me gain a deeper understanding of traditional Chinese culture. 仿写：这次美好的经历让我更加了解中国的传统文化。 _______________________________________ 【参考答案】 1.Pingyao is an ancient city located in the middle of Shanxi Province. 2.The famous site can date back to thousands of years ago. 3.It enjoys great fame as one of China’s greatest ancient treasures. 4.I’d like to share my unforgettable trip to an ancient scenic spot with you. 5.When I traveled there, I was deeply moved by its long history and beauty. 6.This wonderful experience helped me know more about our traditional culture. 典例 旅行是我们生活中的一部分，它不但能使我们放松，而且能够开阔我们的视野，让我们学到很多。请以“My Trip to ________”为题，根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你某一次的旅行经历。 My Trip to ________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时为主 明确要点：旅行的地点、旅行期间的具体经历、旅行的感受与收获 确定人称：第一人称（I/my/we） 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；题目已给出，需补全地点；语言通顺，内容完整 谋篇布局 三段式结构： 开头段：总起，说明旅行对生活的重要性，引出自己的旅行经历 主体段：按时间顺序描述旅行经历（参观公园、农场采摘、湖边野餐） 结尾段：总结感受与收获，表达期待下一次旅行  范文 My Trip to Yunnan Travelling is an essential part of life. It not only helps us relax but also broadens our horizons. Last summer, I had the opportunity to visit Yunnan with my family. During the trip, we visited a beautiful park filled with colourful flowers. We took plenty of photos to capture the lovely scenery. We also went to a nearby farm where we picked fresh fruit and learned about farming. We enjoyed a delicious picnic by the lake, savoring the fruit we picked. The day was filled with fun and learning. The beautiful scenery and fun activities made our time together truly memorable. This trip taught me the importance of taking time to enjoy life and explore new places. I can’t wait to plan our next adventure. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇 1. essential adj. 极其重要的（替换important） 2. broaden v. 拓宽；扩大 broaden our horizons 开阔眼界 3. capture v. 捕捉；拍摄（文中指拍下美景，替换take） 4. savor v. 尽情品尝；品味 5. memorable adj. 难忘的（替换unforgettable） 高分句型 1.It not only helps us relax but also broadens our horizons. 它不仅帮助我们放松，还能开阔我们的眼界。  not only...but also... 不但……而且…… 2. We also went to a nearby farm where we picked fresh fruit and learned about farming. 我们还去了附近的农场，在那里采摘新鲜水果，了解农事。 定语从句 where 引导，修饰地点 3.The beautiful scenery and fun activities made our time together truly memorable. 美丽的景色和有趣的活动让我们共度的时光十分难忘。  make + 宾语 + 形容词 使……怎么样 （一） 泰山是中国最著名的山脉之一，每年吸引成千上万的游客前来观光。请根据以下表格内容提示，写一篇英语短文介绍泰山。 位置 山东泰安市 特色 五岳之首, 主峰玉皇顶海拔约1545米；核心四大奇观为旭日东升、云海玉盘、晚霞夕照、黄河金带 价值 历史文化底蕴深厚，世界自然与文化双重遗产 注意： 1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含上述全部要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称； 3. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Mount Tai, located in Taian of Shandong Province, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 Mount Tai, located in Taian of Shandong Province, is one of the most famous mountains in China. Its main peak is about 1,545 meters high. It is known as the most important of China’s Five Great Mountains. Mount Tai is famous for its four great wonders: the sunrise, the sea of clouds, the sunset glow, and the golden belt of the Yellow River. Thousands of tourists climb the mountain every year to enjoy these amazing views. For thousands of years, it has been a symbol of Chinese culture and history. Today it is a World Natural and Cultural Heritage Site. Mount Tai stands for China’s long history and great spirit. （二） 文旅不仅是参观风景，更是通过亲身实践，深入体验一个地方的历史、传统与生活方式。为此，你校英语角以“My Cultural Tour”为题开展征文活动。请你选择一次印象深刻的文旅经历，写一篇英语文章，分享你的见闻与感受，并谈谈本次文旅的意义。 My Cultural Tour The meaning of the tour:… 注意：(1)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 (2)词数：80-100.所给开头与结尾不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone. I’m glad to share my cultural tour with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 Hello, everyone. I’m glad to share my cultural tour with you. Last summer, I visited an ancient town with my family. Walking along the old streets, I learned a lot about its long history. I also experienced the traditional life there, such as making local food and watching folk dances. The people there were very friendly, which made me feel warm. This cultural tour is of great meaning to me. It not only opened my eyes but also helped me understand our traditional culture better. I think we should try our best to protect these cultural places. （三） 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信说他计划来中国进行一次文化之旅，但他不知道该选择哪个城市。请你给他写一封回信，推荐一个你认为最值得一游的中国城市，并说明理由。 提示： 城市名称及位置； 推荐的理由（历史、文化、美食、景点等方面）； 给出旅行建议（最佳时间、交通等）。 要求： 包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 不要出现真实校名和姓名； 不少于100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I’m thrilled to hear that you’re planning a cultural trip to China. After thinking carefully, I would strongly recommend you to visit Xi’an. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your visit! Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Peter,     I’m thrilled to hear that you’re planning a cultural trip to China. After thinking carefully, I would strongly recommend you to visit Xi’an.     Located in northwest China, Xi’an is an ancient capital famous for its long history. You must visit the Terracotta Warriors, which show amazing ancient culture. Besides, the local food like Roujiamo and noodles is truly delicious. There are many beautiful parks and museums too. I suggest coming in spring because the weather is comfortable and warm. It is easy to travel there by high-speed train or plane. The people there are very friendly and helpful. I hope you will have a wonderful trip there. Please let me know if you need more help. I am sure you will love this city.     Looking forward to your visit! Yours, Li Hua （四） 假如你是来自甘肃临夏州的九年级学生李华，寒假打算和父母去北京度假。请你给笔友赵晴写一封电子邮件，礼貌地询问关于北京的名胜(places of interest)、交通、饮食、天气等方面的信息。 要求：1.语义连贯，层次清晰，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名； 3.80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Zhao Qing, How is it going? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’d like to thank you for helping me so much! I’m looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Zhao Qing,      How is it going?      I’m writing to tell you that I plan to visit Beijing with my parents during the coming winter vacation. Since you live there, could you please help me with some information? Firstly, could you recommend some famous places of interest? Secondly, I wonder how we can get around the city easily. Is the subway convenient? Besides, what special food should we try there? Lastly, what’s the weather like in winter? I need to know what clothes to prepare. I believe your advice will be very helpful to us.      I’d like to thank you for helping me so much! I’m looking forward to your reply. （五） 最近，你校针对九年级学生做了一项调查，旨在了解该年龄层学生在旅行中最看重的要素，下图是统计结果。请根据图表信息用英语写一篇短文，内容包括： 1.描述调查结果； 2.你的选择及理由。 写作要求： 1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 2.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词语：scenery  n.风景；local  adj.当地的 What do you think is the most important thing during a trip? Our school did a survey among Grade 9 students, and here are the results. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 What do you think is the most important thing during a trip? Our school did a survey among Grade 9 students, and here are the results. According to the chart, scenery ranks first with 53%. Local culture comes second at 32%, while living conditions and others make up 9% and 6%. The results suggest most students prefer to enjoy beautiful views during their trips. As for me, I value local culture the most. It allows me to learn about local customs, history, and food. For example, I learned a lot from my visit to Xi’an. I think culture gives a trip real meaning and unforgettable memories. （六） 假如你是天津中学生李华，你的英国笔友Kevin对天津的著名景观和休闲生活非常感兴趣。根据你搜集的以下信息，用英语给他回复一封邮件，介绍这两个景观及喜闻乐见的休闲活动，并表达你的想法。 （1） the Tianjin Eye was completed in 2008; takes you 120 metres above the Haihe River; see beautiful sights; … （2） the Huangyaguan Great Wall has a history of over 1,400 years; climb the Great Wall; get close to nature; … （3）popular activities in Tianjin… （4）what you think of Tianjin… 要求： （1）词数：80 ~ 100 个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Kevin, I’m glad to receive your email and know you’re interested in famous places and popular activities in Tianjin. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Kevin, I’m glad to receive your email and know you’re interested in famous places and popular activities in Tianjin. Here are two famous places. The first one is the Tianjin Eye, which was completed in 2008. It takes you 120 metres above the Haihe River to see beautiful sights. The second one is the Huangyaguan Great Wall. It has a history of over 1,400 years. You can climb the Great Wall and get close to nature. As for popular activities, people in Tianjin enjoy listening to crosstalk in their free time. It always makes people laugh. In my opinion, Tianjin is a beautiful and modern city full of culture. Welcome to Tianjin! Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua （七） 假设校报正在征集学生旅行故事，请你以 A memorable trip 为题投稿，写一次课外真实感的海边沙滩旅行，避开课本爱丁堡原文，灵活变换句首，使用本课核心词汇memorable/shortened version/sand。 写作要求： 内容要点：旅行地点与同行人、沙滩游玩经历、观看小型精简露天舞台剧、旅途内心感受；灵活变换句首，必须使用本课核心词汇 memorable、sand、shortened version； 时态规范、语句通顺，逻辑清晰； 词数 80–100； 禁止填写真实校名、姓名。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 A memorable trip Last summer’s trip to the coastal town is the most memorable journey I have ever taken. With my family, I spent whole days playing with soft sand by the seaside. One evening, we watched an outdoor play. It was a shortened version of a famous fairy tale. As the sun went down, actors performed lively shows right on the beach. All visitors cheered loudly for their wonderful acting. I still keep clear memories of that evening. This trip lets me understand simple outdoor arts can bring us endless happiness. （八） 近日某英文公众号正在做关于《走遍中国》系列的推送，现就“我最喜欢的旅游景点”这一话题收集素材。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示，以My favorite tourist attraction为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿给该公众号。 写作提示：1. The name and the location of it. 2. The character (scenery/culture/history) of it. 3. What do you think of it? 写作要求：1）文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3）词数100左右。 My favorite tourist attraction ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 My favorite tourist attraction My favorite tourist attraction is the Great Wall, located in Beijing, China. It is famous for its long history and magnificent scenery. Built over 2,000 years ago, it runs thousands of kilometers across mountains. As a symbol of ancient Chinese culture, it shows the wisdom of the Chinese people. Standing on the Great Wall, I can enjoy beautiful mountains and feel the power of history. I think the Great Wall is really amazing. It teaches me a lot about Chinese history and makes me feel proud of my country. This great wonder will stay in my heart forever. I hope to visit it again in the future. 试卷第1页（共3页） 试卷第1页（共3页） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $