摘要:
**基本信息**
以“节日主题写作”为核心,构建“词汇-句型-篇章”三阶训练体系,融合文化意识与语言能力培养,形成可迁移的写作方法论。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|写作素材库|主题词汇30+、高频搭配12组、功能表达4类|分类整合节日核心要素,建立“节日名称-日期-活动-食物”关联框架|从基础词汇到功能表达,实现语言知识的系统化积累|
|黄金句型库|基础句型15+、升级案例6组|通过“基础句→细节拓展→文化内涵”三步升级法提升表达丰富度|遵循“简单句→复合句→情感句”的语言能力进阶逻辑|
|高分写作方法|5步成文法(审题-结构-内容-语言-检查)|提供“三段式”写作结构模板,明确时态和连接词使用规范|构建“任务分析-内容组织-语言优化”的写作思维链|
|阶梯训练|句子训练3Level、篇章训练2篇|从单句翻译仿写过渡到完整篇章创作,强化知识迁移能力|体现“句子准确性→表达丰富性→篇章完整性”的能力提升路径|
内容正文:
Unit 6 Celebrating the Big Days
单元写作专项训练
一、单元核心信息
二、写作素材库
1. 主题词汇
中国传统节日
Spring Festival 春节
Lantern Festival 元宵节
Tomb-sweeping Day 清明节
Dragon Boat Festival 端午节
Mid-Autumn Festival 中秋节
Double Ninth Festival 重阳节
National Day 国庆节
Labor Day 劳动节
Teachers’ Day 教师节
节日日期
lunar January 1st 农历正月初一
lunar January 15th 农历正月十五
around April 5th 4月5日左右
lunar May 5th 农历五月初五
lunar August 15th 农历八月十五
lunar September 9th 农历九月初九
October 1st 10月1日
May 1st 5月1日
September 10th 9月10日
节日活动
put up Spring Festival couplets 贴春联
have a big dinner 吃团圆饭
eat mooncakes 吃月饼
eat zongzi 吃粽子
eat tangyuan 吃汤圆
get lucky money 收压岁钱
watch the Spring Festival TV show 看春节联欢晚会
raise the national flag 升国旗
sweep the tombs 扫墓
enjoy the moon 赏月
guess the lantern riddles 猜灯谜
watch the dragon boat race 看龙舟赛
节日食物与物品
mooncake 月饼
zongzi 粽子
tangyuan 汤圆
rice dumpling 粽子
lantern 灯笼
couplet 对联
lucky money 压岁钱
2. 高频搭配
fall on 落在(某一天)
on lunar ... 在农历……
get together 团聚
have a big meal 吃大餐
put up 张贴;挂
give best wishes 送上最好的祝愿
enjoy the moon 赏月
guess lantern riddles 猜灯谜
watch the TV show 看电视节目
light the lanterns 点灯笼
remember the late family members 纪念已故的家人
3. 写作功能表达
描述节日日期
... falls on lunar ...
……在农历……这天。
... is on ...
……在……(日期)。
描述节日活动
We usually ... on this day.
我们通常在这一天……
People often ...
人们经常……
We are making / eating / watching ...
我们正在做/吃/看……
描述节日食物
We eat ... during the festival.
在节日期间我们吃……
... is a kind of traditional food.
……是一种传统食物。
表达节日感受
I love ... because ...
我喜欢……因为……
It is so much fun!
太有趣了!
We all enjoy the family time.
我们都享受家庭时光。
三、黄金句型库
1. 开头句型
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival.
我最喜欢的节日是春节。
The Spring Festival is an important festival in China.
春节是中国的一个重要节日。
Today I want to talk about ...
今天我想谈谈……
... is a big day for Chinese people.
……对中国人来说是重要的一天。
2. 主体句型
The Spring Festival falls on lunar January 1st.
春节在农历正月初一。
Every year, we have great fun on that day.
每年,我们在那天都玩得很开心。
My father is putting up the Spring Festival couplets.
我父亲正在贴春联。
My mother is making delicious dishes in the kitchen.
我妈妈正在厨房做美味的菜肴。
My grandparents give some lucky money to us.
我的爷爷奶奶给我们压岁钱。
3. 结尾句型
I love the ... Festival. It is so much fun!
我喜欢……节。太有趣了!
We all enjoy the family time.
我们都享受家庭时光。
I think ... is a wonderful festival.
我认为……是一个很棒的节日。
This festival brings us joy and happiness.
这个节日给我们带来快乐和幸福。
4. 句型升级
基础句
升级句
I like the Spring Festival. 我喜欢春节。
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It falls on lunar January 1st. 我最喜欢的节日是春节。它在农历正月初一。
We have a big dinner. 我们吃一顿大餐。
We have a big dinner together on the evening of the Spring Festival. All the family members get together and enjoy the delicious food. 春节晚上我们在一起吃一顿大餐。所有家人聚在一起享用美食。
We eat zongzi. 我们吃粽子。
We eat zongzi during the Dragon Boat Festival. They are made of rice and meat, and they are very delicious. 端午节我们吃粽子。它们是由米饭和肉做成的,非常美味。
My mother makes mooncakes. 我妈妈做月饼。
My mother is making mooncakes in the kitchen. They are round and sweet. We all like eating them. 我妈妈正在厨房做月饼。它们又圆又甜。我们都喜欢吃。
We watch TV. 我们看电视。
We watch the Spring Festival TV show together after dinner. All the Chinese people around the world watch it and welcome the new year. 晚饭后我们一起看春节联欢晚会。全世界的中国人都看它并迎接新年。
I get lucky money. 我收到压岁钱。
My grandparents give some lucky money to me and my cousins. It means they wish us good luck in the new year. 我的爷爷奶奶给表兄弟姐妹和我压岁钱。这意味着他们祝愿我们在新的一年里好运。
四、高分写作方法
Step 1 审题定位
明确写作任务为“写一篇关于自己最喜欢的节日的短文”。写作内容应包括节日的基础信息(日期、由来)、节日完整的活动流程(节前准备、当日活动、特色美食)以及节日的意义和个人感受。
写作形式: 短文(Short Passage)
写作对象: 同学或外国笔友
时态要求: 一般现在时(描述节日惯例)和现在进行时(描述节日现场动作)并用
Step 2 搭建结构
第一段:引出节日
点明自己最喜欢的节日是什么,说明它的日期。
第二段:描述活动
按时间顺序描述节日的活动:节前的准备(贴春联、包粽子等)、当天的活动(吃团圆饭、看节目等)、特色食物(月饼、汤圆等)。
第三段:表达感受
阐述节日的文化意义,抒发过节的幸福感。
Step 3 丰富内容
不要只写“We eat zongzi.”,要加入细节“My mother makes delicious zongzi with rice and meat. We all like eating them.”
Step 4 提升语言
使用序数词(first, second, fifteenth)、一般现在时和现在进行时、时间介词(on lunar...)、连接词(and, then, because, so)和描述性形容词,使文章生动具体。
Step 5 检查修改
检查内容是否完整(日期→准备→活动→食物→感受)、结构是否清晰(三段式)、序数词是否正确、一般现在时和现在进行时是否区分使用、拼写和标点是否有误。
五、阶梯训练
(一)句子训练
Level 1 汉译英
1. 我最喜欢的节日是春节。
____________________________________________________________
2. 春节在农历正月初一。
____________________________________________________________
3. 每年,我们在那天都玩得很开心。
____________________________________________________________
4. 我的祖父母给我压岁钱。
____________________________________________________________
5. 我喜欢春节。太有趣了!
____________________________________________________________
Level 2 句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型 1:My favorite festival is ...(介绍最喜爱的节日)
例句: My favorite festival is the Spring Festival.
(1)我最喜欢的节日是中秋节。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我最喜欢的节日是端午节。
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句型 2:... falls on ...(描述日期)
例句: The Spring Festival falls on lunar January 1st.
(1)中秋节在农历八月十五。
____________________________________________________________
(2)端午节在农历五月初五。
____________________________________________________________
句型 3:We usually ... on this day.(描述节日活动)
例句: We usually have a big dinner on this day.
(1)我们通常在这一天吃月饼和赏月。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我们通常在这一天吃粽子和看龙舟赛。
____________________________________________________________
句型 4:... is making / putting / eating ...(描述正在进行的动作)
例句: My father is putting up the Spring Festival couplets.
(1)我的妈妈正在厨房里做饭。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我的妹妹正在吃汤圆。
____________________________________________________________
句型 5:We eat ... during the festival.(描述节日食物)
例句: We eat mooncakes during the Mid-Autumn Festival.
(1)我们在春节期间吃饺子和年糕。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我们在端午节吃粽子。
____________________________________________________________
句型 6:I love ... because ...(表达喜爱原因)
例句: I love the Spring Festival because it is so much fun.
(1)我喜欢中秋节因为我可以赏月和吃月饼。
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(2)我喜欢端午节因为我可以看龙舟赛。
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Level 3 句子升级
要求:参照下方示例,将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。
示例:
基础句:I like the Spring Festival.
升级句:My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It falls on lunar January 1st.
1. 基础句:We have a big dinner.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
2. 基础句:We eat zongzi.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
3. 基础句:My mother makes mooncakes.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
4. 基础句:We watch TV.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
5. 基础句:I get lucky money.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
6. 基础句:The festival is fun.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
(二)篇章训练
1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日。请根据下面的提示向你的美国笔友Bill介绍这一节日。
The Spring Festival
Date: on the first day of the first lunar month
Activities: clean the room
put up the couplets
eat jiaozi
…
写作要求:词数60个左右 (作文的开头和标题已给出,不计入总词数)。
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.假如你是李华,春节就要到了,你和家人正在为春节做准备。你的英国笔友Annie此时发来邮件表示对中国的春节非常感兴趣。请你回复一封邮件,向她介绍一下吧。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
2. 词数不少于80。
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参考答案
Level 1 汉译英
1. My favorite festival is the Spring Festival.
2. The Spring Festival falls on lunar January 1st.
3. Every year, we have great fun on that day.
4. My grandparents give some lucky money to me.
5. I love the Spring Festival. It is so much fun!
Level 2 句型仿写
句型 1
(1)My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival.
(2)My favorite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival.
句型 2
(1)The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on lunar August 15th.
(2)The Dragon Boat Festival falls on lunar May 5th.
句型 3
(1)We usually eat mooncakes and enjoy the moon on this day.
(2)We usually eat zongzi and watch the dragon boat race on this day.
句型 4
(1)My mother is cooking in the kitchen.
(2)My little sister is eating tangyuan.
句型 5
(1)We eat dumplings and rice cakes during the Spring Festival.
(2)We eat zongzi during the Dragon Boat Festival.
句型 6
(1)I love the Mid-Autumn Festival because I can enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes.
(2)I love the Dragon Boat Festival because I can watch the dragon boat race.
Level 3 句子升级
(以下为参考升级答案,其他合理升级也可接受)
1. 升级句:We have a big dinner together on the evening of the Spring Festival. All the family members get together and enjoy the delicious food.
2. 升级句:We eat zongzi during the Dragon Boat Festival. They are made of rice and meat, and they are very delicious.
3. 升级句:My mother is making mooncakes in the kitchen. They are round and sweet. We all like eating them.
4. 升级句:We watch the Spring Festival TV show together after dinner. All the Chinese people around the world watch it and welcome the new year.
5. 升级句:My grandparents give some lucky money to me and my cousins. It means they wish us good luck in the new year.
6. 升级句:The Spring Festival is so much fun! We can eat delicious food, get lucky money and enjoy the family time together.
篇章训练(参考范文)
1.范文:
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It is on the first day of the first lunar month. We often prepare a lot of things for the festival. On New Year’s Eve, the last day of the lunar year, we usually clean our house together and put up the couplets. In the evening, we eat jiaozi with our family together. Children can get lucky money on that day.
We enjoy the Spring Festival very much.
2.例文
Dear Annie,
I’m glad that you’re interested in the Spring Festival. Let me tell you something about it.
My family and I are busy cleaning the house, shopping for new clothes, and preparing for this big day. During the Spring Festival, we usually have a family dinner and get lucky money from the elders. After that, we also watch TV programs together. It’s a time for family to get together and celebrate the coming year.
If you want to know more, please tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua
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