2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习-----最珍贵的生命救援 导学案

阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Breath of Life As Norwood drove through St. Petersburg, Florida, the laughter from the four teenage girls inside her car suddenly gave way to screams. They were hit by another car and crashed into a tree. Then smoke rose from the car. A bystander shouted, “It's about to blow up! Get out!” Norwood immediately crawled out. Along with two of her friends, who'd also managed to free themselves, she ran for her life. But halfway down the street, she realized that her best friend, Simmons, wasn't with them. Norwood ran back and found Simmons stuck in the back seat. “She wasn't breathing,” Norwood told Inside Edition. She kicked the back door and pulled her friend out. She dragged Simmons a few feet to safety and laid her on the ground. “I checked her pulse and put my ear against her chest.” No sign of life. “That’s when I started CPR (心肺复苏术).” Kneeling on the lawn and looking down at her dying friend, Norwood started pressing Simmons's chest. She breathed into her friend's mouth in hopes of filling her lungs with the breath of life. Fortunately, Simmons began coughing and breathing for air. Soon, paramedics (医务人员) arrived and rushed Simmons to hospital. When she heard how Norwood had saved her life, “I wasn't shocked,” Simmons said. “She always backs me up.” 续写要求 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已给出。 Days after the accident, Norwood went to the hospital to visit Simmons. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　The story of Norwood’s brave act soon spread across the whole city.　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　诺伍德驾车携好友出行，途中遭遇车祸、车辆冒烟—— _________________ ——众人紧急逃生，诺伍德逃出后发现挚友西蒙斯被困车内—— _________________ ——不顾车辆爆炸风险，诺伍德折返救人，将昏迷无生命体征的好友拖至安全地带—— _________________ ——诺伍德沉着实施心肺复苏，全力抢救挚友生命—— _________________ ——幸运奏效，西蒙斯恢复呼吸，医护人员及时送医救治—— _________________ ——西蒙斯深知诺伍德品性，坚信对方定会挺身而出、守护自己 4. 细节问答 What accident happened to the girls? ：___________________________________ Why did Norwood run back to the dangerous car?：_________________________________ What did Norwood do to save her dying friend?：________________________________________________ How did Simmons feel about Norwood’s rescue?：__________________________________________ What is the core theme of the story?：_____________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　结伴出行遭遇车祸，车辆损毁冒烟、濒临爆炸→_________________ →众人仓皇逃生，女主发现挚友失踪被困→_________________ →不惧生死险境，毅然折返冒险救人→_________________ →好友失去生命体征，女主沉着开展心肺复苏→_________________ →全力施救成功，好友恢复呼吸、脱离危险→_________________ →医护送医救治，挚友笃定女主定会守护自己→_________________ →（续写）女主医院探望，二人温情相拥、互诉心意→（续写）勇敢事迹全城传播，传递友情与生命力量 6．情感线 　　Norwood: shocked and scared→___________→determined and brave→___________→relieved and sincere；Simmons: desperate and unconscious→___________→grateful and trusting→___________ 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　分词作状语、定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句、非谓语结构 ___________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　真挚友情、勇敢担当、生死守护、急救救人、绝境不放弃类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1： Days after the accident, Norwood went to the hospital to visit Simmons. 　　衔接句1——What did the two girls do and say? How did they feel after the disaster? ________________________________________________________________________ 　　Paragraph 2： The story of Norwood’s brave act soon spread across the whole city. 　　衔接句2——How did people react to the story? What influence did it bring? What lesson is conveyed? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：事故发生几天后，诺伍德前往医院探望西蒙斯。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 　　第二段：诺伍德的英勇事迹很快传遍了整座城市。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四. 段落续写 　　Days after the accident, Norwood went to the hospital to visit Simmons. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　The story of Norwood’s brave act soon spread across the whole city.　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【标准答案】 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　Norwood：冷静勇敢、重情重义、临危不乱、绝境中挺身而出守护挚友的少女；Simmons：信任挚友、珍视友情、劫后余生心怀感恩的女孩；路人与医护人员：见证险情、及时救助的旁观者与救援者。 2．视角 　　第三人称 3．时空线 　　诺伍德驾车携好友出行，途中遭遇车祸、车辆冒烟——突发惨烈车祸，车辆濒临爆炸 ——众人紧急逃生，诺伍德逃出后发现挚友西蒙斯被困车内——脱险不忘挚友，察觉险情危机 ——不顾车辆爆炸风险，诺伍德折返救人，将昏迷无生命体征的好友拖至安全地带——无惧生死危险，毅然冒险施救 ——诺伍德沉着实施心肺复苏，全力抢救挚友生命——冷静开展急救，全力挽回生命 ——幸运奏效，西蒙斯恢复呼吸，医护人员及时送医救治——施救成功脱险，挚友得以救治 ——西蒙斯深知诺伍德品性，坚信对方定会挺身而出、守护自己——多年真挚情谊，早已彼此信赖 4. 细节问答 What accident happened to the girls? ：Their car was hit by another car, crashed into a tree and began to smoke, facing the risk of explosion. Why did Norwood run back to the dangerous car?：She found her best friend Simmons was trapped in the car and in great danger, and she refused to abandon her friend. What did Norwood do to save her dying friend?：She pulled Simmons to safety and performed CPR patiently and persistently to bring her back to life. How did Simmons feel about Norwood’s rescue?：She was not surprised at all, because she firmly believed that Norwood would always stand by her side. What is the core theme of the story?：True friendship lies in mutual support and dedication in danger. Courage, calmness and timely rescue can create life miracles. 5．情节线 　　结伴出行遭遇车祸，车辆损毁冒烟、濒临爆炸→突遇险情，生死危机 →众人仓皇逃生，女主发现挚友失踪被困→脱险回首，察觉挚友遇险 →不惧生死险境，毅然折返冒险救人→冲破恐惧，逆行守护挚友 →好友失去生命体征，女主沉着开展心肺复苏→直面绝境，全力尝试施救 →全力施救成功，好友恢复呼吸、脱离危险→奇迹复苏，生命得以延续 →医护送医救治，挚友笃定女主定会守护自己→情谊深厚，彼此全然信赖 →（续写）女主医院探望，二人温情相拥、互诉心意→劫后重逢，感念彼此陪伴 →（续写）勇敢事迹全城传播，传递友情与生命力量→事迹传颂，弘扬善意与担当 6．情感线 　　Norwood: shocked and scared→anxious and determined→determined and brave→calm and persistent→relieved and sincere；Simmons: desperate and unconscious→fragile and grateful→grateful and trusting→touched and cherished 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：一场突发车祸让少女身陷生死危机，诺伍德不顾爆炸危险逆行救人，凭借冷静与专业的心肺复苏挽回挚友生命，用行动诠释了真挚友情的力量与少年的勇敢担当。 　　英文：Faced with a deadly car accident, Norwood bravely risked her life to save her best friend. With calmness and professional CPR skills, she brought her friend back to life, perfectly interpreting the power of true friendship and courage. 8. 句式 　　分词作状语：Recovering from the shock, the two girls cherished their precious friendship more. 定语从句：The brave deed Norwood did touched countless people. 宾语从句：People believed that true friendship can conquer fear and death. 状语从句：Though facing great danger, Norwood never hesitated to save her friend. 非谓语结构：She knelt on the grass, trying her best to bring her friend back to life. 9. 本文主题 　　真挚友情、勇敢担当、生死守护、急救救人、绝境不放弃类：以勇气逆行险境，以真情守护生命。 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1： Days after the accident, Norwood went to the hospital to visit Simmons. 衔接句1：Seeing Simmons out of danger, Norwood was greatly relieved. The two best friends hugged tightly and shared their feelings. Simmons expressed endless gratitude to Norwood, who had saved her life at the risk of her own safety. Norwood said protecting friends was the meaning of true friendship. 　　Paragraph 2： The story of Norwood’s brave act soon spread across the whole city. 衔接句2：People praised Norwood for her bravery, calmness and loyalty to friendship. Local schools began to popularize first-aid and CPR skills. Norwood’s story inspired countless teenagers to cherish friendship and learn to take responsibility bravely. 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：事故发生几天后，诺伍德前往医院探望西蒙斯。 →①亲眼见到好友康复好转，诺伍德悬着的心终于放下；→②二人温情相拥，感慨劫后余生的幸运与珍贵；→③西蒙斯真挚致谢，诺伍德坦言守护挚友是本心。 　　第二段：诺伍德的英勇事迹很快传遍了整座城市。 →①市民纷纷称赞她的勇敢、冷静与真挚友情；→②当地普及急救知识，号召大家学习急救技能；→③事迹广为传颂，诠释友情力量与少年担当。 四、标准续写范文（150词左右） 　　Days after the accident, Norwood went to the hospital to visit Simmons. Stepping into the ward, Norwood felt relieved to see her best friend recovering well. The two girls hugged tightly, tears of joy rolling down their cheeks. Simmons held Norwood’s hand tightly, expressing sincere gratitude for her brave and decisive rescue. She said it was Norwood’s timely CPR and fearless effort that brought her back to life. Norwood smiled, stating that she would never hesitate to save her best friend again, for true friendship means backing each other up in life and death. 　　The story of Norwood’s brave act soon spread across the whole city. People were deeply impressed by her courage and the power of true friendship. Many schools invited Norwood to share her experience and popularize CPR knowledge, encouraging students to master life-saving skills. Norwood modestly said she just did what she should do. The moving story taught people that true friendship is priceless and courage and presence of mind can create miracles in desperate moments. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $