Unit 6 课时4 Section 3 Writing（分层作业）英语新教材沪教版九年级上册

Unit 6 Food and health Section 3 Writing分层练习 A组 巩固过关 C组 思维拔高 B组 能力进阶 拓展 链接中考 词汇 waiter n.服务员be fond of 喜爱 remind somebody of.....使某人想起 句型 1.The Country House serves traditional English food. 乡村小屋餐厅供应传统英式食物。 2. The fish pie reminded me of my grandma. 这份鱼派让我想起了奶奶 3. We also tried some fish and chips, as well as some bangers and mash, and they were fantastic. 我们还尝了炸鱼薯条，还有香肠土豆泥，味道棒极了 4. I would certainly recommend the Country House for good, traditional English food. 想要品尝地道美味的传统英式食物，我当然推荐乡村小屋餐厅。 5. you should get there early and be prepared to wait for a long time for your food. 你应该早点到那里，做好长时间等餐的准备。 【短语积累】 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.______________________________均衡饮食 2.______________________________犒劳自己；享用（美食） 3.______________________________油炸食品 4.______________________________减肥；减重 5.______________________________远离；避开 6.______________________________尝起来美味可口 7.______________________________使…… 想起…… 8.______________________________传统食物 9.______________________________渡过；通过 10.______________________________乳制品 11.______________________________软饮料 12.______________________________运动饮料 13.______________________________总的来说；大体上 14.______________________________富含…… 如何写一篇餐厅评论 　本单元主要话题是食物与健康 ，相关写作题目可延伸为“我的饮食习惯”“健康饮食建议”“一次难忘的用餐经历”等。命题内容以评论为主 ，要求客观地介绍餐厅的情况 ，并给出自己的评价。写作时应注意评价要客观具体 。能够运用本单元所学到关于饮食和健康的词汇和短语，用宾语从句进行客观评价和推荐。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： • What is the name of the restaurant? Where is it? • What type of food does it serve? • What do you think of the food, service and price? • Would you recommend this restaurant to others? Why? 写作框架 写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语 开 头 星级评分 ， 餐厅名称 、 位置和类型 一般现在时 Last Saturday, I ate at a restaurant. The restaurant serves… Food: ★★★★★ Service: ★★ ★★☆ Price: ★★★☆☆ 中 间 1. 对食物的评价（菜品） 2. 对服务的评价 3. 对价格的评价 一般过去时/一般现在时 The food was. The waiters were. The price was. For example... 结 尾 整体评价 ，是否推荐及理由 一般现在时 In conclusion. I would recommend this restaurant. However, you should... 【句式积累】 一、就餐评论 （1））开头（交代背景） 1.上周五父母带我去了一家本地餐馆，它供应传统粤菜。 My parents took me to a local restaurant last Friday. It serves traditional Guangdong food. （2））中间：评价食物（描述菜品，加入个人感受） 2.我们品尝了他家招牌面条，味道十分出彩。 We tried their famous noodles, and it was wonderful. 3.这份甜甜的甜点让我想起妈妈亲手做的蛋糕。 The sweet dessert reminded me of my mum’s homemade cakes. （3））评价服务（褒贬结合）先写优点，再写不足，搭配具体事例 4.服务员非常有礼貌和友好 ，但服务有点慢。 The waiters were very polite and friendly, but the service was a little slow. 5.价格合理。我们每人花了大约 50 元。 The price was reasonable. We spent about 50 yuan per person. （4））结尾推荐（必考句型）总体推荐 + 给出善意提醒 6.我强烈推荐这家餐厅，因为美味新鲜的海鲜。 I would certainly recommend the restaurant for its great fresh seafood. 二、饮食与健康 开头（Beginning）：点明主旨 介绍饮食与健康的关系，提出核心观点：保持均衡饮食很重要。 1. 食物在我们的健康中扮演重要角色。 2.我认为均衡饮食对每个人都是必要的。 3.我们吃的东西极大地影响我们的健康。 主体段（Body）：利弊对比 + 给出建议 对比健康食物与垃圾食品；讲不良饮食带来的问题；给出具体饮食建议。 1.水果、蔬菜这类健康食物富含维生素。 2.过多垃圾食品可能会引发健康问题。 3.我们应该远离汽水和油炸食品。 4.养成健康的饮食习惯对我们很重要。 5.如果吃太多垃圾食品，我们可能会胃痛。 结尾（Ending）：倡议号召 总结观点，呼吁大家养成健康饮食习惯，保持健康生活。 1.让我们保持均衡饮食，保持健康。 2.记住，健康的食物带给我们美好的生活。 3.饮食习惯上的微小改变能带来巨大改变。 三、句型升级训练 1. A balanced diet is important. 均衡饮食很重要。 升级句： 如果我们想要拥有强健的身体，均衡饮食是必不可少的。 我认为每个人都有必要保持均衡饮食。 2. We should eat fruit and vegetables. 我们应该吃水果和蔬菜。 升级句： 我们应该吃大量的水果和蔬菜，因为它们富含维生素和矿物质。 3. I used to eat junk food. 我过去吃垃圾食品。 升级句： 我过去常常吃很多垃圾食品，比如汉堡和薯条，但现在我尽力远离它。 4. We should drink water. 我们应该喝水。 升级句： 我认为我们应当多喝白开水，远离含糖饮料。 5. Junk food is unhealthy. 垃圾食品不健康。 升级句： 垃圾食品不健康，因为它含有太多的脂肪、糖和盐，可能导致健康问题。 6. Eating well makes us feel good. 吃得好让我们感觉良好 升级句： 吃得好不仅让我们感觉良好，还给我们足够的精力度过一天。 【实战演练一】 假设你是李明，Teen Voice专栏征集餐厅评论，请你写一篇英文评论，介绍你去过的一家餐厅，投稿给该栏目。要求： 1.内容包含：就餐时间、餐厅基础信息、食物、服务以及你的推荐与建议； 2.时态正确，语句通顺，设置一个吸引眼球的标题； 3.词数：100 左右词； 4.不得出现真实校名、人名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【实战演练二】 健康的饮食习惯对我们的健康非常重要，它能够帮助我们预防很多疾病。请你根据以下提示，以“Eat Healthily”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍如何养成健康的饮食习惯。 要求： 1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，可适当发挥； 2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名)； 4. 词数：不少于100。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【实战演练三】 习近平总书记一直提倡“厉行节约，反对浪费”的社会风尚，多次强调要制止餐饮浪费行为。假设你是李华，今年你校将举行以“Save food and Eat Healthily”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，号召学生文明用餐，保持节俭。 要点：1. 争做爱粮，节粮的倡导者； 2. 爱粮节粮的具体措施（至少两点）； 3. 健康饮食的重要性； 4. 呼吁大家采取行动。 要求：1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 2. 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3. 词数80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear fellows, I’m here to call on everyone to save food and eat healthily. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 【实战演练四】 近期，你校报社的小记者在校园采访时发现，不少同学午餐依赖泡面、面包和零食。这导致部分同学体重下降、体能变差，甚至在体育测试中感到吃力。基于上述现象，报社现以“Health and Growth”为主题发起征稿，请你撰写短文，投稿分享你的见解。 1.短文需包含征稿要求的三部分内容，并适当拓展信息； 2.词数100词左右； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分 Health and Growth A recent school survey has found that many students make unhealthy choices for lunch. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 6 Food and health Section 3 Writing分层练习 【短语积累】 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【答案】1.a balanced diet 2.treated oneself to 3.fried food 4.lose weight 5.stay away from 6.taste delicious /tasty 7.remind…of 8.traditional food 9.get through 10.dairy products 11.soft drinks 12.sports drinks 13.in general 14.be rich in 二、饮食与健康 开头（Beginning）：点明主旨 介绍饮食与健康的关系，提出核心观点：保持均衡饮食很重要。 Food plays an important role in our health. I think a balanced diet is necessary for everyone. What we eat greatly influences our health. 主体段（Body）：利弊对比 + 给出建议 对比健康食物与垃圾食品；讲不良饮食带来的问题；给出具体饮食建议。 Healthy food such as fruit and vegetables is rich in vitamins. Too much junk food may lead to health problems. We should stay away from soft drinks and fried food. It is important for us to develop healthy eating habits. If we eat too much junk food, we may suffer from stomachache. 结尾（Ending）：倡议号召 总结观点，呼吁大家养成健康饮食习惯，保持健康生活。 Let’s keep a balanced diet and stay healthy. Remember that good food brings us a good life. Small changes in our eating habits can make a big difference. 三、句型升级训练 1. A balanced diet plays an important role in keeping us healthy. I think it is necessary for everyone to keep a balanced diet. 2. We should eat a lot of fruit and vegetables because they are rich in vitamins and minerals. 3.I used to eat a lot of junk food like hamburgers and chips, but now I try to stay away from it. 4.I think that we should drink more water and stay away from sugary drinks. 5. Junk food is unhealthy because it contains too much fat, sugar and salt, which can cause health problems. 6. Eating well not only makes us feel good but also gives us enough energy to get through the day. 【实战演练一】 【答案】范文： Name of restaurant: Happy Kitchen Food: ★★★★★ Service: ★★★★☆ Price: ★★★☆☆ Last Sunday, I ate at Happy Kitchen with my parents. It is a small Chinese restaurant near our home. It serves traditional Sichuan food. The food was absolutely delicious. We ordered mapo tofu, gongbao chicken and vegetable soup. The mapo tofu was spicy but full of flavor, and the gongbao chicken was very tender. The waiters were very polite and friendly, but we had to wait about 20 minutes for our food. The price was reasonable. We spent about 60 yuan per person. In conclusion, Happy Kitchen is a great restaurant. I would recommend it to anyone who likes Sichuan food. However, you should go early to avoid waiting. 【实战演练二】 Healthy eating habits are of great importance to our health. They can help us prevent many illnesses and provide us with plenty of energy for our schoolwork. I’d like to share some suggestions on how we can eat healthily. First of all, I think that we should learn to tell healthy food from unhealthy food. Junk food such as hamburgers, cola and potato chips does harm to our bodies, so we had better stay away from it. I believe that we should eat both meat and fresh vegetables, because they are rich in different kinds of vitamins. Besides, we should eat less sweet food like cakes, for too much sugar may lead to health problems. What’s more, it is necessary that we have breakfast every day and have our meals on time. Breakfast offers us energy to start our busy day. I realize that if we stick to these rules and develop healthy eating habits, we can keep a balanced diet and stay fit. Let’s take action from now on. 【实战演练三】 Dear fellows, I’m here to call on everyone to save food and eat healthily. As President Xi advocates, it is supposed to be a new fashion for all Chinese people to practice strict economy and combat waste. We must bear it in mind that food is a precious resource on our planet and wasting food goes against the basic moral principles. It’s high time that we took action now. When we have dinner out in a restaurant, please remember to order appropriately, and try to eat up. It’s recommended to promote food saving actions on social media. Launch some campaigns to remind customers about the portion size of the dishes. There are still many people in the world who have not solved the problem of food and clothing. It is very important to eat healthily. So, don’t hesitate to join us. Small actions make a big difference. Thank you for listening! 【实战演练四】 Health and Growth A recent school survey has found that many students make unhealthy choices for lunch. They rely on instant noodles, bread and snacks. This unhealthy habit causes big problems. First, some students lose weight in an unhealthy way and their physical strength becomes weaker. Second, they often feel tired in PE tests and even struggle to finish basic sports tasks. To improve this, we should have balanced meals with vegetables, lean meat and rice. Besides, we can prepare homemade lunches to ensure freshness. What’s more, we should join nutrition lectures to learn more about healthy eating. Let’s choose health for better growth! $Unit 6 Food and health Section 3 Writing分层练习 A组 巩固过关 C组 思维拔高 B组 能力进阶 拓展 链接中考 词汇 waiter n.服务员be fond of 喜爱 remind somebody of.....使某人想起 句型 1.The Country House serves traditional English food. 乡村小屋餐厅供应传统英式食物。 2. The fish pie reminded me of my grandma. 这份鱼派让我想起了奶奶 3. We also tried some fish and chips, as well as some bangers and mash, and they were fantastic. 我们还尝了炸鱼薯条，还有香肠土豆泥，味道棒极了 4. I would certainly recommend the Country House for good, traditional English food. 想要品尝地道美味的传统英式食物，我当然推荐乡村小屋餐厅。 5. you should get there early and be prepared to wait for a long time for your food. 你应该早点到那里，做好长时间等餐的准备。 【短语积累】 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.______________________________均衡饮食 2.______________________________犒劳自己；享用（美食） 3.______________________________油炸食品 4.______________________________减肥；减重 5.______________________________远离；避开 6.______________________________尝起来美味可口 7.______________________________使…… 想起…… 8.______________________________传统食物 9.______________________________渡过；通过 10.______________________________乳制品 11.______________________________软饮料 12.______________________________运动饮料 13.______________________________总的来说；大体上 14.______________________________富含…… 【答案】1.a balanced diet 2.treated oneself to 3.fried food 4.lose weight 5.stay away from 6.taste delicious /tasty 7.remind…of 8.traditional food 9.get through 10.dairy products 11.soft drinks 12.sports drinks 13.in general 14.be rich in 如何写一篇餐厅评论 　本单元主要话题是食物与健康 ，相关写作题目可延伸为“我的饮食习惯”“健康饮食建议”“一次难忘的用餐经历”等。命题内容以评论为主 ，要求客观地介绍餐厅的情况 ，并给出自己的评价。写作时应注意评价要客观具体 。能够运用本单元所学到关于饮食和健康的词汇和短语，用宾语从句进行客观评价和推荐。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： • What is the name of the restaurant? Where is it? • What type of food does it serve? • What do you think of the food, service and price? • Would you recommend this restaurant to others? Why? 写作框架 写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语 开 头 星级评分 ， 餐厅名称 、 位置和类型 一般现在时 Last Saturday, I ate at a restaurant. The restaurant serves… Food: ★★★★★ Service: ★★ ★★☆ Price: ★★★☆☆ 中 间 1. 对食物的评价（菜品） 2. 对服务的评价 3. 对价格的评价 一般过去时/一般现在时 The food was. The waiters were. The price was. For example... 结 尾 整体评价 ，是否推荐及理由 一般现在时 In conclusion. I would recommend this restaurant. However, you should... 【句式积累】 一、就餐评论 （1））开头（交代背景） 1.上周五父母带我去了一家本地餐馆，它供应传统粤菜。 My parents took me to a local restaurant last Friday. It serves traditional Guangdong food. （2））中间：评价食物（描述菜品，加入个人感受） 2.我们品尝了他家招牌面条，味道十分出彩。 We tried their famous noodles, and it was wonderful. 3.这份甜甜的甜点让我想起妈妈亲手做的蛋糕。 The sweet dessert reminded me of my mum’s homemade cakes. （3））评价服务（褒贬结合）先写优点，再写不足，搭配具体事例 4.服务员非常有礼貌和友好 ，但服务有点慢。 The waiters were very polite and friendly, but the service was a little slow. 5.价格合理。我们每人花了大约 50 元。 The price was reasonable. We spent about 50 yuan per person. （4））结尾推荐（必考句型）总体推荐 + 给出善意提醒 6.我强烈推荐这家餐厅，因为美味新鲜的海鲜。 I would certainly recommend the restaurant for its great fresh seafood. 二、饮食与健康 开头（Beginning）：点明主旨 介绍饮食与健康的关系，提出核心观点：保持均衡饮食很重要。 1. 食物在我们的健康中扮演重要角色。 Food plays an important role in our health. 2.我认为均衡饮食对每个人都是必要的。 I think a balanced diet is necessary for everyone. 3.我们吃的东西极大地影响我们的健康。 What we eat greatly influences our health. 主体段（Body）：利弊对比 + 给出建议 对比健康食物与垃圾食品；讲不良饮食带来的问题；给出具体饮食建议。 1.水果、蔬菜这类健康食物富含维生素。 Healthy food such as fruit and vegetables is rich in vitamins. 2.过多垃圾食品可能会引发健康问题。 Too much junk food may lead to health problems. 3.我们应该远离汽水和油炸食品。 We should stay away from soft drinks and fried food. 4.养成健康的饮食习惯对我们很重要。 It is important for us to develop healthy eating habits. 5.如果吃太多垃圾食品，我们可能会胃痛。 If we eat too much junk food, we may suffer from stomachache. 结尾（Ending）：倡议号召 总结观点，呼吁大家养成健康饮食习惯，保持健康生活。 1.让我们保持均衡饮食，保持健康。 Let’s keep a balanced diet and stay healthy. 2.记住，健康的食物带给我们美好的生活。 Remember that good food brings us a good life. 3.饮食习惯上的微小改变能带来巨大改变。 Small changes in our eating habits can make a big difference. 三、句型升级训练 1. A balanced diet is important. 均衡饮食很重要。 升级句：A balanced diet plays an important role in keeping us healthy. 如果我们想要拥有强健的身体，均衡饮食是必不可少的。 I think it is necessary for everyone to keep a balanced diet. 我认为每个人都有必要保持均衡饮食。 2. We should eat fruit and vegetables. 我们应该吃水果和蔬菜。 升级句：We should eat a lot of fruit and vegetables because they are rich in vitamins and minerals. 我们应该吃大量的水果和蔬菜，因为它们富含维生素和矿物质。 3. I used to eat junk food. 我过去吃垃圾食品。 升级句：I used to eat a lot of junk food like hamburgers and chips, but now I try to stay away from it. 我过去常常吃很多垃圾食品，比如汉堡和薯条，但现在我尽力远离它。 4. We should drink water. 我们应该喝水。 升级句：I think that we should drink more water and stay away from sugary drinks. 我认为我们应当多喝白开水，远离含糖饮料。 5. Junk food is unhealthy. 垃圾食品不健康。 升级句：Junk food is unhealthy because it contains too much fat, sugar and salt, which can cause health problems. 垃圾食品不健康，因为它含有太多的脂肪、糖和盐，可能导致健康问题。 6. Eating well makes us feel good. 吃得好让我们感觉良好 升级句：Eating well not only makes us feel good but also gives us enough energy to get through the day. 吃得好不仅让我们感觉良好，还给我们足够的精力度过一天。 【实战演练一】 假设你是李明，Teen Voice专栏征集餐厅评论，请你写一篇英文评论，介绍你去过的一家餐厅，投稿给该栏目。要求： 1.内容包含：就餐时间、餐厅基础信息、食物、服务以及你的推荐与建议； 2.时态正确，语句通顺，设置一个吸引眼球的标题； 3.词数：100 左右词； 4.不得出现真实校名、人名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Name of restaurant: Happy Kitchen Food: ★★★★★ Service: ★★★★☆ Price: ★★★☆☆ Last Sunday, I ate at Happy Kitchen with my parents. It is a small Chinese restaurant near our home. It serves traditional Sichuan food. The food was absolutely delicious. We ordered mapo tofu, gongbao chicken and vegetable soup. The mapo tofu was spicy but full of flavor, and the gongbao chicken was very tender. The waiters were very polite and friendly, but we had to wait about 20 minutes for our food. The price was reasonable. We spent about 60 yuan per person. In conclusion, Happy Kitchen is a great restaurant. I would recommend it to anyone who likes Sichuan food. However, you should go early to avoid waiting. 【实战演练二】 健康的饮食习惯对我们的健康非常重要，它能够帮助我们预防很多疾病。请你根据以下提示，以“Eat Healthily”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍如何养成健康的饮食习惯。 要求： 1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，可适当发挥； 2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名)； 4. 词数：不少于100。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Healthy eating habits are of great importance to our health. They can help us prevent many illnesses and provide us with plenty of energy for our schoolwork. I’d like to share some suggestions on how we can eat healthily. First of all, I think that we should learn to tell healthy food from unhealthy food. Junk food such as hamburgers, cola and potato chips does harm to our bodies, so we had better stay away from it. I believe that we should eat both meat and fresh vegetables, because they are rich in different kinds of vitamins. Besides, we should eat less sweet food like cakes, for too much sugar may lead to health problems. What’s more, it is necessary that we have breakfast every day and have our meals on time. Breakfast offers us energy to start our busy day. I realize that if we stick to these rules and develop healthy eating habits, we can keep a balanced diet and stay fit. Let’s take action from now on. 【实战演练三】 习近平总书记一直提倡“厉行节约，反对浪费”的社会风尚，多次强调要制止餐饮浪费行为。假设你是李华，今年你校将举行以“Save food and Eat Healthily”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，号召学生文明用餐，保持节俭。 要点：1. 争做爱粮，节粮的倡导者； 2. 爱粮节粮的具体措施（至少两点）； 3. 健康饮食的重要性； 4. 呼吁大家采取行动。 要求：1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 2. 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3. 词数80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear fellows, I’m here to call on everyone to save food and eat healthily. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 【答案】例文 Dear fellows, I’m here to call on everyone to save food and eat healthily. As President Xi advocates, it is supposed to be a new fashion for all Chinese people to practice strict economy and combat waste. We must bear it in mind that food is a precious resource on our planet and wasting food goes against the basic moral principles. It’s high time that we took action now. When we have dinner out in a restaurant, please remember to order appropriately, and try to eat up. It’s recommended to promote food saving actions on social media. Launch some campaigns to remind customers about the portion size of the dishes. There are still many people in the world who have not solved the problem of food and clothing. It is very important to eat healthily. So, don’t hesitate to join us. Small actions make a big difference. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容号召学生文明用餐、保持节俭，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“节约粮食，健康饮食”的主题； 第二步，具体介绍应该如何做； 第三步，呼吁大家采取行动。 [亮点词汇] ①be supposed to be应该是 ②take action采取行动 ③hesitate to do犹豫做某事 ④make a big difference产生重大影响 [高分句型] ①We must bear it in mind that food is a precious resource on our planet and wasting food goes against the basic moral principles.（宾语从句） ②There are still many people in the world who have not solved the problem of food and clothing.（定语从句） 【实战演练四】 近期，你校报社的小记者在校园采访时发现，不少同学午餐依赖泡面、面包和零食。这导致部分同学体重下降、体能变差，甚至在体育测试中感到吃力。基于上述现象，报社现以“Health and Growth”为主题发起征稿，请你撰写短文，投稿分享你的见解。 1.短文需包含征稿要求的三部分内容，并适当拓展信息； 2.词数100词左右； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分 Health and Growth A recent school survey has found that many students make unhealthy choices for lunch. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version Health and Growth A recent school survey has found that many students make unhealthy choices for lunch. They rely on instant noodles, bread and snacks. This unhealthy habit causes big problems. First, some students lose weight in an unhealthy way and their physical strength becomes weaker. Second, they often feel tired in PE tests and even struggle to finish basic sports tasks. To improve this, we should have balanced meals with vegetables, lean meat and rice. Besides, we can prepare homemade lunches to ensure freshness. What’s more, we should join nutrition lectures to learn more about healthy eating. Let’s choose health for better growth! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明校园现象：用学校调查结果引出许多学生午餐依赖泡面、面包和零食的不健康选择； 第二步，阐述不良影响：说明该习惯导致学生不健康减重、体能下降，以及体育测试难以完成基础任务的问题； 第三步，提出解决办法：从均衡饮食、自备午餐、参加营养讲座三方面给出建议，呼吁重视健康。 [亮点词汇] ①unhealthy choices不健康的选择 ②physical strength体能 ③balanced meals均衡饮食 ④nutrition lectures营养讲座 [高分句型] ①First, some students lose weight in an unhealthy way and their physical strength becomes weaker.（and并列句） ②To improve this, we should have balanced meals with vegetables, lean meat and rice.（不定式作目的状语） $