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Reading for Writing.
(仁爱版 2024)九年级
上
Unit 2 Greener Planet, Better Home
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Pre-writing
While-writing
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Post-writing
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Summary
Assessment
Homework
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Learning objectives
Lead in
Watch and answer.
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Lead in
Watch the video and answer the questions.
We can see ______________ in the picture.
Q:What kinds of pollution can you see in the video?
air pollution
water pollution
noise pollution
Look and answer.
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Lead in
Look at the pictures and answer the questions.
______ (pollution) will make ______. /______ harms ______.
Q:What bad things will each kind of pollution bring us?
dirty, harm, sea animals, uncomfortable, waste water, rubbish, pollute, illness, damage, environment, living‑things, drinking water, noisy, terrible, suffer, fresh air, ocean life
Look and answer.
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Lead in
Look at the pictures and answer the questions.
We can ______ to reduce this kind of pollution.
We should ______ so that we can protect ______.
It’s a good idea to ______.
Q: What small things can we do to stop these pollutions?
plant trees, cut down, stop throwing rubbish, protect, reuse, recycle, take public transport, save water, pick up rubbish, reduce waste, keep clean, take action, go green
Activity1 Pair work.
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Lead in
Identify the types of pollution in the pictures and talk about how we can prevent or reduce pollution.
A:What kinds of pollution can you see in the video?
A:What bad things will each kind of pollution bring us?
A: What small things can we do to stop these pollutions?
B: We can see _____in the picture.
B: ____ (pollution) will make ______. /______ harms ______.
B: We should ______ so that we can protect .
We can ____ to reduce this kind of pollution.
It’s a good idea to __________.
air pollution
water pollution
noise pollution
dirty, harm, sea animals, uncomfortable, waste water, rubbish, pollute, illness, damage, environment, living‑things, drinking water, noisy, terrible, suffer, fresh air
plant trees, cut down, stop throwing rubbish, protect, reuse, recycle, take public transport, save water, pick up rubbish, reduce waste, keep clean, take action, go green
Pre-writing
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Free talk.
Q: Which one would you like to write about?
Q: If we write about one pollution type, what should we include?
Q: How can we make causes and effects clear in our writing?
👉What the pollution is; its causes; its bad effects; our solutions.
air pollution
water pollution
noise pollution
…
👉We need to use cause‑and‑effect relationships.
I pick water pollution for my writing. Would you like to check my article with me?
My name is Li Xiang. We have all learned a lot about air pollution since Mr. Wang’s geography lesson last week. But today, let’s talk about water pollution.
First of all, people have put lots of unclean things into rivers and lakes, such as waste water and rubbish. Such actions have reduced the quality of our drinking water. Besides, farm and factory activities have also been the main causes of water pollution. For many years, farms and factories have poured harmful materials and waste into rivers. As a result, the natural environment has suffered greatly. Worse yet, oil pollution from ships and land‑based factories is also serious. It has polluted the ocean and harmed plants and animals as well.
In a word, water pollution has become a great danger to human health and the environment. We need to reconsider our way of living and protect our home planet.
Skim the text. Match the main idea with each paragraph.
Activity 2 Read and match.
Pre-writing
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It introduces the topic of water pollution.
It shows pollution causes and their bad effects.
It concludes the harm and calls for environmental protection.
My name is Li Xiang. We have all learned a lot about air pollution since Mr. Wang’s geography lesson last week. But today, let’s talk about water pollution.
First of all, people have put lots of unclean things into rivers and lakes, such as waste water and rubbish. Such actions have reduced the quality of our drinking water. Besides, farm and factory activities have also been the main causes of water pollution. For many years, farms and factories have poured harmful materials and waste into rivers. As a result, the natural environment has suffered greatly. Worse yet, oil pollution from ships and land‑based factories is also serious. It has polluted the ocean and harmed plants and animals as well.
In a word, water pollution has become a great danger to human health and the environment. We need to reconsider our way of living and protect our home planet.
Activity 2 Analyze the outline.
Pre-writing
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Beginning
Middle
End
State your topic: Water pollution
Body: Talk about causes and effects of pollution.
Summarize your opinion.
My name is Li Xiang. We have all learned a lot about air pollution since Mr. Wang’s geography lesson last week. But today, let’s talk about water pollution.
First of all, people have put lots of unclean things into rivers and lakes, such as waste water and rubbish. Such actions have reduced the quality of our drinking water. Besides, farm and factory activities have also been the main causes of water pollution. For many years, farms and factories have poured harmful materials and waste into rivers. As a result, the natural environment has suffered greatly. Worse yet, oil pollution from ships and land‑based factories is also serious. It has polluted the ocean and harmed plants and animals as well.
In a word, water pollution has become a great danger to human health and the environment. We need to reconsider our way of living and protect our home planet.
Pre-writing
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Read and take notes.
put … into … 把…… 倒入……
main causes of … …… 的主要原因
harmful materials 有害物质
as a result 结果
natural environment 自然环境
worse yet 更糟糕的是
as well 也;同样
in a word 总之
a great danger to … 对…… 的巨大威胁
reconsider our way of living 反思我们的生活方式
Activity 2 Read the text and underline the useful expressions.
Pre-writing
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Read and underline.
My name is Li Xiang. We have all learned a lot about air pollution since Mr. Wang’s geography lesson last week. But today, let’s talk about water pollution.
First of all, people have put lots of unclean things into rivers and lakes, such as waste water and rubbish. Such actions have reduced the quality of our drinking water. Besides, farm and factory activities have also been the main causes of water pollution. For many years, farms and factories have poured harmful materials and waste into rivers. As a result, the natural environment has suffered greatly. Worse yet, oil pollution from ships and land‑based factories is also serious. It has polluted the ocean and harmed plants and animals as well.
We have all learned a lot about … since … 自从…… 我们学到很多关于……
…, such as … ……,例如……
Besides, … 此外,……
For many years, … 多年来,……
As a result, … 结果,……
Worse yet, … 更糟糕的是,……
In a word, … 总之,……
But today, let’s talk about … 但是今天,我们来谈谈……
First of all, … 首先,……
… has become a great danger to … …… 已经成为对…… 的巨大威胁
We need to … and … 我们需要…… 并且……
Pre-writing
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Activity 2 Read and complete.
My name is Li Xiang. We have all learned a lot about air pollution since Mr. Wang’s geography lesson last week. But today, let’s talk about water pollution.
First of all, people have put lots of unclean things into rivers and lakes, such as waste water and rubbish. Such actions have reduced the quality of our drinking water. Besides, farm and factory activities have also been the main causes of water pollution. For many years, farms and factories have poured harmful materials and waste into rivers. As a result, the natural environment has suffered greatly. Worse yet, oil pollution from ships and land‑based factories is also serious. It has polluted the ocean and harmed plants and animals as well.
In a word, water pollution has become a great danger to human health and the environment. We need to reconsider our way of living and protect our home planet.
Read the model essay and complete the cause-and-effect chart.
Body: Talk about causes and effects of pollution.
Pre-writing
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Activity 2 Read and complete.
My name is Li Xiang. We have all learned a lot about air pollution since Mr. Wang’s geography lesson last week. But today, let’s talk about water pollution.
First of all, people have put lots of unclean things into rivers and lakes, such as waste water and rubbish. Such actions have reduced the quality of our drinking water. Besides, farm and factory activities have also been the main causes of water pollution. For many years, farms and factories have poured harmful materials and waste into rivers. As a result, the natural environment has suffered greatly. Worse yet, oil pollution from ships and land‑based factories is also serious. It has polluted the ocean and harmed plants and animals as well.
In a word, water pollution has become a great danger to human health and the environment. We need to reconsider our way of living and protect our home planet.
Read the model essay and complete the cause-and-effect chart.
Causes1
Causes2
Causes3
后面大概率是 Cause(原因)
Effet1
Effet2
Effet3
Cause 在前,Effect 在后
Pre-writing
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Activity 2 Read and complete.
My name is Li Xiang. We have all learned a lot about air pollution since Mr. Wang’s geography lesson last week. But today, let’s talk about water pollution.
First of all, people have put lots of unclean things into rivers and lakes, such as waste water and rubbish. Such actions have reduced the quality of our drinking water. Besides, farm and factory activities have also been the main causes of water pollution. For many years, farms and factories have poured harmful materials and waste into rivers. As a result, the natural environment has suffered greatly. Worse yet, oil pollution from ships and land‑based factories is also serious. It has polluted the ocean and harmed plants and animals as well.
In a word, water pollution has become a great danger to human health and the environment. We need to reconsider our way of living and protect our home planet.
Read the model essay and complete the cause-and-effect chart.
后面大概率是 Effect(结果)
后面是 总结
后面大概率是 Cause(原因)
Cause 在前,Effect 在后;
As a result 后面接后果。
Read the model essay and complete the cause-and-effect chart.
Activity 2 Read and complete.
Causes
Effect
________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
While-writing
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________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
People put unclean things into rivers and lakes.
Farm and factory activities pour harmful materials and waste into rivers.
Oil pollution comes from ships and land‑based factories.
The quality of drinking water becomes worse.
The natural environment suffers greatly.
The ocean, plants and animals get harmed.
Activity 3 Draft your essay about your activities in protecting the environment.
The phrases and sentence patterns may help you.
While-writing
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Activity 3 Draft your essay.
Useful phrase Useful sentence pattern
put … into … We have learned a lot about …
main cause Besides, …
natural environment As a result, …
in fact In a word, …
Activity 3 Draft your essay.
While-writing
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Activity 3 Draft your essay about your activities in protecting the environment.
Beginning
Middle
End
State your topic: Water pollution
Body: Talk about causes and effects of pollution.
Summarize your opinion.
We have learned a lot about …
But today, let’s talk about …
‑ First of all, people have put … into … Such actions have …
‑ Besides, … have also been the main causes of …
‑ As a result, …
‑ Worse yet, … is also serious.
It has … as well.
In a word, … has become a great danger to …
We need to … and …
How well can you ______________? Partner’s rating
express your view of living a greener life
organize the cause and effect relationship
introduce your activities in protecting the environment
organize ideas into a well-balanced structure
use the theme vocabulary of the unit
use the present perfect tense
use punctuation
spell the words
Invite your partner to rate your final draft. Write 1 (more improvements needed), 2 (fair), 3 (good), or 4 (excellent) for the ratings.
Activity 4 Rate your final draft.
Post-writing
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My name is Zhang Hua. We have all learn a lot about water pollution since Miss Li’s biology lesson last week. But today, let’s talk about air pollution.
First of all, people put dirty smoke into the air. Such actions reduce our air quality. Besides, car and factory activity are main causes. For many years, factories poured harmful gas into the sky. As a result, the natural environment suffer greatly. Worse yet, waste burning pollutes the sky and harm people’s health.
In a word, air pollution have become a great danger. We need to change our lifestyle and protect our home planet.
Post-writing
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Read and correct.
learned
activities
have poured
has suffered
harmed
has
My name is Liu Mei. We have learned a lot about water pollution since Mr. Chen’s science lesson last week. But today, let’s talk about noise pollution.
First of all, people make loud noise in public place. Such actions have makes our life terrible. Besides, building works are one main cause. For many years, machines make loud noise every day. As a result, many people sleep bad. Worse yet, loud noise hurt animal as well.
In a word, noise pollution is dangerous for us. We need to change our habits and protect ours home planet.
Post-writing
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Read and correct.
places
made
have made
badly
animals
our
The words we have learned
一、汉译英
污染 ___________________________
把…… 投入…… ___________________________
主要原因 ___________________________
自然环境 ___________________________
总而言之 ___________________________
水污染 ___________________________
有害的物质 ___________________________
对…… 造成极大危害 ___________________________
Summary
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pollution
put … into …
main cause
natural environment
in a word
water pollution
harmful materials
be a great danger to…
The phrases we have learned
二、用短语的正确形式填空。
put … into…, main cause, natural environment, as a result, in a word
People ____________ waste water ____________ rivers and lakes.
Farm and factory activities are the ____________ of water pollution.
The pollution does great harm to our ___________________.
____________, many plants and animals are in danger.
____________, we must do something to stop water pollution.
Summary
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put into
main cause
natural environment
As a result
In a word
三、根据中文提示完成句子。
自从上周王老师的地理课以来,我们学到了很多关于空气污染的知识。
We ________________________ air pollution since Mr. Wang’s geography lesson last week.
首先,人们把很多不干净的东西投入江河湖泊。
________________, people have put lots of unclean things into rivers and lakes.
结果,我们饮用水的质量下降了。
________________, the quality of our drinking water has become worse.
总而言之,水污染已经对人类健康和环境构成巨大威胁。
________________, water pollution has become a great danger to human health and the environment.
我们需要重新思考我们的生活方式,保护我们的地球家园。
We need to reconsider our way of living and ________________________.
The sentences we have learned
Summary
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have learned a lot about
First of all
As a result
In a word
protect our home planet
The outline we have learned
Summary
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Beginning
Middle
End
State your topic: Water pollution
Body: Talk about causes and effects of pollution.
Summarize your opinion.
We have learned a lot about …
But today, let’s talk about …
‑ First of all, people have put … into … Such actions have …
‑ Besides, … have also been the main causes of …
‑ As a result, …
‑ Worse yet, … is also serious.
It has … as well.
In a word, … has become a great danger to …
We need to … and …
Assessment
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Self-assessment
I can extract causes and effects from the model essay.
I can organize ideas with the cause‑and‑effect chart.
I can write a short passage about protecting the environment.
Basic (基础)
Improving(提升)
Extend (拓展)
Homework
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抄写范文中 put…into…等 8 个核心写作短语,选取 4 个短语仿写因果类句子。
写一篇短文《Protect our environment》,分析一种污染的 2‑3 个成因与危害。
选择一种生活中的污染,绘制因果思维导图,为环境保护短文搭建写作框架。
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