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2026秋季精品讲义 初三(上册)英语-新教材人教版九年级全一册
第5讲 用英文介绍“我尊敬的人”
语篇精读+写作(教师版)
阅读写作课 ● 人物语篇精读、高频句式仿写、人物类英语写作
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【课时安排】
本讲建议 2 课时:第 1 课时完成人物语篇精读与句式仿写,第 2 课时完成人物类写作实战。可随单元“人物/榜样”主题推进,也可作为“读写专题”独立使用。
【学习目标】
学完这一讲,你能——
1.能读懂一篇介绍“我尊敬的人”的英文语篇,说清作者“敬佩谁、敬佩什么、敬佩带来什么”;
2.能用“When it comes to…, the first one to come into my mind is…”“时间状语从句+现在分词伴随状语”“Whenever…+it is…who…强调句型”三个句式正确造句;
3.能按“人物简介及事迹→意义或启示”的结构,独立完成一篇介绍中国历史人物(或身边可敬之人)的英文短文。
本讲把“读一个人物语篇→拆它的好句式→自己写一个人物”一条线走通。落到考场上,人物类话题是写作和阅读里的常客:写“我尊敬的人/榜样人物”,读“人物传记类语篇”。这一讲只抓三件事——会读主线、会仿句式、会写人物。
一、撞墙导入:先撞一次墙
先做个测试。读下面两个开头,凭直觉判断哪个更能“抓住人”:
(A)My English teacher is Miss Wang. She is a good teacher. I like her.
(B)When it comes to the person I respect most, the first one to come into my mind is my English teacher Miss Wang.
想一想:两句信息几乎一样,为什么(B)一听就让人想往下读?——卡壳处,往往就是本讲要补的东西:同样是“介绍一个人”,高手先亮出“最值得敬佩的人”,再一步步说“为什么”。
考点挂钩:人物类话题既考阅读里的“把握人物品质”,也考写作里的“介绍一个人”,是中考语篇与作文的高频题源。
二、文章精读:The Person I Respect
(一)听一听:先听懂话题
先听(读)下面中文段落,把“这个人好在哪里”的脉络听出来,再进英文语篇对号入座。
“说到我最尊敬的人,第一个浮现在我脑海里的是我的英语老师王老师。她是一位热心肠又尽职尽责的老师,关怀和教导我们时,就好像我们是她的亲生孩子一样。她的教学方法灵活多变。当我在英语学习中遇到难题时,她会耐心倾听我的困惑,仔细为我讲解,帮我克服难关。作为青少年学生,我们有时会陷入迷茫失落、满心沮丧的境地。每当我们遇到困难时,总是她帮我们熬过那段艰难的时光。她赢得了我们所有学生的深深尊敬,也永远铭记在我们的心中。”
(二)精读语篇:挖空精读
读下面英文语篇,注意文中划线标注的关键表达(它们就是人物写作的高分素材),边读边想:作者从哪里看出“她值得尊敬”。
When it comes to the person I 1. respect most, the first one to come into my mind is my English teacher Miss Wang.
She is a 2. warm-hearted and dedicated teacher, who 3. tends and 4. instructs us 5. as6. if we were her children. She has a flexible 7. teaching8. method. When I 9. encounter problems in English learning, she listens to me 10. patiently and 11. explains them 12. carefully, helping me 13. overcome the 14. difficulties. 15. As
teenage students, we are sometimes put into 16. situations where we get 17. lost and fall into 18. despair. 19. Whenever we are in trouble, it is always her who 20. carries us 21. through the 22. tough23. period.
She has won great 24. respect from all of us students and is deeply rooted 25. in our mind.
(三)读后三问:检验读透没
读完合上书,回答三个问题:
1.作者最尊敬的人是谁?
2.作者从哪几个方面说明她“值得尊敬”?
3.文章最后,作者想表达什么?
点拨:这三点正好就是人物写作的骨架——敬佩谁→为什么敬佩→敬佩带来什么。答案:①王老师;②热心肠而尽职、教学方法灵活、耐心讲解帮学生克服难关、陪学生熬过艰难时光——品格+行为;③她赢得所有学生深深尊敬,永远铭记在心。
(四)语言点速记:写人物能用上的高分表达
1. warm-hearted and dedicated:热心肠而尽职尽责(形容人物品格,比 good/kind 更显分量)
2. tends and instructs us as if we were her children:关怀教导我们如亲子女(as if 后用虚拟语气,故用 were)
3. encounter problems / overcome the difficulties:遇到难题/克服难关(书面高频,比 meet/get over 正式)
4. get lost and fall into despair:陷入迷茫、满心沮丧(情绪类高分短语)
5. carries us through the tough period:帮我们熬过艰难时光(carry through 比 help through 更地道)
三、句型仿写:讲一个,仿一个
这一板块的做法:先把原句和“仿写句型”讲清,立刻给一个中文提示让学生仿写,再看参考译文对答案。别攒着一起做。
【原句 1】
When it comes to the person I respect most, the first one to come into my mind is my English teacher Miss Wang.
【仿写句型】
When it comes to…, the first one to come into my mind is…(谈及……,第一个浮现在我脑海里的是……)
【仿写】
中文提示:谈及我最喜欢的运动,第一个浮现在我脑海中的是篮球。
参考:When it comes to my favourite sport, the first one to come into my mind is basketball.
【原句 2】
When I encounter problems in English learning, she listens to me patiently and explains them carefully, helping me overcome the difficulties.
【仿写句型】
时间状语从句+主句,现在分词作伴随状语
【仿写】
中文提示:当我在学习中感到迷茫时,朋友耐心陪伴我,帮助我重拾信心。(迷茫 feel lost in)
参考:When I feel lost in my study, my friend stays with me patiently, helping me get confidence back.
【原句 3】
Whenever we are in trouble, it is always her who carries us through the tough period.
【仿写句型】
Whenever 引导状语从句+it is…who…强调句型
【仿写】
中文提示:每当我面临困难时,正是父母一直给予我力量。
参考:Whenever I face difficulties, it is my parents who keep giving me strength.
【仿写三连测】(分层,限时完成)
基础层:用句型 1 把“第一个浮现在我脑海里的人是妈妈”译成英文。
中档层:用句型 3 把“每当我觉得孤单时,正是朋友陪在我身边”译成英文。
挑战层:用句型 2 翻译“当我准备英语演讲时,王老师耐心指导我,帮我克服紧张”。
【答案】
基础层:The first one to come into my mind is my mother.
中档层:Whenever I feel lonely, it is my friend who stays with me.
挑战层:When I prepare for my English speech, Miss Wang guides me patiently, helping me overcome my nervousness.
四、写作实战:用英文讲中国故事
【题目】
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1. 人物简介及事迹;2. 意义或启示。
【参考范文·中文】
“在广受赞誉的中国历史人物当中,在我看来,范仲淹是其中最具影响力的人物之一。范仲淹是宋代著名文学家、政治家,为社会作出了巨大贡献,备受世人敬仰。例如,他力主建立全国学堂体系,这对中国的教育制度产生了深远的影响。此外,最令我动容的是他那著名的人生信条:先天下之忧而忧,后天下之乐而乐。范仲淹是如此不凡的榜样,他时刻激励我立志成为一名拥有社会责任感的人。”
【参考范文·英文】
Among the widely acknowledged Chinese historical figures, Fan Zhongyan stands out as one of the most influential ones in my opinion.
Known as a famous writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan made tremendous contributions to society and was highly respected. For example, he insisted on founding a national school system, which had a far-reaching influence on the Chinese educational system. Besides, it is his famous philosophy of life that impresses me most: “Be the first to worry about the troubles across the land, the last to enjoy universal happiness.”
Fan Zhongyan is such an extraordinary example that he always encourages me to commit myself to being a man with a sense of social responsibility.
【范文怎么用:结构拆解(写作支架)】
开头:点出“谁是我最欣赏/最尊敬的人”(Among the widely acknowledged…, …stands out as one of the most influential…)。
主体:简介+事迹(Known as…, he made…;For example, he insisted on…, which…)。
结尾:最令我动容的是……(it is…that…强调句型)+对我立志的影响(he always encourages me to…)。
提示:本讲句型仿写里的三个句式,在这篇范文里都能对号入座——开头句型 1、强调句型 3、分词伴随句型 2。
【分层写作任务】
基础层:用句型 1 把“谈及我尊敬的人,第一个浮现在我脑海里的是我的语文老师”译成英文。
答案:When it comes to the person I respect, the first one to come into my mind is my Chinese teacher.
中档层:按“开头亮人→中间写事迹→结尾谈意义”三结构,用本讲句式介绍一位你尊敬的人(同学/老师/家人),不少于 60 词。
挑战层:用英文讲中国故事,介绍一位中国历史人物(除范仲淹外),结构完整、用上本讲句型,80 词左右。
五、带走型收尾:本讲自检清单
合上本讲,你能做到吗?
1.能一句话说清人物语篇的三条主线(敬佩谁→为什么→意义);
2.能默写出三个仿写句型,并各造一句;
3.能说出人物写作的结构(简介及事迹→意义或启示),并知道常用的高分词。
【考场提醒】
人物类写作得分要点:开头亮出人物+一句点明敬佩/影响力;中间用“事迹+品质”支撑;结尾落到“对我/对世人的意义”。避免通篇“I think she is good”式的空洞评价。
六、课后作业:人物类读写巩固
Task 1 用本讲三个句型补全句子
1.谈及我最尊敬的科学家,第一个浮现在我脑海里的是袁隆平。(句型 1)
2.每当我因失败而沮丧时,正是妈妈一直鼓励我。(句型 3)
3.当我在学习上遇到困难时,老师耐心指导我,帮助我不断进步。(句型 2)
【答案】
1. When it comes to the scientist I respect most, the first one to come into my mind is Yuan Longping.
2. Whenever I feel down because of failure, it is my mother who keeps encouraging me.
3. When I meet difficulties in my study, my teacher guides me patiently, helping me make steady progress.
Task 2 阅读短文并回答问题
Yuan Longping, known as the “father of hybrid rice”, devoted his whole life to rice research. When it comes to the Chinese scientist I respect most, the first one to come into my mind is him. He was such a devoted scientist that he kept working in the fields even in his eighties. Whenever people worry about food, it is his work that gives them confidence. He has won great respect from people all over the world and will be remembered forever.
1.Why is Yuan Longping called the “father of hybrid rice”?
2.What did Yuan Longping still do in his eighties? What do people think of him?
【答案】
1. Because he devoted his whole life to rice research and succeeded in developing hybrid rice.
2. He kept working in the fields even in his eighties. People respect him greatly, and he will be remembered forever.
Task 3 写作小任务
仿照本讲范文结构,用英文写一段话介绍一位你尊敬的人(不少于 50 词):开头用句型 1 点出人物;中间写一件/一类事迹;结尾用强调句型或“意义”句收束。
【参考示例】
When it comes to the person I respect most, the first one to come into my mind is my father. Whenever I meet difficulties, it is he who always encourages me and helps me find a way out. Thanks to his support, I become braver and more confident.
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2026秋季精品讲义 初三(上册)英语-新教材人教版九年级全一册
第5讲 用英文介绍“我尊敬的人”
语篇精读+写作(学生版)
阅读写作课 ● 人物语篇精读、高频句式仿写、人物类英语写作
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【课时安排】
本讲建议 2 课时:第 1 课时完成人物语篇精读与句式仿写,第 2 课时完成人物类写作实战。可随单元“人物/榜样”主题推进,也可作为“读写专题”独立使用。
【学习目标】
学完这一讲,你能——
1.能读懂一篇介绍“我尊敬的人”的英文语篇,说清作者“敬佩谁、敬佩什么、敬佩带来什么”;
2.能用“When it comes to…, the first one to come into my mind is…”“时间状语从句+现在分词伴随状语”“Whenever…+it is…who…强调句型”三个句式正确造句;
3.能按“人物简介及事迹→意义或启示”的结构,独立完成一篇介绍中国历史人物(或身边可敬之人)的英文短文。
本讲把“读一个人物语篇→拆它的好句式→自己写一个人物”一条线走通。落到考场上,人物类话题是写作和阅读里的常客:写“我尊敬的人/榜样人物”,读“人物传记类语篇”。这一讲只抓三件事——会读主线、会仿句式、会写人物。
一、撞墙导入:先撞一次墙
先做个测试。读下面两个开头,凭直觉判断哪个更能“抓住人”:
(A)My English teacher is Miss Wang. She is a good teacher. I like her.
(B)When it comes to the person I respect most, the first one to come into my mind is my English teacher Miss Wang.
想一想:两句信息几乎一样,为什么(B)一听就让人想往下读?——卡壳处,往往就是本讲要补的东西:同样是“介绍一个人”,高手先亮出“最值得敬佩的人”,再一步步说“为什么”。
考点挂钩:人物类话题既考阅读里的“把握人物品质”,也考写作里的“介绍一个人”,是中考语篇与作文的高频题源。
二、文章精读:The Person I Respect
(一)听一听:先听懂话题
先听(读)下面中文段落,把“这个人好在哪里”的脉络听出来,再进英文语篇对号入座。
“说到我最尊敬的人,第一个浮现在我脑海里的是我的英语老师王老师。她是一位热心肠又尽职尽责的老师,关怀和教导我们时,就好像我们是她的亲生孩子一样。她的教学方法灵活多变。当我在英语学习中遇到难题时,她会耐心倾听我的困惑,仔细为我讲解,帮我克服难关。作为青少年学生,我们有时会陷入迷茫失落、满心沮丧的境地。每当我们遇到困难时,总是她帮我们熬过那段艰难的时光。她赢得了我们所有学生的深深尊敬,也永远铭记在我们的心中。”
(二)精读语篇:挖空精读
读下面英文语篇,注意文中划线标注的关键表达(它们就是人物写作的高分素材),边读边想:作者从哪里看出“她值得尊敬”。
When it comes to the person I ____1____ most, the first one to come into my mind is my English teacher Miss Wang.
She is a ____2____ teacher, who ____3____ and ____4____ us ____5____ ____6____ we were her children. She has a flexible ____7____ ____8____. When I ____9____ problems in English learning, she listens to me ____10____ and ____11____ them ____12____, helping me ____13____ the ____14____.
____15____ teenage students, we are sometimes put into ____16____ where we get ____17____ and fall into ____18____. ____19____ we are in trouble, it is always her who ____20____ us ____21____ the ____22____ ____23____.
She has won great ____24____ from all of us students and is deeply rooted ____25____ in our mind.
(三)读后三问:检验读透没
读完合上书,回答三个问题:
1.作者最尊敬的人是谁?
2.作者从哪几个方面说明她“值得尊敬”?
3.文章最后,作者想表达什么?
点拨:这三点正好就是人物写作的骨架——敬佩谁→为什么敬佩→敬佩带来什么。带着这条骨架去文中找依据。
【我的回答】
1.____________ 2.____________ 3.____________
______________________
______________________
______________________
______________________
(四)语言点速记:写人物能用上的高分表达
1. warm-hearted and dedicated:热心肠而尽职尽责(形容人物品格,比 good/kind 更显分量)
2. tends and instructs us as if we were her children:关怀教导我们如亲子女(as if 后用虚拟语气,故用 were)
3. encounter problems / overcome the difficulties:遇到难题/克服难关(书面高频,比 meet/get over 正式)
4. get lost and fall into despair:陷入迷茫、满心沮丧(情绪类高分短语)
5. carries us through the tough period:帮我们熬过艰难时光(carry through 比 help through 更地道)
三、句型仿写:讲一个,仿一个
这一板块的做法:先把原句和“仿写句型”讲清,立刻给一个中文提示让学生仿写。别攒着一起做。
【原句 1】
When it comes to the person I respect most, the first one to come into my mind is my English teacher Miss Wang.
【仿写句型】
When it comes to…, the first one to come into my mind is…(谈及……,第一个浮现在我脑海里的是……)
【仿写】
中文提示:谈及我最喜欢的运动,第一个浮现在我脑海中的是篮球。
【我的仿写 1】
用“When it comes to…, the first one to come into my mind is…”句式完成。
______________________
______________________
【原句 2】
When I encounter problems in English learning, she listens to me patiently and explains them carefully, helping me overcome the difficulties.
【仿写句型】
时间状语从句+主句,现在分词作伴随状语
【仿写】
中文提示:当我在学习中感到迷茫时,朋友耐心陪伴我,帮助我重拾信心。(迷茫 feel lost in)
【我的仿写 2】
用“时间状语从句+主句,现在分词作伴随状语”结构完成。
______________________
______________________
【原句 3】
Whenever we are in trouble, it is always her who carries us through the tough period.
【仿写句型】
Whenever 引导状语从句+it is…who…强调句型
【仿写】
中文提示:每当我面临困难时,正是父母一直给予我力量。
【我的仿写 3】
用“Whenever 引导状语从句+it is…who…强调句型”完成。
______________________
______________________
【仿写三连测】(分层,限时完成)
基础层:用句型 1 把“第一个浮现在我脑海里的人是妈妈”译成英文。
中档层:用句型 3 把“每当我觉得孤单时,正是朋友陪在我身边”译成英文。
挑战层:用句型 2 翻译“当我准备英语演讲时,王老师耐心指导我,帮我克服紧张”。
【我的答案】
基础层:____________ 中档层:____________ 挑战层:____________
______________________
______________________
______________________
______________________
四、写作实战:用英文讲中国故事
【题目】
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1. 人物简介及事迹;2. 意义或启示。
【参考范文·中文】
“在广受赞誉的中国历史人物当中,在我看来,范仲淹是其中最具影响力的人物之一。范仲淹是宋代著名文学家、政治家,为社会作出了巨大贡献,备受世人敬仰。例如,他力主建立全国学堂体系,这对中国的教育制度产生了深远的影响。此外,最令我动容的是他那著名的人生信条:先天下之忧而忧,后天下之乐而乐。范仲淹是如此不凡的榜样,他时刻激励我立志成为一名拥有社会责任感的人。”
【参考范文·英文】
Among the widely acknowledged Chinese historical figures, Fan Zhongyan stands out as one of the most influential ones in my opinion.
Known as a famous writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan made tremendous contributions to society and was highly respected. For example, he insisted on founding a national school system, which had a far-reaching influence on the Chinese educational system. Besides, it is his famous philosophy of life that impresses me most: “Be the first to worry about the troubles across the land, the last to enjoy universal happiness.”
Fan Zhongyan is such an extraordinary example that he always encourages me to commit myself to being a man with a sense of social responsibility.
【范文怎么用:结构拆解(写作支架)】
开头:点出“谁是我最欣赏/最尊敬的人”(Among the widely acknowledged…, …stands out as one of the most influential…)。
主体:简介+事迹(Known as…, he made…;For example, he insisted on…, which…)。
结尾:最令我动容的是……(it is…that…强调句型)+对我立志的影响(he always encourages me to…)。
提示:本讲句型仿写里的三个句式,在这篇范文里都能对号入座——开头句型 1、强调句型 3、分词伴随句型 2。
【分层写作任务】
基础层:用句型 1 把“谈及我尊敬的人,第一个浮现在我脑海里的是我的语文老师”译成英文。
【我的翻译】
用“When it comes to…, the first one to come into my mind is…”句式完成。
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中档层:按“开头亮人→中间写事迹→结尾谈意义”三结构,用本讲句式介绍一位你尊敬的人(同学/老师/家人),不少于 60 词。
挑战层:用英文讲中国故事,介绍一位中国历史人物(除范仲淹外),结构完整、用上本讲句型,80 词左右。
【我的作文】
中档层、挑战层任选一档完成,写在下面。
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五、带走型收尾:本讲自检清单
合上本讲,你能做到吗?
1.能一句话说清人物语篇的三条主线(敬佩谁→为什么→意义);
2.能默写出三个仿写句型,并各造一句;
3.能说出人物写作的结构(简介及事迹→意义或启示),并知道常用的高分词。
【考场提醒】
人物类写作得分要点:开头亮出人物+一句点明敬佩/影响力;中间用“事迹+品质”支撑;结尾落到“对我/对世人的意义”。避免通篇“I think she is good”式的空洞评价。
六、课后作业:人物类读写巩固
Task 1 用本讲三个句型补全句子
1.谈及我最尊敬的科学家,第一个浮现在我脑海里的是袁隆平。(句型 1)
2.每当我因失败而沮丧时,正是妈妈一直鼓励我。(句型 3)
3.当我在学习上遇到困难时,老师耐心指导我,帮助我不断进步。(句型 2)
【我的句子】
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Task 2 阅读短文并回答问题
Yuan Longping, known as the “father of hybrid rice”, devoted his whole life to rice research. When it comes to the Chinese scientist I respect most, the first one to come into my mind is him. He was such a devoted scientist that he kept working in the fields even in his eighties. Whenever people worry about food, it is his work that gives them confidence. He has won great respect from people all over the world and will be remembered forever.
1.Why is Yuan Longping called the “father of hybrid rice”?
2.What did Yuan Longping still do in his eighties? What do people think of him?
【我的回答】
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Task 3 写作小任务
仿照本讲范文结构,用英文写一段话介绍一位你尊敬的人(不少于 50 词):开头用句型 1 点出人物;中间写一件/一类事迹;结尾用强调句型或“意义”句收束。
【我的作文】
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