专题28 英语作文项目方案选择类议论文(复习讲义)(上海专用)2027年高考英语一轮复习讲练测
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该高中英语讲义聚焦高考项目方案选择类议论文写作,系统覆盖考情研判、思维建模、考点精讲、真题溯源四大模块,按“命题特点—分类逻辑—结构模型—功能句库”知识链组织考点,通过考情分析明确命题趋势,思维建模搭建“表态—对比—论证—收束”写作框架,考点精讲拆解对比论证等核心技能,真题训练强化实战应用,助力学生构建系统写作能力。
资料创新采用“对比论证策略+功能句库支撑”教学法,如2026春考体育项目选择题,引导学生用“让步对比句”客观分析排球与象棋的适配性,培养思维品质;提供“表态引入—让步对比—理由展开—收束总结”功能句模板,提升语言能力。分层设计真题与名校模拟题训练,配合范文赏析与错因分析,确保学生高效突破论证难点,为教师精准把控复习节奏、提升学生应考能力提供有力支持。
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专题28 英语作文项目方案选择类议论文
内容导航
01
命题透视·考情前瞻
对标素养,研判高考命题趋势
02
思维建模·脉络梳理
搭建知识框架,构建系统思维
03
考点精讲·靶向突破
拆解核心考点,归纳解题范式
04
真题溯源·考向感知
溯源真题逻辑,感知高考考向
命题透视·考情前瞻
——对标素养,研判高考命题趋势
年份
作文题
话题
分类
文体
2026夏考
英文报刊刊登暑期项目,三门课程可选:①sewing and knitting 缝纫编织;②plant care 植物养护;③app developing 应用开发。写一封邮件:①选择其中一门课程;②写期待学到的内容;③说明希望获得的收获。
暑期课程选择
学习
议论文
2026春考
学校要在下学期开设新的体育活动课(sports activity class),总共有四个项目选择。请你通过比较后,选择一个你认为最合适和最不合适的项目,并说明理由。
体育活动课
学校
议论文
2025夏考
人们常说“Don't be afraid of wetting your feet if you want to learn how to swim.”
请你结合自己的经历写出你对这句话的理解。
谈谈对格言的理解
学习
叙议文
2025春考
外国朋友kiven要选编程课,有A和B课程可以选。
你建议他选哪一个,并对比给出理由。
课程选择
学习
应用文-建议信
2024夏考
你是明启中学的高三学生李明,你们学校英语报开设了一个“排忧解难”专栏,你的校友Lynn发出求助,请根据她的来信写封回信:写信要求:
1. 提出你的建议;2. 说明你的理由
I’m a high school student. I want to do some cooking but my parents don’t allow me to do so. How can I change their mind?
家长不同意cooking
家庭与校园
应用文-信件
2024春考
假如你是李华,外国文学教授,要莅临你校开办文学讲座,教授现要征求两个与文学有关的问题,在讲座上进行回应,应包括以下内容
(1)向教授提出问题:
(2)并说明理由:
文学教授的回信
校园
应用文-信件
2023夏考
假设你是明启中学高三学生吴磊,你校英语节即将举行主题为“快乐童年”的展览,邀请每位同学提供一件生活中的物品参展,并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读。你会提供什么物品?写一篇物品介绍,内容须包括:
(1) 对该物品的简要描述;
(2) 你选择该物品参展的原因。
物品介绍
校园生活
叙议文
2023春考
你们班的口语课外教 Tom 发现你们班课上互动不积极,委托你了解同学们的想法。经过你对全班同学看法的了解,有些同学表示对课堂上讨论的话题不感兴趣,有些同学害怕犯错,不敢开口。
1. 向 Tom 反映同学的想法;
2. 向 Tom 提出建议并说明理由。
课堂互动
学习
应用文-信件
2022夏考
假设你是高三学生李华,你校计划组织“走进历史”的主题活动,有三项活动可供选择:(1)走访老战士;(2)表演历史剧;(3)制作短视频。现向全校学生征求意见,给组织者写封信,信的内容包括:
1. 你的选择; 2. 你的理由。
走近历史
社会热点
应用文-信件
2022春考
假如你是名启中学的高三学生李明,入冬以来,你们学校组织全校师生进行晨跑,时间在7:30-7:50,休息5分钟之后准备上第一节课。但是有同学反映,晨跑后身体不适。校方委托学生向同学们征集意见,请你向学生会写封邮件。要求
1.提出问题 2.提出改进的建议及理由。
晨跑运动
校园生活
应用文-邮件
2021夏考
假如你是名启中学高三学生李华,收到外国朋友bill的邮件,告诉你他也准备学习汉语,现有两门汉语课程供他选择(课程信息如下表所示),但他对课程选择有些迷茫,想听取你的意见。给bill回邮件,在邮件中你必须:
1.推荐其中一门课程
2.通过比较两门课程的信息,说明你推荐该课程的原因。
课程名称
汉语听说
汉语读写
课程内容
日常会话
故事读写
授课安排
每周一、周四晚7:00-8:00 共8周
每周五晚7:00-8:00
共16周
授课语言
全中文
中英双语
推荐课程
学习
应用文-邮件
2021春考
假如你是明启中学的高三学生王佳,你学校的教师Lucy准备在高中开设关于“信息素养”的课程,课程包含以下四个板块,“网站设计”“大数据处理”“辨别真伪信息”“精确搜索信息”。现在向全体同学征求意见,。请你给他写一份电子邮件,要求:
1.选择两个你感兴趣的板块
2.说明为什么选择这个板块的理由。
课程选择
学习
应用文-邮件
思维建模·脉络梳理
——搭建知识框架,构建系统思维
上海高考英语项目选择类作文命题核心特点
活动方案选择类议论文通常会创设一个具体的活动情境,要求考生从多个活动方案中选择一个,并阐述选择理由。它不仅考查考生的语言表达能力,还考查考生的逻辑思维能力和对活动方案的理解与分析能力。
· 情境贴近校园与社会生活:这类作文通常设定在校园或社区等熟悉的环境中,例如学校组织的各类活动(如学术讲座、文体比赛、社团活动等)、社区志愿服务或文化交流活动等。题目会提供两个或多个不同类型的活动方案,要求学生根据给定信息进行比较分析,并做出选择,阐述选择的理由和依据。通过此类题目,考查学生对实际生活场景的观察、理解和应对能力,以及运用英语表达观点和进行逻辑论证的水平。
· 考查核心能力与要点:重点考查学生的信息处理能力,包括对不同活动方案细节(如时间、地点、活动形式、参与人员、预期效果等)的提取、归纳和比较;逻辑思维能力,需清晰地呈现各方案的优缺点,并按照合理的逻辑顺序组织文章结构,有力地论证自己的选择;语言表达能力,要求运用准确、流畅、多样的英语词汇和句型来描述活动内容和表达个人观点,使文章具有说服力和可读性。
备考过程中,需要关注此类作文的三个维度:
1. 明确要求:阅读题目,明确项目背景、可选方案以写作要求,确定需要选择的方案和需要阐述的内容。
2. 确定方案:根据自己的理解或偏好,选择一个合适的活动方案,并思考选择该方案的理由。
3. 列出要点:列出选择该方案的主要理由,一般建议列举2-3个理由,并思考如何组织这些理由,使文章逻辑清晰。需注意的是:有时候可能要求对方案提出修改建议。
考点精讲·靶向突破
——拆解核心考点,归纳解题范式
知●识●解●构
知识点1 常见类型分类
命题形式
典型题干模式
二选一对比选择
学校将组织活动,方案 A 还是方案 B?你选哪个,说明理由
三选一类
暑假实践活动三种选项,你倾向哪一种
项目方案论证
学校拟增设课程 / 社团,三种方案,你推荐哪一种
其它选择类
如大学专业选择、海外交换目的地、志愿服务方向
知识点2 命题底层逻辑
1. 必须明确表态:不能含糊其辞、两个都好,必须选定一个方案作为立场;
2. 理由紧扣题干情境:理由要贴合题目的具体场景(学校、社区、学习、实践),不能套万能理由;
3. 对比回应是高分关键:对另一个方案不能完全忽略,简要承认其合理性后再转折,体现思辨;
4. 落脚可操作性:结尾需回到 "我选这个之后打算怎么做",体现选择不是空谈。
知识点3 篇章结构模型
范式:"表态 — 对比 — 论证 — 收束" 四段式(高考最通用)
第 1 段:引入 + 明确表态(约 50 词)
· 简要复述题目情境(学校面临两个方案 / 两个选择);
· 开门见山亮出自己的选择,不含糊。
第 2 段:对比回应 + 核心理由一(约 80 词)
· 先承认另一方案的可取之处(让步),再用转折引出自己选择的核心理由;
· 理由一要具体,紧扣题干场景。
第 3 段:补充理由二 + 可操作性(约 80 词)
· 理由二从另一个维度(个人成长 / 集体效益 / 长远价值)展开;
· 简要说明自己选了之后打算怎么做。
第 4 段:总结收束(约 30-40 词)
· 重申选择;一句话升华,不重复前文。
知识点4 关键功能句库
模块 1:表态引入句(第 1 段)
· When it comes to the choice between A and B, I, without hesitation, am in favour of A.
· Faced with these two options, I would rather choose A, for reasons as follows.
· Although both choices have their own appeal, my preference falls on A.
模块 2:让步对比句(第 2 段开头,解决 "只选不辩")
· Admittedly, option B is by no means without its advantages, such as … However, it fails to take … into account.
· It is true that B may seem attractive at first glance, but on closer examination, it overlooks …
· While B has its own merits, A better fits our specific situation, mainly because …
模块 3:核心理由展开句
· The most compelling reason is that …
· What makes A a better choice is that it not only … but also …
· From the perspective of …, A holds clear advantages over B.
模块 4:可操作性 / 个人规划句
· Once chosen, I would … to make the most of this option.
· If I were given the opportunity, I would …
· This choice would enable me to …
模块 5:总结收束句
· For the reasons above, I firmly believe that A is the wiser choice.
· Taking all factors into consideration, A proves to be the more rewarding option.
· In conclusion, choosing A would bring about benefits that far outweigh those of B.
考●向●破●译
【2026年上海市春季高考英语作文深度剖析】:
Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
学校要在下学期开设新的体育活动课(sports activity class),总共有四个项目选择。请你通过比较后,选择一个你认为最合适和最不合适的项目,并说明理由。
项目A
项目B
项目C
项目D
kite flying
volleyball
chess
street dancing
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【参考范文】
The Most and Least Suitable Sports Activity
Our school will offer new sports activity classes next term, with four options: kite flying, volleyball, chess and street dancing. After careful comparison, I think volleyball is the most suitable choice while chess is the least appropriate one.
Volleyball is a dynamic team sport. It not only builds up our physical strength and improves our coordination but also cultivates teamwork spirit. Playing with classmates can strengthen our friendship and make the class lively and enjoyable. In contrast, chess is mainly a mental activity. It lacks physical movement, which goes against the core purpose of sports classes—to keep students fit and active.
In short, volleyball perfectly matches the sports class’s demands, while chess is not a proper option for this course. (132words)
【范文赏析】
一、 审题立意:精准贴合要求,核心诉求明确
这篇作文完全契合题目指令,审题精准度高,立意清晰且紧扣核心诉求。
1. 紧扣任务要求:题目明确要求 “比较后选择最合适和最不合适的项目,并说明理由”。作文开篇直接点明四个备选项目,同时给出核心选择 ——最合适的是排球,最不合适的是国际象棋,没有偏离主题,也没有遗漏任务要素。
2. 锚定核心评判标准:作文以体育活动课的核心目的 —— 增强体能、促进身体活动、培养团队协作能力为评判标尺,以此展开对两个项目的对比分析。这一立意精准抓住了 “sports activity class” 的 “体育属性” 和 “活动属性”,避免了脱离课程本质的泛泛而谈。
3. 立场鲜明无模糊:全文围绕核心立场展开论证,没有出现摇摆不定的表述,理由支撑均服务于 “排球适配体育课、国际象棋不适配体育课” 的核心观点,立意集中且明确。
二、 写作思路:逻辑分层清晰,结构严谨完整
文章采用总分总的经典结构,逻辑链条完整,分层论述条理分明,论证说服力强。
1. 总起段:开门见山,亮明观点首段简洁交代背景(学校开设新体育活动课,有四个选项),随即直接给出选择结果,一句话点明全文核心论点,让读者快速把握文章主旨。
2. 分述段:对比论证,分层说理中间段落采用正反对比的论证方式,逻辑层次清晰:
1. 正面分析:阐述排球的优势,从 “增强体能、提升协调性” 的生理价值,到 “培养团队精神、增进同学友谊” 的社交价值,层层递进,说明其适配体育课的原因。
2. 反面分析:指出国际象棋的短板,精准点出其 “偏脑力活动、缺乏身体运动” 的特点,直接对标体育课的核心目的,论证其不合适的合理性。
3. 总结段:收束全文,重申观点结尾用 “In short” 总结全文,再次强调排球与体育课需求的契合度,以及国际象棋的不适配性,呼应开头,形成完整的逻辑闭环。
三、 语言部分:精准、多样、贴合语境
文章的语言表达符合英语作文的要求,用词精准、句式多样,且与学生作文的语境高度贴合。
1. 用词精准,贴合主题选用的词汇专业且贴合体育活动的主题,如描述排球的 dynamic(有活力的)、teamwork spirit(团队精神)、coordination(协调性),准确传递排球的运动属性;用 mental activity(脑力活动)界定国际象棋的性质,用词贴切,无冗余表述。
2. 句式多样,表达灵活避免了单一句式的堆砌,句式丰富且有变化:
1 并列句式:It not only builds up our physical strength and improves our coordination but also cultivates teamwork spirit,用 “not only...but also...” 清晰呈现排球的多重价值。
2 对比句式:用 In contrast 引出国际象棋的特点,形成鲜明对照,增强论证力度。
3 简单句与复合句结合:既有简洁的陈述句交代背景,也有复合句展开论述,节奏张弛有度。
3. 衔接自然,语境适配过渡词 In contrast、In short 的使用,让段落之间、句子之间的衔接流畅自然;整体语言风格正式但不晦涩,符合中学生英语作文的语境要求,没有出现过于口语化或生僻难懂的表达。
【另附媒体解读】
2026年上海春考英语作文题目要求考生对学校拟开设的四个体育项目(放风筝、排球、象棋、街舞)进行评估,选择一个最推荐和一个最不推荐的项目,并说明理由。以下是具体解析:
1. 题目分析
· 核心任务:需在四个选项中进行比较和权衡,明确表达个人立场,并通过合理理由支撑选择。
· 考查重点:不仅考察语言表达能力,更注重批判性思维和逻辑论证能力,要求考生从不同维度(如健身效果、团队协作、安全性、文化价值等)分析项目特点。
2. 写作思路
· 确定选择:可根据自身兴趣或对体育教育目标的理解,选择一个最符合体育课宗旨的项目作为最推荐项,同时挑选一个在实施难度、安全性或与体育课目标契合度较低的项目作为最不推荐项。
· 阐述理由:
· 最推荐项目:可从促进身体健康、培养团队精神、激发兴趣、提升综合素质等角度展开论述,结合具体场景(如校园体育课)说明其优势。
· 最不推荐项目:需客观分析其局限性,如运动强度不足、安全风险较高、受外部条件限制(如天气)、与体育课核心目标关联性较弱等,但避免过度贬低。
3. 语言表达
· 结构清晰:采用总分总结构,开头明确观点,中间分段阐述理由,结尾总结强调选择的合理性。
· 逻辑连贯:使用恰当的连接词(如however、moreover、therefore等)增强文章的连贯性,确保理由之间的过渡自然。
· 词汇与句式:运用高中阶段所学的高级词汇和复杂句式(如定语从句、状语从句、强调句等),提升语言表现力,但需确保表达准确、自然。
4. 示例参考
· 最推荐街舞:街舞能充分锻炼身体协调性、灵活性和节奏感,同时鼓励学生表达个性、增强自信,且团队合作元素(如编排舞蹈)有助于培养协作能力,符合体育课促进身心全面发展的目标。
· 最不推荐放风筝:放风筝虽具趣味性,但运动强度较低,且受天气和场地限制较大,还可能存在安全隐患(如风筝线割伤、风筝缠绕电线等),与体育课强调的主动运动和安全保障原则存在一定冲突。
总之,该作文题目旨在引导考生关注校园生活实际问题,通过理性分析和有效沟通表达个人观点,体现了高考英语对语言运用能力和思维品质的双重考查。
【2025年春季高考上海卷英语试题作文深度剖析】:
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你的外国朋友kiven要选编程课,有A和B课程可以选。A和B的教学方法,评价,授课方式不一样,你建议他选哪一个,并对比给出理由
课程选择
授课方式
讲课方法
评估
A课程
具体分析
线上
期末考试
B课程
从易到难
线上和线下结合
课堂表现/作业+期末
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Dear Kevin,
I know you're torn between programming Course A and Course B, so I'm writing to offer my advice. After considering the differences between them, I recommend Course B.
Course A analyzes specific cases in detail, which is great for delving deep into certain topics. However, its all - online teaching might lack the face - to - face interaction that helps clear up doubts immediately. Also, being evaluated solely by the final exam is a high - stake situation. If you have an off - day during the exam, it could significantly affect your overall grade.
In contrast, Course B teaches from easy to difficult, gradually building a solid foundation. The combination of online and offline classes gives you more flexibility. You can review online materials at your convenience and get hands - on guidance during offline sessions. What's more, its assessment, based on class performance, homework, and the final exam, comprehensively reflects your learning process. This means you get continuous feedback and can adjust your learning strategy accordingly.
All in all, Course B seems to be a better fit as it offers a more balanced and less stressful learning experience. I hope this helps you make a decision.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
范文赏析:
一、审题立意:精准贴合要求,核心诉求明确
审题是高分作文的根基,本篇范文在审题立意上完全契合题意,做到“无偏差、不遗漏”,具体体现在以下三点:
· 紧扣“二选一”核心任务
题目要求从 A、B 两门编程课中推荐其一。范文首句即亮明立场:“I recommend Course B”,态度鲜明,绝不出现“两者皆可”的模糊表述,直接回应核心诉求。
· 覆盖“对比”关键要求
题目强调“对比给出理由”,而非仅罗列优势。范文采用“先抑后扬 + 直接对比”逻辑:
• 先客观肯定 A 课优点:analyzes specific cases in detail;
• 再指出其不足:all-online teaching lacks interaction;solely final exam evaluation is high-stake;
• 随后对应阐述 B 课优势:teaches from easy to difficult;online-offline combined;comprehensive assessment;
并以 However / In contrast 等逻辑标记强化对比,充分满足“对比”硬性要求。
· 贴合“外国朋友 Kiven”隐性场景
收信人为外国朋友,推荐需兼顾实用与易懂。编程对基础要求高,范文强调 B 课“gradually building a solid foundation”“continuous feedback”,贴合初学者需求,避免复杂或高风险方案,立意兼具针对性与人文关怀。
二、写作思路:逻辑分层清晰,结构严谨完整
范文采用“总—分—总”书信结构,每一部分功能明确,并通过“对比论证”深化理由,符合“建议类书信”的写作逻辑。
· 开头:开门见山,快速入题
“I know you're torn between… so I'm writing to offer my advice”
• 用 torn between 体现对朋友纠结心态的理解;
• 立即给出核心推荐 recommend Course B,避免冗余,符合高考英语作文“简洁高效”评分倾向。
· 主体:对比论证,理由分层
先 A(优+劣)→ 后 B(优),每条理由紧扣“授课方式、讲课方法、评估”三大维度,逻辑链完整:
• 讲课方法与授课方式
A:specific cases(优) vs. all-online(劣,缺互动);
B:from easy to difficult(优,打基础) + online-offline combined(优,灵活+线下指导)。
• 评估方式
A:solely final exam(劣,高风险);
B:class performance + homework + final exam(优,全过程反馈)。
通过“学习风险”与“效果跟踪”角度深化说服力。
· 结尾:总结升华,呼应开头
“All in all, Course B offers a more balanced and less stressful learning experience.”
• “balanced”=线上线下+难易梯度;
• “less stressful”=综合评估;
形成“提出建议—论证建议—强化建议”闭环,结构严谨。
三、语言部分:精准、多样、贴合语境
高考英语作文对语言的要求是“准确表达、句式多样、语域恰当”,该范文在语言层面完全达标。
· 词汇精准
• 场景相关:assessment / final exam / class performance / homework / all-online teaching / online and offline combined / online materials;
• 情感与逻辑:torn between / high-stake / comprehensively reflects / continuous feedback。
· 句式多样
• 复合句:
Course A analyzes specific cases in detail, which is great for delving deep into certain topics.
If you have an off-day during the exam, it could significantly affect your overall grade.
What’s more, its assessment… comprehensively reflects your learning process.
• 简单句:
However, its all-online teaching might lack the face-to-face interaction.
In contrast, Course B teaches from easy to difficult.
长短句交替,张弛有度。
· 语域恰当
• 称呼与结尾:Dear Kiven / Best regards / I hope this helps you make a decision;
• 语气:多用 you 作主语,建议性、分析性表达(I recommend… / This means you get…),避免命令式,亲切自然。
附:学霸作文1篇供参考
Dear Kevin,
When it comes to making a choice between Course A and Course B for your programming study, I am more than willing to share my in-depth insights with you.
Course A employs a teaching method centered around specific analysis and is conducted online, with the evaluation hinging solely on a final exam. Conversely, Course B adopts a distinct approach. Its teaching method unfolds from the elementary to the advanced level, and it seamlessly integrates both online and offline teaching modalities. The assessment of Course B encompasses classroom performance, homework, and a final exam.
I wholeheartedly recommend Course B. This recommendation stems not only from its varied teaching methodologies but also from its comprehensive evaluation system. Were you to opt for Course A, you would likely discover that the single - mode assessment of the final exam fails to comprehensively mirror your actual learning trajectory. In stark contrast, Course B, with its multi - faceted assessment, is capable of providing a more precise measurement of your progress. Moreover, only by integrating online and offline teaching, as Course B does, can you enjoy a more flexible and interactive learning journey. It is precisely through this integration that you are more prone to gain a profound understanding of the intricate knowledge of programming.
I sincerely hope that you will make a judicious choice based on my analysis.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
真题溯源·考向感知
——溯源真题逻辑,感知高考考向
题组一 高考真题
(2014年上海高考英语作文真题)
学校英语报正在改版,拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化)中去除一个,并从三个备选栏目(时尚、职业规划、读者反馈)中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞,给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容:
1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由;
2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。
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题组二 名校真题
1.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
【来源】上海外国语大学闵行外国语中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中英语试题
学校获拨一批专项经费用于对以下一项设施进行修缮更新:1、体育馆;2、图书馆;3、实验室,就此征求学生的意见。假如你是该校学生李华,请写一封信给校长,你的信必须包括:
1. 选择对哪一项进行修缮;
2. 选择的理由;
3. 就如何改进给出建议。
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2.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below.
【来源】上海市风华中学2025-2026学年高三上学期10月期中考试英语试题
假设你是风华中学高三学生李华。你所在的学校“创意社团(the Creative Society)”正在策划一项面向大宁社区青年的推广活动(a promotion campaign),现有三个备选项目:
① 推广一个城市漫步主题路线(a Citywalk theme route);
② 推广一个“旧物改造”环保工作坊(an “Upcycling” environmental workshop);
③ 推广一个社区“技能交换”平台(a community “Skill Swap” platform)。
请你给社团委员会(the Society Board)写一封信,提交你的想法。信中必须包含:
1. 你选择推广的一个项目;
2. 你选择该项目的理由;
3. 你的详细推广计划。
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3.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
【来源】上海市杨浦区控江中学2025-2026学年高三上学期9月测评英语试卷
你校体育组在校园网就高三体育课程改革广泛征求意见,并提出两种方案:一、取消统一大课间操,改为自由安排。二、调整传统课程,增设健美操(aerobics)和太极拳(Tai Chi)作为选修课程。请你在论坛上发帖谈谈自己的看法,内容包括:你赞成哪种高三体育课程改革?并简要说明理由。
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3.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
【来源】(2025年浦东新区一模)
明启中学将组织学生开展为期三天的研学活动,现有三个主题,分别为:“访问友校”“走进大学”“深入企业”。假如你是该校学生李华,请写一封申请信给负责人,报名参加其中一项活动,内容须包括:
1. 你选择的主题;
2. 你希望学到的内容;
3. 你想学这些内容的理由。
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内容导航
01
命题透视·考情前瞻
对标素养,研判高考命题趋势
02
思维建模·脉络梳理
搭建知识框架,构建系统思维
03
考点精讲·靶向突破
拆解核心考点,归纳解题范式
04
真题溯源·考向感知
溯源真题逻辑,感知高考考向
命题透视·考情前瞻
——对标素养,研判高考命题趋势
年份
作文题
话题
分类
文体
2026夏考
英文报刊刊登暑期项目,三门课程可选:①sewing and knitting 缝纫编织;②plant care 植物养护;③app developing 应用开发。写一封邮件:①选择其中一门课程;②写期待学到的内容;③说明希望获得的收获。
暑期课程选择
学习
议论文
2026春考
学校要在下学期开设新的体育活动课(sports activity class),总共有四个项目选择。请你通过比较后,选择一个你认为最合适和最不合适的项目,并说明理由。
体育活动课
学校
议论文
2025夏考
人们常说“Don't be afraid of wetting your feet if you want to learn how to swim.”
请你结合自己的经历写出你对这句话的理解。
谈谈对格言的理解
学习
叙议文
2025春考
外国朋友kiven要选编程课,有A和B课程可以选。
你建议他选哪一个,并对比给出理由。
课程选择
学习
应用文-建议信
2024夏考
你是明启中学的高三学生李明,你们学校英语报开设了一个“排忧解难”专栏,你的校友Lynn发出求助,请根据她的来信写封回信:写信要求:
1. 提出你的建议;2. 说明你的理由
I’m a high school student. I want to do some cooking but my parents don’t allow me to do so. How can I change their mind?
家长不同意cooking
家庭与校园
应用文-信件
2024春考
假如你是李华,外国文学教授,要莅临你校开办文学讲座,教授现要征求两个与文学有关的问题,在讲座上进行回应,应包括以下内容
(1)向教授提出问题:
(2)并说明理由:
文学教授的回信
校园
应用文-信件
2023夏考
假设你是明启中学高三学生吴磊,你校英语节即将举行主题为“快乐童年”的展览,邀请每位同学提供一件生活中的物品参展,并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读。你会提供什么物品?写一篇物品介绍,内容须包括:
(1) 对该物品的简要描述;
(2) 你选择该物品参展的原因。
物品介绍
校园生活
叙议文
2023春考
你们班的口语课外教 Tom 发现你们班课上互动不积极,委托你了解同学们的想法。经过你对全班同学看法的了解,有些同学表示对课堂上讨论的话题不感兴趣,有些同学害怕犯错,不敢开口。
1. 向 Tom 反映同学的想法;
2. 向 Tom 提出建议并说明理由。
课堂互动
学习
应用文-信件
2022夏考
假设你是高三学生李华,你校计划组织“走进历史”的主题活动,有三项活动可供选择:(1)走访老战士;(2)表演历史剧;(3)制作短视频。现向全校学生征求意见,给组织者写封信,信的内容包括:
1. 你的选择; 2. 你的理由。
走近历史
社会热点
应用文-信件
2022春考
假如你是名启中学的高三学生李明,入冬以来,你们学校组织全校师生进行晨跑,时间在7:30-7:50,休息5分钟之后准备上第一节课。但是有同学反映,晨跑后身体不适。校方委托学生向同学们征集意见,请你向学生会写封邮件。要求
1.提出问题 2.提出改进的建议及理由。
晨跑运动
校园生活
应用文-邮件
2021夏考
假如你是名启中学高三学生李华,收到外国朋友bill的邮件,告诉你他也准备学习汉语,现有两门汉语课程供他选择(课程信息如下表所示),但他对课程选择有些迷茫,想听取你的意见。给bill回邮件,在邮件中你必须:
1.推荐其中一门课程
2.通过比较两门课程的信息,说明你推荐该课程的原因。
课程名称
汉语听说
汉语读写
课程内容
日常会话
故事读写
授课安排
每周一、周四晚7:00-8:00 共8周
每周五晚7:00-8:00
共16周
授课语言
全中文
中英双语
推荐课程
学习
应用文-邮件
2021春考
假如你是明启中学的高三学生王佳,你学校的教师Lucy准备在高中开设关于“信息素养”的课程,课程包含以下四个板块,“网站设计”“大数据处理”“辨别真伪信息”“精确搜索信息”。现在向全体同学征求意见,。请你给他写一份电子邮件,要求:
1.选择两个你感兴趣的板块
2.说明为什么选择这个板块的理由。
课程选择
学习
应用文-邮件
思维建模·脉络梳理
——搭建知识框架,构建系统思维
上海高考英语项目选择类作文命题核心特点
活动方案选择类议论文通常会创设一个具体的活动情境,要求考生从多个活动方案中选择一个,并阐述选择理由。它不仅考查考生的语言表达能力,还考查考生的逻辑思维能力和对活动方案的理解与分析能力。
· 情境贴近校园与社会生活:这类作文通常设定在校园或社区等熟悉的环境中,例如学校组织的各类活动(如学术讲座、文体比赛、社团活动等)、社区志愿服务或文化交流活动等。题目会提供两个或多个不同类型的活动方案,要求学生根据给定信息进行比较分析,并做出选择,阐述选择的理由和依据。通过此类题目,考查学生对实际生活场景的观察、理解和应对能力,以及运用英语表达观点和进行逻辑论证的水平。
· 考查核心能力与要点:重点考查学生的信息处理能力,包括对不同活动方案细节(如时间、地点、活动形式、参与人员、预期效果等)的提取、归纳和比较;逻辑思维能力,需清晰地呈现各方案的优缺点,并按照合理的逻辑顺序组织文章结构,有力地论证自己的选择;语言表达能力,要求运用准确、流畅、多样的英语词汇和句型来描述活动内容和表达个人观点,使文章具有说服力和可读性。
备考过程中,需要关注此类作文的三个维度:
1. 明确要求:阅读题目,明确项目背景、可选方案以写作要求,确定需要选择的方案和需要阐述的内容。
2. 确定方案:根据自己的理解或偏好,选择一个合适的活动方案,并思考选择该方案的理由。
3. 列出要点:列出选择该方案的主要理由,一般建议列举2-3个理由,并思考如何组织这些理由,使文章逻辑清晰。需注意的是:有时候可能要求对方案提出修改建议。
考点精讲·靶向突破
——拆解核心考点,归纳解题范式
知●识●解●构
知识点1 常见类型分类
命题形式
典型题干模式
二选一对比选择
学校将组织活动,方案 A 还是方案 B?你选哪个,说明理由
三选一类
暑假实践活动三种选项,你倾向哪一种
项目方案论证
学校拟增设课程 / 社团,三种方案,你推荐哪一种
其它选择类
如大学专业选择、海外交换目的地、志愿服务方向
知识点2 命题底层逻辑
1. 必须明确表态:不能含糊其辞、两个都好,必须选定一个方案作为立场;
2. 理由紧扣题干情境:理由要贴合题目的具体场景(学校、社区、学习、实践),不能套万能理由;
3. 对比回应是高分关键:对另一个方案不能完全忽略,简要承认其合理性后再转折,体现思辨;
4. 落脚可操作性:结尾需回到 "我选这个之后打算怎么做",体现选择不是空谈。
知识点3 篇章结构模型
范式:"表态 — 对比 — 论证 — 收束" 四段式(高考最通用)
第 1 段:引入 + 明确表态(约 50 词)
· 简要复述题目情境(学校面临两个方案 / 两个选择);
· 开门见山亮出自己的选择,不含糊。
第 2 段:对比回应 + 核心理由一(约 80 词)
· 先承认另一方案的可取之处(让步),再用转折引出自己选择的核心理由;
· 理由一要具体,紧扣题干场景。
第 3 段:补充理由二 + 可操作性(约 80 词)
· 理由二从另一个维度(个人成长 / 集体效益 / 长远价值)展开;
· 简要说明自己选了之后打算怎么做。
第 4 段:总结收束(约 30-40 词)
· 重申选择;一句话升华,不重复前文。
知识点4 关键功能句库
模块 1:表态引入句(第 1 段)
· When it comes to the choice between A and B, I, without hesitation, am in favour of A.
· Faced with these two options, I would rather choose A, for reasons as follows.
· Although both choices have their own appeal, my preference falls on A.
模块 2:让步对比句(第 2 段开头,解决 "只选不辩")
· Admittedly, option B is by no means without its advantages, such as … However, it fails to take … into account.
· It is true that B may seem attractive at first glance, but on closer examination, it overlooks …
· While B has its own merits, A better fits our specific situation, mainly because …
模块 3:核心理由展开句
· The most compelling reason is that …
· What makes A a better choice is that it not only … but also …
· From the perspective of …, A holds clear advantages over B.
模块 4:可操作性 / 个人规划句
· Once chosen, I would … to make the most of this option.
· If I were given the opportunity, I would …
· This choice would enable me to …
模块 5:总结收束句
· For the reasons above, I firmly believe that A is the wiser choice.
· Taking all factors into consideration, A proves to be the more rewarding option.
· In conclusion, choosing A would bring about benefits that far outweigh those of B.
考●向●破●译
【2026年上海市春季高考英语作文深度剖析】:
Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
学校要在下学期开设新的体育活动课(sports activity class),总共有四个项目选择。请你通过比较后,选择一个你认为最合适和最不合适的项目,并说明理由。
项目A
项目B
项目C
项目D
kite flying
volleyball
chess
street dancing
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【参考范文】
The Most and Least Suitable Sports Activity
Our school will offer new sports activity classes next term, with four options: kite flying, volleyball, chess and street dancing. After careful comparison, I think volleyball is the most suitable choice while chess is the least appropriate one.
Volleyball is a dynamic team sport. It not only builds up our physical strength and improves our coordination but also cultivates teamwork spirit. Playing with classmates can strengthen our friendship and make the class lively and enjoyable. In contrast, chess is mainly a mental activity. It lacks physical movement, which goes against the core purpose of sports classes—to keep students fit and active.
In short, volleyball perfectly matches the sports class’s demands, while chess is not a proper option for this course. (132words)
【范文赏析】
一、 审题立意:精准贴合要求,核心诉求明确
这篇作文完全契合题目指令,审题精准度高,立意清晰且紧扣核心诉求。
1. 紧扣任务要求:题目明确要求 “比较后选择最合适和最不合适的项目,并说明理由”。作文开篇直接点明四个备选项目,同时给出核心选择 ——最合适的是排球,最不合适的是国际象棋,没有偏离主题,也没有遗漏任务要素。
2. 锚定核心评判标准:作文以体育活动课的核心目的 —— 增强体能、促进身体活动、培养团队协作能力为评判标尺,以此展开对两个项目的对比分析。这一立意精准抓住了 “sports activity class” 的 “体育属性” 和 “活动属性”,避免了脱离课程本质的泛泛而谈。
3. 立场鲜明无模糊:全文围绕核心立场展开论证,没有出现摇摆不定的表述,理由支撑均服务于 “排球适配体育课、国际象棋不适配体育课” 的核心观点,立意集中且明确。
二、 写作思路:逻辑分层清晰,结构严谨完整
文章采用总分总的经典结构,逻辑链条完整,分层论述条理分明,论证说服力强。
1. 总起段:开门见山,亮明观点首段简洁交代背景(学校开设新体育活动课,有四个选项),随即直接给出选择结果,一句话点明全文核心论点,让读者快速把握文章主旨。
2. 分述段:对比论证,分层说理中间段落采用正反对比的论证方式,逻辑层次清晰:
1. 正面分析:阐述排球的优势,从 “增强体能、提升协调性” 的生理价值,到 “培养团队精神、增进同学友谊” 的社交价值,层层递进,说明其适配体育课的原因。
2. 反面分析:指出国际象棋的短板,精准点出其 “偏脑力活动、缺乏身体运动” 的特点,直接对标体育课的核心目的,论证其不合适的合理性。
3. 总结段:收束全文,重申观点结尾用 “In short” 总结全文,再次强调排球与体育课需求的契合度,以及国际象棋的不适配性,呼应开头,形成完整的逻辑闭环。
三、 语言部分:精准、多样、贴合语境
文章的语言表达符合英语作文的要求,用词精准、句式多样,且与学生作文的语境高度贴合。
1. 用词精准,贴合主题选用的词汇专业且贴合体育活动的主题,如描述排球的 dynamic(有活力的)、teamwork spirit(团队精神)、coordination(协调性),准确传递排球的运动属性;用 mental activity(脑力活动)界定国际象棋的性质,用词贴切,无冗余表述。
2. 句式多样,表达灵活避免了单一句式的堆砌,句式丰富且有变化:
1 并列句式:It not only builds up our physical strength and improves our coordination but also cultivates teamwork spirit,用 “not only...but also...” 清晰呈现排球的多重价值。
2 对比句式:用 In contrast 引出国际象棋的特点,形成鲜明对照,增强论证力度。
3 简单句与复合句结合:既有简洁的陈述句交代背景,也有复合句展开论述,节奏张弛有度。
3. 衔接自然,语境适配过渡词 In contrast、In short 的使用,让段落之间、句子之间的衔接流畅自然;整体语言风格正式但不晦涩,符合中学生英语作文的语境要求,没有出现过于口语化或生僻难懂的表达。
【另附媒体解读】
2026年上海春考英语作文题目要求考生对学校拟开设的四个体育项目(放风筝、排球、象棋、街舞)进行评估,选择一个最推荐和一个最不推荐的项目,并说明理由。以下是具体解析:
1. 题目分析
· 核心任务:需在四个选项中进行比较和权衡,明确表达个人立场,并通过合理理由支撑选择。
· 考查重点:不仅考察语言表达能力,更注重批判性思维和逻辑论证能力,要求考生从不同维度(如健身效果、团队协作、安全性、文化价值等)分析项目特点。
2. 写作思路
· 确定选择:可根据自身兴趣或对体育教育目标的理解,选择一个最符合体育课宗旨的项目作为最推荐项,同时挑选一个在实施难度、安全性或与体育课目标契合度较低的项目作为最不推荐项。
· 阐述理由:
· 最推荐项目:可从促进身体健康、培养团队精神、激发兴趣、提升综合素质等角度展开论述,结合具体场景(如校园体育课)说明其优势。
· 最不推荐项目:需客观分析其局限性,如运动强度不足、安全风险较高、受外部条件限制(如天气)、与体育课核心目标关联性较弱等,但避免过度贬低。
3. 语言表达
· 结构清晰:采用总分总结构,开头明确观点,中间分段阐述理由,结尾总结强调选择的合理性。
· 逻辑连贯:使用恰当的连接词(如however、moreover、therefore等)增强文章的连贯性,确保理由之间的过渡自然。
· 词汇与句式:运用高中阶段所学的高级词汇和复杂句式(如定语从句、状语从句、强调句等),提升语言表现力,但需确保表达准确、自然。
4. 示例参考
· 最推荐街舞:街舞能充分锻炼身体协调性、灵活性和节奏感,同时鼓励学生表达个性、增强自信,且团队合作元素(如编排舞蹈)有助于培养协作能力,符合体育课促进身心全面发展的目标。
· 最不推荐放风筝:放风筝虽具趣味性,但运动强度较低,且受天气和场地限制较大,还可能存在安全隐患(如风筝线割伤、风筝缠绕电线等),与体育课强调的主动运动和安全保障原则存在一定冲突。
总之,该作文题目旨在引导考生关注校园生活实际问题,通过理性分析和有效沟通表达个人观点,体现了高考英语对语言运用能力和思维品质的双重考查。
【2025年春季高考上海卷英语试题作文深度剖析】:
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你的外国朋友kiven要选编程课,有A和B课程可以选。A和B的教学方法,评价,授课方式不一样,你建议他选哪一个,并对比给出理由
课程选择
授课方式
讲课方法
评估
A课程
具体分析
线上
期末考试
B课程
从易到难
线上和线下结合
课堂表现/作业+期末
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Dear Kevin,
I know you're torn between programming Course A and Course B, so I'm writing to offer my advice. After considering the differences between them, I recommend Course B.
Course A analyzes specific cases in detail, which is great for delving deep into certain topics. However, its all - online teaching might lack the face - to - face interaction that helps clear up doubts immediately. Also, being evaluated solely by the final exam is a high - stake situation. If you have an off - day during the exam, it could significantly affect your overall grade.
In contrast, Course B teaches from easy to difficult, gradually building a solid foundation. The combination of online and offline classes gives you more flexibility. You can review online materials at your convenience and get hands - on guidance during offline sessions. What's more, its assessment, based on class performance, homework, and the final exam, comprehensively reflects your learning process. This means you get continuous feedback and can adjust your learning strategy accordingly.
All in all, Course B seems to be a better fit as it offers a more balanced and less stressful learning experience. I hope this helps you make a decision.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
范文赏析:
一、审题立意:精准贴合要求,核心诉求明确
审题是高分作文的根基,本篇范文在审题立意上完全契合题意,做到“无偏差、不遗漏”,具体体现在以下三点:
· 紧扣“二选一”核心任务
题目要求从 A、B 两门编程课中推荐其一。范文首句即亮明立场:“I recommend Course B”,态度鲜明,绝不出现“两者皆可”的模糊表述,直接回应核心诉求。
· 覆盖“对比”关键要求
题目强调“对比给出理由”,而非仅罗列优势。范文采用“先抑后扬 + 直接对比”逻辑:
• 先客观肯定 A 课优点:analyzes specific cases in detail;
• 再指出其不足:all-online teaching lacks interaction;solely final exam evaluation is high-stake;
• 随后对应阐述 B 课优势:teaches from easy to difficult;online-offline combined;comprehensive assessment;
并以 However / In contrast 等逻辑标记强化对比,充分满足“对比”硬性要求。
· 贴合“外国朋友 Kiven”隐性场景
收信人为外国朋友,推荐需兼顾实用与易懂。编程对基础要求高,范文强调 B 课“gradually building a solid foundation”“continuous feedback”,贴合初学者需求,避免复杂或高风险方案,立意兼具针对性与人文关怀。
二、写作思路:逻辑分层清晰,结构严谨完整
范文采用“总—分—总”书信结构,每一部分功能明确,并通过“对比论证”深化理由,符合“建议类书信”的写作逻辑。
· 开头:开门见山,快速入题
“I know you're torn between… so I'm writing to offer my advice”
• 用 torn between 体现对朋友纠结心态的理解;
• 立即给出核心推荐 recommend Course B,避免冗余,符合高考英语作文“简洁高效”评分倾向。
· 主体:对比论证,理由分层
先 A(优+劣)→ 后 B(优),每条理由紧扣“授课方式、讲课方法、评估”三大维度,逻辑链完整:
• 讲课方法与授课方式
A:specific cases(优) vs. all-online(劣,缺互动);
B:from easy to difficult(优,打基础) + online-offline combined(优,灵活+线下指导)。
• 评估方式
A:solely final exam(劣,高风险);
B:class performance + homework + final exam(优,全过程反馈)。
通过“学习风险”与“效果跟踪”角度深化说服力。
· 结尾:总结升华,呼应开头
“All in all, Course B offers a more balanced and less stressful learning experience.”
• “balanced”=线上线下+难易梯度;
• “less stressful”=综合评估;
形成“提出建议—论证建议—强化建议”闭环,结构严谨。
三、语言部分:精准、多样、贴合语境
高考英语作文对语言的要求是“准确表达、句式多样、语域恰当”,该范文在语言层面完全达标。
· 词汇精准
• 场景相关:assessment / final exam / class performance / homework / all-online teaching / online and offline combined / online materials;
• 情感与逻辑:torn between / high-stake / comprehensively reflects / continuous feedback。
· 句式多样
• 复合句:
Course A analyzes specific cases in detail, which is great for delving deep into certain topics.
If you have an off-day during the exam, it could significantly affect your overall grade.
What’s more, its assessment… comprehensively reflects your learning process.
• 简单句:
However, its all-online teaching might lack the face-to-face interaction.
In contrast, Course B teaches from easy to difficult.
长短句交替,张弛有度。
· 语域恰当
• 称呼与结尾:Dear Kiven / Best regards / I hope this helps you make a decision;
• 语气:多用 you 作主语,建议性、分析性表达(I recommend… / This means you get…),避免命令式,亲切自然。
附:学霸作文1篇供参考
Dear Kevin,
When it comes to making a choice between Course A and Course B for your programming study, I am more than willing to share my in-depth insights with you.
Course A employs a teaching method centered around specific analysis and is conducted online, with the evaluation hinging solely on a final exam. Conversely, Course B adopts a distinct approach. Its teaching method unfolds from the elementary to the advanced level, and it seamlessly integrates both online and offline teaching modalities. The assessment of Course B encompasses classroom performance, homework, and a final exam.
I wholeheartedly recommend Course B. This recommendation stems not only from its varied teaching methodologies but also from its comprehensive evaluation system. Were you to opt for Course A, you would likely discover that the single - mode assessment of the final exam fails to comprehensively mirror your actual learning trajectory. In stark contrast, Course B, with its multi - faceted assessment, is capable of providing a more precise measurement of your progress. Moreover, only by integrating online and offline teaching, as Course B does, can you enjoy a more flexible and interactive learning journey. It is precisely through this integration that you are more prone to gain a profound understanding of the intricate knowledge of programming.
I sincerely hope that you will make a judicious choice based on my analysis.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
真题溯源·考向感知
——溯源真题逻辑,感知高考考向
题组一 高考真题
(2014年上海高考英语作文真题)
学校英语报正在改版,拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化)中去除一个,并从三个备选栏目(时尚、职业规划、读者反馈)中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞,给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容:
1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由;
2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。
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Dear Editor/ Dear Sir or Madam/ To whom it may concern, (称呼)
Hearing that our school English Newspaper is collecting public suggestions for some revisions, I’m writing to share with you my personal opinions on which columns should be deleted and which should be added. (写信背景 + 写信目的)
On one hand, the one that should be removed can be the entertainment column.(论点一) In my view, the entertainment part has nothing to do with our study. Therefore, students who are keen on entertainment news will easily overlook the significance of studying other meaningful columns. (论据一)Besides, as a school newspaper whose aim is to guide students in cultivating sound values, it will easily go off its course with too much entertainment news in. (论据二)
On the other hand, I believe it would be better if the career planning part could be added to our newspaper. (论点二)From my perspective, learning about some job-related information will not only help students figure out their interests, but also will surely motivate them to study harder to approach their dreams. (论据一 + 二)
From what has been mentioned above, I suggest abandoning the entertainment column and adding a career planning part to the school newspaper. (重申观点) I would appreciate it if my suggestions above could be taken into account. May the adjustments of our newspaper be successful!(升华观点) (202words)
Yours Sincerely,
Cheng Fei
题组二 名校真题
1.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
【来源】上海外国语大学闵行外国语中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中英语试题
学校获拨一批专项经费用于对以下一项设施进行修缮更新:1、体育馆;2、图书馆;3、实验室,就此征求学生的意见。假如你是该校学生李华,请写一封信给校长,你的信必须包括:
1. 选择对哪一项进行修缮;
2. 选择的理由;
3. 就如何改进给出建议。
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【答案】Dear President,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to express my opinion on which facility should be renovated with the special funds. In my view, the library should be the first choice.
The library is the knowledge center of our school. It provides us with a wealth of learning resources. However, the current library facilities are relatively old, and the number of books is limited. Renovating the library can create a better learning environment for us. We can have more comfortable reading areas and a larger collection of books.
To make the renovation more successful, I suggest adding some modern facilities, such as e-books and audio-visual materials. At the same time, we can also improve the management of the library to ensure the orderliness and convenience of borrowing books.
Thank you for your attention. I hope my suggestions can be helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生李华的身份给校长写一封信,在体育馆、图书馆、实验室三项设施中选择一项进行修缮更新,并说明选择的理由和给出改进建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
修缮:renovate → repair
提供:provide → offer/supply
确保:ensure → guarantee/make sure
建议:suggestion → proposal
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Renovating the library can create a better learning environment for us.
拓展句:Renovating the library is an initiative that can create a better learning environment for us.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to express my opinion on which facility should be renovated with the special funds. (运用了which引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope my suggestions can be helpful. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
2.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below.
【来源】上海市风华中学2025-2026学年高三上学期10月期中考试英语试题
假设你是风华中学高三学生李华。你所在的学校“创意社团(the Creative Society)”正在策划一项面向大宁社区青年的推广活动(a promotion campaign),现有三个备选项目:
① 推广一个城市漫步主题路线(a Citywalk theme route);
② 推广一个“旧物改造”环保工作坊(an “Upcycling” environmental workshop);
③ 推广一个社区“技能交换”平台(a community “Skill Swap” platform)。
请你给社团委员会(the Society Board)写一封信,提交你的想法。信中必须包含:
1. 你选择推广的一个项目;
2. 你选择该项目的理由;
3. 你的详细推广计划。
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【答案】Dear Society Board,
I’m Li Hua from Class X, Grade 3. I’m writing to share my idea about the promotion campaign. I think the “Upcycling” environmental workshop is a great choice.
The reason for choosing this project is that it both protects the environment and encourages creativity. By transforming old items, we reduce waste and save resources, while also bringing people together and fostering a sense of community.
Here’s my detailed promotion plan. Firstly, set up a booth in the community center to demonstrate upcycled products and explain the concept. Secondly, organize workshops with professional designers or DIY enthusiasts teaching people to make upcycled products. Thirdly, hold an upcycling competition where people bring old items to transform. The best works will be awarded and exhibited.
I believe these activities will attract more people to upcycling and our workshop. Thank you for considering my proposal.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生从三个备选项目中选择一个并给社团委员会写信提交想法,包括选择的项目、理由及详细推广计划。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
选择:choice → option
培养:foster → cultivate
解释:explain → account for
吸引:attract → appeal to/draw
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, set up a booth in the community center to demonstrate upcycled products and explain the concept.
拓展句:Firstly, set up a booth in the community center where you can demonstrate upcycled products and explain the concept.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The reason for choosing this project is that it both protects the environment and encourages creativity. (运用了连接词that引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2] Thirdly, hold an upcycling competition where people bring old items to transform.(运用了关系副词where引导的限制性定语从句)
3.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
【来源】上海市杨浦区控江中学2025-2026学年高三上学期9月测评英语试卷
你校体育组在校园网就高三体育课程改革广泛征求意见,并提出两种方案:一、取消统一大课间操,改为自由安排。二、调整传统课程,增设健美操(aerobics)和太极拳(Tai Chi)作为选修课程。请你在论坛上发帖谈谈自己的看法,内容包括:你赞成哪种高三体育课程改革?并简要说明理由。
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【答案】
My View on PE Curriculum Reform for Senior Three
Recently, our school has proposed two plans to reform the PE curriculum for Senior Three students. From my perspective, I strongly support the second plan introducing aerobics and Tai Chi as optional courses.
Firstly, although Senior Three students face heavy academic pressure, physical exercise should not be cancelled. Instead, it should be made more diverse and appealing. Traditional exercises like aerobics are energetic and can help relieve stress, while Tai Chi is gentle and helps improve concentration.
Secondly, offering choices respects students’ individual preferences. Some may prefer high-intensity workouts, while others enjoy relaxing mind-body practices. Allowing students to choose what suits them can better motivate participation.
Therefore, adjusting the original curriculum rather than simply canceling group exercises is both practical and beneficial. It keeps us active while making sports more enjoyable and personalized. I hope you will consider this suggestion.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文,要求考生在校园论坛上发帖,针对学校提出的两种高三体育课程改革方案,表明个人支持的方案并阐述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选修课:optional courses → elective courses/ selective classes
缓解压力:relieve stress → reduce pressure/ ease tension
尊重学生的个人偏好:respect students’ individual preferences → honor students’ personal choices/ cater to students’ individual tastes
激发参与度:motivate participation → encourage engagement/ boost involvement
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Recently, our school has proposed two plans to reform the PE curriculum for Senior Three students.
拓展句:Recently, our school has put forward two distinct proposals aimed at reforming the physical education curriculum for Senior Three students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, although Senior Three students face heavy academic pressure, physical exercise should not be cancelled. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】Allowing students to choose what suits them can better motivate participation. (运用了动名词短语Allowing...作主语和what引导的宾语从句)
3.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
【来源】(2025年浦东新区一模)
明启中学将组织学生开展为期三天的研学活动,现有三个主题,分别为:“访问友校”“走进大学”“深入企业”。假如你是该校学生李华,请写一封申请信给负责人,报名参加其中一项活动,内容须包括:
1. 你选择的主题;
2. 你希望学到的内容;
3. 你想学这些内容的理由。
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a student from Mingqi High School. I am writing to express my keen interest in participating in the research activity and apply for one of the themes.
I choose the theme of "Walking into Universities". I hope to learn about the diverse majors offered in universities, the campus culture, and the learning atmosphere. Additionally, I am eager to understand the admission requirements and career prospects of different majors.
The reasons for my choice are as follows. Firstly, as a senior high school student, I am facing the important decision of choosing a university and major. By visiting universities, I can gain a clearer understanding of my future study and career direction. Secondly, experiencing the campus culture and learning atmosphere will inspire me to work harder and pursue my academic goals.
I believe this activity will be a valuable opportunity for my personal growth and future development. Looking forward to your approval.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文章写作框架:
引言:介绍自己是明启中学的学生李华,表明写信目的是申请参加研学活动。
描述选择的主题:明确说明自己选择的主题是 “走进大学”。
说明希望学到的内容:详细阐述希望在这个主题活动中学到的内容,如大学的专业设置、校园文化、学习氛围、录取要求和专业前景等。
阐述选择的理由:解释为什么希望学到这些内容,从面临大学专业选择、受校园文化激励等方面说明理由。
强调活动的意义:强调参加这个活动对自己个人成长和未来发展的重要性。
总结:表达期待得到批准。
写作思路:
确定主题:从三个主题中选择 “走进大学”,并在信中明确说明。
描述期望内容:具体列出在大学主题活动中希望学到的各个方面,让负责人了解你的学习目标。
解释理由:结合自身情况,如面临大学选择、追求学术目标等,说明为什么这些内容对自己很重要。
强调意义:强调活动对自己成长和未来的积极影响,增加申请的说服力。
注意语言表达:使用恰当的语言和语气,表达自己的热情和诚意。
检查语法和拼写:确保申请信没有语法错误和拼写错误,提高信件的质量。
重难点词汇、句型和句式归纳:
研学活动 research activity
申请 apply for
主题 theme
多样的专业 diverse majors
校园文化 campus culture
学习氛围 learning atmosphere
录取要求 admission requirements
职业前景 career prospects
个人成长 personal growth
句型 / 句式 中文解释 英文
介绍自己 Introducing oneself I am Li Hua, a student from Mingqi High School.
表明目的 Stating the purpose I am writing to express my keen interest in participating in the research activity and apply for one of the themes.
选择主题 Choosing a theme I choose the theme of "Walking into Universities".
说明希望学到的内容 Stating what one hopes to learn I hope to learn about the diverse majors offered in universities, the campus culture, and the learning atmosphere.
阐述理由 Explaining reasons The reasons for my choice are as follows. Firstly... Secondly...
强调意义 Emphasizing significance I believe this activity will be a valuable opportunity for my personal growth and future development.
结束语 Closing remarks Looking forward to your approval.
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