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专题10 应用文写作
(一)
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m writing to share my high school life, which has been exciting yet challenging since I started over a month ago.
My days are filled with various subjects, and I’ve made many new friends who share similar interests. Regarding English, I’ve noticed that the lessons are more advanced than before. What worries me is that I sometimes struggle to understand complex grammar structures, which makes it hard to follow the teacher in class. I really want to improve my English skills.
Could you please give me some advice on how to overcome these difficulties? I’m eager to hear what methods have worked well for you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(二)
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
I’m truly sorry to hear that you’ve been struggling with stress and poor sleep since starting senior high school. Actually, lots of students feel the same way as you do when they step into a new stage, so you’re not alone. There’s no need to be too anxious.
Here are a couple of suggestions for you. First, it’s a good idea to make a detailed daily study plan. By organizing your study tasks clearly, you can avoid the feeling of being stressful. Second, try to take part in some physical activities, like jogging or playing basketball after school. Exercise is a great way to reduce tension, making it easier for you to fall asleep at night.
I hope these tips can bring you some relief and help you get back to a good learning and living condition soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(三)
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking about the sports situation in our school.
Our school has a large gymnasium where we can play basketball and have physical education classes. There’s also a big football field outside. What’s more, there are several tennis courts and a swimming pool, which offer us various choices for sports. The main sports we play are football, basketball, tennis and running. Football is the most popular one. Many students join the football club after school.
As for me, I like basketball best. I think it’s exciting and can help me build up my strength. What I enjoy most is that when I play basketball with my friends, we can have a great time together.
I hope this gives you a good idea of the sports in our school.
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
【答案】参考范文
Loving Parcels
On the morning of last Saturday, our school successfully held the “Loving Parcels” activity in the school playground. Students enthusiastically donated various items including clothes, books, and school supplies. These donations were carefully packed into parcels to be sent to people in need in rural areas.
This meaningful activity not only provided practical help but also enhanced our awareness of sharing and caring. It was a valuable experience that taught us the importance of contributing to society. We all look forward to participating in more such activities in the future.
(一)
【答案】My Best Friend
I’m glad to say something about my best friend. His name is Jack. We have been friends since we were in primary school. He is not only intelligent but also kind-hearted.
One unforgettable experience with him was during our school sports day, when I was participating in a 100-meter sprint. Unfortunately, I fell at the start. I felt embarrassed and wanted to give up, but Jack encouraged me to stand up and finish the race. It was his support that gave me the courage to continue. We laughed about it later, and it strengthened our friendship.
I think helping each other is the most important for being friends. Then we will be much better together.
(二)
【答案】Dear Mike,
Thrilled to hear that you’re planning a trip to my hometown, Xinjiang, which has been a hit in the travel circle lately, I’m writing to offer you some practical advice.
You can fly to Urumqi. Given the vastness of Xinjiang, taking a tourist bus is advisable. For local cuisine, I recommend you try zhuafan, nang, and barbecue, which are full of authentic Xinjiang flavors and definitely worth a taste. A 5-day trip would be ideal. You can visit Tianshan Tianchi first, and then head to Kanas Lake. Don’t forget to bring warm clothes and sunscreen, as the temperature varies greatly and the sun is quite strong.
I hope my suggestions can be of help and wish you a wonderful journey.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(三)
【答案】范文:
When it comes to my favorite sport, what I’d like to say is that I like swimming best.
I was often taken to a pool to practice swimming by my mother when I was young. Whenever I saw my mother dive into the swimming pool, I couldn’t help following her bravely. Gradually, I became interested in swimming. Now, swimming serves as a good way to relax myself. What’s more, I become stronger and stronger because of the frequent swimming.
I find so much fun from swimming and it greatly enriches my life.
(四)
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions.
First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try to write to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
(五)
【答案】Dear Jenny,
How nice to hear from you! I know you are going to take part in the final examination.
In your letter you said you have been so tired lately. I’d like to offer you some practical advice. As we know, final examination tests not only our knowledge but also our physical condition. We teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods, such as fish, meat, and beans. You’d better take in enough fresh vegetables and fruits and stay away from junk food. Additionally, it is important that you should take physical exercise regularly instead of studying in the classroom all the time. You can play basketball or swim after school. Above all, it is of great importance to keep a good state of mind. So, no matter what happens, trying to be optimistic is strongly recommended.
I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours
Li Hua
(一)
【答案】A possible version
Dear David,
I’m sorry to learn that you have difficulty learning Chinese. To help you have a better command of Chinese, I’m writing to share with you some practical advice.
With proper guidance and enough practice, you’re bound to learn Chinese well. To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programmes, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture. Secondly, it’s also highly recommended to make some Chinese friends and communicate with them as much as possible. With frequent communication in real life, you’ll eventually improve your oral Chinese and feel more confident.
Hopefully my tips above can be of some help. Wish you every success.
Yours,
Li Hua
Another possible version
Dear David,
I’m thrilled to know you’re learning Chinese. It’s normal to feel a bit anxious at first, but this feeling will fade quickly. Here are some suggestions.
First, read aloud little poems. Chinese is a beautiful language, and I’m sure you’ll enjoy its rhythm. Second, try to communicate often. You may try joining Chinese cultural clubs at your school to meet like-minded friends. That way, you will feel more relaxed and comfortable. Last but not least, make use of websites of Chinese media, such as China Daily or CGTN, where abundant high-quality learning resources are available. By immersing yourself in these resources, you’ll soon have a deeper insight and eventually be eager to learn more.
As the saying goes, “The Great Wall was not built in one day.” I’m convinced that your persistent efforts will pay off. Go for it, David!
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
【答案】Dear Mike,
I understand how demanding high school can be and how easy it is to give up physical activities for more study time. However, I believe incorporating regular exercise into your routine can actually benefit your studies.
Exercise is known to improve concentration and cognitive function, which can help you study more effectively. Even a short daily walk or a quick workout can make a big difference. Besides, physical activity is a great way to relieve stress and improve your overall well-being. High school can be stressful, and exercise can provide a much-needed break from your study.
I’m looking forward to hearing how things go with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
【答案】① A few true friends are enough. ② True friends enable us to focus on developing deeper and more sincere connections within us ③ True friends are always there and support us when we face ups and downs in life. ④ One possible version:
The majority of us hold that having more friends equals greater happiness. I firmly believe a few true friends are enough.
Having a smaller circle of close friends connects us more closely, enabling us to focus on developing deeper and more sincere connections within us. Besides, true friends are those who will be there for us when we face ups and downs in life and who will support us through thick and thin. On the contrary, it takes a great amount of time and energy to maintain the friendship among numerous friends, which is a waste to some extent.
To conclude, having a few true friends is enough to bring happiness and meaning to our life.
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专题10 应用文写作
(一)
(25-26高一上·新疆喀什地区莎车县·期中)假设你是李华,你进入高中生活已经一个多月,请给你的英国笔友Tom写一封邮件。内容如下:
1.介绍你的高中生活;2.描述英语学习的近况;3.寻求英语学习的建议。
注意:1.短文须包含所有要点的相关信息,并可作适当的想象和发挥;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.词数80左右;
Dear Tom,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(二)
(25-26高一上·新疆喀什市·期中)假如你是李华,是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你收到一封署名为Jack的来信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困惑:进入高中后经常感到压力(stress)大,晚上睡不好,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容包括:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2. 提出建议并说明理由。(至少两条建议)
注意
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(三)
(25-26高一上·乌鲁木齐市第七十中学·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生的体育运动情况。请给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.学校的体育场馆;
2.主要的运动项目;
3.你喜欢的项目。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为120个左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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(四)
(25-26高一上·新疆乌鲁木齐第一中学·期中)假如你是李华,上周六上午你校开展了“爱心包裹(Loving Parcels)”活动,给山区有需要的人捐赠并寄送物品。请你据此写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
(1)活动地点和时间;(2)活动过程;(3)你对这次活动的评论。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:山区rural areas 捐赠donate
Loving Parcels
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(一)
(25-26高一上·新疆维吾尔自治区克拉玛依市高中学·期中)某英文网站正在开展以“记好友,叙友情”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最好的一位朋友,并记述你们之间一段难忘的经历。内容包括:
1) Who is your best friend? Please describe him/ her.
2) Share an unforgettable experience you had with him/ her.
3) Your opinion on friendship.
注意: 1.写作词数应为120个左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Best Friend
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(二)
(25-26高一上·新疆昌吉回族自治州第一中学·期中)假如你是李华,在今年暑假期间,你的家乡新疆在全国旅游圈“火出了圈”。你的笔友Mike发来邮件说,他计划近期到新疆旅游,请你给他回封邮件,从交通、饮食、行程安排等方面提供建议。内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2.从交通、饮食、行程安排等方面提供至少2条合理的建议并给出理由;
3.表达对他新疆之旅的祝愿。
注意:1.词数为80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
参考词汇:Urumqi(乌鲁木齐),Sayram Lake(赛里木湖),Kanas Lake(喀纳斯湖)、Nalati Grassland(那拉提草原),authentic flavors(地道风味),ethnic minority (少数民族).
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(三)
(25-26高一上·新疆塔城地区第一高中学·期中)假如你是李华,你校英文报Sports栏目正在面向新生组织题为“My Favourite Sport”的征文比赛。请你向英文报投稿。内容包括:
1.你喜欢的运动;
2.你喜欢该运动的原因。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favourite Sport
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(四)
(25-26高一上·新疆克拉玛依独山子区第二中学·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。
要点:1. 参加中文学习班;2. 看中文书刊、电视;
3. 学唱中文歌曲;4. 交中国朋友。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
(五)
(25-26高一上·新疆生产建设兵团第二中学·期中)假设你是李华,你的朋友Jenny将要参加期末考试(final examination),她在来信中说她最近很累。请你用英语给她回一封邮件提些建议,内容要点如下:
1. 合理饮食;2. 锻炼身体;3. 保持良好心态。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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(一)
(25-26高一上·新疆生产建设兵团第二师八一中学·期中)假定你是李华。你的外国朋友David最近选修了中文课程。他来信提到了学习中文的困难,并向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 提出建议;
2. 表达祝愿。
注意:词数80词左右。
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(二)
(25-26高一上·新疆疏附县·期中)假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Mike来信说,为了挤出更多的时间来学习,他很少参加体育锻炼。为此,他想询问你的看法。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 给予建议并说明理由;
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
(25-26高一上·新疆克拉玛依市第一中学·期中)
Step 1: Read the two points of view about friendship. Decide which one you agree with.
The more friends you have, the happier you’ll be.
VS
A few true friends are enough.
Step 2: Think of reasons to support your opinion, and make notes.
Point of view:
Arguments:
Supporting examples;
Step 3: Draft (草稿).
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专题10 应用文写作
(一)
(25-26高一上·新疆喀什地区莎车县·期中)假设你是李华,你进入高中生活已经一个多月,请给你的英国笔友Tom写一封邮件。内容如下:
1.介绍你的高中生活;2.描述英语学习的近况;3.寻求英语学习的建议。
注意:1.短文须包含所有要点的相关信息,并可作适当的想象和发挥;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.词数80左右;
Dear Tom,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m writing to share my high school life, which has been exciting yet challenging since I started over a month ago.
My days are filled with various subjects, and I’ve made many new friends who share similar interests. Regarding English, I’ve noticed that the lessons are more advanced than before. What worries me is that I sometimes struggle to understand complex grammar structures, which makes it hard to follow the teacher in class. I really want to improve my English skills.
Could you please give me some advice on how to overcome these difficulties? I’m eager to hear what methods have worked well for you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,向英国笔友Tom介绍高中生活、英语学习近况并寻求英语学习建议。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
兴奋的:exciting → thrilling
挑战的:challenging → demanding
各种的:various → diverse
复杂的:complex→ complicated
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:What worries me is that I sometimes struggle to understand complex grammar structures, which makes it hard to follow the teacher in class.
拓展句:The thing that worries me is that I sometimes struggle to understand complex grammar structures, which makes it hard to follow the teacher in class.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m writing to share my high school life, which has been exciting yet challenging since I started over a month ago.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句、since引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】My days are filled with various subjects, and I’ve made many new friends who share similar interests. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
(二)
(25-26高一上·新疆喀什市·期中)假如你是李华,是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你收到一封署名为Jack的来信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困惑:进入高中后经常感到压力(stress)大,晚上睡不好,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容包括:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2. 提出建议并说明理由。(至少两条建议)
注意
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
I’m truly sorry to hear that you’ve been struggling with stress and poor sleep since starting senior high school. Actually, lots of students feel the same way as you do when they step into a new stage, so you’re not alone. There’s no need to be too anxious.
Here are a couple of suggestions for you. First, it’s a good idea to make a detailed daily study plan. By organizing your study tasks clearly, you can avoid the feeling of being stressful. Second, try to take part in some physical activities, like jogging or playing basketball after school. Exercise is a great way to reduce tension, making it easier for you to fall asleep at night.
I hope these tips can bring you some relief and help you get back to a good learning and living condition soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以英文报“Advice”栏目编辑的身份,针对读者Jack因高中压力大导致失眠的问题,提供心理安慰与实用建议。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
压力:stress → pressure
事实上:actually → as a matter of fact
建议:suggestion → advice
参加:take part in → participate in
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Second, try to take part in some physical activities, like jogging or playing basketball after school.
拓展句:Second, try to take part in some physical activities, which you can do after school, such as jogging or playing basketball.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First, it’s a good idea to make a detailed daily study plan.(运用了“it作形式主语,不定式短语作真正主语”结构)
【高分句型2】Exercise is a great way to reduce tension, making it easier for you to fall asleep at night.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
(三)
(25-26高一上·乌鲁木齐市第七十中学·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生的体育运动情况。请给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.学校的体育场馆;
2.主要的运动项目;
3.你喜欢的项目。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为120个左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking about the sports situation in our school.
Our school has a large gymnasium where we can play basketball and have physical education classes. There’s also a big football field outside. What’s more, there are several tennis courts and a swimming pool, which offer us various choices for sports. The main sports we play are football, basketball, tennis and running. Football is the most popular one. Many students join the football club after school.
As for me, I like basketball best. I think it’s exciting and can help me build up my strength. What I enjoy most is that when I play basketball with my friends, we can have a great time together.
I hope this gives you a good idea of the sports in our school.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写一封回信,介绍学校体育场馆、主要运动项目以及自己喜爱的运动项目。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
询问:ask → inquire
各种各样的:various → a variety of
令人兴奋的:exciting → thrilling
一起:together → jointly
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:I’m glad to receive your letter asking about the sports situation in our school.
拓展句:Receiving your letter asking about the sports situation in our school, I feel glad.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Our school has a large gymnasium where we can play basketball and have physical education classes.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, there are several tennis courts and a swimming pool, which offer us various choices for sports.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(四)
(25-26高一上·新疆乌鲁木齐第一中学·期中)假如你是李华,上周六上午你校开展了“爱心包裹(Loving Parcels)”活动,给山区有需要的人捐赠并寄送物品。请你据此写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
(1)活动地点和时间;(2)活动过程;(3)你对这次活动的评论。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:山区rural areas 捐赠donate
Loving Parcels
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【答案】参考范文
Loving Parcels
On the morning of last Saturday, our school successfully held the “Loving Parcels” activity in the school playground. Students enthusiastically donated various items including clothes, books, and school supplies. These donations were carefully packed into parcels to be sent to people in need in rural areas.
This meaningful activity not only provided practical help but also enhanced our awareness of sharing and caring. It was a valuable experience that taught us the importance of contributing to society. We all look forward to participating in more such activities in the future.
【导语】
这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇新闻报道,介绍学校 “爱心包裹” 活动的相关信息,包括时间、地点、过程以及对活动的评论。
【解析】
1.词汇积累:
热情地:enthusiastically→passionately
各种各样的:various→diverse
增强:enhance→strengthen
参加:participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Students enthusiastically donated various items including clothes, books, and school supplies.
拓展句:Students enthusiastically donated various items, which included clothes, books, and school supplies.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】This meaningful activity not only provided practical help but also enhanced our awareness of sharing and caring.(运用“not only...but also...” 结构)
【高分句型 2】It was a valuable experience that taught us the importance of contributing to society.(使用that引导的定语从句)
(一)
(25-26高一上·新疆维吾尔自治区克拉玛依市高中学·期中)某英文网站正在开展以“记好友,叙友情”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最好的一位朋友,并记述你们之间一段难忘的经历。内容包括:
1) Who is your best friend? Please describe him/ her.
2) Share an unforgettable experience you had with him/ her.
3) Your opinion on friendship.
注意: 1.写作词数应为120个左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Best Friend
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【答案】My Best Friend
I’m glad to say something about my best friend. His name is Jack. We have been friends since we were in primary school. He is not only intelligent but also kind-hearted.
One unforgettable experience with him was during our school sports day, when I was participating in a 100-meter sprint. Unfortunately, I fell at the start. I felt embarrassed and wanted to give up, but Jack encouraged me to stand up and finish the race. It was his support that gave me the courage to continue. We laughed about it later, and it strengthened our friendship.
I think helping each other is the most important for being friends. Then we will be much better together.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文写一篇短文投稿,参加正在开展的以 “记好友,叙友情” 为主题的征文活动,介绍自己最好的一位朋友,并记述与其之间一段难忘的经历。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
聪明的:intelligent → clear-sighted
难以忘怀的:unforgettable → memorable
参加:participate in → enter into
尴尬的:embarrassed → awkward
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:We laughed about it later, and it strengthened our friendship.
拓展句:We laughed about it later, which undoubtedly strengthened the bond of our friendship.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] One unforgettable experience with him was during our school sports day, when I was participating in a 100-meter sprint. (运用了关系副词when引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It was his support that gave me the courage to continue. (运用了强调句型)
(二)
(25-26高一上·新疆昌吉回族自治州第一中学·期中)假如你是李华,在今年暑假期间,你的家乡新疆在全国旅游圈“火出了圈”。你的笔友Mike发来邮件说,他计划近期到新疆旅游,请你给他回封邮件,从交通、饮食、行程安排等方面提供建议。内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2.从交通、饮食、行程安排等方面提供至少2条合理的建议并给出理由;
3.表达对他新疆之旅的祝愿。
注意:1.词数为80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
参考词汇:Urumqi(乌鲁木齐),Sayram Lake(赛里木湖),Kanas Lake(喀纳斯湖)、Nalati Grassland(那拉提草原),authentic flavors(地道风味),ethnic minority (少数民族).
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【答案】Dear Mike,
Thrilled to hear that you’re planning a trip to my hometown, Xinjiang, which has been a hit in the travel circle lately, I’m writing to offer you some practical advice.
You can fly to Urumqi. Given the vastness of Xinjiang, taking a tourist bus is advisable. For local cuisine, I recommend you try zhuafan, nang, and barbecue, which are full of authentic Xinjiang flavors and definitely worth a taste. A 5-day trip would be ideal. You can visit Tianshan Tianchi first, and then head to Kanas Lake. Don’t forget to bring warm clothes and sunscreen, as the temperature varies greatly and the sun is quite strong.
I hope my suggestions can be of help and wish you a wonderful journey.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,为计划来新疆旅游的笔友 Mike 提供交通、饮食和行程安排等方面的实用建议。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
火出了圈:a hit →go viral
帮助:help→ assistance
辽阔:vastness →expanse
拜访:visit→ pay a visit to
2.句式拓展
简单句转复合句
原句:Given the vastness of Xinjiang, taking a tourist bus is advisable.
拓展句:Given the vastness of Xinjiang, taking a tourist bus is advisable, as it will enable you to travel around with great flexibility.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】Thrilled to hear that you’re planning a trip to my hometown, Xinjiang, which has been a hit in the travel circle lately, I’m writing to offer you some practical advice. (运用了形容词作状语,that引导宾语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型 2】For local cuisine, I recommend you try zhuafan, nang, and barbecue, which are full of authentic Xinjiang flavors and definitely worth a taste. (运用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(三)
(25-26高一上·新疆塔城地区第一高中学·期中)假如你是李华,你校英文报Sports栏目正在面向新生组织题为“My Favourite Sport”的征文比赛。请你向英文报投稿。内容包括:
1.你喜欢的运动;
2.你喜欢该运动的原因。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favourite Sport
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【答案】范文:
When it comes to my favorite sport, what I’d like to say is that I like swimming best.
I was often taken to a pool to practice swimming by my mother when I was young. Whenever I saw my mother dive into the swimming pool, I couldn’t help following her bravely. Gradually, I became interested in swimming. Now, swimming serves as a good way to relax myself. What’s more, I become stronger and stronger because of the frequent swimming.
I find so much fun from swimming and it greatly enriches my life.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向校英文报Sports栏目投稿,以“My Favourite Sport”为主题,讲述自己喜欢的运动以及喜欢该运动的原因。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
好的:good→great/nice/kind
此外:what’s more→besides/in addition
因为:because of→as a result of
乐趣:fun→joy/pleasure
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Now, swimming serves as a good way to relax myself. What’s more, I become stronger and stronger because of the frequent swimming.
拓展句:Now, not only does swimming serve as a good way to relax myself, but also I become stronger and stronger because of the frequent swimming.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】When it comes to my favorite sport, what I’d like to say is that I like swimming best.(运用了when引导时间状语从句,what引导主语从句,that引导表语从句)
【高分句型2】Whenever I saw my mother dive into the swimming pool, I couldn’t help following her bravely.(运用了whenever引导时间状语从句)
(四)
(25-26高一上·新疆克拉玛依独山子区第二中学·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。
要点:1. 参加中文学习班;2. 看中文书刊、电视;
3. 学唱中文歌曲;4. 交中国朋友。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions.
First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try to write to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Peter回信,针对朋友提出的如何学好中文的问题给出建议。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
重要的:important→vital
帮助:help→assist
记忆:remember→memorize
容易地:easily→effortlessly
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
拓展句:You can also make more Chinese friends, who will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. (运用了as引导状语从句)
【高分句型2】 Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. (运用了because引导状语从句)
(五)
(25-26高一上·新疆生产建设兵团第二中学·期中)假设你是李华,你的朋友Jenny将要参加期末考试(final examination),她在来信中说她最近很累。请你用英语给她回一封邮件提些建议,内容要点如下:
1. 合理饮食;2. 锻炼身体;3. 保持良好心态。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jenny,
How nice to hear from you! I know you are going to take part in the final examination.
In your letter you said you have been so tired lately. I’d like to offer you some practical advice. As we know, final examination tests not only our knowledge but also our physical condition. We teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods, such as fish, meat, and beans. You’d better take in enough fresh vegetables and fruits and stay away from junk food. Additionally, it is important that you should take physical exercise regularly instead of studying in the classroom all the time. You can play basketball or swim after school. Above all, it is of great importance to keep a good state of mind. So, no matter what happens, trying to be optimistic is strongly recommended.
I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给Jenny回一封邮件提些保持健康的建议。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
参加:take part in→participate in
建议:suggestion→tip
乐观:optimistic→positive
有益的:be of benefit→beneficial
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:We teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods, such as fish, meat, and beans.
拓展句:We need plenty of nutritious foods, such as fish, meat, and beans because we teenagers grow very fast.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] So, no matter what happens, trying to be optimistic is strongly recommended. (运用了no matter what引导让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] Additionally, it is important that you should take physical exercise regularly instead of studying in the classroom all the time. (运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句)
(一)
(25-26高一上·新疆生产建设兵团第二师八一中学·期中)假定你是李华。你的外国朋友David最近选修了中文课程。他来信提到了学习中文的困难,并向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 提出建议;
2. 表达祝愿。
注意:词数80词左右。
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【答案】A possible version
Dear David,
I’m sorry to learn that you have difficulty learning Chinese. To help you have a better command of Chinese, I’m writing to share with you some practical advice.
With proper guidance and enough practice, you’re bound to learn Chinese well. To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programmes, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture. Secondly, it’s also highly recommended to make some Chinese friends and communicate with them as much as possible. With frequent communication in real life, you’ll eventually improve your oral Chinese and feel more confident.
Hopefully my tips above can be of some help. Wish you every success.
Yours,
Li Hua
Another possible version
Dear David,
I’m thrilled to know you’re learning Chinese. It’s normal to feel a bit anxious at first, but this feeling will fade quickly. Here are some suggestions.
First, read aloud little poems. Chinese is a beautiful language, and I’m sure you’ll enjoy its rhythm. Second, try to communicate often. You may try joining Chinese cultural clubs at your school to meet like-minded friends. That way, you will feel more relaxed and comfortable. Last but not least, make use of websites of Chinese media, such as China Daily or CGTN, where abundant high-quality learning resources are available. By immersing yourself in these resources, you’ll soon have a deeper insight and eventually be eager to learn more.
As the saying goes, “The Great Wall was not built in one day.” I’m convinced that your persistent efforts will pay off. Go for it, David!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给咨询学好中文方法的外国朋友David回信,应提出具体的语言学习建议,并表达美好祝愿。(解析基于第一篇例文)
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
做某事有困难:have problems doing→have trouble doing
切实可行的:practical→feasible
与……交流:communicate with→interact with
提高:improve→sharpen
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Hopefully my tips above can be of some help.
拓展句:It is hoped that my tips above can be of some help.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m sorry to learn that you have difficulty learning Chinese. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programmes, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture. (运用了that引导使用虚拟语气的主语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句)
(二)
(25-26高一上·新疆疏附县·期中)假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Mike来信说,为了挤出更多的时间来学习,他很少参加体育锻炼。为此,他想询问你的看法。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 给予建议并说明理由;
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I understand how demanding high school can be and how easy it is to give up physical activities for more study time. However, I believe incorporating regular exercise into your routine can actually benefit your studies.
Exercise is known to improve concentration and cognitive function, which can help you study more effectively. Even a short daily walk or a quick workout can make a big difference. Besides, physical activity is a great way to relieve stress and improve your overall well-being. High school can be stressful, and exercise can provide a much-needed break from your study.
I’m looking forward to hearing how things go with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Mike回信,针对他因学习压力大而很少参加体育锻炼给出看法。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
有益的:benefit→be helpful to
改进:improve→make better
有效地:effectively→efficiently
此外:besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Even a short daily walk or a quick workout can make a big difference.
拓展句:You can perform a short daily walk or a quick workout, which can make a big difference.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I understand how demanding high school can be and how easy it is to give up physical activities for more study time.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Exercise is known to improve concentration and cognitive function, which can help you study more effectively.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(三)
(25-26高一上·新疆克拉玛依市第一中学·期中)
Step 1: Read the two points of view about friendship. Decide which one you agree with.
The more friends you have, the happier you’ll be.
VS
A few true friends are enough.
Step 2: Think of reasons to support your opinion, and make notes.
Point of view:
Arguments:
Supporting examples;
Step 3: Draft (草稿).
【答案】① A few true friends are enough. ② True friends enable us to focus on developing deeper and more sincere connections within us ③ True friends are always there and support us when we face ups and downs in life. ④ One possible version:
The majority of us hold that having more friends equals greater happiness. I firmly believe a few true friends are enough.
Having a smaller circle of close friends connects us more closely, enabling us to focus on developing deeper and more sincere connections within us. Besides, true friends are those who will be there for us when we face ups and downs in life and who will support us through thick and thin. On the contrary, it takes a great amount of time and energy to maintain the friendship among numerous friends, which is a waste to some extent.
To conclude, having a few true friends is enough to bring happiness and meaning to our life.
【解析】
1. 我的个人观点为:有几个真正的朋友就足够了。
2. 论据:真正的朋友使我们能够专注于发展更深、更真诚的联系。
3. 事例:真正的朋友总是在我们面对生活中的起伏时支持我们。
4.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇关于友谊的英语文章。
1.词汇积累
支持:support→in support of
认为:believe→figure
几乎不:hardly→seldom
观点:opinion→view
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Having a smaller circle of close friends connects us more closely, enabling us to focus on developing deeper and more sincere connections within us.
拓展句:Having a smaller circle of close friends connects us more closely, which enables us to focus on developing deeper and more sincere connections within us.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I firmly believe true happiness in friendship lies not in quantity but in quality when it comes to interpersonal relationships. (运用了省略that的宾语从句以及“not…but…”连接的并列结构)
[高分句型2] On the contrary, it takes a great amount of time and energy to maintain the friendship among numerous friends, which is a waste to some extent.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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