英语读后续写专项复习-母亲的舞台人生-导学案-2027届高三英语二轮专题复习

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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Lately when I visit my mother, she is always out. “At rehearsal!” She’ll text. “Come back after 5 pm. Or another day.” She has joined a community choir. At 60, she has started going to dance classes. She still plays in a drama club, and now this, singing in an urban opera. For her, art is a relaxation. She does things for her own joy, while still keeping up with a job. I’m the opposite. I made writing and performing my job. I never wrote a word until I was paid, and I dream of retirement. 　　Determined to find out what an urban opera actually is, I set up to one of her performances. When my mother appeared in stage center, holding a mannequin (人体模型) of a boy, clearly deeply moved, I burst into tears. I’d expected this to be sweet, but I hadn’t expected it to actually be good. 　　Most popular culture, especially for the young, is generated by what we once called amateurs, TikTok comedians, whose skits (小品) go viral. Social media may be bad for our health, but it is good at bypassing gatekeepers. 　　I do believe there’s something different. There’s something about performers who do it for connection and community that brings me open with joy. They put real life on the stage, more naturally than professionals can. And art is not merely a distraction or luxury — it is a necessity. It’s our humanity, and it’s how and why we keep going. 　　After the opera show ended, the audience applauded warmly. Mother came off the stage, sweating but wearing a bright smile. 续写要求 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已给出。 　　Paragraph 1： I walked towards her, still with tears shining in my eyes.　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Paragraph 2： In the following months, something unexpected happened to me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　年过六十的母亲坚持热爱，参与各类艺术活动，只为取悦自我—— _________________ ——作者观看母亲的城市歌剧演出，被母亲真挚动人的表演深深震撼—— _________________ ——作者感悟业余艺术的纯粹真谛：艺术是人性必需品，是生活前行的力量—— _________________ 4. 细节问答 What does the mother do in her spare time? ：___________________________________ Why does the mother take part in art activities?：_________________________________ What is the difference between the author and the mother?：________________________________________________ How did the author feel after watching the mother’s performance?：__________________________________________ What does the author think of amateur performers’ art?：_____________________________________________ What is the true meaning of art in the author’s eyes?：_________________________________________________ What state was the mother in after the opera show?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　六旬母亲热爱艺术，踊跃参与合唱团、舞蹈、戏剧与歌剧活动，为热爱而活→_________________ →作者抱好奇心态观看母亲演出，被真挚精彩的表演打动落泪→_________________ →作者领悟业余艺术的纯粹与力量，明白艺术是人性刚需、治愈生活→（续写）作者上前与母亲交流，读懂母亲的热爱与坚守→（续写）作者受母亲影响，改变心态、重拾创作初心 6．情感线 　　author: confused and tired of work→___________→moved and enlightened→___________→positive and passionate（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　定语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词、让步状语从句、宾语从句 ___________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　人生感悟类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1： I walked towards her, still with tears shining in my eyes. 　　衔接句1——What did the author say to her mother? What did the author realize? ________________________________________________________________________ 　　Paragraph 2： In the following months, something unexpected happened to me. 　　衔接句2——What change took place on the author? What is the theme of the story? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：我走向母亲，眼中依旧闪着泪光。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 　　第二段：在接下来的几个月里，我身上发生了意想不到的改变。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四. 段落续写 　　Paragraph 1： I walked towards her, still with tears shining in my eyes.　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Paragraph 2： In the following months, something unexpected happened to me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【标准答案】 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　作者（以艺术创作为职业、功利疲惫、渴望退休的创作者）；母亲（年过花甲、热爱生活、纯粹追梦、为愉悦自我而坚持艺术的普通人） 2．视角 　　第一人称 3．时空线 　　年过六十的母亲坚持热爱，参与各类艺术活动，只为取悦自我——作者以艺术为谋生职业，功利疲惫，与母亲纯粹的热爱形成鲜明对比 ——作者观看母亲的城市歌剧演出，被母亲真挚动人的表演深深震撼—— 作者对比业余与专业艺术，感悟业余艺术的真诚与温度 ——作者感悟业余艺术的纯粹真谛：艺术是人性必需品，是生活前行的力量—— 演出落幕，母亲满载笑容退场，作者内心深受触动 4. 细节问答 What does the mother do in her spare time? ：She joins a community choir, takes dance classes, plays in a drama club and sings in an urban opera. Why does the mother take part in art activities?：She does art activities for relaxation and pure joy of herself. What is the difference between the author and the mother?：The mother does art for fun, while the author takes art as a job and only creates for payment. How did the author feel after watching the mother’s performance?：The author was deeply moved and astonished by her mother’s wonderful performance. What does the author think of amateur performers’ art?：Amateur performers’ art is more natural, sincere and full of real life and human warmth. What is the true meaning of art in the author’s eyes?：Art is not a luxury but a human necessity, which supports people to move forward in life. What state was the mother in after the opera show?：She was sweating but wore a bright and satisfied smile. What does the story tell us?：True art lies in pure love and sincere devotion rather than utilitarian purposes, and passion can light up life at any age. 5．情节线 　　六旬母亲热爱艺术，踊跃参与合唱团、舞蹈、戏剧与歌剧活动，为热爱而活→作者职业创作功利疲惫，不解母亲纯粹的艺术追求 →作者抱好奇心态观看母亲演出，被真挚精彩的表演打动落泪→深度感悟业余艺术的真诚力量，读懂艺术的人文价值 →作者领悟业余艺术的纯粹与力量，明白艺术是人性刚需、治愈生活→（续写）作者上前与母亲交流，读懂母亲的热爱与坚守→（续写）作者受母亲影响，改变心态、重拾创作初心 6．情感线 　　author: confused and tired of work→curious and doubtful→moved and enlightened→grateful and reflective→positive and passionate（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：身为职业创作者的作者功利疲惫、渴望退休，而年过六旬的母亲纯粹热爱艺术、为愉悦自我坚持舞台表演，观看母亲演出后，作者深受触动，摒弃功利心态，重拾艺术创作的初心与热爱。 　　英文：Working as a professional creator, the author felt tired and utilitarian about art, while his sixty-year-old mother stuck to various art activities for pure joy. After watching his mother’s sincere and wonderful performance, the author was deeply inspired, abandoned utilitarian ideas and regained his original passion for art. 8. 句式 　　定语从句：There’s something about performers who do it for connection and community that brings me open with joy. 非谓语动词：When my mother appeared in stage center, holding a mannequin of a boy, clearly deeply moved, I burst into tears. 让步状语从句：Social media may be bad for our health, but it is good at bypassing gatekeepers. 宾语从句：I’d expected this to be sweet, but I hadn’t expected it to actually be good. 9. 本文主题 　　人生感悟类：艺术的真谛是纯粹的热爱与真诚的坚守，无关功利、不分年龄，热爱可治愈生活、点亮人生。 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1： I walked towards her, still with tears shining in my eyes. 衔接句1：I praised her wonderful performance and asked her why she kept pursuing art at an old age. Mother told me art brought her endless joy and strength, which made me reflect on my own utilitarian creation. 　　Paragraph 2： In the following months, something unexpected happened to me. 衔接句2：I changed my attitude towards creation, stopped writing merely for payment and began to create for pure love. I finally understood that true art comes from heartfelt passion and sincere feelings. 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：我走向母亲，眼中依旧闪着泪光。 →①由衷夸赞母亲精彩的表演，内心满是震撼与愧疚→②聆听母亲对艺术与热爱的纯粹感悟→③开始反思自己功利疲惫的创作心态； 　　第二段：在接下来的几个月里，我身上发生了意想不到的改变。 →①摒弃功利心态，不再只为报酬创作→②重拾对艺术的初心与热爱，享受创作的过程→③领悟人生与艺术的真谛，热爱不分年龄、纯粹方得始终。 四、标准续写范文（150词左右） 　　Paragraph 1： I walked towards her, still with tears shining in my eyes. I sincerely told mother that her performance was extremely touching and impressive. Smiling gently, she wiped my tears and said she simply loved performing and enjoyed every moment on stage. For her, art was never a task or a job, but a pure source of happiness and spiritual comfort. Listening to her words, I felt ashamed. I had long regarded creation as a money-making tool, ignoring the original warmth and joy of art. 　　Paragraph 2： In the following months, something unexpected happened to me. I completely changed my previous attitude towards writing and performing. I stopped creating merely for payment and started writing out of true passion and inner feelings. I devoted myself to recording real life and warm stories. Gradually, I regained the joy of creation that I had long lost. It was my mother who taught me that the true meaning of art lies in sincere love and heartfelt devotion, which lights up both life and soul. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $