摘要:
该初中英语教学设计聚焦“用be going to制定新年决心”核心知识点,课堂导入接续上节课“Making Resolutions”,通过快问快答复习决心定义与坚持难点,创设“新年决心征集令”情境,学习支架从职业定义猜词(2a)、短语造句(2b)、语篇填空(2c)到范文分析(3a),逐步过渡到独立写作(3c)。
该资料特色在于核心素养深度融合,语言能力通过职业定义书写、短语语境运用及范文仿写落实词汇与be going to结构,思维品质在范文分析中引导归纳“总起—分述”结构与“决心—措施”逻辑,学习能力借助写作检查单和Reflecting问题实现同伴互评与自我反思。过程性写作教学与任务驱动提升学生写作能力,教-学-评一体化助力教师精准把握学情。
内容正文:
Unit 6 Plan for Yourself
Section B (2a-Reflecting) 教学设计(第五课时·写作课)
2026—2027学年 人教版(2024)英语八年级上册
依据《义务教育英语课程标准(2022年版)》编制
课 题
How can we make good plans?(Section B 2a-Reflecting)
课 型
写作课(Writing)
课 时
第5课时(45分钟)
授课年级
八年级上册
单元大观念
How can we make good plans?(我们如何制定好的计划?)——以“梦想职业→新年决心→自我完善”为线索,学会用 be going to 制定并落实计划,在规划中遇见更好的自己。
一、语篇研读
【What】本课时是单元词汇运用与写作输出课(教材P58—59)。2a给出七条职业定义——1. This person helps to put out fires. 2. This person is good at playing music. 3. This person acts in a play or a film. 4. This person designs or builds machines, roads, or bridges. 5. This person designs clothes, shoes, or other items for people. 6. This person gives advice to people about the law.,要求写出职业名并自编定义供同伴竞猜;2b要求用括号内短语(have to do with / make sure / take up / stick to / be tired of)写五个自己的句子;2c为叙事语篇填空:用词框(confident / explain / fail / practise / try one’s best)的适当形式补全“数学首考失利→郭老师课后安慰“Don’t give up. Keep working hard and try your best again in the next exam.”→常抽空辅导→坚持练习、相信自己→went into the final exam with great confidence→got an A”的成长故事;3a范文“New Year, New Me”四段式:总起段(As the year draws to a close, it is the perfect time to think about the changes we want to make in the coming new year. … I am going to make three resolutions.)加三条决心分段展开(a new hobby—take up: join the school music club to improve my singing;get fitter: Besides jogging, do push-ups and sit-ups;English—study for two more hours each weekend),配“To improve…/Resolution”表格;3b列出自己想改进的方面与决心;3c依据笔记写三个段落;Reflecting设五个单元反思路(dream job与goal / future plans的表达 / resolutions的重要性 / 我将制定并如何坚持决心 / 本单元如何帮助我完善自我)。
【Why】2a—2c在“职业定义猜谜”与“成长故事”语境中盘活单元核心词汇与 be going to 结构,为成段写作扫除语言障碍,2c语篇还传递“坚持与自信助人达成目标”的育人价值;3a范文示范“总起句+分述三条决心”的段落组织方式与“what to improve+how”的展开逻辑,帮助学生完成从“句子”到“语篇”的跨越;3b—3c支架递减,走向独立写作;Reflecting回扣单元四项学习目标,落实以评促学、以评促教。
【How】写作支架逐级递减:2a定义写职业(控制性)→2b短语造句(半控制)→2c语篇填空(词汇语境化)→3a范文析构(结构与语言双支架)→3b提纲→3c独立成段(开放),符合“控制—半控制—开放”的写作教学路径;范文以 As the year draws to a close(时间总起)、The first one is about… / I am also going to… / Last but not least…(列举衔接)及 join the school music club / do push-ups and sit-ups / each weekend(具体措施)实现段落推进,可直接作为写作蓝图;Reflecting以问题链引导学生对照单元目标自评。
二、学情分析
学生经过前四课时已掌握职业类词汇与 want to be 问答、be going to 结构(Section A 1a—2d、Grammar Focus),上节课学习了说明文“Making Resolutions”(1b—1e),理解“resolution是对自己的承诺”及“人们难以坚持决心的原因”,具备本课词汇与结构的语言基础;八年级学生大多有制定学习计划、新年计划的真实经历,对“职业梦想”“新年新计划”话题兴趣浓厚;但成段写作时易出现“决心与措施脱节”“段落无总起、衔接词单一”“be going to 与一般现在时混用”等问题;对“猜职业”“决心发布会”等活动参与意愿强,可借任务驱动与同伴互评提升修改意识。
三、教学目标(核心素养导向)
通过本课时学习,学生能够:
素养维度
目标描述
语言能力
根据英文定义写出 fireman, musician, actor, engineer, fashion designer, lawyer 等职业词并自编定义;用 have to do with / make sure / take up / stick to / be tired of 造句;借助词框正确完成2c语篇填空(failed / try your best / explain / practising / confident);仿照3a范文用 be going to 写出三条新年决心,成文三个段落,含总起句并使用 The first one is about… / I am also going to… / Last but not least… 衔接。
学习能力
借助3a“To improve…/Resolution”表格与范文搭建“想改进什么—怎么改进”写作提纲;依据写作检查单开展同伴互评并落实修改;用 Reflecting 五个问题对照单元目标自评,明确改进方向。
思维品质
归纳范文“总起—分述”结构与“决心(what)—措施(how)”的对应逻辑;在职业猜谜中依据定义特征进行推理;在2c补全中依据上下文时态、搭配与语义线索判断词形。
文化意识
理解“新年决心(New Year’s resolution)”所承载的自我完善与目标管理文化,在制定、展示计划中形成积极进取、坚持不懈的人生态度,呼应单元结语“Dream big, plan well, work hard, smile often, and good things will happen.”
【迁移落点】将“总起+三条决心(what+how)”写作框架迁移到期中学习改进计划、班级事务优化等真实规划情境;优秀决心卡张贴“Class Plan Wall”,为单元 *Project“Make plans for solving problems”(4a—4c)的方案写作与演示分享做准备。
四、教学重难点
教学重点:①2a职业定义词汇与2b五个短语的语境运用;②3a范文结构(总起句+三条决心分段展开)与核心语言(draw to a close / take up / get fitter / push-ups / energetic / last but not least / two more hours)。
教学难点:①每段中“what to improve+how to do it”的逻辑对应,以及 be going to 的准确使用;②运用列举衔接语使三个段落成篇、首尾呼应,避免句子罗列。
五、教学方法与资源
教学方法:过程性写作教学(范文分析—提纲—起草—互评—修改—展示)、任务驱动教学法;依据英语学习活动观组织“情境感知—词汇语境化—范文析构—独立写作—展示评价—反思自评”活动链,落实教-学-评一体化。
教学资源:多媒体课件、职业定义卡、2c语篇填空单、3a范文纸、“To improve…/Resolution”提纲表、写作检查单、决心卡(张贴用)、Reflecting自评问题单。
六、教学过程
教学环节
师生活动
活动观层次
评价要点
Step 1
情境导入
明确任务
(4’)
①接续上节课“Making Resolutions”:快问快答 What is a resolution? Why do people hardly ever keep them? 复述课文要点;
②创设情境:新年将至,班级发布“New Year, New Me”决心征集令;
③出示本课任务链:猜职业→短语造句→补全成长故事→析范文→写三条决心→决心发布会。
学习理解
感知与注意
复习应答与任务理解(诊断性评价)
Step 2
语境盘活
词汇聚焦
(8’)
①2a:出示第1条定义示范(This person helps to put out fires.→fireman),学生独立写出2—6条职业名(musician / actor / engineer / fashion designer / lawyer);②同伴互考:仿照第7条自编职业定义让对方猜(add more for your partner to guess);③2b:用 have to do with / make sure / take up / stick to / be tired of 写自己的句子,教师巡视,选读典型句并纠偏(如 My father’s job has to do with cars. / I’m going to take up painting.)。
学习理解
概括与整合
职业词书写准确率;五短语造句用法正确性(形成性评价)
Step 3
语篇补全
读中悟言
(8’)
①2c:引导读词框(confident / explain / fail / practise / try one’s best)与首句,提示依据上下文时态、搭配定词形;②独立完成后同桌核对,全班订正(failed / try your best / explain / practising / confident);③朗读语篇,圈画鼓舞性表达(Don’t give up. / Keep working hard. / spared some time to help me / be confident in your abilities / was so excited about achieving my goal),追问:What made the writer get an A in maths?
应用实践
描述与阐释
填空准确率;主旨概括(坚持与自信成就目标)与语言点发现
Step 4
范文研读
搭建支架
(8’)
①研读3a范文“New Year, New Me”,完成“To improve…/Resolution”表格:1. a new hobby—take up a new hobby: join the school music club to improve my singing;2. fitness—get fitter: Besides jogging, do push-ups and sit-ups;3. English—study for two more hours each weekend;②圈画结构信号:总起段(As the year draws to a close…I am going to make three resolutions.)与列举衔接(The first one is about… / I am also going to… / Last but not least…);③归纳“what+how”写作蓝图(板书)。
应用实践
分析与判断
表格完成质量;结构发现的深度与提纲表述
Step 5
独立写作
互评修改
(12’)
①3b:列提纲——写出自己想改进的三个方面与决心;②3c:依据笔记仿范文写三个段落,每段先写 what(what I am going to improve)再写 how,用上 be going to 与列举衔接语;③教师巡视,为薄弱学生提供段落框架句型卡;④同伴依据“写作检查单”互评(□三条决心齐全 □每段有what+how □be going to使用正确 □衔接自然 □书写规范),依据建议修改誊写;⑤优秀决心卡张贴“Class Plan Wall”。
迁移创新
想象与创造
检查单互评记录与修改情况(过程性评价,对应语言能力与学习能力目标)
Step 6
展示分享
自评反思
(5’)
①“决心发布会”:抽读2—3份决心,学生上台朗读并接受“这份决心是否可行、如何坚持”的追问(呼应原教案“准备演示文稿分享计划”要求,为 *Project 4c作铺垫);②对照 Reflecting 五问自评(What is your dream job?… / What expressions can you use to talk about future plans?… / Do you think it is important to make resolutions?… / What resolutions are you going to make? How are you going to keep them?… / How did this unit help you think of ways to improve yourself?),记录 Very well / OK / Needs work;③回扣单元大问题 How can we make good plans? 学生用一句话总结,共读单元结语“Dream big, plan well, work hard, smile often, and good things will happen.”;④布置分层作业。
迁移创新
想象与创造
展示表现与问答质量;Reflecting自评真实性(对应学习能力目标)
七、板书设计
Unit 6 Plan for Yourself — New Year, New Me(新年决心写作蓝图)
总起:As the year draws to a close, I am going to make three resolutions.
① To improve: a new hobby → I’m going to take up a new hobby — join the school music club
② To improve: my health → I’m going to get fitter — do push-ups and sit-ups
③ To improve: my English → study for two more hours each weekend
衔接语:The first one is about… / I am also going to… / Last but not least…
核心语言:draw to a close / take up / get fitter / push-ups / energetic / two more hours
写作检查单:□三条决心齐全 □每段what+how □be going to正确 □衔接自然 □书写规范
八、作业设计(分层)
原教案巩固检测题(词汇形式8题、单项选择9题、完成句子5题)与两项作业(背记词句、采访同伴决心并汇报)全部保留,按“基础—提升—拓展”三级归层:词形变化与重点短语辨析归入基础,句型综合运用与采访汇报归入提升,项目化演示任务归入拓展;写作作业以3c成文修改为核心必做项。归级如下:
原教案题组
难度归级
设计说明
Ⅰ. 写出单词及相应形式(8题)
基础·必做
巩固 design / bridge / final / confidence / form / relationship / energetic / jog 的形态变化,覆盖2a、3a核心词汇。
Ⅱ. 单项选择(1—5题)
基础·必做
在语境中辨析 put out / give up / find sb. doing / keep doing / keep on 等本课重点短语。
Ⅱ. 单项选择(6—9题)+Ⅲ. 完成句子(5题)
提升·选做(学有余力必做)
综合运用词性与句型(confidence / spare some time / two more / are sure to),句子对应2a定义句、2c故事句与3a决心句。
原教案作业1“背记词句”、作业2“采访汇报”
分别并入基础①、提升②
原作业2升级为带范例的英文汇报写作,对接本课决心话题。
【基础·必做】① 修改誊写课堂作文“New Year, New Me”,按检查单自查后熟读成诵(原教案作业1);② 完成巩固检测Ⅰ与Ⅱ(1—5)。
巩固检测Ⅰ 写出下列单词及相应形式
1. 设计;计划 design→(设计者) ________ 2. 桥 bridge→(复数形式) ________
3. 最终的,最后的 final→(副词) ________ 4. 信心,信任 confidence→(形容词) ________
5. (使)形成,组成 form→(动名词) ________ 6. 关系,联系 relationship→(复数形式) ________
7. 精力充沛的 energetic→(名词形式) ________ 8. 慢跑 jog→(动名词) ________
巩固检测Ⅱ 单项选择(1—5题·基础)
1. The firemen worked hard and finally ______ the big fire. A. put up B. put out C. put on D. put away
2. If you want to stay healthy, you should ______ smoking. A. give up B. give in C. give away D. give out
3. The mother opened the door and found her baby ______ on the floor. A. cry B. crying C. cried D. to cry
4. If you want to improve your English, you should ______ practice every day. A. keep to do B. keep doing C. keep do D. keeps doing
5. It’s raining heavily, but the farmers ______ working in the fields. A. keep on B. keep to C. keep up D. keep in
【提升·选做】① 完成巩固检测Ⅱ(6—9)与Ⅲ;② 采访两位朋友关于制定决心的想法并写一段英文汇报(原教案作业2:Ask two friends about their ideas of making resolutions and make a report.)
巩固检测Ⅱ 单项选择(6—9题·提升)
6. Her ______ helped her win the English competition. A. confident B. confidence C. confidently D. confide
7. He always ______ some time to read before bed. A. spares B. takes C. costs D. uses
8. We need ______ chairs for the meeting. A. two more B. more two C. two another D. more than
9. If you study hard, you ______ pass the exam. A. are sure of B. are sure to C. sure about D. be sure to
巩固检测Ⅲ 完成句子
1. 这个人帮忙把火扑灭。This person ________________________.
2. 这个人擅长演奏音乐。This person ________________________.
3. 放学后郭老师发现我正在教室里哭。After school Mr Guo ________________________.
4. 一直努力,下次考试中再尽最大努力。Keep working hard and ________________________.
5. 每个周末我将要再学习两个小时。I am going to ________________________.
【拓展·挑战】对接单元 *Project“Make plans for solving problems”:小组从4a班级/校园问题(如 There are some scribbles on the walls of our school.)中选定一个,完成“Problems—Reasons—Solutions”表格,并用 be going to 写出解决计划(4b),4c 准备一份演示文稿(presentation)与全班分享——落实原教案“准备演示文稿与同学们分享计划”的难点要求。
提升作业参考范例(采访汇报,供批阅参考)
Last week I asked two friends about their ideas of making resolutions. Li Ming is going to take up a new hobby — he is going to join the school music club to improve his singing. Wang Fang wants to get fitter, so she is going to do push-ups and sit-ups besides jogging every day. They both made sure their resolutions are possible to achieve. I hope they can stick to them and be better next year.
参考答案与命题说明
Ⅰ. 1. designer 2. bridges 3. finally 4. confident 5. forming 6. relationships 7. energy 8. jogging
Ⅱ. 1. B 2. A 3. B 4. B 5. A 6. B 7. A(命题说明见下) 8. A 9. B
Ⅲ. 1. This person helps to put out fires. 2. This person is good at playing music.
3. After school Mr Guo found me crying in the classroom.
4. Keep working hard and do your best again in the next exam.
5. I am going to study for another two hours each weekend.
命题说明:Ⅱ第7题原教案答案为B(takes),但A(spares)在本语境同样成立——本课2c语篇即有“Mr Guo often spared some time to help me”,且 spare some time to do sth. 为本课重点短语,原题存在双解;建议将选项B改为 wastes,以A(spares)为唯一正确答案。
九、教学评价与反思
1. 目标—评价对应(教-学-评一体化):
素养目标
课堂评价任务与证据
语言能力目标
2a职业词书写、2b造句与2c填空的准确率;3c三段成文质量(be going to、列举衔接、what+how对应)
学习能力目标
3b提纲的利用与检查单互评实效;Reflecting五问自评的完成质量
思维品质目标
范文结构与“决心—措施”逻辑的发现深度;2c中依据上下文线索定词形的推理表现
文化意识目标
对“自我完善与目标管理”话题的积极回应;决心表述中的进取与坚持态度
2. 预设反思点:①2c语篇填空对基础薄弱学生的语境提示是否充分;②12分钟独立写作时间内能否完成三段初稿,是否需要压缩展示环节;③检查单互评的真实性与修改的落实情况;④自编职业定义与“决心发布会”环节的参与广度;⑤写作基础薄弱学生是否需要段落框架填空式支架;⑥Reflecting自评记录(Very well / OK / Needs work)是否用于指导下节课 *Project 的分组与辅导。
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