2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习----The Devoted Lifeguard 导学案

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 You might have thought that the world’s longest-serving lifeguard would be found on a sunny beach in California or Australia. But on a rainy British spring day, the Guinness World Records people held a ceremony in Bournemouth to award local lifeguard Chris Lewis the title. Lewis, 74, took up this job when he was 16, meaning he has been coming to the aid of users of the sandy beaches here for 58 years. “It’s the best occupation in the world,” he said. “You’re working on the beach, which you have a passion for, and you’re helping people. What could be better?” Lewis said friends used to rib (逗弄) him that most of his colleagues in Royal National Lifeboat Institution (RNLI) were half his age. But he is still determined. The swimming fitness tests are still reasonably easy for Lewis. All winter he insisted on doing 3,000 metres of sea swimming each month with no wetsuit (潜水服). Lewis’s career began in 1965 when a police officer spotted his potential. He became part of the RNLI lifeguard service in 2001 when the charity began providing beach patrols for local authorities. Lewis laughed when asked if he had seen many changes. The RNLI’s equipment in 2024 includes jetskis (水上摩托艇), rescue boats and quad bikes (四轮摩托). “When I started, little equipment was available.” Lewis had ever suffered anxiety and depression. Nevertheless, he believes his training and the time spent on the beach relieved the negative emotions. He now helps to train young lifeguards. Over the years, he has performed hundreds of rescues. He says giving advice that prevents people getting into trouble is preferable to carrying out exciting rescues. “I would love to go through the whole of summer without having to rescue anybody.” 续写要求 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已给出。 　　One hot summer afternoon, a group of teenagers ignored the warning signs and went far into the sea. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　After this rescue, Chris continued to share safety tips with visitors on the beach.　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　74岁的Chris Lewis荣获吉尼斯最长任职救生员纪录，坚守岗位58年—— _________________ ——虽年长却坚持高强度冬泳训练，体能远超常人—— _________________ ——1965年被发掘天赋开启职业生涯，见证救生设备的迭代更新—— _________________ ——曾深陷情绪内耗，海滩工作治愈自我负面情绪—— _________________ ——深耕救援工作，热衷培训新人，始终秉持预防大于救援的理念—— _________________ ——毕生坚守海滩，以守护他人安全为毕生热爱与责任 4. 细节问答 What honor did Chris Lewis receive? ：___________________________________ How did Chris keep fit for his job?：_________________________________ What change has Chris witnessed during his career?：________________________________________________ What attitude does Chris hold towards rescue work?：__________________________________________ What is the core theme of the story?：_____________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　年少入行，深耕救生岗位数十载→_________________ →年逾古稀，斩获吉尼斯世界纪录荣誉→_________________ →不惧年龄差距，坚持严苛训练，坚守职业初心→_________________ →见证行业发展变迁，坚守岗位从未懈怠→_________________ →以工作治愈自我，深耕公益救援、传承经验→_________________ →秉持预防优先理念，致力守护游客安全→_________________ →（续写）夏日游客违规下海遇险，Chris挺身而出救援→（续写）事后普及安全知识，坚守初心传递责任与温暖 6．情感线 　　Chris: passionate and devoted→___________→tough and persistent→___________→warm and responsible；Visitors: careless and reckless→___________→grateful and alert→___________→cautious and safe 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　分词作状语、定语从句、宾语从句、让步状语从句、非谓语结构 ___________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　终身坚守、职业热爱、责任担当、无私奉献、经验传承、安全守护类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1： One hot summer afternoon, a group of teenagers ignored the warning signs and went far into the sea. 　　衔接句1——What danger did the teenagers face? What did Chris do? How did he finish the rescue? ________________________________________________________________________ 　　Paragraph 2： After this rescue, Chris continued to share safety tips with visitors on the beach. 　　衔接句2——What did Chris teach visitors? What idea did he stick to? What spirit did he show? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：一个炎热的夏日午后，一群青少年无视警示标识，远赴深海游玩。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 　　第二段：这次救援过后，Chris继续向海滩游客普及安全知识。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四. 段落续写 　　One hot summer afternoon, a group of teenagers ignored the warning signs and went far into the sea. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　After this rescue, Chris continued to share safety tips with visitors on the beach.　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【标准答案】 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　Chris Lewis：74岁、坚守岗位58年的资深救生员，热爱职业、自律坚韧、责任心强、乐于传承经验、秉持预防优先理念、无私温暖；青少年游客：疏忽大意、无视警示、陷入危险、收获教训的海边游客。 2．视角 　　第三人称 3．时空线 　　74岁的Chris Lewis荣获吉尼斯最长任职救生员纪录，坚守岗位58年——深耕岗位半生，斩获世界荣誉 ——虽年长却坚持高强度冬泳训练，体能远超常人——自律坚守初心，不负职业使命 ——1965年被发掘天赋开启职业生涯，见证救生设备的迭代更新——始于天赋热爱，见证行业变迁 ——曾深陷情绪内耗，海滩工作治愈自我负面情绪——以职业治愈自我，与热爱共生成长 ——深耕救援工作，热衷培训新人，始终秉持预防大于救援的理念——坚守救援初心，深耕经验传承 ——毕生坚守海滩，以守护他人安全为毕生热爱与责任——以热爱赴坚守，以责任护众生 4. 细节问答 What honor did Chris Lewis receive? ：He was awarded the Guinness World Record for the world’s longest-serving lifeguard. How did Chris keep fit for his job?：He kept working out by swimming 3,000 metres in the cold sea every month in winter without a wetsuit. What change has Chris witnessed during his career?：He has witnessed great equipment upgrades, from almost no equipment to modern rescue devices like jetskis and rescue boats. What attitude does Chris hold towards rescue work?：He thinks prevention is better than rescue, hoping no visitors will get into danger. What is the core theme of the story?：Persistent dedication, professional responsibility and sincere love for one’s career can create great value and warm others’ lives. 5．情节线 　　年少入行，深耕救生岗位数十载→心怀热爱，扎根海滩岗位 →年逾古稀，斩获吉尼斯世界纪录荣誉→半生坚守，终获世界认可 →不惧年龄差距，坚持严苛训练，坚守职业初心→自律笃行，突破年龄局限 →见证行业发展变迁，坚守岗位从未懈怠→历经岁月更迭，初心始终未改 →以工作治愈自我，深耕公益救援、传承经验→职业治愈自我，善意温暖他人 →秉持预防优先理念，致力守护游客安全→坚守救援本心，重在防范未然 →（续写）夏日游客违规下海遇险，Chris挺身而出救援→危急时刻挺身而出，尽显专业担当 →（续写）事后普及安全知识，坚守初心传递责任与温暖→传递安全理念，延续半生热爱 6．情感线 　　Chris: passionate and devoted→determined and tough→tough and persistent→healed and gentle→warm and responsible；Visitors: careless and reckless→scared and desperate→grateful and alert→reminded and cautious→cautious and safe 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：资深救生员Chris Lewis怀揣热爱坚守岗位58年，自律自强、治愈自我、守护他人，以专业救援和安全科普诠释职业担当与无私大爱。 　　英文：With lifelong passion and perseverance, Chris Lewis has served as a lifeguard for 58 years. He protects visitors’ safety, passes on professional experience and interprets the great power of responsibility and dedication. 8. 句式 　　让步状语从句：Although he is elderly, he still keeps strict training. 定语从句：The job he devotes himself to brings warmth and safety to others. 宾语从句：He believes that prevention matters more than rescue. 分词作状语：Accumulating rich experience, he finishes the rescue perfectly. 非谓语结构：He keeps working tirelessly, hoping to prevent more accidents. 9. 本文主题 　　终身坚守、职业热爱、责任担当、无私奉献、经验传承、安全守护类：以热爱坚守岁月，以责任守护人间。 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1： One hot summer afternoon, a group of teenagers ignored the warning signs and went far into the sea. 衔接句1：The sudden strong tide trapped them in the open sea, putting them in great danger. Seeing their helpless struggle, Chris rushed to their rescue immediately. Relying on his superb skills, he saved all the teenagers successfully. 　　Paragraph 2： After this rescue, Chris continued to share safety tips with visitors on the beach. 衔接句2：He reminded all visitors to abide by beach rules and stay away from dangerous waters. He taught young lifeguards practical skills and stuck to his belief that prevention is better than rescue. His lifelong devotion inspires countless people. 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：一个炎热的夏日午后，一群青少年无视警示标识，远赴深海游玩。 →①洋流汹涌突变，青少年身陷险境、惊慌呼救；→②Chris敏锐发现险情，不顾年迈毅然下海救援；→③凭借数十年专业经验，成功救下所有青少年。 　　第二段：这次救援过后，Chris继续向海滩游客普及安全知识。 →①他耐心讲解海边安全隐患，强调遵守规则的重要性；→②坚持预防优先理念，用心培训新人、传递经验；→③半生坚守诠释热爱与担当，默默守护一方海滩平安。 四、标准续写范文（150词左右） 　　One hot summer afternoon, a group of teenagers ignored the warning signs and went far into the sea.Carried by the strong tide, they soon found themselves struggling helplessly in the rough water, screaming for help loudly. On duty as usual, Chris spotted the dangerous situation instantly. Despite his advanced age, he rushed into the sea without hesitation. With his professional skills and rich experience accumulated over decades, he swam steadily towards the panicked teenagers. Calming them down with gentle words, he successfully guided all of them back to the safe shore. 　　After this rescue, Chris continued to share safety tips with visitors on the beach.He patiently reminded tourists of potential sea dangers and the importance of obeying warning rules. He repeatedly stressed that prevention was always better than rescue. Devoted to his post, he trained young lifeguards with practical experience and spread sea safety knowledge tirelessly. For Chris, guarding the beach and protecting people’s safety was not merely a job, but a lifelong responsibility and persistent love. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $