Unit 2 Let’s Talk Teens 亲子沟通建议信（含学习地图）（单元同步写作讲义）高中英语译林版必修第一册

本高中英语讲义聚焦亲子沟通建议信写作核心知识点，构建“明确主题对象—搭建结构框架—积累词汇句型—运用写作模板—分层情境练习—评价表自查”的学习支架，系统覆盖从写作任务理解到成篇修改的完整闭环。 资料以“真实情境+素养导向”为特色，通过5个分层练习（如冲突和解、换位沟通）培养思维品质中的问题解决与同理心，提供可迁移的主题词汇及建议句型提升语言能力，评价表助力学生自主反思改进学习能力。课中辅助教师高效开展教学，课后帮助学生通过拓展练习与自查查漏补缺，强化写作应用技能。

Unit 2 Let’s Talk Teens｜亲子沟通建议信写作学习地图 主题 体裁 建议词数 核心任务 亲子沟通与青春成长 建议信 80词左右 围绕亲子沟通问题，提出尊重、可行的建议。 一、本讲义内容导航 模块 学什么 帮你解决什么问题 01 写作主题 明确对象、任务、重点与语气 知道写什么、写给谁 02 写作框架 称呼、开头、建议、结尾、落款 掌握完整建议信结构 03 写作词汇 主题词汇与实用表达 积累可直接使用的表达 04 写作句型 共情表达与建议句式 把建议写得真诚可行 05 写作模板 标准版与提升版结构 快速组织完整邮件 06 典例精练 结合真实情境练习方法 把方法落实到任务中 07 写作指导 审题、谋篇与表达方法 解决写什么、怎么写 08 参考范文 学习结构、语言与建议逻辑 借鉴完整成篇表达 09 拓展练习 不同情境下的迁移写作 形成独立写作能力 10 写作评价表 对照标准自查、修改、提升 发现问题并完成改进 二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么？ 练习主题 写作任务 重点训练 练习1｜亲子沟通问题建议 人与社会·家庭关系 朋友被父母催促学习而苦恼？写信念倾听、择时交谈与共订安排。 倾听共情；时机选择；共同安排 练习2｜冲突与和解建议 人与社会·冲突与和解 朋友因没及时回母亲信息而争吵？建议先道歉、解释并约定规则。 道歉表达；原因解释；规则约定 练习3｜换位沟通建议 人与自我·同理心 朋友想参加周末活动却被拒？从父母角度分析并提出换位沟通建议。 换位思考；原因分析；沟通策略 练习4｜同伴烦恼交流建议 人与社会·友谊 同学因外貌和成绩焦虑不愿交流？提出倾听、陪伴与求助三条建议。 倾听陪伴；情绪疏导；求助建议 练习5｜家庭矛盾情绪调节建议 人与自我·情绪 朋友与父母争执后情绪低落？教他记录情绪、暂离现场、理性沟通。 情绪识别；冷静策略；理性沟通 三、系列训练亮点与学习路径 教材同步 结构完整 表达可用 练习分层 评价促改 紧扣单元主题与体裁 从审题到修改形成闭环 词汇句型模板可迁移 五类情境训练不重复 对照标准自查修改 学习路径 明沟通问题 → 搭建议框架 → 学劝解表达 → 完成练习 → 修改提升 Unit 2 Let’s Talk Teens 亲子沟通建议信（单元同步写作讲义） 一、写作主题 单元主题： Let’s Talk Teens；青春期成长、亲子沟通与情绪调节 应用文体裁： 建议信 写作任务： 围绕亲子沟通、家庭争执、同理心或负面情绪等具体问题，给同龄朋友提出尊重、可执行的沟通和调节建议。 二、写作框架 部分 内容要点 称呼（1句） 正式成品不设文章标题；使用题干指定的具体称呼，顶格书写。 开头（2句） 表达理解，说明回信目的并概括问题。 主体（4—5句） 分析问题原因，按顺序提出两至三条沟通或调节建议，补充理由。 结尾（2句） 表达祝愿，使用完整结束语和署名。 三、写作词汇 核心单词 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 teenager 青少年 交代写作对象 argument 争吵；争论 描述家庭问题 tension 紧张关系；紧张 说明关系状态 anxious 焦虑的；担心的 表达情绪 mental 精神的；心理的 描述心理健康 struggle 奋斗；挣扎 描述成长困难 regular 有规律的 建议稳定沟通 calm 平静的；使平静 描述沟通方式 view 看法；观点 说明双方观点 concern 担心；关心 解释父母顾虑 主题短语 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 see eye to eye with 与某人看法一致 描述意见差异 calm down 平静下来 提出情绪调节建议 from one’s point of view 从某人的角度看 培养同理心 think something through 全面考虑 建议理性处理问题 cheer up 振作起来 安慰和鼓励对方 核心词汇写作运用 词汇填空 1. It is normal for a ________(青少年) to want more independence. 2. A calm conversation is better than a loud ________(争吵). 3. Try to see the problem from your parents’ ________(观点). 4. You should think the decision ________(全面) before speaking. 5. If you feel ________(焦虑的), take a short break and talk to someone you trust. 句子翻译 1. 从父母的角度看，他们的担心往往来自对你的关心。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 当你生气时，先冷静下来，再和父母谈话。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 充分考虑双方的观点，有助于减少家庭紧张关系。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、写作句型 开头句 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having an argument with your parents about _______. 2. I understand that it is not easy for a teenager to _______. 3. I'd like to offer some advice that may help you improve the situation. 中间句 1. From your parents’ point of view, they may be concerned about _______. 2. It would be a good idea to calm down before you start a conversation. 3. Besides, try to explain your feelings honestly and listen to their views in return. 4. If you think the problem through, you may find a solution that is acceptable to both sides. 结尾句 1. I hope these suggestions will help reduce the tension between you and your parents. 2. I am sure your relationship will improve if you keep communicating. 3. Please cheer up and feel free to contact me. 五、写作模板 模板1：简洁标准版 Dear _______, I'm sorry to hear that you are having an argument with your parents about _______. I understand that this situation makes you feel _______. First, calm down and choose a suitable time to talk. Besides, explain your feelings and listen to their views. From their point of view, _______. Finally, think the problem through and try to find a plan that _______. I hope these suggestions will be useful. Please cheer up. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 模板2：分层高分版 Dear _______, Knowing that you are suffering from tension at home, I would like to offer some advice. Although you and your parents may not see eye to eye on _______, their concerns probably come from their love for you. To begin with, calm down before discussing the problem. In addition, explain your feelings frankly, while taking their views into account. If you think the matter through, you will be more likely to reach an agreement that satisfies both sides. I sincerely hope that communication will bring you closer together. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 六、典例精练 请你给朋友 Lily 写一封建议信。她因为父母限制晚间手机使用而与父母发生争执，感到焦虑。请你从父母的角度解释其担心，并提出三条改善沟通的建议。 写作要点： 1. 表示理解并说明问题。 2. 解释父母的顾虑。 3. 提出冷静沟通、说明需求和共同制定规则三条建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。 Dear Lily, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 七、拓展练习 练习1：亲子沟通问题建议（人与社会-家庭关系） 请你给同龄朋友 Jack 写一封建议信。Jack 觉得父母总是催促他学习，很少倾听他的想法。请你提出倾听、选择合适时间交谈和共同制订学习安排三条建议。 写作要点： 1. 表示理解 Jack 的感受。 2. 分析父母催促背后的担心。 3. 提出三条沟通建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习2：冲突与和解建议（人与社会-冲突与和解） 请你给同学 Amy 写一封建议信。Amy 因为没有及时回复母亲的信息而与母亲争吵。请你建议她先道歉、解释原因并约定今后的联系规则。 写作要点： 1. 表示理解冲突原因。 2. 提出道歉和解释的方法。 3. 建议共同约定联系规则。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。 Dear Amy, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习3：换位沟通建议（人与自我-同理心） 请你给青春期同学 Emma 写一封建议信。Emma 认为父母不理解她参加周末活动的愿望。请你从父母担心安全和学习的角度进行解释，并提出换位沟通建议。 写作要点： 1. 说明父母可能担心的原因。 2. 建议 Emma 先理解父母再表达计划。 3. 提出提供活动细节和安全安排的方法。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。 Dear Emma, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习4：同伴烦恼交流建议（人与社会-友谊） 请你给朋友 Ben 写一封建议信。Ben 的同学最近因外貌和考试成绩感到焦虑，不愿与人交流。请你提出倾听、陪伴和鼓励对方寻求老师帮助三条建议。 写作要点： 1. 表示对同学情绪的理解。 2. 建议耐心倾听和陪伴。 3. 建议必要时寻求老师或家长帮助。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。 Dear Ben, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习5：家庭矛盾情绪调节建议（人与自我-情绪） 请你给同学 Lucy 写一封建议信。Lucy 因为与父母发生争执而感到生气和难过，无法集中学习。请你提出记录情绪、暂时离开争执现场和事后理性沟通三条建议。 写作要点： 1. 安慰 Lucy 并说明情绪影响。 2. 提出三条具体调节方法。 3. 鼓励她逐步修复家庭关系。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。 Dear Lucy, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 八、写作评价表 评价维度 分值 自评 同伴评 评价说明 结构 Structure 3分 ____ / 3 ____ / 3 三段结构清楚，称呼、开头、主体、结尾和落款安排合理。 内容 Content 6分 ____ / 6 ____ / 6 问题分析具体，建议体现理解、沟通和情绪调节。 语言 Language 4分 ____ / 4 ____ / 4 能使用本单元核心词汇和建议句型，语气礼貌自然。 书写 Handwriting 2分 ____ / 2 ____ / 2 格式规范，段落清楚，拼写、大小写和标点正确。 总分 Total 15分 ____ / 15 ____ / 15 综合评价结构、内容、语言和书写整体表现。 自我反思与改进 我最需要改进的一项：□结构 □内容 □语言 □书写 具体改进计划：________________________ 评分参考 满分15分；13—15优秀；10—12达标；7—9需修改；6分及以下建议重写。 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 2 Let’s Talk Teens｜亲子沟通建议信写作学习地图 主题 体裁 建议词数 核心任务 亲子沟通与青春成长 建议信 80词左右 围绕亲子沟通问题，提出尊重、可行的建议。 一、本讲义内容导航 模块 学什么 帮你解决什么问题 01 写作主题 明确对象、任务、重点与语气 知道写什么、写给谁 02 写作框架 称呼、开头、建议、结尾、落款 掌握完整建议信结构 03 写作词汇 主题词汇与实用表达 积累可直接使用的表达 04 写作句型 共情表达与建议句式 把建议写得真诚可行 05 写作模板 标准版与提升版结构 快速组织完整邮件 06 典例精练 结合真实情境练习方法 把方法落实到任务中 07 写作指导 审题、谋篇与表达方法 解决写什么、怎么写 08 参考范文 学习结构、语言与建议逻辑 借鉴完整成篇表达 09 拓展练习 不同情境下的迁移写作 形成独立写作能力 10 写作评价表 对照标准自查、修改、提升 发现问题并完成改进 二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么？ 练习主题 写作任务 重点训练 练习1｜亲子沟通问题建议 人与社会·家庭关系 朋友被父母催促学习而苦恼？写信念倾听、择时交谈与共订安排。 倾听共情；时机选择；共同安排 练习2｜冲突与和解建议 人与社会·冲突与和解 朋友因没及时回母亲信息而争吵？建议先道歉、解释并约定规则。 道歉表达；原因解释；规则约定 练习3｜换位沟通建议 人与自我·同理心 朋友想参加周末活动却被拒？从父母角度分析并提出换位沟通建议。 换位思考；原因分析；沟通策略 练习4｜同伴烦恼交流建议 人与社会·友谊 同学因外貌和成绩焦虑不愿交流？提出倾听、陪伴与求助三条建议。 倾听陪伴；情绪疏导；求助建议 练习5｜家庭矛盾情绪调节建议 人与自我·情绪 朋友与父母争执后情绪低落？教他记录情绪、暂离现场、理性沟通。 情绪识别；冷静策略；理性沟通 三、系列训练亮点与学习路径 教材同步 结构完整 表达可用 练习分层 评价促改 紧扣单元主题与体裁 从审题到修改形成闭环 词汇句型模板可迁移 五类情境训练不重复 对照标准自查修改 学习路径 明沟通问题 → 搭建议框架 → 学劝解表达 → 完成练习 → 修改提升 Unit 2 Let’s Talk Teens 亲子沟通建议信（单元同步写作讲义） 一、写作主题 单元主题： Let’s Talk Teens；青春期成长、亲子沟通与情绪调节 应用文体裁： 建议信 写作任务： 围绕亲子沟通、家庭争执、同理心或负面情绪等具体问题，给同龄朋友提出尊重、可执行的沟通和调节建议。 二、写作框架 部分 内容要点 称呼（1句） 正式成品不设文章标题；使用题干指定的具体称呼，顶格书写。 开头（2句） 表达理解，说明回信目的并概括问题。 主体（4—5句） 分析问题原因，按顺序提出两至三条沟通或调节建议，补充理由。 结尾（2句） 表达祝愿，使用完整结束语和署名。 三、写作词汇 核心单词 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 teenager 青少年 交代写作对象 argument 争吵；争论 描述家庭问题 tension 紧张关系；紧张 说明关系状态 anxious 焦虑的；担心的 表达情绪 mental 精神的；心理的 描述心理健康 struggle 奋斗；挣扎 描述成长困难 regular 有规律的 建议稳定沟通 calm 平静的；使平静 描述沟通方式 view 看法；观点 说明双方观点 concern 担心；关心 解释父母顾虑 主题短语 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 see eye to eye with 与某人看法一致 描述意见差异 calm down 平静下来 提出情绪调节建议 from one’s point of view 从某人的角度看 培养同理心 think something through 全面考虑 建议理性处理问题 cheer up 振作起来 安慰和鼓励对方 核心词汇写作运用 词汇填空 1. It is normal for a ________(青少年) to want more independence. 2. A calm conversation is better than a loud ________(争吵). 3. Try to see the problem from your parents’ ________(观点). 4. You should think the decision ________(全面) before speaking. 5. If you feel ________(焦虑的), take a short break and talk to someone you trust. 【答案】 1. teenager 【解析】a 后接可数名词单数，teenager 表示“青少年”。 2. argument 【解析】a loud 修饰名词，argument 表示“争吵”。 3. point of view 【解析】from one’s point of view 表示“从某人的角度看”。 4. through 【解析】think something through 是固定短语，表示“全面考虑”。 5. anxious 【解析】feel 后接形容词作表语，anxious 表示“焦虑的”。 句子翻译 1. 从父母的角度看，他们的担心往往来自对你的关心。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 当你生气时，先冷静下来，再和父母谈话。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 充分考虑双方的观点，有助于减少家庭紧张关系。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. From your parents’ point of view, their concerns often come from their care for you. 【解析】From one’s point of view 表示“从某人的角度看”；come from 表示原因来源。 2. When you are angry, calm down first and then talk with your parents. 【解析】When 引导时间状语从句；calm down 与 talk 构成先后动作。 3. Thinking the views of both sides through can help reduce family tension. 【解析】动名词短语作主语；think through 表示“充分考虑”；reduce 后接 tension。 四、写作句型 开头句 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having an argument with your parents about _______. 2. I understand that it is not easy for a teenager to _______. 3. I'd like to offer some advice that may help you improve the situation. 中间句 1. From your parents’ point of view, they may be concerned about _______. 2. It would be a good idea to calm down before you start a conversation. 3. Besides, try to explain your feelings honestly and listen to their views in return. 4. If you think the problem through, you may find a solution that is acceptable to both sides. 结尾句 1. I hope these suggestions will help reduce the tension between you and your parents. 2. I am sure your relationship will improve if you keep communicating. 3. Please cheer up and feel free to contact me. 五、写作模板 模板1：简洁标准版 Dear _______, I'm sorry to hear that you are having an argument with your parents about _______. I understand that this situation makes you feel _______. First, calm down and choose a suitable time to talk. Besides, explain your feelings and listen to their views. From their point of view, _______. Finally, think the problem through and try to find a plan that _______. I hope these suggestions will be useful. Please cheer up. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 模板2：分层高分版 Dear _______, Knowing that you are suffering from tension at home, I would like to offer some advice. Although you and your parents may not see eye to eye on _______, their concerns probably come from their love for you. To begin with, calm down before discussing the problem. In addition, explain your feelings frankly, while taking their views into account. If you think the matter through, you will be more likely to reach an agreement that satisfies both sides. I sincerely hope that communication will bring you closer together. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 六、典例精练 请你给朋友 Lily 写一封建议信。她因为父母限制晚间手机使用而与父母发生争执，感到焦虑。请你从父母的角度解释其担心，并提出三条改善沟通的建议。 写作要点： 1. 表示理解并说明问题。 2. 解释父母的顾虑。 3. 提出冷静沟通、说明需求和共同制定规则三条建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。 Dear Lily, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作指导 第一步 审题谋篇 体裁是建议信，对象是朋友 Lily，目的在于帮助她处理手机使用引发的亲子争执。主要使用一般现在时解释现状和提出建议；第二人称为主，第三人称说明父母顾虑；语气理解、委婉、理性。布局为回应问题、换位解释、三条建议、祝愿落款。 第二步 要点拆解与表达 中文要点 英文表达 句式说明 表示理解并说明回信目的 I'm sorry to hear that you are arguing with your parents about phone use. 现在进行时说明当前问题，语气真诚。 从父母角度解释担心 From your parents’ point of view, they may be concerned about your sleep and study. 用固定短语引出换位思考。 建议先冷静再沟通 You should calm down and choose a suitable time to talk. 情态动词加并列动作，建议具体。 建议共同制订规则 Think the problem through and work out a plan that satisfies both sides. 固定短语和定语从句结合，补充解决方式。 第三步 句式升级 原句 升级句 仿写句 说明 Your parents worry about you. From your parents’ point of view, their concerns probably come from their love for you. From your teacher’s point of view, the rule is meant to protect your study time. 用观点短语和名词性表达解释原因。 Talk to them. Calm down and choose a suitable time to have a calm conversation. Calm down and choose a suitable time to discuss the club plan. 用并列祈使句提出可执行建议。 Find a plan. Work out a plan that is acceptable to both sides. Work out a schedule that is acceptable to everyone. 用定语从句限定 plan 的具体标准。 第四步 同义替换 基础表达 升级表达 使用场景 worry be concerned about 解释父母顾虑 angry upset 描述情绪状态 talk about discuss 表达正式沟通 find a plan work out a plan 提出解决方案 understand take their views into account 表达考虑对方立场 make things better improve the situation 总结建议作用 参考范文 基础版范文 Dear Lily, I'm sorry to hear that you are arguing with your parents about phone use. I understand that this makes you anxious. From their point of view, they may worry about your sleep and study. First, calm down and choose a suitable time to talk. Besides, explain your feelings and listen to their views. Finally, work out a phone rule acceptable to both sides. Communication can reduce tension. I hope these suggestions will help you feel better. Please cheer up. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 提高版范文 Dear Lily, Knowing that you are suffering from tension at home, I would like to offer some advice. Although you and your parents may not see eye to eye on phone use, they may be concerned about your sleep and study, and their worries probably come from their love for you. To begin with, calm down before you discuss the problem instead of feeling upset. In addition, explain your feelings frankly, while taking their views into account. If you think the matter through, you will be more likely to work out a plan that satisfies both sides and improve the situation. I sincerely hope that patient communication will bring you and your parents closer together. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 七、拓展练习 练习1：亲子沟通问题建议（人与社会-家庭关系） 请你给同龄朋友 Jack 写一封建议信。Jack 觉得父母总是催促他学习，很少倾听他的想法。请你提出倾听、选择合适时间交谈和共同制订学习安排三条建议。 写作要点： 1. 表示理解 Jack 的感受。 2. 分析父母催促背后的担心。 3. 提出三条沟通建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：写给 Jack，目的是改善父母催促学习引发的沟通问题。 2. 要点：说明感受；从父母角度解释担心；建议倾听、选时机、共同安排。 3. 结构：安慰与分析；建议主体；祝愿关系改善。 4. 表达：使用 teenager、concern、from one’s point of view、calm down 和 think through。 基础版范文 Dear Jack, I'm sorry to hear that your parents often push you to study and seldom listen to you. It is normal for a teenager to feel upset in this situation. They may be concerned about your future. First, calm down instead of arguing. Then choose a quiet time to talk. Finally, listen to their worries and make a study plan together. In this way, both sides may understand each other better. I hope your family communication will improve soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 push you to study put pressure on you to study 准确描述压力 seldom listen rarely take your views seriously 突出倾听不足 feel upset feel emotionally frustrated 细致表达情绪 quiet time suitable moment 更自然表达沟通时机 understand each other see things from each other’s point of view 强化换位思考 提高版范文 Dear Jack, I'm sorry to hear that your parents often put pressure on you to study and rarely take your views seriously. It is understandable that you feel emotionally frustrated and need patient support from your family. From their point of view, they may be concerned about your future. First, calm down instead of arguing. Then choose a suitable moment to explain your feelings and listen carefully to theirs. Finally, make a study plan together so that both sides can see things from each other's point of view. I hope patient communication will bring your family closer and reduce tension. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习2：冲突与和解建议（人与社会-冲突与和解） 请你给同学 Amy 写一封建议信。Amy 因为没有及时回复母亲的信息而与母亲争吵。请你建议她先道歉、解释原因并约定今后的联系规则。 写作要点： 1. 表示理解冲突原因。 2. 提出道歉和解释的方法。 3. 建议共同约定联系规则。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。 Dear Amy, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：写给 Amy，目的在于帮助她修复一次具体的母女冲突。 2. 要点：说明未及时回复导致误解；建议先冷静、道歉和解释；共同约定回复规则。 3. 结构：回应问题；按先后顺序提出补救步骤；结尾鼓励。 4. 表达：使用 argument、calm、apologize、response 和 think through。 基础版范文 Dear Amy, I'm sorry you argued with your mother because you did not reply to her message in time. She may have felt worried, while you were busy with homework. First, calm down and say sorry for making her concerned. Then explain the reason honestly. You can agree on a rule, such as replying after class. If you both follow it, similar arguments may be avoided and trust can grow. I hope you and your mother will make peace soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 argued had a heated argument 强化冲突场景 worried anxious 表达担心程度 say sorry offer a sincere apology 提升道歉表达 explain honestly give a frank explanation 突出坦诚沟通 avoid arguments prevent similar conflicts 更准确说明结果 提高版范文 Dear Amy, I'm sorry to hear that you had a heated argument with your mother because you failed to reply to her message in time. She may have felt anxious, while you were busy with your homework. First, calm down and offer a sincere apology for causing her concern. Then give a frank explanation instead of avoiding the problem. After thinking the matter through, you could agree on a contact rule, such as replying after class. This can prevent similar conflicts. I hope you and your mother will restore a peaceful relationship soon and rebuild trust. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习3：换位沟通建议（人与自我-同理心） 请你给青春期同学 Emma 写一封建议信。Emma 认为父母不理解她参加周末活动的愿望。请你从父母担心安全和学习的角度进行解释，并提出换位沟通建议。 写作要点： 1. 说明父母可能担心的原因。 2. 建议 Emma 先理解父母再表达计划。 3. 提出提供活动细节和安全安排的方法。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。 Dear Emma, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：写给 Emma，核心训练是从父母角度解释担忧并进行换位沟通。 2. 要点：写安全和学习担忧；建议先听取父母意见；提供时间、地点和陪同信息。 3. 结构：解释原因；给出换位沟通步骤；表达期待。 4. 表达：使用 from one’s point of view、concern、see eye to eye with、calm 和 regular。 基础版范文 Dear Emma, I understand that you feel your parents do not support your weekend activity. From their point of view, they may worry about your safety and schoolwork. First, listen to their worries instead of thinking they are against you. Then explain the activity, including its time, place and members. Promise to finish homework first and keep regular contact. These details may help them feel secure. I hope you and your parents can understand each other better and communicate more patiently. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 do not support have concerns about 更准确表达父母态度 against you opposed to your choice 使观点表达更客观 listen to worries acknowledge their concerns 强调承认和回应担心 explain clearly provide detailed information 突出信息具体 feel secure feel reassured 表达情绪安定 提高版范文 Dear Emma, I understand that you feel your parents have concerns about your weekend activity. From their point of view, they are probably worried about your safety and schoolwork rather than opposed to your choice. First, acknowledge their concerns instead of judging them too quickly. Then provide detailed information about the activity, including its time, place and members. You can promise to finish your homework first and keep regular contact, which will help them feel reassured. I hope this patient exchange will help you see eye to eye with your parents and rebuild mutual trust. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习4：同伴烦恼交流建议（人与社会-友谊） 请你给朋友 Ben 写一封建议信。Ben 的同学最近因外貌和考试成绩感到焦虑，不愿与人交流。请你提出倾听、陪伴和鼓励对方寻求老师帮助三条建议。 写作要点： 1. 表示对同学情绪的理解。 2. 建议耐心倾听和陪伴。 3. 建议必要时寻求老师或家长帮助。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。 Dear Ben, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：写给 Ben，目的是帮助他支持一位因外貌和成绩焦虑的同学。 2. 要点：先说明情绪值得重视；建议倾听而不评判、陪伴活动、必要时求助成年人。 3. 结构：理解问题；分层建议；鼓励和祝愿。 4. 表达：使用 anxious、mental、comfort、respond 和 cheer up，保持温和语气。 基础版范文 Dear Ben, I'm sorry your classmate feels anxious about appearance and exam results. Under mental pressure, he or she may not want to talk. First, listen patiently without judging. Sit with your classmate during lunch or invite him to walk. Besides, remind him of his strengths and cheer him up. If the worry continues, encourage him to speak to a teacher or parent. I hope your kindness will make a difference and help your classmate feel less alone. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 feels anxious is experiencing anxiety 更正式描述情绪 under pressure overwhelmed by stress 突出压力程度 listen patiently offer a listening ear 强调支持方式 remind him of strengths help him recognise his strengths 突出积极引导 professional support expert guidance 准确表达求助资源 提高版范文 Dear Ben, I'm sorry to hear that your classmate is experiencing anxiety about appearance and exam results. A teenager overwhelmed by stress may find it hard to open up. First, offer a listening ear without judging. Sit with your classmate at lunch or invite him to take a walk. Besides, help him recognise his strengths and gently cheer him up. If the worry continues, encourage him to seek expert guidance from a teacher or parent. Your steady company can make a real difference. I hope your kindness will help him feel less alone. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习5：家庭矛盾情绪调节建议（人与自我-情绪） 请你给同学 Lucy 写一封建议信。Lucy 因为与父母发生争执而感到生气和难过，无法集中学习。请你提出记录情绪、暂时离开争执现场和事后理性沟通三条建议。 写作要点： 1. 安慰 Lucy 并说明情绪影响。 2. 提出三条具体调节方法。 3. 鼓励她逐步修复家庭关系。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。 Dear Lucy, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：写给 Lucy，目的是帮助她调节争执后的情绪并恢复学习状态。 2. 要点：表示理解；建议记录感受、冷静离开现场、事后沟通；结尾鼓励。 3. 结构：安慰；方法与作用；关系修复期待。 4. 表达：使用 anger、calm down、regular、think through、cheer up 和 stress。 基础版范文 Dear Lucy, I'm sorry your argument with your parents has made you angry and sad. It is hard to focus on study when stress is high. First, write down what happened and how you feel. Then leave the room briefly and calm down. After that, think the problem through and talk with your parents when everyone is peaceful. Explain your feelings without blaming them, and listen to their replies. Please cheer up. With regular communication, your family relationship can improve. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 angry and sad upset and frustrated 更准确概括复杂情绪 stress is high under intense stress 突出压力状态 write down record 使表达更简洁 say more continue the argument 明确冲突行为 without blaming in a non-judgemental way 突出沟通态度 提高版范文 Dear Lucy, I'm sorry to hear that your argument with your parents has left you upset and frustrated. It is difficult to focus on study while you are under intense stress. First, record what happened and how you feel. Then step away from the room for a few minutes and calm down rather than continue the argument. 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