摘要:
**基本信息**
以“ My Friend and I”为载体,通过思维导图-思路点拨-模板应用-练习仿写的系统化路径,强化be动词一般现在时与主格人称代词的精准运用,培养语言表达与逻辑组织能力。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|写作思路点拨|3点核心思路(时态/人称/结构)|一般现在时+一三人称转换+总分总结构|从基础语法(be动词)到语篇组织,构建“句子-段落-篇章”逻辑链|
|万能写作模板|4段模板句型|固定框架套用(开篇引入-信息介绍-爱好活动-总结收尾)|以模板为支架,实现知识点(籍贯/班级等)向表达输出的转化|
|课堂填空练习|1篇8空练习|语法填空巩固(人称代词/动词搭配)|通过语境补全强化核心考点(she/her/I等代词区分)|
|课后仿写作业|1篇仿写任务|知识迁移应用(替换信息完成新写作)|从模仿到独立表达,提升语言运用与学习能力|
内容正文:
仁爱英语七上写作 Unit1:My Friend and I
一、写作基本信息
写作题目:My Friend and I
单元主题:Making New Friends(结交新朋友)
核心考点:be 动词一般现在时、主格人称代词 I/she/we
词数要求:80–120 词
写作任务:介绍自己与好朋友的籍贯、班级、性格、兴趣爱好及共同活动
二、思维导图(中心主题:Lingling & Xiao Ya)
Hobbies: drawing pictures & reading books
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Personality: quiet & friendly ←———— Lingling —————→ Class Six, Grade Seven
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Hometown: Beijing
Common Activities: swimming & running | Good friends
Hometown: Tianjin
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Personality: beautiful & lovely ←———— Xiao Ya —————→ Lingling’s classmate
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Hobbies: singing & listening to music
三、写作思路点拨
1. 时态:全文使用一般现在时,用于描述长期不变的个人信息、性格与爱好,谓语使用 am /is/are。
2. 人称:第一人称 I, my 介绍自身信息;第三人称 she, her 介绍朋友;we 描述两人共同行为。
3. 整体结构:总分总三段式
开头:简单自我介绍,引出好朋友;
正文:依次介绍两人基本信息、性格、爱好与课后共同活动;
结尾:总结朋友的意义,抒发和好友相伴的快乐。
四、万能写作模板
段落
板块
模板句型
开头段
开篇引入
Hi, everyone! My name is _________. I have a good friend. Her name is _________.
正文第一段
基本信息
I’m from _________. I’m in Class _________, Grade Seven. I am .
is from _________. She is my classmate. She is ____________.
正文第二段
爱好与共同活动
I like _________ and _________. My friend likes _________ and _________.
We often play together after school, such as _________ and _________.
结尾段
总结收尾
_________ is my best friend. I feel very happy to stay with her.
五、中英完整版范文
英文范文
My Friend and I
Hi, everyone! My name is Lingling. I have a good friend. Her name is Xiao Ya.
I’m from Beijing. I’m in Class Six, Grade Seven. I’m quiet and friendly. Xiao Ya is from Tianjin. She is my classmate. She is a beautiful and lovely girl.
I like drawing pictures and reading books. Xiao Ya likes singing and listening to music. We also do many things together, such as swimming and running after school.
Xiao Ya is a great friend! I enjoy the warm and wonderful time with her every day.
中文翻译
我和我的朋友
大家好!我叫玲玲。我有一位好朋友,她名叫小雅。
我来自北京,在七年级六班。我文静又友善。小雅来自天津,她是我的同班同学,是一个漂亮又可爱的女孩。
我喜欢画画和读书,小雅喜欢唱歌和听音乐。放学后我们还会一起做很多事,比如游泳和跑步。
小雅是一位很棒的朋友!每一天我都十分珍惜和她在一起温暖又美好的时光。
六、高分好词、加分佳句 & 谚语
高分好词
friendly 友好的;lovely 可爱的;quiet 文静的;such as 例如;after school 放学后;enjoy time with sb. 和某人共度时光
加分佳句
1. Good friends make our school life colorful and happy.
好朋友让我们的校园生活多姿多彩、充满快乐。
2. We always help each other when we are in trouble.
遇到困难时,我们总会互相帮助。
经典谚语
A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
七、课堂填空练习(附标准答案)
My Friend and I
Hi, everyone! My name is _________(1). I have a good friend. _________(2) name is Xiao Ya.
I’m from _________(3). I’m in Class Six, Grade Seven. I’m quiet and _________(4). Xiao Ya is from Tianjin. _________(5) is my classmate. She is a beautiful and lovely girl.
I like drawing pictures and _________(6) books. Xiao Ya likes singing and listening to music. We also do many things together, such as _________(7) and running after school.
Xiao Ya is a great friend! I enjoy the wonderful _________(8) with her every day.
答案:
1. Lingling 2. Her 3. Beijing 4. friendly 5. She 6. reading 7. swimming 8. time
八、课后仿写作业题
假设你是 Li Mei,你的好朋友是 Wang Junfeng,请根据提示仿写短文:
Li Mei:来自重庆,七年级三班,性格开朗 outgoing,爱好跳舞、看书;
Wang Junfeng:来自成都,同班同学,高大强壮 tall and strong,爱好踢足球、打篮球;
两人周末经常一起散步、做作业。
要求:套用上方写作模板,词数 80 词左右,正确使用 be 动词与人称代词。
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