Unit 1 Relationships 邀请信（含学习地图）（单元同步写作讲义）高中英语北师大版选择性必修第一册

本讲义聚焦高中英语邀请信写作核心知识点，系统构建从明确主题（对象、任务、语气）、搭建框架（开头、发展、高潮、结尾）、积累词汇句型到提供标准版与提升版模板的学习支架，形成审题、谋篇、表达、修改的完整闭环。 该资料以教材同步为基础，通过5类分层拓展练习（如邀请评委、京剧演出等跨文化情境）提升语言能力与文化意识，结合写作评价表培养学生自查改进的学习能力。课中辅助教师实施结构化教学，课后助力学生迁移应用，有效弥补写作短板。

Unit 1 Relationships｜邀请信写作学习地图 主题 体裁 建议词数 核心任务 Unit 1 Relationships；活动邀请、人际关系与礼貌沟通 邀请信 80词左右 组织英语诗歌比赛并邀请外国友人参加 一、本讲义内容导航 模块 学什么 帮你解决什么问题 01 写作主题 明确对象、任务、重点与语气 知道写什么、写给谁 02 写作框架 开头、发展、高潮、结尾 搭出完整叙事结构 03 写作词汇 主题词汇与实用表达 积累可直接使用的表达 04 写作句型 描述人物、交代信息的常用句式 把人和事写得具体、连贯 05 写作模板 标准版与提升版结构 快速组织完整简介 06 典例精练 结合真实情境练习方法 把方法落实到任务中 07 写作指导 审题、谋篇与表达方法 解决写什么、怎么写 08 参考范文 学习结构、语言与表达逻辑 借鉴完整成篇表达 09 拓展练习 不同情境下的迁移写作 形成独立写作能力 10 写作评价表 对照标准自查、修改、提升 发现问题并完成改进 二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么？ 练习主题 写作任务 重点训练 练习1｜邀请外国友人担任诗歌比赛评委 人与社会·诗歌 邀请目的、活动介绍、期待出席 练习2｜邀请兄弟学校文学社参加校际交流会 人与自我·校园俱乐部 活动安排、交流内容、诚挚邀请 练习3｜邀请退休外教出席英语节开幕式 人与社会·人际交往 情谊表达、活动介绍、出席期待 练习4｜邀请交换生观看京剧专场演出 人与社会·京剧 演出介绍、文化价值、观演邀请 练习5｜邀请外校名师做英语角专题分享 人与社会·合作与交流 活动缘由、分享主题、恭请表达 三、系列训练亮点与学习路径 教材同步 结构完整 表达可用 练习分层 评价促改 紧扣单元主题与体裁 从审题到修改形成闭环 词汇句型模板可迁移 五类情境训练不重复 对照标准自查修改 学习路径 定任务 → 明信息 → 学描写 → 写成篇 → 完成练习 → 修改提升 Unit 1 Relationships 邀请信（单元同步写作讲义） 一、写作主题 单元主题： Relationships；活动邀请、人际关系与礼貌沟通 应用文体裁： 邀请信 写作任务： 组织一场英语诗歌比赛，写一封邀请信，邀请外国友人参加。 二、写作框架 部分 内容要点 称呼 使用题干给出的具体称呼，顶格书写。 开头（1—2句） 自我介绍或说明身份，点明写信目的，正式发出邀请。 中间（3—4句） 介绍活动的时间、地点、内容和亮点，说明邀请理由与对方收获。 结尾（1—2句） 表达诚挚期待，恳请回复，使用完整结束语和署名。 三、写作词汇 核心单词 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 invitation n. 邀请 点明写信目的 host v. 主办；做……的东道主 说明活动主办身份 organise vt. 组织，筹划 介绍活动安排 grateful adj. 感激的，感谢的 表达诚挚谢意 sincerely adv. 真诚地，由衷地 强化邀请的诚意 practical adj. 实际的；切实可行的 说明活动安排合理 incredible adj. 极好的；难以置信的 描绘活动亮点 passionate adj. 热爱的，酷爱的 形容参赛者或受邀者 effective adj. 有效的 说明交流效果 worthwhile adj. 值得做的 说明参与价值 主题短语 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 on behalf of 代表…… 以组织者身份发出邀请 take part in 参加（活动） 邀请对方参与 look forward to 期待；盼望 表达期盼出席 be passionate about 对……充满热情 说明对方与活动的契合 gain access to 获得……的机会 说明对方收获 核心词汇写作运用 词汇填空 1. I am writing to send you a formal ________(邀请) to our English poetry contest. 2. Our school will ________(主办) the English poetry competition next Friday afternoon. 3. The Student Union will ________(组织) a series of activities during the event. 4. I would be very ________(感激的) if you could accept our invitation. 5. The contest is a ________(值得做的) chance for students to show their talent. 句子翻译 1. 我代表学生会写信，诚挚地邀请您参加我们的英语诗歌比赛。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 比赛将于下周五下午在学校礼堂举行，届时将有二十名选手登台朗诵诗歌。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 我相信这次比赛将为您提供一次了解中国校园文化的绝佳机会。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、写作句型 开头句 1. I'm writing to invite you to _______.（说明邀请事项） 2. On behalf of _______, I would like to invite you to _______.（以组织者身份发出邀请） 3. Knowing that you are passionate about _______, I'm writing to invite you to _______.（结合对方兴趣发出邀请） 中间句 1. The contest is scheduled to be held _______（时间）in _______（地点）.（说明时间地点） 2. During the event, we will _______, which will help you _______.（介绍活动内容并补充收获） 3. It would be a great honour for us if you could _______.（委婉表达诚挚期待） 4. Your presence will surely make the event _______, and the participants will benefit greatly from _______.（说明对方出席的意义） 结尾句 1. It would be a great pleasure if you could come. Looking forward to your reply. 2. I would be grateful if you could accept our invitation. 3. Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions about the event. 五、写作模板 模板1：简洁标准版 Dear _______, I'm writing to invite you to _______(活动名称), which will be held _______(时间) in _______(地点). The contest is intended to _______(活动目的). During the event, we will _______(活动内容). I'm sure you will _______(对方收获). It would be a great pleasure if you could come. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 模板2：分层高分版 Dear _______, On behalf of _______, I feel honoured to invite you to _______, which is scheduled to be held _______. Knowing that you are passionate about _______, I believe this event is a worthwhile chance for you to _______. During the event, we will arrange _______, where you can _______. What's more, your presence will surely encourage the participants and make the contest more exciting. I would be grateful if you could accept our invitation. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 六、典例精练 假设你是学生会主席李华。你校将举办英语诗歌比赛，请你给英国朋友 Mr Smith 写一封邀请信，邀请他参加。内容包括比赛时间、地点和活动安排。 写作要点： 1. 说明比赛的时间、地点和主要内容。 2. 结合对方兴趣说明邀请理由。 3. 表达诚挚期待并恳请回复。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr Smith, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 七、拓展练习 练习1：邀请外国友人担任英语诗歌比赛评委（人与社会-诗歌） 假设你是学生会主席李华。你校将举办英语诗歌比赛，请你给外国友人 Anna 写一封邀请信，邀请她担任比赛评委。内容包括赛事情由、活动安排和期待出席。 写作要点： 1. 说明赛事情由并正式发出邀请。 2. 介绍活动安排和评委工作。 3. 表达期待出席。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Anna, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习2：邀请兄弟学校文学社参加校际诗歌交流会（人与自我-校园俱乐部） 假设你是校文学社社长李华。你校将举办校际英语诗歌交流会，请你给兄弟学校文学社负责人 Mary 写一封邀请信，邀请她带领社员参加。内容包括交流方案和诚挚邀请。 写作要点： 1. 介绍交流会方案并诚邀参与。 2. 说明交流内容和活动安排。 3. 表达诚挚邀请。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mary, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习3：邀请退休外教回校出席英语节开幕式（人与社会-人际交往） 假设你是学生会主席李华。你校将举办英语节，请你给曾经在我校任教的外教 Mr Brown 写一封邀请信，邀请他回校出席英语节开幕式。内容包括情谊表达和活动介绍。 写作要点： 1. 表达思念并邀请出席活动。 2. 介绍英语节开幕式安排。 3. 表达出席期待。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr Brown, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习4：邀请外国交换生观看京剧专场演出（人与社会-京剧） 假设你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办京剧专场演出，请你给外国交换生 Jack 写一封邀请信，邀请他观看演出。内容包括演出亮点和文化价值。 写作要点： 1. 介绍演出亮点并发出邀请。 2. 说明演出时间和文化价值。 3. 表达观演期待。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习5：邀请外校名师为本校英语角做专题分享（人与社会-合作与交流） 假设你是英语角负责人李华。你校英语角计划邀请外校名师 Ms Green 做专题分享，请你给她写一封邀请信，说明活动设想并恭请莅临。 写作要点： 1. 说明活动缘由并发出邀请。 2. 介绍分享主题和活动设想。 3. 表达恭请莅临的诚意。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Ms Green, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 八、写作评价表 评价维度 分值 自评 同伴评 评价说明 结构 Structure 3分 ____ / 3 ____ / 3 三段结构清楚，称呼、开头、主体、结尾和落款安排合理。 内容 Content 6分 ____ / 6 ____ / 6 覆盖邀请背景和题目要点，活动介绍具体完整。 语言 Language 4分 ____ / 4 ____ / 4 能使用本单元核心词汇和委婉句式，表达准确连贯。 书写 Handwriting 2分 ____ / 2 ____ / 2 格式规范，段落清楚，拼写、大小写和标点正确。 总分 Total 15分 ____ / 15 ____ / 15 综合评价结构、内容、语言和书写整体表现。 自我反思与改进 我最需要改进的一项：□结构 □内容 □语言 □书写 具体改进计划：________________________ 评分参考 满分15分；13—15优秀；10—12达标；7—9需修改；6分及以下建议重写。 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 Relationships｜邀请信写作学习地图 主题 体裁 建议词数 核心任务 Unit 1 Relationships；活动邀请、人际关系与礼貌沟通 邀请信 80词左右 组织英语诗歌比赛并邀请外国友人参加 一、本讲义内容导航 模块 学什么 帮你解决什么问题 01 写作主题 明确对象、任务、重点与语气 知道写什么、写给谁 02 写作框架 开头、发展、高潮、结尾 搭出完整叙事结构 03 写作词汇 主题词汇与实用表达 积累可直接使用的表达 04 写作句型 描述人物、交代信息的常用句式 把人和事写得具体、连贯 05 写作模板 标准版与提升版结构 快速组织完整简介 06 典例精练 结合真实情境练习方法 把方法落实到任务中 07 写作指导 审题、谋篇与表达方法 解决写什么、怎么写 08 参考范文 学习结构、语言与表达逻辑 借鉴完整成篇表达 09 拓展练习 不同情境下的迁移写作 形成独立写作能力 10 写作评价表 对照标准自查、修改、提升 发现问题并完成改进 二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么？ 练习主题 写作任务 重点训练 练习1｜邀请外国友人担任诗歌比赛评委 人与社会·诗歌 邀请目的、活动介绍、期待出席 练习2｜邀请兄弟学校文学社参加校际交流会 人与自我·校园俱乐部 活动安排、交流内容、诚挚邀请 练习3｜邀请退休外教出席英语节开幕式 人与社会·人际交往 情谊表达、活动介绍、出席期待 练习4｜邀请交换生观看京剧专场演出 人与社会·京剧 演出介绍、文化价值、观演邀请 练习5｜邀请外校名师做英语角专题分享 人与社会·合作与交流 活动缘由、分享主题、恭请表达 三、系列训练亮点与学习路径 教材同步 结构完整 表达可用 练习分层 评价促改 紧扣单元主题与体裁 从审题到修改形成闭环 词汇句型模板可迁移 五类情境训练不重复 对照标准自查修改 学习路径 定任务 → 明信息 → 学描写 → 写成篇 → 完成练习 → 修改提升 Unit 1 Relationships 邀请信（单元同步写作讲义） 一、写作主题 单元主题： Relationships；活动邀请、人际关系与礼貌沟通 应用文体裁： 邀请信 写作任务： 组织一场英语诗歌比赛，写一封邀请信，邀请外国友人参加。 二、写作框架 部分 内容要点 称呼 使用题干给出的具体称呼，顶格书写。 开头（1—2句） 自我介绍或说明身份，点明写信目的，正式发出邀请。 中间（3—4句） 介绍活动的时间、地点、内容和亮点，说明邀请理由与对方收获。 结尾（1—2句） 表达诚挚期待，恳请回复，使用完整结束语和署名。 三、写作词汇 核心单词 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 invitation n. 邀请 点明写信目的 host v. 主办；做……的东道主 说明活动主办身份 organise vt. 组织，筹划 介绍活动安排 grateful adj. 感激的，感谢的 表达诚挚谢意 sincerely adv. 真诚地，由衷地 强化邀请的诚意 practical adj. 实际的；切实可行的 说明活动安排合理 incredible adj. 极好的；难以置信的 描绘活动亮点 passionate adj. 热爱的，酷爱的 形容参赛者或受邀者 effective adj. 有效的 说明交流效果 worthwhile adj. 值得做的 说明参与价值 主题短语 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 on behalf of 代表…… 以组织者身份发出邀请 take part in 参加（活动） 邀请对方参与 look forward to 期待；盼望 表达期盼出席 be passionate about 对……充满热情 说明对方与活动的契合 gain access to 获得……的机会 说明对方收获 核心词汇写作运用 词汇填空 1. I am writing to send you a formal ________(邀请) to our English poetry contest. 2. Our school will ________(主办) the English poetry competition next Friday afternoon. 3. The Student Union will ________(组织) a series of activities during the event. 4. I would be very ________(感激的) if you could accept our invitation. 5. The contest is a ________(值得做的) chance for students to show their talent. 【答案】 1. invitation 【解析】send sb a formal invitation 表示“向某人发出正式邀请”，空格前有 a，填名词单数 invitation。 2. host 【解析】will 后接动词原形，host the competition 表示“主办比赛”。 3. organise 【解析】organise a series of activities 表示“组织一系列活动”，情态动词 will 后接原形。 4. grateful 【解析】be grateful 表示“感激的”，I would be very grateful if... 是邀请信常用委婉句式。 5. worthwhile 【解析】a worthwhile chance 表示“值得把握的机会”，作定语修饰 chance。 句子翻译 1. 我代表学生会写信，诚挚地邀请您参加我们的英语诗歌比赛。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 比赛将于下周五下午在学校礼堂举行，届时将有二十名选手登台朗诵诗歌。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 我相信这次比赛将为您提供一次了解中国校园文化的绝佳机会。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. On behalf of the Student Union, I am writing to sincerely invite you to take part in our English poetry contest. 【解析】on behalf of 表示“代表……”；sincerely 修饰 invite 强化诚意；take part in 表示“参加”。 2. The contest will be held in the school hall next Friday afternoon, when twenty competitors will recite poems on stage. 【解析】be held 表示“举行”；when 引导非限制性定语从句补充活动细节；competitors 表示“选手”。 3. I believe the contest will provide you with an incredible opportunity to learn about Chinese campus culture. 【解析】provide sb with an opportunity to do 表示“为某人提供做某事的机会”；incredible 修饰 opportunity 突出机会难得。 四、写作句型 开头句 1. I'm writing to invite you to _______.（说明邀请事项） 2. On behalf of _______, I would like to invite you to _______.（以组织者身份发出邀请） 3. Knowing that you are passionate about _______, I'm writing to invite you to _______.（结合对方兴趣发出邀请） 中间句 1. The contest is scheduled to be held _______（时间）in _______（地点）.（说明时间地点） 2. During the event, we will _______, which will help you _______.（介绍活动内容并补充收获） 3. It would be a great honour for us if you could _______.（委婉表达诚挚期待） 4. Your presence will surely make the event _______, and the participants will benefit greatly from _______.（说明对方出席的意义） 结尾句 1. It would be a great pleasure if you could come. Looking forward to your reply. 2. I would be grateful if you could accept our invitation. 3. Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions about the event. 五、写作模板 模板1：简洁标准版 Dear _______, I'm writing to invite you to _______(活动名称), which will be held _______(时间) in _______(地点). The contest is intended to _______(活动目的). During the event, we will _______(活动内容). I'm sure you will _______(对方收获). It would be a great pleasure if you could come. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 模板2：分层高分版 Dear _______, On behalf of _______, I feel honoured to invite you to _______, which is scheduled to be held _______. Knowing that you are passionate about _______, I believe this event is a worthwhile chance for you to _______. During the event, we will arrange _______, where you can _______. What's more, your presence will surely encourage the participants and make the contest more exciting. I would be grateful if you could accept our invitation. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 六、典例精练 假设你是学生会主席李华。你校将举办英语诗歌比赛，请你给英国朋友 Mr Smith 写一封邀请信，邀请他参加。内容包括比赛时间、地点和活动安排。 写作要点： 1. 说明比赛的时间、地点和主要内容。 2. 结合对方兴趣说明邀请理由。 3. 表达诚挚期待并恳请回复。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr Smith, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作指导 第一步 审题谋篇 体裁是邀请信，属于书信类，无文章标题，须使用具体称呼 Dear Mr Smith，并以完整落款收尾。对象是英国朋友 Mr Smith，目的是邀请他参加英语诗歌比赛。主要使用一般现在时介绍活动安排、情态动词和虚拟语气的委婉表达提出邀请；以第一、第二人称为主；语气正式而亲切。全文按“称呼—邀请目的—活动介绍与邀请理由—期待与落款”组织。 第二步 要点拆解与表达 中文要点 英文表达 句式说明 说明身份并发出邀请 On behalf of the Student Union, I'm writing to invite you to our English poetry contest. on behalf of 引出组织者身份，现在进行时说明写信目的。 介绍比赛时间地点 The contest is scheduled to be held in the school hall next Friday afternoon. be scheduled to be held 说明正式安排，被动语态突出活动本身。 介绍活动内容 Twenty competitors will recite their favourite poems, and the audience can vote for the best performance. 一般将来时描述活动流程，使介绍具体可信。 说明邀请理由与期待 Knowing that you are passionate about poetry, we believe your presence will make the contest more exciting. 现在分词短语说明邀请理由，we believe that... 表达期待。 第三步 句式升级 原句 升级句 仿写句 说明 We invite you to the contest. I feel honoured to invite you to our English poetry contest. I feel honoured to invite you to our English drama festival. 用 I feel honoured to do 强化邀请的正式与诚意。 The contest will be in the hall. The contest is scheduled to be held in the school hall next Friday afternoon. The exhibition is scheduled to be held in the art centre next Monday morning. 用 be scheduled to be held 使活动信息更正式。 You like poetry, so please come. Knowing that you are passionate about poetry, I sincerely hope you can join us. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I sincerely hope you can attend the fair. 用现在分词短语作状语，自然衔接邀请理由。 第四步 同义替换 普通表达 升级表达 使用场景 want to invite feel honoured to invite 正式发出邀请 have be scheduled to hold 说明活动安排 join us be present at the event 表达出席期待 good chance worthwhile opportunity 说明参与价值 hope you can come would be grateful if you could come 委婉表达诚挚期待 参考范文 基础版范文 Dear Mr Smith, I'm writing to invite you to our English poetry contest, which will be held in the school hall next Friday afternoon. The contest is intended to spark students' interest in English poetry. During the event, twenty competitors will recite their favourite poems, and the teachers will comment on their performances. I'm sure you will enjoy the wonderful poems and learn more about our school life. It would be a great pleasure if you could come. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 writing to invite feel honoured to invite 突出组织者的荣幸与正式 will be held is scheduled to be held 使活动安排更正式 interested in passionate about 强调兴趣浓厚 enjoy the poems gain a deeper insight into English poetry 突出文化收获 looking forward to your reply would be grateful if you could accept our invitation 委婉表达诚挚期待 提高版范文 Dear Mr Smith, On behalf of the Student Union, I feel honoured to invite you to our English poetry contest, which is scheduled to be held in the school hall next Friday afternoon. The contest is intended to spark students' interest in English poetry. Knowing that you are passionate about poetry, we have arranged a session where you can share your reading of classic English poems with the competitors. I'm sure you will gain a deeper insight into our campus culture through this face-to-face exchange. I would be grateful if you could accept our invitation. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 七、拓展练习 练习1：邀请外国友人担任英语诗歌比赛评委（人与社会-诗歌） 假设你是学生会主席李华。你校将举办英语诗歌比赛，请你给外国友人 Anna 写一封邀请信，邀请她担任比赛评委。内容包括赛事情由、活动安排和期待出席。 写作要点： 1. 说明赛事情由并正式发出邀请。 2. 介绍活动安排和评委工作。 3. 表达期待出席。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Anna, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：本文属于邀请信，写给外国友人 Anna，目的是邀请她担任英语诗歌比赛评委。 2. 要点：先说明比赛背景和评委邀请；再介绍时间地点与评分工作；最后表达期待。 3. 结构：称呼和邀请目的段；活动安排与评委职责段；期待与祝愿结尾段。 4. 表达：使用 invitation、host、grateful、be passionate about 和 would be grateful if...，邀请部分用情态动词和虚拟语气的委婉表达。 基础版范文 Dear Anna, I'm writing to invite you to serve as a judge for our English poetry contest, which will be held in the school hall next Friday afternoon. The contest is organised by the Student Union to develop students' love for English poetry. As a judge, you will listen to the recitations, score each performance and give brief comments. Your rich experience will make the contest more convincing. I would be grateful if you could come. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 invite you to serve as feel honoured to invite you to act as 突出评委邀请的正式与诚意 organised by hosted by 强调主办身份更正式 listen to the recitations appreciate the recitations on the spot 突出评委工作的专业性 make the contest more convincing lend great weight to the contest 说明评委出席的分量 I would be grateful if you could come It would be our great honour if you could accept our invitation 虚拟语气使期待更委婉诚挚 提高版范文 Dear Anna, I feel honoured to invite you to act as a judge for our English poetry contest, which will be hosted by the Student Union in the school hall next Friday afternoon. The contest is intended to encourage students to explore the beauty of English poetry. As a judge, you will appreciate the recitations on the spot, score each performance and offer brief comments. Your rich experience will lend great weight to the contest and inspire every participant. It would be our great honour if you could accept our invitation. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习2：邀请兄弟学校文学社参加校际诗歌交流会（人与自我-校园俱乐部） 假设你是校文学社社长李华。你校将举办校际英语诗歌交流会，请你给兄弟学校文学社负责人 Mary 写一封邀请信，邀请她带领社员参加。内容包括交流方案和诚挚邀请。 写作要点： 1. 介绍交流会方案并诚邀参与。 2. 说明交流内容和活动安排。 3. 表达诚挚邀请。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mary, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：本文属于邀请信，写给兄弟学校文学社负责人 Mary，目的是邀请其社团参加校际诗歌交流会。 2. 要点：先说明交流会背景；再介绍诗歌朗诵与互评安排；最后表达合作期待。 3. 结构：称呼和邀请目的段；交流内容与安排段；期待回复结尾段。 4. 表达：使用 organise、take part in、incredible、look forward to 和定语从句，体现校际交流的正式语气。 基础版范文 Dear Mary, I'm writing on behalf of our school literary club to invite your club to take part in our inter-school English poetry exchange, which will be held next Wednesday afternoon. During the event, members from both clubs will recite their favourite poems and share their reading experiences. We will also set up a discussion session, where students can exchange ideas about writing. I believe it will be an incredible chance for our members to learn from each other. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 writing on behalf of feel privileged to write on behalf of 突出代表社团的郑重 take part in participate in 用词更正式，契合校际交流 share their reading experiences exchange their insights into poetry reading 突出交流的深度 set up a discussion session arrange an interactive discussion session 强调环节的互动性设计 an incredible chance a truly rewarding experience 强调交流的收获感 提高版范文 Dear Mary, I feel privileged to write on behalf of our school literary club, sincerely inviting your club to participate in our inter-school English poetry exchange, which will be held next Wednesday afternoon. During the event, members from both clubs will recite their favourite poems and exchange their insights into poetry reading. We have also arranged an interactive discussion session, where young poetry lovers can inspire each other. I firmly believe this will be a truly rewarding experience for both clubs. I would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习3：邀请退休外教回校出席英语节开幕式（人与社会-人际交往） 假设你是学生会主席李华。你校将举办英语节，请你给曾经在我校任教的外教 Mr Brown 写一封邀请信，邀请他回校出席英语节开幕式。内容包括情谊表达和活动介绍。 写作要点： 1. 表达思念并邀请出席活动。 2. 介绍英语节开幕式安排。 3. 表达出席期待。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr Brown, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：本文属于邀请信，写给退休外教 Mr Brown，目的是邀请他回校出席英语节开幕式。 2. 要点：先表达师生情谊和问候；再介绍开幕式时间地点与节目安排；最后期待重逢。 3. 结构：问候与邀请目的段；开幕式介绍段；期待与祝愿结尾段。 4. 表达：使用 grateful、sincerely、used to、look forward to，穿插一般过去时回忆与一般将来时展望。 基础版范文 Dear Mr Brown, How is everything going? We often think of the happy moments when you taught us English. I'm writing to invite you to the opening ceremony of our English Festival, which will be held next Monday morning. At the ceremony, students will recite poems, sing English songs and perform short plays. We sincerely hope you can come back and enjoy the day with us. It would mean a lot to both the teachers and students. I would be thankful if you could accept our invitation. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 often think of still treasure the memories of 突出情谊的深厚与珍藏 invite you to attend cordially invite you to grace 正式邀请中更显敬意 enjoy the day with us relive the wonderful moments with us 突出重逢的温情 mean a lot be of great significance 说明出席意义更正式 seeing you soon your return to the campus 点明回校主题更贴切 提高版范文 Dear Mr Brown, How is everything going? We still treasure the memories of the days when you taught us English. I'm writing to cordially invite you to grace the opening ceremony of our English Festival, which will be held next Monday morning. At the ceremony, students will recite poems, sing English songs and perform short plays, many of which were inspired by your classes. It would be of great significance to us if you could relive those wonderful moments on campus. I would be thankful if you could accept our invitation. Looking forward to your return to the campus. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习4：邀请外国交换生观看京剧专场演出（人与社会-京剧） 假设你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办京剧专场演出，请你给外国交换生 Jack 写一封邀请信，邀请他观看演出。内容包括演出亮点和文化价值。 写作要点： 1. 介绍演出亮点并发出邀请。 2. 说明演出时间和文化价值。 3. 表达观演期待。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：本文属于邀请信，写给外国交换生 Jack，目的是邀请他观看京剧专场演出。 2. 要点：先发出演出邀请；再介绍唱腔服饰等亮点与文化价值；最后表达期待。 3. 结构：称呼和邀请目的段；演出亮点与文化意义段；期待回复结尾段。 4. 表达：使用 incredible、gain access to、be passionate about 和非限制性定语从句，突出文化交流视角。 基础版范文 Dear Jack, I'm writing to invite you to a Peking Opera performance, which will be staged in our school theatre this Saturday evening. The performance will include classic excerpts with beautiful singing and colourful costumes. As an exchange student interested in Chinese culture, you will find it an incredible experience. Watching Peking Opera is a wonderful way to understand traditional Chinese art. It would be a great pleasure if you could come. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 will be staged will be put on stage 强调登台演出的现场感 beautiful singing melodious singing and graceful movements 全面呈现京剧艺术特色 find it an incredible experience be truly immersed in the charm of the art 突出沉浸式的文化体验 a wonderful way to understand a perfect gateway to appreciating 强调文化入口的意义 It would be a great pleasure if you could come Nothing would please us more than your presence 虚拟语气表达更强烈的期待 提高版范文 Dear Jack, I'm writing to invite you to a Peking Opera performance, which will be put on stage in our school theatre this Saturday evening. The performance will feature classic excerpts, where melodious singing and graceful movements blend into a feast for the senses. As an exchange student fascinated by Chinese culture, you will be truly immersed in the charm of this time-honoured art. In my eyes, the opera night is a perfect gateway to appreciating traditional Chinese aesthetics. Nothing would please us more than your presence. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习5：邀请外校名师为本校英语角做专题分享（人与社会-合作与交流） 假设你是英语角负责人李华。你校英语角计划邀请外校名师 Ms Green 做专题分享，请你给她写一封邀请信，说明活动设想并恭请莅临。 写作要点： 1. 说明活动缘由并发出邀请。 2. 介绍分享主题和活动设想。 3. 表达恭请莅临的诚意。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Ms Green, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：本文属于邀请信，写给外校名师 Ms Green，目的是邀请她为英语角做专题分享。 2. 要点：先说明英语角背景与邀请缘由；再介绍分享主题与时间安排；最后恭请莅临。 3. 结构：称呼和邀请目的段；主题与设想段；诚意与期待结尾段。 4. 表达：使用 gratitude、sincerely、would appreciate it if... 等委婉表达，语气恭敬而不失自然。 基础版范文 Dear Ms Green, I'm Li Hua, leader of the English Corner in our school. Knowing that you are an expert in English teaching, I'm writing to invite you to give us a special talk. Our English Corner meets every Thursday afternoon, and the members are eager to improve their spoken English. We would like you to share practical methods of English learning and answer our questions. Your guidance will be of great help to us. I would appreciate it if you could come. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 an expert in English teaching widely admired for your expertise in English teaching 突出名师声望更得体 give us a special talk deliver a themed lecture for us 用词更正式庄重 are eager to improve are keen to polish 表达学习热情更地道 of great help immensely beneficial 强调受益程度更深 I would appreciate it if you could come We would be deeply honoured by your presence 恭请莅临更显诚意 提高版范文 Dear Ms Green, I'm Li Hua, leader of the English Corner in our school. Knowing that you are widely admired for your expertise in English teaching, I'm writing to invite you to deliver a themed lecture for us. Our English Corner meets every Thursday afternoon, and the members are keen to polish their spoken English. We sincerely hope you can share practical learning methods and interact with us on the spot. Your guidance, I believe, will be immensely beneficial to everyone present. We would be deeply honoured by your presence. Looking forward to your early reply. 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