2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习---戎装守责，温情暖心 导学案

该高中英语导学案围绕续写短文展开，引导学生分析文本角色、情节线及情感变化，学习通过细节描写和逻辑衔接完成续写。以文本分析为导入，梳理“卫兵执勤—偶遇父母—情绪波动—坚守岗位”的情节脉络，提供情节构造和段落框架作为学习支架。 资料特色在于结合文本分析与续写实践，通过角色情感线梳理和续写框架引导，帮助学生提升语言表达的逻辑性与连贯性。注重培养学生的思维品质（情节推断与创造）、语言能力（细节描写与主题升华），同时渗透职业担当与亲情温暖的文化意识，助力学生在实践中掌握续写技巧，提升综合语言运用能力。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The King’s Guard, who are usually stationed around Buckingham Palace, was moved to tears on what seemed like a normal day. While sitting atop her horse, the woman stood as tourists, cameras in hand, lined the streets, eager to take pictures with her. But she didn’t know that her parents had decided to visit London and happened to see her post among the crowd. Their eyes widened in recognition, filled with pride and a hint of disbelief. Seeing her parents among the crowds, the guard’s serious face softened into a rare smile. “That’s her dad.” A bystander called out, noticing the emotional exchange. The word spread like wildfire and the crowd’s murmur grew louder, a mix of curiosity and awe. Her parents reached out to touch the horse’s flank, whispering words of encouragement to their daughter. The guard nodded when asked a question by her mother, before breaking down in tears, bending her head forward and using her white gloves to wipe her eyes. A fellow tourist, moved by the tender scene, began filming the interaction. The video soon found its way onto social media, spreading warmth across the digital landscape. One person wrote, “I am amazed at the speed at which she pulls herself back, blink and you miss her initial reaction.” Another added, “What a special moment. I hope they all got to spend a little time together after her watch. She is a great Guard and her parents should be proud of her and what she does.” 续写要求 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已给出。 　 Soon, she regained her self‑control and returned to her official post.　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　When her shift finally came to an end, the guard hurried toward her waiting parents. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　白金汉宫的皇家卫兵日常坚守岗位，庄重肃穆—— _________________ ——女卫兵执勤时偶遇前来伦敦的父母，家人意外重逢满心惊喜与自豪—— _________________ ——卫兵见到亲人，严肃的面容展露温柔笑意，围观人群纷纷关注这场温情互动—— _________________ ——父母轻声鼓励女儿，卫兵难掩情绪落泪，场面格外动人—— _________________ ——游客记录下温情一幕，视频走红网络，收获无数网友感动与称赞—— _________________ ——大众感慨卫兵的自律与坚守，为这份职业担当与亲情温暖动容 4. 细节问答 Where does the female guard usually work? ：___________________________________ What unexpected thing happened to the guard that day?：_________________________________ How did the guard react when seeing her parents?：________________________________________________ What did tourists and netizens think of the scene?：__________________________________________ What is the core theme of the story?：_____________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　卫兵恪尽职守，日常庄重执勤→_________________ →父母意外现身，惊喜重逢→_________________ →铁面柔情，流露难得温情，打动围观人群→_________________ →亲人暖心鼓励，卫兵情绪动容落泪→_________________ →温情画面被记录，全网传播温暖→_________________ →网友盛赞卫兵自律与坚守，感慨亲情力量→_________________ →（续写）卫兵迅速平复情绪，坚守岗位履职→（续写）执勤结束与父母团聚，感悟亲情与担当的意义 6．情感线 　　The guard: solemn and professional→___________→touched and emotional→___________→calm and devoted→___________；Parents: proud and joyful；Crowds: curious and moved 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　分词作状语、定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句、非谓语结构 ___________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　职业担当、铁骨柔情、亲情温暖、坚守自律、平凡感动类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1： Soon, she regained her self‑control and returned to her official post. 　　衔接句1——How did she adjust herself? What did she do on duty? How did the crowd react? ________________________________________________________________________ 　　Paragraph 2： When her shift finally came to an end, the guard hurried toward her waiting parents. 　　衔接句2——What did she do after meeting her parents? What feelings did she have? What theme is elevated? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：很快，她平复情绪、恢复自控，重新坚守岗位。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 　　第二段：执勤任务终于结束，这名卫兵快步奔向等候已久的父母。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四. 段落续写 　　Soon, she regained her self‑control and returned to her official post. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　When her shift finally came to an end, the guard hurried toward her waiting parents. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【标准答案】 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　女皇家卫兵：坚守岗位、自律克制、内心柔软、兼具职业担当与温情；卫兵父母：温柔慈爱、为女儿骄傲、默默支持女儿；围观游客与网友：善良温暖、被真情打动、传递善意。 2．视角 　　第三人称 3．时空线 　　白金汉宫的皇家卫兵日常坚守岗位，庄重肃穆——履职尽责，作风严谨 ——女卫兵执勤时偶遇前来伦敦的父母，家人意外重逢满心惊喜与自豪——意外相逢，心生暖意 ——卫兵见到亲人，严肃的面容展露温柔笑意，围观人群纷纷关注这场温情互动——铁面柔情，触动众人 ——父母轻声鼓励女儿，卫兵难掩情绪落泪，场面格外动人——亲情暖心，流露真情 ——游客记录下温情一幕，视频走红网络，收获无数网友感动与称赞——温情传播，治愈人心 ——大众感慨卫兵的自律与坚守，为这份职业担当与亲情温暖动容——众人称赞，传递美好 4. 细节问答 Where does the female guard usually work? ：She works as a King’s Guard stationed around Buckingham Palace. What unexpected thing happened to the guard that day?：Her parents came to visit London and accidentally saw her while she was on duty. How did the guard react when seeing her parents?：Her serious face softened, and she finally broke down in tears after communicating with her parents. What did tourists and netizens think of the scene?：They were deeply moved, praising her professionalism, self-discipline and the warm family bond. What is the core theme of the story?：Professional duty requires perseverance and self-discipline, while family love is the warmest backing that supports us to stick to our responsibilities. 5．情节线 　　卫兵恪尽职守，日常庄重执勤→坚守岗位，严肃自律 →父母意外现身，惊喜重逢→意外相逢，满心温暖 →铁面柔情，流露难得温情，打动围观人群→刚柔并济，触动众人 →亲人暖心鼓励，卫兵情绪动容落泪→真情流露，分外动人 →温情画面被记录，全网传播温暖→温情出圈，治愈大众 →网友盛赞卫兵自律与坚守，感慨亲情力量→收获认可，传递善意 →（续写）卫兵迅速平复情绪，坚守岗位履职→克制自我，坚守职责 →（续写）执勤结束与父母团聚，感悟亲情与担当的意义→亲情赋能，升华成长 6．情感线 　　The guard: solemn and professional→surprised and delighted→touched and emotional→self-disciplined and calm→calm and devoted→grateful and warm；Parents: proud and joyful；Crowds: curious and moved 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：一名白金汉宫皇家女卫兵执勤时偶遇远道而来的父母，动容落泪却迅速克制情绪坚守岗位，温情一幕传遍网络，诠释了职业坚守的自律与亲情的温暖力量。 　　英文：A female King’s Guard was moved to tears when meeting her parents unexpectedly during duty. She quickly regained self-control to stick to her post. The warm scene spread online, showing the beauty of professional dedication and family love. 8. 句式 　　分词作状语：Moved by her parents’ encouragement, the guard couldn’t hold back her tears. 定语从句：The warm moment people witnessed touched countless netizens. 宾语从句：People believed that self-discipline and family love made her extraordinary. 状语从句：Though she was filled with emotion, she still stuck to her duty strictly. 非谓语结构：The video spread quickly online, warming countless people’s hearts. 9. 本文主题 　　职业担当、铁骨柔情、亲情温暖、坚守自律、平凡感动类：身着戎装坚守职责，心怀温柔不负亲情，自律是职业信仰，亲情是一生底气。 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1： Soon, she regained her self‑control and returned to her official post. 衔接句1：She adjusted her mood quickly, restored her solemn posture and focused on her duty, winning people’s sincere admiration for her strong self-discipline and professionalism. 　　Paragraph 2： When her shift finally came to an end, the guard hurried toward her waiting parents. 衔接句2：She reunited with her parents warmly, shared her work and feelings, and realized that family love is the most powerful support for her to stick to her career and move forward bravely. 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：很快，她平复情绪、恢复自控，重新坚守岗位。 →①迅速整理状态、端正身姿，恢复严肃庄重的执勤模样；→②无视围观目光，专注履职，尽显职业素养；→③众人目睹其超强自律，心生敬佩； 　　第二段：执勤任务终于结束，这名卫兵快步奔向等候已久的父母。 →①与父母温暖相拥，倾诉心底感动与思念；→②父母暖心宽慰，为她的坚守与成长倍感自豪；→③领悟亲情的力量，将化作前行的不竭动力。 四、标准续写范文（150词左右） 　　Soon, she regained her self‑control and returned to her official post. Taking a deep breath, she straightened her back and wore her usual solemn expression again. Despite the lingering excitement and warmth in her heart, she strictly stuck to her duty, ignoring the curious glances from the surrounding crowd. The tourists gradually calmed down, speaking in soft voices so as not to disturb her work. Every move she made remained steady and professional, showing the excellent quality of a qualified King’s Guard. 　　When her shift finally came to an end, the guard hurried toward her waiting parents. She rushed into her parents’ warm embrace instantly, with tears of joy rolling down her cheeks. Her parents hugged her tightly, praising her for her perseverance and excellence. They shared their touching feelings about this unexpected reunion. This precious experience taught her that behind every rigid duty lies warm family love, which always serves as her strongest support and endless motivation to move forward bravely. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $