2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习 勇攀心峰 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was fourteen, my brother Barney and I set out to climb The Tooth with our uncle, Tom Campbell. Tom was an experienced mountaineer, who taught us the basics on climbing. That morning, we hiked through an ancient forest, heading northwestwards. Leaping from one rock to the next, we gradually arrived at the destination. Directly ahead was a wall of rock. Tom jumped over a gap to the rock face, climbed up a while, and found a good position where he could use holds to support the next climber. He tied the rope firmly between himself and Barney, yelling, “Climb!” Barney looked to his left with a slight hesitation, then he moved slowly and cautiously forward. I watched his moves carefully, so I could use the same holds he used. But I was impatient, wondering what was taking him so long. Finally, it was my turn. I stepped up to the gap edge, began to move to the cliff. However, when I glanced down, I was absolutely terrified. The cliff plunged (猛跌) straight down for what looked like a thousand feet. Then my legs began to shake. “Come on.” They encouraged. Inspired, I willed myself across the gap, struggling to resist the pull of the abyss (深渊) below. When I finally reached them, my mouth was as dry as a desert. Enjoying a good view at the top of the mountain, I felt proud that I had overcome my fear. Hard work will pay off eventually. Those who have reached the peak will find strength that exists as long as life lasts. 续写要求 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已给出。 We sat on the rock, staring at the endless scenery spreading out below us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ On our way back home, Uncle Tom’s words echoed in my mind. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　十四岁的 “我”、哥哥 Barney 和登山经验丰富的叔叔 Tom 一起攀登 The Tooth 山 —— _________________ —— 一行人穿过古老森林，来到岩壁脚下，叔叔先行上去固定绳索，准备保护后面的人 —— _________________ —— 哥哥小心翼翼攀爬，“我” 在一旁观察，轮到自己时，低头看见万丈深渊，吓得双腿发抖 —— _________________ —— 在鼓励下，“我” 战胜恐惧，艰难跨过缺口，成功和家人汇合 —— _________________ —— 登顶欣赏壮丽景色，“我” 为战胜内心恐惧而自豪，感悟努力终有回报 —— _________________ ——（续写）坐在岩石上俯瞰大地，叔叔分享登山的人生感悟 ——（续写）回家路上，叔叔的话不断回响，这次登山经历长久激励 “我” 4. 细节问答 What was Uncle Tom? ：___________________________________ Why did the author feel terrified when climbing?：_________________________________ How did the author make it to join them?：________________________________________________ What feeling did the author have after reaching the top?：__________________________________________ What is the core theme of the story?：_____________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　我、哥哥与经验丰富的叔叔相约登山→_________________ →穿越森林抵达岩壁，叔叔架设绳索保护攀爬→_________________ →哥哥谨慎攀登，轮到我时，深渊让我心生巨大恐惧→_________________ →在家人鼓励下，咬牙坚持跨越危险缺口，成功汇合→_________________ →登顶观景，内心自豪，感悟努力与坚持的意义→_________________ →（续写）山顶静坐欣赏风光，叔叔讲述勇气的真谛→（续写）返程路上回味感悟，登山的收获将伴随一生 6．情感线 　　Author: excited and expectant→→impatient→→scared and shaky→→proud and inspired→；Barney: cautious and careful→；Uncle Tom: calm and experienced→→wise and encouraging 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：_____________________________________________________________________ 英文：_____________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　分词作状语、定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句、非谓语结构 _____________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　战胜恐惧、勇气、坚持、成长感悟、直面挑战类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: We sat on the rock, staring at the endless scenery spreading out below us. 　　 衔接句 1——What did they see? What did Uncle Tom say? What did the author think about? ____________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: On our way back home, Uncle Tom’s words echoed in my mind. 　　 衔接句 2——What understanding did the author gain? What influence would this experience bring? ____________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：我们坐在岩石上，凝视着脚下铺展开来的无边景色。 　　→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 　　第二段：在回家的路上，汤姆叔叔的话在我脑海中回响。 　　→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 We sat on the rock, staring at the endless scenery spreading out below us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ On our way back home, Uncle Tom’s words echoed in my mind. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【标准答案】 一、文本分析 1．角色 叙述者（我）：14 岁少年，登山时害怕深渊，但鼓起勇气战胜恐惧，在经历中收获成长； Barney：哥哥，攀爬时谨慎小心； Uncle Tom：经验丰富的登山者，沉稳睿智，善于引导孩子，教会孩子直面恐惧。 2．视角 　　第一人称 3．时空线 　　十四岁的 “我”、哥哥 Barney 和登山经验丰富的叔叔 Tom 一起攀登 The Tooth 山 ——出发登山，叔叔传授登山基础 —— 一行人穿过古老森林，来到岩壁脚下，叔叔先行上去固定绳索，准备保护后面的人 ——搭建保护，准备依次攀岩 —— 哥哥小心翼翼攀爬，“我” 在一旁观察，轮到自己时，低头看见万丈深渊，吓得双腿发抖 ——直面悬崖，巨大恐惧袭来 —— 在鼓励下，“我” 战胜恐惧，艰难跨过缺口，成功和家人汇合 ——咬牙坚持，成功跨越难关 —— 登顶欣赏壮丽景色，“我” 为战胜内心恐惧而自豪，感悟努力终有回报 ——登顶观景，心生自豪 ——（续写）坐在岩石上俯瞰大地，叔叔分享登山的人生感悟 ——山顶对话，领悟勇气内涵 ——（续写）回家路上，叔叔的话不断回响，这次登山经历长久激励 “我”——感悟沉淀，收获长久力量 4. 细节问答 What was Uncle Tom? ：He was an experienced mountaineer. Why did the author feel terrified when climbing?：Because when he glanced down, he saw the steep cliff dropping thousands of feet, which scared him. How did the author make it to join them?：Encouraged by his family, he forced himself to cross the gap and fought against the fear of the abyss. What feeling did the author have after reaching the top?：He felt proud because he had overcome his inner fear. What is the core theme of the story?：True success lies in overcoming inner fear, and courage gained from challenges will accompany us through life. 5．情节线 　　我、哥哥与经验丰富的叔叔相约登山→开启登山之旅，学习基础登山技能 →穿越森林抵达岩壁，叔叔架设绳索保护攀爬→做好安全防护，依次攀岩 →哥哥谨慎攀登，轮到我时，深渊让我心生巨大恐惧→高空之下，恐惧席卷全身 →在家人鼓励下，咬牙坚持跨越危险缺口，成功汇合→战胜恐惧，完成艰难攀爬 →登顶观景，内心自豪，感悟努力与坚持的意义→体会登顶喜悦，初步感悟道理 →（续写）山顶静坐欣赏风光，叔叔讲述勇气的真谛→聆听教诲，深化理解 →（续写）返程路上回味感悟，登山的收获将伴随一生→经历沉淀，获得长久成长力量 6．情感线 　　Author: excited and expectant→impatient→impatient→frightened→scared and shaky→determined→proud and inspired→thoughtful；Barney: cautious and careful→relieved；Uncle Tom: calm and experienced→supportive→wise and encouraging 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：十四岁的 “我” 和哥哥跟随经验丰富的叔叔登山，攀岩途中被万丈深渊吓到，在家人鼓励下战胜恐惧成功登顶。山顶上叔叔的一番话让 “我” 懂得，真正的挑战是战胜内心的恐惧，这份勇气将终身受益。 　　英文：When climbing the mountain with his brother and uncle, the narrator was frightened by the deep cliff. With encouragement, he defeated his fear and reached the top. From this experience, he learned that courage to overcome inner fear is the most valuable treasure. 8. 句式 分词作状语：Staring at the amazing view, I thought about my struggle on the cliff. 定语从句：The fear that I experienced on the cliff taught me a valuable lesson. 　　宾语从句：Uncle Tom told us that courage meant moving forward even when you felt afraid. 　　 让步状语从句：Even if you feel scared, you can still take one small step forward. 　　非谓语结构：Inspired by Uncle’s words, I gained confidence to face future challenges. 9. 本文主题 　　战胜恐惧、勇气、坚持、成长感悟、直面挑战类：真正的攀登，是战胜内心的恐惧。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: We sat on the rock, staring at the endless scenery spreading out below us. 衔接句 1：A soft wind swept over us. Uncle Tom told us that mountain climbing was not about reaching the peak, but about beating our own fear. I thought of my trembling legs and the terrifying abyss, realizing I had conquered myself. Paragraph 2: On our way back home, Uncle Tom’s words echoed in my mind. 衔接句 2：I understood that fear was normal, but courage allowed us to keep moving forward. Whenever I meet difficulties later, I will remember this climb. The courage I gained that day became my lifelong treasure. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我们坐在岩石上，凝视着脚下铺展开来的无边景色。 　　 →①山间清风拂面，一家人静静欣赏壮丽风景；→②叔叔借登山告诉我们，真正的对手是内心的恐惧；→③我回想刚才惊险的攀爬，意识到自己战胜了自我。 第二段：在回家的路上，汤姆叔叔的话在我脑海中回响。 　　 →①我领悟恐惧本是人之常情，但勇气能推动我们前行；→②这次登山的感悟深深烙印在心底；→③此后遇到困难，这段经历会不断给予我力量。 四、标准续写范文（150 词左右） We sat on the rock, staring at the endless scenery spreading out below us. Wind gently brushed our faces as we admired the breathtaking view. Uncle Tom told us that mountain climbing was not merely about reaching the top, but about bravely overcoming inner fear. He explained that the real enemy was not the steep cliff, but the worry in our hearts. Barney nodded in agreement. I kept silent, reflecting on my trembling legs and the moment I fought against the frightening abyss. The tough climb had taught me more than any textbook. On our way back home, Uncle Tom’s words echoed in my mind. I realized the courage I gained on the mountain would guide me through future difficulties. Whenever I meet challenges that seem impossible, I will recall the cliff and how I forced myself to move forward step by step. The glorious view on the mountain top was the reward for my bravery. This climbing experience planted the seed of courage deep in my heart, reminding me never to give up when facing fear. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $