2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习---The Healing Power of Music 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Music has always been more than just entertainment to me. It has been a lifeline, and eventually, a calling. But I didn’t always know that. For years, I wrote songs about romantic relationships, following the path that women in pop music were often encouraged to follow. Then, in 2023, I suffered from a deep burnout after a tiring tour. I was exhausted, sick, and felt completely devalued by the industry. Out of necessity, I turned to instruments as a way of staying connected to music while tending to myself. I started offering sound baths, and I was surprised by how beneficial this new way of sharing music was — both for me and for others. Today, I approach music differently. When I write or perform, I perceive the creative process as a birth process, and I try to take really good care of myself. Good sleep, time in nature, and spending time with my community are all parts of my practice. I believe music can offer the experience of being deeply impacted without pain — that receptivity is definitely unique to the medium of music. My latest album is seeded with my highest inspiring intentions. I believe people will feel that energy. Music for sure has the power to facilitate us in finding our way through. 续写要求 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已给出。 Last month, I held my first sound bath concert to share my new music with the community. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After the concert, many listeners came up to share their feelings with me. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1. 角色 ________________________________________________________ 2. 视角 第________人称 3. 时空线 多年以前，我跟随流行音乐鼓励的方向，多年写关于爱情的歌曲——_________________——2023年，一次疲惫的巡演后我陷入深度倦怠，身心俱疲、备受轻视——_________________——迫于需要，我转向乐器并开始提供声音疗愈，惊喜地发现这种方式对自己和他人都有益——_________________——如今我以不同方式对待音乐：把创作视为孕育过程，好好照顾自己——_________________——我的新专辑满载最高激励意图，相信人们能感受到那份能量——_________________——（续写）上个月，我为社区举办了首场声音疗愈音乐会分享新音乐——（续写）音乐会结束后，许多听众上前与我分享感受 4. 细节问答 What made the author feel burned out?：___________________________________ Why did the author turn to sound baths?：_________________________________ How does the author treat music today?：________________________________________________ What is the theme of the author’s latest album?：__________________________________________ What did the listeners do after the concert?：_____________________________________________ 5. 情节线 过去多年，我写爱情歌曲，随流行音乐之路前行→_________________→2023年巡演后陷入倦怠，疲惫生病、感觉被行业轻视→_________________→我转向乐器，开始声音疗愈，发现其益处→_________________→如今我把创作当作孕育过程，注重自我照料，音乐成为疗愈媒介→_________________→新专辑满载激励意图，相信音乐能引导人们找到出路→_________________→（续写）我举办首场声音疗愈音乐会，分享新音乐→（续写）听众前来分享感受，音乐疗愈的力量得以印证 6. 情感线 I: devalued and exhausted→___________→peaceful and fulfilled；Listeners: stressed and tired→___________→calmed and touched 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：________________________________________________________________________ 英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 分词作状语、定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句、非谓语结构 ___________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 音乐的力量、疗愈与自我成长、创作与生命、温柔接纳类：_______________________________________ 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1：Last month, I held my first sound bath concert to share my new music with the community. 衔接句1——What happened at the concert? How did the audience react? What did the author feel? _______________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2：After the concert, many listeners came up to share their feelings with me. 衔接句2——What did the listeners say? How did the author feel? What did the author decide to do? _______________________________________________________________________ 三、段落续写框架 第一段：上个月，我为社区举办了首场声音疗愈音乐会分享新音乐。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：音乐会结束后，许多听众上前与我分享感受。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四、段落续写 Last month, I held my first sound bath concert to share my new music with the community. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After the concert, many listeners came up to share their feelings with me. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【标准答案】 一、文本分析 1. 角色 作者（I）：一位流行音乐创作人/歌手，曾写爱情歌曲，2023年倦怠后转向声音疗愈，如今视创作为孕育过程，注重自我照料，愿以音乐疗愈他人；听众/社区：音乐会中静心感受，结束后主动分享自己被疗愈的感受。 2. 视角 第一人称 3. 时空线 多年以前，我跟随流行音乐鼓励的方向，多年写关于爱情的歌曲——早年随流，写爱情歌——2023年，一次疲惫的巡演后我陷入深度倦怠，身心俱疲、备受轻视——倦怠低谷，备受轻视——迫于需要，我转向乐器并开始提供声音疗愈，惊喜地发现这种方式对自己和他人都有益——转向疗愈，意外获益——如今我以不同方式对待音乐：把创作视为孕育过程，好好照顾自己——转变理念，善待自己——我的新专辑满载最高激励意图，相信人们能感受到那份能量——新专辑载愿，能量相传——（续写）上个月，我为社区举办了首场声音疗愈音乐会分享新音乐——举办音乐会，分享新声——（续写）音乐会结束后，许多听众上前与我分享感受——听众共鸣，疗愈印证 4. 细节问答 What made the author feel burned out?：A deep burnout after a tiring tour; she was exhausted, sick and felt devalued by the industry. Why did the author turn to sound baths?：Out of necessity, to stay connected to music while tending to herself. How does the author treat music today?：She perceives the creative process as a birth process and takes good care of herself. What is the theme of the author’s latest album?：It is seeded with her highest inspiring intentions to help people find their way through. What did the listeners do after the concert?：They came up to share their feelings, saying the music calmed and comforted them. 5. 情节线 过去多年，我写爱情歌曲，随流行音乐之路前行→早年随流，写爱情歌→2023年巡演后陷入倦怠，疲惫生病、感觉被行业轻视→倦怠低谷，备受轻视→我转向乐器，开始声音疗愈，发现其益处→转向疗愈，意外获益→如今我把创作当作孕育过程，注重自我照料，音乐成为疗愈媒介→转变理念，善待自己→新专辑满载激励意图，相信音乐能引导人们找到出路→新专辑载愿，能量相传→（续写）我举办首场声音疗愈音乐会，分享新音乐→举办音乐会，分享新声→（续写）听众前来分享感受，音乐疗愈的力量得以印证→听众共鸣，疗愈印证 6. 情感线 I: devalued and exhausted→peaceful and fulfilled→peaceful and fulfilled；Listeners: stressed and tired→calmed and touched→calmed and touched 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：音乐对作者而言远不止娱乐，而是生命线甚至使命。2023年一场疲惫巡演后她陷入倦怠，转向乐器与声音疗愈，意外发现音乐能疗愈自己与他人。如今她把创作视为孕育过程，注重自我照料，并以满载激励意图的新专辑帮助人们找到方向。 英文：Music has always been more than entertainment to the author; it is a lifeline and a calling. After a deep burnout in 2023, she turned to instruments and sound baths, discovering the healing power of music. Now she treats creation as a birth process and shares her inspiring new album to help people find their way through. 8. 句式 分词作状语：Filled with my inner peace, the music calmed every listener. 定语从句：The listeners who shared their feelings were deeply touched by the music. 宾语从句：I realized that music’s true power lies in healing. 状语从句：When I play music, I try to take good care of myself. 非谓语结构：Breathing slowly, the audience sank into the healing sound. 9. 本文主题 音乐的力量、疗愈与自我成长、创作与生命、温柔接纳类：音乐以温柔之力疗愈人心，指引我们找到前路 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1：Last month, I held my first sound bath concert to share my new music with the community. 衔接句1：Soft tones filled the quiet hall and I guided the audience to sink into the healing sound. I played pieces from my new album, pouring my inner peace into the music. The audience closed their eyes and breathed slowly, feeling the warm energy around them. Paragraph 2：After the concert, many listeners came up to share their feelings with me. 衔接句2：Some said the music calmed their anxiety and relieved their pressure. Their words touched me deeply, making me realize music’s true power lies in healing. I decided to keep creating healing music and bring warmth to more people. 三、段落续写框架 第一段：上个月，我为社区举办了首场声音疗愈音乐会分享新音乐。 →①轻柔乐声充满安静的大厅，我引导听众沉入疗愈之声；→②我演奏新专辑的曲目，把内心的平静与思考倾注进音乐；→③听众闭眼缓慢呼吸，让乐声环绕，感受温暖的疗愈能量。 第二段：音乐会结束后，许多听众上前与我分享感受。 →④有的说音乐安抚了他们的焦虑、缓解了长期压力；→⑤一位女士说音乐帮助她走出了艰难时期，话语深深打动了我；→⑥我意识到音乐的真正力量在于疗愈，决心继续创作疗愈音乐，温暖更多人。 四、标准续写范文（150词左右） Paragraph 1：Last month, I held my first sound bath concert to share my new music with the community.Soft gentle tones filled the quiet hall. Instead of energetic pop performances, I sat among my instruments and guided the audience to sink into the healing sound. I played the pieces from my new album, pouring all my inner peace and reflections into the music. I watched the audience close their eyes, breathing slowly, letting the sound wrap around them. I hoped they could feel the warm energy I had put into every note. Paragraph 2：After the concert, many listeners came up to share their feelings with me.Some said the music calmed their anxiety and relieved their long-time pressure. One lady told me she had found comfort after going through a hard period. Their words touched me deeply. This made me fully realize that music’s true power lies in healing. It was far more meaningful than the pop songs I used to write. I would keep creating healing music and bring warmth to more people. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $