读后续写专项复习-The Warmest Chocolate-导学案-2027届高三英语二轮复习

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写核心考点，涵盖文本分析（角色、视角、时空线、情节线、情感线）、情节构造、段落续写框架等模块，通过细节问答、情节线梳理等问题导向设计，引导学生自主构建续写逻辑体系，形成从文本解读到情节创作的完整认知链。 亮点在于文本分析工具包和个性化续写支架设计，如“时空线填空”“情感线补全”等自测诊断活动，帮助学生精准定位文本理解漏洞，培养语言能力与思维品质。每个模块配有续写框架模板和反思总结表，支持学生自主优化续写思路，教师可通过学生的框架填写情况实施分层指导，有效提升备考实效。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Twelve years ago, I was admitted to a children’s hospital for heart surgery due to a birth defect. On the first morning, filled with unease, I moved from one test to another. A vivid poster suddenly arrested my attention. It was an advertisement for an activity where patients could make chocolate treats — scheduled exactly during my surgery time. As a 12yearold who found comfort in chocolate during hospital stays, I felt extremely disappointed. “But chocolate always makes me feel better. Now I’ll miss the chance to make my own.” I complained loudly, and the nurses passing by gave me pitying looks. The day of the surgery arrived, and the atmosphere was tense. When I was wheeled into the operating room, thoughts of chocolate filled my mind as the anesthesia worked. Unfortunately, things went wrong during the operation. Complications led to my move to the ICU, followed by three tough days in intensive care. After recovery, my mom wheeled me back to the ward, saying there was a surprise for me. There, a nurse handed me a waxpaperwrapped package, inside which was a strawberryfilled chocolate, slightly foggy from the fridge. The nurse explained that a girl undergoing chemotherapy, who’d overheard my disappointment about the activity, made this for me and entrusted the staff to preserve it. With trembling hands, I unwrapped it. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: The first bite brought tears to my eyes. Paragraph 2: Before I left the hospital, I made up my mind to find that girl. 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　The author received heart surgery treatment in a children’s hospital at the age of twelve--- _________________ --- the author missed a chocolate‑making activity due to surgery and felt extremely disappointed--- _________________ --- the surgery went wrong and the author was sent to ICU for painful recovery--- _________________ --- after recovering, the author got a surprise package from a stranger girl--- _________________ --- the package contained handmade chocolate made by a sick girl with chemotherapy 4. 细节问答 　　Why was the author admitted to the children’s hospital? ：___________________________________ 　　Why did the author feel disappointed at the chocolate activity?：_________________________________ 　　What accident happened during the author’s surgery?：________________________________________________ 　　Where did the author receive intensive treatment after the surgery?：__________________________________________ 　　Who made the strawberry‑filled chocolate for the author?：_____________________________________________ 　　How did the girl know the author’s disappointment?：_________________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　十二岁的作者因先天心脏缺陷入院接受手术治疗→住院期间偶然看到手工巧克力活动海报，却恰逢手术时间，无缘参与→喜爱巧克力的作者倍感失落，随口抱怨被旁人听到→手术突发并发症，作者转入重症监护室，度过艰难的恢复期→康复回到普通病房后，妈妈告知作者有一份惊喜→护士递来一份冷藏保存的手工巧克力→得知是一位化疗女孩听闻自己的遗憾，特意制作赠予自己→___________（续写）→___________（续写） 6．情感线 　　Uneasy and anxious→___________→painful and desperate→___________→moved and grateful→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语动词；with伴随结构 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　温情治愈类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1: The first bite brought tears to my eyes. 衔接句1——What did the author feel and realize after tasting the chocolate? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Paragraph 2: Before I left the hospital, I made up my mind to find that girl. 衔接句2——What was the result of the author’s search and what did he learn? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：第一口巧克力让我热泪盈眶。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 　　第二段：离开医院前，我下定决心要找到那个女孩。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 The first bite brought tears to my eyes. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Before I left the hospital, I made up my mind to find that girl. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　The author（身患心脏缺陷、历经手术磨难、内心柔软、懂得感恩与传递善意的孩子）；A sick girl（正在接受化疗、身处病痛、心怀温柔、无私给予陌生人温暖的善良女孩）；Hospital nurses（细心体贴、帮忙留存礼物、传递温暖的医护人员）；Author’s mom（陪伴照顾、温柔守护作者的家人） 2．视角 　　第一人称 3．时空线 　　The author received heart surgery treatment in a children’s hospital at the age of twelve--- feeling uneasy and frightened about the coming surgery --- the author missed a chocolate‑making activity due to surgery and felt extremely disappointed--- regarding chocolate as spiritual comfort during tough hospital days --- the surgery went wrong and the author was sent to ICU for painful recovery--- suffering great physical pain and mental despair --- after recovering, the author got a surprise package from a stranger girl--- feeling curious and warm at the unexpected gift --- the package contained handmade chocolate made by a sick girl with chemotherapy 4. 细节问答 　　Why was the author admitted to the children’s hospital? ：The author was born with a heart defect and needed to receive heart surgery. 　　Why did the author feel disappointed at the chocolate activity?：The time of the chocolate-making activity exactly fell on her surgery time, so she couldn’t take part in it. 　　What accident happened during the author’s surgery?：Unexpected complications occurred during the operation. 　　Where did the author receive intensive treatment after the surgery?：She was moved to the ICU and received tough intensive care for three days. 　　Who made the strawberry‑filled chocolate for the author?：A stranger girl who was receiving chemotherapy made the chocolate for her. 　　How did the girl know the author’s disappointment?：The girl overheard the author complaining about missing the chocolate activity in the hospital. 5．情节线 　　十二岁的作者因先天心脏缺陷入院接受手术治疗→住院期间偶然看到手工巧克力活动海报，却恰逢手术时间，无缘参与→喜爱巧克力的作者倍感失落，随口抱怨被旁人听到→手术突发并发症，作者转入重症监护室，度过艰难的恢复期→康复回到普通病房后，妈妈告知作者有一份惊喜→护士递来一份冷藏保存的手工巧克力→得知是一位化疗女孩听闻自己的遗憾，特意制作赠予自己→作者品尝巧克力，甜蜜滋味治愈病痛与低落，深深被陌生女孩的温柔善意打动→作者决心当面致谢，虽遗憾未能相见，但将这份温暖铭记于心，终身传递善意 6．情感线 　　Uneasy and anxious→disappointed and frustrated→painful and desperate→surprised and touched→moved and grateful→inspired and determined（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：历经手术磨难的作者，意外收到身患重病的陌生女孩亲手制作的巧克力，这份跨越病痛的温柔善意治愈了低谷中的作者，也让其懂得传递温暖的意义。 　　英文：Suffering from a tough heart surgery, the author received a handmade chocolate from a sick stranger girl, whose selfless kindness warmed her painful days and inspired her to pass on kindness. 8. 句式 　　定语从句：I was admitted to a children’s hospital for heart surgery due to a birth defect. 状语从句：As a 12‑year‑old who found comfort in chocolate, I felt extremely disappointed. 非谓语动词：Thoughts of chocolate filled my mind as the anesthesia worked. 宾语从句：The nurse explained that a girl undergoing chemotherapy made this for me. 9. 本文主题 　　温情治愈类：苦难之中的善意最为珍贵，微小的温暖足以治愈伤痛、照亮人生，善意值得代代传递。 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1: The first bite brought tears to my eyes. 衔接句1——What did the author feel and realize after tasting the chocolate? The sweet chocolate warmed her painful body, and she was deeply moved by the girl’s kindness despite her own severe illness. 　　Paragraph 2: Before I left the hospital, I made up my mind to find that girl. 衔接句2——What was the result of the author’s search and what did he learn? She failed to meet the girl but kept the kindness in heart, deciding to pass on warm kindness to others in her later life. 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：第一口巧克力让我热泪盈眶。 →①清甜的滋味抚平病痛的煎熬与内心的低落→②知晓女孩强忍化疗病痛仍心怀温柔、温暖陌生人→③深切体会这份纯粹善意，内心满是感动与感恩； 　　第二段：离开医院前，我下定决心要找到那个女孩。 →①渴望当面致谢，铭记这份珍贵的温暖→②遗憾得知女孩已治愈出院、悄然离开→③虽无缘相见，但立志传承善意，用温暖治愈他人。 四.段落续写（满分范文） 　　The first bite brought tears to my eyes. The sweet and mellow taste spread gently on my tongue, warming my tired body and fragile heart that had suffered from surgery and ICU treatment. Beyond the delicious flavor, I tasted the purest kindness from a stranger. Knowing the girl was enduring painful chemotherapy yet still remembered my disappointment and prepared a gift for me, I was overwhelmed with gratitude. That ordinary chocolate was no longer a simple snack but a ray of sunshine, driving away all my fear and despair during the tough hospital days. 　　Before I left the hospital, I made up my mind to find that girl. I hoped to thank her face to face and pass on the warm kindness she had given me. Unfortunately, the nurse told me the girl had finished her treatment and left the hospital quietly. Though I failed to meet her, her selfless kindness rooted deeply in my heart. From then on, I kept helping others in need. I firmly believe that kindness is a precious treasure, and small warm acts can always light up others’ darkest moments. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $