专题27 英语作文叙议结合类（专项训练）（上海专用）2027年高考英语一轮复习讲练测

专题27 英语作文叙议结合类 目 录 模拟·基础演练 1 重难·创新演练 7 真题·实战演练 13 模拟·基础演练 考向01 现象评论类 【来源】上海市浦东新区上海市实验学校2025-2026学年高三上学期9月摸底考英语试卷 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 博物馆作为提升公众素养、传播和发展人类知识的重要场所，一直深受大众喜爱。然而，越来越多的博物馆涉及盈利性商业活动，这让人们担心博物馆可能失去原有的教育和文化价值。另一方面，有人认为适度商业化是大势所趋，有助于博物馆的发展。 请你就博物馆商业化趋势表达自己的观点，内容需包括： 1.你的态度    2.你的理由 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 考向02 问题解决类 【来源】上海市七宝中学2025-2026学年高三下学期期中测试英语试卷 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学高三学生李明，看到学校英文报上的 TROUBLESHOOTER (“排忧解难”) 专栏 Lynn 发的一封信，你通过该英文报回复 Lynn，给她提供建议，帮助她改变父母的想法。你的信必须包括： 1.你的建议； 2.你的理由。 Dear TROUBLESHOOTER, I’m a high school student who has a passion for photography. I’ve been saving up to buy my dream camera, but my parents insist that it’s a waste of time and money, and that I should focus entirely on my studies. They don’t understand why photography matters to me. How can I change their mind? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lynn 考向03 经历感悟类 【来源】上海市上海交大附中嘉定分校2025-2026学年高三上学期11月期中英语试题） 近来，越来越多的中学生参加志愿者活动，请你就此内容写一篇文章，你的文章必须包括：具体描述你参加过的一次志愿者活动；简要谈谈你的感想。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 考向04 名言谚语解读类 【来源】上海市普陀区2025-2026学年学年第二学期高三命题指导研诊英语样卷 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校英语报“成长与选择”专栏举办征文活动，请学生谈谈对“Live more; fear less.”这句话的理解。写一篇征文稿，在文中你必须： 1)简述你对这句话的理解； 2)结合一个具体事例加以说明； 注：文中不得出现考生姓名、学校等真实个人信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 重难·创新演练 Passage 1 【来源】上海市晋元高级中学2025-2026学年高三上学期10月反馈练习英语试卷 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，负责学校定向越野社的招新。最近有同学在班级群里表示担心：有人怕迷路，有人觉得太累，有人说自己没时间参加。请你写一篇英语文章，准备发在学校公众号上，在你的发文中，你必须： ● 回应同学的顾虑; ● 介绍加入该社团的益处; ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 【来源】上海市宜川中学2025-2026学年第二学期阶段练高三英语 假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。学校社团招新季即将到来，你想创办一个全新的社团，需要向学生会提交一份申请说明，内容须包括： (1)简要介绍你想创办的社团; (2)你想创办该社团的理由。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 【来源】上海市青浦区2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题 网络时代，人们常常不辨别真假就在社交媒体上疯狂点赞 (give the thumbs-up) 或转发 (forward)，这种行为有实际意义吗?请就此现象谈谈你的看法，并结合生活中的实例加以说明。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 名校真题·实战演练 01 【来源】上海市七宝中学2025-2026学年高三下学期5月练习英语试题 Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 随着 AI 作业助手 (AI homework assistants) 的普及，越来越多中学生开始用它们完成作业、解答难题。有人认为这类工具能帮学生高效解决学习难点，节省时间；也有人担心过度依赖会削弱学生的独立思考能力和解题能力。假设你是高中生李华，在校园论坛上看到相关讨论，决定回帖表达你的看法。回帖内容应包括： 1.你对中学生使用 AI 作业助手的态度； 2.你的理由（至少两点）。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 02 【来源】上海市晋元高级中学联考2025-2026学年高三上学期期中英语试题 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明。你校英语社正在征集以“未来校园”为主题的短文，鼓励同学们畅想未来十年校园生活的变化。写一篇短文投稿，内容须包括： （1）简要描述1-2个未来校园可能出现的新变化（如教学方式、校园环境、学习生活等） （2）说明这些变化将带来怎样的影响。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 03 【来源】2025 年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（上海卷） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校英语报举办征文活动，请学生谈谈对“Don’t be afraid to get your feet wet if you want to learn how to swim.”这句话的理解。写一篇征文稿，在文中你必须： 1) 简述你对这句话的理解; 2) 结合一个具体事例加以说明。 注：文中不得出现考生姓名、学校等真实个人信息。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 20 / 20网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题27 英语作文叙议结合类 目 录 模拟·基础演练 1 重难·创新演练 7 真题·实战演练 13 模拟·基础演练 考向01 现象评论类 【来源】上海市浦东新区上海市实验学校2025-2026学年高三上学期9月摸底考英语试卷 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 博物馆作为提升公众素养、传播和发展人类知识的重要场所，一直深受大众喜爱。然而，越来越多的博物馆涉及盈利性商业活动，这让人们担心博物馆可能失去原有的教育和文化价值。另一方面，有人认为适度商业化是大势所趋，有助于博物馆的发展。 请你就博物馆商业化趋势表达自己的观点，内容需包括： 1.你的态度    2.你的理由 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Museum Commercialization: A Balanced View I hold the view that moderate commercialization of museums is acceptable and even beneficial, provided it is well-controlled and serves the core mission of museums. Firstly, proper commercial activities can ease museums’ financial burdens. Most public museums rely on government funding, which is often limited. Income from reasonable businesses like cultural product sales or themed exhibitions can fund exhibition updates, cultural relic protection and free admission for special groups, ensuring museums’ sustainable development. Secondly, commercialization can attract more visitors. Creative cultural and creative products and interesting interactive activities make museums more approachable, especially for young people, thus better spreading cultural and educational values. The key is to keep commercialization in check. As long as commercial activities do not overshadow the educational function and cultural connotation, museums can achieve a win-win between development and value preservation. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。博物馆作为提升公众素养、传播和发展人类知识的重要场所，一直深受大众喜爱。然而，越来越多的博物馆涉及盈利性商业活动，这让人们担心博物馆可能失去原有的教育和文化价值。另一方面，有人认为适度商业化是大势所趋，有助于博物馆的发展。要求考生就博物馆商业化趋势表达自己的观点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 减轻：ease→ reduce 确保：ensure→ guarantee 掩盖：overshadow→ cover up 依赖：rely on→ depend on 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Income from reasonable businesses like cultural product sales or themed exhibitions can fund exhibition updates, cultural relic protection and free admission for special groups, ensuring museums’ sustainable development. 拓展句：Income from reasonable businesses, which include cultural product sales and themed exhibitions, can fund exhibition updates, cultural relic protection and free admission for special groups, which in turn ensures museums’ sustainable development. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I hold the view that moderate commercialization of museums is acceptable and even beneficial, provided it is well-controlled and serves the core mission of museums.（运用了that引导的同位语从句） 【高分句型2】As long as commercial activities do not overshadow the educational function and cultural connotation, museums can achieve a win-win between development and value preservation.（运用了 As long as引导的条件状语从句） 考向02 问题解决类 【来源】上海市七宝中学2025-2026学年高三下学期期中测试英语试卷 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学高三学生李明，看到学校英文报上的 TROUBLESHOOTER (“排忧解难”) 专栏 Lynn 发的一封信，你通过该英文报回复 Lynn，给她提供建议，帮助她改变父母的想法。你的信必须包括： 1.你的建议； 2.你的理由。 Dear TROUBLESHOOTER, I’m a high school student who has a passion for photography. I’ve been saving up to buy my dream camera, but my parents insist that it’s a waste of time and money, and that I should focus entirely on my studies. They don’t understand why photography matters to me. How can I change their mind? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lynn 【答案】Dear Lynn,     I’m Li Ming, a Senior Three student from Mingqi High School. I’m writing to offer you some practical advice to help you persuade your parents.     First, you’d better have a calm and sincere talk with your parents. You can explain that photography is not a waste of time. It can broaden your horizons, cultivate your patience and enrich your spare time. Besides, promise them that you will arrange your time properly and never let your hobby affect your schoolwork. Good academic performance is the best way to remove their worries.     What’s more, you can share your photographic works with them, letting them feel your true love for this hobby.     I believe that your parents will finally understand and support you. Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以明启中学高三学生李明的身份，在学校英文报专栏回信给 Lynn，针对她想买相机却遭到父母反对的问题给出合理建议并说明理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 说服：persuade → convince 开阔眼界：broaden one’s horizons → expand one’s outlook 培养：cultivate → foster 消除：remove → get rid of 2. 句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：You can explain that photography is not a waste of time. 拓展句：It is advisable for you to explain that photography is not a waste of time. 【点睛】【高分句型1】You can explain that photography is not a waste of time. (运用that引导宾语从句) 【高分句型2】What’s more, you can share your photographic works with them, letting them feel your true love for this hobby. (运用现在分词作结果状语) 考向03 经历感悟类 【来源】上海市上海交大附中嘉定分校2025-2026学年高三上学期11月期中英语试题） 近来，越来越多的中学生参加志愿者活动，请你就此内容写一篇文章，你的文章必须包括：具体描述你参加过的一次志愿者活动；简要谈谈你的感想。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： Volunteering: A Rewarding Experience As a high school student, I recently participated in a volunteer activity that left a profound impact on me. The event was a community clean-up day, where we gathered to pick up litter and beautify our local park. Armed with gloves and trash bags, we worked tirelessly throughout the day, collecting waste and planting new trees. This experience was incredibly rewarding. Not only did I get to contribute to the betterment of my community, but I also learned the importance of teamwork and environmental management. Seeing the park transform before our eyes was incredibly satisfying. It was a humbling reminder of how even small actions can make a significant difference. Volunteering has taught me that every effort counts, and I am eager to engage in more such activities in the future. In conclusion, volunteering has been a transformative experience, fostering a sense of responsibility and personal growth. I am eager to continue making a difference through such meaningful activities. 【详解】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生具体描述参加过的一次志愿者活动，简要谈谈自己的感想。 1.词汇积累 影响：impact→effect 看见：see→catch sight of 参与：engage in→take part in 总之：in conclusion→in short 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Seeing the park transform before our eyes was incredibly satisfying. 拓展句：It was incredibly satisfying for us to see the park transform before our eyes. [高分句型1] Not only did I get to contribute to the betterment of my community, but I also learned the importance of teamwork and environmental management. (运用了not only…but also句型及部分倒装句) [高分句型2] The event was a community clean-up day, where we gathered to pick up litter and beautify our local park. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句) 考向04 名言谚语解读类 【来源】上海市普陀区2025-2026学年学年第二学期高三命题指导研诊英语样卷 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校英语报“成长与选择”专栏举办征文活动，请学生谈谈对“Live more; fear less.”这句话的理解。写一篇征文稿，在文中你必须： 1)简述你对这句话的理解； 2)结合一个具体事例加以说明； 注：文中不得出现考生姓名、学校等真实个人信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Live More; Fear Less The saying “Live more; fear less” conveys a simple but powerful message: we should embrace life bravely instead of being controlled by fear, so as to experience more and grow stronger.   I once dared not speak English in public, worried about being laughed at for my pronunciation. This fear stopped me from joining English corners and communicating freely. Encouraged by my teacher, I decided to face my fear. I practiced pronunciation every morning and volunteered to speak in class. Though I made mistakes at first, I kept going. Gradually, I became confident and even won an English speech contest.   This experience taught me that fear is the biggest barrier to a colorful life. Only by letting go of fear can we explore more possibilities and truly live a meaningful life. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生围绕“Live more; fear less.”这句话，简述理解并结合具体事例说明。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 勇敢地：bravely → courageously 经历：experience → undergo 担忧的：worried → anxious 障碍：barrier → obstacle 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The saying “Live more; fear less” conveys a simple but powerful message: we should embrace life bravely instead of being controlled by fear, so as to experience more and grow stronger. 拓展句：The saying “Live more; fear less” conveys a simple but powerful message: we should embrace life bravely instead of being controlled by fear so that we can experience more and grow stronger. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Though I made mistakes at first, I kept going. (运用了though引导的让步状语从句) 【高分句型2】This experience taught me that fear is the biggest barrier to a colorful life. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 重难·创新演练 Passage 1 【来源】上海市晋元高级中学2025-2026学年高三上学期10月反馈练习英语试卷 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，负责学校定向越野社的招新。最近有同学在班级群里表示担心：有人怕迷路，有人觉得太累，有人说自己没时间参加。请你写一篇英语文章，准备发在学校公众号上，在你的发文中，你必须： ● 回应同学的顾虑; ● 介绍加入该社团的益处; ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear fellow students, I’m Li Hua from Senior 3, overseeing the Orienteering Club’s new-member drive. I’ve heard your concerns: getting lost, fatigue, and time constraints. Rest assured, getting lost is a myth. Our expert coaches will equip you with map - reading and compass - using skills. Tired? It’s a gentle yet effective workout, and we'll progress at your pace. Time? We schedule activities on weekends or after school, fitting neatly into your routine.    The benefits are numerous. You’ll forge a deep connection with nature, melting away study stress. It sharpens your problem-solving abilities and offers a chance to bond with peers who love adventure. So, take the leap and join our club. Let’s embark on thrilling journeys together! Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本文是一篇应用文，作者李华作为明启中学高三学生且负责定向越野社招新，针对同学们怕迷路、觉得累和没时间的顾虑进行回应，并介绍加入社团的益处，以鼓励同学们加入定向越野社。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 负责：oversee → be in charge of 消除顾虑：rest assured → set one’s mind at ease 进步：progress→advance 增进关系：bond with → enhance the relationship with 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Tired? It’s a gentle yet effective workout, and we'll progress at your pace. 拓展句：If you are worried about being tired, you should know that it’s a gentle yet effective workout, and we'll progress at your pace. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I'm Li Hua from Senior 3, overseeing the Orienteering Club’s new-member drive.（运用现在分词短语“overseeing the Orienteering Club's new - member drive”作伴随状语） 【高分句型2】You’ll forge a deep connection with nature, melting away study stress.（现在分词短语“melting away study stress”作伴随状语） Passage 2 【来源】上海市宜川中学2025-2026学年第二学期阶段练高三英语 假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。学校社团招新季即将到来，你想创办一个全新的社团，需要向学生会提交一份申请说明，内容须包括： (1)简要介绍你想创办的社团; (2)你想创办该社团的理由。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Student Union,           I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 student from Mingqi High School. Knowing that the club recruitment season is drawing near, I’m writing to apply for setting up a completely new poetry communication club.           Focusing on sharing poems and exchanging feelings, this club is open to all poetry lovers who are willing to discover the beauty of words. We plan to hold regular reading activities and creative writing sessions. There, members can appreciate classic poems and create their own works freely.          The reason why I want to launch this club is that poetry can connect different people and ease our study pressure. What matters most is that reading and writing poems can enrich our inner world. It is the warmth hidden in poems that makes it possible for us to make like‑minded friends and enjoy a more colorful school life.           I sincerely hope that my application will be approved.                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours sincerely,                                  Li Hua    【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份，向学生会提交创办诗歌交流社团的申请，介绍社团基本情况并说明创办理由。   【详解】1.词汇积累 临近：draw near → approach 创办：set up → establish​ 全新的：completely new → brand‑new 缓解压力：ease pressure → relieve stress 2.句式拓展    合并简单句 原句：We plan to hold regular reading activities and creative writing sessions. There, members can appreciate classic poems and create their own works freely.    拓展句：We plan to hold regular reading activities and creative writing sessions, where members can appreciate classic poems and create their own works freely.    【点睛】【高分句型1】Focusing on sharing poems and exchanging feelings, this club is open to all poetry lovers who are willing to discover the beauty of words. (运用了现在分词作状语和who引导的定语从句)    【高分句型2】What matters most is that reading and writing poems can enrich our inner world. (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)   Passage 3 【来源】上海市青浦区2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题 网络时代，人们常常不辨别真假就在社交媒体上疯狂点赞 (give the thumbs-up) 或转发 (forward)，这种行为有实际意义吗?请就此现象谈谈你的看法，并结合生活中的实例加以说明。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Nowadays, whether they are true or false, more and more people are used to continuously giving the thumbs-up or forwarding some messages from the social media whenever picking up their phones. In fact, it is not wise to do it. First of all, unconscious of harm to the society, many people unconsciously become the tool of spreading a great deal of unhealthy news. For example, some violent, anti-social, and rumor news are hidden and forwarded, cheating others, threatening people around them after they forward messages randomly without inspecting their contents. Besides, by giving the thumbs-up carelessly, people are considered to be the ones who support a certain idea. As a matter of fact, they don’t know at all what is said in the messages. Their habits betray them. The next day, they find that their friends and classmates keep them at a distance. They say to themselves “What happened? My God”. So people should take an objective attitude towards so much information. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。文章主要讨论了网络时代人们不辨别真假就在社交媒体上疯狂点赞或转发的行为，指出这种行为不明智并给出理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 无意识的：unconscious → unaware 伤害：harm → damage 检查：inspect → examine 大量的：a great deal of → a large amount of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：First of all, unconscious of harm to the society, many people unconsciously become the tool of spreading a great deal of unhealthy news. 拓展句：First of all, many people, who are unconscious of the harm to the society, unconsciously become the tool of spreading a great deal of unhealthy news. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, by giving the thumbs-up carelessly, people are considered to be the ones who support a certain idea.（运用了who引导的限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】As a matter of fact, they don’t know at all what is said in the messages.（运用了what引导的宾语从句） 名校真题·实战演练 01 【来源】上海市七宝中学2025-2026学年高三下学期5月练习英语试题 Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 随着 AI 作业助手 (AI homework assistants) 的普及，越来越多中学生开始用它们完成作业、解答难题。有人认为这类工具能帮学生高效解决学习难点，节省时间；也有人担心过度依赖会削弱学生的独立思考能力和解题能力。假设你是高中生李华，在校园论坛上看到相关讨论，决定回帖表达你的看法。回帖内容应包括： 1.你对中学生使用 AI 作业助手的态度； 2.你的理由（至少两点）。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    Nowadays, AI homework assistants are widely used among middle school students, causing heated debates online. As Li Hua, I hold the view that we should use such AI tools wisely rather than rely on them blindly. For one thing, AI assistants can effectively help us tackle difficult problems and clear up learning confusion. They offer detailed explanations, saving us much time spent thinking alone. For another, excessive dependence will do great harm to us. If we copy answers directly, we will gradually lose the ability of independent thinking and problem-solving, which is essential for our long-term study. In short, AI is just a useful helper. We should think independently first and turn to it only when necessary. Only in this way can we make progress in our studies. 【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生对于随着 AI 作业助手 (AI homework assistants) 的普及，越来越多中学生开始用它们完成作业、解答难题。有人认为这类工具能帮学生高效解决学习难点，节省时间；也有人担心过度依赖会削弱学生的独立思考能力和解题能力这一情况，表达你的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激烈的：heated → intense 明智地：wisely → advisably 解决：tackle → solve 至关重要的：essential → crucial 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For one thing, AI assistants can effectively help us tackle difficult problems and clear up learning confusion. 拓展句：For one thing, AI assistants can operate efficiently so that they can help us tackle difficult problems and clear up learning confusion. 【点睛】【高分句型1】If we copy answers directly, we will gradually lose the ability of independent thinking and problem-solving, which is essential for our long-term study.（运用了If引导的条件状语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Nowadays, AI homework assistants are widely used among middle school students, causing heated debates online.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语） 02 【来源】上海市晋元高级中学联考2025-2026学年高三上学期期中英语试题 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明。你校英语社正在征集以“未来校园”为主题的短文，鼓励同学们畅想未来十年校园生活的变化。写一篇短文投稿，内容须包括： （1）简要描述1-2个未来校园可能出现的新变化（如教学方式、校园环境、学习生活等） （2）说明这些变化将带来怎样的影响。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                      The Campus Life in Ten Years When it comes to what our campus will be like in ten years, a lot of creative ideas crowd into my mind, and I’m glad to share my imagination with you. First of all, mixed‑reality classes will be widely applied at school. Instead of merely reading textbooks, students can take immersive courses, “visiting” historical sites or observing biological specimens virtually. Besides, the campus will turn into a greener smart zone. Automatic systems will help save energy and create a more comfortable study environment. These changes will greatly benefit students. Immersive learning can arouse our interest and improve learning efficiency. Meanwhile, the eco‑friendly campus helps us form a strong awareness of environmental protection. Nevertheless, we should still value independent thinking and face‑to‑face communication no matter how advanced technology becomes. 【导语】要求考生以李明的名义写一篇短文投稿，畅想10年后的校园生活变化，描述一至两处校园新变化并阐述带来的影响。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 广泛应用：be widely applied → come into wide use 激发兴趣：arouse one’s interest → stimulate one’s curiosity 提高：improve→ boost 激发：arouse→ stimulate 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Instead of merely reading textbooks, students can take immersive courses, “visiting” historical sites or observing biological specimens virtually. 拓展句：Instead of just learning knowledge from textbooks, students are able to attend immersive courses where they can virtually visit historical sites and observe biological specimens. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】Instead of merely reading textbooks, students can take immersive courses, “visiting” historical sites or observing biological specimens virtually.（运用了动名词作宾语以及现在分词作伴随状语） 【高分句型 2】Nevertheless, we should still value independent thinking and face‑to‑face communication no matter how advanced technology becomes.（运用了no matter how引导让步状语从句） 03 【来源】2025 年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（上海卷） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校英语报举办征文活动，请学生谈谈对“Don’t be afraid to get your feet wet if you want to learn how to swim.”这句话的理解。写一篇征文稿，在文中你必须： 1) 简述你对这句话的理解; 2) 结合一个具体事例加以说明。 注：文中不得出现考生姓名、学校等真实个人信息。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                         Embrace the First Step      The saying “Don’t be afraid to get your feet wet if you want to learn how to swim” powerfully reminds us that mastering any skill requires the courage to start and face initial challenges head-on. It means hesitation and fear of minor setbacks will prevent us from ever truly learning.      My own experience learning to ride a bike perfectly illustrates this. For weeks, I just watched my friends ride, too scared to even sit on the bike seat, fearing I would fall. My feet stayed firmly “dry” on the ground, and I made zero progress. Finally, gathering my courage, I wobbled onto the bike. Yes, I crashed a few times and got my hands and knees dirty (my version of “wet feet”). But with each attempt, my balance improved. Within days, I was riding confidently. If I hadn’t overcome that initial fear and gotten “wet,” I would still be standing on the sidelines now.      Therefore, this wisdom applies to all skills. We must be brave enough to take the first, often imperfect, step to truly learn and grow. 【导语】本文是一篇投稿征文。要求考生就学校英语报正在举办的征文活动写一篇征文稿，谈谈对“Don’t be afraid to get your feet wet if you want to learn how to swim.”这句话的理解，并结合一个具体事例加以说明。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 掌握：master→have a command of 挫折、失败：setback→frustration 害怕的、恐惧的：scared→frightened 阐明：illustrate→clarify 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句：My own experience learning to ride a bike perfectly illustrates this. 拓展句：My own experience that I learned to ride a bike perfectly illustrates this. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 It means hesitation and fear of minor setbacks will prevent us from ever truly learning. (运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句。) 【高分句型2】If I hadn’t overcome that initial fear and gotten “wet,” I would still be standing on the sidelines now. (运用了以连词if引导的条件状语从句和虚拟语气。) 20 / 20网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $